2025年高考英语二轮复习考前押题卷:应用文写作
一.书面表达(共20小题)
1.(2025 沙坪坝区校级开学)假定你是李华,刚刚参加完一次由中国学校组织的与各国交换生共同学习传统中国美食烹饪的活动。请给你的外国朋友Sally写一封邮件,分享这次独特的经历。邮件内容需包括:
(1)活动内容;
(2)你的收获和感想。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80左右;
(2)开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Sally,
_________
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
2.(2025 广东一模)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,还有一个月你们就要参加广东省的高考听说考试了,你的好朋友张明很焦虑,她每次的听说成绩都是19.4分,计入成绩要四舍五入,而她又已经到达瓶颈了,你写封信安慰她。内容包括:
(1)安慰;
(2)你的建议。
注意:
(1)词数100左右;
(2)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Zhang Min,
Yours,
Li Hua
3.(2025 安阳一模)假定你是李华,你班交换生Chris即将回国,你打算送她一份礼物。请给她写封邮件,内容包括:
(1)介绍礼物;
(2)陈述原因。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
Yours,
Li Hua
4.(2025 四会市模拟)假定你叫李华,你校外教George很想学习中国太极(Taichi),想找一位中国教练.请给他写封邮件,内容包括:1.已为他找了一名教练王先生;2.简单介绍王先生;3.询问什么时候开始学习.
注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.
Dear George,
______
Yours,
Li Hua
5.(2025 梅州模拟)上周六你校组织英语俱乐部成员去市博物馆观看了中国绘画艺术展。请你用英语写一篇新闻报道,内容包括:
1.活动的时间和地点;
2.展览的内容;
3.你的感受。
注意:1.词数100左右。
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
6.(2025 贵阳模拟)假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Tom即将要来中国游玩,希望你给他推荐一道你喜欢的小吃或者菜肴。请你就此给他回一封邮件,内容包括:
(1)描述推荐的食物;
(2)说明推荐的理由。
注意:
(1)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(2)词数80个左右;
(3)短文开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
_________
Best regards!
Yours,
Li Hua
7.(2025 2月份模拟)假定你是某国际学校的学生会主席李华。你校外教Susan计划举行文化音乐会(Cultural Music Concert),请你代表学生会写一则通知。内容包括:
(1)活动的时间、地点;
(2)活动内容;
(3)鼓励大家积极参加。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Notice
_______
The Student Union
8.(2025 天河区模拟)假定你是李华,你的外教Ryan决定组织一次班级周末出游,现在就出游计划"a trip to a famous mountain or an ancient city"征求意见。请你给他写封邮件,内容包括:
(1)你的选择及理由;
(2)你的预期收获。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
_______
Yours,
Li Hua
9.(2025 深圳二模)
Correspondences Charles Baudelaire
Nature is a temple where living pillars Sometimes give voice to confused words; Man passes there through forests of symbols Which watch him with familiar glances. Like long echoes that mingle far away Vast as the night and as the light, The perfumes,the colors,and the sounds correspond. There are perfumes as cool as the flesh of children, Sweet as oboes(双簧管) ,green as meadows, In a deep and shadowy unity, —And others,corrupt,rich,and triumphant.
假设你是李华,在阅读了Charles Baudelaire的《应和》(Correspondences)后,你被要求从梦境与现实、个人意识与集体无意识、时间与记忆三个角度中任选其一,结合现代社会现象,向你的英语文学老师Mr.Prochazka探讨"应和"这一概念对你的启示。要求:引用并结合实际,表达简练深刻,100词左右。
Dear Mr.Prochazka,
________
Best regards,
Li Hua
10.(2025 云安区模拟) 假定你是李华,你校刚刚结束了一场以"美丽的祖国"(Beautiful Motherland)为主题的摄影比赛。你的作品荣获一等奖。请你给校英文报投稿分享这次经历,内容包括:
(1)介绍你的作品;
(2)你的感想。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Beautiful Motherland in My Picture
______
11.(2024秋 锦州期末)假定你是李华,你校最近举办了一场以"Colorful China"(多彩中国)为主题的摄影大赛,你的作品荣获一等奖。请你给校英文报投稿分享这次经历,内容包括:
(1)介绍你的作品;
(2)你的感想。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
"Colorful China" in My Picture
12.(2024秋 湖南期末)假设你是李华,请给外教David写一封邀请信,邀请他报名参加学校国际部举办的"中国文化体验日"活动。内容包括:
(1)活动目的;
(2)特色项目;
(3)报名方式。
注意:(1)写作词数应为80左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear David,
________
Yours,
Li Hua
13.(2024秋 广州期末)假定你是李华,你校图书馆计划于下月购置一批新书,现向同学们征求采购意见。请你给图书馆负责人外教Hans写一封邮件,内容包括:
(1)推荐书目;
(2)推荐理由。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Hans,
________
Yours,
Li Hua
14.(2025 端州区二模)假定你是李华,你的美国笔友Alice在准备即将到来的中文考试中遇到困难,写信向你求助。请你给他回信,内容包括:
(1)提出建议;
(2)阐述理由;
(3)表达期待。
注意:
(1)字数80词左右;
(2)可适当增加细节,使行文连贯;
(3)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Alice,
I'm Li Hua,a student from Senior One.________
Yours,
Li Hua
15.(2025 市中区校级模拟) 你校上周举办了第五届校园科技节,请给校英语报写一篇报道,内容包括:
(1)活动介绍;
(2)活动反响。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The Fifth Campus Science Fair
______
16.(2025 南京模拟)假如你是李华,上周你校开展了一场主题为"人工智能( AI )与我们的生活"的演讲比赛,请为校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:
(1)比赛目的;
(2)比赛的过程与结果;
(3)比赛的影响和意义。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
AI and Our Lives:An Inspiring Speech Contest
________
17.(2025 江西一模)假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Tom对你的寒假生活很感兴趣,来信询问相关情况。请你给他回一封电子邮件,与他分享你的假期生活。内容包括:
(1)寒假期间你参加的主要活动;
(2)活动给你带来的收获或感受。
注意:(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Tom,
________
Yours,
Li Hua
18.(2025 湖北二模) 假定你是李华,最近你校英文报计划增设一个"School Life"的新版块,需要刊登一些记录同学们的校园生活的文章。请你给交换生Alex写一封邮件,内容包括:
(1)增设目的;
(2)约稿要求;
(3)鼓励他投稿。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
19.(2025 湖南模拟)假定你是李华,你校将于2月7日举办第12届科技作品展览节,请你向英国交换生Mike写一封邮件。内容包括:
(1)介绍活动;
(2)邀请参加。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mike,
How have you been doing recently?
Yours,
Li Hua
20.(2025 昆明一模)假定你是李华,你的英语老师布置了一项关于"Healthy Lifestyle in My Class"的小组调查任务,请你代表小组写一篇发言稿,内容包括:
(1)调查结果;
(2)看法和建议。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80左右;
(2)开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Hello,everyone!_______
2025年高考英语二轮复习考前押题卷:应用文写作
参考答案与试题解析
一.书面表达(共20小题)
1.(2025 沙坪坝区校级开学)假定你是李华,刚刚参加完一次由中国学校组织的与各国交换生共同学习传统中国美食烹饪的活动。请给你的外国朋友Sally写一封邮件,分享这次独特的经历。邮件内容需包括:
(1)活动内容;
(2)你的收获和感想。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80左右;
(2)开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Sally,
_________
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sally,
I'm writing to share an amazing experience of learning traditional Chinese cuisine cooking with exchange students from various countries,which was organized by our school.
During the activity,under the guidance of an experienced chef,we embarked on making dumplings,a typical Chinese dish.We mixed flour with water to create dough and skillfully wrapped various fillings within.This experience not only improved my cooking skills but also deepened my understanding of Chinese food culture.What impressed me most was that I got to know friends from different cultures,sharing stories and laughter.
It was really a meaningful and unforgettable event.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一:I'm writing to share an amazing experience of learning traditional Chinese cuisine cooking with exchange students from various countries,which was organized by our school.
翻译:我写信是为了与我们学校组织的来自各国的交换生分享学习中国传统烹饪的奇妙经历。
分析:本句使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二:What impressed me most was that I got to know friends from different cultures,sharing stories and laughter.
翻译:给我印象最深的是,我结识了来自不同文化的朋友,分享故事和笑声。
分析:本句使用了what引导的主语从句;that引导的表语从句;现在分词短语sharing stories and laughter作状语。
【解答】Dear Sally,
I'm writing to share an amazing experience of learning traditional Chinese cuisine cooking with exchange students from various countries,which was organized by our school.【高分句型一】(点明主题)
During the activity,under the guidance of an experienced chef,we embarked on making dumplings,a typical Chinese dish.We mixed flour with water to create dough and skillfully wrapped various fillings within.This experience not only improved my cooking skills but also deepened my understanding of Chinese food culture.What impressed me most was that I got to know friends from different cultures,sharing stories and laughter.【高分句型二】(活动内容)
It was really a meaningful and unforgettable event.(收获和感想)
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次,平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
2.(2025 广东一模)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,还有一个月你们就要参加广东省的高考听说考试了,你的好朋友张明很焦虑,她每次的听说成绩都是19.4分,计入成绩要四舍五入,而她又已经到达瓶颈了,你写封信安慰她。内容包括:
(1)安慰;
(2)你的建议。
注意:
(1)词数100左右;
(2)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Zhang Min,
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Zhang Min,
I know you're feeling really anxious about the upcoming oral English test.It's completely normal to feel this way,but remember that you've already made great progress.Your score of 19.4 is already very close to perfection,and with a little more effort,you can definitely break through this plateau.
Here are a few suggestions that might help.First,try to practice with a native speaker if possible.This will help you get used to different accents and improve your listening skills,which is beneficial to the oral English test.Second,focus on specific areas where you think you need improvement,like pronunciation or fluency.You can use online resources or apps to practice these skills.Lastly,don't forget to relax and take deep breaths before the test.Anxiety can sometimes affect your performance,so staying calm is very important.
I believe in you,and I know you can do it.Just keep practicing and stay positive.You've got this!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一:It's completely normal to feel this way,but remember that you've already made great progress.
翻译:这种感觉很正常,但要记住你已经取得了很大的进步。
分析:本句运用了that引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二:This will help you get used to different accents and improve your listening skills,which is beneficial to the oral English test.
翻译:这将帮助你适应不同的口音,提高你的听力技能,这对英语口语测试是有益的。
分析:本句运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
【解答】 Dear Zhang Min,
I know you're feeling really anxious about the upcoming oral English test.It's completely normal to feel this way,but remember that you've already made great progress.【高分句型一】Your score of 19.4 is already very close to perfection,and with a little more effort,you can definitely break through this plateau.(表达安慰)
Here are a few suggestions that might help.First,try to practice with a native speaker if possible.This will help you get used to different accents and improve your listening skills,which is beneficial to the oral English test.【高分句型二】Second,focus on specific areas where you think you need improvement,like pronunciation or fluency.You can use online resources or apps to practice these skills.Lastly,don't forget to relax and take deep breaths before the test.Anxiety can sometimes affect your performance,so staying calm is very important.(个人建议)
I believe in you,and I know you can do it.Just keep practicing and stay positive.You've got this!(给予鼓励)
Yours,
Li Hua
【点评】写作步骤:
第一步:审题,确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点,避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步:拟定提纲;叙述得体,布局谋篇;巧妙过渡,完美结尾。
第三步:遣词造句,套用句型,上下衔接,地道表达,行文成篇。
3.(2025 安阳一模)假定你是李华,你班交换生Chris即将回国,你打算送她一份礼物。请给她写封邮件,内容包括:
(1)介绍礼物;
(2)陈述原因。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Chris,
I hope this email finds you well.Knowing that you're returning to your homeland,I'd like to give you a Chinese knot as a gift.
The Chinese knot is a traditional handicraft in China,symbolizing good luck and happiness.I thought this would be meaningful because it reflects the bond we've formed and the memories we've shared during your stay.Additionally,it's lightweight and easy to carry,so it won't take up much space in your luggage.I hope it will remind you of your time here and the friends you've made.
Wish you a pleasant journey !
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一:Knowing that you're returning to your homeland,I'd like to give you a Chinese knot as a gift.
翻译:得知你即将回到你的祖国,我想送你一个中国结作为礼物。
分析:Knowing that you're returning to your homeland现在分词短语作状语,that引导宾语从句。
高分句型二:I thought this would be meaningful because it reflects the bond we've formed and the memories we've shared during your stay.
翻译:我认为这很有意义,因为它反映了在你停留期间我们形成的纽带和共同分享的回忆。
分析:because引导原因状语从句。
【解答】Dear Chris,
I hope this email finds you well.Knowing that you're returning to your homeland,I'd like to give you a Chinese knot as a gift.【高分句型一】
The Chinese knot is a traditional handicraft in China,symbolizing good luck and happiness. (介绍礼物)I thought this would be meaningful because it reflects the bond we've formed and the memories we've shared during your stay. 【高分句型二】Additionally,it's lightweight and easy to carry,so it won't take up much space in your luggage.I hope it will remind you of your time here and the friends you've made. (陈述原因)
Wish you a pleasant journey !
Yours,
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次,平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
4.(2025 四会市模拟)假定你叫李华,你校外教George很想学习中国太极(Taichi),想找一位中国教练.请给他写封邮件,内容包括:1.已为他找了一名教练王先生;2.简单介绍王先生;3.询问什么时候开始学习.
注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.
Dear George,
______
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear George,
How's everything going?Last time you told me [that you are interested in Chinese Taichi and wanted to have a Taichi coach.Now,good news for you.I have found you a Taichi coach,Mr.Wang,who is 50 and an expert in Taichi.Since he was 20,he has been teaching Taichi in a Chinese Kung Fu School in our city.Most importantly,he can teach Taichi in both Chinese and English.He has promised to teach you how to play it after work because he hopes to make an effort to spread the traditional culture.So please tell me when you can begin your practice of Taichi.
I'm looking forward to you reply.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一:I have found you a Taichi coach,Mr.Wang,who is 50 and an expert in Taichi.
译文:我给你找了一位太极教练,王先生,他今年50岁,是个太极专家.
分析:这句话使用who引导定语从句修饰Mr.Wang.
高分句型二:He has promised to teach you how to play it after work because he hopes to make an effort to spread the traditional culture.
译文:他答应下班后教你怎么打太极拳,因为他希望能努力传播传统文化.
分析:because引导原因状语从句.
【解答】Dear George,
How's everything going?Last time you told me [that you are interested in Chinese Taichi and wanted to have a Taichi coach.Now,good news for you.I have found you a Taichi coach,Mr.Wang,who is 50 and an expert in Taichi.【高分句型一】( 已为他找了一名教练王先生) Since he was 20,he has been teaching Taichi in a Chinese Kung Fu School in our city.Most importantly,he can teach Taichi in both Chinese and English.He has promised to teach you how to play it after work because he hopes to make an effort to spread the traditional culture.【高分句型二】(简单介绍王先生) So please tell me when you can begin your practice of Taichi.(询问什么时候开始学习)
I'm looking forward to you reply.(盼望)
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文,需要写的内容已经给出,但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译,而是要添加些内容,使文章看起来更充实,要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文,一定要谈谈自己的看法.需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括,缺一不可.写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,不能出现文章脱节问题.尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次.同时注意要求的字数,不要太多也不要太少.
5.(2025 梅州模拟)上周六你校组织英语俱乐部成员去市博物馆观看了中国绘画艺术展。请你用英语写一篇新闻报道,内容包括:
1.活动的时间和地点;
2.展览的内容;
3.你的感受。
注意:1.词数100左右。
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【答案】A visit to City Museum
Last Saturday, the members of our School's English club went to the City Museum, located in the downtown area of our city to appreciate a large picture exhibition of our rich local culture.
During the visit, a large number of Chinese paintings are on show, all of which are the works of famous Chinese painters. They're all typical Chinese paintings with nature as their main theme. Besides, we watched a video about the achievements we've made in the last few centuries. All the students were all amazed at our colorful culture, saying that this visit was really a cultural feast.
The visit was a great success. It not only enriched our life, but also helped us learn more about Chinese painting culture.
【分析】高分句型一:During the visit, a large number of Chinese paintings are on show, all of which are the works of famous Chinese painters.
译文:参观期间,展出了大量中国画,全部是中国著名画家的作品。
分析:这句话使用all of which引导非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二:All the students were all amazed at our colorful culture, saying that this visit was really a cultural feast.
译文:所有的学生都对我们丰富多彩的文化感到惊讶,说这次参观真是一次文化盛宴。
分析:这句话使用现在分词短语作状语,that引导宾语从句。
【解答】A visit to City Museum
Last Saturday, the members of our School's English club went to the City Museum, located in the downtown area of our city to appreciate a large picture exhibition of our rich local culture.(活动的时间和地点)
During the visit, a large number of Chinese paintings are on show, all of which are the works of famous Chinese painters. 【高分句型一】They're all typical Chinese paintings with nature as their main theme. Besides, we watched a video about the achievements we've made in the last few centuries. All the students were all amazed at our colorful culture, saying that this visit was really a cultural feast. 【高分句型二】(展览的内容)
The visit was a great success. It not only enriched our life, but also helped us learn more about Chinese painting culture.(你的感受)
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文,需要写的内容已经给出,但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译,而是要添加些内容,使文章看起来更充实,要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文,一定要谈谈自己的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括,缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数,不要太多也不要太少。
6.(2025 贵阳模拟)假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Tom即将要来中国游玩,希望你给他推荐一道你喜欢的小吃或者菜肴。请你就此给他回一封邮件,内容包括:
(1)描述推荐的食物;
(2)说明推荐的理由。
注意:
(1)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(2)词数80个左右;
(3)短文开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
_________
Best regards!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Tom,
I'm excited about your upcoming trip to China!I highly recommend Gong Bao Chicken,which is my favorite.This dish,believed to have originated from Qing Dynasty,features tender chicken cubes,crunchy peanuts,and red peppers.
What makes it special is its perfect combination of flavors—spicy,salty,sweet,and sour all in one bite.Moreover,it's not overly spicy,so it's great for introducing you to the wonders of Sichuan cuisine.I'm sure you'll find it absolutely hard to resist and a true taste of China!
Looking forward to hearing about your culinary adventures in China!
Best regards!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一:This dish,believed to have originated from Qing Dynasty,features tender chicken cubes,crunchy peanuts,and red peppers.
翻译:这道菜被认为起源于清朝,以嫩鸡肉块、脆花生和红辣椒为特色。
分析:本句运用了过去分词短语believed to have originated from Qing Dynasty作后置定语。
高分句型二:I'm sure you'll find it absolutely hard to resist and a true taste of China!
翻译:我相信你会发现这绝对很难抗拒,并且会真正品尝到中国的味道!
分析:本句运用了省略了that的宾语从句you'll find it absolutely hard to resist and a true taste of China。
【解答】Dear Tom,
I'm excited about your upcoming trip to China!I highly recommend Gong Bao Chicken,which is my favorite.This dish,believed to have originated from Qing Dynasty,features tender chicken cubes,crunchy peanuts,and red peppers.【高分句型一】(描述推荐的食物)
What makes it special is its perfect combination of flavors—spicy,salty,sweet,and sour all in one bite.Moreover,it's not overly spicy,so it's great for introducing you to the wonders of Sichuan cuisine.I'm sure you'll find it absolutely hard to resist and a true taste of China!【高分句型二】(说明推荐的理由)
Looking forward to hearing about your culinary adventures in China!(表达期望)
Best regards!
Yours,
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次,平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
7.(2025 2月份模拟)假定你是某国际学校的学生会主席李华。你校外教Susan计划举行文化音乐会(Cultural Music Concert),请你代表学生会写一则通知。内容包括:
(1)活动的时间、地点;
(2)活动内容;
(3)鼓励大家积极参加。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Notice
_______
The Student Union
【答案】
Notice
We are excited to announce that our beloved teacher,Susan,is organizing a Cultural Music Concert.Mark your calendars for this event,which will take place on Saturday,November 11th,from 3:00 pm to 6:00 pm in the school hall.
The concert will feature performances from various student groups,showing a range of musical styles from around the world.This is a unique opportunity to experience the rich diversity of our global community through the universal language of music.
We encourage all students to actively participate and embrace this chance to learn,enjoy,and connect with different cultures.
The Student Union
【分析】高分句型一:Mark your calendars for this event,which will take place on Saturday,November 11th,from 3:00 pm to 6:00 pm in the school hall.
译文:请在日历上标记此活动,该活动将于11月11日星期六下午3:00至6:00在学校礼堂举行。
分析:这句话使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二:The concert will feature performances from various student groups,showing a range of musical styles from around the world.
译文:音乐会将有来自不同学生团体的表演,展示来自世界各地的各种音乐风格。
分析:这句话使用了现在分词短语showing a range of musical styles from around the world作状语。
【解答】
Notice
We are excited to announce that our beloved teacher,Susan,is organizing a Cultural Music Concert.Mark your calendars for this event,which will take place on Saturday,November 11th,from 3:00 pm to 6:00 pm in the school hall.【高分句型一】(活动的时间、地点)
The concert will feature performances from various student groups,showing a range of musical styles from around the world.【高分句型二】This is a unique opportunity to experience the rich diversity of our global community through the universal language of music.(活动内容)
We encourage all students to actively participate and embrace this chance to learn,enjoy,and connect with different cultures.(鼓励大家积极参加)
The Student Union
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括,缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数,不要太多也不要太少。
8.(2025 天河区模拟)假定你是李华,你的外教Ryan决定组织一次班级周末出游,现在就出游计划"a trip to a famous mountain or an ancient city"征求意见。请你给他写封邮件,内容包括:
(1)你的选择及理由;
(2)你的预期收获。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
_______
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Ryan,
I'm extremely excited at the trip and would like to share my thoughts with you.I vote for the trip to a famous mountain.
There are several reasons for my choice.Being surrounded by nature on a mountain provides a perfect escape from the hustle and bustle of the city.The fresh air there is like a breath of life,especially beneficial for our health after a long time of study.Moreover,climbing the mountain will be a great workout.It will not only strengthen our bodies but also boost our perseverance as we overcome the challenges along the way.
I'm really looking forward to this trip.I can't wait to appreciate the magnificent views from the summit,and take memorable photos with my classmates.I believe it will be a great chance for us to bond with each other and create lasting memories.
Thank you for organizing this activity.I'm sure it will be a huge success.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一:Being surrounded by nature on a mountain provides a perfect escape from the hustle and bustle of the city.
翻译:在山上被大自然包围,是逃离城市喧嚣的完美去处。
分析:本句运用了动名词短语being surrounded by nature on a mountain作主语。
高分句型二:I believe it will be a great chance for us to bond with each other and create lasting memories.
翻译:我相信这将是一个很好的机会,让我们彼此建立联系,创造持久的回忆。
分析:本句运用了省略了that的宾语从句it will be a great chance for us to bond with each other and create lasting memories。
【解答】Dear Ryan,
I'm extremely excited at the trip and would like to share my thoughts with you.I vote for the trip to a famous mountain.(个人选择)
There are several reasons for my choice.Being surrounded by nature on a mountain provides a perfect escape from the hustle and bustle of the city.【高分句型一】The fresh air there is like a breath of life,especially beneficial for our health after a long time of study.Moreover,climbing the mountain will be a great workout.It will not only strengthen our bodies but also boost our perseverance as we overcome the challenges along the way.(选择理由)
I'm really looking forward to this trip.I can't wait to appreciate the magnificent views from the summit,and take memorable photos with my classmates.I believe it will be a great chance for us to bond with each other and create lasting memories.【高分句型二】(个人预期收获)
Thank you for organizing this activity.I'm sure it will be a huge success.(表达期待)
Yours,
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次,平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
9.(2025 深圳二模)
Correspondences Charles Baudelaire
Nature is a temple where living pillars Sometimes give voice to confused words; Man passes there through forests of symbols Which watch him with familiar glances. Like long echoes that mingle far away Vast as the night and as the light, The perfumes,the colors,and the sounds correspond. There are perfumes as cool as the flesh of children, Sweet as oboes(双簧管) ,green as meadows, In a deep and shadowy unity, —And others,corrupt,rich,and triumphant.
假设你是李华,在阅读了Charles Baudelaire的《应和》(Correspondences)后,你被要求从梦境与现实、个人意识与集体无意识、时间与记忆三个角度中任选其一,结合现代社会现象,向你的英语文学老师Mr.Prochazka探讨"应和"这一概念对你的启示。要求:引用并结合实际,表达简练深刻,100词左右。
Dear Mr.Prochazka,
________
Best regards,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mr.Prochazka,
In the labyrinthine world of Baudelaire's"Correspondances, "where the tangible and intangible entwine,lies a profound revelation:the interplay between dreams and reality,a dance of shadows and light that unveils the deepest recesses of the human soul.Dreams,often dismissed as mere phantoms of the night,are,in truth,mirrors reflecting the subconscious desires and fears that lurk beneath the surface of our waking lives.
This "correspondence" suggests that dreams are not random but intricately woven tapestries of our innermost thoughts and emotions.By delving into the enigmatic realm of dreams,we can unearth hidden truths about ourselves,gaining insights that elude us in the stark light of day.For instance,a recurring dream of being adrift at sea may symbolize a profound sense of uncertainty in our waking lives,urging us to confront our anxieties and seek solace in self﹣awareness.
In conclusion,understanding the"correspondances"between dreams and reality not only enhances our self﹣awareness but also illuminates the shadowy corridors of the human psyche,revealing the profound interconnectedness of our inner and outer worlds.
Best regards,
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一:This "correspondence" suggests that dreams are not random but intricately woven tapestries of our innermost thoughts and emotions.
翻译:这种 "对应关系" 表明,梦境并非毫无规律,而是由我们内心最深处的思想和情感精心编织而成的图景。
分析:本句运用了that引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二:For instance,a recurring dream of being adrift at sea may symbolize a profound sense of uncertainty in our waking lives,urging us to confront our anxieties and seek solace in self﹣awareness.
翻译:例如,一个反复出现的在海上漂泊的梦可能象征着我们在现实生活中一种强烈的不确定感,它促使我们去直面自己的焦虑,并从自我认知中寻求慰藉。
分析:本句运用了现在分词短语urging us to confront our anxieties and seek solace in self﹣awareness作状语。
【解答】Dear Mr.Prochazka,
In the labyrinthine world of Baudelaire's"Correspondances, "where the tangible and intangible entwine,lies a profound revelation:the interplay between dreams and reality,a dance of shadows and light that unveils the deepest recesses of the human soul.Dreams,often dismissed as mere phantoms of the night,are,in truth,mirrors reflecting the subconscious desires and fears that lurk beneath the surface of our waking lives.(介绍在Charles Baudelaire《应和》的世界里,梦境与现实相互交织,揭示人类灵魂奥秘,且梦境实际上是潜意识欲望和恐惧的反映)
This "correspondence" suggests that dreams are not random but intricately woven tapestries of our innermost thoughts and emotions.【高分句型一】By delving into the enigmatic realm of dreams,we can unearth hidden truths about ourselves,gaining insights that elude us in the stark light of day.For instance,a recurring dream of being adrift at sea may symbolize a profound sense of uncertainty in our waking lives,urging us to confront our anxieties and seek solace in self﹣awareness.【高分句型二】(指出梦境不是随机的,而是内心思想情感的交织呈现,深入梦境能挖掘自我真相,以海上漂泊的梦为例说明其象征意义)
In conclusion,understanding the"correspondances"between dreams and reality not only enhances our self﹣awareness but also illuminates the shadowy corridors of the human psyche,revealing the profound interconnectedness of our inner and outer worlds.(强调理解梦境与现实的 "应和" 关系在提升自我认知、洞察人类心理以及展现内外世界紧密联系方面的重要意义)
Best regards,
Li Hua
【点评】写作步骤:
第一步:审题,确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点,避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步:拟定提纲;叙述得体,布局谋篇;巧妙过渡,完美结尾。
第三步:遣词造句,套用句型,上下衔接,地道表达,行文成篇。
10.(2025 云安区模拟) 假定你是李华,你校刚刚结束了一场以"美丽的祖国"(Beautiful Motherland)为主题的摄影比赛。你的作品荣获一等奖。请你给校英文报投稿分享这次经历,内容包括:
(1)介绍你的作品;
(2)你的感想。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Beautiful Motherland in My Picture
______
【答案】
Beautiful Motherland in My Picture
In the photography competition which was themed "Beautiful Motherland",my entry won the first prize!
I submitted a photo of a vast golden wheat field under the setting sun.The gentle breeze made the wheat waves ripple,and the warm glow of the setting sun painted the entire field with a layer of golden light.This scene reminded me of the hardworking farmers and their bountiful harvest.
I am extremely thrilled and honored to have won the award.This contest has not only allowed me to show the beauty of our motherland but also made me appreciate the charm of nature and the efforts of our people.It has inspired me to keep observing and recording the wonderful moments of our country with my camera.
【分析】高分句型一:In the photography competition which was themed "Beautiful Motherland",my entry won the first prize.
翻译:在以"美丽的祖国"为主题的摄影比赛中,我的作品获得了一等奖。
分析:本句运用了which引导的限制性定语从句。
高分句型二:This contest has not only allowed me to show the beauty of our motherland but also made me appreciate the charm of nature and the efforts of our people.
翻译:这次比赛不仅让我展示了我们祖国的美丽,也让我欣赏到自然的魅力和我们人民的努力。
分析:本句运用了"not only...but also...不但……而且……"连接对等成分。
【解答】
Beautiful Motherland in My Picture
In the photography competition which was themed "Beautiful Motherland",my entry won the first prize!【高分句型一】(开篇点题)
I submitted a photo of a vast golden wheat field under the setting sun.The gentle breeze made the wheat waves ripple,and the warm glow of the setting sun painted the entire field with a layer of golden light.This scene reminded me of the hardworking farmers and their bountiful harvest.(介绍自己的作品)
I am extremely thrilled and honored to have won the award.This contest has not only allowed me to show the beauty of our motherland but also made me appreciate the charm of nature and the efforts of our people.【高分句型二】It has inspired me to keep observing and recording the wonderful moments of our country with my camera.(个人感想)
【点评】写作步骤:
第一步:审题,确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点,避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步:拟定提纲;叙述得体,布局谋篇;巧妙过渡,完美结尾。
第三步:遣词造句,套用句型,上下衔接,地道表达,行文成篇。
11.(2024秋 锦州期末)假定你是李华,你校最近举办了一场以"Colorful China"(多彩中国)为主题的摄影大赛,你的作品荣获一等奖。请你给校英文报投稿分享这次经历,内容包括:
(1)介绍你的作品;
(2)你的感想。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
"Colorful China" in My Picture
【答案】
"Colorful China" in My Picture
In the photography competition themed "Colorful China",my entry won the first prize!
I submitted a photo of a vast golden wheat field under the setting sun.The gentle breeze made the wheat waves ripple,and the warm glow of the setting sun painted the entire field with a layer of golden light.This scene reminded me of the hardworking farmers and their fruitful harvest.
I am extremely thrilled and honored to have won the award.Not only has this contest allowed me to show the beauty of our motherland but it also made me appreciate the charm of nature and the efforts of our people.
【分析】高分句型一:In the photography competition themed "Colorful China",my entry won the first prize!
翻译:在以"多彩中国"为主题的摄影比赛中,我的参赛作品获得了一等奖!
分析:本句运用了过去分词短语themed "Colorful China"作后置定语。
高分句型二:Not only has this contest allowed me to show the beauty of our motherland but it also made me appreciate the charm of nature and the efforts of our people.
翻译:这次比赛不仅让我展示了祖国的美丽,也让我欣赏了大自然的魅力和人民的努力。
分析:本句运用了not only置于句首引起的部分倒装。
【解答】
"Colorful China" in My Picture
In the photography competition themed "Colorful China",my entry won the first prize!【高分句型一】
I submitted a photo of a vast golden wheat field under the setting sun.The gentle breeze made the wheat waves ripple,and the warm glow of the setting sun painted the entire field with a layer of golden light.This scene reminded me of the hardworking farmers and their fruitful harvest.(介绍作品)
I am extremely thrilled and honored to have won the award.Not only has this contest allowed me to show the beauty of our motherland but it also made me appreciate the charm of nature and the efforts of our people.【高分句型二】(个人感想)
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次,平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
12.(2024秋 湖南期末)假设你是李华,请给外教David写一封邀请信,邀请他报名参加学校国际部举办的"中国文化体验日"活动。内容包括:
(1)活动目的;
(2)特色项目;
(3)报名方式。
注意:(1)写作词数应为80左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear David,
________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear David,
I'm excited to invite you to the "Chinese Culture Experience Day" organized by our school's International Department.It's a great chance to explore Chinese traditions.
The day will feature calligraphy,tea ceremonies,and cooking traditional dishes.The event is scheduled for next Saturday,and we would be delighted to have you with us.Join us for this cultural journey by registering through this link:CCED@.
We believe that your participation will not only enrich your experience in China but also contribute to the cultural diversity of our campus.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一:I'm excited to invite you to the "Chinese Culture Experience Day" organized by our school's International Department.
翻译:我很高兴邀请您参加我们学校国际部组织的"中国文化体验日"。
分析:本句使用了过去分词短语organized by our school's International Department作后置定语。
高分句型二:We believe that your participation will not only enrich your experience in China but also contribute to the cultural diversity of our campus.
翻译:我们相信,您的参与不仅将丰富您在中国的经历,还将为我们校园的文化多样性做出贡献。
分析:本句使用了that引导的宾语从句。
【解答】Dear David,
I'm excited to invite you to the "Chinese Culture Experience Day" organized by our school's International Department.【高分句型一】It's a great chance to explore Chinese traditions.(活动目的)
The day will feature calligraphy,tea ceremonies,and cooking traditional dishes.The event is scheduled for next Saturday,and we would be delighted to have you with us.(特色项目)Join us for this cultural journey by registering through this link:CCED@.(报名方式)
We believe that your participation will not only enrich your experience in China but also contribute to the cultural diversity of our campus.【高分句型二】
Yours,
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次,平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
13.(2024秋 广州期末)假定你是李华,你校图书馆计划于下月购置一批新书,现向同学们征求采购意见。请你给图书馆负责人外教Hans写一封邮件,内容包括:
(1)推荐书目;
(2)推荐理由。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Hans,
________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Hans,
Knowing that our library is going to buy books,I'd like to give some suggestions.What we need most are popular science books which explain basic principles of nature in a simple and interesting way.
They help us understand science subjects better and arouse our curiosity about scientific discoveries.In addition to reading for knowledge,we read for fun and inspiration.That is why I recommend another category of books:literary books.Classic works,written by masters,present great thoughts through fascinating stories and language.They not only offer us joy and excitement,but also encourage us to think critically.
I'll be glad if you can consider my recommendation.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一:Knowing that our library is going to buy books,I'd like to give some suggestions.
翻译:知道我们的图书馆要买书,我想提出一些建议。
分析:本句使用了现在分词短语Knowing that our library is going to buy books作状语;that引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二:What we need most are popular science books which explain basic principles of nature in a simple and interesting way.
翻译:我们最需要的是以简单有趣的方式解释自然基本原理的科普书籍。
分析:本句使用了what引导的主语从句;which引导的限制性定语从句。
【解答】Dear Hans,
Knowing that our library is going to buy books,I'd like to give some suggestions.【高分句型一】What we need most are popular science books which explain basic principles of nature in a simple and interesting way.【高分句型二】(推荐书目)
They help us understand science subjects better and arouse our curiosity about scientific discoveries.In addition to reading for knowledge,we read for fun and inspiration.That is why I recommend another category of books:literary books.Classic works,written by masters,present great thoughts through fascinating stories and language.They not only offer us joy and excitement,but also encourage us to think critically.(推荐理由)
I'll be glad if you can consider my recommendation.
Yours,
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次,平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
14.(2025 端州区二模)假定你是李华,你的美国笔友Alice在准备即将到来的中文考试中遇到困难,写信向你求助。请你给他回信,内容包括:
(1)提出建议;
(2)阐述理由;
(3)表达期待。
注意:
(1)字数80词左右;
(2)可适当增加细节,使行文连贯;
(3)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Alice,
I'm Li Hua,a student from Senior One.________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Alice,
I'm Li Hua,a student from Senior One.I'm more than sorry to hear that you're struggling with the approaching Chinese exam.Here are some tips that might be of great help.
To begin with,why not immerse yourself in Chinese podcasts or movies?This way,you can enhance your listening skills while enjoying the content.The reason is that exposure to authentic language materials can familiarize you with different accents and speaking rhythms.Additionally,keeping a Chinese journal is highly recommended.Not only does it allow you to practice writing regularly,but it also helps you review and reinforce the words and sentence patterns you've learned.
I'm fully convinced that with consistent efforts,you'll ace the exam.Looking forward to your good news.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一:Here are some tips that might be of great help.
翻译:以下是一些可能会有很大帮助的建议。
分析:本句使用了that引导的限制性定语从句。
高分句型二:Not only does it allow you to practice writing regularly,but it also helps you review and reinforce the words and sentence patterns you've learned.
翻译:它不仅能让你定期练习写作,还能帮助你复习和强化所学的单词和句型。
分析:本句使用了not only置于句首引起的部分倒装。
【解答】Dear Alice,
I'm Li Hua,a student from Senior One.I'm more than sorry to hear that you're struggling with the approaching Chinese exam.Here are some tips that might be of great help.【高分句型一】(写信目的)
To begin with,why not immerse yourself in Chinese podcasts or movies?This way,you can enhance your listening skills while enjoying the content.The reason is that exposure to authentic language materials can familiarize you with different accents and speaking rhythms.Additionally,keeping a Chinese journal is highly recommended.Not only does it allow you to practice writing regularly,but it also helps you review and reinforce the words and sentence patterns you've learned.【高分句型二】(提出建议并阐述理由)
I'm fully convinced that with consistent efforts,you'll ace the exam.Looking forward to your good news.(表达期待)
Yours,
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次,平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
15.(2025 市中区校级模拟) 你校上周举办了第五届校园科技节,请给校英语报写一篇报道,内容包括:
(1)活动介绍;
(2)活动反响。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The Fifth Campus Science Fair
______
【答案】
The Fifth Campus Science Fair
To spark students' interest in science and enrich their campus life,our school hosted the Fifth Campus Science Fair last week.
The event started with a grand opening ceremony,which featured speeches from the principal and several specialists.Following this,participants displayed a wide range of projects,each reflecting their creativity and talent.The delicate designs and strong team spirit were met with enthusiastic applause from the audience.
Well﹣received and highly praised,the science fair left a lasting impression on all the students,fueling their curiosity about the world of science.
【分析】高分句型一:The event started with a grand opening ceremony,which featured speeches from the principal and several specialists.
翻译:活动以盛大的开幕式开始,校长和几位专家发表了演讲。
分析:本句使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二:Well﹣received and highly praised,the science fair left a lasting impression on all the students,fueling their curiosity about the world of science.
翻译:科学博览会受到好评和高度赞扬,给所有学生留下了深刻的印象,激发了他们对科学世界的好奇心。
分析:本句使用了过去分词短语well﹣received and highly praised及现在分词短语fueling their curiosity about the world of science作状语。
【解答】
The Fifth Campus Science Fair
To spark students' interest in science and enrich their campus life,our school hosted the Fifth Campus Science Fair last week.(活动目的及活动时间)
The event started with a grand opening ceremony,which featured speeches from the principal and several specialists.【高分句型一】Following this,participants displayed a wide range of projects,each reflecting their creativity and talent.The delicate designs and strong team spirit were met with enthusiastic applause from the audience.(活动介绍)
Well﹣received and highly praised,the science fair left a lasting impression on all the students,fueling their curiosity about the world of science.【高分句型二】(活动反响)
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次,平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
16.(2025 南京模拟)假如你是李华,上周你校开展了一场主题为"人工智能( AI )与我们的生活"的演讲比赛,请为校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:
(1)比赛目的;
(2)比赛的过程与结果;
(3)比赛的影响和意义。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
AI and Our Lives:An Inspiring Speech Contest
________
【答案】
AI and Our Lives:An Inspiring Speech Contest
Last week,our school organized an inspiring speech contest themed"AI and Our Lives",which aimed at fostering insightful discussions on the multifaceted impact of artificial intelligence.
Participants enthusiastically delivered their thought﹣provoking speeches,delving into both the advantages and disadvantages of AI.Ultimately,Li Ming emerged victorious with his perceptive presentation,which highlighted AI's transformative potential in shaping our future.
All in all,this contest has sparked a wave of critical thinking among students,prompting them to reflect deeply on the role of technology in our lives and its ongoing evolution.
【分析】高分句型一:Ultimately,Li Ming emerged victorious with his perceptive presentation,which highlighted AI's transformative potential in shaping our future.
翻译:最终,李明凭借其敏锐的演讲取得了胜利,他强调了人工智能在塑造我们未来方面的变革性潜力。
分析:本句使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二:This contest has sparked a wave of critical thinking among students,prompting them to reflect deeply on the role of technology in our lives and its ongoing evolution.
翻译:这场比赛在学生中引发了一波批判性思维,促使他们深刻反思技术在我们生活中的作用及其持续演变。
分析:本句使用了现在分词短语prompting them to reflect deeply on the role of technology in our lives and its ongoing evolution作状语。
【解答】
AI and Our Lives:An Inspiring Speech Contest
Last week,our school organized an inspiring speech contest themed"AI and Our Lives",which aimed at fostering insightful discussions on the multifaceted impact of artificial intelligence.(比赛目的)
Participants enthusiastically delivered their thought﹣provoking speeches,delving into both the advantages and disadvantages of AI.Ultimately,Li Ming emerged victorious with his perceptive presentation,which highlighted AI's transformative potential in shaping our future.【高分句型一】(比赛的过程与结果)
All in all,this contest has sparked a wave of critical thinking among students,prompting them to reflect deeply on the role of technology in our lives and its ongoing evolution.【高分句型二】(比赛的影响和意义)
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次,平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
17.(2025 江西一模)假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Tom对你的寒假生活很感兴趣,来信询问相关情况。请你给他回一封电子邮件,与他分享你的假期生活。内容包括:
(1)寒假期间你参加的主要活动;
(2)活动给你带来的收获或感受。
注意:(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Tom,
________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Tom,
How is everything going?Knowing that you are interested in my winter vacation,I am writing to share it with you.
I had a wonderful winter vacation.I took part in a winter camp where we did lots of interesting activities like skiing and making snowmen.I also visited some museums with my family.These experiences not only brought me a lot of fun but also helped me learn more about different cultures.I felt very relaxed and happy during the holiday.What about you vacation?
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一:Knowing that you are interested in my winter vacation,I am writing to share it with you.
翻译:知道你对我的寒假感兴趣,我写信与你分享。
分析:本句使用了现在分词短语knowing that you are interested in my winter vacation作状语及that引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二:I took part in a winter camp where we did lots of interesting activities like skiing and making snowmen.
翻译:我参加了一个冬令营,在那里我们做了很多有趣的活动,比如滑雪和堆雪人。
分析:本句使用了where引导的限制性定语从句。
【解答】Dear Tom,
How is everything going?Knowing that you are interested in my winter vacation,I am writing to share it with you.【高分句型一】(写信目的)
I had a wonderful winter vacation.I took part in a winter camp where we did lots of interesting activities like skiing and making snowmen.【高分句型二】I also visited some museums with my family.(寒假期间参加的主要活动)These experiences not only brought me a lot of fun but also helped me learn more about different cultures.(活动收获)I felt very relaxed and happy during the holiday.(活动感受)What about you vacation?
Yours,
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次,平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
18.(2025 湖北二模) 假定你是李华,最近你校英文报计划增设一个"School Life"的新版块,需要刊登一些记录同学们的校园生活的文章。请你给交换生Alex写一封邮件,内容包括:
(1)增设目的;
(2)约稿要求;
(3)鼓励他投稿。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
【答案】Dear Alex,
So thrilled am I to tell you a brand﹣new section"School Life"in our school English newspaper.Designed to record our colorful campus experiences among us,it's not just a column;it's a platform where we can connect,inspire each other,and celebrate the essence of our school days.
Stories about your joyful moments in school with vivid details and positive themes are warmly welcomed.Submissions,which should be 200﹣300 words long,must be creative,genuine,and submitted to schoolnewspaper@domain.com.
Do not let this opportunity to share your unique stories slip away.We can't wait to receive your works!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一:Designed to record our colorful campus experiences among us,it's not just a column;it's a platform where we can connect,inspire each other,and celebrate the essence of our school days.
翻译:它旨在记录我们丰富多彩的校园经历,它不仅仅是一个专栏;它也是一个平台,我们可以在这里建立联系,相互激励,庆祝我们学校生活的精髓。
分析:本句使用了过去分词短语designed to record our colorful campus experiences among us作状语及where引导的限制性定语从句。
高分句型二:Submissions,which should be 200﹣300 words long,must be creative,genuine,and submitted to schoolnewspaper@domain.com.
翻译:提交的内容应为200﹣300字,必须具有创造性、真实性,并提交到schoolnewspaper@domain.com。
分析:本句使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
【解答】Dear Alex,
So thrilled am I to tell you a brand﹣new section"School Life"in our school English newspaper.Designed to record our colorful campus experiences among us,it's not just a column;it's a platform where we can connect,inspire each other,and celebrate the essence of our school days.【高分句型一】(增设目的)
Stories about your joyful moments in school with vivid details and positive themes are warmly welcomed.Submissions,which should be 200﹣300 words long,must be creative,genuine,and submitted to schoolnewspaper@domain.com.【高分句型二】(约稿要求)
Do not let this opportunity to share your unique stories slip away.We can't wait to receive your works!(鼓励投稿)
Yours,
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次,平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
19.(2025 湖南模拟)假定你是李华,你校将于2月7日举办第12届科技作品展览节,请你向英国交换生Mike写一封邮件。内容包括:
(1)介绍活动;
(2)邀请参加。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mike,
How have you been doing recently?
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mike,
How have you been doing recently?With the twelfth "Science and Technology Works Exhibition" approaching,I am overjoyed to introduce to you something concerned and invite you to it as well.
Firstly,it is on February seventh that the event will be launched in our school.As desired,the exhibition will undoubtedly appeal to numerous student enthusiasts.Secondly,what we are expecting enthusiastically is
that varieties of works like solar﹣powered fan and AI﹣assisted robot cleaner will be put on exhibition.
Hopefully,you are intensely keen on what I have introduced.Your participation is greatly anticipated.Looking forward to your accepting my sincere invitation as promptly as possible.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一:Secondly,what we are expecting enthusiastically is that varieties of works like solar﹣powered fan and AI﹣assisted robot cleaner will be put on exhibition.
翻译:其次,我们热切期待的是,诸如太阳能风扇和人工智能辅助的机器人清洁器等各种各样的作品将被展出。
分析:what引导主语从句和that引导表语从句。
高分句型二:Hopefully,you are intensely keen on what I have introduced.
翻译:希望你对我所介绍的内容抱有浓厚的兴趣。
分析:what引导宾语从句。
【解答】Dear Mike,
How have you been doing recently?With the twelfth "Science and Technology Works Exhibition" approaching,I am overjoyed to introduce to you something concerned and invite you to it as well.
Firstly,it is on February seventh that the event will be launched in our school.As desired,the exhibition will undoubtedly appeal to numerous student enthusiasts.Secondly,what we are expecting enthusiastically is
that varieties of works like solar﹣powered fan and AI﹣assisted robot cleaner will be put on exhibition.【高分句型一】(介绍活动)
Hopefully,you are intensely keen on what I have introduced.【高分句型二】Your participation is greatly anticipated.Looking forward to your accepting my sincere invitation as promptly as possible.(邀请参加)
Yours,
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次,平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
20.(2025 昆明一模)假定你是李华,你的英语老师布置了一项关于"Healthy Lifestyle in My Class"的小组调查任务,请你代表小组写一篇发言稿,内容包括:
(1)调查结果;
(2)看法和建议。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80左右;
(2)开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Hello,everyone!_______
【答案】 Hello,everyone!On behalf of our group,I'm honored to share our findings regarding "Healthy Lifestyle in My Class".
Through our surveys and interviews,we've discovered that about 70 percent of the students have healthy lifestyle.They work out at least three times a week,and prefer nutritious foods like fruits and vegetables.However,nearly 30 percent of the class often stay up late mainly due to excessive phone use that should be removed.We firmly believe that maintaining a healthy lifestyle is of great significance.A balanced diet and regular workout can make us keep fit and study effectively.
Thank you for listening!
【分析】高分句型一:However,nearly 30 percent of the class often stay up late mainly due to excessive phone use that should be removed.
翻译:然而,近30%的学生经常熬夜,主要是因为过度使用应该戒掉的手机。
分析:本句运用了that引导的定语从句。
高分句型二:We firmly believe that maintaining a healthy lifestyle is of great significance.
翻译:我们坚信,保持健康的生活方式具有重要意义。
分析:本句运用了that引导的宾语从句。
【解答】 Hello,everyone!On behalf of our group,I'm honored to share our findings regarding "Healthy Lifestyle in My Class".
Through our surveys and interviews,we've discovered that about 70 percent of the students have healthy lifestyle.They work out at least three times a week,and prefer nutritious foods like fruits and vegetables.However,nearly 30 percent of the class often stay up late mainly due to excessive phone use that should be removed.【高分句型一】(调查结果)We firmly believe that maintaining a healthy lifestyle is of great significance.【高分句型二】(小组看法)A balanced diet and regular workout can make us keep fit and study effectively.(小组建议)
Thank you for listening!
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次,平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
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