(共11张PPT)
UNIT 12 What did you do last weekend?
UNIT 12 写作能力提升练
你的外地朋友李明五一劳动节(May Day)期间来拜访了你, 你为他安排了一系列的活动。请你根据提示,写一篇短文,题为“The trip in Panjin”。
5月2日 上午 漫步红海滩国家风景廊道(Red Beach National Scenic Corridor)
下午 坐船、观鸟
5月3日 上午 观赏稻草人(scarecrows)
下午 参观辽河美术馆
The trip in Panjin
[谋篇布局]理清文章思路,构建文章结构。
[遣词造句]就结构图中的要点和词语完成句子。
1. 我的老朋友李明五一劳动节来看我了。
My old friend Li Ming came to see me on May Day.
2. 我带他游览了盘锦。
I showed him around Panjin.
came to see me
showed him around
3. 在5月2日早上,我们沿着红海滩国家风景廊道走。
On the morning of May 2nd, we walked along the Red Beach National Scenic Corridor.
4. 我们如此激动以至于拍了很多照片。
We were so excited tha we took many photos .
5. 我朋友认为这是一次令人兴奋的旅行。
My friend thought it was an exciting trip .
walked along
so excited that
took many photos
it was an exciting trip
运用连接词和适当的短语使上下文更加流畅;加入恰当的句式突出短文的中心思想。
[巧妙衔接]
The trip in Panjin
My old friend Li Ming came to see me on May Day. I showed him around Panjin.
On the morning of May 2nd, we walked along the Red Beach National Scenic Corridor. We spent all the afternoon taking a boat and watching quite a lot of birds flying in the sky. We were so excited that we took many photos. The next morning, we enjoyed different kinds of interesting scarecrows. We saw some paintings in the Liaohe Art Museum in the afternoon.
My friend thought it was an exciting trip.
[连句成篇]
请根据表格内容提示,以“My Weekend”为题,写一篇60词左右的短文。
周六 白天 湖边露营;草地上放风筝;踢足球
晚上 生火煮东西吃;欣赏夜景
周日 上午 做作业;为英语考试做准备
下午 游泳
My Weekend
I had a busy weekend.
In the daytime of Saturday, I went camping with my family near the lake.We flew kites on the grass and played soccer.We were very relaxed.In the evening,we made a fire and cooked food on it.The food was very delicious.Then we enjoyed the beautiful night view.
I had a busy weekend.
In the daytime of Saturday, I went camping with my family near the lake.We flew kites on the grass and played soccer.We were very relaxed.In the evening,we made a fire and cooked food on it.The food was very delicious.Then we enjoyed the beautiful night view.
On Sunday morning, I did my homework at home and studied for the English test.In the afternoon, because it was too hot, I went swimming with my classmates in the pool. We had great fun.
On Sunday morning, I did my homework at home and studied for the English test.In the afternoon, because it was too hot, I went swimming with my classmates in the pool. We had great fun.