2025中考英语考前冲刺必背英语作文（八）（含答案解析）

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2025中考英语考前冲刺必背英语作文（八）
一、定位
目标读者：备战2025年中考的莘莘学子。
核心功能：直击中考英语书面表达痛点，助力考生冲刺高分。
二、内容构成
作文类型：囊括书信、倡议书、演讲稿、短文等多样作文体裁，全方位覆盖中考作文考查范畴。
题材范围：从校园生活到社会热点，从个人成长到环境保护，如“体重管理年”、难忘的老师、阅读习惯、野生动物保护等，题材鲜活，贴近学生日常，激发写作灵感。
命题趋势：精准契合中考英语写作命题走向，为考生提供极具前瞻性的备考指引。
三、编写特点
写作指导：每个作文题目配备详尽写作要求与提示，犹如贴心的写作导航，引导学生精准把握写作方向，避免偏题、漏点，轻松开启写作之旅。
例文示范：精心打造的高质量例文，语言地道、结构严谨、内容丰富，堪称写作范本。考生可直接模仿借鉴，快速提升写作水平。
解析辅助：深入剖析例文，涵盖写作步骤、亮点词汇、高分句型，让考生不仅知其然，更知其所以然，全方位掌握写作技巧。
四、独家优势
考前冲刺必备：在中考临近的关键时刻，这份文档是考生查漏补缺、强化写作能力的不二之选，助你把握最后的提分机会。
独家原创内容：所有作文题目、例文及解析均为专业团队精心原创，独家呈现，确保考生获取最新、最权威的备考资源，抢占备考先机。
提升综合素养：不仅提升写作能力，还能通过多样题材拓展知识面，培养跨文化交际意识，全面提升英语综合素养，为未来学习打下坚实基础。
一、书面表达
1．2025年是“体重管理年”实施的第一年，学校发起体重控制健身活动。假如你是李华，请你结合自己的经历，以“A Healthier Me in the Weight Management Year”用英语写一段感言，谈一下自己的做法和感受，在学校公众号“健身和成长”上发表。
提示：
1.体重控制经历；
2.健身感受；
3.发出呼吁。
要求：
1.不得出现真实姓名和学校名字。
2.包括提示中的内容，可以适当增加细节，使文章语句流畅，意义完整。
3.字数100字左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear friends,
I’m Li Hua. Like many of you, I used to struggle with my weight. Last year, __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Dear friends,
I’m Li Hua. Like many of you, I used to struggle with my weight. Last year, with the school’s weight-control fitness campaign in the “Weight Management Year”, I decided to make a change.
I started by having a balanced diet. I reduced my intake of junk food and increased fruits and vegetables. Also, I made exercise a regular part of my life. I jogged every morning and took part in basketball games after school.
At first, it was tough. I felt tired and even wanted to give up. But as time went by, I noticed my clothes were getting looser and I had more energy. It was amazing!
Now, I’m not only physically healthier but also more confident. So, dear friends, don’t hesitate to take action. Let’s all strive for a healthier self!
Best wishes!
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般过去时和一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先写一下自己体重控制经历和健身感受；
第二步，再发出呼吁，提倡大家采取行动，为健康努力。
[亮点词汇]
①make a change做出改变
②take part in参加
③balanced diet平衡饮食
[高分句型]
①I jogged every morning and took part in basketball games after school.（and连接并列成分）
②Now, I’m not only physically healthier but also more confident.（not only…but also…句型）
2．假如你是李辉。你的外国笔友 Steve来信和你分享了他学校的趣事，请你用英语写一封回信，先回应校园趣事分享，再向他描述一位你最难忘的老师，描述需包含以下要点：
1. Who is the teacher that you’ll never forget
2. What makes him or her different from other teachers
3. What kind of things have you learned from him or her
注意：
1. 词数为120左右；
2. 内容涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥，全文连贯通顺；
3. 文中不得提及有关考生和教师个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
Dear Steve,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hui
【答案】例文
Dear Steve,
Thanks for sharing the interesting things in your school. It sounds like you have a great time there. I really enjoyed reading about them.
Now, I’d like to tell you about a teacher I’ll never forget. It’s my former English teacher, Ms. Liu.
Ms. Liu was different from other teachers in many ways. She didn’t just focus on textbooks. Instead, she made learning English fun by using various teaching methods. For example, she often organized English role-play activities and group discussions. This made the class lively and engaging, and we all actively participated.
From her, I learned not only knowledge but also a positive attitude towards learning. She always encouraged us to express our ideas bravely, even if we made mistakes. Her patience and enthusiasm inspired me to love English more. I remember once I was too shy to speak English in class. She noticed it and encouraged me with a warm smile. After that, I gradually became more confident.
I’m really lucky to have had such a wonderful teacher. I believe these experiences have had a profound impact on my growth.
Looking forward to hearing from you again.
Yours,
Li Hui
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不用遗漏写作要点中的信息，并适当添加内容，使文章语句通顺。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，点名自己最难忘的老师；
第二步，具体介绍老师的不同之处，和与她/他最难忘的经历；
第三步，书写结尾，介绍自己从老师身上学习到的东西。
[亮点词汇]
①be different from与……不同
②no only...but also...不仅……而且……
③look forward to期待
[高分句型]
①Now, I’d like to tell you about a teacher I’ll never forget.（定语从句）
②I remember once I was too shy to speak English in class.（宾语从句）
3．假如你是李华，班里的交换生Jim在提高英语口语与听力方面给予你诸多实用的建议，令你获益良多。请根据下列要点，用英语给他写一封不少于40词的邮件表达感谢。
要点：
1.表达由衷谢意；
2.阐明具体进步；
3.邀请他一起看电影。
Dear Jim,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Jim,
Thank you so much for your helpful advice on improving my English! Your tips on listening to English songs and practicing speaking every day really worked. Now I can understand movies better and talk more confidently.
To celebrate my progress, would you like to watch an English film with me this weekend It’ll be fun!
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
② 时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③ 提示：需涵盖三个要点（感谢、进步、邀请），语言简洁友好，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表达感谢；
第二步，具体说明Jim的建议如何帮助自己；
第三步，提出邀请。
[亮点词汇]
① helpful advice 实用建议
② practice doing sth. 练习做某事
③ would like to do sth. 想要做某事
[高分句型]
① Your tips on listening to English songs and practicing speaking every day really worked.（介词短语作后置定语）
② To celebrate my progress, would you like to watch an English film with me this weekend （动词不定作目的状语）
4．“每天锻炼一小时，健康生活一辈子！”，旨在倡导“全民健康，快乐为本”的理念。随着生活水平的提高，健康越来越受到重视。请根据以下思维导图的提示，以“How to Live a Healthy and Happy Life” 为题，用英语写一篇短文，告诉大家我们应如何做。
要求：
1. 文中需包含思维导图中的主要内容；
2. 句子及篇章结构准确、连贯、书写规范；
3. 可做适量拓展；
4. 词数：80 词左右。(标题不计入总词数)
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【答案】例文
How to Live a Healthy and Happy Life
With the improvement of living conditions, we are paying more attention to our health, which includes both physical and mental health. Then how can we live a healthy and happy life
Firstly, we should keep our bodies healthy. Not only do we need to eat healthy food, but also we need to exercise in a proper way every day. For example, we can run for 30 minutes every morning or play sports after school. Meanwhile, we still need enough sleep every day. Secondly, mental health is also very important. We need to love our life and try to be active. We need to get along well with others as well. When we’re sad, we need to communicate with parents and friends.
In a word, if we have a healthy body and mind, we will have a healthy and happy life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：根据思维导图中的提示展开写作，注意不要遗漏信息，可适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明大家对身心健康的重视，引出下文；
第二步，具体介绍如何健康且开心地生活；
第三步，书写结语，表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
①With the improvement of 随着……的发展
②pay more attention to 更加关注
③in a proper way 以恰当的方式
④Meanwhile 同时
⑤get along well with 和……相处融洽
⑥communicate with sb 和某人交流
[高分句型]
①With the improvement of living conditions, we are paying more attention to our health, which includes both physical and mental health. (which引导非限制性定语从句)
②When we’re sad, we need to communicate with parents and friends. (when引导时间状语从句)
③In a word, if we have a healthy body and mind, we will have a healthy and happy life. (if引导条件状语从句)
5．在日常生活中，有的人喜欢通过阅读纸质书籍获取知识，有的人则更喜欢借助电子设备阅读。你更倾向于哪种阅读方式呢？你校英语报正在以“Reading paper books or e-books ”为题开展征文活动，请你根据下面写作要求，结合自身实际，从以下两种阅读方式中任选其一，用英语写一篇短文，陈述你的理由，向校报投稿。
Reading paper books Reading e-books
enjoy the feeling of paper easy to carry around
no eye strain (损伤) large storage capacity (容量)
写作要求：
1.文中须包含所选阅读方式的要点提示，可适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
3.词数100左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
Reading paper books or e-books
Some people prefer reading paper books. Others enjoy reading e-books. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Reading paper books or e-books
Some people prefer reading paper books. Others enjoy reading e-books. As for me, I have a strong preference for reading paper books.
Firstly, when I hold a paper book, I can truly enjoy the feeling of paper. The paper under my fingers makes the reading experience more excited and real. Moreover, reading printed books causes no eye strain. After a long-time study, it’s a great relief for my eyes.
What’s more, there’s a special meaning in collecting physical books. My small bookshelf is filled with all kinds of books I’ve read, and each one reminds me of the wonderful time I spent with it.
All in all, reading paper books is a pleasure that e-books can hardly match.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据提示要点进行写作，可适当发挥，注意行文连贯，表述合理。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己更喜欢哪种阅读方式；
第二步，介绍自己喜欢这种阅读方式的原因；
第三步，书写结语，进行总结。
[亮点词汇]
①what’s more此外
②be filled with充满了
③all kinds of各种各样的
④remind sb of使某人想起
[高分句型]
①Firstly, when I hold a paper book, I can truly enjoy the feeling of paper. (when引导时间状语从句)
②My small bookshelf is filled with all kinds of books I’ve read, and each one reminds me of the wonderful time I spent with it. (定语从句)
6．近来，国家卫生健康委员会提出实施“体重管理年”三年行动计划，旨在普及健康生活方式，加强慢性病防治。作为中学生，我们该如何科学管理体重呢？请结合自身情况，写一篇英语短文，给校英文报投稿，谈谈你的具体计划和理由。
注意：字数80~100。开头已给，不计入总词数。文中不得出现个人信息。
The Three-Year Action Plan for Weight Management
Present Situation healthy/overweight/underweight…
Changes and Plans a healthy diet/do sports/ healthy habits…
Importance of the Action live a healthy life…
Recently, our government carried out a policy called The Three-Year Action Plan for Weight Management. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
Recently, our government carried out a policy called The Three-Year Action Plan for Weight Management. As a middle school student, I’m a bit overweight. This really affects my daily life and sports performance.
To change this situation, I’ve made some plans. Firstly, I’ll adjust my diet. I’ll reduce the intake of junk food like hamburgers and fried chicken, and instead, eat more fruits, vegetables and whole grains. Secondly, I’ll do sports regularly. I plan to run for half an hour every morning and play badminton with my friends after school.
Managing weight is of great importance. It helps us build a strong body and develop healthy habits, which will enable us to live a healthy life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息，考生结合自身经历，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简要介绍国家卫健委提出的“体重管理年”三年行动计划，引出话题；
第二步，结合自身情况，提出具体的体重管理计划；
第三步，阐述体重管理行动的重要性，升华主题。
[亮点词汇]
①a bit稍微，有点
②be of great importance……是重要的
③develop healthy habits培养健康的习惯
[高分句型]
It helps us build a strong body and develop healthy habits, which will enable us to live a healthy life. (which引导的定语从句)
7．在我们成长过程中，总会遇到各种各样的问题，可能是学习方面的，也可能是生活方面的，或者……因此具备一些解决问题的能力是非常必要的。最近，某电视台将举办一次英语演讲比赛，假若你是李明，请以“What I Learned From My Trouble”为题，根据下面提示和要求，用英语写一篇演讲稿参加比赛，分享你的一次经历与感悟。
提示:
1.What was your problem
2.How did you solve your problem
3.What have you learned from it
要求:
1.字迹工整, 表达清楚, 语法正确；
2. 要点必须包括所有相关信息, 并作出适当发挥；
3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(校名，姓名，地名等)；
4. 词数: 不少于80词。(首句已给出，不计入总数)。
Everyone meets many problems in our lives. I’m Li Ming. I’d like to share my story with you. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
Everyone meets many problems in our lives. I’m Li Ming. l’d like to share my story with you.
When I was in Grade 7, I failed a math exam. I felt upset because most of my classmates got good marks. To solve my learning problems, I asked my math teacher Mr. Wang for help. He taught me patiently and I knew that I needed to practice more. I worked harder than before and made great progress.When I worked out a difficult math problem, I felt really satisfied.
I learned that we should face our problems bravely, rather than being afraid of them. This makes me grow as a person who faces problems bravely.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：主要为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己成长中遇到的问题；
第二步，阐述解决问题的方法；
第三步，说出自己的收获和感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①ask for help寻求帮助
②made great progress取得巨大的进步
③work out解决
④be afraid of害怕
[高分句型]
①When I worked out a difficult math problem, I felt really satisfied.(when引导时间状语从句)
②I learned that we should face our problems bravely, rather than being afraid of them.(宾语从句)
③This makes me grow as a person who faces problems bravely.(定语从句)
8．“敬畏自然，保护野生动物”的主题班会让你认识到保护野生动物的重要性。请你写一份英文倡议书投给校报，希望大家共同努力为野生动物创造更好的环境。内容包括：
1. 野生动物现状：数量减少、消失；
2. 造成前述现状的主要原因分析；
3. 我们中学生能做些什么 (至少两点) 。
注意：
1. 词数80词左右；倡议书的格式和开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 根据提示内容，适当发挥；
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear fellow students,
Wild animals are our friends. We live on the same earth. So protecting them is protecting ourselves.
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【答案】例文
Dear fellow students,
Wild animals are our friends. We live on the same earth. So protecting them is protecting ourselves. As we know, the number of wild animals is getting smaller. And some of them are even disappearing. One of the main reasons is that they have less space to live in. The other is that they are killed by people for their teeth, meat, oil and so on.
As middle school students, what can we do to help protect them First, we should stop people cutting trees. Second, we mustn’t eat wild animals. (Third, we must say no to all kinds of wildlife products.)
Actions speak louder than words. Let’s work together to make a better place for wild animals!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍野生动物的现状及造成该现状的主要原因；
第二步，介绍作为中学生，我们能做些什么；
第三步，最后发出呼吁。
[亮点词汇]
①As we know众所周知
②and so on等等
[高分句型]
①One of the main reasons is that they have less space to live in.(表语从句)
②Actions speak louder than words.行动胜于言语。
9．许多学习生活中的烦恼都会使人产生压力，为了更好地发现及解决同学们中存 在的心理压力问题，你们班特意开展了一次以”Less Pressure, Better Life”为主题的英语演讲比赛，假如你是李华，请你准备发言稿，谈谈同学们普遍存在的压力，以及分享你的一些缓解压力的好办法。
要求：
1.80词左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内)。
2.文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。
3.可适当增加细节，以使语句通顺、条例清楚、意义连贯。
4.书写规范，卷面整洁。
Hello, boys and girls. I am honored to give a speech on a topic “Less Pressure, Better Life”. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
Hello, boys and girls. I am honored to give a speech on a topic “Less Pressure, Better Life”. In our daily study and life, we students face different kinds of pressures. One common pressure is from study. We have so many exams and assignments that we often feel stressed. Also, getting along with classmates can sometimes bring pressure.
As for me, I usually relieve stress in the following ways. First, I like listening to music. When I’m lost in the beautiful melody, all my worries seem to fade away. Second, doing exercise is a great choice. Running on the playground makes me energetic and helps me forget about pressure. Last but not least, I often talk to my parents or friends. Sharing my problems with them gives me useful suggestions.
Let’s take these ways to reduce pressure and enjoy a better life. Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇发言稿；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据题干要求完成写作，适当添加细节，上下文联系紧密，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍同学们中普遍存在的压力是什么。
第二步，介绍自己是如何成功缓解压力的。
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①different kinds of pressures不同类型的压力
②get along with和……相处
③as for至于
[高分句型]
①When I’m lost in the beautiful melody, all my worries seem to fade away. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②Sharing my problems with them gives me useful suggestions. (动名词作主语)
10．什么能给我们带来幸福？劳动、阅读、锻炼、克服困难的经历、父母无私的爱还是老师、同学的帮助？只要用心感受，幸福无处不在。请以“________ Brought Me Happiness”为题，用英语写一篇短文，叙述一件曾经给你带来幸福的事或物，并谈谈你的感受。
要求：
1. 补全所给题目，写一篇短文，词数不少于80;
2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；
3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；
4. 请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。
________ Brought Me Happiness
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【答案】例文
My Favorite Book Brought Me Happiness
There are always some things that can bring us happiness. My favorite book is one of the things.
It was a cold winter afternoon, and I was feeling a bit down. I picked up my favorite book, and as soon as I started reading, all my worries disappeared. The characters, the storyline, and the beautiful language of the book transported me to another world where I could forget my problems. The hours flew by as I lost myself in the pages of the book. When I finished it, I felt a sense of satisfaction and happiness that lasted for days.
My favorite book reminded me that reading can be a great escape and a source of happiness in times of need.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”与“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点需补全标题，描述事件并表达感受，词数不少于80。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开篇点明主题，引出“最爱的书带来幸福”；
第二步，具体阐述事件。通过时间、场景、读书过程展开细节描写；
第三步，书写结语。总结读书带来的感悟与幸福。
[亮点词汇]
①bring sb. happiness 给某人带来幸福
②feel a bit down 感到低落
③transport sb. to... 将某人带入……
④a sense of satisfaction 满足感
⑤in times of need 在需要时
[高分句型]
①As soon as I started reading, all my worries disappeared. (as soon as引导时间状语从句)
②The book reminded me that reading can be a great escape. (that引导宾语从句)