(共30张PPT)
Unit 8 Have you read Treasure Island yet？
人教新目标版 八年级下
Section B3a-Selfcheck
写作优质公开课课件
Learning objectives
1. 以favorite singer or writer为话题引领，练习和巩固本单元的目标语言，熟练使用本单元目标词汇、短语和句型。
2. 通过教师引导下的学生分享活动，表达个人观点，了解不同的歌手和作者及其作品，培养学生审美意识。
3. 运用现在完成时对自己喜欢的歌手、乐队或作者进行描述，并能独立完成一篇的有关话题的短篇文章。
Music is a refreshing breeze that blows away distractions from the heart.
音乐是一股清风，吹走心中的杂念。
Literature is a small stream that washes away the dust in the heart.
文学是一条小溪，冲洗心中的尘埃。
Enrich and cleanse our spiritual world with music and literature!
用音乐和文学丰富并洗涤我们的精神世界！
Warming-up
Let’s enjoy some beautiful words .
My favorite singer/writer is ...
I like ... best.
Free talk
Who is your favorite singer or writer
our favorite singer or writer
When we introduce our favorite singer or writer, what can we talk about
What is his/her name
When and where was he/she born
What is/was his/her famous work
What is/was he/she famous for
What do you think of him/her
Brainstorm
马克 吐温(Mark Twain)是美国著名的作家，他写了很多脍炙人口的作品，请根据以下提示，写一篇关于他的小短文。
提示：
1. 1835年出生于弗罗里达的农村；
2. 11岁时开始工作，曾做过很多种类的工作。12岁时父亲去世；
3. 写了很多著名的小说，最著名的小说之一是《汤姆 索亚历
险记》
4.自行补充一点你对他的看法。
参考词汇：
Florida 弗罗里达 novel 小说
The Adventures of Tom Sawyer 汤姆 索亚历险记
writer
Presentation
一、介绍作家
体裁
记叙文
人称
第一人称
第三人称
时态
一般过去时
一般现在时
认真审题
My favorite writer
Para. 1
Para. 2
Para. 3
开篇点题
描述生活经历和作品
发表观点
段落布局
1. 出生
be born
2. 11/12岁时
at the age of ...
when ... was ... years old
4. 最著名的小说之一
one of the most famous novels
3. 很多种类
many kinds of
实用短语
背景资料
My favorite writer is Mark Twain. His books are very humorous.
In 1835, Mark Twain was born in a small village in Florida. He started to work at the age of 11. He did many kinds of work. When he was 12 years old, his father passed away.
Mark Twain wrote a lot of famous novels. One of the most famous novels is The Adventures of Tom Sawyer.
In my opinion, Mark Twain is one of the greatest writers in the world.
Sample:
泰勒·斯威夫特(Taylor Swift) 是乡村音乐的代表人物，请根据以下提示，以“My favorite singer” 为题，写一篇小短文介绍Taylor Swift。
提示：
1. 1989年12月13日出生于美国，从小就对音乐感兴趣；
2. 2006年发行第一张专辑并取得巨大成功；
3.以乡村音乐而著名；已多次获得格莱美奖，唱片已销售数
百万张，已经成为最受欢迎及最成功的歌手之一；
4.自行补充一点喜欢她的音乐的原因。
参考词汇：
release 发行 album 专辑 Grammy Awards 格莱美奖
singer
Presentation
二、介绍歌手
体裁
记叙文
人称
第一人称
第三人称
时态
一般过去时
一般现在时
现在完成时
认真审题
1. 出生
be born
2. 在1989年12月13日
on December 13, 1989
3. 发行第一张专辑
release the first album
4. 以……著名
be famous for
5. 多次获格莱美奖
win Grammy Awards
6. 数百万
millions of
实用短语
背景资料
Taylor Swift is my favorite singer. She is popular with young people all over the world.
Taylor Swift was born on December 13, 1989 in the USA. She was interested in music when she was a kid. In 2006, she released her first album. It was a great success.
Taylor Swift is famous for country music. She has won Grammy Awards many times. What’s more, she has sold millions of CDs so far. Taylor Swift has become one of the most popular and successful singers.
I like Taylor Swift’s music because her music is beautiful. When I listen to it, I feel relaxed and cheerful.
Sample:
1. Who is the singer/ writer
2. When did the singer/ writer first become famous
3. How and why did he/she first become famous
4. What famous songs/books has he/she recorded/written When
5. How many CDs/books has he/she sold
6. How did you find out about him/her
7. Is he/she still popular today
8. Have you introduced this singer/writer to others
9. How do you feel about his/her music/ books
10. Have you ever played/sung his/her songs yourself
Think of a singer or writer you know well. Make a list of facts about him/her. Think of the following:
3a
Discuss in groups according to
the questions in 3a.
the first line in the song / book
the book / song was written/ recorded by
enjoyed success in
successful song/ CD/ book
I listen to this song/read this book when …
The song/book makes me feel …
Write an article about the singer or writer. Here are some words and phrases you can use.
3b
n. 行；排
When and how did he/she first become famous
How did you find out about him or her
My favorite singer/writer
brief introduction of the singer/writer
Who is the singer/writer
the singer/
writer’s
achievements
the story between you and the singer/writer
What famous songs/books did he/she record/write
How many CDs/books has he/she sold
Have you introduced this singer/writer to others
How do you feel about his/her music/books
The outline:
Writing tip:
Writing an outline helps you to organize your ideas.
My favorite singer/writer is ___________. He/she is_____________________.
He/She became famous when he/she______________________ . He/She has recorded/written numerous popular songs/books like _____________________. He/She has sold ____________CDs/books.
I became his/her fan as soon as__________. I like him/her so much that I have introduced him/her to many of my friends. His/her music/writing can make me feel __________________, so I really like to ______________________________.
Draft your caption according to your outline.
Checklist (标准清单) Scores
(1-5)
Structure & content brief introduction of the singer/writer Who is the singer/writer
the singer/writer’s achievements When and how did he/she first become famous
What famous songs/books did he/she record/write
How many CDs/books has he/she sold
the story between you and the singer/writer How did you find out about him or her
Have you introduced this singer/writer to others
How do you feel about his/her music/books
Language Use more expressions
No grammar or spelling mistakes
Edit your draft according to the checklist.
1. Fill in the blanks with the correct words in the box.
down
of
about
back
up
1. What do you think _________ this dress Do you think it looks good on me
2. The little boy was so hungry that he didn’t put his spoon __________ at all. He just kept on eating.
3. She grew _________ in a small town, although she lives in a big city now.
4. For homework, our teacher told us to write __________ our summer vacation.
5. At the end of the day, the bus brought us _______to our school.
of
down
up
about
back
2. Fill in the blanks with the correct forms of the words in brackets.
1. I ________ (join) the book club last month and I ________ (read) five books already.
2. I only _______ (start) taking French classes last week and I _______________ (learn) 50 French words already.
3. Tony _______ (buy) a pop music CD yesterday but he ____________________ (listen) to it yet.
4. They ___________ (listen) to many songs by The Beatles, but they cannot _______ (sing) any of them.
5. She ________ (see) the newspaper on the table this morning, but she _______________ (have) any time to read it yet.
joined
have read
started
have learned
bought
has not/hasn’t listened
have listened
sing
saw
has not/hasn’t had
3. Make a list of the things you have done and the ones you haven't done yet this week. Then ask two other students.
Make a conversation.
A: What have you done /What haven’t you done
B: I have …./I haven't ….
A: You've done e on. /Ah, you should burry up.
You (student’s name) (student’s name)
Things I have done
Things I haven’t done
You （Tom） student’s name (Mary) student’s name
(Peter)
Things I have done science homework
Things I haven’t done math homework
I have done my science homework but I haven’t done my homework .Mary has done her science homework , but she hasn’t done her math homework…
书面表达
请以“My favorite book”为题，根据以下提示，用英语写一篇100词左右的短文。要点如下：
What’s your favorite book
What do you think of it
Why do you like it best
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
Homework
范文：
Do you know Harry Potter？It's my favorite spare time reading and it's written by J.K.Rowling.
Harry Potter is a magical school student who wears glasses and has no parents, and now he is 16 years old. He is very brave and known by everyone because it is said that he is the only person that will not be killed by the evil.
When I read the book for the first time, I thought it was very exciting and interesting. So I read it again and again. Each time
I have different feelings. Books about Harry Potter have been sold millions of copies all over the world. Do you like Harry Potter？If you haven't read the book yet, read it now and you'll find a wonderful world.
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