【高考押题卷】2025年高考英语高频易错预测卷 应用文写作（含答案与解析）
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2025年高考英语高频易错押题卷 应用文写作
一．书面表达（共20小题）
1．（2024秋 运城期末） 假定你是李华，你的美国好友Chris正在学习中国传统文化，发邮件向你请教"福"（Fu）字的相关知识。请给他回封邮件，内容包括：
（1）"福"字的含义；
（2）"福"字的使用场合。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Dear Chris，
Glad to know that you want to learn more about traditional Chinese culture，
______
Yours，
Li Hua
2．（2025 云浮模拟） 假定你是李华，外教Ryan打算使用AI技术辅助英语作文批改，并向同学们征询意见。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）你的看法；
（2）你的建议。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan，
I hope this email finds you well.
______
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
3．（2025 张家界模拟） 你们学校英语俱乐部打算进行以"My Favourite Book"为题的分享交流活动，请你根据以下要求写一篇发言稿，内容包括：
（1）介绍这本书；
（2）分享这本书的理由。
注意：
（1）词数100左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear fellow students，
I feel honored to share with you my favourite book called ______
4．（2025 河源模拟）假定你是李华。为深入了解广府文化，你校决定开展"走进广东"主题活动，请写一封邮件邀请交换生Amy参加此次活动。要点如下：
（1）活动时间；
（2）活动内容。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Amy，
________
Yours，
Li Hua
5．（2024秋 吕梁期末）假定你是校学生会主席李华，你校学生会计划邀请人工智能专家Smith教授就人工智能（AI）话题做一个报告。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）发出邀请；
（2）同学们关于人工智能所感兴趣的问题；
（3）期待到来并表示感谢。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80词左右；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Smith，
_______
Yours，
Li Hua
6．（2024秋 唐山期末）假定你是李华。为了体验生活，你参加了社区举办的"最美劳动者"摄影大赛。请给你的英国笔友John写封邮件，分享此次经历。
内容包括：
（1）参赛作品介绍；
（2）参加活动感受。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好；
（3）请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear John，
How are you？Recently，I participated in a photography competition organized by my community，called "The Most Beautiful Workers".________
I'd love to hear your thoughts on this topic.Looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes，
Li Hua
7．（2024秋 潮州期末）假定你是李华，你的外国笔友Tom对中国的名言警句很感兴趣。他写信向你请教"有志者，事竟成"的含义。请结合个人经历给他回信，谈谈你对此警句的理解。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答卷的相应位置作答。
Dear Tom，
______
Yours，
Li Hua
8．（2025 湖北模拟） 假定你是李华，准备暑假到英国旅行一周。请给来自英国并有10年导游经验的外教Kevin写一封邮件，咨询相关情况，内容包括：
（1）值得游玩的景点；
（2）旅行中的注意事项。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Kevin，
I'm Li Hua from Class 2.
______
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
9．（2025 海陵区校级一模）假定你是李华，你的朋友Mark将在元旦期间来你家做客，特发邮件询问你的假期的一些活动安排，请你回复一封邮件。
内容包括：（1）欢迎来访；
（2）你的元旦假期活动安排。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
________
10．（2024秋 淄博期末） 假定你是李华，你们学校上周举办了校园英语节，请你给英国好友Paul写一封邮件分享此次活动，内容包括：
（1）活动内容；
（2）你的感想。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Paul，
______
Yours，
Li Hua
11．（2024秋 武汉期末）假设你是李华，即将赴英国St Andrew's College交换学习一年。得知宿舍有限，需竞争获得，请你提交一份申请。内容包括：
（1）申请理由；
（2）你的优势。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Accommodation Office，
I'm Li Hua，________
Yours，
Li Hua
12．（2024秋 江西期末）明天的英语课轮到你作主题发言，请你以"中国神舟19号飞船（Shenzhou﹣19 spacecraft）发射成功"为主题写一篇发言稿，内容包括：
（1）发射时间：2024年10月30日4时27分；
（2）你的感想。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（1）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Good morning，everyone，
I'm excited to share with you the successful launch of China's Shenzhou﹣19 spacecraft.________
Thank you!
13．（2024秋 辽宁期末）假定你是学生会主席李华，你校将举办手工制作（Hands﹣on craft making）比赛。请你给擅长制作的外教Miss Jones写一封邮件，邀请她担任评委，内容包括：
（1）比赛信息；
（2）评判内容；
（3）表达期望。
要求：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Miss Jones，
________
Best regards，
Li Hua
14．（2025 江西一模）假定你是李华，得知你的好友Jack成功入选校足球队。请写封邮件向他表示祝贺，内容包括：
（1）肯定他的付出；
（2）提议庆祝活动。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jack，
________
Yours，
Li Hua
15．（2024秋 益阳期末）假如你是李华，为推广和平与友爱的理念，你校将举办一场名为"Music For Peace"的音乐节活动。请你在学校英文社团网站上发布一篇博文进行宣传。内容包括：
（1）活动宗旨；
（2）活动安排；
（3）你的期待。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Join Us In"Music For Peace"!
________
16．（2024秋 保山期末） 假定你是李华，最近参加了一次虚拟合唱团（virtual choir）活动。你的英国好友Richard得知此事后很感兴趣，向你了解相关情况，请给他回一封邮件。内容包括：
（1）活动介绍（时间、地点、内容和方式）；
（2）你的感受。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Richard，
I hope this email finds you well.
______
Yours，
Li Hua
17．（2024秋 长寿区期末） 你是李华，你校将举办一场国际文化交流节。请你用英语写一则通知，向全校学生介绍此次活动的相关信息并邀请他们参加。内容包括：
（1）活动目的：促进不同文化间的理解与交流；
（2）活动时间：下周六9：00﹣17：00；
（3）活动地点：学校操场及教学楼一楼大厅；
（4）活动内容：文化展览、文化表演、文化讲座。
注意：
（1）词数100左右；
（2）参考词汇：文化交流节Cultural Exchange Festival促进enhance
18．（2024秋 广东期末）你班外教Peter课堂上让你们讨论"最有效的学习方法"。请你写一篇发言稿，内容包括：
（1）方法介绍；
（2）你的评价。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter and classmates，
________
Thank you!
19．（2025 潍坊模拟）假设你是李华，你的英国好友Jim准备参加中国文化网举办的"Sharing China"春节文化影像展全球作品征集活动，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
（1）拍摄内容建议；
（2）简要说明理由。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jim，
_______
Yours，
Li Hua
20．（2025 福州模拟）假设你是李华，上周你参加了学校举办的科技作品展示活动。请你给英国朋友John.写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括：
（1）你的作品；
（2）你的感想。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear John，
I'd like to share with you an exhibition of sci﹣tech works I took part in last week.________
Yours，
Li Hua
2025年高考英语高频易错押题卷 应用文写作
参考答案与试题解析
一．书面表达（共20小题）
1．（2024秋 运城期末） 假定你是李华，你的美国好友Chris正在学习中国传统文化，发邮件向你请教"福"（Fu）字的相关知识。请给他回封邮件，内容包括：
（1）"福"字的含义；
（2）"福"字的使用场合。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Dear Chris，
Glad to know that you want to learn more about traditional Chinese culture，
______
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Chris，
Glad to know that you want to learn more about traditional Chinese culture，and I will introduce the Chinese character "Fu" to you.It is of great significance，which generally means good fortune，happiness，and prosperity.We usually paste the character "Fu" on the front door during the Spring Festival.It can also be seen in homes during special celebrations like weddings or on important festivals.This simple character carries our best wishes for a better life.I hope that this can help you understand the "Fu" character better.Wish you great progress and joy!
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：It is of great significance，which generally means good fortune，happiness，and prosperity.
翻译：它具有重大意义，通常意味着好运、幸福和繁荣。
分析：which引导非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：I hope that this can help you understand the "Fu" character better.
翻译：我希望这能帮助你更好的理解"福"字。
分析：that引导宾语从句。
【解答】Dear Chris，
Glad to know that you want to learn more about traditional Chinese culture，and I will introduce the Chinese character "Fu" to you.It is of great significance，which generally means good fortune，happiness，and prosperity.【高分句型一】（"福"字的含义） We usually paste the character "Fu" on the front door during the Spring Festival.It can also be seen in homes during special celebrations like weddings or on important festivals.This simple character carries our best wishes for a better life.（"福"字的使用场合） I hope that this can help you understand the "Fu" character better. 【高分句型二】Wish you great progress and joy!
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
2．（2025 云浮模拟） 假定你是李华，外教Ryan打算使用AI技术辅助英语作文批改，并向同学们征询意见。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）你的看法；
（2）你的建议。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan，
I hope this email finds you well.
______
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Ryan，
I hope this email finds you well.
Regarding your plan to use AI technology for English composition correction，I believe it's a truly innovative idea.AI can efficiently identify grammatical and spelling errors，freeing teachers to focus more on content and creativity.However，I suggest ensuring the AI's suggestions are not overly mechanical，as it's important to maintain the unique voice of each student.Additionally，periodic human reviews should be conducted to ensure accuracy and fairness.
Finally，I hope the AI can also provide feedback on writing style and structure.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：AI can efficiently identify grammatical and spelling errors，freeing teachers to focus more on content and creativity.
译文：人工智能可以有效地识别语法和拼写错误，使教师能够更专注于内容和创造力。
分析：这句话使用了现在分词短语freeing teachers to focus more on content and creativity作状语。
高分句型二：However，I suggest ensuring the AI's suggestions are not overly mechanical，as it's important to maintain the unique voice of each student.
译文：然而，我建议确保人工智能的建议不会过于机械，因为保持每个学生的独特声音很重要。
分析：这句话使用了as引导的原因状语从句。
【解答】Dear Ryan，
I hope this email finds you well.（问候）
Regarding your plan to use AI technology for English composition correction，I believe it's a truly innovative idea.AI can efficiently identify grammatical and spelling errors，freeing teachers to focus more on content and creativity.【高分句型一】（看法）However，I suggest ensuring the AI's suggestions are not overly mechanical，as it's important to maintain the unique voice of each student.【高分句型二】Additionally，periodic human reviews should be conducted to ensure accuracy and fairness.（建议）
Finally，I hope the AI can also provide feedback on writing style and structure.（希望）
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
3．（2025 张家界模拟） 你们学校英语俱乐部打算进行以"My Favourite Book"为题的分享交流活动，请你根据以下要求写一篇发言稿，内容包括：
（1）介绍这本书；
（2）分享这本书的理由。
注意：
（1）词数100左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear fellow students，
I feel honored to share with you my favourite book called ______
【答案】Dear fellow students，
I feel honored to share with you my favourite book called Gone with the wind written by Margaret Mitchell.Scarlett，the heroine，used to live a comfortable life in Twelve Oaks before the outbreak of the American Civil War.Although she experienced a lot of ups and downs，she never gave up hope and courage to carry on with what was left for her.
The last line of the book"After all，tomorrow is another day"has become my motto.No matter when I am short with my parents or feel upset，I reflect on myself，realizing how lucky I am compared with Scarlett.The gutty and gritty tone of the book attracts me in particular.It is Gone with the wind that teaches me gumption，which most of the youth lack today.
I do expect my sharing may inspire you and I am willing to hear your recommendation of the books you love
【分析】高分句型一：Although she experienced a lot of ups and downs，she never gave up hope and courage to carry on with what was left for her.
译文：尽管她经历了很多风风雨雨，但她从未放弃希望和勇气，继续做剩下的事情。
分析：这句话使用了although引导的让步状语从句，what引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二：It is Gone with the wind that teaches me gumption，which most of the youth lack today.
译文：是《乱世佳人》教会了我勇气，而这正是当今大多数年轻人所缺乏的。
分析：这句话使用了强调句It is+强调部分+that+其余部分，which引导的非限制性定语从句。
【解答】Dear fellow students，
I feel honored to share with you my favourite book called Gone with the wind written by Margaret Mitchell.Scarlett，the heroine，used to live a comfortable life in Twelve Oaks before the outbreak of the American Civil War.Although she experienced a lot of ups and downs，she never gave up hope and courage to carry on with what was left for her.【高分句型一】（介绍这本书）
The last line of the book"After all，tomorrow is another day"has become my motto.No matter when I am short with my parents or feel upset，I reflect on myself，realizing how lucky I am compared with Scarlett.The gutty and gritty tone of the book attracts me in particular.It is Gone with the wind that teaches me gumption，which most of the youth lack today.【高分句型二】（分享这本书的理由）
I do expect my sharing may inspire you and I am willing to hear your recommendation of the books you love.（希望）
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
4．（2025 河源模拟）假定你是李华。为深入了解广府文化，你校决定开展"走进广东"主题活动，请写一封邮件邀请交换生Amy参加此次活动。要点如下：
（1）活动时间；
（2）活动内容。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Amy，
________
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Amy，
I am Li Hua，brimming with excitement as I extend a warm﹣hearted invitation to you for our school﹣organized event， "Discover Guangdong"，which is scheduled to commence at 9：00 a.m.on June 15th.
This event is bound to be a cultural extravaganza.Initially，we will pay a visit to a local museum，where a wealth of historical artifacts and cultural relics await our exploration，enabling us to gain deep insights into Guangdong's long﹣standing history.Subsequently，a handicraft workshop will provide you with an opportunity to immerse yourself in traditional Cantonese handicrafts，such as the delicate art of paper﹣cutting or the exquisite porcelain painting.To round off the day，we'll relish a sumptuous feast of authentic Cantonese cuisine，with dim sum taking the spotlight.
Your presence would not only add luster to the event but also offer you a precious chance to experience the unique charm of Guangdong.I'm eagerly looking forward to your favorable reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：Initially，we will pay a visit to a local museum，where a wealth of historical artifacts and cultural relics await our exploration，enabling us to gain deep insights into Guangdong's long﹣standing history.
译文：首先，我们将参观当地的一家博物馆，那里有丰富的历史文物和文物等待我们探索，使我们能够深入了解广东悠久的历史。
分析：这句话使用了where引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：To round off the day，we'll relish a sumptuous feast of authentic Cantonese cuisine，with dim sum taking the spotlight.
译文：为了结束这一天，我们将品尝一顿丰盛的正宗粤菜盛宴，点心将成为焦点。
分析：这句话使用了with复合结构。
【解答】Dear Amy，
I am Li Hua，brimming with excitement as I extend a warm﹣hearted invitation to you for our school﹣organized event， "Discover Guangdong"，which is scheduled to commence at 9：00 a.m.on June 15th.（活动时间）
This event is bound to be a cultural extravaganza.Initially，we will pay a visit to a local museum，where a wealth of historical artifacts and cultural relics await our exploration，enabling us to gain deep insights into Guangdong's long﹣standing history.【高分句型一】Subsequently，a handicraft workshop will provide you with an opportunity to immerse yourself in traditional Cantonese handicrafts，such as the delicate art of paper﹣cutting or the exquisite porcelain painting.To round off the day，we'll relish a sumptuous feast of authentic Cantonese cuisine，with dim sum taking the spotlight.【高分句型二】（活动内容）
Your presence would not only add luster to the event but also offer you a precious chance to experience the unique charm of Guangdong.I'm eagerly looking forward to your favorable reply.（盼望）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
5．（2024秋 吕梁期末）假定你是校学生会主席李华，你校学生会计划邀请人工智能专家Smith教授就人工智能（AI）话题做一个报告。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）发出邀请；
（2）同学们关于人工智能所感兴趣的问题；
（3）期待到来并表示感谢。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80词左右；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Smith，
_______
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Smith，
I'm Li Hua，chairman of the Students' Union of our school.I'm writing to invite you to give us a talk on AI.
AI has been a hot topic these years.What we are really concerned about is as follows.First of all，we are interested in how AI will affect and change our lives.Then，we are wondering whether robots will replace humans in the future.Finally，as younger generations，we are eager to figure out what we should do to face the coming challenges.
We would highly appreciate it if you could give us an earliest reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：What we are really concerned about is as follows.
译文：我们真正关心的是以下几点。
分析：这句话使用了what引导的主语从句。
高分句型二：Then，we are wondering whether robots will replace humans in the future.
译文：然后，我们想知道机器人是否会在未来取代人类。
分析：这句话使用了whether引导的宾语从句。
【解答】Dear Smith，
I'm Li Hua，chairman of the Students' Union of our school.I'm writing to invite you to give us a talk on AI.（发出邀请）
AI has been a hot topic these years.What we are really concerned about is as follows.【高分句型一】First of all，we are interested in how AI will affect and change our lives.Then，we are wondering whether robots will replace humans in the future.【高分句型二】Finally，as younger generations，we are eager to figure out what we should do to face the coming challenges.（同学们关于人工智能所感兴趣的问题）
We would highly appreciate it if you could give us an earliest reply.（期待到来并表示感谢）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
6．（2024秋 唐山期末）假定你是李华。为了体验生活，你参加了社区举办的"最美劳动者"摄影大赛。请给你的英国笔友John写封邮件，分享此次经历。
内容包括：
（1）参赛作品介绍；
（2）参加活动感受。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好；
（3）请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear John，
How are you？Recently，I participated in a photography competition organized by my community，called "The Most Beautiful Workers".________
I'd love to hear your thoughts on this topic.Looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear John，
How are you？Recently，I participated in a photography competition organized by my community，called "The Most Beautiful Workers".
My photo was about a street cleaner.It showed him sweeping the streets early in the morning.The sun was coming up，and the light made everything look warm.The cleaner was very focused on his work，cleaning every part of the street.You could see the dirt and leaves he had swept up beside him.
Taking part in this activity made me deeply appreciate the hard work of all laborers.I realized how much they contribute to our daily lives.It was a meaningful experience that inspired me to see beauty in everyday work.
I'd love to hear your thoughts on this topic.Looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：The cleaner was very focused on his work，cleaning every part of the street.
译文：清洁工非常专注于他的工作，打扫街道的每一个地方。
分析：这句话使用了现在分词短语cleaning every part of the street作状语。
高分句型二：It was a meaningful experience that inspired me to see beauty in everyday work.
译文：这是一次有意义的经历，激励我在日常工作中看到美。
分析：这句话使用了that引导的限制性定语从句。
【解答】Dear John，
How are you？Recently，I participated in a photography competition organized by my community，called "The Most Beautiful Workers".（话题）
My photo was about a street cleaner.It showed him sweeping the streets early in the morning.The sun was coming up，and the light made everything look warm.The cleaner was very focused on his work，cleaning every part of the street.【高分句型一】You could see the dirt and leaves he had swept up beside him.（参赛作品介绍）
Taking part in this activity made me deeply appreciate the hard work of all laborers.I realized how much they contribute to our daily lives.It was a meaningful experience that inspired me to see beauty in everyday work.【高分句型二】（参加活动感受）
I'd love to hear your thoughts on this topic.Looking forward to your reply.（盼望）
Best wishes，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
7．（2024秋 潮州期末）假定你是李华，你的外国笔友Tom对中国的名言警句很感兴趣。他写信向你请教"有志者，事竟成"的含义。请结合个人经历给他回信，谈谈你对此警句的理解。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答卷的相应位置作答。
Dear Tom，
______
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Tom，
Glad to hear that you're interested in Chinese old sayings and want to learn about"Where there is a will，there is a way"，I am writing to share my opinion on it.
There was a time when I was faced with a host of difficulties.I was nearly at the edge of giving up when a good friend of mine told me this famous saying.After that，I began to look at things differently，convinced that I could manage to tackle every problem as long as I stuck to my goal.Now，with a never﹣give﹣up mindset，I am brave enough to deal with all the difficulties I encounter.
All in all，only when we insist on what we want to do can we eventually overcome whatever challenges in our life.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：There was a time when I was faced with a host of difficulties.
翻译：曾经有一段时间，我面临着许多困难。
分析：运用了when引导的限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：I was nearly at the edge of giving up when a good friend of mine told me this famous saying.
翻译：当我的一个好朋友告诉我这句名言时，我几乎要放弃了。
分析：运用了when引导的时间状语从句。
【解答】Dear Tom，
Glad to hear that you're interested in Chinese old sayings and want to learn about"Where there is a will，there is a way"，I am writing to share my opinion on it.（写信目的）
There was a time when I was faced with a host of difficulties.【高分句型一】I was nearly at the edge of giving up when a good friend of mine told me this famous saying.【高分句型二】After that，I began to look at things differently，convinced that I could manage to tackle every problem as long as I stuck to my goal.Now，with a never﹣give﹣up mindset，I am brave enough to deal with all the difficulties I encounter.（自己的经历）
All in all，only when we insist on what we want to do can we eventually overcome whatever challenges in our life.（理解）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
8．（2025 湖北模拟） 假定你是李华，准备暑假到英国旅行一周。请给来自英国并有10年导游经验的外教Kevin写一封邮件，咨询相关情况，内容包括：
（1）值得游玩的景点；
（2）旅行中的注意事项。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Kevin，
I'm Li Hua from Class 2.
______
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Kevin，
I'm Li Hua from Class 2.I am writing to seek your expert advice on my one﹣week trip to the UK this summer，given your decade﹣long experience as a tour guide.
Firstly，I would like to know about some must﹣visit attractions in the UK.I'm particularly interested in historical landmarks，cultural sites，and stunning natural scenery.It would be wonderful if you could suggest some places that are less crowded but still offer a unique experience.
Secondly，I would appreciate any tips or advice you have for traveling in the UK.This could include information on transportation options，local customs，places to try traditional cuisines，and any safety precautions to keep in mind while exploring.
I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给有10年导游经验的外教Kevin写一封邮件，咨询相关暑假到英国旅行一周的情况。
高分句型一：It would be wonderful if you could suggest some places that are less crowded but still offer a unique experience.
翻译：如果你能建议一些不那么拥挤但仍能提供独特体验的地方，那就太好了。
分析：运用了that引导的限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：This could include information on transportation options，local customs，places to try traditional cuisines，and any safety precautions to keep in mind while exploring.
翻译：这可能包括交通选择、当地习俗、尝试传统美食的地方，以及在探索时要记住的任何安全预防措施。
分析：运用了不定式短语作定语以及while引导的时间状语从句中的省略结构。
【解答】Dear Kevin，
I'm Li Hua from Class 2.I am writing to seek your expert advice on my one﹣week trip to the UK this summer，given your decade﹣long experience as a tour guide.
Firstly，I would like to know about some must﹣visit attractions in the UK.I'm particularly interested in historical landmarks，cultural sites，and stunning natural scenery.It would be wonderful if you could suggest some places that are less crowded but still offer a unique experience.【高分句型一】（值得游玩的景点）
Secondly，I would appreciate any tips or advice you have for traveling in the UK.This could include information on transportation options，local customs，places to try traditional cuisines，and any safety precautions to keep in mind while exploring.【高分句型二】（旅行中的注意事项）
I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
9．（2025 海陵区校级一模）假定你是李华，你的朋友Mark将在元旦期间来你家做客，特发邮件询问你的假期的一些活动安排，请你回复一封邮件。
内容包括：（1）欢迎来访；
（2）你的元旦假期活动安排。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
________
【答案】Dear Mark，
I am absolutely thrilled to hear that you're coming to visit me during the New Year's Day!A warm welcome awaits you.
On the first day，we'll head to the local folk custom village，which is filled with various traditional handicrafts and performances.There，you can try making some delicate crafts yourself.Subsequently，having a hearty meal at a farmhouse is a must.It is on the second day that we plan to go to the city library，where we can immerse ourselves in the ocean of knowledge.
I'm certain we'll have an amazing time.Looking forward to your arrival!
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给朋友Mark回复一封邮件，告知他假期来家做客时的一些活动安排。
高分句型一：On the first day，we'll head to the local folk custom village，which is filled with various traditional handicrafts and performances.
翻译：第一天，我们将前往当地的民俗村，那里充满了各种传统手工艺品和表演。
分析：运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：It is on the second day that we plan to go to the city library，where we can immerse ourselves in the ocean of knowledge.
翻译：第二天我们计划去市图书馆，在那里我们可以沉浸在知识的海洋中。
分析：运用了强调句型"it+be+被强调部分+that+其它"结构以及where引导的非限制性定语从句。
【解答】Dear Mark，
I am absolutely thrilled to hear that you're coming to visit me during the New Year's Day!A warm welcome awaits you.（欢迎来访）
On the first day，we'll head to the local folk custom village，which is filled with various traditional handicrafts and performances.【高分句型一】There，you can try making some delicate crafts yourself.Subsequently，having a hearty meal at a farmhouse is a must.It is on the second day that we plan to go to the city library，where we can immerse ourselves in the ocean of knowledge.【高分句型二】（元旦假期活动安排。）
I'm certain we'll have an amazing time.Looking forward to your arrival!（盼望来访）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
10．（2024秋 淄博期末） 假定你是李华，你们学校上周举办了校园英语节，请你给英国好友Paul写一封邮件分享此次活动，内容包括：
（1）活动内容；
（2）你的感想。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Paul，
______
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Paul，
I'm writing to share an the English Festival hosted in our school last week.All my classmates were actively engaged in various activities，ranging from crosswords to English dramas.I had the opportunity to participate in an English speech contest，which was both challenging and rewarding.Additionally，the talk show was popular among the students.
The festival was an unforgettable experience.Not only did it boost my confidence in speaking English，but it also helped me connect with others who share similar interests.Overall，it was a great opportunity to learn and grow.
Do you have such similar events？Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：All my classmates were actively engaged in various activities，ranging from crosswords to English dramas.
翻译：我所有的同学都积极参与各种活动，从填字游戏到英语戏剧。
分析：本句运用了现在分词短语ranging from crosswords to English dramas作状语。
高分句型二：Not only did it boost my confidence in speaking English，but it also helped me connect with others who share similar interests.
翻译：它不仅增强了我说英语的信心，还帮助我与有相似兴趣的人建立了联系。
分析：本句运用了not only置于句首的部分倒装结构及who引导的定语从句。
【解答】Dear Paul，
I'm writing to share an the English Festival hosted in our school last week.All my classmates were actively engaged in various activities，ranging from crosswords to English dramas.【高分句型一】（活动内容）I had the opportunity to participate in an English speech contest，which was both challenging and rewarding.Additionally，the talk show was popular among the students.
The festival was an unforgettable experience.Not only did it boost my confidence in speaking English，but it also helped me connect with others who share similar interests.【高分句型二】Overall，it was a great opportunity to learn and grow.（个人感想）
Do you have such similar events？Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
11．（2024秋 武汉期末）假设你是李华，即将赴英国St Andrew's College交换学习一年。得知宿舍有限，需竞争获得，请你提交一份申请。内容包括：
（1）申请理由；
（2）你的优势。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Accommodation Office，
I'm Li Hua，________
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Accommodation Office，
I am Li Hua，an exchange student to join St Andrew's College for a year.I am writing to apply for on﹣campus accommodation.
Living on campus will allow me to fully immerse in the college's academic and social life，improving my study experience.I believe my enthusiasm for group activities and ability to adapt quickly to new environment make me a suitable candidate for on﹣campus living.I am eager to integrate into the new environment and contribute positively to our campus.
I would appreciate it if you could consider my application.I am excited about the prospect of becoming a student here and eager to hear about the accommodation options available to me.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：Living on campus will allow me to fully immerse in the college's academic and social life，improving my study experience.
翻译：住在校园里将使我能够完全沉浸在大学的学术和社交生活中，提升我的学习体验。
分析：Living on campus 动名词短语做主语，improving my study experience现在分词短语作状语。
高分句型二：I believe my enthusiasm for group activities and ability to adapt quickly to new environment make me a suitable candidate for on﹣campus living.
翻译：我认为我对团体活动的热情以及快速适应新环境的能力使我成为适合住校的候选人。
分析：my enthusiasm for group activities and ability to adapt quickly to new environment make me a suitable candidate for on﹣campus living是省略that的宾语从句。
【解答】Dear Accommodation Office，
I am Li Hua，an exchange student to join St Andrew's College for a year.I am writing to apply for on﹣campus accommodation.
Living on campus will allow me to fully immerse in the college's academic and social life，improving my study experience.【高分句型一】（申请理由）I believe my enthusiasm for group activities and ability to adapt quickly to new environment make me a suitable candidate for on﹣campus living.【高分句型二】I am eager to integrate into the new environment and contribute positively to our campus.（优势）
I would appreciate it if you could consider my application.I am excited about the prospect of becoming a student here and eager to hear about the accommodation options available to me.
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
12．（2024秋 江西期末）明天的英语课轮到你作主题发言，请你以"中国神舟19号飞船（Shenzhou﹣19 spacecraft）发射成功"为主题写一篇发言稿，内容包括：
（1）发射时间：2024年10月30日4时27分；
（2）你的感想。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（1）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Good morning，everyone，
I'm excited to share with you the successful launch of China's Shenzhou﹣19 spacecraft.________
Thank you!
【答案】Good morning，everyone，
I'm excited to share with you the successful launch of China's Shenzhou﹣19 spacecraft.It took place on October 30，2024，at 4：27 AM.This achievement marks another significant milestone in China's space exploration efforts.I feel immense pride knowing that our scientists and engineers have worked tirelessly to make this possible.The launch symbolizes our nation's commitment to advancing technology and exploring the unknown.I believe that Shenzhou﹣19 will pave the way for future missions，inspiring young people to dream big and pursue careers in science and space.
Thank you!
【分析】高分句型一：I feel immense pride knowing that our scientists and engineers have worked tirelessly to make this possible.
翻译：得知我们的科学家和工程师为实现这一目标而不懈努力，我感到无比自豪。
分析：本句运用了现在分词短语knowing that our scientists and engineers have worked tirelessly to make this possible作状语及that引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二：I believe that Shenzhou﹣19 will pave the way for future missions，inspiring young people to dream big and pursue careers in science and space.
翻译：我相信神舟十九号将为未来的任务铺平道路，激励年轻人有远大的梦想，追求科学和太空事业。
分析：本句运用了that引导的宾语从句及现在分词短语inspiring young people to dream big and pursue careers in science and space作状语。
【解答】Good morning，everyone，
I'm excited to share with you the successful launch of China's Shenzhou﹣19 spacecraft.（主题）It took place on October 30，2024，at 4：27 AM.（发射时间）This achievement marks another significant milestone in China's space exploration efforts.I feel immense pride knowing that our scientists and engineers have worked tirelessly to make this possible.【高分句型一】The launch symbolizes our nation's commitment to advancing technology and exploring the unknown.I believe that Shenzhou﹣19 will pave the way for future missions，inspiring young people to dream big and pursue careers in science and space.（个人感想）【高分句型二】Thank you!
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
13．（2024秋 辽宁期末）假定你是学生会主席李华，你校将举办手工制作（Hands﹣on craft making）比赛。请你给擅长制作的外教Miss Jones写一封邮件，邀请她担任评委，内容包括：
（1）比赛信息；
（2）评判内容；
（3）表达期望。
要求：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Miss Jones，
________
Best regards，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Miss Jones，
I hope this email finds you well.I'm Li Hua，the President of the Student Union.We are organizing a "Hands﹣on Craft Making" competition at our school.Because we know you're expert in hands﹣on craft，we'd like to invite you to join us as a judge.
The event will take place on January 20th in the school auditorium from 2 pm to 5 pm.Participants will showcase their creativity through various craft projects.As a judge，you'll assess the originality，technical skills，and thematic relevance of each entry.
I would appreciate it if you would accept our invitation.
Best regards，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：Because we know you're expert in hands﹣on craft，we'd like to invite you to join us as a judge.
译文：因为我们知道你是动手制作的专家，我们想邀请你加入我们担任评委。
分析：这句话使用了because引导的原因状语从句。
高分句型二：I would appreciate it if you would accept our invitation.
译文：如果你能接受我们的邀请，我将不胜感激。
分析：这句话使用了appreciate it if...意为"如果......很感激"。
【解答】Dear Miss Jones，
I hope this email finds you well.I'm Li Hua，the President of the Student Union.We are organizing a "Hands﹣on Craft Making" competition at our school.Because we know you're expert in hands﹣on craft，we'd like to invite you to join us as a judge.【高分句型一】（发出邀请）
The event will take place on January 20th in the school auditorium from 2 pm to 5 pm.Participants will showcase their creativity through various craft projects.（比赛信息）As a judge，you'll assess the originality，technical skills，and thematic relevance of each entry.（评判内容）
I would appreciate it if you would accept our invitation.【高分句型二】（表达期望）
Best regards，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
14．（2025 江西一模）假定你是李华，得知你的好友Jack成功入选校足球队。请写封邮件向他表示祝贺，内容包括：
（1）肯定他的付出；
（2）提议庆祝活动。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jack，
________
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jack，
I'm writing to offer my warmest congratulations on your successful selection into the school football team!Your hard work and dedication have truly paid off.I've witnessed your countless hours of practice and unwavering determination，which have now led to this well﹣deserved achievement.
To celebrate this wonderful occasion，I am thinking that we can have a small gathering at my place this weekend.If the weather permits，we can even have a barbecue in the backyard.We'll invite some mutual friends，and I'm sure it'll be a night filled with laughter and joy as we share in your success.
Once again，congratulations!I'm really proud of you.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求学生以李华的身份，给成功入选校足球队的好友Jack写封邮件，向他表示祝贺，需首先肯定他的付出，再提议为他举办庆祝活动。
高分句型一：I've witnessed your countless hours of practice and unwavering determination，which have now led to this well﹣deserved achievement.
翻译：我见证了你无数个小时的练习和坚定不移的决心，这些都让你获得了当之无愧的成就。
分析：运用了which引导非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：To celebrate this wonderful occasion，I am thinking that we can have a small gathering at my place this weekend.
翻译：为了庆祝这个美好的时刻，我想这个周末我们可以在我家举行一个小型聚会。
分析：运用了不定式To celebrate this wonderful occasion作状语、that引导宾语从句。
【解答】Dear Jack，
I'm writing to offer my warmest congratulations on your successful selection into the school football team!Your hard work and dedication have truly paid off.I've witnessed your countless hours of practice and unwavering determination，which have now led to this well﹣deserved achievement.【高分句型一】（肯定他的付出）
To celebrate this wonderful occasion，I am thinking that we can have a small gathering at my place this weekend.【高分句型二】If the weather permits，we can even have a barbecue in the backyard.We'll invite some mutual friends，and I'm sure it'll be a night filled with laughter and joy as we share in your success.（提议庆祝活动）
Once again，congratulations!I'm really proud of you.
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
15．（2024秋 益阳期末）假如你是李华，为推广和平与友爱的理念，你校将举办一场名为"Music For Peace"的音乐节活动。请你在学校英文社团网站上发布一篇博文进行宣传。内容包括：
（1）活动宗旨；
（2）活动安排；
（3）你的期待。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Join Us In"Music For Peace"!
________
【答案】
Join Us In "Music For Peace"!
Our school is organizing a remarkable activity called "Music For Peace"，aimed at promoting the values of peace and friendship among us all.The essence is to bring our community together through the universal language of music，fostering a spirit of friendship and harmony.
The activity will be held in our school's hall from 2 pm to 6 pm on 12th February，which will feature a variety of performances，including solo singers，bands，and orchestras，all coming together to create a symphony of peace.There will also be interactive workshops where you can learn about different musical cultures and their contributions to peace.
As a volunteer，I sincerely hope each and every one of you will be a part of this joyous activity.Your participation will contribute to a memorable experience that expresses our collective desire for a peaceful world.
【分析】高分句型一：The essence is to bring our community together through the universal language of music，fostering a spirit of friendship and harmony.
译文：其本质是通过音乐的通用语言将我们的社区聚集在一起，培养友谊与和谐的精神。
分析：这句话使用了现在分词短语fostering a spirit of friendship and harmony作状语。
高分句型二：There will also be interactive workshops where you can learn about different musical cultures and their contributions to peace.
译文：还将举办互动研讨会，您可以在那里了解不同的音乐文化及其对和平的贡献。
分析：这句话使用了where引导的限制性定语从句。
【解答】
Join Us In "Music For Peace"!
Our school is organizing a remarkable activity called "Music For Peace"，aimed at promoting the values of peace and friendship among us all.The essence is to bring our community together through the universal language of music，fostering a spirit of friendship and harmony.【高分句型一】（活动宗旨）
The activity will be held in our school's hall from 2 pm to 6 pm on 12th February，which will feature a variety of performances，including solo singers，bands，and orchestras，all coming together to create a symphony of peace.There will also be interactive workshops where you can learn about different musical cultures and their contributions to peace.【高分句型二】（活动安排）
As a volunteer，I sincerely hope each and every one of you will be a part of this joyous activity.Your participation will contribute to a memorable experience that expresses our collective desire for a peaceful world.（期望）
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
16．（2024秋 保山期末） 假定你是李华，最近参加了一次虚拟合唱团（virtual choir）活动。你的英国好友Richard得知此事后很感兴趣，向你了解相关情况，请给他回一封邮件。内容包括：
（1）活动介绍（时间、地点、内容和方式）；
（2）你的感受。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Richard，
I hope this email finds you well.
______
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Richard，
I hope this email finds you well.Knowing that you are interested in the virtual choir event I participated in，I'd like to share some details with you.
Organized by a local choir association，the event took place at 7 p.m.last Saturday online and more than 50 people attended it.During one and a half hours，following the conductor's cues on screen，we sang two classic songs and one original piece composed by one member.
I had a wonderful time.Although we were not physically together，it's amazing to hear how our voices blended together.This event brought me joy and helped me forget about the stress of daily life.
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：During one and a half hours，following the conductor's cues on screen，we sang two classic songs and one original piece composed by one member.
译文：在一个半小时的时间里，我们按照屏幕上指挥的提示，演唱了两首经典歌曲和一首由一名成员创作的原创作品。
分析：这句话使用了现在分词短语following the conductor's cues on screen作状语，过去分词短语composed by one member作定语。
高分句型二：Although we were not physically together，it's amazing to hear how our voices blended together.
译文：虽然我们没有在一起，但听到我们的声音是如何融合在一起的，真是太棒了。
分析：这句话使用了although引导的让步状语从句，how引导的宾语从句。
【解答】Dear Richard，
I hope this email finds you well.Knowing that you are interested in the virtual choir event I participated in，I'd like to share some details with you.（写信目的）
Organized by a local choir association，the event took place at 7 p.m.last Saturday online and more than 50 people attended it.During one and a half hours，following the conductor's cues on screen，we sang two classic songs and one original piece composed by one member.【高分句型一】（活动介绍）
I had a wonderful time.Although we were not physically together，it's amazing to hear how our voices blended together.【高分句型二】This event brought me joy and helped me forget about the stress of daily life.（感受）
Best wishes!（希望）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
17．（2024秋 长寿区期末） 你是李华，你校将举办一场国际文化交流节。请你用英语写一则通知，向全校学生介绍此次活动的相关信息并邀请他们参加。内容包括：
（1）活动目的：促进不同文化间的理解与交流；
（2）活动时间：下周六9：00﹣17：00；
（3）活动地点：学校操场及教学楼一楼大厅；
（4）活动内容：文化展览、文化表演、文化讲座。
注意：
（1）词数100左右；
（2）参考词汇：文化交流节Cultural Exchange Festival促进enhance
【答案】
Notice
Dear fellow students，
Our school will host an International Cultural Exchange Festival，whose aim is to enhance understanding and exchange among different cultures.
It will be held from 9 a.m.to 5 p.m.next Saturday.The location is the school playground and the first﹣floor hall of the teaching building.There will be all kinds of activities.A cultural exhibition will show the traditional clothes，foods and handicrafts from different countries.Cultural performances like dances，music and plays will also be on display.And foreign teachers will give cultural lectures about different countries' customs.
I sincerely hope that you can come and join us.It will be a great chance to experience our school culture.
The School Students' Union
【分析】高分句型一：Our school will host an International Cultural Exchange Festival，whose aim is to enhance understanding and exchange among different cultures.
译文：我们学校将举办一个国际文化交流节，其目的是增进不同文化之间的理解和交流。
分析：这句话使用了whose引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：I sincerely hope that you can come and join us.
译文：我真诚地希望你能来加入我们。
分析：这句话使用了that引导的宾语从句。
【解答】
Notice
Dear fellow students，
Our school will host an International Cultural Exchange Festival，whose aim is to enhance understanding and exchange among different cultures.【高分句型一】（活动目的：促进不同文化间的理解与交流）
It will be held from 9 a.m.to 5 p.m.next Saturday.（活动时间：下周六9：00﹣17：00）The location is the school playground and the first﹣floor hall of the teaching building.（活动地点：学校操场及教学楼一楼大厅）There will be all kinds of activities.A cultural exhibition will show the traditional clothes，foods and handicrafts from different countries.Cultural performances like dances，music and plays will also be on display.And foreign teachers will give cultural lectures about different countries' customs.（活动内容：文化展览、文化表演、文化讲座）
I sincerely hope that you can come and join us.【高分句型二】It will be a great chance to experience our school culture.（希望）
The School Students' Union
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
18．（2024秋 广东期末）你班外教Peter课堂上让你们讨论"最有效的学习方法"。请你写一篇发言稿，内容包括：
（1）方法介绍；
（2）你的评价。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter and classmates，
________
Thank you!
【答案】Dear Peter and classmates，
I think taking notes is the most effective learning method.While listening in class，we write down key points，important formulas and explanations.It helps us focus and review later.It enables us to have a clear record of what we' ve learned and easily review the details again.
I feel this method is like building a knowledge ware﹣house.It stores what we learn and makes it convenient for us to refer back to.It has greatly improved my learning efficiency and understanding of knowledge.It gives me a sense of accomplishment and confidence in my study.
Thank you!
【分析】高分句型一：While listening in class，we write down key points，important formulas and explanations.
译文：在课堂上听的时候，我们写下关键点、重要公式和解释。
分析：这句话使用了while引导的时间状语从句的省略句。
高分句型二：It enables us to have a clear record of what we've learned and easily review the details again.
译文：它使我们能够清楚地记录我们所学到的知识，并轻松地再次复习细节。
分析：这句话使用了what引导的宾语从句。
【解答】Dear Peter and classmates，
I think taking notes is the most effective learning method.While listening in class，we write down key points，important formulas and explanations.【高分句型一】It helps us focus and review later.It enables us to have a clear record of what we've learned and easily review the details again.【高分句型二】（方法介绍）
I feel this method is like building a knowledge ware﹣house.It stores what we learn and makes it convenient for us to refer back to.It has greatly improved my learning efficiency and understanding of knowledge.It gives me a sense of accomplishment and confidence in my study.（评价）
Thank you!（感谢）
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
19．（2025 潍坊模拟）假设你是李华，你的英国好友Jim准备参加中国文化网举办的"Sharing China"春节文化影像展全球作品征集活动，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
（1）拍摄内容建议；
（2）简要说明理由。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jim，
_______
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim，
I'm thrilled to hear that you're going to enter the Spring Festival Image Exhibition.I would like to give some advice.
It's a good idea to take pictures of dragon and lion dances in Chinatown.These dances，performed to drive away evil spirits and welcome in prosperous times，offer a glimpse into the festive atmosphere of Spring Festival.Alternatively，you can consider capturing a scene of family members making jiaozi together.Nothing is better at displaying the essence of Spring Festival — family reunions.I'm confident that these pictures will showcase how well Chinese culture has been embraced and spread overseas.
Hope you can get some inspiration!Feel free to ask me if you need further help.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：I'm confident that these pictures will showcase how well Chinese culture has been embraced and spread overseas.
翻译：我相信这些照片将展示中国文化在海外被接受和传播的程度。
分析：本句运用了that引导的宾语从句和how引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二：Feel free to ask me if you need further help.
翻译：如果你需要进一步的帮助，尽管问我。
分析：本句运用了if引导的条件状语从句。
【解答】Dear Jim，
I'm thrilled to hear that you're going to enter the Spring Festival Image Exhibition.I would like to give some advice.（开篇点题）
It's a good idea to take pictures of dragon and lion dances in Chinatown.These dances，performed to drive away evil spirits and welcome in prosperous times，offer a glimpse into the festive atmosphere of Spring Festival.Alternatively，you can consider capturing a scene of family members making jiaozi together.Nothing is better at displaying the essence of Spring Festival — family reunions.I'm confident that these pictures will showcase how well Chinese culture has been embraced and spread overseas.【高分句型一】（拍摄内容建议以及理由）
Hope you can get some inspiration!Feel free to ask me if you need further help.【高分句型二】（表达希望并且愿意提供帮助）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇。
20．（2025 福州模拟）假设你是李华，上周你参加了学校举办的科技作品展示活动。请你给英国朋友John.写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括：
（1）你的作品；
（2）你的感想。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear John，
I'd like to share with you an exhibition of sci﹣tech works I took part in last week.________
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear John，
I'd like to share with you an exhibition of sci﹣tech works I took part in last week.
My project was an intelligent robot that could recognize voice commands and help with daily tasks.It was a thrilling experience to see my creation among so many innovative works.I felt incredibly proud of what I had achieved，and it inspired me to delve deeper into the world of technology.The event was a great platform for learning and exchange，broadening my horizons and igniting my passion for sci﹣tech.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：My project was an intelligent robot that could recognize voice commands and help with daily tasks.
翻译：我的项目是一个智能机器人，可以识别语音命令并帮助完成日常任务。
分析：本句使用了that引导的限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：I felt incredibly proud of what I had achieved，and it inspired me to delve deeper into the world of technology.
翻译：我为自己所取得的成就感到无比自豪，这激励我更深入地探索技术世界。
分析：本句使用了what引导的宾语从句。
【解答】Dear John，
I'd like to share with you an exhibition of sci﹣tech works I took part in last week.
My project was an intelligent robot that could recognize voice commands and help with daily tasks.【高分句型一】It was a thrilling experience to see my creation among so many innovative works.（自己的作品）I felt incredibly proud of what I had achieved，and it inspired me to delve deeper into the world of technology.【高分句型二】The event was a great platform for learning and exchange，broadening my horizons and igniting my passion for sci﹣tech.（感想）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
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一．书面表达（共20小题）
1．（2024秋 运城期末） 假定你是李华，你的美国好友Chris正在学习中国传统文化，发邮件向你请教"福"（Fu）字的相关知识。请给他回封邮件，内容包括：
（1）"福"字的含义；
（2）"福"字的使用场合。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Dear Chris，
Glad to know that you want to learn more about traditional Chinese culture，
______
Yours，
Li Hua
2．（2025 云浮模拟） 假定你是李华，外教Ryan打算使用AI技术辅助英语作文批改，并向同学们征询意见。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）你的看法；
（2）你的建议。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan，
I hope this email finds you well.
______
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
3．（2025 张家界模拟） 你们学校英语俱乐部打算进行以"My Favourite Book"为题的分享交流活动，请你根据以下要求写一篇发言稿，内容包括：
（1）介绍这本书；
（2）分享这本书的理由。
注意：
（1）词数100左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear fellow students，
I feel honored to share with you my favourite book called ______
4．（2025 河源模拟）假定你是李华。为深入了解广府文化，你校决定开展"走进广东"主题活动，请写一封邮件邀请交换生Amy参加此次活动。要点如下：
（1）活动时间；
（2）活动内容。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Amy，
________
Yours，
Li Hua
5．（2024秋 吕梁期末）假定你是校学生会主席李华，你校学生会计划邀请人工智能专家Smith教授就人工智能（AI）话题做一个报告。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）发出邀请；
（2）同学们关于人工智能所感兴趣的问题；
（3）期待到来并表示感谢。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80词左右；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Smith，
_______
Yours，
Li Hua
6．（2024秋 唐山期末）假定你是李华。为了体验生活，你参加了社区举办的"最美劳动者"摄影大赛。请给你的英国笔友John写封邮件，分享此次经历。
内容包括：
（1）参赛作品介绍；
（2）参加活动感受。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好；
（3）请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear John，
How are you？Recently，I participated in a photography competition organized by my community，called "The Most Beautiful Workers".________
I'd love to hear your thoughts on this topic.Looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes，
Li Hua
7．（2024秋 潮州期末）假定你是李华，你的外国笔友Tom对中国的名言警句很感兴趣。他写信向你请教"有志者，事竟成"的含义。请结合个人经历给他回信，谈谈你对此警句的理解。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答卷的相应位置作答。
Dear Tom，
______
Yours，
Li Hua
8．（2025 湖北模拟） 假定你是李华，准备暑假到英国旅行一周。请给来自英国并有10年导游经验的外教Kevin写一封邮件，咨询相关情况，内容包括：
（1）值得游玩的景点；
（2）旅行中的注意事项。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Kevin，
I'm Li Hua from Class 2.
______
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
9．（2025 海陵区校级一模）假定你是李华，你的朋友Mark将在元旦期间来你家做客，特发邮件询问你的假期的一些活动安排，请你回复一封邮件。
内容包括：（1）欢迎来访；
（2）你的元旦假期活动安排。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
________
10．（2024秋 淄博期末） 假定你是李华，你们学校上周举办了校园英语节，请你给英国好友Paul写一封邮件分享此次活动，内容包括：
（1）活动内容；
（2）你的感想。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Paul，
______
Yours，
Li Hua
11．（2024秋 武汉期末）假设你是李华，即将赴英国St Andrew's College交换学习一年。得知宿舍有限，需竞争获得，请你提交一份申请。内容包括：
（1）申请理由；
（2）你的优势。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Accommodation Office，
I'm Li Hua，________
Yours，
Li Hua
12．（2024秋 江西期末）明天的英语课轮到你作主题发言，请你以"中国神舟19号飞船（Shenzhou﹣19 spacecraft）发射成功"为主题写一篇发言稿，内容包括：
（1）发射时间：2024年10月30日4时27分；
（2）你的感想。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（1）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Good morning，everyone，
I'm excited to share with you the successful launch of China's Shenzhou﹣19 spacecraft.________
Thank you!
13．（2024秋 辽宁期末）假定你是学生会主席李华，你校将举办手工制作（Hands﹣on craft making）比赛。请你给擅长制作的外教Miss Jones写一封邮件，邀请她担任评委，内容包括：
（1）比赛信息；
（2）评判内容；
（3）表达期望。
要求：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Miss Jones，
________
Best regards，
Li Hua
14．（2025 江西一模）假定你是李华，得知你的好友Jack成功入选校足球队。请写封邮件向他表示祝贺，内容包括：
（1）肯定他的付出；
（2）提议庆祝活动。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jack，
________
Yours，
Li Hua
15．（2024秋 益阳期末）假如你是李华，为推广和平与友爱的理念，你校将举办一场名为"Music For Peace"的音乐节活动。请你在学校英文社团网站上发布一篇博文进行宣传。内容包括：
（1）活动宗旨；
（2）活动安排；
（3）你的期待。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Join Us In"Music For Peace"!
________
16．（2024秋 保山期末） 假定你是李华，最近参加了一次虚拟合唱团（virtual choir）活动。你的英国好友Richard得知此事后很感兴趣，向你了解相关情况，请给他回一封邮件。内容包括：
（1）活动介绍（时间、地点、内容和方式）；
（2）你的感受。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Richard，
I hope this email finds you well.
______
Yours，
Li Hua
17．（2024秋 长寿区期末） 你是李华，你校将举办一场国际文化交流节。请你用英语写一则通知，向全校学生介绍此次活动的相关信息并邀请他们参加。内容包括：
（1）活动目的：促进不同文化间的理解与交流；
（2）活动时间：下周六9：00﹣17：00；
（3）活动地点：学校操场及教学楼一楼大厅；
（4）活动内容：文化展览、文化表演、文化讲座。
注意：
（1）词数100左右；
（2）参考词汇：文化交流节Cultural Exchange Festival促进enhance
18．（2024秋 广东期末）你班外教Peter课堂上让你们讨论"最有效的学习方法"。请你写一篇发言稿，内容包括：
（1）方法介绍；
（2）你的评价。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter and classmates，
________
Thank you!
19．（2025 潍坊模拟）假设你是李华，你的英国好友Jim准备参加中国文化网举办的"Sharing China"春节文化影像展全球作品征集活动，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
（1）拍摄内容建议；
（2）简要说明理由。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jim，
_______
Yours，
Li Hua
20．（2025 福州模拟）假设你是李华，上周你参加了学校举办的科技作品展示活动。请你给英国朋友John.写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括：
（1）你的作品；
（2）你的感想。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear John，
I'd like to share with you an exhibition of sci﹣tech works I took part in last week.________
Yours，
Li Hua
2025年高考英语高频易错押题卷 应用文写作
参考答案与试题解析
一．书面表达（共20小题）
1．（2024秋 运城期末） 假定你是李华，你的美国好友Chris正在学习中国传统文化，发邮件向你请教"福"（Fu）字的相关知识。请给他回封邮件，内容包括：
（1）"福"字的含义；
（2）"福"字的使用场合。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Dear Chris，
Glad to know that you want to learn more about traditional Chinese culture，
______
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Chris，
Glad to know that you want to learn more about traditional Chinese culture，and I will introduce the Chinese character "Fu" to you.It is of great significance，which generally means good fortune，happiness，and prosperity.We usually paste the character "Fu" on the front door during the Spring Festival.It can also be seen in homes during special celebrations like weddings or on important festivals.This simple character carries our best wishes for a better life.I hope that this can help you understand the "Fu" character better.Wish you great progress and joy!
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：It is of great significance，which generally means good fortune，happiness，and prosperity.
翻译：它具有重大意义，通常意味着好运、幸福和繁荣。
分析：which引导非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：I hope that this can help you understand the "Fu" character better.
翻译：我希望这能帮助你更好的理解"福"字。
分析：that引导宾语从句。
【解答】Dear Chris，
Glad to know that you want to learn more about traditional Chinese culture，and I will introduce the Chinese character "Fu" to you.It is of great significance，which generally means good fortune，happiness，and prosperity.【高分句型一】（"福"字的含义） We usually paste the character "Fu" on the front door during the Spring Festival.It can also be seen in homes during special celebrations like weddings or on important festivals.This simple character carries our best wishes for a better life.（"福"字的使用场合） I hope that this can help you understand the "Fu" character better. 【高分句型二】Wish you great progress and joy!
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
2．（2025 云浮模拟） 假定你是李华，外教Ryan打算使用AI技术辅助英语作文批改，并向同学们征询意见。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）你的看法；
（2）你的建议。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan，
I hope this email finds you well.
______
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Ryan，
I hope this email finds you well.
Regarding your plan to use AI technology for English composition correction，I believe it's a truly innovative idea.AI can efficiently identify grammatical and spelling errors，freeing teachers to focus more on content and creativity.However，I suggest ensuring the AI's suggestions are not overly mechanical，as it's important to maintain the unique voice of each student.Additionally，periodic human reviews should be conducted to ensure accuracy and fairness.
Finally，I hope the AI can also provide feedback on writing style and structure.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：AI can efficiently identify grammatical and spelling errors，freeing teachers to focus more on content and creativity.
译文：人工智能可以有效地识别语法和拼写错误，使教师能够更专注于内容和创造力。
分析：这句话使用了现在分词短语freeing teachers to focus more on content and creativity作状语。
高分句型二：However，I suggest ensuring the AI's suggestions are not overly mechanical，as it's important to maintain the unique voice of each student.
译文：然而，我建议确保人工智能的建议不会过于机械，因为保持每个学生的独特声音很重要。
分析：这句话使用了as引导的原因状语从句。
【解答】Dear Ryan，
I hope this email finds you well.（问候）
Regarding your plan to use AI technology for English composition correction，I believe it's a truly innovative idea.AI can efficiently identify grammatical and spelling errors，freeing teachers to focus more on content and creativity.【高分句型一】（看法）However，I suggest ensuring the AI's suggestions are not overly mechanical，as it's important to maintain the unique voice of each student.【高分句型二】Additionally，periodic human reviews should be conducted to ensure accuracy and fairness.（建议）
Finally，I hope the AI can also provide feedback on writing style and structure.（希望）
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
3．（2025 张家界模拟） 你们学校英语俱乐部打算进行以"My Favourite Book"为题的分享交流活动，请你根据以下要求写一篇发言稿，内容包括：
（1）介绍这本书；
（2）分享这本书的理由。
注意：
（1）词数100左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear fellow students，
I feel honored to share with you my favourite book called ______
【答案】Dear fellow students，
I feel honored to share with you my favourite book called Gone with the wind written by Margaret Mitchell.Scarlett，the heroine，used to live a comfortable life in Twelve Oaks before the outbreak of the American Civil War.Although she experienced a lot of ups and downs，she never gave up hope and courage to carry on with what was left for her.
The last line of the book"After all，tomorrow is another day"has become my motto.No matter when I am short with my parents or feel upset，I reflect on myself，realizing how lucky I am compared with Scarlett.The gutty and gritty tone of the book attracts me in particular.It is Gone with the wind that teaches me gumption，which most of the youth lack today.
I do expect my sharing may inspire you and I am willing to hear your recommendation of the books you love
【分析】高分句型一：Although she experienced a lot of ups and downs，she never gave up hope and courage to carry on with what was left for her.
译文：尽管她经历了很多风风雨雨，但她从未放弃希望和勇气，继续做剩下的事情。
分析：这句话使用了although引导的让步状语从句，what引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二：It is Gone with the wind that teaches me gumption，which most of the youth lack today.
译文：是《乱世佳人》教会了我勇气，而这正是当今大多数年轻人所缺乏的。
分析：这句话使用了强调句It is+强调部分+that+其余部分，which引导的非限制性定语从句。
【解答】Dear fellow students，
I feel honored to share with you my favourite book called Gone with the wind written by Margaret Mitchell.Scarlett，the heroine，used to live a comfortable life in Twelve Oaks before the outbreak of the American Civil War.Although she experienced a lot of ups and downs，she never gave up hope and courage to carry on with what was left for her.【高分句型一】（介绍这本书）
The last line of the book"After all，tomorrow is another day"has become my motto.No matter when I am short with my parents or feel upset，I reflect on myself，realizing how lucky I am compared with Scarlett.The gutty and gritty tone of the book attracts me in particular.It is Gone with the wind that teaches me gumption，which most of the youth lack today.【高分句型二】（分享这本书的理由）
I do expect my sharing may inspire you and I am willing to hear your recommendation of the books you love.（希望）
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
4．（2025 河源模拟）假定你是李华。为深入了解广府文化，你校决定开展"走进广东"主题活动，请写一封邮件邀请交换生Amy参加此次活动。要点如下：
（1）活动时间；
（2）活动内容。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Amy，
________
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Amy，
I am Li Hua，brimming with excitement as I extend a warm﹣hearted invitation to you for our school﹣organized event， "Discover Guangdong"，which is scheduled to commence at 9：00 a.m.on June 15th.
This event is bound to be a cultural extravaganza.Initially，we will pay a visit to a local museum，where a wealth of historical artifacts and cultural relics await our exploration，enabling us to gain deep insights into Guangdong's long﹣standing history.Subsequently，a handicraft workshop will provide you with an opportunity to immerse yourself in traditional Cantonese handicrafts，such as the delicate art of paper﹣cutting or the exquisite porcelain painting.To round off the day，we'll relish a sumptuous feast of authentic Cantonese cuisine，with dim sum taking the spotlight.
Your presence would not only add luster to the event but also offer you a precious chance to experience the unique charm of Guangdong.I'm eagerly looking forward to your favorable reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：Initially，we will pay a visit to a local museum，where a wealth of historical artifacts and cultural relics await our exploration，enabling us to gain deep insights into Guangdong's long﹣standing history.
译文：首先，我们将参观当地的一家博物馆，那里有丰富的历史文物和文物等待我们探索，使我们能够深入了解广东悠久的历史。
分析：这句话使用了where引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：To round off the day，we'll relish a sumptuous feast of authentic Cantonese cuisine，with dim sum taking the spotlight.
译文：为了结束这一天，我们将品尝一顿丰盛的正宗粤菜盛宴，点心将成为焦点。
分析：这句话使用了with复合结构。
【解答】Dear Amy，
I am Li Hua，brimming with excitement as I extend a warm﹣hearted invitation to you for our school﹣organized event， "Discover Guangdong"，which is scheduled to commence at 9：00 a.m.on June 15th.（活动时间）
This event is bound to be a cultural extravaganza.Initially，we will pay a visit to a local museum，where a wealth of historical artifacts and cultural relics await our exploration，enabling us to gain deep insights into Guangdong's long﹣standing history.【高分句型一】Subsequently，a handicraft workshop will provide you with an opportunity to immerse yourself in traditional Cantonese handicrafts，such as the delicate art of paper﹣cutting or the exquisite porcelain painting.To round off the day，we'll relish a sumptuous feast of authentic Cantonese cuisine，with dim sum taking the spotlight.【高分句型二】（活动内容）
Your presence would not only add luster to the event but also offer you a precious chance to experience the unique charm of Guangdong.I'm eagerly looking forward to your favorable reply.（盼望）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
5．（2024秋 吕梁期末）假定你是校学生会主席李华，你校学生会计划邀请人工智能专家Smith教授就人工智能（AI）话题做一个报告。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）发出邀请；
（2）同学们关于人工智能所感兴趣的问题；
（3）期待到来并表示感谢。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80词左右；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Smith，
_______
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Smith，
I'm Li Hua，chairman of the Students' Union of our school.I'm writing to invite you to give us a talk on AI.
AI has been a hot topic these years.What we are really concerned about is as follows.First of all，we are interested in how AI will affect and change our lives.Then，we are wondering whether robots will replace humans in the future.Finally，as younger generations，we are eager to figure out what we should do to face the coming challenges.
We would highly appreciate it if you could give us an earliest reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：What we are really concerned about is as follows.
译文：我们真正关心的是以下几点。
分析：这句话使用了what引导的主语从句。
高分句型二：Then，we are wondering whether robots will replace humans in the future.
译文：然后，我们想知道机器人是否会在未来取代人类。
分析：这句话使用了whether引导的宾语从句。
【解答】Dear Smith，
I'm Li Hua，chairman of the Students' Union of our school.I'm writing to invite you to give us a talk on AI.（发出邀请）
AI has been a hot topic these years.What we are really concerned about is as follows.【高分句型一】First of all，we are interested in how AI will affect and change our lives.Then，we are wondering whether robots will replace humans in the future.【高分句型二】Finally，as younger generations，we are eager to figure out what we should do to face the coming challenges.（同学们关于人工智能所感兴趣的问题）
We would highly appreciate it if you could give us an earliest reply.（期待到来并表示感谢）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
6．（2024秋 唐山期末）假定你是李华。为了体验生活，你参加了社区举办的"最美劳动者"摄影大赛。请给你的英国笔友John写封邮件，分享此次经历。
内容包括：
（1）参赛作品介绍；
（2）参加活动感受。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好；
（3）请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear John，
How are you？Recently，I participated in a photography competition organized by my community，called "The Most Beautiful Workers".________
I'd love to hear your thoughts on this topic.Looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear John，
How are you？Recently，I participated in a photography competition organized by my community，called "The Most Beautiful Workers".
My photo was about a street cleaner.It showed him sweeping the streets early in the morning.The sun was coming up，and the light made everything look warm.The cleaner was very focused on his work，cleaning every part of the street.You could see the dirt and leaves he had swept up beside him.
Taking part in this activity made me deeply appreciate the hard work of all laborers.I realized how much they contribute to our daily lives.It was a meaningful experience that inspired me to see beauty in everyday work.
I'd love to hear your thoughts on this topic.Looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：The cleaner was very focused on his work，cleaning every part of the street.
译文：清洁工非常专注于他的工作，打扫街道的每一个地方。
分析：这句话使用了现在分词短语cleaning every part of the street作状语。
高分句型二：It was a meaningful experience that inspired me to see beauty in everyday work.
译文：这是一次有意义的经历，激励我在日常工作中看到美。
分析：这句话使用了that引导的限制性定语从句。
【解答】Dear John，
How are you？Recently，I participated in a photography competition organized by my community，called "The Most Beautiful Workers".（话题）
My photo was about a street cleaner.It showed him sweeping the streets early in the morning.The sun was coming up，and the light made everything look warm.The cleaner was very focused on his work，cleaning every part of the street.【高分句型一】You could see the dirt and leaves he had swept up beside him.（参赛作品介绍）
Taking part in this activity made me deeply appreciate the hard work of all laborers.I realized how much they contribute to our daily lives.It was a meaningful experience that inspired me to see beauty in everyday work.【高分句型二】（参加活动感受）
I'd love to hear your thoughts on this topic.Looking forward to your reply.（盼望）
Best wishes，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
7．（2024秋 潮州期末）假定你是李华，你的外国笔友Tom对中国的名言警句很感兴趣。他写信向你请教"有志者，事竟成"的含义。请结合个人经历给他回信，谈谈你对此警句的理解。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答卷的相应位置作答。
Dear Tom，
______
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Tom，
Glad to hear that you're interested in Chinese old sayings and want to learn about"Where there is a will，there is a way"，I am writing to share my opinion on it.
There was a time when I was faced with a host of difficulties.I was nearly at the edge of giving up when a good friend of mine told me this famous saying.After that，I began to look at things differently，convinced that I could manage to tackle every problem as long as I stuck to my goal.Now，with a never﹣give﹣up mindset，I am brave enough to deal with all the difficulties I encounter.
All in all，only when we insist on what we want to do can we eventually overcome whatever challenges in our life.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：There was a time when I was faced with a host of difficulties.
翻译：曾经有一段时间，我面临着许多困难。
分析：运用了when引导的限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：I was nearly at the edge of giving up when a good friend of mine told me this famous saying.
翻译：当我的一个好朋友告诉我这句名言时，我几乎要放弃了。
分析：运用了when引导的时间状语从句。
【解答】Dear Tom，
Glad to hear that you're interested in Chinese old sayings and want to learn about"Where there is a will，there is a way"，I am writing to share my opinion on it.（写信目的）
There was a time when I was faced with a host of difficulties.【高分句型一】I was nearly at the edge of giving up when a good friend of mine told me this famous saying.【高分句型二】After that，I began to look at things differently，convinced that I could manage to tackle every problem as long as I stuck to my goal.Now，with a never﹣give﹣up mindset，I am brave enough to deal with all the difficulties I encounter.（自己的经历）
All in all，only when we insist on what we want to do can we eventually overcome whatever challenges in our life.（理解）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
8．（2025 湖北模拟） 假定你是李华，准备暑假到英国旅行一周。请给来自英国并有10年导游经验的外教Kevin写一封邮件，咨询相关情况，内容包括：
（1）值得游玩的景点；
（2）旅行中的注意事项。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Kevin，
I'm Li Hua from Class 2.
______
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Kevin，
I'm Li Hua from Class 2.I am writing to seek your expert advice on my one﹣week trip to the UK this summer，given your decade﹣long experience as a tour guide.
Firstly，I would like to know about some must﹣visit attractions in the UK.I'm particularly interested in historical landmarks，cultural sites，and stunning natural scenery.It would be wonderful if you could suggest some places that are less crowded but still offer a unique experience.
Secondly，I would appreciate any tips or advice you have for traveling in the UK.This could include information on transportation options，local customs，places to try traditional cuisines，and any safety precautions to keep in mind while exploring.
I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给有10年导游经验的外教Kevin写一封邮件，咨询相关暑假到英国旅行一周的情况。
高分句型一：It would be wonderful if you could suggest some places that are less crowded but still offer a unique experience.
翻译：如果你能建议一些不那么拥挤但仍能提供独特体验的地方，那就太好了。
分析：运用了that引导的限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：This could include information on transportation options，local customs，places to try traditional cuisines，and any safety precautions to keep in mind while exploring.
翻译：这可能包括交通选择、当地习俗、尝试传统美食的地方，以及在探索时要记住的任何安全预防措施。
分析：运用了不定式短语作定语以及while引导的时间状语从句中的省略结构。
【解答】Dear Kevin，
I'm Li Hua from Class 2.I am writing to seek your expert advice on my one﹣week trip to the UK this summer，given your decade﹣long experience as a tour guide.
Firstly，I would like to know about some must﹣visit attractions in the UK.I'm particularly interested in historical landmarks，cultural sites，and stunning natural scenery.It would be wonderful if you could suggest some places that are less crowded but still offer a unique experience.【高分句型一】（值得游玩的景点）
Secondly，I would appreciate any tips or advice you have for traveling in the UK.This could include information on transportation options，local customs，places to try traditional cuisines，and any safety precautions to keep in mind while exploring.【高分句型二】（旅行中的注意事项）
I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
9．（2025 海陵区校级一模）假定你是李华，你的朋友Mark将在元旦期间来你家做客，特发邮件询问你的假期的一些活动安排，请你回复一封邮件。
内容包括：（1）欢迎来访；
（2）你的元旦假期活动安排。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
________
【答案】Dear Mark，
I am absolutely thrilled to hear that you're coming to visit me during the New Year's Day!A warm welcome awaits you.
On the first day，we'll head to the local folk custom village，which is filled with various traditional handicrafts and performances.There，you can try making some delicate crafts yourself.Subsequently，having a hearty meal at a farmhouse is a must.It is on the second day that we plan to go to the city library，where we can immerse ourselves in the ocean of knowledge.
I'm certain we'll have an amazing time.Looking forward to your arrival!
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给朋友Mark回复一封邮件，告知他假期来家做客时的一些活动安排。
高分句型一：On the first day，we'll head to the local folk custom village，which is filled with various traditional handicrafts and performances.
翻译：第一天，我们将前往当地的民俗村，那里充满了各种传统手工艺品和表演。
分析：运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：It is on the second day that we plan to go to the city library，where we can immerse ourselves in the ocean of knowledge.
翻译：第二天我们计划去市图书馆，在那里我们可以沉浸在知识的海洋中。
分析：运用了强调句型"it+be+被强调部分+that+其它"结构以及where引导的非限制性定语从句。
【解答】Dear Mark，
I am absolutely thrilled to hear that you're coming to visit me during the New Year's Day!A warm welcome awaits you.（欢迎来访）
On the first day，we'll head to the local folk custom village，which is filled with various traditional handicrafts and performances.【高分句型一】There，you can try making some delicate crafts yourself.Subsequently，having a hearty meal at a farmhouse is a must.It is on the second day that we plan to go to the city library，where we can immerse ourselves in the ocean of knowledge.【高分句型二】（元旦假期活动安排。）
I'm certain we'll have an amazing time.Looking forward to your arrival!（盼望来访）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
10．（2024秋 淄博期末） 假定你是李华，你们学校上周举办了校园英语节，请你给英国好友Paul写一封邮件分享此次活动，内容包括：
（1）活动内容；
（2）你的感想。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Paul，
______
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Paul，
I'm writing to share an the English Festival hosted in our school last week.All my classmates were actively engaged in various activities，ranging from crosswords to English dramas.I had the opportunity to participate in an English speech contest，which was both challenging and rewarding.Additionally，the talk show was popular among the students.
The festival was an unforgettable experience.Not only did it boost my confidence in speaking English，but it also helped me connect with others who share similar interests.Overall，it was a great opportunity to learn and grow.
Do you have such similar events？Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：All my classmates were actively engaged in various activities，ranging from crosswords to English dramas.
翻译：我所有的同学都积极参与各种活动，从填字游戏到英语戏剧。
分析：本句运用了现在分词短语ranging from crosswords to English dramas作状语。
高分句型二：Not only did it boost my confidence in speaking English，but it also helped me connect with others who share similar interests.
翻译：它不仅增强了我说英语的信心，还帮助我与有相似兴趣的人建立了联系。
分析：本句运用了not only置于句首的部分倒装结构及who引导的定语从句。
【解答】Dear Paul，
I'm writing to share an the English Festival hosted in our school last week.All my classmates were actively engaged in various activities，ranging from crosswords to English dramas.【高分句型一】（活动内容）I had the opportunity to participate in an English speech contest，which was both challenging and rewarding.Additionally，the talk show was popular among the students.
The festival was an unforgettable experience.Not only did it boost my confidence in speaking English，but it also helped me connect with others who share similar interests.【高分句型二】Overall，it was a great opportunity to learn and grow.（个人感想）
Do you have such similar events？Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
11．（2024秋 武汉期末）假设你是李华，即将赴英国St Andrew's College交换学习一年。得知宿舍有限，需竞争获得，请你提交一份申请。内容包括：
（1）申请理由；
（2）你的优势。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Accommodation Office，
I'm Li Hua，________
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Accommodation Office，
I am Li Hua，an exchange student to join St Andrew's College for a year.I am writing to apply for on﹣campus accommodation.
Living on campus will allow me to fully immerse in the college's academic and social life，improving my study experience.I believe my enthusiasm for group activities and ability to adapt quickly to new environment make me a suitable candidate for on﹣campus living.I am eager to integrate into the new environment and contribute positively to our campus.
I would appreciate it if you could consider my application.I am excited about the prospect of becoming a student here and eager to hear about the accommodation options available to me.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：Living on campus will allow me to fully immerse in the college's academic and social life，improving my study experience.
翻译：住在校园里将使我能够完全沉浸在大学的学术和社交生活中，提升我的学习体验。
分析：Living on campus 动名词短语做主语，improving my study experience现在分词短语作状语。
高分句型二：I believe my enthusiasm for group activities and ability to adapt quickly to new environment make me a suitable candidate for on﹣campus living.
翻译：我认为我对团体活动的热情以及快速适应新环境的能力使我成为适合住校的候选人。
分析：my enthusiasm for group activities and ability to adapt quickly to new environment make me a suitable candidate for on﹣campus living是省略that的宾语从句。
【解答】Dear Accommodation Office，
I am Li Hua，an exchange student to join St Andrew's College for a year.I am writing to apply for on﹣campus accommodation.
Living on campus will allow me to fully immerse in the college's academic and social life，improving my study experience.【高分句型一】（申请理由）I believe my enthusiasm for group activities and ability to adapt quickly to new environment make me a suitable candidate for on﹣campus living.【高分句型二】I am eager to integrate into the new environment and contribute positively to our campus.（优势）
I would appreciate it if you could consider my application.I am excited about the prospect of becoming a student here and eager to hear about the accommodation options available to me.
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
12．（2024秋 江西期末）明天的英语课轮到你作主题发言，请你以"中国神舟19号飞船（Shenzhou﹣19 spacecraft）发射成功"为主题写一篇发言稿，内容包括：
（1）发射时间：2024年10月30日4时27分；
（2）你的感想。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（1）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Good morning，everyone，
I'm excited to share with you the successful launch of China's Shenzhou﹣19 spacecraft.________
Thank you!
【答案】Good morning，everyone，
I'm excited to share with you the successful launch of China's Shenzhou﹣19 spacecraft.It took place on October 30，2024，at 4：27 AM.This achievement marks another significant milestone in China's space exploration efforts.I feel immense pride knowing that our scientists and engineers have worked tirelessly to make this possible.The launch symbolizes our nation's commitment to advancing technology and exploring the unknown.I believe that Shenzhou﹣19 will pave the way for future missions，inspiring young people to dream big and pursue careers in science and space.
Thank you!
【分析】高分句型一：I feel immense pride knowing that our scientists and engineers have worked tirelessly to make this possible.
翻译：得知我们的科学家和工程师为实现这一目标而不懈努力，我感到无比自豪。
分析：本句运用了现在分词短语knowing that our scientists and engineers have worked tirelessly to make this possible作状语及that引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二：I believe that Shenzhou﹣19 will pave the way for future missions，inspiring young people to dream big and pursue careers in science and space.
翻译：我相信神舟十九号将为未来的任务铺平道路，激励年轻人有远大的梦想，追求科学和太空事业。
分析：本句运用了that引导的宾语从句及现在分词短语inspiring young people to dream big and pursue careers in science and space作状语。
【解答】Good morning，everyone，
I'm excited to share with you the successful launch of China's Shenzhou﹣19 spacecraft.（主题）It took place on October 30，2024，at 4：27 AM.（发射时间）This achievement marks another significant milestone in China's space exploration efforts.I feel immense pride knowing that our scientists and engineers have worked tirelessly to make this possible.【高分句型一】The launch symbolizes our nation's commitment to advancing technology and exploring the unknown.I believe that Shenzhou﹣19 will pave the way for future missions，inspiring young people to dream big and pursue careers in science and space.（个人感想）【高分句型二】Thank you!
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
13．（2024秋 辽宁期末）假定你是学生会主席李华，你校将举办手工制作（Hands﹣on craft making）比赛。请你给擅长制作的外教Miss Jones写一封邮件，邀请她担任评委，内容包括：
（1）比赛信息；
（2）评判内容；
（3）表达期望。
要求：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Miss Jones，
________
Best regards，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Miss Jones，
I hope this email finds you well.I'm Li Hua，the President of the Student Union.We are organizing a "Hands﹣on Craft Making" competition at our school.Because we know you're expert in hands﹣on craft，we'd like to invite you to join us as a judge.
The event will take place on January 20th in the school auditorium from 2 pm to 5 pm.Participants will showcase their creativity through various craft projects.As a judge，you'll assess the originality，technical skills，and thematic relevance of each entry.
I would appreciate it if you would accept our invitation.
Best regards，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：Because we know you're expert in hands﹣on craft，we'd like to invite you to join us as a judge.
译文：因为我们知道你是动手制作的专家，我们想邀请你加入我们担任评委。
分析：这句话使用了because引导的原因状语从句。
高分句型二：I would appreciate it if you would accept our invitation.
译文：如果你能接受我们的邀请，我将不胜感激。
分析：这句话使用了appreciate it if...意为"如果......很感激"。
【解答】Dear Miss Jones，
I hope this email finds you well.I'm Li Hua，the President of the Student Union.We are organizing a "Hands﹣on Craft Making" competition at our school.Because we know you're expert in hands﹣on craft，we'd like to invite you to join us as a judge.【高分句型一】（发出邀请）
The event will take place on January 20th in the school auditorium from 2 pm to 5 pm.Participants will showcase their creativity through various craft projects.（比赛信息）As a judge，you'll assess the originality，technical skills，and thematic relevance of each entry.（评判内容）
I would appreciate it if you would accept our invitation.【高分句型二】（表达期望）
Best regards，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
14．（2025 江西一模）假定你是李华，得知你的好友Jack成功入选校足球队。请写封邮件向他表示祝贺，内容包括：
（1）肯定他的付出；
（2）提议庆祝活动。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jack，
________
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jack，
I'm writing to offer my warmest congratulations on your successful selection into the school football team!Your hard work and dedication have truly paid off.I've witnessed your countless hours of practice and unwavering determination，which have now led to this well﹣deserved achievement.
To celebrate this wonderful occasion，I am thinking that we can have a small gathering at my place this weekend.If the weather permits，we can even have a barbecue in the backyard.We'll invite some mutual friends，and I'm sure it'll be a night filled with laughter and joy as we share in your success.
Once again，congratulations!I'm really proud of you.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求学生以李华的身份，给成功入选校足球队的好友Jack写封邮件，向他表示祝贺，需首先肯定他的付出，再提议为他举办庆祝活动。
高分句型一：I've witnessed your countless hours of practice and unwavering determination，which have now led to this well﹣deserved achievement.
翻译：我见证了你无数个小时的练习和坚定不移的决心，这些都让你获得了当之无愧的成就。
分析：运用了which引导非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：To celebrate this wonderful occasion，I am thinking that we can have a small gathering at my place this weekend.
翻译：为了庆祝这个美好的时刻，我想这个周末我们可以在我家举行一个小型聚会。
分析：运用了不定式To celebrate this wonderful occasion作状语、that引导宾语从句。
【解答】Dear Jack，
I'm writing to offer my warmest congratulations on your successful selection into the school football team!Your hard work and dedication have truly paid off.I've witnessed your countless hours of practice and unwavering determination，which have now led to this well﹣deserved achievement.【高分句型一】（肯定他的付出）
To celebrate this wonderful occasion，I am thinking that we can have a small gathering at my place this weekend.【高分句型二】If the weather permits，we can even have a barbecue in the backyard.We'll invite some mutual friends，and I'm sure it'll be a night filled with laughter and joy as we share in your success.（提议庆祝活动）
Once again，congratulations!I'm really proud of you.
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
15．（2024秋 益阳期末）假如你是李华，为推广和平与友爱的理念，你校将举办一场名为"Music For Peace"的音乐节活动。请你在学校英文社团网站上发布一篇博文进行宣传。内容包括：
（1）活动宗旨；
（2）活动安排；
（3）你的期待。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Join Us In"Music For Peace"!
________
【答案】
Join Us In "Music For Peace"!
Our school is organizing a remarkable activity called "Music For Peace"，aimed at promoting the values of peace and friendship among us all.The essence is to bring our community together through the universal language of music，fostering a spirit of friendship and harmony.
The activity will be held in our school's hall from 2 pm to 6 pm on 12th February，which will feature a variety of performances，including solo singers，bands，and orchestras，all coming together to create a symphony of peace.There will also be interactive workshops where you can learn about different musical cultures and their contributions to peace.
As a volunteer，I sincerely hope each and every one of you will be a part of this joyous activity.Your participation will contribute to a memorable experience that expresses our collective desire for a peaceful world.
【分析】高分句型一：The essence is to bring our community together through the universal language of music，fostering a spirit of friendship and harmony.
译文：其本质是通过音乐的通用语言将我们的社区聚集在一起，培养友谊与和谐的精神。
分析：这句话使用了现在分词短语fostering a spirit of friendship and harmony作状语。
高分句型二：There will also be interactive workshops where you can learn about different musical cultures and their contributions to peace.
译文：还将举办互动研讨会，您可以在那里了解不同的音乐文化及其对和平的贡献。
分析：这句话使用了where引导的限制性定语从句。
【解答】
Join Us In "Music For Peace"!
Our school is organizing a remarkable activity called "Music For Peace"，aimed at promoting the values of peace and friendship among us all.The essence is to bring our community together through the universal language of music，fostering a spirit of friendship and harmony.【高分句型一】（活动宗旨）
The activity will be held in our school's hall from 2 pm to 6 pm on 12th February，which will feature a variety of performances，including solo singers，bands，and orchestras，all coming together to create a symphony of peace.There will also be interactive workshops where you can learn about different musical cultures and their contributions to peace.【高分句型二】（活动安排）
As a volunteer，I sincerely hope each and every one of you will be a part of this joyous activity.Your participation will contribute to a memorable experience that expresses our collective desire for a peaceful world.（期望）
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
16．（2024秋 保山期末） 假定你是李华，最近参加了一次虚拟合唱团（virtual choir）活动。你的英国好友Richard得知此事后很感兴趣，向你了解相关情况，请给他回一封邮件。内容包括：
（1）活动介绍（时间、地点、内容和方式）；
（2）你的感受。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Richard，
I hope this email finds you well.
______
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Richard，
I hope this email finds you well.Knowing that you are interested in the virtual choir event I participated in，I'd like to share some details with you.
Organized by a local choir association，the event took place at 7 p.m.last Saturday online and more than 50 people attended it.During one and a half hours，following the conductor's cues on screen，we sang two classic songs and one original piece composed by one member.
I had a wonderful time.Although we were not physically together，it's amazing to hear how our voices blended together.This event brought me joy and helped me forget about the stress of daily life.
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：During one and a half hours，following the conductor's cues on screen，we sang two classic songs and one original piece composed by one member.
译文：在一个半小时的时间里，我们按照屏幕上指挥的提示，演唱了两首经典歌曲和一首由一名成员创作的原创作品。
分析：这句话使用了现在分词短语following the conductor's cues on screen作状语，过去分词短语composed by one member作定语。
高分句型二：Although we were not physically together，it's amazing to hear how our voices blended together.
译文：虽然我们没有在一起，但听到我们的声音是如何融合在一起的，真是太棒了。
分析：这句话使用了although引导的让步状语从句，how引导的宾语从句。
【解答】Dear Richard，
I hope this email finds you well.Knowing that you are interested in the virtual choir event I participated in，I'd like to share some details with you.（写信目的）
Organized by a local choir association，the event took place at 7 p.m.last Saturday online and more than 50 people attended it.During one and a half hours，following the conductor's cues on screen，we sang two classic songs and one original piece composed by one member.【高分句型一】（活动介绍）
I had a wonderful time.Although we were not physically together，it's amazing to hear how our voices blended together.【高分句型二】This event brought me joy and helped me forget about the stress of daily life.（感受）
Best wishes!（希望）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
17．（2024秋 长寿区期末） 你是李华，你校将举办一场国际文化交流节。请你用英语写一则通知，向全校学生介绍此次活动的相关信息并邀请他们参加。内容包括：
（1）活动目的：促进不同文化间的理解与交流；
（2）活动时间：下周六9：00﹣17：00；
（3）活动地点：学校操场及教学楼一楼大厅；
（4）活动内容：文化展览、文化表演、文化讲座。
注意：
（1）词数100左右；
（2）参考词汇：文化交流节Cultural Exchange Festival促进enhance
【答案】
Notice
Dear fellow students，
Our school will host an International Cultural Exchange Festival，whose aim is to enhance understanding and exchange among different cultures.
It will be held from 9 a.m.to 5 p.m.next Saturday.The location is the school playground and the first﹣floor hall of the teaching building.There will be all kinds of activities.A cultural exhibition will show the traditional clothes，foods and handicrafts from different countries.Cultural performances like dances，music and plays will also be on display.And foreign teachers will give cultural lectures about different countries' customs.
I sincerely hope that you can come and join us.It will be a great chance to experience our school culture.
The School Students' Union
【分析】高分句型一：Our school will host an International Cultural Exchange Festival，whose aim is to enhance understanding and exchange among different cultures.
译文：我们学校将举办一个国际文化交流节，其目的是增进不同文化之间的理解和交流。
分析：这句话使用了whose引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：I sincerely hope that you can come and join us.
译文：我真诚地希望你能来加入我们。
分析：这句话使用了that引导的宾语从句。
【解答】
Notice
Dear fellow students，
Our school will host an International Cultural Exchange Festival，whose aim is to enhance understanding and exchange among different cultures.【高分句型一】（活动目的：促进不同文化间的理解与交流）
It will be held from 9 a.m.to 5 p.m.next Saturday.（活动时间：下周六9：00﹣17：00）The location is the school playground and the first﹣floor hall of the teaching building.（活动地点：学校操场及教学楼一楼大厅）There will be all kinds of activities.A cultural exhibition will show the traditional clothes，foods and handicrafts from different countries.Cultural performances like dances，music and plays will also be on display.And foreign teachers will give cultural lectures about different countries' customs.（活动内容：文化展览、文化表演、文化讲座）
I sincerely hope that you can come and join us.【高分句型二】It will be a great chance to experience our school culture.（希望）
The School Students' Union
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
18．（2024秋 广东期末）你班外教Peter课堂上让你们讨论"最有效的学习方法"。请你写一篇发言稿，内容包括：
（1）方法介绍；
（2）你的评价。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter and classmates，
________
Thank you!
【答案】Dear Peter and classmates，
I think taking notes is the most effective learning method.While listening in class，we write down key points，important formulas and explanations.It helps us focus and review later.It enables us to have a clear record of what we' ve learned and easily review the details again.
I feel this method is like building a knowledge ware﹣house.It stores what we learn and makes it convenient for us to refer back to.It has greatly improved my learning efficiency and understanding of knowledge.It gives me a sense of accomplishment and confidence in my study.
Thank you!
【分析】高分句型一：While listening in class，we write down key points，important formulas and explanations.
译文：在课堂上听的时候，我们写下关键点、重要公式和解释。
分析：这句话使用了while引导的时间状语从句的省略句。
高分句型二：It enables us to have a clear record of what we've learned and easily review the details again.
译文：它使我们能够清楚地记录我们所学到的知识，并轻松地再次复习细节。
分析：这句话使用了what引导的宾语从句。
【解答】Dear Peter and classmates，
I think taking notes is the most effective learning method.While listening in class，we write down key points，important formulas and explanations.【高分句型一】It helps us focus and review later.It enables us to have a clear record of what we've learned and easily review the details again.【高分句型二】（方法介绍）
I feel this method is like building a knowledge ware﹣house.It stores what we learn and makes it convenient for us to refer back to.It has greatly improved my learning efficiency and understanding of knowledge.It gives me a sense of accomplishment and confidence in my study.（评价）
Thank you!（感谢）
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
19．（2025 潍坊模拟）假设你是李华，你的英国好友Jim准备参加中国文化网举办的"Sharing China"春节文化影像展全球作品征集活动，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
（1）拍摄内容建议；
（2）简要说明理由。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jim，
_______
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim，
I'm thrilled to hear that you're going to enter the Spring Festival Image Exhibition.I would like to give some advice.
It's a good idea to take pictures of dragon and lion dances in Chinatown.These dances，performed to drive away evil spirits and welcome in prosperous times，offer a glimpse into the festive atmosphere of Spring Festival.Alternatively，you can consider capturing a scene of family members making jiaozi together.Nothing is better at displaying the essence of Spring Festival — family reunions.I'm confident that these pictures will showcase how well Chinese culture has been embraced and spread overseas.
Hope you can get some inspiration!Feel free to ask me if you need further help.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：I'm confident that these pictures will showcase how well Chinese culture has been embraced and spread overseas.
翻译：我相信这些照片将展示中国文化在海外被接受和传播的程度。
分析：本句运用了that引导的宾语从句和how引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二：Feel free to ask me if you need further help.
翻译：如果你需要进一步的帮助，尽管问我。
分析：本句运用了if引导的条件状语从句。
【解答】Dear Jim，
I'm thrilled to hear that you're going to enter the Spring Festival Image Exhibition.I would like to give some advice.（开篇点题）
It's a good idea to take pictures of dragon and lion dances in Chinatown.These dances，performed to drive away evil spirits and welcome in prosperous times，offer a glimpse into the festive atmosphere of Spring Festival.Alternatively，you can consider capturing a scene of family members making jiaozi together.Nothing is better at displaying the essence of Spring Festival — family reunions.I'm confident that these pictures will showcase how well Chinese culture has been embraced and spread overseas.【高分句型一】（拍摄内容建议以及理由）
Hope you can get some inspiration!Feel free to ask me if you need further help.【高分句型二】（表达希望并且愿意提供帮助）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇。
20．（2025 福州模拟）假设你是李华，上周你参加了学校举办的科技作品展示活动。请你给英国朋友John.写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括：
（1）你的作品；
（2）你的感想。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear John，
I'd like to share with you an exhibition of sci﹣tech works I took part in last week.________
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear John，
I'd like to share with you an exhibition of sci﹣tech works I took part in last week.
My project was an intelligent robot that could recognize voice commands and help with daily tasks.It was a thrilling experience to see my creation among so many innovative works.I felt incredibly proud of what I had achieved，and it inspired me to delve deeper into the world of technology.The event was a great platform for learning and exchange，broadening my horizons and igniting my passion for sci﹣tech.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：My project was an intelligent robot that could recognize voice commands and help with daily tasks.
翻译：我的项目是一个智能机器人，可以识别语音命令并帮助完成日常任务。
分析：本句使用了that引导的限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：I felt incredibly proud of what I had achieved，and it inspired me to delve deeper into the world of technology.
翻译：我为自己所取得的成就感到无比自豪，这激励我更深入地探索技术世界。
分析：本句使用了what引导的宾语从句。
【解答】Dear John，
I'd like to share with you an exhibition of sci﹣tech works I took part in last week.
My project was an intelligent robot that could recognize voice commands and help with daily tasks.【高分句型一】It was a thrilling experience to see my creation among so many innovative works.（自己的作品）I felt incredibly proud of what I had achieved，and it inspired me to delve deeper into the world of technology.【高分句型二】The event was a great platform for learning and exchange，broadening my horizons and igniting my passion for sci﹣tech.（感想）
Yours，
Li Hua
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