【高考押题卷】2025年高考英语高频易错提高卷 读后续写(含答案与解析)

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2025年高考英语高频易错提高卷 读后续写
一.书面表达(共20小题)
1.(2025 海陵区校级一模)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My friend invited me to a trapeze (高空秋千) class.I was doubtful because of a lack of courage and a short of self﹣confidence,but her enthusiasm and assurances of strict safety rules won me over.
I had been fearful of heights since elementary school and avoiding my fear of heights became second nature.But here I was,at age twenty﹣six,facing my fear of heights in a rather extreme way.I had come around to the idea of trying trapeze.I figured it wasn't much different from swinging (舞动) on the monkey bars as a kid.One difficulty I didn't expect was the ladder (梯子).In order to reach the trapeze,I had to climb up a twenty﹣two﹣foot ladder.
I could hear one of my classmates expressing her impatience with my slow climb up the ladder. "If she's afraid of heights,why did she sign up for a trapeze class?" However,my friend was at the top of the ladder,trying to encourage me.Besides,his distraction techniques helped to take my mind off my dangerous task.I found a rhythm(节奏) and kept going.With a slow and steady pace,I made it to the top.The cheers from my classmates rang out below.
An instructor told me to step to the edge of the platform.He reminded me of the safety rules,including the net below that would catch me at the bottom.He also asked me to listen to the directions while in the air,so I could perform a trick.
As the instructor counted down,I took a deep breath and pushed off the platform,swinging back and forth.At that moment,I lost awareness of time and space.Fortunately,the instructor's voice came over the loudspeaker,giving me step﹣by﹣step instructions for performing a trick.Instead of doubting my inability to perform the trick,I took his directions one step at a time.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
During my flight on the trapeze,my fear didn't completely leave me.
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This experience opened up a new way of seeing myself and approaching other challenges.
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2.(2024秋 武汉期末)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之成为一篇完整的短文。
Today I turn eight,so whatever I say goes.
Grandma was gardening when we pulled up for the party.I ran straight to her. "Happy birthday,sweetie!" She squeezed me into a hug,whispering about my favorite chocolate﹣strawberry cake she made,and her intention to pressure my parents to allow me to play video games,which hadn't happened since I was six.Then,I noticed Grandpa,who contrary to my grandma,always sits outside and complains how the air isn't fresh like in the mountains where he often went hiking for days at youth and that kids have no respect,claiming that all they do is play video games.Now on the porch (门廊) sat grandpa,like a sack of wrinkly(皱的) onions,asleep in a rocking chair,snoring like thunders,on his only grandson's birthday!
"Wake up,sleepyhead!" I mounted the porch steps,only to be greeted by more snores. "Fine," I groaned, "we'll have the cake without you!" It was Grandma's request to wait ten more minutes that brought me to tears.An angry hurricane spinning up inside me,I exploded.My fists clenched,I'd been sobbing and screaming until Dad held my shoulder firmly.Mom touched my hair,instructing me to take a.deep breath and relax.
Finally,Grandpa was awake,coughing,snorting,and squinting(眯眼看) right at me like an angry goat. "Boy," he spoke with a rough low voice, "come here." He was struggling to his feet when Grandma hurried over with his walker,which Grandpa usually pushes about 0.3 miles per hour. "You and I," said Grandpa, "are going on a walk." "NO!" I shouted. "You can't tell me what to do!" But Grandpa kept looking at me with that scary,scary look on his face.Not even Grandma came to my rescue.Unwilling as I was,I gave in and dragged myself forward.Then we were inching down the path into the garden,I expected him to lecture me cease being a parents were very busy.I was too confused to respond.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
"Help me sit there",he demanded,pointing to a bench.________
It hit me how selfish I was.________
3.(2024秋 江西期末)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The side door of the small aircraft was opened wide,and the wind rushed through the cargo hold (货仓).Packed tightly were fourteen silent people.Two of them were my adult children.Holding themselves perfectly still,they stared out at the endless sky.
When we reached a height of 4,300 feet,my son's face turned pale as he carefully inched next to the opening,leaned (倾斜) sideways,and fell out of the airplane.Something went cold in my heart when I realized he was gone.But,only seconds later,instructions were being barked,and my daughter suddenly appeared in the same space just occupied by my son.She seemed a little nervous and then fell away into the wild blue sky after her brother.
For a quick moment,a desperate fear overcame me,and I wondered if that was the last time I would see them and whether they would land safely.But the thought soon passed as I felt a strong pull on my pack and was moved into position by our instructor.
With a big birthday approaching,two of my adult children had chosen to surprise me with an unforgettable way.I'd wanted to chicken out once we reached the airport,but when I heard a woman celebrating her fiftieth wedding anniversary decided to skydive,I thought that I had the courage to do it,too.
The wind blew louder as we went up further,each second feeling like an eternity (永生).My heart pounded in my chest quickly.Below me,the world seemed so distant,a patchwork of green fields and shining water.As I watched my children disappear into the vastness,a part of me wanted to scream,to pull them back into the safety of the aircraft.But another part,a deeper part,understood the excitement they sought and the freedom they had although they were afraid before skydiving.
注意:(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The instructor's voice showed it was my turn.________
My son and daughter rushed to me when I landed.________
4.(2025 江西一模)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
In a small town,an elderly woman named Agnes lives alone.Though in her late 60s,Agnes still tries hard to take care of herself and run a small farm.However,she is finding herself struggling to maintain all this.
One winter morning,as frost painted the windows with delicate designs,Agnes woke up to unsettling silence —The power was out,and so was the heating. "Another signal of struggling," Agnes thought to herself.Feeling cold,she wrapped herself in a thick coat and decided to go to the local cafe for a cup of coffee and some warmth.
As she stepped out into the biting cold,Agnes felt the pain inside her bones.The streets were unusually quiet,with only a few brave souls braving the elements.She made her way to the cafe,her breath visible in the frosty air.Upon entering,she was greeted by the good smell of fresh coffee.She ordered her usual and found a seat by the window.
As she drank her coffee,Agnes noticed a young man shaking outside.He seemed to be debating whether to come in or not.The moment she saw his face,she recognized it was Charlie,who used to enjoy coffee in the cafe and pay for her coffee before they started a pleasant conversation. "There must be something wrong with him," Agnes thought.She decided to buy Charlie a cup of coffee.
Holding a steaming cup of coffee,Agnes approached Charlie and offered him the cup. "Here,this might help warm you up," Agnes said gently.
Charlie looked at Agnes with surprise and gratitude. "Thank you," he stammered,his hands wrapping around the cup as if it were a lifeline. "I…I lost my job and home.I was trying to...find a job..." Agnes patted him on the arm and said softly, "We all have struggles,but there's always hope."
注意:(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
With an idea in mind,Agnes invited Charlie into the cafe.________
During his stay with Agnes,Charlie tried to pay back.________
5.(2024秋 保山期末) When I was seven,my sister Lucy,who was four,and I were eager to be independent and earn some money to show our parents that we were capable beyond our years.The only idea I could come up with was to offer our services as gardeners,going door to door to propose weeding neighbors' gardens for 2 dollars each.
Our proposal was fair,yet unexpectedly,only Mrs.White,living three blocks from our house,accepted the offer.Maybe that was because no one would take children's words seriously.We agreed on the weeding at 8:00 the next morning.Having the first client,Lucy and I couldn't contain ourselves and felt as if we had achieved a monumental task,hearts swelling with pride.We were going to be gardeners!But the excitement of the moment was fleeting,and the next day,the attraction of play and the forgetfulness of childhood overtook us.We forgot about our commitment.
Concerned about our absence,Mrs.White contacted our mother.As we walked into the kitchen through the back door at 11:00 a.m.,Mom had just hung up the phone.She asked about our little gardening business.Surprisingly,she wasn't angry,instead,she found our initiative amusing.She explained that Mrs.White had called her,expressing disappointment over our broken promise Faced with the mistake,we admitted our oversight and promised to make a sincere apology sometime.Instead of criticizing us,Mom busied herself with lunch preparations as if nothing had happened.We did feel a touch of guilt,but it was quickly overshadowed by what Mom said next.
As we mouthed on sandwiches,Mom casually asked,"Would you like to go to Disneyland this afternoon?"We sprang into action,bathing and dressing,which was like getting ready for a birthday party.We rushed outside,not wanting to miss the bus that would take us downtown.The sun was high in the sky as we stood outside,our bags packed and hearts full of anticipation.
注意:
(1)续写的词数应为150左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
On the landing,Mom said,"Girls,we are not going to Disneyland today."
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We knocked gently on Mrs.White's door,heads down and hearts heavy.
______
6.(2024秋 益阳期末)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Max and Mia were so excited to go to the city festival with their parents.They woke up early that day,put on their favorite clothes,and headed straight for the car.The anticipation was killing them!
As they drove into town,they could see flags waving in the air and hear music coming from every direction. "We're here!" Max shouted as they pulled into a parking spot.
Mia's eyes widened with amazement as she took in all of the sights around her.There were food stalls selling all kinds of yummy treats like cotton candy,popcorn,and ice cream.She couldn't wait to try everything!Meanwhile,Max was already eyeing his first game booth(岗亭) where he could win a giant stuffed animal if he scored enough points throwing balls through hoops.They spent hours exploring different parts of the festival together:trying out games at carnival booths or enjoying exotic (异国风味的) dishes from food stands while hearing different types of music ranging from jazz bands to folk singers.
But then something scary happened.Max turned around to ask his mom a question when he noticed that﹣she was no longer there.He looked around but couldn't see her or his dad anywhere.Mia started to cry because she didn't know what was going on.
"Where did they go?" Max asked himself as he nervously scanned the crowd for any sign of his parents.Mia clung(紧抓) to Max's hand tightly as they walked through the busy street filled with people. "We need to find them," Max said calmly but firm w. "Let's try calling out for them." They shouted at the top of their lungs,hoping that somehow their voices would reach their parents over all of the noise at the festival.But still,no answer came back from anywhere in sight!
As minutes stretched into what felt like hours,Max started getting really scared too—how could they ever find each other in such a huge sea of people?
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Just then,a kind lady approached them with a warm smile.________
Turning around,they saw their parents rushing towards them.________
7.(2025 潍坊模拟) In a lively city,there was a small bookstore hidden between two tall buildings.It wasn't the most attractive place,but it had an undeniable charm.The owner,David,had inheriled (继承)the store from his grandfather.Every day,he opened its creaky (吱嘎的) doors and greeted his customers with a smile,even though his heart was heavy.
David had been struggling with his business for months.Online stores had taken over the market,and fewer people walked into his store.He had always believed in the magic of physical books,but with bills piling up and his savings running low,he was beginning to lose hope.
One rainy afternoon,as David sat behind the counter,staring at the closed sign on the door,a young woman entered.Her name was Sophie,and she was new to the city.She had heard about the bookstore from a friend and decided to check it out.
Sophie wandered through the passages,running her fingers along the spines of the books.There was something warm and comforting about the place—despite its worn﹣out shelves and faded sign outside.After a while,she picked up a book on gardening—a topic she had recently become passionate about—and brought it to the counter.David greeted her,still burdened by his worries.
"You seem like you're really into gardening,"he said softly.
Sophie smiled."Yes,it's been such a peaceful escape for me lately."
David rang up the book and said, "I hope it helps you grow your garden.Plants are like people.They need care,but they can really bloom if you give them the right environment."
Before leaving with the book,Sophie turned to him."There's something special about this place.I hope you keep it open for a long time."
David watched as she stepped out into the rain,her smile lingering(萦绕) in his mind.That night,for the first time in weeks,he didn't feel the heavy weight of worry.Instead,he thought about Sophie's words.Maybe it wasn't about making the store bigger or more popular.Maybe it was about creating an environment where people felt welcomed—and that was enough to keep going.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The next day,David decided to make a change.________
Months later,David received a letter from Sophie.________
8.(2024秋 保定期末)
The Ice Cream Truck
"Never give up!Never give up!" chanted two young children,Max and Lily,as they marched barefoot behind their grandmother Mimi who was leading them on a great adventure,straight off the beach where they had spent the day building sand castles and swimming in the sea.They were seeking the mysterious ice﹣cream truck!
Over the years,Mimi had become an example of positivity for her family.It was not a title she earned without effort,however.Her husband died early and at only forty years old she was left to raise her daughter alone.She faced the heart﹣breaking disaster powerful enough.She could have lived under a black cloud.But she challenged herself to find joy every day instead.She was always up for a new challenge,whether that was hiking across the rocky mountain in Austria to get a better view of the breathtaking scenery,or signing up for tap﹣dancing classes at fifty.Leading by example,Mimi taught her daughter just how much one could achieve with a positive attitude.
And obviously she had taken the same approach in her relationship with her grandchildren as well.Before starting her adventure with Max and Lily on that hot July afternoon,Mimi heard the ice﹣cream man's bell from her beach chair.She turned and saw him briefly,spotting his green shirt and catching the sight of his waving bell before he turned and disappeared.The ice﹣cream man visited the beach on a daily basis,although the delay between the sound of his bell and the disappearance of his truck is not long.One must be quick to catch him.
Max and Lily were disappointed when they didn't catch him in time that day.That was until Mimi's eyes shone and she said, "Never give up!" She explained that the truck might be gone,but they could hurry up to find it at its next stop.
They walked block after block.Not knowing which direction the truck had taken,they had to make their best guess about where to search.The kids' tiny legs were tired,but they went on,continuing the chant, "Never give up!Never give up!"
注意:(1)所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
(2)续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好。
After about twenty minutes of walking,Max's faith started to get shaken in the burning sun.
Just two blocks later,they found it.
9.(2025 1月份模拟) I was in Philadelphia for a conference when I saw an ad in the hotel.A nearby theater was showing a documentary (纪录片) about several local animal shelters that were helping to save abandoned dogs across the country.I love animals,and I felt an urge to go to this fundraising event.However,none of my co﹣workers would go with me,and I was worried about walking on the street alone at night.
I resigned myself to spending the evening in my hotel room,but as soon as I got back to my room I felt restless and bored.The theater where the event was taking place was only about five blocks from the hotel,and the area around the hotel didn't seem particularly dangerous.So,I decided to brave it.I gathered up my wallet and room key and set off.
It was already getting dark and the streets were nearly deserted.I managed to find the street the theater was on,but when I turned the corner,I stopped in shock.In front of the theater were a group of bikers —very big,tough﹣looking bikers.
I've known lots of motorcycle enthusiasts and most are nice people.However,in this case,I was a woman all alone,in a strange neighborhood,at night,and there were twenty or so very large men —all wearing insignia (徽章) that indicated they were in some sort of club —standing before me.Warning bells began to sound in my head,and my heart was pounding.Was I at the right theater?Had I misread the date of the event?
A sign outside the theater told me that I was in the right place on the right evening.Nevertheless,I wondered if I should rush back to my hotel instead of walking through that crowd of bikers.I finally decided that I would be safer inside the theater.Hopefully,the bikers would have gone away by the time the film was over.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I hurried into the theater,only to find there were even more bikers inside.
When the film began,I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group.
10.(2024秋 天心区校级期末) Taking swimming class was a must in Ren's school and there was a pre﹣test in the third week and a final test in the last week according to the course plan.
That pre﹣test day came soon.The gym teacher blew the whistle (哨子) and four students dived into the swimming pool,racing to the other side,Then the next four were up,but only three stood on the diving board. "Where is Ren?" the gym teacher asked in concern.
Ren's face turned red,and he was unsteady.He looked at the pool and stepped back. "You cannot make me do this!" he said.
Sadie,his teammate,patted him on the back gently. "You can do it!I will help you if you need it." Ren stared into Sadie's eyes and he calmed down.
"You can do it.You need to pass this class." The gym teacher said,Ren stepped on the diving board,putting his goggles (护目镜) over his eyes,and the blue cap hid his red hair.The whistle blew and Ren stood there as the other three swam away.Then one boy ran and pushed Ren into the water.
Sadie glared at the boy, "Why would you do that?" A minute passed by and Ren still wasn't coming up.Sadie jumped in and pulled him out of the water.She gave him CPR (心肺复苏),and it took a while until water came out of his lungs.Then finally he spat out the water and sat up,feeling dizzy.
Ren looked over at Sadie,who breathed a sigh of relief. "Oh,thank goodness!Why didn't you use your arms or legs?" Ren stared away from Sadie,looking at the bottom of the blue pool,then looking up at the gym teacher who rolled his eyes. "I can't swim.My parents never taught me as a kid.We are afraid of water."
Sadie put her hand on his shoulder. "Don't worry,I will teach you how to swim.The water is my favorite place to be." Ren thought for a while,and nodded gently.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
After gym class Sadie asked Ren gently why he was afraid of water.________
The gym teacher blew the whistle and this time Ren dived bravely.________
11.(2024秋 宝安区期末)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Navigating the vibrant city of San Diego,Deka Ismail,a young girl from the bustling Barrio Logan community,found herself ensnared in the restrictive labels of "refugee(难民) family" and "black girl." Yet,her high school chemistry class emerged like a refreshing breeze,gently disentangling her from those restrictive webs and revealing the boundless horizons of the scientific world.She began to see education as the key to transforming her destiny,envisioning herself as the architect of her own life.
Devouring the weighty tomes in the quiet corners of the San Diego library,each page became a stepping stone to her envisioned future.Forsaking the allure of parties and romantic entanglements(牵连),she recognized that her path demanded a relentless dedication surpassing her peers. "I felt compelled to be the perfect daughter in my family's eyes," she confided to a friend, "not merely doing my best,but surpassing everyone.I always sensed the world was poised,waiting for me to stumble."
Her relentless efforts bore fruit when she was accepted into the American Chemical Society's SEED program the summer before her high school graduation.In the lab,she shone like a newly discovered star,her enthusiasm and focus leaving a lasting impression on researcher Botham,who noted, "She arrived each day,ready to tackle new challenges,regardless of her prior experience."
Yet,fate often weaves unpredictable twists into its tapestry.Entering the University of California with dreams of professorship,her academic wings spread wide.But the harsh hand of reality struck unexpectedly.A phone call in her sophomore year delivered the devastating news of her father's untimely death in an accident.The pillar of her family crumbled,and Deka was thrust into the relentless grip of life's burdens.She took on part﹣time jobs to sustain her education and livelihood,but the weight of her responsibilities began to erode her resilience.
Despite the overwhelming odds,Deka refused to surrender(屈服).Like a butterfly battling a storm,her wings sodden yet still fluttering,she persevered.But fate,it seemed,was not yet done with its trials.One cold winter night,the relentless strain culminated in a diagnosis of severe depression.Her world,once again,crumbled,and this time,her strength faltered.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Yet,as despair threatened to engulf her,a spark of hope ignited within Deka's soul.________
As the seasons changed,Deka's path became a beacon of inspiration.________
12.(2024秋 太原期末) Summer vacation starting,Steve and I planned to play baseball every day,aiming to join the freshman team."If you make it into the team,I'll buy you a new baseball glove as a present."My mom's promise echoed in my mind as I excitedly waited for Steve,staring at my worn﹣out glove.
But today I had to clean Mrs.Thompson's garage first.She was weakened by old age,so my mom always volunteered me to help her.Mom wouldn't let me accept any money,thinking she didn't have much,and literally,I never minded—after all,Mrs.Thompson had knitted me five sweaters and always made me cakes.Most importantly,it was the right thing to do.
Steve came rushing out of his house,and I explained the situation.As expected,he immediately said, "Alright,I'll help."
We instantly got to work.The garage was a mess of boxes,but we gathered all our energy and soon brought the cleanup to an end.When arranging the last box,however,I nudged the shelf accidentally.Before I could react,a vase fell and crashed to the ground,broken into pieces.
I froze,my heart pounding.The vase was beautiful with delicate designs,which must have cost a fortune.Glancing at the open garage door,I suggested, "Maybe I can just sweep this up.Mrs.Thompson won't even notice."I responded fast and piled the pieces into the trash bin.But Steve's expression darkened."That's not how it works.You should tell her what happened."
I tried to justify myself,telling all the chores I'd done for Mrs.Thompson without pay.I even argued that it wasn't my responsibility to pay for something I didn't destroy on purpose.However,Steve wasn't buying it,his voice firm."You're better than that.Be responsible."
We stood there in silence,the weight of the moment hanging between us.Just then,Mrs.Thompson walked in,giving us a scare.She smiled warmly,unaware of the whole thing."Boys,I baked a chocolate cake.Now come in for a piece.I really appreciate all your help."
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Hesitantly,we entered the room and I noticed a gift box on the table beside the cake.______
Having said that,I waited nervously for Mrs.Thompson to speak up.______
13.(2025 广宁县模拟) In our weekly staff meeting,our editor Ashley was not pleased with the quality of our reporting."Our readership is way down.We need better stories for this Thursday's school newspaper.Does anybody have any ideas?"she said.
I handed her my article about our basketball team beating Deerfield High School the previous night by one point."Sports stories are fun,"she said,"but not good enough for the front page.We need something to really get people's attention."
After our meeting,we left the newsroom together and heard someone screaming,"Perry is missing!"Perry was a big red parrot and had been our school mascot(吉祥物) for ten years.He played an important role in students"lives,both in and out of class.He had also been a constant presence at school events,inspiring a sense of unity among students.
Everyone gathered around Perry's empty cage,heartbroken.Suddenly,a student from the crowd came over and showed me a photo. "You're a reporter for the school paper,right?I happened to take this yesterday,"he said.In the photo was a Deerfield High School basketball player with something large hidden under his shirt around the size of a parrot.
"He must have stolen Perry to get back at us for winning the game!"Ashley cried.We hurried back to the newsroom,agreeing to run the photo on the front page with the headline "Deerfield Stole Perry.""This is just the story we need.Everyone will read it,"Ashley said confidently.
After she left,I took a closer look at the photo.The clock in the background read 4:15 pm,but our game against Deerfield hadn't started until 4:30 pm.Why would the boy have taken Perry before we even played?An uneasy feeling came over me that we might have falsely accused someone.
I went to Perry's usual caretaker to ask if he knew Perry was missing."He's not missing.He's retired.He's ready for some quieter days,"he said.Learning the truth,I immediately told Ashley and suggested writing a story to say goodbye to Perry.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
To my surprise,Ashley insisted on reporting the "Deerfield Stole Perry" story.______
On Thursday,the paper came out with the headline "Bye﹣Bye,Perry" on the front page.______
14.(2025 高要区一模)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The school festival was buzzing with excitement,all because of a new contest called "Innovate Your Way." This contest was all about making a costume that was as unique and creative as possible,showcasing what one loves the most.
Lily Adams was surrounded by classmates with cool ideas.One classmate said excitedly, "I'm going to be the whole solar system,with planets circling around me!" One boasted (吹嘘), "I'll redefine innovation.I will become a walking smartphone from the future,showing the digital age with interactive apps and games."
Meanwhile,another one came up with the idea to dress up as a live weather forecast.He planned to attach LED screens to his outfit,displaying different weather patterns.This costume would not just show the weather but also change with real﹣time updates,combining technology and creativity in a way the festival had never seen.
Feeling overwhelmed,Lily wasn't sure what to do.Her friends had such amazing ideas,and she hadn't even picked a costume yet.She shared her worries with her friend Noah,saying," I can't make up my mind.Every idea seems too hard to do or just not exciting enough."
Noah,always wise,had a great suggestion. "Why don't you make a costume about gardening?You love it,and it's something unique to you," he said.Lily was unsure because the contest was just a few days away. "I don't know if there's enough time to make something like that from the beginning," she worried.But Noah encouraged her, "You have a special talent for making something wonderful out of simple things.Use what's around you."
Inspired by Noah's words,Lily thought over her collection of plants and flowers.Arriving home,she noticed the pile of old gardening magazines and a forgotten green tarp(防水布)in the garage.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
As Lily looked through the magazines,an idea began to take root.________
The day of the contest finally arrived.________
15.(2025 郑州模拟)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Eight﹣year﹣old Lily was a curious little girl who loved exploring the world around her.One day,Lily's mother asked her to go to the store to buy some groceries.Excited by the thought of being responsible,Lily happily walked along the streets,her small steps filled with purpose and enthusiasm.The sun was shining,and the air was filled with the scent(香味) of freshly baked bread from the nearby bakery,adding to her excitement.
As Lily walked into the store,she noticed a beautiful container of pink candies on the cashier's desk.The candies were wrapped in sparking wrappers,and they seemed to call out to her.She really wanted to buy them.However,there was one problem﹣she didn't have enough money to pay.
Then,Lily came up with an idea.She told herself it was just a little white lie and that no one would ever know.It seemed like a simple solution to her dilemma(困境).She quickly put the candies into her shopping bag and paid for the groceries,hoping that her secret would be safe.
That evening,Lily couldn't help but feel regretful in her heart.The excitement of the day had faded,replaced by a heavy feeling of guilt.She knew that what she had done wasn't right.Her conscience(良知) was eating away at her,causing her to lose sleep and feel restless.The candies,once a source of joy,now sat heavily in her stomach,a reminder of her actions.
The next morning,Lily's mother noticed her daughter's troubled expression and asked her what was wrong.Lily hesitated for a moment,the weight of her secret almost too much to bear.But then,the truth poured out of her mouth like a waterfall.
"Mom,I have something to tell you,"Lily said,tears welling up in her eyes,"I took some candies from the store without paying for them.I'm really sorry."Her voice was small,but the sincerity in her words was clear.
Her mother's face softened,and she pulled Lily into a warm hug."Lily,I am proud of you for telling me the truth,"her mother said gently."But it's important to understand that lying,even about something small,can hurt others and ourselves.Let's go back to the store and make things right."
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Shortly,Lily and her mother were back at the store.________
From that day on,Lily understood the importance of telling the truth.________
16.(2024秋 河南期末)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Being helpful is a very good quality,but sometimes being overly enthusiastic can also cause trouble to others.
It was the night before the summer break,and it was raining cats and dogs,but I wasn't bothered because Justin,Wendy,Crystal,Kevin and I were texting each other about our upcoming trip to Niagara Falls.Everybody was so engaged in brainstorming ideas about what to bring along.Suddenly,Justin came up with a brilliant idea.He suggested that we should assign roles to each one of us so that we could minimize everyone's workload.I was assigned the babysitter's role because I was the most careful person among us.
When the sun was right above our heads,we departed for our destination.On our way,I served as the babysitter.I collected hundreds of junk food wraps and guided us into every single rest station when needed.As Wendy and I were lining up for the washroom,I noticed how a little girl always got pushed out of the line,so I let her stand in front of me.When we all got back to the car,Wendy praised me as a kind and responsible member,which made me feel very proud of myself.I was happy.On the way,I saw Crystal holding something that looked like a sun hat.Justin asked Crystal what it was,but because I was too excited,I didn't catch Crystal's answer clearly.It seemed that she mentioned her mother.
When we arrived at our hotel,it was already six in the evening.Since no one was hungry,we decided to rest and get ready for next day's adventure.However,I,as an exception,was too excited,thinking about spending the next few days.I couldn't close my eyes.I decided to go to Crystal's room since she was playing some music there.Crystal was weaving(编织) the thing that I saw in the car.As I was watching her weave,time passed by like an arrow,and Crystal unintentionally fell asleep before she finished her sun hat.
注意:(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Seeing Crystal fall quickly into her dream,I suddenly came up with an idea.________
Instead of receiving Crystal's appreciation,I was awakened by a shake the next morning.________
17.(2024秋 沧州期末)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was a cold November night.The air was fresh,and the autumn leaves made a pattern of red and yellow on the streets.I was walking home from school,my mind lost in thoughts of upcoming exams,when I noticed an elderly man struggling with a heavy box at the corner of the street.He was out of breath,his face flushed (红) from the effort,and it was clear he needed help.
I approached him,my heart filled with sympathy."Sir,do you need some assistance?"I asked,trying to sound as polite as possible.The man looked up,his eyes meeting mine with a mix of relief and gratitude.
"Could you please help me carry this box to my apartment?It's just around the corner," he replied,his voice shaky but warm.I nodded and,together,we lifted the box and began our slow journey to his home.
As we walked,I learned that his name was Mr.Chen,and he had recently moved into the neighborhood.His children lived far away,and he was trying to settle into his new home alone.The box contained his most treasured belongings,books and photographs that held memories of a lifetime.
Our path was not easy.The box was heavy,and the streets were wet from rain.We slipped once or twice,but we managed to keep our footing and our spirits high.Mr.Chen told me stories of his youth,and I shared my dreams for the future.It was a strange connection,formed in the struggle of a single moment.
Finally,we reached his apartment building,and I helped him carry the box up the stairs.He insisted that I come in for a cup of tea as a thank﹣you.Over hot drinks,I told him that all of my family members are literature enthusiasts.My uncle works at a publishing house.He said he loves writing poetry.Then we exchanged contact information with each other.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在的相应位置作答。
As I left,Mr.Chen handed me a pile of papers,on which were poems from his youth.______
Upon hearing this good news,I contacted Mr.Chen to inquire if he would be willing to publish it.______
18.(2025 景德镇二模)阅读下列材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
As Mom and I stood in line waiting to cash out at the retail store,I studied the customer in front of us who was reading the magazines to our left.She was young,maybe early twenties,but she already had a stoop (驼背),looking very tired.
The items in her cart included the cheapest cuts of meat and meal materials like pasta,rice,and potatoes.Day﹣old bread,bargain soap,and inexpensive shampoo (洗发剂)completed her purchases ﹣﹣well,almost.In the corner sat a little doll and a pretty dress that was 50 percent off.She continued to look at the magazines as we waited,and more people lined up behind us.She turned around and asked Mom for help.
"I'm sorry to bother you," she began shyly. "But can you tell me how much this is?I forgot my glasses at home." "Of course," Mom said.When Mom finally found the small print and told her,she sighed quietly and put it back.
"Next!" The cashier called and she moved forward to begin her trade.When the store employee finally figured everything out and told her the cost,the woman's face paled.It was obvious that she didn't have enough money,and she scanned her groceries to see what she could do without.One by one,she removed things,but it was still not enough.She continued to take much﹣needed goods out while the cashier patiently deducted (扣除)things.
The child's items remained in the cart,however.In fact,the palm of her other hand lay protectively across them,as if she didn't want to be tempted to abandon them.The woman finally paid,and moved down to bag them.
When our turn came,Mom pointed to the pile of items the woman had taken out,added all our meat and fresh milk,and whispered "Separate bags,same bill please" to the cashier.She nodded,even though it was a "pack your own" kind of store.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为 150 左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1:
The cashier went on with her work,and Mom and I picked up all the items.
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Paragraph 2:
The woman turned and looked at my mom in surprise.
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19.(2025 乌鲁木齐一模)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
This summer my swim team had to run the Snack Stand to raise money for swim meets and equipment.But Coach Edward called us all together and said,"I just got word that the Snack Stand will be canceled through August."No Snack Stand meant no money for swim meets!Coach Edward continued,"I'm just not sure what's going to happen.For now,let's jump into that pool and get swimming!"
The next morning,practice felt really weird.None of us were swimming our best,and even though Coach Edward was smiling as usual,we could tell he was worried.When we got out of the pool for a break,Daniel,captain of our swimming team,said,"I've been wondering if we can't run the Snack Stand,maybe we can think of other ways to raise money.""Good idea,"we all agreed.
At first,Coach Edward wasn't sure about doing a big fundraiser.But once he saw how much we all wanted to help,he said,"OK!Let's go for it!"That's when we started brainstorming ideas for the Big Stand."We could have a Fun in the Sun Lemonade Stand,"I suggested."I could bring my karaoke machine from home,and the songs could be about swimming and water,"said one team member.So many kids offered to make fish cookies.We spent so much time getting everything ready and were positive that it would be a grand success.
I was squeezing lemons for lemonade the day before our big event when I saw a very dark cloud outside the kitchen window."Uh﹣oh!That's not a rain cloud,is it?"I asked my mom."Rain would be a disaster!It could ruin everything.""You know what they say,"she answered."Hope for the best,but prepare for the worst.""Hmm,"I said.The next day,as soon as arriving at the pool grounds,Daniel and I set up our Fun in the Sun Lemonade Stand.We had stacks of cups,and a fancy drink filled with lemonade.The weather started out just fine.Even more people than we'd expected sang songs,and gobbled cookies.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Unluckily,a few clouds suddenly turned into a bunch of dark ones.________
After a while,the rain let up,the sun popped back out,and Coach Edward made a fantastic announcement.________
20.(2025 重庆模拟) I closed my eyes and lifted my face towards the sun.I breathed deeply,expanding my lungs with fresh spring air.I was alive.
I hadn't been able to walk the entire distance around the lake a couple months before.I was just finishing up with treatments for stage three breast cancer when we started these walks.My body was weak and painful.My mind was foggy and forgetful.I would get lost easily if my husband wasn't there with me.
My husband,who heard my big breath intake,asked if I was okay.I opened my eyes,looked at the concerned expression on his face and smiled.I reassured him that I was indeed fine;normal in fact.In that moment I felt happy.
As I was looking over at him,my eyes caught the sight of two women running.I focused on their movements.I watched with great attention as their feet hit the road in quickened movements.They wore black,pink and green athletic wear,smiling and laughing as they ran,they were happy that afternoon too.
Walking was getting easier for me now.It wasn't getting my heart﹣rate up anymore.My doctor said I needed a good workout for my heart.In the days that followed,I couldn't stop thinking about running.With encouragement from my husband,I signed up for a learn﹣to﹣run class.
On the first day of classes,we were to do intervals(间隙) of running one minute,followed by walking for two minutes.That sounded easy enough.My enthusiasm soon turned to shock and panic.About 30 seconds into the run,I couldn't breathe.I was struggling to get enough air in.My heart was pounding.I could hear the pulses in my ears.Sweat was forming onto my forehead and under my arms,making me uncomfortable.How could this be healthy?I wondered.I felt like I was having a heart attack.Doubt flooded inside my head.I was so out of shape and felt silly for being there.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I am not sure why I went back to the second class.
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That race inspired something in me.
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2025年高考英语高频易错提高卷 读后续写
参考答案与试题解析
一.书面表达(共20小题)
1.(2025 海陵区校级一模)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My friend invited me to a trapeze (高空秋千) class.I was doubtful because of a lack of courage and a short of self﹣confidence,but her enthusiasm and assurances of strict safety rules won me over.
I had been fearful of heights since elementary school and avoiding my fear of heights became second nature.But here I was,at age twenty﹣six,facing my fear of heights in a rather extreme way.I had come around to the idea of trying trapeze.I figured it wasn't much different from swinging (舞动) on the monkey bars as a kid.One difficulty I didn't expect was the ladder (梯子).In order to reach the trapeze,I had to climb up a twenty﹣two﹣foot ladder.
I could hear one of my classmates expressing her impatience with my slow climb up the ladder. "If she's afraid of heights,why did she sign up for a trapeze class?" However,my friend was at the top of the ladder,trying to encourage me.Besides,his distraction techniques helped to take my mind off my dangerous task.I found a rhythm(节奏) and kept going.With a slow and steady pace,I made it to the top.The cheers from my classmates rang out below.
An instructor told me to step to the edge of the platform.He reminded me of the safety rules,including the net below that would catch me at the bottom.He also asked me to listen to the directions while in the air,so I could perform a trick.
As the instructor counted down,I took a deep breath and pushed off the platform,swinging back and forth.At that moment,I lost awareness of time and space.Fortunately,the instructor's voice came over the loudspeaker,giving me step﹣by﹣step instructions for performing a trick.Instead of doubting my inability to perform the trick,I took his directions one step at a time.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
During my flight on the trapeze,my fear didn't completely leave me.
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This experience opened up a new way of seeing myself and approaching other challenges.
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【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】本文以人物为线索展开,文章主要讲述了作者的一次高空秋千体验,她因为过去的恐高症一度不敢尝试,但是好友的鼓励和安全规则的保障让她决定尝试。虽然一开始走梯子时遇到了困难,但最终还是完成了任务。这次体验让她从中学习到了如何克服恐惧、相信自己,也让她更愿意尝试新事物。最终,她完成了其他类似的挑战,并希望能够一步一步地走出自己的舒适区。
高分句型一:I focused my thoughts on the instructor's voice instead of my internal dialogue about what could go wrong.
翻译:我把注意力集中在教练的声音上,而不是关于可能出问题的内部对话上。
分析:本句使用了what引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二:I couldn't believe that I had actually done it!
翻译:我简直不敢相信我居然做到了!
分析:本句使用了that引导的宾语从句。
【解答】During my flight on the trapeze,my fear didn't completely leave me.My palms were clammy,my heart was racing,and my mouth was dry.But I turned down the dial of my fear so I could be present in the experience.I focused my thoughts on the instructor's voice instead of my internal dialogue about what could go wrong.【高分句型一】In the end,I successfully completed the task.I couldn't believe that I had actually done it!【高分句型二】(作者第一次完成高空秋千过程中的紧张状态)
This experience opened up a new way of seeing myself and approaching other challenges.I became more capable of overcoming my fear and learned to believe in myself.I became more open to try new things.After my trapeze flight,I took an archery class,went on my first kayaking trip,and hiked along a 200﹣foot cliff in Nova Scotia.While these experiences made my heart pound,I completed them,one step at a time.Whether my steps were small or big on the ground or in midair,I wanted to keep stepping out of my comfort zone.(作者在完成高空秋千后所发生的改变,参加了其他的各项活动,并且本段描写作者个人的感悟)
【点评】(1)品读原文,确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路,通过精读文章,找到该篇文章的写作线索。
(2)仔细审题,明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此次短文续写的具体要求,如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。续写段落的首句提示,这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
(3)回扣原文,揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求,再次快速阅读短文,抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思路。
(4)拟写草稿,修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后,最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时,注意句子结构的多样性,语言的丰富性,并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用,使上下文连贯。
2.(2024秋 武汉期末)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之成为一篇完整的短文。
Today I turn eight,so whatever I say goes.
Grandma was gardening when we pulled up for the party.I ran straight to her. "Happy birthday,sweetie!" She squeezed me into a hug,whispering about my favorite chocolate﹣strawberry cake she made,and her intention to pressure my parents to allow me to play video games,which hadn't happened since I was six.Then,I noticed Grandpa,who contrary to my grandma,always sits outside and complains how the air isn't fresh like in the mountains where he often went hiking for days at youth and that kids have no respect,claiming that all they do is play video games.Now on the porch (门廊) sat grandpa,like a sack of wrinkly(皱的) onions,asleep in a rocking chair,snoring like thunders,on his only grandson's birthday!
"Wake up,sleepyhead!" I mounted the porch steps,only to be greeted by more snores. "Fine," I groaned, "we'll have the cake without you!" It was Grandma's request to wait ten more minutes that brought me to tears.An angry hurricane spinning up inside me,I exploded.My fists clenched,I'd been sobbing and screaming until Dad held my shoulder firmly.Mom touched my hair,instructing me to take a.deep breath and relax.
Finally,Grandpa was awake,coughing,snorting,and squinting(眯眼看) right at me like an angry goat. "Boy," he spoke with a rough low voice, "come here." He was struggling to his feet when Grandma hurried over with his walker,which Grandpa usually pushes about 0.3 miles per hour. "You and I," said Grandpa, "are going on a walk." "NO!" I shouted. "You can't tell me what to do!" But Grandpa kept looking at me with that scary,scary look on his face.Not even Grandma came to my rescue.Unwilling as I was,I gave in and dragged myself forward.Then we were inching down the path into the garden,I expected him to lecture me cease being a parents were very busy.I was too confused to respond.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
"Help me sit there",he demanded,pointing to a bench.________
It hit me how selfish I was.________
【答案】"Help me sit there",he demanded,pointing to a bench. Considering that I can do whatever on my birthday,I was about to turn him down when his shaking legs and bent knees forced me to grip his arms and lower him down nice and slow. "Thank you!" he said,breathing hard like he had climbed a hill.Then he talked about his youth and his adventures in the mountains.I listened intently and asked good questions,realizing that there was more to him than just the grumpy old man I had seen earlier.
It hit me how selfish I was. I had been so focused on my own desires and frustrations that I had failed to see Grandpa as a person with his own stories and struggles.Thinking of all the attempts he had made to connect with me,I realized how impatient and disrespectful I was.It was then that I resolved to be more understanding and patient.When we returned to the party for the cake,I apologized to Grandpa and was responded with a big hug of forgiveness.In cheers of "happy birthday," I shed tears again,but it somewhat felt more like my birthday than ever.
【分析】这是一篇记叙文。作者八岁生日在奶奶家庆祝,爷爷的抱怨和呼噜让"我"愤怒,后来爷爷醒来要求与"我"散步。
高分句型一:Considering that I can do whatever on my birthday,I was about to turn him down when his shaking legs and bent knees forced me to grip his arms and lower him down nice and slow.
翻译:考虑到我可以在生日那天做任何事情,我正要拒绝他,这时他颤抖的腿和弯曲的膝盖迫使我抓住他的手臂,慢慢地把他放下。
分析:be about to do sth.when...正要做某事,这时......
高分句型二:Thank you!" he said,breathing hard like he had climbed a hill.
翻译:"谢谢你!"他说,呼吸急促,就像爬上了一座山。
分析:用明喻这一修辞手法表示爷爷的劳累,like像。
高分句型三:I had been so focused on my own desires and frustrations that I had failed to see Grandpa as a person with his own stories and struggles.
翻译:我太专注于自己的欲望和挫折,以至于我没有把爷爷看作一个有自己故事和挣扎的人......
分析:so...that...如此以致于......
高分句型四:It was then that I resolved to be more understanding and patient.
翻译:就在那时,我下定决心要更加理解和耐心。
分析:使用强调句型it was +被强调部分+that......
【解答】"Help me sit there",he demanded,pointing to a bench. Considering that I can do whatever on my birthday,I was about to turn him down when his shaking legs and bent knees forced me to grip his arms and lower him down nice and slow.【高分句型:be about to do sth.when...正要做某事,这时......】 "Thank you!" he said,breathing hard like he had climbed a hill.【高分句型:用明喻这一修辞手法表示爷爷的劳累】Then he talked about his youth and his adventures in the mountains.I listened intently and asked good questions,realizing that there was more to him than just the grumpy old man I had seen earlier.(描写作者和爷爷坐在长椅上的情景)
It hit me how selfish I was. I had been so focused on my own desires and frustrations that I had failed to see Grandpa as a person with his own stories and struggles..【高分句型:so...that...如此以致于......】Thinking of all the attempts he had made to connect with me,I realized how impatient and disrespectful I was.It was then that I resolved to be more understanding and patient..【高分句型:使用强调句型it was +被强调部分+that......】When we returned to the party for the cake,I apologized to Grandpa and was responded with a big hug of forgiveness.In cheers of "happy birthday," I shed tears again,but it somewhat felt more like my birthday than ever.(描写作者的反思和反思后的行为)
【点评】(1)品读原文,确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路,通过精读文章,找到该篇文章的写作线索。
(2)仔细审题,明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此次短文续写的具体要求,续写段落的首句提示,这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
(3)回扣原文,揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求,再次快速阅读短文,抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思路。
(4)拟写草稿,修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后,最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时,注意句子结构的多样性,语言的丰富性,并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用,使上下文连贯。
3.(2024秋 江西期末)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The side door of the small aircraft was opened wide,and the wind rushed through the cargo hold (货仓).Packed tightly were fourteen silent people.Two of them were my adult children.Holding themselves perfectly still,they stared out at the endless sky.
When we reached a height of 4,300 feet,my son's face turned pale as he carefully inched next to the opening,leaned (倾斜) sideways,and fell out of the airplane.Something went cold in my heart when I realized he was gone.But,only seconds later,instructions were being barked,and my daughter suddenly appeared in the same space just occupied by my son.She seemed a little nervous and then fell away into the wild blue sky after her brother.
For a quick moment,a desperate fear overcame me,and I wondered if that was the last time I would see them and whether they would land safely.But the thought soon passed as I felt a strong pull on my pack and was moved into position by our instructor.
With a big birthday approaching,two of my adult children had chosen to surprise me with an unforgettable way.I'd wanted to chicken out once we reached the airport,but when I heard a woman celebrating her fiftieth wedding anniversary decided to skydive,I thought that I had the courage to do it,too.
The wind blew louder as we went up further,each second feeling like an eternity (永生).My heart pounded in my chest quickly.Below me,the world seemed so distant,a patchwork of green fields and shining water.As I watched my children disappear into the vastness,a part of me wanted to scream,to pull them back into the safety of the aircraft.But another part,a deeper part,understood the excitement they sought and the freedom they had although they were afraid before skydiving.
注意:(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The instructor's voice showed it was my turn.________
My son and daughter rushed to me when I landed.________
【答案】 The instructor's voice showed it was my turn.Taking a deep breath,I gathered all my courage.With a final glance at the world below,I let go and plunged into the open air.The wind rushed past me,a deafening roar in my ears.For a split second,panic threatened to overtake me,but then an indescribable sense of freedom washed over me.I felt weightless,like a bird soaring through the sky.The ground below seemed to rush up towards me,yet I was calm,enjoying this thrilling moment.
My son and daughter rushed to me when I landed.Their faces were beaming with excitement and pride. "Mom,you were amazing!" my daughter exclaimed,giving me a tight hug.My son nodded in agreement,his eyes shining. "We were so worried,but you did it!" he said.I looked at them,filled with a sense of accomplishment and love.This shared experience had brought us closer.We laughed and talked about our adventures in the sky,knowing that this was a birthday I would never forget,a day when we had all faced our fears and found a new kind of freedom together.
【分析】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者和她的两个孩子以及其他人一起乘坐一架小型飞机去跳伞。在4300英尺的高空,她的儿子和女儿跳了下来,起初吓坏了作者。受到另一位跳伞者的启发,这为犹豫不决的作者鼓起勇气,在轮到她的时候跳了下来,经历了恐慌和自由的混合。跳伞着陆后,她的孩子们又兴奋又骄傲地向她冲来。这次共同的跳伞使作者的生日令人难忘,并加强了他们的家庭纽带,因为他们都面对恐惧,找到了新的自由。
高分句型一:The ground below seemed to rush up towards me,yet I was calm,enjoying this thrilling moment.
翻译:下面的地面似乎向我冲了过来,但我很平静,享受着这惊心动魄的时刻。
分析;运用了现在分词短语enjoying this thrilling moment作状语。
高分句型二:We laughed and talked about our adventures in the sky,knowing that this was a birthday I would never forget,a day when we had all faced our fears and found a new kind of freedom together.
翻译:我们笑着谈论我们在天上的冒险,知道这是一个我永远不会忘记的生日,一个我们一起面对恐惧并找到一种新的自由的日子。
分析;运用了现在分词短语knowing that this was a birthday I would never forget作状语,that引导的宾语从句,省略关系代词引导的限制性定语从句I would never forget以及when引导的限制性定语从句。
【解答】 The instructor's voice showed it was my turn.Taking a deep breath,I gathered all my courage.With a final glance at the world below,I let go and plunged into the open air.The wind rushed past me,a deafening roar in my ears.For a split second,panic threatened to overtake me,but then an indescribable sense of freedom washed over me.I felt weightless,like a bird soaring through the sky.The ground below seemed to rush up towards me,yet I was calm,enjoying this thrilling moment.【高分句型一】(作者跳伞之前的心理过程)
My son and daughter rushed to me when I landed.Their faces were beaming with excitement and pride. "Mom,you were amazing!" my daughter exclaimed,giving me a tight hug.My son nodded in agreement,his eyes shining. "We were so worried,but you did it!" he said.I looked at them,filled with a sense of accomplishment and love.This shared experience had brought us closer.We laughed and talked about our adventures in the sky,knowing that this was a birthday I would never forget,a day when we had all faced our fears and found a new kind of freedom together.【高分句型二】(作者成功地完成跳伞以及作者的感受)
【点评】(1)品读原文,确定文章线索每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路,通过精读文章,找到该篇文章的写作线索。(2)仔细审题,明确续写要求一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此次短文续写的具体要求,如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。续写段落的首句提示,这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。(3)回扣原文,揣摩续写思路根据文章后面的要求,再次快速阅读短文,抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思路。(4)拟写草稿,修改错词病句在确定了思路和内容之后,最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时,注意句子结构的多样性,语言的丰富性,并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用,使上下文连贯。
4.(2025 江西一模)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
In a small town,an elderly woman named Agnes lives alone.Though in her late 60s,Agnes still tries hard to take care of herself and run a small farm.However,she is finding herself struggling to maintain all this.
One winter morning,as frost painted the windows with delicate designs,Agnes woke up to unsettling silence —The power was out,and so was the heating. "Another signal of struggling," Agnes thought to herself.Feeling cold,she wrapped herself in a thick coat and decided to go to the local cafe for a cup of coffee and some warmth.
As she stepped out into the biting cold,Agnes felt the pain inside her bones.The streets were unusually quiet,with only a few brave souls braving the elements.She made her way to the cafe,her breath visible in the frosty air.Upon entering,she was greeted by the good smell of fresh coffee.She ordered her usual and found a seat by the window.
As she drank her coffee,Agnes noticed a young man shaking outside.He seemed to be debating whether to come in or not.The moment she saw his face,she recognized it was Charlie,who used to enjoy coffee in the cafe and pay for her coffee before they started a pleasant conversation. "There must be something wrong with him," Agnes thought.She decided to buy Charlie a cup of coffee.
Holding a steaming cup of coffee,Agnes approached Charlie and offered him the cup. "Here,this might help warm you up," Agnes said gently.
Charlie looked at Agnes with surprise and gratitude. "Thank you," he stammered,his hands wrapping around the cup as if it were a lifeline. "I…I lost my job and home.I was trying to...find a job..." Agnes patted him on the arm and said softly, "We all have struggles,but there's always hope."
注意:(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
With an idea in mind,Agnes invited Charlie into the cafe.________
During his stay with Agnes,Charlie tried to pay back.________
【答案】 With an idea in mind,Agnes invited Charlie into the cafe.They found a quiet corner and sat down.Agnes listened intently as Charlie shared his story.He had been laid off a month ago and had been struggling to make ends meet ever since.Agnes,seeing herself in his struggle,offered him a place to stay for a few days. "I have an extra room that no one uses," she said with a warm smile. "You can stay there while you get back on your feet." Charlie hesitated but finally accepted her offer,his eyes filled with relief and gratitude.
During his stay with Agnes,Charlie tried to pay back.He began by helping out around the farm.Each day,he would wake up early and assist Agnes with her chores,feeding the animals,repairing fences,and even chopping wood for the fireplace.Slowly but surely,the farm began to look better and Agnes felt less burdened.Charlie also lined up job interviews and finally landed a job at a local grocery store.The day he moved into his own place,he and Agnes shared a heartfelt goodbye. "You have no idea how much you've helped me," Charlie said,tears in his eyes.Agnes,hugging him tightly,replied, "We both helped each other.Remember,there's always hope."
【分析】本文以人物为线索展开。在一个小镇上,60多岁的阿格尼斯独自生活并经营着一个小农场,但渐渐感到力不从心。一个寒冬的早晨,停电让她的家失去了暖气,阿格尼斯决定去当地的咖啡馆取暖。在咖啡馆里,她遇到了曾经熟悉的年轻人查理,他因失业和无家可归而彷徨。阿格尼斯为他买了一杯咖啡,并安慰他说,尽管生活艰难,但总有希望。查理感动不已,感受到了一丝温暖与鼓励。
高分句型一:Agnes,seeing herself in his struggle,offered him a place to stay for a few days.
翻译:阿格尼斯看到了他的挣扎,就给了他一个地方住几天。
分析:运用了现在分词短语seeing herself in his struggle作原因状语、不定式短语to stay for a few days作后置定语。
高分句型二:Agnes,hugging him tightly,replied, "We both helped each other.Remember,there's always hope."
翻译:阿格尼斯紧紧地拥抱着他,回答说:"我们互相帮助。记住,希望总是有的。"
分析:运用了现在分词短语hugging him tightly作状语。
【解答】 With an idea in mind,Agnes invited Charlie into the cafe.They found a quiet corner and sat down.Agnes listened intently as Charlie shared his story.He had been laid off a month ago and had been struggling to make ends meet ever since.Agnes,seeing herself in his struggle,offered him a place to stay for a few days.【高分句型一】 "I have an extra room that no one uses," she said with a warm smile. "You can stay there while you get back on your feet." Charlie hesitated but finally accepted her offer,his eyes filled with relief and gratitude.(描写阿格尼斯了解查理的情况后对于查理的帮助。)
During his stay with Agnes,Charlie tried to pay back.He began by helping out around the farm.Each day,he would wake up early and assist Agnes with her chores,feeding the animals,repairing fences,and even chopping wood for the fireplace.Slowly but surely,the farm began to look better and Agnes felt less burdened.Charlie also lined up job interviews and finally landed a job at a local grocery store.The day he moved into his own place,he and Agnes