【高考押题卷】2025年高考英语高频易错提高卷 应用文写作（含答案与解析）
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2025年高考英语高频易错提高卷 应用文写作
一．书面表达（共20小题）
1．（2024秋 东湖区校级期末）假定你是李华，上周五你校举办了"民俗文化校园行"活动，邀请了民间艺人给同学们展示各种传统手艺。请你给英国笔友Andrew写一封邮件分享这次活动，内容包括：
（1）活动内容；
（2）你的感想。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Andrew，
I'm writing to share with you a themed activity called Folk Culture Campus Tour in our school last Friday.________
Yours，
Li Hua
2．（2024秋 赣州期末）假定你是李华。外教Ryan建议你校每周二试行"全英文日"活动，要求所有同学在校园内用英文交流一天。请用英文写信给外教，表达你的看法并提出建议，内容包括：
（1）你是否赞同外教的提议；
（2）简述理由；
（3）提出建议。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan，
_________
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
3．（2024秋 仓山区校级期末）你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以My Perspective on Online Learning为题写一篇发言稿参赛，内容包括：
（1）分析在线学习优势与不足；
（2）提出学习建议。
注意：
（1）词数100左右；
（2）题目和首句已为你写好。
My Perspective on Online Learning
Hello，everyone.It is my privilege to deliver a speech themed"online learning".________
4．（2024秋 宝安区期末）假设你是李华，你最近在esteemed store购买了一款高端智能手机，但使用不久后发现手机存在严重质量问题，如频繁死机、电池续航差等。你决定向客户服务部门写一封投诉信，引用乔 拜登（Joe Biden）的"Take a measure of me and my heart"，表达你对该问题的失望，并希望对方理解你的困扰，尽快解决问题。
要求：引用并结合实际，表达期望，100词左右。
Dear Customer Service，
________
Sincerely，
Li Hua
参考词汇：Poor battery life：电池续航差system halted：死机
5．（2024秋 辛集市期末）假定你是李华，你校图书馆新开设"小组学习室（Group Learning Room）"，请你给你的留学生同学Michael写一封信，邀请他一同体验，内容包括：
（1）位置与开放时间；
（2）室内设施和功能。（如：配备了联网的现代化电子设施，方便开展小组项目）
注意：
（1）词数80左右；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Michael，
Good news!________
Yours
Li Hua
6．（2024秋 鼓楼区校级期末） 假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Beth最近来到中国留学，她想学习中国书法，发邮件向你求教。请给她回封邮件，内容包括：
（1）表示支持；
（2）推荐老师。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Beth，
Glad to know that you want to learn Chinese Calligraphy.
______
Yours，
Li Hua
7．（2024秋 天心区校级期末）假定你是李华，你校英语角举办了主题为"Making Self﹣management a Way of Life"的演讲比赛。请写一篇演讲稿参赛，内容包括：
（1）你的理解；
（2）你的建议；
（3）你的号召。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
8．（2024秋 昌平区期末）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国笔友Jim所在的学校在举办"世界文化周"活动。作为中国优秀文化的爱好者，Jim负责组织中国文化节（Chinese Culture Festival），他向你寻求相关建议。请用英文给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）推荐活动内容；
（2）简要说明理由。
注意：（1）词数100左右；
（2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
________
Yours，
Li Hua
9．（2025 湖南二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The sun was setting，casting a golden light over the dense forest.Lily and her friends，James and Emily，were lost in the wilds，their hearts heavy with fear and uncertainty.They had been exploring the unexplored for days，but a wrong turn had led them off the course.
The air was filled with the whispering of insects and the rustling （沙沙声） of leaves in the wind.Lily held her compass （指南针） tightly，but it seemed to be swinging in circles，offering no clear direction.James，their fearless leader，scanned the horizon for any sign of civilization，but the only thing visible was the shades of trees stretching into the distance.
Emily's face was pale，her eyes filled with tears.She grabbed a branch tightly，as if it could provide some comfort in this moment of desperation.Lily reached out and grasped her hand，offering a silent promise.
"We'll find our way，" James said，his voice steady. "Just stay close and trust each other."
Just then，they heard a distant roar （咆哮） that shook the ground beneath their feet.
The roar grew louder，echoing through the forest like a thunderclap.Lily's heart skipped a beat，and she tightened her grip on Emily's hand.James raised his arm，signaling them to stay silent and still.
Slowly，the source of the roar emerged from the shadows.It was a huge bear，its fur a mixture of brown and black，and its eyes flashing with a violent light.The bear smelled the air，and then its gaze settled on the three friends.
James moved forward，his hands raised in a calming gesture. "Stay still，" he whispered. "Don't make any sudden movements."
Lily's mind raced.She knew they had to find a way to escape，but with the bear blocking their path，every option seemed impossible.Suddenly，she spotted a small stream nearby，its water glinting in the fading light.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
"The stream!" She shouted in a low excited voice.________
Relief flooded through their bodies as they continued their downstream journey.________
10．（2025 苏州模拟） 假定你是李华，学校即将举办一场英语戏剧节（English Drama Festival）。请你给外教 Mr.Smith 写一封邮件，邀请他担任评委（judge），内容包括：
（1）戏剧节的时间、地点；
（2）举办戏剧节的目的；
（3）期待他的回复。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr.Smith，
I'm Li Hua，a student from your class.______
I sincerely hope you can join us as a judge.Looking forward to your reply.
Best regards，
Li Hua
11．（2025 湖南二模）假定你是李华，你校邀请了Robert博士来校做"AⅠ.与高中学习"的主题讲座。作为主持人，请你写一篇欢迎辞，内容包括：（1）介绍专家；
（2）鼓励学生提问；
（3）表示欢迎。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
Distinguished guests and fellow students，________
12．（2024秋 太原期末）假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Karry作为"The Cleanup Teenagers"环保组织的一员，清理海岸垃圾，并获得了国家青年英雄奖。请你给他写一封邮件表示祝贺，内容包括：
（1）祝贺他获奖；
（2）表示受到启发并向他学习。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Karry，
I am glad to hear that you won the Gloria Barron National Prize for Young Heroes.______
Love，
Li Hua
13．（2024秋 长春期末）假定你是李华，应邀参加英国笔友Tim所在学校组织的冬令营活动，请你给他写一封邮件，询问相关事宜，内容包括：
（1）食宿及活动费用；
（2）相关日程及安排。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
Dear Tim，
Thank you for inviting me to the winter camp organized by your school._______
Yours，
Li Hua
14．（2025 高要区一模）假如你是李华。你校计划举行以"Fly Your Dream"为主题的英语周活动，现就活动的内容、形式征集建议。请你给负责本次活动的外教Chris写一封信，提出你的想法。
内容要包含：
（1）表达喜悦；
（2）分享你的创意及原因；
（3）表达祝愿。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris，
______
Yours，
Li Hua
15．（2025 喀什市模拟）假如你是李华，你的英语老师要求本周class report的主题为"My Favourite Traditional Chinese festival"，请写篇发言稿，内容包括：
（1）你过节的过程；
（2）你的感想。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My Favourite Traditional Chinese festival
Good morning，everyone.My favourite traditional Chinese festival________
16．（2025 郑州模拟）假定你是李华，你的新西兰笔友Alan想了解上周你校举办的英语音乐节活动的情况，请给他回复邮件，内容包括：
（1）活动目的和内容；
（2）你的看法或感想。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Alan，
I'm writing to tell you about the English Music Festival held in our school last week.________
Yours，
Li Hua
17．（2025 上饶一模） 假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Sam想向你了解中国2024年度运动员/队（athlete/team of the year 2024），请你写一封邮件回复，内容包括：
（1）你心目中的中国年度运动员/队；
（2）理由和启发。
注意：词数80左右，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Sam，
______
Yours，
Li Hua
18．（2024秋 沧州期末）假定你是李华，原定和Jim等5人组团参加即将到来的校园英文短剧比赛。不幸的是，你受伤住院无法参加排练，请你给小组负责人Jim写一封信。内容包括：
（1）说明原因；
（2）推荐李明作为你的替补参加排练；
（3）预祝取得好成绩。
注意：
（1）词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
参考词汇：排练rehearsal
Dear Jim，
______
Yours，
Li Hua
19．（2024秋 河南期末）假定你是李华，你班交换生Jason给你发邮件请你推荐一个适合一日游的地方。请给他回封邮件，内容包括：
（1）你的推荐；
（2）你的理由。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jason，
________
Yours，
Li Hua
20．（2024秋 菏泽期末） 假定你是国际学校音乐社团的负责人李华，你校准备组建一个多语种合唱团（multilingual choir），想邀请学校的英国老师Mr.Black来做音乐指导（instructor）。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）写邮件的目的；
（2）邀请理由。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr.Black，
______
Yours，
Li Hua
2025年高考英语高频易错提高卷 应用文写作
参考答案与试题解析
一．书面表达（共20小题）
1．（2024秋 东湖区校级期末）假定你是李华，上周五你校举办了"民俗文化校园行"活动，邀请了民间艺人给同学们展示各种传统手艺。请你给英国笔友Andrew写一封邮件分享这次活动，内容包括：
（1）活动内容；
（2）你的感想。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Andrew，
I'm writing to share with you a themed activity called Folk Culture Campus Tour in our school last Friday.________
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Andrew，
I'm writing to share with you a themed activity called Folk Culture Campus Tour in our school last Friday.You can't imagine how meaningful and impressive it was.
We invited three famous folk artists to this activity.One artist performed sugar painting，and we were amazed at the vivid shapes of animals made of sugar.Another artist demonstrated paper cutting.And the third taught us how to produce clay figures.We were all impressed by their excellent manual skills.
The activity turned out to be a huge success.Not only did we learn about our traditional culture，but also it enriched our school life.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：You can't imagine how meaningful and impressive it was.
译文：你无法想象这是多么有意义和令人印象深刻。
分析：这句话使用了how引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二：Not only did we learn about our traditional culture，but also it enriched our school life.
译文：我们不仅了解了我们的传统文化，而且丰富了我们的学校生活。
分析：这句话使用了not only置于句首，后面接部分倒装。
【解答】Dear Andrew，
I'm writing to share with you a themed activity called Folk Culture Campus Tour in our school last Friday.You can't imagine how meaningful and impressive it was.【高分句型一】（写信目的）
We invited three famous folk artists to this activity.One artist performed sugar painting，and we were amazed at the vivid shapes of animals made of sugar.Another artist demonstrated paper cutting.And the third taught us how to produce clay figures.We were all impressed by their excellent manual skills.（活动内容）
The activity turned out to be a huge success.Not only did we learn about our traditional culture，but also it enriched our school life.【高分句型二】（感想）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
2．（2024秋 赣州期末）假定你是李华。外教Ryan建议你校每周二试行"全英文日"活动，要求所有同学在校园内用英文交流一天。请用英文写信给外教，表达你的看法并提出建议，内容包括：
（1）你是否赞同外教的提议；
（2）简述理由；
（3）提出建议。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan，
_________
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Ryan，
I fully support the "All﹣English Day" proposal.I think it's an innovative idea.It would create a more authentic language environment，encouraging students to speak English naturally.This experience will not only improve our oral skills but also build our confidence in communicating with others in English.
However，some students might find it difficult at first.To help them adapt，we could start with simple classroom instructions in English and organize small group activities，like role﹣plays or mini﹣presentations.These steps can gradually increase their comfort level.
Overall，I believe this activity is beneficial and worth trying out.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：It would create a more authentic language environment，encouraging students to speak English naturally.
翻译：这将创造一个更真实的语言环境，鼓励学生自然地说英语。
分析：本句使用了现在分词短语encouraging students to speak English naturally作状语。
高分句型二：Overall，I believe this activity is beneficial and worth trying out.
翻译：总的来说，我认为这项活动是有益的，值得一试。
分析：本句使用了省略了that的宾语从句this activity is beneficial and worth trying out。
【解答】Dear Ryan，
I fully support the "All﹣English Day" proposal.I think it's an innovative idea.（赞同外教的提议）It would create a more authentic language environment，encouraging students to speak English naturally.【高分句型一】This experience will not only improve our oral skills but also build our confidence in communicating with others in English.（简述理由）
However，some students might find it difficult at first.To help them adapt，we could start with simple classroom instructions in English and organize small group activities，like role﹣plays or mini﹣presentations.These steps can gradually increase their comfort level.（提出建议）
Overall，I believe this activity is beneficial and worth trying out.【高分句型二】
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
3．（2024秋 仓山区校级期末）你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以My Perspective on Online Learning为题写一篇发言稿参赛，内容包括：
（1）分析在线学习优势与不足；
（2）提出学习建议。
注意：
（1）词数100左右；
（2）题目和首句已为你写好。
My Perspective on Online Learning
Hello，everyone.It is my privilege to deliver a speech themed"online learning".________
【答案】
My Perspective on Online Leaning
Hello，everyone.It is my privilege to deliver a speech themed "online learning".
It is widely accepted that online learning has its advantages and disadvantages.On the one hand，smart online learners can make full use of the most extensive educational resources to broaden the horizon.On the other hand，learning online can also provide an opportunity for misusing the web，thereby wasting a significant amount of time on video games and virtual "friendships".Weighing the advantages against the disadvantages，I suggest we set a clear schedule of our daily study plan and meanwhile it is advisable that we keep a cool mind of the treasures of the Internet and cast away the trash of false virtual dirt.
Let's be smart online learners!Thanks for listening.
【分析】高分句型一：It is widely accepted that online learning has its advantages and disadvantages.
翻译：人们普遍认为网络学习有其优点和缺点。
分析：本句使用了it作形式主语，that引导真正的主语从句。
高分句型二：Weighing the advantages against the disadvantages，I suggest we set a clear schedule of our daily study plan and meanwhile it is advisable that we keep a cool mind of the treasures of the Internet and cast away the trash of false virtual dirt.
翻译：权衡利弊，我建议我们制定一个明确的日常学习计划，同时建议我们冷静地看待互联网的宝藏，去除错误的虚拟的糟粕。
分析：本句使用了现在分词短语weighing the advantages against the disadvantages作状语，省略了that的宾语从句we set a clear schedule of our daily study plan及it作形式主语，that引导真正的主语从句。
【解答】
My Perspective on Online Leaning
Hello，everyone.It is my privilege to deliver a speech themed "online learning".
It is widely accepted that online learning has its advantages and disadvantages.【高分句型一】On the one hand，smart online learners can make full use of the most extensive educational resources to broaden the horizon.（在线学习的优势）On the other hand，learning online can also provide an opportunity for misusing the web，thereby wasting a significant amount of time on video games and virtual "friendships".（在线学习的不足）Weighing the advantages against the disadvantages，I suggest we set a clear schedule of our daily study plan and meanwhile it is advisable that we keep a cool mind of the treasures of the Internet and cast away the trash of false virtual dirt.【高分句型二】（提出学习建议）
Let's be smart online learners!Thanks for listening.
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
4．（2024秋 宝安区期末）假设你是李华，你最近在esteemed store购买了一款高端智能手机，但使用不久后发现手机存在严重质量问题，如频繁死机、电池续航差等。你决定向客户服务部门写一封投诉信，引用乔 拜登（Joe Biden）的"Take a measure of me and my heart"，表达你对该问题的失望，并希望对方理解你的困扰，尽快解决问题。
要求：引用并结合实际，表达期望，100词左右。
Dear Customer Service，
________
Sincerely，
Li Hua
参考词汇：Poor battery life：电池续航差system halted：死机
【答案】Dear Customer Service，
I hope this letter finds you well.As a loyal customer of Esteemed Store，I was deeply disappointed with my recent purchase of a high﹣end smartphone.Despite its impressive features，the device has been plagued with serious quality issues，including frequent system halted occurrences and poor battery life.
Joe Biden once said， "Take a measure of me and my heart." In the same spirit，I urge you to consider my frustration and the inconvenience this defective product has caused me.I had high expectations for this smartphone，and it is with a heavy heart that I voice my dissatisfaction.
I hereby request a full refund or，alternatively，a replacement product that functions as advertised.Your immediate and attentive response to this matter is of utmost importance.I trust that your reputable store will address this issue with the urgency and professionalism it warrants.Thank you for your understanding and prompt action.
Sincerely，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：In the same spirit，I urge you to consider my frustration and the inconvenience this defective product has caused me.
译文：本着同样的精神，我敦促您考虑我的沮丧以及这个有缺陷的产品给我带来的不便。
分析：这句话使用了省略了关系代词的定语从句this defective product has caused me。
高分句型二：I had high expectations for this smartphone，and it is with a heavy heart that I voice my dissatisfaction.
译文：我对这款智能手机抱有很高的期望，我怀着沉重的心情表达了我的不满。
分析：这句话使用了强调句It is+强调部分+that+其余部分。
【解答】Dear Customer Service，
I hope this letter finds you well.As a loyal customer of Esteemed Store，I was deeply disappointed with my recent purchase of a high﹣end smartphone.Despite its impressive features，the device has been plagued with serious quality issues，including frequent system halted occurrences and poor battery life.（问题）
Joe Biden once said， "Take a measure of me and my heart." In the same spirit，I urge you to consider my frustration and the inconvenience this defective product has caused me.【高分句型一】I had high expectations for this smartphone，and it is with a heavy heart that I voice my dissatisfaction.【高分句型二】（引用乔 拜登（Joe Biden）的"Take a measure of me and my heart"，表达你对该问题的失望）
I hereby request a full refund or，alternatively，a replacement product that functions as advertised.Your immediate and attentive response to this matter is of utmost importance.I trust that your reputable store will address this issue with the urgency and professionalism it warrants.Thank you for your understanding and prompt action.（希望对方解决问题）
Sincerely，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
5．（2024秋 辛集市期末）假定你是李华，你校图书馆新开设"小组学习室（Group Learning Room）"，请你给你的留学生同学Michael写一封信，邀请他一同体验，内容包括：
（1）位置与开放时间；
（2）室内设施和功能。（如：配备了联网的现代化电子设施，方便开展小组项目）
注意：
（1）词数80左右；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Michael，
Good news!________
Yours
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Michael，
Good news !A newly﹣furnished section，which consists of eight Group Learning Rooms，has been open to us students in our school library.
Located on the third floor beside the online reading rooms，it can be accessible from 8 am till 9 pm throughout the weekdays.【高分句型一】Those rooms are equipped with modern electronic facilities，all of which are linked to the Internet.It's really convenient for us to do some group projects.【高分句型二】Why not ask our group members to go and experience it？
Early reply and we can reserve one room for our project.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：Located on the third floor beside the online reading rooms，it can be accessible from 8 am till 9 pm throughout the weekdays.
翻译：它位于三楼在线阅览室旁，工作日上午8点至晚上9点均可访问。
分析：本句使用了过去分词短语作状语located on the third floor beside the online reading rooms。
高分句型二：Those rooms are equipped with modern electronic facilities，all of which are linked to the Internet.
翻译：这些房间都配备了现代电子设备，所有这些设备都与互联网相连。
分析：本句使用了"all of which"引导非限制性定语从句。
【解答】Dear Michael，
Good news !A newly﹣furnished section，which consists eight Group Learning Rooms，has been open to us students in our school library.
Located on the third floor beside the online reading rooms，it can be accessible from 8 am till 9 pm throughout the weekdays.【高分句型一】（位置与开放时间）Those rooms are equipped with modern electronic facilities，all of which are linked to the Internet.【高分句型二】It's really convenient for us to do some group projects.（室内设施和功能）Why not ask our group members to go and experience it？
Early reply and we can reserve one room for our project.
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
6．（2024秋 鼓楼区校级期末） 假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Beth最近来到中国留学，她想学习中国书法，发邮件向你求教。请给她回封邮件，内容包括：
（1）表示支持；
（2）推荐老师。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Beth，
Glad to know that you want to learn Chinese Calligraphy.
______
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Beth，
Glad to know that you want to learn Chinese Calligraphy.It's a wonderful choice to immerse yourself in this traditional art form.I fully support your decision and believe that it will enrich your cultural experience in China.
For a reputable teacher，I highly recommend Mr.Zhang at the City Art Center.He's an expert in various styles of Chinese Calligraphy，who is known for his patient and engaging teaching style.I'm sure you'll benefit greatly from his guidance.
Looking forward to seeing your calligraphy works soon!
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：I fully support your decision and believe that it will enrich your cultural experience in China.
译文：我完全支持你的决定，相信这将丰富你在中国的文化体验。
分析：这句话使用了that引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二：He's an expert in various styles of Chinese Calligraphy，who is known for his patient and engaging teaching style.
译文：他是中国书法各种风格的专家，以耐心和引人入胜的教学风格而闻名。
分析：这句话使用了who引导的非限制性定语从句。
【解答】Dear Beth，
Glad to know that you want to learn Chinese Calligraphy.It's a wonderful choice to immerse yourself in this traditional art form.I fully support your decision and believe that it will enrich your cultural experience in China.【高分句型一】（表示支持）
For a reputable teacher，I highly recommend Mr.Zhang at the City Art Center.He's an expert in various styles of Chinese Calligraphy，who is known for his patient and engaging teaching style.【高分句型二】I'm sure you'll benefit greatly from his guidance.（推荐老师）
Looking forward to seeing your calligraphy works soon!（盼望）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
7．（2024秋 天心区校级期末）假定你是李华，你校英语角举办了主题为"Making Self﹣management a Way of Life"的演讲比赛。请写一篇演讲稿参赛，内容包括：
（1）你的理解；
（2）你的建议；
（3）你的号召。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
【答案】 Good afternoon，everyone.Today，I want to talk about self﹣management.It is not a buzzword but a lifestyle that many people strive for.In my perspective，self﹣management covers conscious control over our thoughts and behaviors，so as to make our days purposeful and fulfilling.
Then how to manage ourselves properly？To begin with，make a to﹣do list and establish priorities.Only if we keep a sense of proportion can we be more efficient.Moreover，deadlines should be set to help us stay focused.Meanwhile，it's recommended that we should set aside time for self﹣reflection to gain personal growth.
It's prime time to make self﹣management a new lifestyle，Together，let us embark on the journey of self﹣management and self﹣discipline!
【分析】高分句型一：It is not a buzzword but a lifestyle that many people strive for.
翻译：这不是一个流行语，而是许多人努力追求的生活方式。
分析：本句使用了that引导的限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：Meanwhile，it's recommended that we should set aside time for self﹣reflection to gain personal growth.
翻译：同时，建议我们留出时间进行自我反思，以获得个人成长。
分析：本句使用了that引导的主语从句。
【解答】 Good afternoon，everyone.Today，I want to talk about self﹣management.It is not a buzzword but a lifestyle that many people strive for.【高分句型一】In my perspective，self﹣management covers conscious control over our thoughts and behaviors，so as to make our days purposeful and fulfilling.（自己的理解）
Then how to manage ourselves properly？To begin with，make a to﹣do list and establish priorities.Only if we keep a sense of proportion can we be more efficient.Moreover，deadlines should be set to help us stay focused.Meanwhile，it's recommended that we should set aside time for self﹣reflection to gain personal growth.【高分句型二】（自己的建议）
It's prime time to make self﹣management a new lifestyle，Together，let us embark on the journey of self﹣management and self﹣discipline!（号召）
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
8．（2024秋 昌平区期末）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国笔友Jim所在的学校在举办"世界文化周"活动。作为中国优秀文化的爱好者，Jim负责组织中国文化节（Chinese Culture Festival），他向你寻求相关建议。请用英文给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）推荐活动内容；
（2）简要说明理由。
注意：（1）词数100左右；
（2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
________
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim，
I'm excited to hear that you're organizing the Chinese Culture Festival!There are many aspects of Chinese culture that could make the event both enjoyable and educational.
One idea is to organize a calligraphy session where students can try writing Chinese characters and appreciate the beauty of the language.Additionally，a traditional Chinese opera performance could be fascinating，allowing students to admire the rich storytelling traditions of China.Lastly，you might consider holding an exhibition on traditional Chinese festivals so that students can learn about the history and customs of holidays like Spring Festival.
I believe my suggestions will deepen your understanding of Chinese culture.Feel free to contact me if you have any questions.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：I'm excited to hear that you're organizing the Chinese Culture Festival!
翻译：听说你们要组织中国文化节，我很兴奋！
分析：本句使用了that引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二：One idea is to organize a calligraphy session where students can try writing Chinese characters and appreciate the beauty of the language.
翻译：一个想法是组织一个书法课程，学生可以尝试写汉字，欣赏语言的美。
分析：本句使用了where引导的限制性定语从句。
【解答】Dear Jim，
I'm excited to hear that you're organizing the Chinese Culture Festival!【高分句型一】There are many aspects of Chinese culture that could make the event both enjoyable and educational.（点明主题）
One idea is to organize a calligraphy session where students can try writing Chinese characters and appreciate the beauty of the language.【高分句型二】Additionally，a traditional Chinese opera performance could be fascinating，allowing students to admire the rich storytelling traditions of China.Lastly，you might consider holding an exhibition on traditional Chinese festivals so that students can learn about the history and customs of holidays like Spring Festival.（推荐活动内容以及简要说明理由）
I believe my suggestions will deepen your understanding of Chinese culture.Feel free to contact me if you have any questions.（希望）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
9．（2025 湖南二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The sun was setting，casting a golden light over the dense forest.Lily and her friends，James and Emily，were lost in the wilds，their hearts heavy with fear and uncertainty.They had been exploring the unexplored for days，but a wrong turn had led them off the course.
The air was filled with the whispering of insects and the rustling （沙沙声） of leaves in the wind.Lily held her compass （指南针） tightly，but it seemed to be swinging in circles，offering no clear direction.James，their fearless leader，scanned the horizon for any sign of civilization，but the only thing visible was the shades of trees stretching into the distance.
Emily's face was pale，her eyes filled with tears.She grabbed a branch tightly，as if it could provide some comfort in this moment of desperation.Lily reached out and grasped her hand，offering a silent promise.
"We'll find our way，" James said，his voice steady. "Just stay close and trust each other."
Just then，they heard a distant roar （咆哮） that shook the ground beneath their feet.
The roar grew louder，echoing through the forest like a thunderclap.Lily's heart skipped a beat，and she tightened her grip on Emily's hand.James raised his arm，signaling them to stay silent and still.
Slowly，the source of the roar emerged from the shadows.It was a huge bear，its fur a mixture of brown and black，and its eyes flashing with a violent light.The bear smelled the air，and then its gaze settled on the three friends.
James moved forward，his hands raised in a calming gesture. "Stay still，" he whispered. "Don't make any sudden movements."
Lily's mind raced.She knew they had to find a way to escape，but with the bear blocking their path，every option seemed impossible.Suddenly，she spotted a small stream nearby，its water glinting in the fading light.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
"The stream!" She shouted in a low excited voice.________
Relief flooded through their bodies as they continued their downstream journey.________
【答案】 "The stream!" She shouted in a low excited voice."We can follow it downstream.It might lead us to civilization." James nodded quickly，and they began to edge their way towards the stream，keeping their eyes fixed on the bear.Inch by inch，they moved closer，their hearts pounding in their chests.Finally，they reached the stream.James gave a gentle signal，and they turned，putting their backs to the bear as they cautiously stepped into the water.The bear watched them go，its eyes following their every move.But as they moved further away，it seemed to lose interest and eventually turned away，disappearing back into the depths of the forest.
Relief flooded through their bodies as they continued their downstream journey.The light of the moon guided them through the night，and they whispered encouraging words to each other as they pressed onward.Hours later，they stumbled upon a small village，its lights twinkling in the distance.They had made it.Their hearts filled with joy and gratitude as they walked towards the warmth of a new beginning.The journey home was long，but with every step，they grew stronger，knowing that they had faced their fears and emerged victorious in the end.
【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Lily、James和Emily三位朋友在探索未知森林时迷路，随后遇到了一只巨熊的惊险经历。他们在森林中迷失方向，心情恐惧而不确定，此时一个巨大的熊突然出现，给他们带来了极大的威胁。James作为领队，努力保持冷静并指示大家不要轻举妄动，而Lily则试图寻找逃脱的机会，最终注意到了附近的一条小溪。
高分句型一：James nodded quickly，and they began to edge their way towards the stream，keeping their eyes fixed on the bear.
译文：詹姆斯很快点了点头，他们开始慢慢地朝溪边走去，眼睛一直盯着那只熊。
分析：这句话使用了现在分词短语keeping their eyes fixed on the bear作状语。
高分句型二：Inch by inch，they moved closer，their hearts pounding in their chests.
译文：他们一寸一寸地靠近，心砰砰直跳。
分析：这句话使用了their hearts pounding in their chests，这是独立主格结构。
【解答】 "The stream!" She shouted in a low excited voice."We can follow it downstream.It might lead us to civilization." James nodded quickly，and they began to edge their way towards the stream，keeping their eyes fixed on the bear.【高分句型一】Inch by inch，they moved closer，their hearts pounding in their chests.【高分句型二】Finally，they reached the stream.James gave a gentle signal，and they turned，putting their backs to the bear as they cautiously stepped into the water.The bear watched them go，its eyes following their every move.But as they moved further away，it seemed to lose interest and eventually turned away，disappearing back into the depths of the forest.（Lily发现逃脱机会并带领大家沿着小溪下游前进，试图找到通往人类居住地的道路的过程）
Relief flooded through their bodies as they continued their downstream journey.The light of the moon guided them through the night，and they whispered encouraging words to each other as they pressed onward.Hours later，they stumbled upon a small village，its lights twinkling in the distance.They had made it.Their hearts filled with joy and gratitude as they walked towards the warmth of a new beginning.The journey home was long，but with every step，they grew stronger，knowing that they had faced their fears and emerged victorious in the end.（Lily、James和Emily三人在逃脱巨熊追击后，沿着小溪下游前行的过程中感受到的轻松和解脱，以及最终在月光指引下发现一个小村庄并成功抵达的喜悦和感激之情）
【点评】读后续写是一种结合阅读和写作的考查方式，主要考查考生的理解能力、想象力、创造力和语言表达能力。在英语写作中，读后续写通常提供一段阅读材料，要求考生根据材料的内容和情节，发挥想象力，续写接下来的故事或论述。这类题型在各类英语考试中较为常见，主要考查学生的阅读理解能力、思维能力和语言表达能力。
1．选材特点：
（1）所需阅读的短文在350以内；
（2）多以记叙文故事类文章或者夹叙夹议类文章为主，故事情节有曲折、有起伏，但是，故事线索的逻辑性比较强。
2.阅卷时主要考虑以下内容：
（1）与所给短文及段落开头语衔接程度；
（2）应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性；
（3）上下文的连贯性。
10．（2025 苏州模拟） 假定你是李华，学校即将举办一场英语戏剧节（English Drama Festival）。请你给外教 Mr.Smith 写一封邮件，邀请他担任评委（judge），内容包括：
（1）戏剧节的时间、地点；
（2）举办戏剧节的目的；
（3）期待他的回复。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr.Smith，
I'm Li Hua，a student from your class.______
I sincerely hope you can join us as a judge.Looking forward to your reply.
Best regards，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mr.Smith，
I'm Li Hua，a student from your class.I'm writing to extend my sincere invitation for you to be a judge in our upcoming English Drama Festival.
The festival is scheduled to take place in the school auditorium from 9 a.m.to 4 p.m.next Friday.It aims to cultivate students' proficiency in English expression and performance skills.By participating in English dramas，students can not only enhance their language abilities but also gain a deeper understanding of Western cultures.What's more，this event will provide an excellent platform for cross ﹣ cultural communication and interaction.
We highly value your professional opinion and rich experience in English.There is no doubt that your presence as a judge will add luster to the festival and make it more meaningful and successful.
I sincerely hope you can join us as a judge.Looking forward to your reply.
Best regards，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：By participating in English dramas，students can not only enhance their language abilities but also gain a deeper understanding of Western cultures.
译文：通过参与英语戏剧，学生不仅可以提高语言能力，还可以更深入地了解西方文化。
分析：这句话使用了not only...but also...意为"不但......而且......"。
高分句型二：There is no doubt that your presence as a judge will add luster to the festival and make it more meaningful and successful.
译文：毫无疑问，您作为评委的出席将为节日增添光彩，使其更有意义和成功。
分析：这句话使用了句型There is no doubt that...，意为"毫无疑问......"。
【解答】Dear Mr.Smith，
I'm Li Hua，a student from your class.I'm writing to extend my sincere invitation for you to be a judge in our upcoming English Drama Festival.（写信目的）
The festival is scheduled to take place in the school auditorium from 9 a.m.to 4 p.m.next Friday.（戏剧节的时间、地点）It aims to cultivate students' proficiency in English expression and performance skills.By participating in English dramas，students can not only enhance their language abilities but also gain a deeper understanding of Western cultures.【高分句型一】What's more，this event will provide an excellent platform for cross ﹣ cultural communication and interaction.（举办戏剧节的目的）
We highly value your professional opinion and rich experience in English.There is no doubt that your presence as a judge will add luster to the festival and make it more meaningful and successful.【高分句型二】（邀请）
I sincerely hope you can join us as a judge.Looking forward to your reply.（期待他的回复）
Best regards，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
11．（2025 湖南二模）假定你是李华，你校邀请了Robert博士来校做"AⅠ.与高中学习"的主题讲座。作为主持人，请你写一篇欢迎辞，内容包括：（1）介绍专家；
（2）鼓励学生提问；
（3）表示欢迎。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
Distinguished guests and fellow students，________
【答案】Distinguished guests and fellow students，
Good afternoon.I'm Li Hua.It is with great pleasure that we welcome Dr.Robert to deliver a lecture themed artificial intelligence and high school learning this afternoon.
Dr.Robert has been researching this subject for more than a decade and has obtained abundant achievements.With his expertise in this area，Dr.Robert will offer us valuable insights and practical suggestions on how we can make good use of AI to advance our learning，demonstrating some vivid examples.What is also worth expecting is that at the end of the lecture we will have some lucky students to ask Dr.Robert some relevant questions.It is certain that we will have a great time this afternoon.
Now，let's extend a warm welcome to Dr.Robert and get started.
【分析】高分句型一：What is also worth expecting is that at the end of the lecture we will have some lucky students to ask Dr.Robert some relevant questions.
译文：同样值得期待的是，在讲座结束时，我们将有一些幸运的学生向罗伯特博士提出一些相关问题。
分析：这句话使用了what引导的主语从句，that引导的表语从句。
高分句型二：It is certain that we will have a great time this afternoon.
译文：今天下午我们一定会玩得很开心。
分析：这句话使用了it作为形式主语，that引导的是真正的主语从句。
【解答】Distinguished guests and fellow students，
Good afternoon.I'm Li Hua.It is with great pleasure that we welcome Dr.Robert to deliver a lecture themed artificial intelligence and high school learning this afternoon.（开场白）
Dr.Robert has been researching this subject for more than a decade and has obtained abundant achievements.With his expertise in this area，Dr.Robert will offer us valuable insights and practical suggestions on how we can make good use of AI to advance our learning，demonstrating some vivid examples.（介绍专家）What is also worth expecting is that at the end of the lecture we will have some lucky students to ask Dr.Robert some relevant questions.【高分句型一】It is certain that we will have a great time this afternoon.【高分句型二】（鼓励学生提问）
Now，let's extend a warm welcome to Dr.Robert and get started.（表示欢迎）
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
12．（2024秋 太原期末）假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Karry作为"The Cleanup Teenagers"环保组织的一员，清理海岸垃圾，并获得了国家青年英雄奖。请你给他写一封邮件表示祝贺，内容包括：
（1）祝贺他获奖；
（2）表示受到启发并向他学习。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Karry，
I am glad to hear that you won the Gloria Barron National Prize for Young Heroes.______
Love，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Karry，
I am glad to hear that you won the Gloria Barron National Prize for Young Heroes.Please accept my heartfelt congratulations on this incredible honor!
Your dedication to cleaning up the coast is truly inspiring.Not only have you removed harmful plastic waste that endangers wildlife，but you have also raised awareness within your community about the importance of environmental conservation.Your efforts have proven that even small actions taken by teenagers can spark meaningful difference.I am so inspired by your example that I now have a stronger sense of responsibility to reduce daily waste and actively participate in local environmental initiatives.
Keep up the amazing work!I wish you continued success in all your future projects.
Love，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：Not only have you removed harmful plastic waste that endangers wildlife，but you have also raised awareness within your community about the importance of environmental conservation.
翻译：你们不仅清除了危害野生动物的有害塑料废物，而且还提高了社区对环境保护重要性的认识。
分析：本句运用了"not only...but also...不但……而且……"连接对等成分，并且not only放在句首引起句子的部分倒装。
高分句型二：Your efforts have proven that even small actions taken by teenagers can spark meaningful difference.
翻译：你们的努力已经证明，即使是青少年采取的小行动也能产生有意义的变化。
分析：本句运用了that引导的宾语从句。
【解答】Dear Karry，
I am glad to hear that you won the Gloria Barron National Prize for Young Heroes.Please accept my heartfelt congratulations on this incredible honor!（祝贺他获奖）
Your dedication to cleaning up the coast is truly inspiring.Not only have you removed harmful plastic waste that endangers wildlife，but you have also raised awareness within your community about the importance of environmental conservation.【高分句型一】Your efforts have proven that even small actions taken by teenagers can spark meaningful difference.【高分句型二】I am so inspired by your example that I now have a stronger sense of responsibility to reduce daily waste and actively participate in local environmental initiatives.（表示受到启发并向他学习）
Keep up the amazing work!I wish you continued success in all your future projects.（表达祝愿）
Love，
Li Hua
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇。
13．（2024秋 长春期末）假定你是李华，应邀参加英国笔友Tim所在学校组织的冬令营活动，请你给他写一封邮件，询问相关事宜，内容包括：
（1）食宿及活动费用；
（2）相关日程及安排。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
Dear Tim，
Thank you for inviting me to the winter camp organized by your school._______
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Tim，
Thank you for inviting me to the winter camp organized by your school.I am excited to join you all and would like to inquire about some details.
Firstly，could you please provide me with some information about the accommodation and meals during the camp？I would like to know the total cost so that I can make necessary preparations.Also，I am interested in knowing more about the activities that will be held during the winter camp.Furthermore，I'm curious about the schedule and arrangements for the camp.It would be great if you could send me a detailed plan.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：I would like to know the total cost so that I can make necessary preparations.
翻译：我想知道总费用，以便我做必要的准备。
分析：运用了so that引导的结果状语从句。
高分句型二：Also，I am interested in knowing more about the activities that will be held during the winter camp.
翻译：此外，我很想知道更多关于冬令营期间举办的活动。
分析：运用了that引导的定语从句。
【解答】Dear Tim，
Thank you for inviting me to the winter camp organized by your school.I am excited to join you all and would like to inquire about some details.（写信目的）
Firstly，could you please provide me with some information about the accommodation and meals during the camp？I would like to know the total cost so that I can make necessary preparations.（食宿及活动费用）【高分句型一】Also，I am interested in knowing more about the activities that will be held during the winter camp.【高分句型二】Furthermore，I'm curious about the schedule and arrangements for the camp.It would be great if you could send me a detailed plan.（相关日程及安排）
Looking forward to your reply.（结束语：盼望回信）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
14．（2025 高要区一模）假如你是李华。你校计划举行以"Fly Your Dream"为主题的英语周活动，现就活动的内容、形式征集建议。请你给负责本次活动的外教Chris写一封信，提出你的想法。
内容要包含：
（1）表达喜悦；
（2）分享你的创意及原因；
（3）表达祝愿。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris，
______
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Chris，
I'm Li Hua，a senior 3 student in our school.I feel greatly honored and happy to show my opinions on the approaching activity week with the theme of "Fly Your Dream".
Personally，a theme class meeting，I Have A Dream，may be a good choice，offering us students a chance to share our dreams freely.Additionally，each class can recommend a representative to join in a speech contest titled "Fly Your Dream"，which will serve as an inspiration for us to dream big and fight for a better future.
I'm really expecting the coming of the significant month.Sincere gratitude for your consideration.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：Personally，a theme class meeting，I Have A Dream，may be a good choice，offering us students a chance to share our dreams freely.
译文：就我个人而言，主题班会"我有一个梦想"可能是一个不错的选择，为我们学生提供了一个自由分享梦想的机会。
分析：这句话使用了现在分词短语offering us students a chance to share our dreams freely作状语。
高分句型二：Additionally，each class can recommend a representative to join in a speech contest titled "Fly Your Dream"，which will serve as an inspiration for us to dream big and fight for a better future.
译文：此外，每个班级都可以推荐一名代表参加题为"放飞梦想"的演讲比赛，这将激励我们实现远大梦想，为更美好的未来而战。
分析：这句话使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
【解答】Dear Chris，
I'm Li Hua，a senior 3 student in our school.I feel greatly honored and happy to show my opinions on the approaching activity week with the theme of "Fly Your Dream".（表达喜悦）
Personally，a theme class meeting，I Have A Dream，may be a good choice，offering us students a chance to share our dreams freely.【高分句型一】Additionally，each class can recommend a representative to join in a speech contest titled "Fly Your Dream"，which will serve as an inspiration for us to dream big and fight for a better future.【高分句型二】（分享你的创意及原因）
I'm really expecting the coming of the significant month.Sincere gratitude for your consideration.（表达祝愿）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
15．（2025 喀什市模拟）假如你是李华，你的英语老师要求本周class report的主题为"My Favourite Traditional Chinese festival"，请写篇发言稿，内容包括：
（1）你过节的过程；
（2）你的感想。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My Favourite Traditional Chinese festival
Good morning，everyone.My favourite traditional Chinese festival________
【答案】
My Favourite Traditional Chinese festival
Good morning，everyone.My favourite traditional Chinese festival is the Spring Festival.As the new year approaches，my family and I fully engage in preparations.We clean the house to welcome the new year and decorate it with fresh flowers，enhancing the festive atmosphere.My favorite task is hanging red couplets on the doors.
On New Year's Eve，the highlight is our big family dinner，where we get together，chatting and laughing.Later on，we enjoy colorful fireworks.Early next morning，we greet relatives and friends with "Xinnian Hao" or "Gongxi Facai，" accompanied by thrilling dragon and lion dances.For us children，the most exciting part is receiving "lucky money" in red envelopes.
Spring Festival was what I expected most，which was not only for the delicious food，but for the important occasion when our whole family gather together for the family reunion.
【分析】高分句型一：We clean the house to welcome the new year and decorate it with fresh flowers，enhancing the festive atmosphere.
译文：我们打扫房子迎接新年，并用鲜花装饰，增强节日气氛。
分析：这句话使用了现在分词短语enhancing the festive atmosphere作状语。
高分句型二：On New Year's Eve，the highlight is our big family dinner，where we get together，chatting and laughing.
译文：除夕夜，最精彩的是我们的大家庭晚餐，我们聚在一起，聊天大笑。
分析：这句话使用了where引导的非限制性定语从句。
【解答】
My Favourite Traditional Chinese festival
Good morning，everyone.My favourite traditional Chinese festival is the Spring Festival.As the new year approaches，my family and I fully engage in preparations.We clean the house to welcome the new year and decorate it with fresh flowers，enhancing the festive atmosphere.【高分句型一】My favorite task is hanging red couplets on the doors.（节前准备工作）
On New Year's Eve，the highlight is our big family dinner，where we get together，chatting and laughing.【高分句型二】Later on，we enjoy colorful fireworks.Early next morning，we greet relatives and friends with "Xinnian Hao" or "Gongxi Facai，" accompanied by thrilling dragon and lion dances.For us children，the most exciting part is receiving "lucky money" in red envelopes.（过节的过程）
Spring Festival was what I expected most，which was not only for the delicious food，but for the important occasion when our whole family gather together for the family reunion.（感想）
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
16．（2025 郑州模拟）假定你是李华，你的新西兰笔友Alan想了解上周你校举办的英语音乐节活动的情况，请给他回复邮件，内容包括：
（1）活动目的和内容；
（2）你的看法或感想。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Alan，
I'm writing to tell you about the English Music Festival held in our school last week.________
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Alan，
I'm writing to tell you about the English Music Festival held in our school last week.It was a fantastic event aiming to celebrate cultural diversity and improve our English through music.
The festival featured a variety of performances，including songs，dramas，poetry recitations and
so on，all in English.It was a great opportunity for us to practice our language skills in a fun and engaging way.
Personally，I found it not only enhanced our English skills but also broadened our views.I believe events like this are essential for us to develop a global mindset and promote cross﹣cultural understanding.
I'd love to hear about any similar events you've attended or organized.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：It was a fantastic event aiming to celebrate cultural diversity and improve our English through music.
译文：这是一场旨在庆祝文化多样性并通过音乐提高英语水平的精彩活动。
分析：这句话使用了现在分词短语aiming to celebrate cultural diversity and improve our English through music作定语。
高分句型二：I'd love to hear about any similar events you've attended or organized.
译文：我很想听听你参加过或组织过的任何类似活动。
分析：这句话使用了省略了关系代词的定语从句you've attended or organized。
【解答】Dear Alan，
I'm writing to tell you about the English Music Festival held in our school last week.It was a fantastic event aiming to celebrate cultural diversity and improve our English through music.【高分句型一】（写信目的）
The festival featured a variety of performances，including songs，dramas，poetry recitations and
so on，all in English.It was a great opportunity for us to practice our language skills in a fun and engaging way.（活动目的和内容）
Personally，I found it not only enhanced our English skills but also broadened our views.I believe events like this are essential for us to develop a global mindset and promote cross﹣cultural understanding.（看法或感想）
I'd love to hear about any similar events you've attended or organized.【高分句型二】（表达愿意）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
17．（2025 上饶一模） 假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Sam想向你了解中国2024年度运动员/队（athlete/team of the year 2024），请你写一封邮件回复，内容包括：
（1）你心目中的中国年度运动员/队；
（2）理由和启发。
注意：词数80左右，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Sam，
______
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sam，
I'd like to introduce you to Ma Long，one of China's most celebrated table tennis players.
As the captain，he has led China to numerous victories.Humble and approachable，he is also loved by fans at home and abroad.The way he plays，with precision and elegance，is truly remarkable.However，what sets him apart is not only his exceptional skills，but his mental strength，such as the ability to remain calm during the most intense moments of a match.He is a true inspiration to younger players，and his dedication to the sport has inspired countless individuals，including me，to pursue excellence in our own fields.
If you'd like to know more information about him，feel free to contact me!
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：The way he plays，with precision and elegance，is truly remarkable.
译文：他演奏的方式精准而优雅，真的很了不起。
分析：这句话使用了省略了关系代词的定语从句he plays，修饰the way。
高分句型二：However，what sets him apart is not only his exceptional skills，but his mental strength，such as the ability to remain calm during the most intense moments of a match.
译文：然而，让他与众不同的不仅是他出色的技能，还有他的精神力量，比如在比赛最激烈的时刻保持冷静的能力。
分析：这句话使用了what引导的主语从句。
【解答】Dear Sam，
I'd like to introduce you to Ma Long，one of China's most celebrated table tennis players.（心目中的中国年度运动员）
As the captain，he has led China to numerous victories.Humble and approachable，he is also loved by fans at home and abroad.The way he plays，with precision and elegance，is truly remarkable.【高分句型一】However，what sets him apart is not only his exceptional skills，but his mental strength，such as the ability to remain calm during the most intense moments of a match.【高分句型二】He is a true inspiration to younger players，and his dedication to the sport has inspired countless individuals，including me，to pursue excellence in our own fields.（理由和启发）
If you'd like to know more information about him，feel free to contact me!（愿意提供信息）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
18．（2024秋 沧州期末）假定你是李华，原定和Jim等5人组团参加即将到来的校园英文短剧比赛。不幸的是，你受伤住院无法参加排练，请你给小组负责人Jim写一封信。内容包括：
（1）说明原因；
（2）推荐李明作为你的替补参加排练；
（3）预祝取得好成绩。
注意：
（1）词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
参考词汇：排练rehearsal
Dear Jim，
______
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim，
I'm writing to inform you that，unfortunately，I have been injured and am currently hospitalized.So I will be unable to participate in the rehearsals for our upcoming English short drama competition.
Given my absence，I'd like to recommend Li Ming as my substitute.He is talented and possesses a deep and thorough understanding of the script，which makes him well﹣equipped to handle the role.Furthermore，his creative insights and devotion to the project will undoubtedly enrich our team's dynamics.
Despite my inability to be there with you，I hope you do really well in the contest.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：I'm writing to inform you that，unfortunately，I have been injured and am currently hospitalized.
翻译：我写信通知您，不幸的是，我受伤了，目前正在住院。
分析：本句使用了that引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二：He is talented and possesses a deep and thorough understanding of the script，which makes him well﹣equipped to handle the role.
翻译：他才华横溢，对剧本有着深刻而透彻的理解，这使他能够胜任这个角色。
分析：本句使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
【解答】Dear Jim，
I'm writing to inform you that，unfortunately，I have been injured and am currently hospitalized.【高分句型一】So I will be unable to participate in the rehearsals for our upcoming English short drama competition.（说明原因）
Given my absence，I'd like to recommend Li Ming as my substitute.He is talented and possesses a deep and thorough understanding of the script，which makes him well﹣equipped to handle the role.【高分句型二】Furthermore，his creative insights and devotion to the project will undoubtedly enrich our team's dynamics.（推荐李明作为自己的替补参加排练）
Despite my inability to be there with you，I hope you do really well in the contest.（预祝取得好成绩）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
19．（2024秋 河南期末）假定你是李华，你班交换生Jason给你发邮件请你推荐一个适合一日游的地方。请给他回封邮件，内容包括：
（1）你的推荐；
（2）你的理由。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jason，
________
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jason，
Knowing that you want to take a day trip，I recommend you visit the ancient town of Zhouzhuang since you are interested in Chinese culture.
Zhouzhuang Town has well﹣preserved ancient architecture，such as traditional bridges and houses.The canals running through the town add to its unique charm.You can take a boat ride to enjoy the charming scenery and enjoy the peaceful atmosphere.Additionally，there are various local snacks and handicrafts to explore.It's a perfect place to immerse yourself in traditional Chinese culture for a day.
Wish you a good day.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：Knowing that you want to take a day trip，I recommend you visit the ancient town of Zhouzhuang since you are interested in Chinese culture.
翻译：知道你想去一日游，我建议你去周庄古镇，因为你对中国文化感兴趣。
分析：本句使用了现在分词短语Knowing that you want to take a day trip作状语；that引导的宾语从句；since引导的原因状语从句。
高分句型二：It's a perfect place to immerse yourself in traditional Chinese culture for a day.
翻译：这是一个沉浸在中国传统文化中一天的完美场所。
分析：句子中it作形式主语，真正的主语为不定式短语to immerse yourself in traditional Chinese culture for a day。
【解答】Dear Jason，
Knowing that you want to take a day trip，I recommend you visit the ancient town of Zhouzhuang since you are interested in Chinese culture.【高分句型一】（推荐的地方）
Zhouzhuang Town has well﹣preserved ancient architecture，such as traditional bridges and houses.The canals running through the town add to its unique charm.You can take a boat ride to enjoy the charming scenery and enjoy the peaceful atmosphere.Additionally，there are various local snacks and handicrafts to explore.It's a perfect place to immerse yourself in traditional Chinese culture for a day.【高分句型二】（推荐理由）
Wish you a good day.
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
20．（2024秋 菏泽期末） 假定你是国际学校音乐社团的负责人李华，你校准备组建一个多语种合唱团（multilingual choir），想邀请学校的英国老师Mr.Black来做音乐指导（instructor）。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）写邮件的目的；
（2）邀请理由。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr.Black，
______
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mr.Black，
I hope this email finds you well.I am Li Hua，the head of the music club at our international school.I am writing to invite you to serve as the instructor for our newly established multilingual choir.
Your extensive experience in music and your proficiency in multiple languages make you the perfect candidate to guide our choir in exploring the wonders of multicultural music.We believe that with your expertise，our choir will thrive and bring harmonious melodies to our school community.
Looking forward to your positive response.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：I am writing to invite you to serve as the instructor for our newly established multilingual choir.
译文：我写信邀请您担任我们新成立的多语言合唱团的讲师。
分析：这句话使用了过去分词短语newly established作定语修饰multilingual choir。
高分句型二：We believe that with your expertise，our choir will thrive and bring harmonious melodies to our school community.
译文：我们相信，凭借您的专业知识，我们的合唱团将蓬勃发展，为学校社区带来和谐的旋律。
分析：这句话使用了that引导的宾语从句。
【解答】Dear Mr.Black，
I hope this email finds you well.I am Li Hua，the head of the music club at our international school.I am writing to invite you to serve as the instructor for our newly established multilingual choir.【高分句型一】（写邮件的目的）
Your extensive experience in music and your proficiency in multiple languages make you the perfect candidate to guide our choir in exploring the wonders of multicultural music.We believe that with your expertise，our choir will thrive and bring harmonious melodies to our school community.【高分句型二】（邀请理由）
Looking forward to your positive response.（盼望）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使
一．书面表达（共20小题）
1．（2024秋 东湖区校级期末）假定你是李华，上周五你校举办了"民俗文化校园行"活动，邀请了民间艺人给同学们展示各种传统手艺。请你给英国笔友Andrew写一封邮件分享这次活动，内容包括：
（1）活动内容；
（2）你的感想。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Andrew，
I'm writing to share with you a themed activity called Folk Culture Campus Tour in our school last Friday.________
Yours，
Li Hua
2．（2024秋 赣州期末）假定你是李华。外教Ryan建议你校每周二试行"全英文日"活动，要求所有同学在校园内用英文交流一天。请用英文写信给外教，表达你的看法并提出建议，内容包括：
（1）你是否赞同外教的提议；
（2）简述理由；
（3）提出建议。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan，
_________
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
3．（2024秋 仓山区校级期末）你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以My Perspective on Online Learning为题写一篇发言稿参赛，内容包括：
（1）分析在线学习优势与不足；
（2）提出学习建议。
注意：
（1）词数100左右；
（2）题目和首句已为你写好。
My Perspective on Online Learning
Hello，everyone.It is my privilege to deliver a speech themed"online learning".________
4．（2024秋 宝安区期末）假设你是李华，你最近在esteemed store购买了一款高端智能手机，但使用不久后发现手机存在严重质量问题，如频繁死机、电池续航差等。你决定向客户服务部门写一封投诉信，引用乔 拜登（Joe Biden）的"Take a measure of me and my heart"，表达你对该问题的失望，并希望对方理解你的困扰，尽快解决问题。
要求：引用并结合实际，表达期望，100词左右。
Dear Customer Service，
________
Sincerely，
Li Hua
参考词汇：Poor battery life：电池续航差system halted：死机
5．（2024秋 辛集市期末）假定你是李华，你校图书馆新开设"小组学习室（Group Learning Room）"，请你给你的留学生同学Michael写一封信，邀请他一同体验，内容包括：
（1）位置与开放时间；
（2）室内设施和功能。（如：配备了联网的现代化电子设施，方便开展小组项目）
注意：
（1）词数80左右；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Michael，
Good news!________
Yours
Li Hua
6．（2024秋 鼓楼区校级期末） 假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Beth最近来到中国留学，她想学习中国书法，发邮件向你求教。请给她回封邮件，内容包括：
（1）表示支持；
（2）推荐老师。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Beth，
Glad to know that you want to learn Chinese Calligraphy.
______
Yours，
Li Hua
7．（2024秋 天心区校级期末）假定你是李华，你校英语角举办了主题为"Making Self﹣management a Way of Life"的演讲比赛。请写一篇演讲稿参赛，内容包括：
（1）你的理解；
（2）你的建议；
（3）你的号召。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
8．（2024秋 昌平区期末）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国笔友Jim所在的学校在举办"世界文化周"活动。作为中国优秀文化的爱好者，Jim负责组织中国文化节（Chinese Culture Festival），他向你寻求相关建议。请用英文给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）推荐活动内容；
（2）简要说明理由。
注意：（1）词数100左右；
（2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
________
Yours，
Li Hua
9．（2025 湖南二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The sun was setting，casting a golden light over the dense forest.Lily and her friends，James and Emily，were lost in the wilds，their hearts heavy with fear and uncertainty.They had been exploring the unexplored for days，but a wrong turn had led them off the course.
The air was filled with the whispering of insects and the rustling （沙沙声） of leaves in the wind.Lily held her compass （指南针） tightly，but it seemed to be swinging in circles，offering no clear direction.James，their fearless leader，scanned the horizon for any sign of civilization，but the only thing visible was the shades of trees stretching into the distance.
Emily's face was pale，her eyes filled with tears.She grabbed a branch tightly，as if it could provide some comfort in this moment of desperation.Lily reached out and grasped her hand，offering a silent promise.
"We'll find our way，" James said，his voice steady. "Just stay close and trust each other."
Just then，they heard a distant roar （咆哮） that shook the ground beneath their feet.
The roar grew louder，echoing through the forest like a thunderclap.Lily's heart skipped a beat，and she tightened her grip on Emily's hand.James raised his arm，signaling them to stay silent and still.
Slowly，the source of the roar emerged from the shadows.It was a huge bear，its fur a mixture of brown and black，and its eyes flashing with a violent light.The bear smelled the air，and then its gaze settled on the three friends.
James moved forward，his hands raised in a calming gesture. "Stay still，" he whispered. "Don't make any sudden movements."
Lily's mind raced.She knew they had to find a way to escape，but with the bear blocking their path，every option seemed impossible.Suddenly，she spotted a small stream nearby，its water glinting in the fading light.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
"The stream!" She shouted in a low excited voice.________
Relief flooded through their bodies as they continued their downstream journey.________
10．（2025 苏州模拟） 假定你是李华，学校即将举办一场英语戏剧节（English Drama Festival）。请你给外教 Mr.Smith 写一封邮件，邀请他担任评委（judge），内容包括：
（1）戏剧节的时间、地点；
（2）举办戏剧节的目的；
（3）期待他的回复。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr.Smith，
I'm Li Hua，a student from your class.______
I sincerely hope you can join us as a judge.Looking forward to your reply.
Best regards，
Li Hua
11．（2025 湖南二模）假定你是李华，你校邀请了Robert博士来校做"AⅠ.与高中学习"的主题讲座。作为主持人，请你写一篇欢迎辞，内容包括：（1）介绍专家；
（2）鼓励学生提问；
（3）表示欢迎。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
Distinguished guests and fellow students，________
12．（2024秋 太原期末）假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Karry作为"The Cleanup Teenagers"环保组织的一员，清理海岸垃圾，并获得了国家青年英雄奖。请你给他写一封邮件表示祝贺，内容包括：
（1）祝贺他获奖；
（2）表示受到启发并向他学习。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Karry，
I am glad to hear that you won the Gloria Barron National Prize for Young Heroes.______
Love，
Li Hua
13．（2024秋 长春期末）假定你是李华，应邀参加英国笔友Tim所在学校组织的冬令营活动，请你给他写一封邮件，询问相关事宜，内容包括：
（1）食宿及活动费用；
（2）相关日程及安排。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
Dear Tim，
Thank you for inviting me to the winter camp organized by your school._______
Yours，
Li Hua
14．（2025 高要区一模）假如你是李华。你校计划举行以"Fly Your Dream"为主题的英语周活动，现就活动的内容、形式征集建议。请你给负责本次活动的外教Chris写一封信，提出你的想法。
内容要包含：
（1）表达喜悦；
（2）分享你的创意及原因；
（3）表达祝愿。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris，
______
Yours，
Li Hua
15．（2025 喀什市模拟）假如你是李华，你的英语老师要求本周class report的主题为"My Favourite Traditional Chinese festival"，请写篇发言稿，内容包括：
（1）你过节的过程；
（2）你的感想。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My Favourite Traditional Chinese festival
Good morning，everyone.My favourite traditional Chinese festival________
16．（2025 郑州模拟）假定你是李华，你的新西兰笔友Alan想了解上周你校举办的英语音乐节活动的情况，请给他回复邮件，内容包括：
（1）活动目的和内容；
（2）你的看法或感想。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Alan，
I'm writing to tell you about the English Music Festival held in our school last week.________
Yours，
Li Hua
17．（2025 上饶一模） 假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Sam想向你了解中国2024年度运动员/队（athlete/team of the year 2024），请你写一封邮件回复，内容包括：
（1）你心目中的中国年度运动员/队；
（2）理由和启发。
注意：词数80左右，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Sam，
______
Yours，
Li Hua
18．（2024秋 沧州期末）假定你是李华，原定和Jim等5人组团参加即将到来的校园英文短剧比赛。不幸的是，你受伤住院无法参加排练，请你给小组负责人Jim写一封信。内容包括：
（1）说明原因；
（2）推荐李明作为你的替补参加排练；
（3）预祝取得好成绩。
注意：
（1）词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
参考词汇：排练rehearsal
Dear Jim，
______
Yours，
Li Hua
19．（2024秋 河南期末）假定你是李华，你班交换生Jason给你发邮件请你推荐一个适合一日游的地方。请给他回封邮件，内容包括：
（1）你的推荐；
（2）你的理由。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jason，
________
Yours，
Li Hua
20．（2024秋 菏泽期末） 假定你是国际学校音乐社团的负责人李华，你校准备组建一个多语种合唱团（multilingual choir），想邀请学校的英国老师Mr.Black来做音乐指导（instructor）。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）写邮件的目的；
（2）邀请理由。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr.Black，
______
Yours，
Li Hua
2025年高考英语高频易错提高卷 应用文写作
参考答案与试题解析
一．书面表达（共20小题）
1．（2024秋 东湖区校级期末）假定你是李华，上周五你校举办了"民俗文化校园行"活动，邀请了民间艺人给同学们展示各种传统手艺。请你给英国笔友Andrew写一封邮件分享这次活动，内容包括：
（1）活动内容；
（2）你的感想。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Andrew，
I'm writing to share with you a themed activity called Folk Culture Campus Tour in our school last Friday.________
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Andrew，
I'm writing to share with you a themed activity called Folk Culture Campus Tour in our school last Friday.You can't imagine how meaningful and impressive it was.
We invited three famous folk artists to this activity.One artist performed sugar painting，and we were amazed at the vivid shapes of animals made of sugar.Another artist demonstrated paper cutting.And the third taught us how to produce clay figures.We were all impressed by their excellent manual skills.
The activity turned out to be a huge success.Not only did we learn about our traditional culture，but also it enriched our school life.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：You can't imagine how meaningful and impressive it was.
译文：你无法想象这是多么有意义和令人印象深刻。
分析：这句话使用了how引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二：Not only did we learn about our traditional culture，but also it enriched our school life.
译文：我们不仅了解了我们的传统文化，而且丰富了我们的学校生活。
分析：这句话使用了not only置于句首，后面接部分倒装。
【解答】Dear Andrew，
I'm writing to share with you a themed activity called Folk Culture Campus Tour in our school last Friday.You can't imagine how meaningful and impressive it was.【高分句型一】（写信目的）
We invited three famous folk artists to this activity.One artist performed sugar painting，and we were amazed at the vivid shapes of animals made of sugar.Another artist demonstrated paper cutting.And the third taught us how to produce clay figures.We were all impressed by their excellent manual skills.（活动内容）
The activity turned out to be a huge success.Not only did we learn about our traditional culture，but also it enriched our school life.【高分句型二】（感想）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
2．（2024秋 赣州期末）假定你是李华。外教Ryan建议你校每周二试行"全英文日"活动，要求所有同学在校园内用英文交流一天。请用英文写信给外教，表达你的看法并提出建议，内容包括：
（1）你是否赞同外教的提议；
（2）简述理由；
（3）提出建议。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan，
_________
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Ryan，
I fully support the "All﹣English Day" proposal.I think it's an innovative idea.It would create a more authentic language environment，encouraging students to speak English naturally.This experience will not only improve our oral skills but also build our confidence in communicating with others in English.
However，some students might find it difficult at first.To help them adapt，we could start with simple classroom instructions in English and organize small group activities，like role﹣plays or mini﹣presentations.These steps can gradually increase their comfort level.
Overall，I believe this activity is beneficial and worth trying out.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：It would create a more authentic language environment，encouraging students to speak English naturally.
翻译：这将创造一个更真实的语言环境，鼓励学生自然地说英语。
分析：本句使用了现在分词短语encouraging students to speak English naturally作状语。
高分句型二：Overall，I believe this activity is beneficial and worth trying out.
翻译：总的来说，我认为这项活动是有益的，值得一试。
分析：本句使用了省略了that的宾语从句this activity is beneficial and worth trying out。
【解答】Dear Ryan，
I fully support the "All﹣English Day" proposal.I think it's an innovative idea.（赞同外教的提议）It would create a more authentic language environment，encouraging students to speak English naturally.【高分句型一】This experience will not only improve our oral skills but also build our confidence in communicating with others in English.（简述理由）
However，some students might find it difficult at first.To help them adapt，we could start with simple classroom instructions in English and organize small group activities，like role﹣plays or mini﹣presentations.These steps can gradually increase their comfort level.（提出建议）
Overall，I believe this activity is beneficial and worth trying out.【高分句型二】
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
3．（2024秋 仓山区校级期末）你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以My Perspective on Online Learning为题写一篇发言稿参赛，内容包括：
（1）分析在线学习优势与不足；
（2）提出学习建议。
注意：
（1）词数100左右；
（2）题目和首句已为你写好。
My Perspective on Online Learning
Hello，everyone.It is my privilege to deliver a speech themed"online learning".________
【答案】
My Perspective on Online Leaning
Hello，everyone.It is my privilege to deliver a speech themed "online learning".
It is widely accepted that online learning has its advantages and disadvantages.On the one hand，smart online learners can make full use of the most extensive educational resources to broaden the horizon.On the other hand，learning online can also provide an opportunity for misusing the web，thereby wasting a significant amount of time on video games and virtual "friendships".Weighing the advantages against the disadvantages，I suggest we set a clear schedule of our daily study plan and meanwhile it is advisable that we keep a cool mind of the treasures of the Internet and cast away the trash of false virtual dirt.
Let's be smart online learners!Thanks for listening.
【分析】高分句型一：It is widely accepted that online learning has its advantages and disadvantages.
翻译：人们普遍认为网络学习有其优点和缺点。
分析：本句使用了it作形式主语，that引导真正的主语从句。
高分句型二：Weighing the advantages against the disadvantages，I suggest we set a clear schedule of our daily study plan and meanwhile it is advisable that we keep a cool mind of the treasures of the Internet and cast away the trash of false virtual dirt.
翻译：权衡利弊，我建议我们制定一个明确的日常学习计划，同时建议我们冷静地看待互联网的宝藏，去除错误的虚拟的糟粕。
分析：本句使用了现在分词短语weighing the advantages against the disadvantages作状语，省略了that的宾语从句we set a clear schedule of our daily study plan及it作形式主语，that引导真正的主语从句。
【解答】
My Perspective on Online Leaning
Hello，everyone.It is my privilege to deliver a speech themed "online learning".
It is widely accepted that online learning has its advantages and disadvantages.【高分句型一】On the one hand，smart online learners can make full use of the most extensive educational resources to broaden the horizon.（在线学习的优势）On the other hand，learning online can also provide an opportunity for misusing the web，thereby wasting a significant amount of time on video games and virtual "friendships".（在线学习的不足）Weighing the advantages against the disadvantages，I suggest we set a clear schedule of our daily study plan and meanwhile it is advisable that we keep a cool mind of the treasures of the Internet and cast away the trash of false virtual dirt.【高分句型二】（提出学习建议）
Let's be smart online learners!Thanks for listening.
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
4．（2024秋 宝安区期末）假设你是李华，你最近在esteemed store购买了一款高端智能手机，但使用不久后发现手机存在严重质量问题，如频繁死机、电池续航差等。你决定向客户服务部门写一封投诉信，引用乔 拜登（Joe Biden）的"Take a measure of me and my heart"，表达你对该问题的失望，并希望对方理解你的困扰，尽快解决问题。
要求：引用并结合实际，表达期望，100词左右。
Dear Customer Service，
________
Sincerely，
Li Hua
参考词汇：Poor battery life：电池续航差system halted：死机
【答案】Dear Customer Service，
I hope this letter finds you well.As a loyal customer of Esteemed Store，I was deeply disappointed with my recent purchase of a high﹣end smartphone.Despite its impressive features，the device has been plagued with serious quality issues，including frequent system halted occurrences and poor battery life.
Joe Biden once said， "Take a measure of me and my heart." In the same spirit，I urge you to consider my frustration and the inconvenience this defective product has caused me.I had high expectations for this smartphone，and it is with a heavy heart that I voice my dissatisfaction.
I hereby request a full refund or，alternatively，a replacement product that functions as advertised.Your immediate and attentive response to this matter is of utmost importance.I trust that your reputable store will address this issue with the urgency and professionalism it warrants.Thank you for your understanding and prompt action.
Sincerely，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：In the same spirit，I urge you to consider my frustration and the inconvenience this defective product has caused me.
译文：本着同样的精神，我敦促您考虑我的沮丧以及这个有缺陷的产品给我带来的不便。
分析：这句话使用了省略了关系代词的定语从句this defective product has caused me。
高分句型二：I had high expectations for this smartphone，and it is with a heavy heart that I voice my dissatisfaction.
译文：我对这款智能手机抱有很高的期望，我怀着沉重的心情表达了我的不满。
分析：这句话使用了强调句It is+强调部分+that+其余部分。
【解答】Dear Customer Service，
I hope this letter finds you well.As a loyal customer of Esteemed Store，I was deeply disappointed with my recent purchase of a high﹣end smartphone.Despite its impressive features，the device has been plagued with serious quality issues，including frequent system halted occurrences and poor battery life.（问题）
Joe Biden once said， "Take a measure of me and my heart." In the same spirit，I urge you to consider my frustration and the inconvenience this defective product has caused me.【高分句型一】I had high expectations for this smartphone，and it is with a heavy heart that I voice my dissatisfaction.【高分句型二】（引用乔 拜登（Joe Biden）的"Take a measure of me and my heart"，表达你对该问题的失望）
I hereby request a full refund or，alternatively，a replacement product that functions as advertised.Your immediate and attentive response to this matter is of utmost importance.I trust that your reputable store will address this issue with the urgency and professionalism it warrants.Thank you for your understanding and prompt action.（希望对方解决问题）
Sincerely，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
5．（2024秋 辛集市期末）假定你是李华，你校图书馆新开设"小组学习室（Group Learning Room）"，请你给你的留学生同学Michael写一封信，邀请他一同体验，内容包括：
（1）位置与开放时间；
（2）室内设施和功能。（如：配备了联网的现代化电子设施，方便开展小组项目）
注意：
（1）词数80左右；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Michael，
Good news!________
Yours
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Michael，
Good news !A newly﹣furnished section，which consists of eight Group Learning Rooms，has been open to us students in our school library.
Located on the third floor beside the online reading rooms，it can be accessible from 8 am till 9 pm throughout the weekdays.【高分句型一】Those rooms are equipped with modern electronic facilities，all of which are linked to the Internet.It's really convenient for us to do some group projects.【高分句型二】Why not ask our group members to go and experience it？
Early reply and we can reserve one room for our project.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：Located on the third floor beside the online reading rooms，it can be accessible from 8 am till 9 pm throughout the weekdays.
翻译：它位于三楼在线阅览室旁，工作日上午8点至晚上9点均可访问。
分析：本句使用了过去分词短语作状语located on the third floor beside the online reading rooms。
高分句型二：Those rooms are equipped with modern electronic facilities，all of which are linked to the Internet.
翻译：这些房间都配备了现代电子设备，所有这些设备都与互联网相连。
分析：本句使用了"all of which"引导非限制性定语从句。
【解答】Dear Michael，
Good news !A newly﹣furnished section，which consists eight Group Learning Rooms，has been open to us students in our school library.
Located on the third floor beside the online reading rooms，it can be accessible from 8 am till 9 pm throughout the weekdays.【高分句型一】（位置与开放时间）Those rooms are equipped with modern electronic facilities，all of which are linked to the Internet.【高分句型二】It's really convenient for us to do some group projects.（室内设施和功能）Why not ask our group members to go and experience it？
Early reply and we can reserve one room for our project.
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
6．（2024秋 鼓楼区校级期末） 假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Beth最近来到中国留学，她想学习中国书法，发邮件向你求教。请给她回封邮件，内容包括：
（1）表示支持；
（2）推荐老师。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Beth，
Glad to know that you want to learn Chinese Calligraphy.
______
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Beth，
Glad to know that you want to learn Chinese Calligraphy.It's a wonderful choice to immerse yourself in this traditional art form.I fully support your decision and believe that it will enrich your cultural experience in China.
For a reputable teacher，I highly recommend Mr.Zhang at the City Art Center.He's an expert in various styles of Chinese Calligraphy，who is known for his patient and engaging teaching style.I'm sure you'll benefit greatly from his guidance.
Looking forward to seeing your calligraphy works soon!
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：I fully support your decision and believe that it will enrich your cultural experience in China.
译文：我完全支持你的决定，相信这将丰富你在中国的文化体验。
分析：这句话使用了that引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二：He's an expert in various styles of Chinese Calligraphy，who is known for his patient and engaging teaching style.
译文：他是中国书法各种风格的专家，以耐心和引人入胜的教学风格而闻名。
分析：这句话使用了who引导的非限制性定语从句。
【解答】Dear Beth，
Glad to know that you want to learn Chinese Calligraphy.It's a wonderful choice to immerse yourself in this traditional art form.I fully support your decision and believe that it will enrich your cultural experience in China.【高分句型一】（表示支持）
For a reputable teacher，I highly recommend Mr.Zhang at the City Art Center.He's an expert in various styles of Chinese Calligraphy，who is known for his patient and engaging teaching style.【高分句型二】I'm sure you'll benefit greatly from his guidance.（推荐老师）
Looking forward to seeing your calligraphy works soon!（盼望）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
7．（2024秋 天心区校级期末）假定你是李华，你校英语角举办了主题为"Making Self﹣management a Way of Life"的演讲比赛。请写一篇演讲稿参赛，内容包括：
（1）你的理解；
（2）你的建议；
（3）你的号召。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
【答案】 Good afternoon，everyone.Today，I want to talk about self﹣management.It is not a buzzword but a lifestyle that many people strive for.In my perspective，self﹣management covers conscious control over our thoughts and behaviors，so as to make our days purposeful and fulfilling.
Then how to manage ourselves properly？To begin with，make a to﹣do list and establish priorities.Only if we keep a sense of proportion can we be more efficient.Moreover，deadlines should be set to help us stay focused.Meanwhile，it's recommended that we should set aside time for self﹣reflection to gain personal growth.
It's prime time to make self﹣management a new lifestyle，Together，let us embark on the journey of self﹣management and self﹣discipline!
【分析】高分句型一：It is not a buzzword but a lifestyle that many people strive for.
翻译：这不是一个流行语，而是许多人努力追求的生活方式。
分析：本句使用了that引导的限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：Meanwhile，it's recommended that we should set aside time for self﹣reflection to gain personal growth.
翻译：同时，建议我们留出时间进行自我反思，以获得个人成长。
分析：本句使用了that引导的主语从句。
【解答】 Good afternoon，everyone.Today，I want to talk about self﹣management.It is not a buzzword but a lifestyle that many people strive for.【高分句型一】In my perspective，self﹣management covers conscious control over our thoughts and behaviors，so as to make our days purposeful and fulfilling.（自己的理解）
Then how to manage ourselves properly？To begin with，make a to﹣do list and establish priorities.Only if we keep a sense of proportion can we be more efficient.Moreover，deadlines should be set to help us stay focused.Meanwhile，it's recommended that we should set aside time for self﹣reflection to gain personal growth.【高分句型二】（自己的建议）
It's prime time to make self﹣management a new lifestyle，Together，let us embark on the journey of self﹣management and self﹣discipline!（号召）
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
8．（2024秋 昌平区期末）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国笔友Jim所在的学校在举办"世界文化周"活动。作为中国优秀文化的爱好者，Jim负责组织中国文化节（Chinese Culture Festival），他向你寻求相关建议。请用英文给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）推荐活动内容；
（2）简要说明理由。
注意：（1）词数100左右；
（2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
________
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim，
I'm excited to hear that you're organizing the Chinese Culture Festival!There are many aspects of Chinese culture that could make the event both enjoyable and educational.
One idea is to organize a calligraphy session where students can try writing Chinese characters and appreciate the beauty of the language.Additionally，a traditional Chinese opera performance could be fascinating，allowing students to admire the rich storytelling traditions of China.Lastly，you might consider holding an exhibition on traditional Chinese festivals so that students can learn about the history and customs of holidays like Spring Festival.
I believe my suggestions will deepen your understanding of Chinese culture.Feel free to contact me if you have any questions.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：I'm excited to hear that you're organizing the Chinese Culture Festival!
翻译：听说你们要组织中国文化节，我很兴奋！
分析：本句使用了that引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二：One idea is to organize a calligraphy session where students can try writing Chinese characters and appreciate the beauty of the language.
翻译：一个想法是组织一个书法课程，学生可以尝试写汉字，欣赏语言的美。
分析：本句使用了where引导的限制性定语从句。
【解答】Dear Jim，
I'm excited to hear that you're organizing the Chinese Culture Festival!【高分句型一】There are many aspects of Chinese culture that could make the event both enjoyable and educational.（点明主题）
One idea is to organize a calligraphy session where students can try writing Chinese characters and appreciate the beauty of the language.【高分句型二】Additionally，a traditional Chinese opera performance could be fascinating，allowing students to admire the rich storytelling traditions of China.Lastly，you might consider holding an exhibition on traditional Chinese festivals so that students can learn about the history and customs of holidays like Spring Festival.（推荐活动内容以及简要说明理由）
I believe my suggestions will deepen your understanding of Chinese culture.Feel free to contact me if you have any questions.（希望）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
9．（2025 湖南二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The sun was setting，casting a golden light over the dense forest.Lily and her friends，James and Emily，were lost in the wilds，their hearts heavy with fear and uncertainty.They had been exploring the unexplored for days，but a wrong turn had led them off the course.
The air was filled with the whispering of insects and the rustling （沙沙声） of leaves in the wind.Lily held her compass （指南针） tightly，but it seemed to be swinging in circles，offering no clear direction.James，their fearless leader，scanned the horizon for any sign of civilization，but the only thing visible was the shades of trees stretching into the distance.
Emily's face was pale，her eyes filled with tears.She grabbed a branch tightly，as if it could provide some comfort in this moment of desperation.Lily reached out and grasped her hand，offering a silent promise.
"We'll find our way，" James said，his voice steady. "Just stay close and trust each other."
Just then，they heard a distant roar （咆哮） that shook the ground beneath their feet.
The roar grew louder，echoing through the forest like a thunderclap.Lily's heart skipped a beat，and she tightened her grip on Emily's hand.James raised his arm，signaling them to stay silent and still.
Slowly，the source of the roar emerged from the shadows.It was a huge bear，its fur a mixture of brown and black，and its eyes flashing with a violent light.The bear smelled the air，and then its gaze settled on the three friends.
James moved forward，his hands raised in a calming gesture. "Stay still，" he whispered. "Don't make any sudden movements."
Lily's mind raced.She knew they had to find a way to escape，but with the bear blocking their path，every option seemed impossible.Suddenly，she spotted a small stream nearby，its water glinting in the fading light.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
"The stream!" She shouted in a low excited voice.________
Relief flooded through their bodies as they continued their downstream journey.________
【答案】 "The stream!" She shouted in a low excited voice."We can follow it downstream.It might lead us to civilization." James nodded quickly，and they began to edge their way towards the stream，keeping their eyes fixed on the bear.Inch by inch，they moved closer，their hearts pounding in their chests.Finally，they reached the stream.James gave a gentle signal，and they turned，putting their backs to the bear as they cautiously stepped into the water.The bear watched them go，its eyes following their every move.But as they moved further away，it seemed to lose interest and eventually turned away，disappearing back into the depths of the forest.
Relief flooded through their bodies as they continued their downstream journey.The light of the moon guided them through the night，and they whispered encouraging words to each other as they pressed onward.Hours later，they stumbled upon a small village，its lights twinkling in the distance.They had made it.Their hearts filled with joy and gratitude as they walked towards the warmth of a new beginning.The journey home was long，but with every step，they grew stronger，knowing that they had faced their fears and emerged victorious in the end.
【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Lily、James和Emily三位朋友在探索未知森林时迷路，随后遇到了一只巨熊的惊险经历。他们在森林中迷失方向，心情恐惧而不确定，此时一个巨大的熊突然出现，给他们带来了极大的威胁。James作为领队，努力保持冷静并指示大家不要轻举妄动，而Lily则试图寻找逃脱的机会，最终注意到了附近的一条小溪。
高分句型一：James nodded quickly，and they began to edge their way towards the stream，keeping their eyes fixed on the bear.
译文：詹姆斯很快点了点头，他们开始慢慢地朝溪边走去，眼睛一直盯着那只熊。
分析：这句话使用了现在分词短语keeping their eyes fixed on the bear作状语。
高分句型二：Inch by inch，they moved closer，their hearts pounding in their chests.
译文：他们一寸一寸地靠近，心砰砰直跳。
分析：这句话使用了their hearts pounding in their chests，这是独立主格结构。
【解答】 "The stream!" She shouted in a low excited voice."We can follow it downstream.It might lead us to civilization." James nodded quickly，and they began to edge their way towards the stream，keeping their eyes fixed on the bear.【高分句型一】Inch by inch，they moved closer，their hearts pounding in their chests.【高分句型二】Finally，they reached the stream.James gave a gentle signal，and they turned，putting their backs to the bear as they cautiously stepped into the water.The bear watched them go，its eyes following their every move.But as they moved further away，it seemed to lose interest and eventually turned away，disappearing back into the depths of the forest.（Lily发现逃脱机会并带领大家沿着小溪下游前进，试图找到通往人类居住地的道路的过程）
Relief flooded through their bodies as they continued their downstream journey.The light of the moon guided them through the night，and they whispered encouraging words to each other as they pressed onward.Hours later，they stumbled upon a small village，its lights twinkling in the distance.They had made it.Their hearts filled with joy and gratitude as they walked towards the warmth of a new beginning.The journey home was long，but with every step，they grew stronger，knowing that they had faced their fears and emerged victorious in the end.（Lily、James和Emily三人在逃脱巨熊追击后，沿着小溪下游前行的过程中感受到的轻松和解脱，以及最终在月光指引下发现一个小村庄并成功抵达的喜悦和感激之情）
【点评】读后续写是一种结合阅读和写作的考查方式，主要考查考生的理解能力、想象力、创造力和语言表达能力。在英语写作中，读后续写通常提供一段阅读材料，要求考生根据材料的内容和情节，发挥想象力，续写接下来的故事或论述。这类题型在各类英语考试中较为常见，主要考查学生的阅读理解能力、思维能力和语言表达能力。
1．选材特点：
（1）所需阅读的短文在350以内；
（2）多以记叙文故事类文章或者夹叙夹议类文章为主，故事情节有曲折、有起伏，但是，故事线索的逻辑性比较强。
2.阅卷时主要考虑以下内容：
（1）与所给短文及段落开头语衔接程度；
（2）应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性；
（3）上下文的连贯性。
10．（2025 苏州模拟） 假定你是李华，学校即将举办一场英语戏剧节（English Drama Festival）。请你给外教 Mr.Smith 写一封邮件，邀请他担任评委（judge），内容包括：
（1）戏剧节的时间、地点；
（2）举办戏剧节的目的；
（3）期待他的回复。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr.Smith，
I'm Li Hua，a student from your class.______
I sincerely hope you can join us as a judge.Looking forward to your reply.
Best regards，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mr.Smith，
I'm Li Hua，a student from your class.I'm writing to extend my sincere invitation for you to be a judge in our upcoming English Drama Festival.
The festival is scheduled to take place in the school auditorium from 9 a.m.to 4 p.m.next Friday.It aims to cultivate students' proficiency in English expression and performance skills.By participating in English dramas，students can not only enhance their language abilities but also gain a deeper understanding of Western cultures.What's more，this event will provide an excellent platform for cross ﹣ cultural communication and interaction.
We highly value your professional opinion and rich experience in English.There is no doubt that your presence as a judge will add luster to the festival and make it more meaningful and successful.
I sincerely hope you can join us as a judge.Looking forward to your reply.
Best regards，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：By participating in English dramas，students can not only enhance their language abilities but also gain a deeper understanding of Western cultures.
译文：通过参与英语戏剧，学生不仅可以提高语言能力，还可以更深入地了解西方文化。
分析：这句话使用了not only...but also...意为"不但......而且......"。
高分句型二：There is no doubt that your presence as a judge will add luster to the festival and make it more meaningful and successful.
译文：毫无疑问，您作为评委的出席将为节日增添光彩，使其更有意义和成功。
分析：这句话使用了句型There is no doubt that...，意为"毫无疑问......"。
【解答】Dear Mr.Smith，
I'm Li Hua，a student from your class.I'm writing to extend my sincere invitation for you to be a judge in our upcoming English Drama Festival.（写信目的）
The festival is scheduled to take place in the school auditorium from 9 a.m.to 4 p.m.next Friday.（戏剧节的时间、地点）It aims to cultivate students' proficiency in English expression and performance skills.By participating in English dramas，students can not only enhance their language abilities but also gain a deeper understanding of Western cultures.【高分句型一】What's more，this event will provide an excellent platform for cross ﹣ cultural communication and interaction.（举办戏剧节的目的）
We highly value your professional opinion and rich experience in English.There is no doubt that your presence as a judge will add luster to the festival and make it more meaningful and successful.【高分句型二】（邀请）
I sincerely hope you can join us as a judge.Looking forward to your reply.（期待他的回复）
Best regards，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
11．（2025 湖南二模）假定你是李华，你校邀请了Robert博士来校做"AⅠ.与高中学习"的主题讲座。作为主持人，请你写一篇欢迎辞，内容包括：（1）介绍专家；
（2）鼓励学生提问；
（3）表示欢迎。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
Distinguished guests and fellow students，________
【答案】Distinguished guests and fellow students，
Good afternoon.I'm Li Hua.It is with great pleasure that we welcome Dr.Robert to deliver a lecture themed artificial intelligence and high school learning this afternoon.
Dr.Robert has been researching this subject for more than a decade and has obtained abundant achievements.With his expertise in this area，Dr.Robert will offer us valuable insights and practical suggestions on how we can make good use of AI to advance our learning，demonstrating some vivid examples.What is also worth expecting is that at the end of the lecture we will have some lucky students to ask Dr.Robert some relevant questions.It is certain that we will have a great time this afternoon.
Now，let's extend a warm welcome to Dr.Robert and get started.
【分析】高分句型一：What is also worth expecting is that at the end of the lecture we will have some lucky students to ask Dr.Robert some relevant questions.
译文：同样值得期待的是，在讲座结束时，我们将有一些幸运的学生向罗伯特博士提出一些相关问题。
分析：这句话使用了what引导的主语从句，that引导的表语从句。
高分句型二：It is certain that we will have a great time this afternoon.
译文：今天下午我们一定会玩得很开心。
分析：这句话使用了it作为形式主语，that引导的是真正的主语从句。
【解答】Distinguished guests and fellow students，
Good afternoon.I'm Li Hua.It is with great pleasure that we welcome Dr.Robert to deliver a lecture themed artificial intelligence and high school learning this afternoon.（开场白）
Dr.Robert has been researching this subject for more than a decade and has obtained abundant achievements.With his expertise in this area，Dr.Robert will offer us valuable insights and practical suggestions on how we can make good use of AI to advance our learning，demonstrating some vivid examples.（介绍专家）What is also worth expecting is that at the end of the lecture we will have some lucky students to ask Dr.Robert some relevant questions.【高分句型一】It is certain that we will have a great time this afternoon.【高分句型二】（鼓励学生提问）
Now，let's extend a warm welcome to Dr.Robert and get started.（表示欢迎）
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
12．（2024秋 太原期末）假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Karry作为"The Cleanup Teenagers"环保组织的一员，清理海岸垃圾，并获得了国家青年英雄奖。请你给他写一封邮件表示祝贺，内容包括：
（1）祝贺他获奖；
（2）表示受到启发并向他学习。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Karry，
I am glad to hear that you won the Gloria Barron National Prize for Young Heroes.______
Love，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Karry，
I am glad to hear that you won the Gloria Barron National Prize for Young Heroes.Please accept my heartfelt congratulations on this incredible honor!
Your dedication to cleaning up the coast is truly inspiring.Not only have you removed harmful plastic waste that endangers wildlife，but you have also raised awareness within your community about the importance of environmental conservation.Your efforts have proven that even small actions taken by teenagers can spark meaningful difference.I am so inspired by your example that I now have a stronger sense of responsibility to reduce daily waste and actively participate in local environmental initiatives.
Keep up the amazing work!I wish you continued success in all your future projects.
Love，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：Not only have you removed harmful plastic waste that endangers wildlife，but you have also raised awareness within your community about the importance of environmental conservation.
翻译：你们不仅清除了危害野生动物的有害塑料废物，而且还提高了社区对环境保护重要性的认识。
分析：本句运用了"not only...but also...不但……而且……"连接对等成分，并且not only放在句首引起句子的部分倒装。
高分句型二：Your efforts have proven that even small actions taken by teenagers can spark meaningful difference.
翻译：你们的努力已经证明，即使是青少年采取的小行动也能产生有意义的变化。
分析：本句运用了that引导的宾语从句。
【解答】Dear Karry，
I am glad to hear that you won the Gloria Barron National Prize for Young Heroes.Please accept my heartfelt congratulations on this incredible honor!（祝贺他获奖）
Your dedication to cleaning up the coast is truly inspiring.Not only have you removed harmful plastic waste that endangers wildlife，but you have also raised awareness within your community about the importance of environmental conservation.【高分句型一】Your efforts have proven that even small actions taken by teenagers can spark meaningful difference.【高分句型二】I am so inspired by your example that I now have a stronger sense of responsibility to reduce daily waste and actively participate in local environmental initiatives.（表示受到启发并向他学习）
Keep up the amazing work!I wish you continued success in all your future projects.（表达祝愿）
Love，
Li Hua
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇。
13．（2024秋 长春期末）假定你是李华，应邀参加英国笔友Tim所在学校组织的冬令营活动，请你给他写一封邮件，询问相关事宜，内容包括：
（1）食宿及活动费用；
（2）相关日程及安排。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
Dear Tim，
Thank you for inviting me to the winter camp organized by your school._______
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Tim，
Thank you for inviting me to the winter camp organized by your school.I am excited to join you all and would like to inquire about some details.
Firstly，could you please provide me with some information about the accommodation and meals during the camp？I would like to know the total cost so that I can make necessary preparations.Also，I am interested in knowing more about the activities that will be held during the winter camp.Furthermore，I'm curious about the schedule and arrangements for the camp.It would be great if you could send me a detailed plan.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：I would like to know the total cost so that I can make necessary preparations.
翻译：我想知道总费用，以便我做必要的准备。
分析：运用了so that引导的结果状语从句。
高分句型二：Also，I am interested in knowing more about the activities that will be held during the winter camp.
翻译：此外，我很想知道更多关于冬令营期间举办的活动。
分析：运用了that引导的定语从句。
【解答】Dear Tim，
Thank you for inviting me to the winter camp organized by your school.I am excited to join you all and would like to inquire about some details.（写信目的）
Firstly，could you please provide me with some information about the accommodation and meals during the camp？I would like to know the total cost so that I can make necessary preparations.（食宿及活动费用）【高分句型一】Also，I am interested in knowing more about the activities that will be held during the winter camp.【高分句型二】Furthermore，I'm curious about the schedule and arrangements for the camp.It would be great if you could send me a detailed plan.（相关日程及安排）
Looking forward to your reply.（结束语：盼望回信）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
14．（2025 高要区一模）假如你是李华。你校计划举行以"Fly Your Dream"为主题的英语周活动，现就活动的内容、形式征集建议。请你给负责本次活动的外教Chris写一封信，提出你的想法。
内容要包含：
（1）表达喜悦；
（2）分享你的创意及原因；
（3）表达祝愿。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris，
______
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Chris，
I'm Li Hua，a senior 3 student in our school.I feel greatly honored and happy to show my opinions on the approaching activity week with the theme of "Fly Your Dream".
Personally，a theme class meeting，I Have A Dream，may be a good choice，offering us students a chance to share our dreams freely.Additionally，each class can recommend a representative to join in a speech contest titled "Fly Your Dream"，which will serve as an inspiration for us to dream big and fight for a better future.
I'm really expecting the coming of the significant month.Sincere gratitude for your consideration.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：Personally，a theme class meeting，I Have A Dream，may be a good choice，offering us students a chance to share our dreams freely.
译文：就我个人而言，主题班会"我有一个梦想"可能是一个不错的选择，为我们学生提供了一个自由分享梦想的机会。
分析：这句话使用了现在分词短语offering us students a chance to share our dreams freely作状语。
高分句型二：Additionally，each class can recommend a representative to join in a speech contest titled "Fly Your Dream"，which will serve as an inspiration for us to dream big and fight for a better future.
译文：此外，每个班级都可以推荐一名代表参加题为"放飞梦想"的演讲比赛，这将激励我们实现远大梦想，为更美好的未来而战。
分析：这句话使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
【解答】Dear Chris，
I'm Li Hua，a senior 3 student in our school.I feel greatly honored and happy to show my opinions on the approaching activity week with the theme of "Fly Your Dream".（表达喜悦）
Personally，a theme class meeting，I Have A Dream，may be a good choice，offering us students a chance to share our dreams freely.【高分句型一】Additionally，each class can recommend a representative to join in a speech contest titled "Fly Your Dream"，which will serve as an inspiration for us to dream big and fight for a better future.【高分句型二】（分享你的创意及原因）
I'm really expecting the coming of the significant month.Sincere gratitude for your consideration.（表达祝愿）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
15．（2025 喀什市模拟）假如你是李华，你的英语老师要求本周class report的主题为"My Favourite Traditional Chinese festival"，请写篇发言稿，内容包括：
（1）你过节的过程；
（2）你的感想。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My Favourite Traditional Chinese festival
Good morning，everyone.My favourite traditional Chinese festival________
【答案】
My Favourite Traditional Chinese festival
Good morning，everyone.My favourite traditional Chinese festival is the Spring Festival.As the new year approaches，my family and I fully engage in preparations.We clean the house to welcome the new year and decorate it with fresh flowers，enhancing the festive atmosphere.My favorite task is hanging red couplets on the doors.
On New Year's Eve，the highlight is our big family dinner，where we get together，chatting and laughing.Later on，we enjoy colorful fireworks.Early next morning，we greet relatives and friends with "Xinnian Hao" or "Gongxi Facai，" accompanied by thrilling dragon and lion dances.For us children，the most exciting part is receiving "lucky money" in red envelopes.
Spring Festival was what I expected most，which was not only for the delicious food，but for the important occasion when our whole family gather together for the family reunion.
【分析】高分句型一：We clean the house to welcome the new year and decorate it with fresh flowers，enhancing the festive atmosphere.
译文：我们打扫房子迎接新年，并用鲜花装饰，增强节日气氛。
分析：这句话使用了现在分词短语enhancing the festive atmosphere作状语。
高分句型二：On New Year's Eve，the highlight is our big family dinner，where we get together，chatting and laughing.
译文：除夕夜，最精彩的是我们的大家庭晚餐，我们聚在一起，聊天大笑。
分析：这句话使用了where引导的非限制性定语从句。
【解答】
My Favourite Traditional Chinese festival
Good morning，everyone.My favourite traditional Chinese festival is the Spring Festival.As the new year approaches，my family and I fully engage in preparations.We clean the house to welcome the new year and decorate it with fresh flowers，enhancing the festive atmosphere.【高分句型一】My favorite task is hanging red couplets on the doors.（节前准备工作）
On New Year's Eve，the highlight is our big family dinner，where we get together，chatting and laughing.【高分句型二】Later on，we enjoy colorful fireworks.Early next morning，we greet relatives and friends with "Xinnian Hao" or "Gongxi Facai，" accompanied by thrilling dragon and lion dances.For us children，the most exciting part is receiving "lucky money" in red envelopes.（过节的过程）
Spring Festival was what I expected most，which was not only for the delicious food，but for the important occasion when our whole family gather together for the family reunion.（感想）
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
16．（2025 郑州模拟）假定你是李华，你的新西兰笔友Alan想了解上周你校举办的英语音乐节活动的情况，请给他回复邮件，内容包括：
（1）活动目的和内容；
（2）你的看法或感想。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Alan，
I'm writing to tell you about the English Music Festival held in our school last week.________
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Alan，
I'm writing to tell you about the English Music Festival held in our school last week.It was a fantastic event aiming to celebrate cultural diversity and improve our English through music.
The festival featured a variety of performances，including songs，dramas，poetry recitations and
so on，all in English.It was a great opportunity for us to practice our language skills in a fun and engaging way.
Personally，I found it not only enhanced our English skills but also broadened our views.I believe events like this are essential for us to develop a global mindset and promote cross﹣cultural understanding.
I'd love to hear about any similar events you've attended or organized.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：It was a fantastic event aiming to celebrate cultural diversity and improve our English through music.
译文：这是一场旨在庆祝文化多样性并通过音乐提高英语水平的精彩活动。
分析：这句话使用了现在分词短语aiming to celebrate cultural diversity and improve our English through music作定语。
高分句型二：I'd love to hear about any similar events you've attended or organized.
译文：我很想听听你参加过或组织过的任何类似活动。
分析：这句话使用了省略了关系代词的定语从句you've attended or organized。
【解答】Dear Alan，
I'm writing to tell you about the English Music Festival held in our school last week.It was a fantastic event aiming to celebrate cultural diversity and improve our English through music.【高分句型一】（写信目的）
The festival featured a variety of performances，including songs，dramas，poetry recitations and
so on，all in English.It was a great opportunity for us to practice our language skills in a fun and engaging way.（活动目的和内容）
Personally，I found it not only enhanced our English skills but also broadened our views.I believe events like this are essential for us to develop a global mindset and promote cross﹣cultural understanding.（看法或感想）
I'd love to hear about any similar events you've attended or organized.【高分句型二】（表达愿意）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
17．（2025 上饶一模） 假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Sam想向你了解中国2024年度运动员/队（athlete/team of the year 2024），请你写一封邮件回复，内容包括：
（1）你心目中的中国年度运动员/队；
（2）理由和启发。
注意：词数80左右，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Sam，
______
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sam，
I'd like to introduce you to Ma Long，one of China's most celebrated table tennis players.
As the captain，he has led China to numerous victories.Humble and approachable，he is also loved by fans at home and abroad.The way he plays，with precision and elegance，is truly remarkable.However，what sets him apart is not only his exceptional skills，but his mental strength，such as the ability to remain calm during the most intense moments of a match.He is a true inspiration to younger players，and his dedication to the sport has inspired countless individuals，including me，to pursue excellence in our own fields.
If you'd like to know more information about him，feel free to contact me!
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：The way he plays，with precision and elegance，is truly remarkable.
译文：他演奏的方式精准而优雅，真的很了不起。
分析：这句话使用了省略了关系代词的定语从句he plays，修饰the way。
高分句型二：However，what sets him apart is not only his exceptional skills，but his mental strength，such as the ability to remain calm during the most intense moments of a match.
译文：然而，让他与众不同的不仅是他出色的技能，还有他的精神力量，比如在比赛最激烈的时刻保持冷静的能力。
分析：这句话使用了what引导的主语从句。
【解答】Dear Sam，
I'd like to introduce you to Ma Long，one of China's most celebrated table tennis players.（心目中的中国年度运动员）
As the captain，he has led China to numerous victories.Humble and approachable，he is also loved by fans at home and abroad.The way he plays，with precision and elegance，is truly remarkable.【高分句型一】However，what sets him apart is not only his exceptional skills，but his mental strength，such as the ability to remain calm during the most intense moments of a match.【高分句型二】He is a true inspiration to younger players，and his dedication to the sport has inspired countless individuals，including me，to pursue excellence in our own fields.（理由和启发）
If you'd like to know more information about him，feel free to contact me!（愿意提供信息）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
18．（2024秋 沧州期末）假定你是李华，原定和Jim等5人组团参加即将到来的校园英文短剧比赛。不幸的是，你受伤住院无法参加排练，请你给小组负责人Jim写一封信。内容包括：
（1）说明原因；
（2）推荐李明作为你的替补参加排练；
（3）预祝取得好成绩。
注意：
（1）词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
参考词汇：排练rehearsal
Dear Jim，
______
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim，
I'm writing to inform you that，unfortunately，I have been injured and am currently hospitalized.So I will be unable to participate in the rehearsals for our upcoming English short drama competition.
Given my absence，I'd like to recommend Li Ming as my substitute.He is talented and possesses a deep and thorough understanding of the script，which makes him well﹣equipped to handle the role.Furthermore，his creative insights and devotion to the project will undoubtedly enrich our team's dynamics.
Despite my inability to be there with you，I hope you do really well in the contest.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：I'm writing to inform you that，unfortunately，I have been injured and am currently hospitalized.
翻译：我写信通知您，不幸的是，我受伤了，目前正在住院。
分析：本句使用了that引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二：He is talented and possesses a deep and thorough understanding of the script，which makes him well﹣equipped to handle the role.
翻译：他才华横溢，对剧本有着深刻而透彻的理解，这使他能够胜任这个角色。
分析：本句使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
【解答】Dear Jim，
I'm writing to inform you that，unfortunately，I have been injured and am currently hospitalized.【高分句型一】So I will be unable to participate in the rehearsals for our upcoming English short drama competition.（说明原因）
Given my absence，I'd like to recommend Li Ming as my substitute.He is talented and possesses a deep and thorough understanding of the script，which makes him well﹣equipped to handle the role.【高分句型二】Furthermore，his creative insights and devotion to the project will undoubtedly enrich our team's dynamics.（推荐李明作为自己的替补参加排练）
Despite my inability to be there with you，I hope you do really well in the contest.（预祝取得好成绩）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
19．（2024秋 河南期末）假定你是李华，你班交换生Jason给你发邮件请你推荐一个适合一日游的地方。请给他回封邮件，内容包括：
（1）你的推荐；
（2）你的理由。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jason，
________
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jason，
Knowing that you want to take a day trip，I recommend you visit the ancient town of Zhouzhuang since you are interested in Chinese culture.
Zhouzhuang Town has well﹣preserved ancient architecture，such as traditional bridges and houses.The canals running through the town add to its unique charm.You can take a boat ride to enjoy the charming scenery and enjoy the peaceful atmosphere.Additionally，there are various local snacks and handicrafts to explore.It's a perfect place to immerse yourself in traditional Chinese culture for a day.
Wish you a good day.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：Knowing that you want to take a day trip，I recommend you visit the ancient town of Zhouzhuang since you are interested in Chinese culture.
翻译：知道你想去一日游，我建议你去周庄古镇，因为你对中国文化感兴趣。
分析：本句使用了现在分词短语Knowing that you want to take a day trip作状语；that引导的宾语从句；since引导的原因状语从句。
高分句型二：It's a perfect place to immerse yourself in traditional Chinese culture for a day.
翻译：这是一个沉浸在中国传统文化中一天的完美场所。
分析：句子中it作形式主语，真正的主语为不定式短语to immerse yourself in traditional Chinese culture for a day。
【解答】Dear Jason，
Knowing that you want to take a day trip，I recommend you visit the ancient town of Zhouzhuang since you are interested in Chinese culture.【高分句型一】（推荐的地方）
Zhouzhuang Town has well﹣preserved ancient architecture，such as traditional bridges and houses.The canals running through the town add to its unique charm.You can take a boat ride to enjoy the charming scenery and enjoy the peaceful atmosphere.Additionally，there are various local snacks and handicrafts to explore.It's a perfect place to immerse yourself in traditional Chinese culture for a day.【高分句型二】（推荐理由）
Wish you a good day.
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
20．（2024秋 菏泽期末） 假定你是国际学校音乐社团的负责人李华，你校准备组建一个多语种合唱团（multilingual choir），想邀请学校的英国老师Mr.Black来做音乐指导（instructor）。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）写邮件的目的；
（2）邀请理由。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr.Black，
______
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mr.Black，
I hope this email finds you well.I am Li Hua，the head of the music club at our international school.I am writing to invite you to serve as the instructor for our newly established multilingual choir.
Your extensive experience in music and your proficiency in multiple languages make you the perfect candidate to guide our choir in exploring the wonders of multicultural music.We believe that with your expertise，our choir will thrive and bring harmonious melodies to our school community.
Looking forward to your positive response.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：I am writing to invite you to serve as the instructor for our newly established multilingual choir.
译文：我写信邀请您担任我们新成立的多语言合唱团的讲师。
分析：这句话使用了过去分词短语newly established作定语修饰multilingual choir。
高分句型二：We believe that with your expertise，our choir will thrive and bring harmonious melodies to our school community.
译文：我们相信，凭借您的专业知识，我们的合唱团将蓬勃发展，为学校社区带来和谐的旋律。
分析：这句话使用了that引导的宾语从句。
【解答】Dear Mr.Black，
I hope this email finds you well.I am Li Hua，the head of the music club at our international school.I am writing to invite you to serve as the instructor for our newly established multilingual choir.【高分句型一】（写邮件的目的）
Your extensive experience in music and your proficiency in multiple languages make you the perfect candidate to guide our choir in exploring the wonders of multicultural music.We believe that with your expertise，our choir will thrive and bring harmonious melodies to our school community.【高分句型二】（邀请理由）
Looking forward to your positive response.（盼望）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使