山西孟县2016中考英语写作含参考范文
【先睹为快】
第一篇
【四川**广安】写作
今年我市深入开展了“学习雷峰精神，共创文明城 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )区”的活动。在3月5日学雷锋纪念日这天，你校组织志愿者去广安敬老院开展“学雷锋，送温暖”活动。假如你是广安七中学生张华，请你将活动情况介绍给美国朋友Ben，与他分享你的美好经历。（活动内容见下表）
活动时间 3月5日
活动地点 广安敬老院(Guang’an Nursing Home)
参加人员 学校志愿者(volunteer)
活动形式 1. 送去鲜花和水果2. 帮助打扫卫生3. 陪老人聊天 (chat with sb.)、唱歌、跳舞5. ……
活动感想 关爱 (care for) 老人(the elderly people)、尊重(respect) 老人
要求：
1. 短文应包括表中所有的要点，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息；
3. 文章不低于80词。开头、结尾已给出。
Dear Ben,
Thank you for your ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) last e-mail. Let me tell you what we did on 5th March in our school.
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If you have chance in China, I hope you can join us.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
【写作思路】
（一）审题
本篇作文考查的体裁为记叙文，要求根据表格信息，介绍学生们在广安敬老院的一些活动。然后写出你个人的活动感想。
（二）列举写作要点
1. 总体介绍自己的活动：went to Guang’an Nursing Home.
2. 细致描述做了哪些事情：ga ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ve flowers and fruit; did some cleaning; chatted with them…
3. 谈论自己的感受：care for… respect…
（三）列举重点短语和句型
went to Guang’an ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )Nursing Home. gave flowers and fruit; did some cleaning; chatted with them…care for
When the old people saw us, they were very happy.
【参考范文】
Dear Ben.
Thank you for your l ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ast e-mail. Let me tell you what we did on 5th March in our school. We , the volunteers went to Guang’an Nursing Home and did many things for the old people there.
When the old p ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )eople saw us, they were very happy. We gave them lots of flowers and fruits. We did cleaning for them. After that we chatted with them. We talked very happily. Some of us sang great songs fro them. And others danced. The old people told us old stories. We wished them good luck. All of us had a wonderful time there.
I felt happy that I ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )cared for the elderly people and show our respect to them. If I have another chance to go there, I will take it.
Do you have some volunteer work Please tell me in your next letter.
Yours
Zhang Hua
【评分标准】
第一档 （13~15分） 信息完整，表达流畅，无语言错误或基本无语言错误。
第二档 （10~12分） 信息基本完整，表达较流畅，有少量错误，但不影响意思表达。
第三档 （7~9分） 能传递部分信息，表达不够流畅，但句子基本可读。
第四档 （4~6分） 只能传递少量信息，表达不通顺，只有少量句子可读。
第五档 （1~3分） 只能传递个别信息，表达不清楚，只有个别句子可读。
【2014江苏苏州】书面表达
假设你校为了配合创建“文化校园，高效课堂 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )”活动，最近以“学生做作业是否应该在网上找答案？”为题做了一个调查。调查发现一些学生赞成，但许多学生反对这种做法。请你根据调查情况和下列表格中的要点提示，以“Think before you online”为题用英语写一篇短文。
赞成者 反对者 你自己
观点 1.不会做题2.学习别人3.节省时间 1.不利能力提升2.不利思维发展 考生自（至少2点）
注意：
1.词数90左右。短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。
2.短文必须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，呆适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。
3.短文中不得出现真实的人名，校名和等相关信息。
Think before you search online
Some students now ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )have a new use for the Internet-helping them with their homework. But different people have different ideas about it.
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【参考范文】
Think before you search online
Some students n ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ow have a new use for the Internet-helping them with their homework. But different people have different ideas about it.
Some students agr ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ee with it. They sometimes don’t know the answers to the problems, so they have to turn to the Internet. They think they can learn from other people. At the same time, it’s easy and it savers time.
However, not all th ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )e students welcome this. Many students think simply copying the answer won’t improve their abilities and it may make students stop thinking.
I think students shoul ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )d first think over the problems by themselves. If we use the Internet properly. It could be a good way to study.
写作思路点拔：
本书面表达是就学校创建“文化校园，高效课堂”活动，以“学生做作业是否应该在网上找答案”的调查结果写一篇小议论文。
1.写出赞成的观点。
2.写出反对者的观点。
3.表明自己的观点。
写作步骤：
1.短文开头已给写，学生只需先写出赞成者的观点和理由：不会做题时，上网查找也是他人学习一种方式，也能节约时间。
2.然后写出一部分不赞成者的观点及理由：抄答案不能提升能力，不利于思维发展。
3.写出作者自己的观点和理由：作为 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )学生应先自己独立思考问题，确实需要查找答案，也要加以思考解题的过程和自己的理解，掌握得好也是一种好的学习方法。
第二篇
【2012湖南郴州】情景作文（计15分）
每年的8月8日是“全民健身日” ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )， 为了让这项运动更加深入人心，某英文杂志的（运动与健康）栏目正在以Let’s Do Exercise Together 为题，向广大中学生征文。 请你根据下面表格中的要点提示写一篇文章，向该栏目投稿。
运动的重要性 运动的时间与方式
·保持健康·培养个人的性格…… ·上学时步行或骑自行车·体育课做各种锻炼（跑步、打篮球……）·周末与朋友去爬山、游泳等……
参考词汇： keep fit ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ), train a person’s character, on foot, PE classes, climb mountains
要求：1. 短文须包含要点提示中所有信息，并适当发挥；
2. 词数：80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 文章中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
Let’s Do Exercise Together
It’s very important fo ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )r us to do exercise. ________________________________________
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【参考范文】
Let’s Do Exercise Together
It’s very impor ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )tant for us to do exercise. Doing exercise can not only help us keep fit, but also help to train a person’s character. What’s more, doing exercise helps us to study better.
We can do exercise wh ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )enever we want. It is good for us to go to school on foot or by bike. In PE classes, we can do all kinds of exercise, such as running, jumping, playing basketball and so on. On weekends, we can climb mountains or go swimming with our friends. Also, we can go hiking during the vacations.
Let’s do exercise and have a healthy Lifestyle together!
第三篇
【2012浙江台州】书面表达（本题有2小题，76小题5分，77小题15分，共计20分）
76. 你校外籍教师Mr. Dean想在暑假组织一次英语夏令营活动，要求你制作一份海报贴在校园布告栏上，具体内容包含如下：
①要求说英语、生活自理（look after…）；②时间：两周；③ 写一句话呼吁大家参加。
注意：海报部分内容已写好，你只需将其它内容补充完整。
【参考范文】
76. Do you want to hav ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )e an interesting summer camp this summer vacation You need to speak English and look after yourself/yourselves. It will take you two weeks. Mr. Dean will also be with e and jion us! / Come and have fun! / welcome to our camp! /...
【2012浙江台州】77. ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) 对于是否参加英语夏令营活动，同学们有不同的观点。请你根据下面表格内容提示，写一份报告给Mr. Dean，陈述同学们的观点及理由，并附上你的观点及理由。
赞成 反对
同学们的观点及理由 放松自已 对英语不感兴趣
学习英语 时间太长
交更多朋友 父母不同意
你的观点及理由 ……
注意：①短文必须包括表中所有信息，可适当发挥，但不要逐字翻译；
②开头已给出（不计入总词数），你只需接着写；
③词数80～100个。
参考词汇：:relax， make friends, take no interest in
The students of our sc ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )hool have different ideas about if we would like to take part in the English summer camp.______________________________________________
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【参考范文】77. One possible version :
The students of our ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) school have different ideas about if we would like to take part in the English summer camp. Some agree while others don't. Those who want to take part in the activity think that they can relax themselves in the camp. Also they can improve English and make lots of friends. However, some of the students take no interest in English. They think it's too "long to stay away from home. Their parents won't allow them to do so.
In my opinion, it will ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) help me learn to work with my classmates. By living and learning together, I can learn how to get on well with everyone. So I’d like to join. (94 words)
Another possible version ;
The students of our ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) school have different ideas about if we would like to take part in the English summer camp. Some agree while others don't. Those who want to take part in the activity think that they can relax themselves in the camp. Also they can improve English and make lots of friends. However, some of the students take no interest in English. They think it's too long to stay away from home. Their parents won't allow them to do so.
As for me, I do ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )n't want to take part in the summer camp. I have to go to lots of lessons on vacation, so I have no time. Besides, I prefer to stay at home rather than go out. (100 words)
第四篇
中考书面表达（2）
【四川省峨眉山市2014年 4月二模试题】书面表达 （满分15分）
生活中总免不了会出些意外。作 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )为一名中学生，除了平时要做有心人，尽量防止意外的发生，也应当掌握一些处理意外的知识。当意外突然发生时，该如何处理呢？请你根据下面提供的要点，给校报英语专栏写一篇80词左右的短文，并谈谈自己的看法。
1. 了解一些紧急救护的电话和方法
2. 当发生意外时，及时拔打紧急救护电话。
3. 清楚告诉对方发生的事情和地点
4. 保持冷静，等待救援。
注意：
1. 词数：80词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 应覆盖所有要点：可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
3. 参考词汇：emergency services紧急救护 operator（接线员）
书面表达 （满分15分）
一、评分原则
1. 本题总分为15分，按5档次给分。
2. 评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。
3. 评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法的准确性、上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性。
4. 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程序予以考虑。
5. 如书写较差，以至影响交附，将分数降低一个档次。
二、内容要点
1. 了解一些紧急救护的电话和方法
2. 当发生意外时，及时拔打紧急救护电话。
3. 清楚告诉对方发生的事情和地点
4. 保持冷静，等待救援。
5. 自己的看法
三、要点认定
1. 考生必须有较完整的句子表达出要点。如只有关键词而无主谓结构，不可视为要点写出。
2. 在表达要点的句子中，如果主谓结构有严重的语言错误（如语态、连动词或只写出情态动词而无主动词），可视为半个要点。
3. 围绕要点的发挥，如有语言错误，则扣语言分。
四、档次划分
档次 得 分 要点数 语 言 使 用 情 况
五 13－15 5 语言基本无误，行文连贯，表达清楚。
四 10－12 4 语言有少量错误，行文基本连贯，表达基本清楚。
三 7－9 3 语言有一些错误，尚能达意。
二 4－6 2 语言错误较多，影响表达。
一 1－3 1 只能写出与所要求内容有关的一些单词。
注意：
1. 原则上应按照考生所表达的要点数归档。如语言错误多，可降一档，如语言表达较好，可打该档最高分或上升一档。
2. 在同一档次内，根据语言错误的多少确定五个分值。
1-2个错误，取该档次分值的高线。
3-4个错误，取该档次分值的中线。
5个错误，取该档次分值的低线。
6个以上降下档，10个左右错误取其降档后的低线。
【参考范文】One possible version
There are always some ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) accidents in our life. So it’s very important to know what to do when accidents happen. First we need to know the numbers of the emergency services, such as 120, 119 and 122 and some ways to protect ourselves. When an accident happens, and we can’t deal with it, we should call the numbers of the emergency services for help in time. We should tell the operator clearly what happens, where the place is and which service we need. Then we should keep calm and wait for help. We should try our best to help people in trouble when we see an accident.山西孟县2016中考英语写作含范文
【先睹为快】
第一篇
【山西】书面表达（共15分）
学生综合素质评价的方式多种多样，同伴互评是其中较为有效地方式之一，它可以让学生不断体验成长和学习过程的进步，并正确认识自我，保持自信。
某班一个小组正在进行阶段性同伴互评活动，如果你是该组组长，请结合本组讨论情况，为本组某位同学写一份激励性评价报告，内容须包含以下要点：
·the skill/ the advantage/ the personal quality the student has
·one thing the student did
·some advice for the student
要求：1. 词数80词左右；不得出现真实人名、校名。
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Han Mei is an ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )easygoing girl who gets along well with everyone. She is also talented in performing. What’s the most important, she is warm-hearted.
Once she kne ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )w a girl in her neighbourhood had so serious an illness that a large amount of money to the unlucky girl. Besides, she organized a charity show to raise more money. When the girl and her parents got the money, they were really moved.
Han Mei should also ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )put more time and energy into study and try to be a student with both a kind heart and good grades.
第二篇
【2012新疆阜康】书面表达（满分15分）
在阳光雨露里，我已长高、长壮，但这还 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )不是全部，长大还应包括什么？是关心、帮助同学？是体贴、理解父母？是感恩、回报亲朋师长？还是……，成长的点点滴滴，久久不能忘记。请以I Am Not a Child Any More为题，记叙你在学习生活中经历的一件或两件事，表明你已经不再是一个下孩子。
要求：1.请根据所给题目，用英语写一篇短文，不少于80词；
2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；
3.文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计算
I am not a child any more
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【参考范文】
I am not a child any more
I have changed a lot d ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )uring the past three years. I used to be weak and short. But now, I am strong and as tall as my father. The most important thing is that I have learned to care about others.
It was a Wednesday e ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )vening. When I went back home, no one was in. So I cooked the meal. I didn’t know my mother was ill until my parents came back from the hospital. They both said the meal was very delicious, although it tasted salty. At bedtime, I fetched hot water for my mother to wash feet. My mother said, “Dear, you are really grown up.”
It was the first time that I had realized I was not a child any more.
第三篇
【2012.山东日照】书面表达
三年的初中生活就要结束，崭新的高 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )中学习即将到来。回顾过去，你一定有许多成功的喜悦与失利的遗憾；展望未来，你肯定有美好的憧憬和实实在在的打算。请你以“Unforgettable Memories ”为题，给英文报纸21st Century “青春校园”栏目写一篇80词左右的征文。
注意：1. 内容要包含对过去的回忆（学业有成、爱好特长、师生情谊以及最大的遗憾）和对未来的憧憬。
2. 文中不要出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Unforgettable Memories
How time flie ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )s! Three years passed
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【参考范文】One possible version：
Unforgettable Memories
How time flies ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )! Three years passed in a blink. Lots of memories left in my head. Teachers, classmates, hard work and above all friendship stay in mind. Looking back, I have gone through either the joy of success or the pains of failure. Teachers are friendly to us in life and always strict with us in study. Classmates and friends help me so much. With their help I’ve made great progress. But I’m a careless boy. And I always make mistakes which can be avoided. Senior middle school life is a new beginning and it gives me a chance to overcome my shortcomings. As it is said, “It is not our abilities that show what we truly are, it is our choice.” The two-month holiday will also provide me the freedom to think over and make up my mind to do it better in the future. And I believe I can do it.
第四篇
中考书面表达（3）
【重庆市铜梁三中2014适应性考试】书面表达（满分15分）
随着网络的发展， ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )人们消费观念的转变，购物方式也在悄然地发生变化。“网购”成为一种时尚，越来越多的学生也正加入到网购群体当中。请你根据以下表格的提示，写一篇网上购物的文章。
Advantages Disadvantages
buy what you are interested in easily The goods are different from the pictures you see on the Internet
avoid getting too tired; save time Buy something you are not really needed
choose different goods; The price is lower
注意：①所表述的内容必须包含表格中的所有方面；
②文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称及其它相关信息，否则不予评分；
③词数：80 词左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
提示词汇：网购shopping on line; 避免做某事avoid doing sth;商品goods; 导致cause
书面表达（满分15分）
一、各档次给分范围和要求
第五档（很好）（12－15分）：覆盖所有内容要点；语法结构和词汇运用准确；有效使用连接成分，文章结构紧凑。
第四档 （好）（９－１２分）：覆盖所有主要内容；语法结构和词汇运用基本准确；能使用连接成分，文章结构紧凑。
第三档 （适当）（５－８分）：虽 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容；有一些语法结构和词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解；能使用连接成分，文章内容连贯。
第二档 （较差）（2－４分）：错误理解试题要求，明显遗漏主要内容；语法结构单调，词
第一档 (很差)(０－1分)：未能传达任何信息；内容太少，无法评判。写的内容与所要求内容无关或写的内容无法看清。
二、按所提供的要点内容给分
1.容易购得自己感兴趣的东西 (3分)
2.避免太劳累、节省时间 (3分)
3.可选择不同东西、价格便宜(3分)
4.所购商品与网上图片不完全相同(3分)
5.有时所购商品不很需用(3分)
注意:1．考生必须用完整的句子表达出要点.如只有关键词而无主谓结构,不可视为要点写出。
2．围绕要点的发挥，如有语言错误，则扣语言分。
三、说明：
1．考生必须用完整的句子表达出要点.如只有关键词而无主谓结构,不可视为要点写出。
2．围绕要点的发挥，如有语言错误，则扣语言分。
3．内容要点可用不同方式表达。
4．如书写太差，以致影响交际，扣2分。
【参考范文】One possible version:
With the developme ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )nt of the Internet, many people are used to shopping on line. It has become a fashion in our daily life. Some of us students also join the group.
Shopping on ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )line has many advantages. Just by a click of the mouse, you can buy what you’re interested in without going outdoors. You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowded people and cars and save time. When shopping on line, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose prices are generally lower.
Every coin ha ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )s two sides. Its disadvantages are obvious, too. On one hand, it’s very easy for you to buy goods different from the pictures you see on the Internet. On the other hand, shopping on line may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed. That’s a waste of money. All in all, I love shopping on line.
【2013 上海】Ⅶ.Writing (作文) (共20分)
99. Writing at ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) least 60 words about the topic “How to protect myself”. (以“如何保护自己” 为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
提示：自我保护市青少年需要掌握的重要 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )技能。请谈谈你在生活中怎样进行自我保护（可结合生活中的某一个情景或具体事例，如：面对灾难如何自救，如何预防受骗或侵害，如何避免生活中的意外，等等）。
Phrases for reference (以下短语仅供参考)
Ask… for help calm down in danger prevent… from
(注意：文中不得出现具体人名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。)
【参考范文】One possible version:
How to protect myself
As a student, I thi ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )nk it important for me to protect myself from dangerous situations. First of all, I must calm down as soon as possible, for panicking is of no help. Then, as is know to all, calling 119 immediately is the most effective way to save myself. As well as that, it is best to take the stairs instead of elevators. In conclusion, with positive attitude and sufficient preparations, I will be able to protect myself from fires.山西孟县2016中考英语二轮写作含参考范文
第一部分
【2014湖南邵阳】情景作文 (计10分)
假设你叫王磊。目前，我市正在开展 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )创建“文明卫生城市”，学校也提出了“垃圾不落地，校园更美丽”的口号，为了积极响应学校号召，上周你和几位同学到火车站进行志愿者活动，贡献自己的一份力量。请把你所做的事写一封电子邮件告诉你的好朋友Bob。
place Train station
Time From 8:00 to 12:00 on Saturday rooming
People You and some classmates
Activities Clean the benches, pick up the rubbish, sweep the ground
Feeling A little tired but happy
要求：1. 80词左右，文章开头已给出，不计人总词数；
2. 文章尽可能包括表格中所有信息，语言流畅，书写规范，卷面整洁；
3.文中不得使用你的真实姓名及校名。
Bob,
I’m writing to tell y ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ou about a voluntary activity last week. _______________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Wang Lei
【参考范文】
Bob,
I’m writing t ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )o tell you about a voluntary activity last week. At present, the city is underway to create "civilization health city", the school also offers "rubbish doesn't fall to the ground, the campus is more beautiful" slogan, actively response to the call, my classmates and I went to the train station last week. We had a volunteer activities there, contributes our own strength. It lasted from 8:00 to 12:00 on Saturday rooming. We cleaned the benches, picked up the rubbish and swept the ground. After that, we felt little tired but happy.
Wang Lei
【2013 湖北黄冈】书面表达（1 题，满分10 分）
俗话说：“予人玫瑰，手留余香”。在我们 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )的日常生活中，我们会遇到各种困难，因此，我们会需要他人的帮助；但同时，我们也要学会帮助他人。其实，帮助他人就是在帮助自己。请你结合身边的事例，以“帮助”为话题，用英语写一篇短文。
注意： ①无需写标题，开头已经给出，但不计入总词数；
②文中要结合你帮助别人或别人帮助你的·一件事例；
③文中不得透露任何个人和学校的真实信息；
④词数为80 左右。
As the saying goe ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )s, roses given, fragrance in hand. In our daily life, we will meet with a lot of trouble.
【参考范文】 One possible version
So it is necessar ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )y for us to help those who are in trouble. I still remember I helped one of my classmates with his English when we were in the first term of Junior Eight. Li Hua, one of my classmates, was not good at English while I did well. One day, he asked me to help him. So from then on, whenever he had problems, he would ask me, and I was patient to explain them to him. Slowly, his English improved with my help. At the same time, I found my English improved too.
Actually, helping others is helping ourselves.
【2012江苏扬州】写作
.随着网络技术的不断发展，人们传递情感的方式 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )也在不断变化，假如你叫王强，上周你就“作用纸质卡片还是电子卡片？”在班级展开了一项调查。请你给China Daily报社写一封信，介绍此次调查的结果并发展你的观点。
约30%的同学认为 约70%4同学认为 你的看法
使用纸质卡片：1.手工制作、表达真情2.携带方便、便于保存3.…… 使用电子卡片：1.信息量大、传递快捷2.节约纸张、利于环保3.…… 1.……2.……、（至少2条）
要求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2）必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥；
3）词数：100词左右（信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Dear Editor:
I am writing ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )to tell you about the survey I’ve made on “Using paper cards or e-cards ” in our class.
Yours sincerely
Wang Qiang
【参考范文】
Dear Editor,
I am writing to tel ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )l you about the survey I’ve made on “Using paper cards or e-cards” In our class.
About 30% of the stud ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ents want to use paper cards. First of all, they are made by hand and they can express/show people’s real feelings. Second, they are easy to take and can be kept for long. Third, people can read them without computers.
However, ar ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ound 70% of the students prefer to use c-cards. For one thing, e-cards can carry lots of information and people can send them quickly. For another thing, suing e-cards can save paper so that our environment can be protected well. What’s more, people can make various designs they like.
第二部分
【2012年】
随着互联网的发展和普及，网络购物在中国 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )也变得越来越普遍了，甚至已经成了我们日常生活的一部分了；相信同学们身边一定有不少同学已经通过网络进行购物了，比如淘宝网，京东商城等；但是网络购物究竟有何利弊呢？ 请写一篇短文，谈谈网上购物的好处与坏处。
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考范文：
We talked about the ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )advantages and disadvantages of internet shopping these days. Some students think it's very convenience for us to go shopping on the internet. The shop on Internet for example , 360buy.com are open for almost 24 hours a day so we can buy something we want at any time if we like. What's more, we needn't to wait in a queue.
However, some students ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) disagreed with them. we can't see the things while we are shopping. so we are not sure whether they are good or not. Besides, we can't enjoy the happiness of shopping with our friends.
【2012年】
据报道，从2011年开始韩国除了向所 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )有小学和初高中学生发放纸质的语文、英语、数学教科书之外，同时还将发放光盘形式的电子教科书。这表明，在韩国，电子图书即将走进寻常百姓家。某英文论坛发起了一次主题为“E-Books, Good or Bad ”的讨论，请你写一篇80词左右的短文，表达你对这件事情的看法。
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考范文：
E-Books Are Good
It’s reported that s ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )chool students in Korea will use e-books from 2011. What good news this is! E-books have many advantages.
Most importantly, ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) they are good for the environment, since they can save lots of paper and trees. Besides, they are very convenient. To get a paper book, one has to spend a lot of time searching for it in a bookshop. But we can find e-books very quickly on the computer.
In short, e-books can make us enjoy life better.
第三部分
中考书面表达
【重庆市铜梁三中2014适应性考试】
书面表达（满分15分）
中考前夕, 你的很多同学都在紧张备考 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ), 却忽视了健康。你很为他们担忧。请你根据提示写一篇英语短文, 发表在校刊上, 以引起同学们的重视。(80个词左右)
Current situations(现状) Your suggestions
be busy studyingstay up latetake less exercise. . . have enough sleeptake a walktake more exercise. . .
Now lots of student ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )s are busy studying so that some of them don’t pay much attention to their health._____________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】书面表达（满分15分）
Now lots of st ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )udents are busy studying so that some of them don’t pay much attention to their health. They often stay up late and take less exercise. It’s very bad. I’m always worried about their health. Here are some suggestions I want to give them.
First, having ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) enough sleep can make us stronger. Second, we should take a walk after supper and take more exercise at least once a week. Finally we should learn to relax ourselves. We can listen to some light music, chat with family or friends. To keep fit is very easy if we care about it a lot.
评分细则
各档次给分范围和要求
第五档（很好）（12－15分）：覆盖所有内容要点；语法结构和词汇运用准确；有效使用连接成分，文章结构紧凑。
第四档 （好）（９－１２分）：覆盖所有主要内容；语法结构和词汇运用基本准确；能使用连接成分，文章结构紧凑。
第三档 （适当）（５－８分）：虽漏掉一些内 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )容，但覆盖所有主要内容；有一些语法结构和词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解；能使用连接成分，文章内容连贯。
第二档 （较差）（2－４分）：错误理解试题要 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )求，明显遗漏主要内容；语法结构单调，词汇有限且错误较多，影响理解；缺乏连接成分，文章内容不连贯。
第一档 (很差)(０－1分)：未能传达任何信息；内容太少，无法评判。写的内容与所要求内容无关或写的内容无法看清。
注意:
1．考生必须用完整的句子表达出要点.如只有关键词而无主谓结构,不可视为要点写出。
2．围绕要点的发挥，如有语言错误，则扣语言分。
3．考生必须用完整的句子表达出要点.如只有关键词而无主谓结构,不可视为要点写出。
4围绕要点的发挥，如有语言错误，则扣语言分。
5．内容要点可用不同方式表达。
6．如书写太差，以致影响交际，扣2分。山西孟县2016中考英语二轮品析写作含参考范文
第一部分
2015中考英语话题作文押题----发表观点类
“蛋奶工程”惠及我省千百 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )万学生，可是，在我们周围，有许多同学把吃不完的鸡蛋牛奶乱扔乱弃。对此，你有什么看法和好的建议？假设你是张伟，请用英语给你的同学Tom写一封邮件和他交流自己的想法。
要求：
1. 语言表达准确，短文连贯通顺；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 80词左右。
【审题指导】仔细阅读所给文字，提取关键信息：
1. 抓准文体。本文表达自己对蛋奶工程中浪费现象的看法和建议，属于议论文。
2. 抓住重点。文章应该首先亮明 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )观点，说明浪费鸡蛋和牛奶是不正确的。然后重点谈论如何杜绝浪费，有哪些方法可以解决这个问题。最后号召大家行动起来、节约粮食。
4. 确定人称。本文要从自 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )己的认识角度谈论粮食浪费现象，因为作者也是学生中的一员，因此主要使用第一人称。如果谈到其他同学，也可使用第三人称。
5. 把握时态。本文谈论当前的浪费现象，主要是用一般现在时。如果谈到过去或将来的事情，则使用一般过去时或一般将来时。
【写作指导】
对蛋奶工程浪费现象的看法和建议
要点提示 素材串联
开头：引出话题，提出观点 1. 蛋奶工程的性质是暖心工程（Eggs and Milk Project; a heartwarming project）；2. 目前，浪费现象比较严重(throw the left eggs and milk everywhere)；3. 我们不应该浪费粮食（shouldn’t waste the food）；4. 许多贫困地区缺少粮食（poor areas；have little to eat）。
正文：具体谈论浪费的错误以及怎样解决浪费现象 1. 我们应该吃完鸡蛋和牛奶（ea ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )t up）；2. 如果吃不完，带回家喂宠物（take them home; feed the dogs or cats）；3. 如果不想吃，可以送给没有吃到的同学（give them to others），或者告诉老师（tell our teacher），把蛋奶捐出去（give them away）。
结尾：回扣观点，提出号召 节约是我们的责任（our duty），让我们行动起来（take actions）。
【高分范文】
Dear Tom，
Eggs and Milk ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )Project is a heartwarming project provided to primary and junior students in our province. However, a few students throw the left eggs and milk everywhere. I think we shouldn’t waste the food and that’s not a good habit. As we know, in many poor areas, people have little to eat, and food is produced by farmers with hard work.
So we should save t ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )he food especially the free food by government. I think we should eat up the eggs and milk. If we can’t eat up them, we should take them home to feed the dogs or cats. If we don’t want to eat the eggs and milk, we should give them to others who don’t have. Or we must tell our teacher to give them away to students in poor places.
Saving food is our duty. Let’s take actions!
Yours,
Zhang Wei
【写作模板】
某件事情is ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )good for 对象（人/物）.First, they can 有利之处. It also helps 好的方面.Another advantage is that具体的有利之处.
However, there ar ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )e also disadvantages. For one thing, homework不利之处. For another thing, they can’t干自己想干的事情.
In my opinion, 某件事情 is 好的方面, but提出自己的观点和看法.
【短语和句型】
◆Personal view(个人看法)
Some people bel ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ieve that..., while others think that...有些人相信……，而其他人认为……
There are two sides ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )of opinions on it: one is...; the other is...关于这点有两方面观点，一个是……，另一个是……
as far as I am concerned/ in my opinion(view)我认为/在我看来
from my point of view...在我看来……
◆Prove the thesis(论证观点/理由)
The reason why...is that...……的原因是……
For one thing...for another... 一方面……，另一方面……
On the one hand...On the other hand 一方面……另一方面……
First...second...last but not least...首先……其次……最后但同样重要的是……
what’s more此外in addition此外 particularly 尤其是 in contrast相比之下
◆Conclusion(结论)
in a word=in brief/total =in all/short 总之；简言之
as a result结果above all 总之therefore因此；所以so因而；所以；那么
in my opinion/I think依我看from the above综上所述
I hope...我希望……It is clear that...……是显而易见的
As we all know...众所周知……It is well-known that...众所周知……
As/So far as I know...据我所知……
Only in this way can we achieve our goal.只有这样，我们才能实现目标。
From all what I said, I agree to the thought that...从我所说的来看，我同意……的看法。
In my view, I hold the point of view that...在我看来，我支持……的观点。
I am sure my opinion is both...and...我相信我的观点既……又……
◆suggestions（建议）
What/How about doing sth？做某事怎么样
Why not do sth. =Why don’t you do sth 为什么不做某事呢？
You’d better do sth. 你最好做某事。
I suggest that you(should) do sth.我觉得你应该做某事。
◆Expectation(期望)
hope/wish希望expect期望suggest建议promise承诺
look forward to期待care for关心grow up长大
I hope that he can take good care of himself. 我希望他能照顾好自己。
I wish you can give me more care and love. 我希望你能给予我更多的爱和关心。
第二部分
【2012年】
如果你是图中的学生，有一天在放 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )学的路上目睹了图中的情景。请你以What shall I do 为题，用英语写一篇字数不少于80个的短文。要求以第一人称描述图画情景，并谈谈你会怎么办 说出自己的理由。注意：本题不能出现真实姓名、学校等有关信息。（2004年台州）
( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )
【参考范文】
One day, I wa ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )s on my way home when I saw a man and a lady get off a bus. The lady had a beautiful handbag with her. To my surprise, I found the man began to follow the lady quietly. I was afraid something might happen and decided to follow them. Seeing the street was almost empty, the man went up, snatched (grabbed) the handbag from the lady, and got away with it.
Now the lady was r ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )unning after him, shouting, "Stop thief! Stop thief!" "What shall I do
Shall I call 110 or..."
【2012年】
一些来自美国的学生到你们学校 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )参观。老师安排了一些英语成绩好的学生与他们进行座谈。你有幸成为其中一员。请你根据自己的实际情况，简述一下与他们交流的过程。要求不少于100词。下面的要点必须包括在内：
1）在交谈中你如何从被动到主动与他们交谈；
2）在听不懂的情况下你是怎么做的？
3）你对此次的交谈满意吗？为什么？
4）此次交谈对你学英语有何启发？
【参考范文】
Last week a group of ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )American students came to visit our school. After they were shown around the school, they wanted to have a talk to some of the students in my school. I was lucky to be one of the students. At first I was afraid to talk to them because I thought my spoken English was poor and they would laugh at me. But then one of the American students named Peter asked me some questions. To be polite I had to answer him. I spoke very slowly, but he just encouraged me to go on talking. And he spoke slowly so that I could understand him. Gradually I began to speak better and better. At last we exchanged our addresses and we became good friends. From that I understand that if you are brave enough to speak out, it’s easy to speak English. Don’t be afraid of making mistakes.
第三部分
中考书面表达
【甘肃省兰州市2014诊断考试 (1)】
书面表达(满分15分)
假设下面是你的笔友Peter的一些信息。请根据下面内容，写一篇短文介绍一下他的情况。
要求：① 语句通顺，符合逻辑，可适当发挥。
② 词数80字左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
1. 年龄及外貌：出生于1997年8月23号，圆脸，长鼻，戴一副眼镜.
2. 饮食：健康，常吃水果蔬菜，很少吃垃圾食品.
3．性格：慷慨大方，乐于助人(举一例)……。
4．品质：善良，善待动物。
5．梦想之家：远离城市，靠近大海。
I am very glad to introduce my pen friend Peter to you.
This is my pen friend，what about yours
【参考范文】书面表达(满分15分)
I am very glad to introduce my pen friend Peter to you.
He was born on Aug ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ust 23 1997. He has a round face and a long nose. He wears a pair of glasses because of working on the computer too much at night. He is strong and healthy. Every day he eats much fruit and many vegetables. What’s more, he seldom eats junk food. He is generous and helpful. He often gives his seats to people in need on the bus. He is also kind. He always treats animals kindly. His dream home is far away from the city. It’s close to the sea.
This is my pen friend , what about yours
书面表达评分标准：
第一档：（15~13分）
完全符合题目要求，观点正确，要点齐全。句式多样，词汇丰富。语言准确，语意连贯，表达清楚，具有逻辑性。
第二档：（12~9分）
基本符合题目要求，观点基本 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )正确，要点比较齐全。语法结构和词汇基本满足文章需要。语言基本通顺，语意基本连贯，表达基本清楚。虽然有少量语言错误，但不影响整体理解。
第三档：（8~5分）
部分内容符合题目要求，要点不齐全。语法结构和词汇错误较多，语言不通顺，表达不够清楚，影响整体理解。
第四档：（4~0分）
与题目有关内容不多，只是简单拼凑词语，所写内容难以理解。
1. 突出开放性。
书面表达题目将越来越摒弃早期那种"汉译英"式 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )的题目，而会提供更大的自由空间，让学生都有话可写，同时激发学生的写作欲望，唤醒与强化写作主体的意识，启发思维，拓展心灵。这类题目让学生的写作空间更广泛，便于学生表达真实情感，充分展示个性，这一点与新课标的要求一致。
2. 突出时代性。
无论从认识、道德伦理、形象展示、哲理思 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )考等方面，书面表达都会体现一定时代性的价值取向。也许有的同学会认为关注时代性(共性)与提倡发展学生的个性有矛盾，其实个性化色彩并不排斥时代性，个性化也要求关注时代性，两者是相互通融的。现代中学生应善于关注自己的小天地，同时放眼大时代。提倡时代感同样可展示真善美的自我，否则写出的都是大话、空话、套话，融入不了个性。
3. 突出实用性。
细心的同学可能会发现，往年的英语书面表达在 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )设计时会考虑要考查哪些词汇、哪些句式，而近年来的题目则倾向于考察如何解决某一问题，更注重了实用性。留言条、书信、日记等常见应用文普遍受到关注，电话记录、采访提纲、演讲稿、说明书、海报等应用文也不容忽视。我们还要注意到，一般的看图作文、记叙文、说明文、议论文也各有其"实用性"的一面。
4. 突出教育性。
书面表达的材料和提示语将更多地体现教育性，以便让学生在读题和写作的过程中得到熏陶感染和教育
山西孟县2016中考英语二轮品析写作含范文
第一部分
2015中考英语话题作文押题----事物介绍类
在本周的英语课堂上，你们班同学针对“ ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )文明礼貌的重要性”这个话题展开了激烈的讨论。请你以 is important 为题写一篇80词左右的英语短文。
要求：
1. 语言表达准确，短文连贯通顺；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 80词左右。
【审题指导】细读所给的文字提示，可以提取信息：
1. 此文要求先补全题目，再就某一方面进行说明。
2. 发表自己看法时用第一人称，其他人用第三人称；时态为一般现在时。
3. 80词左右，文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
【写作指导】
礼仪的重要性
要点提示 素材串联
开头：引出主题 良好的行为习惯很重要（good manners are important）
正文：举例阐述 1. 变得更快乐（would be happier ） 2. 保持干净（ help us keep the place clean ） 3. 使我们相处得更友善（help us to be friendly with each other ）
结尾：自己的观点 使我们和他人感到快乐（make us and others happy）
【高分范文】
As we all know, good ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )manners are important in our daily life. Having good manners can make us and others happy.
There are lots of goo ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )d manners around us in the daily life. For example, it’s a good manner that we wait patiently in line instead of pushing in front of each other while waiting for a bus. Also, keeping the place where we live clean in place of dropping litter everywhere. The cleaner we keep, the healthier we are.
As for me, good man ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ners help us to be friendly with each other so that we can make more friends and live a happy life. So, let’s keep the good manners we have and acquire good habits we don’t have.
That’s all. Thank you.
【写作模板】
As we all know ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ), good manners are日常生活中的重要性 and 对别人的影响. We should日常生活中的礼貌做法1. Also, we should日常生活中的礼貌做法2 because原因. In my opinion, 自己的看法.
That’s all. Thank you.
【短语与句型】
事物介绍类文章一般从以下几个方面入手：说明事物属性—介绍它的作用—对人的影响
事物
cook 做饭 friendship 友谊 holiday 假期
shopping 购物 health 健康 exercise 锻炼
an unforgettable day 难忘的一天 a pleasant holiday 愉快的一天
first of all 首先 What’s more 其次 in fact 事实上
as a result 结果是 As we all know,… 我们都知道
作用
important 重要的 useful 有用的 valuable 珍贵的
educational 有教育意义的
From my point of view/opinion, it’s important to ... 在我看来，……
As for me, it is +adj.+ for sb. to do sth. 对我来说，让某人做某事是……的
影响
learn from 从中学习 teach us 教会我们 have influence on us 对我们有影响
We would/should.... 我们将/应该……
We’d better/It is better for us to...我们最好……
. If we...，we’ll ... 如果我们……，我们将会……
第二部分
【2012年】
. 结合去年学校举办的Christmas party，写一篇90字左右的文章，将party的内容简介地介绍一下。内容必须包括：
1. 外教参加的舞蹈节目；2.老师的流行歌曲。 2. 自己班的节目 4. 全校师生全部参加。
5. 节目持续时间2个小时。 6. 结束时天已经快黑了。
【参考范文】
A Christmas Party
Before Christmas Day ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ), our school held a big celebration party because we had two American English teachers this year. All the teachers and students in our school took part in it.
Nick, the boy ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) teacher, joined the dance. He danced very clumsily, but he was very interested in dancing with his students. My English teacher sang a pop song with some students dancing with him. And our class had a short program. It was not very good, but full of fun. The whole program lasts about two hours. When it finished, it was going to be dark.
This is the fir ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )st time I have had with my foreign teachers to celebrate Christmas Day. I enjoyed it a lot.
【2012年】
根据自己的实际情况，说说自己在节假日的休闲方式，内容要具体，一定是自己的习惯性的休闲方式。标题My way to relax
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My way to relax
Most of my c ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )lassmates like playing computer games or play sports to relax themselves, but I don’t. I am very quiet, so I prefer reading at home or visiting the bookshop.
During this May Day ho ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )liday, I stayed at home. I wanted to read dream of the red chamber once again. I read it once, but I couldn’t understand it. I hoped I could understand more this time.
The whole seven- ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )day holiday I didn’t walk out at all. I tried my best to read though some words and sentences still stopped me understanding them well. I read and thought, and read again. I didn’t want to get help from my parents though they were both at home.
I only read less th ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )an half of the book before the holiday was over. But I understood much more than the first time I read it. I felt very happy, because I learned something more by myself.
第三部分
中考书面表达（15）2014中考英语最有可能考的作文题目1
假定你是李华，最近你们班就“ ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )低碳”生活方式进行了讨论，你的美国朋友Jack来信向你询问讨论情况，请你用英语写封回信，简单参照作文地带介绍的以下讨论结果：
1.节水节电；
2.垃圾分类；
3.少用纸巾，重拾手帕；
4.步行，骑自行车或乘坐公交车。
参考词汇：低碳low carbon 纸巾tissue
注意：词数100以内(不含开头和结尾所给出的字数)；可适当增加细节了，以使行文连贯；开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Jack,
Thank you for y ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )our letter asking about our discussion on low carbon lifestyle. Here is something about it.
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Best wishes,
Li Bing
参考范文：
Dear Jack,
Thank you for yo ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ur letter asking about our discussion on low carbon lifestyle. Here is something about it.
We can do a l ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ot in our daily life to achieve the goal of living low carbon life. First, we’d better turn off lights if possible and spend less time watching TV or surfing the Internet. Saving water also matters much. Besides, we should sort out the rubbish, hoping that we might recycle some, which will surely benefit us a great deal. In addition, we suggest using handkerchiefs instead of tissues so that we can prevent more trees from being cut down. More importantly, when we go out, walking, riding bikes or taking buses should be our first choice, which contributes to a cleaner world.
中考书面表达（16）2014中考英语最有可能考的作文题目2
随着互联网的发展和普及， ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )网络购物在中国也变得越来越普遍了，甚至已经成了我们日常生活的一部分了；相信同学们身边一定有不少同学已经通过网络进行购物了，比如*****网，京东商城等；但是网络购物究竟有何利弊呢 请写一篇短文，谈谈网上购物的好处与坏处。
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参考范文：
We talked about the ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) advantages and disadvantages of internet shopping these days. Some students think it's very convenient for us to go shopping on the internet. The shops on Internet ，for example , 360buy.com are open for almost 24 hours a day, so we can buy something we want at any time if we like. What's more, we needn't to wait in a queue.
However, some stud ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ents disagreed with them. We can't see the things while we are shopping. So we are not sure whether they are good or not.. Besides, we can't enjoy the happiness of shopping with our friends.
【2014甘肃兰州】书面表达 （满分15分）
学会自我保护是青少年需要具备 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )的一种意识和能力。请根据以下学校安全教育周收集的自我保护小贴士，并结合自己的管道，以“”为题，写一篇90词左右的短文，谈谈在生活中青少年应该怎样自我保护。
要求：句子结构准确，要点齐全，内容合理，篇章结构连贯。
【参考范文】
How Can We Protect Ourselves
Self-protec ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )tion is one of the most important skills for teenagers. But how can we protect ourselves Here are some of my suggestions.
First, we s ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )hould be careful when we make friends, especially on line. Second, if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe. Also, we ought to eat healthily and safely. Besides, we shouldn’t crowd each other when we go upstairs or downstairs at school. Last but not least, summer is coming, we must remember it’s dangerous to swim alone.
In short, everyone n ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )eeds to learn how to protect ourselves and stay away from danger.山西孟县2016中考英语二轮写作含范文
第一部分
【2014湖南长沙】作文（计10分）
76 .随着年龄的増长，不少青少年发现越来越难以与父母沟通和交流，各方面的分歧使两代人之间的关系日益紧张。请围绕该话题用英语谈谈你的看法。
要求：（1）内容包括①分析这种现象产生的主要原因： ②提出解决该问题的具体建议。
（2）字数：60-80词。
（3）短文中不得出现你的真实姓名、学校名和地名。
【参考范文】
Nowadays, student ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )s can not communicate with parents well. I think it’s because both you and your parents are too busy. You don’t have enough time to stay together.
How to communicate with our parents Here are some suggestions.
First, both y ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ou and your parents should spend time with each other. Second try to talk to your parents politely, or they will not feel like to talk to you. Third, try to think about your parents more, so you will find that you can understand them.
If you follow these, you can get on well with your parents.
【2013江西】书面表达(15分)
母爱悄深，母爱无价;学 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )会感恩，学会回报。某英语网站举办以“My mother”为题的英语征文活动。请你根据下列思维导图提供的信息，写一篇短文，介绍自己的母亲和你们的真情故事。
提示:1.短文应包括导图中的全部信息，条理清楚，行文连贯，段落分明;
2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名。
3.词数不少于80，开头已给出:不计人总词数。
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My mother
We need love. We also ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )need to love. The person I love most is my mother._______________
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【参考范文】One Possible Version
My mother
We need love. We al ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )so need to love. The person I love most is my mother. The person I love most is my mother. My mother is 41 years old. She is of medium build with long black hair. Shi is quiet. She is a history teacher in a middle school. She likes dancing. She can cook delicious food.
She did a lot for me w ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )hen I was a child. She bought whatever I needed for my study, even though she didn’t have much money. She sent me from piano lessons to dancing lessons at the weekend. She cooked delicious and healthy food for me.
When I grow up, ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) I will do what I can to make my mother happy. I will find a good job after I graduate from college. I’ll save money and buy beautiful clothes that make her look still young. I’ll take her to wonderful sights around China. Most importantly, I will stay with her when I have free time. That’s what she wants most, I think.
【2012江西省】书面表达（15分）
某中学生英文报为了了解中学生的购物习惯与爱好，向广大学生作调查。请根据下面图表提供的信息，写一篇短文，介绍自己的购物习惯与喜好。
提示：1.短文应包括图表中的全部信息，条理清楚，行文连贯；
2.短文中不能出现真实的人名的地名；
3.词数不少于80，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )
I'm a junior high ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) school student from Jiangxi. __________________________________
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【参考范文】
I'm a junior ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )high school student from Jiangxi. I’m busy with my homework on weekdays, so I often go shopping at weekends. I often do some shopping with my mother, sometime with my close friends. I usually buy some stationary or snacks. Sometimes I buy some clothes with the help of my mother. When I want to buy something expensive, for example, an MP4 player, I usually ask my parents for some money. But if they don’t agree to give me so much money, I will save my pocket to buy it. I usually go shopping in the big shopping centers, sometimes at the street stalls. However, online shopping is becoming more and more popular among us teenagers. But I seldom buy things online because I don’t think it’s safe enough.
第二部分
2012年【时事热点】
安全对于每个人都很重要。中学生年龄较小，学生安全更是人们关注的焦点。请根据以下提示，写一篇关于学生安全的作文。
内容提示：
交通安全:遵守交通规则,不闯红绿灯……
食品安全:吃健康食物,不吃垃圾食品……
活动安全:进行体育锻炼时,不要弄伤自己,不私自下河游泳……
要求:
词数:80词左右。正文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
作文应包含所有要点，可适当发挥。
文中不能出现真实的人名、地名和校名。
参考词汇：焦点：focus 遵守： obey 交通规则：traffic rules
Safety is very imp ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ortant to everyone.
【参考范文】
Safety is very im ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )portant to everyone. Middle school students are flowers of our country, so students’ safety is becoming the focus to us all.
First, we must ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) obey the traffic rules when we go out. Don’t cross the street when the traffic lights are red. Keep to the right in the street. Second, we should eat healthy food. Don’t eat junk food. Eat more fruits and vegetable. Eat less meat and eggs. Besides, don’t hurt ourselves while we are playing. It’s dangerous to swim in the river alone, so don’t go to the river without permission.
In a word, it’s important to remember these for us all.
2012年【书信】
假设你是一名中学生，名叫 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )李华，曾经到英国学习、生活了三个月。在那期间，你住在大卫(David)家中。现在学习已结束，你刚回到家，特意给大卫写一封70词左右的英文信，内容包括以下方面：
表达谢意 感谢大卫及其家人对你的照顾。
难忘的事 大卫帮助你学习英语，带你去参观了许多地方；大卫的父母在你生病时送你去医院，给你做好吃的食物。
学习收获 提高了英语水平，更多地了解了英国的文化。
发出邀请 邀请大卫及其家人到你家作客。
要求：1.信件内容要包含所给的提示信息，可适当发挥。
2.信的开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数。
3.文中不得出现真实的人名与校名。
参考词汇：culture(文化),invite(邀请)
Dear David,
I’ve just got ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )back home. I want to say “Thank you” most at the moment.
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Yours,
Li Hua
参考范文：
Dear David,
I’ve just got ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) back home. I want to say “Thank you”most at the moment. During my stay with your family, I was well looked after. You helped me with my English and showed me around many places. When I was ill, your parents sent me to the hospital and prepared delicious food for me. so I got well soon.
With your help ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ), my English has greatly improved and I’ve learned more about your culture. Thank you for what you have done!
I’d like to invite you to visit my family soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
第三部分
中考书面表达
【贵州省遵义市新蒲新区2014模拟考试（1）】书面表达（20分）
人类只有一个地球。根据提示，以“Saving the Earth”为题，写一篇80词左右的短文。
提示: 1.如何保护环境已成为世界最大难题之一；
2.各种污染破坏环境，损害健康；
3.不要乱倒垃圾，乱排废水；4.我们应该保护环境，使我们的家园更加美丽。
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【参考范文】书面表达（20分）
Saving the Earth
How to protect th ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )e environment has become one of the biggest problems in the world. There are many kinds of pollutions around us, such as air pollution, noise pollution, water pollution and light pollution. We can find that rubbish not only pollutes our environment but also harms people’s health. So we should not throw rubbish everywhere. Some factories pour waste water into the rivers and the lakes. The behavior of these factories will pollute the water, and sometimes it can kill the fish living in them.
We have only ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) one earth. We must keep our environment clean and tidy. We must try our best to protect her, and make our home more beautiful.
中考书面表达（8）
【广东省广州市沙湾区2014调研考试】书面表达（满分15分）
2014年1月上旬，全国许 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )多省市持续雾霾，陷入大范围的重度和严重污染。造成这一现象的主要原因是工厂排出的废气和汽车尾气等。现请你根据以下三个方面的提示，以“Let’s Do Something to Save Our Environment”为题写一篇80字左右的短文。
1. 只有一个地球
2. 三个问题 污染、疾病(illness)、灾难(disaster)
3. 栽花种树，解救能源(energy)
4. 减少污染、保护大自然
5. 环境干净，地球美丽。
【写作注意】(1)文中不能出现真实姓名、校名;
(2)文章标题已给出，但不计入总词数;
(3)可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。
Let’s Do Something to Save Our Environment
【参考范文】书面表达（One possible version）
We all live in t ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )he earth. The earth is our home. We have only one earth. We must take care of it. It gives us the best environment. If we harm it, it will be angry. And then we will have a terrible end. There are three problems in our earth, they are pollution, disaster and illness.
It’s our duty to ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )protect our environment. So we must plant more trees, protect the flowers and the trees, save energy, reduce the pollution. We should ask control the pollution from the factories.
Protecting the nat ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ure is very important. It’s our duty to keep our environment clean and tidy. I’m sure our earth will become much more beautiful.
评分原则
1. 本题总分为15分，按5档次给分。
2. 评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。
3. 评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法的准确性、上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性。
4. 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程序予以考虑。
5. 如书写较差，以至影响交附，将分数降低一个档次。
档次 得 分 要点数 语 言 使 用 情 况
五 13－15 5 语言基本无误，行文连贯，表达清楚。
四 10－12 4 语言有少量错误，行文基本连贯，表达基本清楚。
三 7－9 3 语言有一些错误，尚能达意。
二 4－6 2 语言错误较多，影响表达。
一 1－3 1 只能写出与所要求内容有关的一些单词。
注意：1. 原则上应按照考生所表达的要点数归档。如语言错误多，可降一档，如语言表达较好，可打该档最高分或上升一档。
2. 在同一档次内，根据语言错误的多少确定五个分值。
1-2个错误，取该档次分值的高线。
3-4个错误，取该档次分值的中线。
5个错误，取该档次分值的低线。
6个以上降下档，10个左右错误取其降档后的低线。
要点得分：1. 只有一个地球（3分）
2. 三个问题 污染、疾病、灾难（3分）
3. 栽花种树，解救能源（3分）
4. 减少污染、保护大自然（3分）
5. 环境干净，地球美丽。（3分）
