【中考专项培优】专题10 书面表达（含参考范文+写作详解）-2024-2025学年九年级英语下学期中考真题汇编（江苏专版）

中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
2024-2025学年九年级英语下学期中考真题汇编(江苏专版)
（中考专项培优）专题10 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．（2023·江苏南京·中考真题）请根据英文校刊English Garden中Teens Talk栏目的征稿内容，用英语写一篇短文。
ARTICLES WANTED! In your life, you might meet with some difficulties. Choose one difficulty and write an article about how you dealt with it and what you have learnt from this experience. Please share your article with us and we will publish the best ones in our magazine.
注意：1. 内容涵盖所有要点，全文连贯通顺。
2. 词数80左右（已给出的文章开头，不计入总词数）。
3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
I once met with a difficulty in my life.
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2．（2022·江苏南京·中考真题）假如你是Amy，请根据以下信息，任选一个问题答复。
Amy works for a website, and her job is to answer questions young people ask about life and study. If you were Amy, how would you answer the questions Choose one and give a reply.
Questions for Amy
No time for meI’m 15 and my brother is 3. I think my mum and dad love him more than me. They spend all their spare time playing with him. And they don’t even have time for my parents’ meeting. Friend lostMy best friend, John, started playing online computer games last year. Since then he has lost all interest in everything else, even me and schoolwork. He gets angry if I talk to him about it. What should I do
注意：
1. 词数80左右(已给出的开头不计入总词数)；
2. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息如校名、人名等。
Thank you for your question.
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Amy
3．（2024·江苏南通·中考真题）假如你是李华，将参加学校英语社团举行的主题为“A Friendly Smile”的交流分享活动，谈谈班级里与微笑有关的故事，请根据下面海报中的提示，写一篇交流稿。
A Friendly SmileTips for your sharing ·choose anything that happened in your class ·describe the story ·express your feelings Please join us and share your story at 8:00 a. m. next Tuesday (June 25) at the Students’ Centre. School English Club
注意：1. 词数 90左右，交流稿开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 交流稿中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua from Class 1. Grade 9. Today I like to share a story that happened in my class.
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Do you often smile Thank you!
4．（2024·江苏淮安·中考真题）假如你是李华，你所在的阳光社区将于下个月开放社区图书馆，现面向全社区招募志愿者。请根据以下要点，用英语写一封自荐信。
你的优势 热爱阅读，乐于助人，做事细心
工作设想 鼓励居民多读书，每周推荐一本好书，……
志愿工作的意义 ……从对他人和对自己两方面进行阐述
参考词汇：志愿工作 voluntary work
注意：
1. 100词左右，已给出部分不计入总词数；
2. 可适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺；
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
Dear Sir/Madam.
My name is Li Hua. I’m writing to recommend myself to be the volunteer of the library in our community.
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I will be thankful if I get the chance.
5．（2024·江苏徐州·中考真题）假定你是徐州的一名九年级学生李华。你校英文报正组织题为“A famous person in the history of Xuzhou”的征文活动，你选择的人物是苏轼（1077—1079年间任徐州知州）。请结合以下要点写一篇英语短文，参加征文活动。
注意：
1. 征文需包括以上三个要点；
2. 词数90左右；
3. 征文中不得泄露个人信息。
提示词:苏堤 Su Causeway 黄楼 Huanglou Pavilion
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6．（2024·江苏宿迁·中考真题）唯有不断成长，才能遇见更好的自己。你校正在开展主题为“做更好的自己”的演讲比赛。假如你是李华，请以“To be a better self”为题写一篇演讲稿，从懂感恩、亲自然、爱自己三个方面谈一谈自己的理解。
To be a better self
懂感恩 敬爱父母；服务社区……
亲自然 保护环境；关爱动物……
爱自己 健康生活；培养兴趣……
注意事项：
1．内容必须包括表格中的要点，并适当发挥1-2点；
2．词数90左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3．文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。
To be a better self
Dear schoolmates,
I am Li Hua. I am glad to be here to give a speech about “To be a better self”.
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That’s all. Thanks for your listening!
7．（2024·江苏常州·中考真题）假如你是李平，收到英国笔友 Peter的求助信，请你根据来信，按照要求写一封英文回信。
Dear Li Ping, These days I’m going crazy! My teacher requires me to run for half an hour every morning. But I don’t like sports at all. I think it’s meaningless. What do you think of it Could you share your sports experience and tell me what you have learned from it Please give me some advice as well. Yours, Peter
注意：
1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2. 词数100左右；文章的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to receive your letter.
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Yours,
Li Ping
8．（2024·江苏无锡·中考真题）传统节日是中华文化的重要组成部分。学校正开展“中华文化周”活动，今年的主题是“交朋友，传文化”。假设你是李华，请你给国外的笔友Tom发一封英文邮件，向他介绍一个中国传统节日（时间、庆祝方式等）。注意事项：
1. 邮件内容须自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
2. 词数不少于90个，邮件开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 邮件中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称；
4. 邮件必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
Dear Tom,
Traditional festivals are an important part of the Chinese culture.
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Can you tell me something about the festivals in your country
Yours truly
Li Hua
9．（2024·江苏苏州·中考真题）你校English Reading Club正在组织一次英文小说读书分享会，本周阅读内容为Auggie’s Story（阅读D篇）。请从以下两个标题中任选一个，写一篇英文读后感。
选择一：以Sometimes people surprise us为题，内容包括：
1．你对这句话的理解；
2．结合实际生活举例说明；
3．你得到的启发。
选择二：以Trouble is a friend为题，内容包括：
1．你对这句话的理解；
2．结合实际生活举例说明；
3．你得到的启发。
注意：
1．词数：100左右；
2．请先填写你所选的标题，再写文章；
3．照抄阅读语篇不得分；
4．文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。
Title: ____________
After reading Auggie’s story, I’m really touched.
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10．（2024·江苏扬州·中考真题）端午节是中国四大传统节日之一。为加深中华文化理解，激发爱国主义情怀，某英语报“Culture”专栏正面向中学生举行以“Duanwu Festival—A celebration of patriotism”为题的征文比赛。请根据以下问题提示，写一篇英语短文投稿。
提示：
(1) What is Duanwu Festival
(importance, date, rice dumplings, dragon boat races)
(2) Why is Duanwu Festival also widely accepted as a celebration of patriotism
(spirit behind the story of Qu Yuan, spirit of dragon boat racing)
(3) As a teenager, how can we practise the spirit of patriotism
(1. …；2. …)
参考词汇：patriotism n.爱国主义； patriotic adj.爱国的； poet n.诗人；
all ethnic groups 全民族； the lunar May fifth 农历五月初五
要求：（1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
（2）必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥；
（3）词数：100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
（4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Duanwu Festival — A celebration of patriotism
Duanwu Festival is also called the Dragon Boat Festival.
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11．（2024·江苏连云港·中考真题）假如你是李华，你的交换生朋友Kevin很喜欢你亲手做的小礼物，他来信询问制作过程，请你给他回信，内容包括：
（1）你送的礼物是什么；
（2）你送此礼物的原因；
（3）制作的方法或过程。
注意:
（1）词数90左右，信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。
Dear Kevin,
I am glad that you like the small gift I made by myself.
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Li Hua
12．（2023·江苏淮安·中考真题）假如你是李华，你们学校的英语社团将开展以“体育锻炼，健康你我”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请以“Better Exercise, Better Life”为题，根据以下要点，写一篇英语演讲稿。
我的日常锻炼 1. 最喜欢的锻炼方式
2. 锻炼时长
3. 带来益处（不少于两点)
给同学的建议 1. 校内锻炼方式（不少于两点）
2. 校外锻炼方式（不少于两点）
号召 1. 希望大家多锻炼
2. …
参考词汇：做早操do morning exercises
上体育课 have PE lessons
压力减轻 feel less stressed
合理锻炼 exercise properly
注意：
1. 词数在80—100之间，已给出的文字不计入总词数；
2. 可适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺；
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
Better Exercise, Better Life
Dear classmates,
I’m glad to be here to give a speech. My topic is “Better Exercise, Better Life”.
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That’s all for my speech. Thank you for listening.
13．（2023·江苏盐城·中考真题）在人生的旅程中，亲人、朋友、老师、书籍等陪伴我们同行，助力我们成长。学校英语俱乐部正组织题为“Being with You”的征文比赛，请根据提示，写一篇短文参赛。
1. Who/What do you always like being with 2. Why do you like being with him/her/it (Give two or three reasons) …
注意事项：
1. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
2. 词数100左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
3. 文章必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。
Being with You
You’ve always been my sunshine. I like being with you,
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14．（2023·江苏常州·中考真题）当前，有些学生忽视倾听的作用，针对该情况，请你根据要点提示，用英语写一篇短文向校英文报投稿，阐述倾听的重要性。
要点：
1.在学校生活中要倾听及理由；
2.在日常生活中要倾听及理由。
注意：
1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2.词数100左右；文章的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Listening carefully plays an important role in our life.
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15．（2023·江苏镇江·中考真题）假如你是李华，你们学校整理出一块空地，将用于拓宽学生活动和实践的空间。校英语报登载了校方初拟的两种方案，就这块空地建设文化角还是菜园征求意见。请根据提示给校报写一封信谈谈你的想法和建议。
A Culture Corner A Vegetable Garden
●display art works ●share ideas and feelings ●hold activities (fashion shows, …) ●develop a sense of beauty ●… ●work with classmates ●learn farming skills ●harvest vegetables (tomatoes, …) ●form the habit of labour (劳动) ●…
要求：
1.所写内容必须包括一种方案的所有信息，可适当发挥；
2.对你所选择的方案说明理由，并对其提出建议；
3.文章不少于90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
4.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m happy to hear that there is an empty area in our school for building a Culture Corner or a Vegetable Garden. In my opinion, it’s better to
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Li Hua
16．（2023·江苏宿迁·中考真题）“双减”政策推行之后，中学生的学习及生活发生了很大的变化。为了达成“五育”并举的培养目标，你校开展了丰富的延时服务课程并鼓励学生参与志愿服务。某报社想了解这方面的情况。假如你是李华，请你根据以下提示写一封英文邮件进行简单介绍。
延时服务 参加各种各样的课程，比如音乐、篮球等； ……(你的情况)
志愿服务 帮助他人解决问题； …… (举例说明)
你的收获 提升能力，更加自信； ……(补充1-2点)
注意事项：
1. 词数90左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。
Dear Editor,
I am glad to tell you something about the after-school services in our school and the voluntary work we do.
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Best wishes,
Li Hua
17．（2023·江苏无锡·中考真题）青少年在成长过程中会遇到各种问题，为此《21世纪英文报》开设了Teens Talk专栏，倾听读者的心声，并由“少年之友”Sigmund Friend予以回复。假设你是李华，最近也遇上了些烦心事，请给该专栏发一封英文邮件，讲述你的烦恼并寻求建议。
注意事项：
（1）邮件内容须自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
（2）词数在100左右，邮件开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
（3）邮件中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称。
Dear Mr. Friend,
I’m writing to you about the problem I’m facing at the moment.
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I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
18．（2023·江苏泰州·中考真题）泰州是著名的教育之乡。你的英国朋友想了解泰州的教育，想请你用英语介绍一下，你列出如下提纲：
1. 良好的教育环境（校园美丽，名人众多……写1-2点）；
2. 优秀的老师；
3. 自己的学习表现。
要求：
1. 包含所有要点，表达清晰，过渡合理，衔接自然，可适当拓展；
2. 不得使用真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息；
3. 词数 100 左右。
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19．（2023·江苏苏州·中考真题）Happy Home Club本期的主题是“How to make Suzhou more beautiful”，你打算以“Starting from me and now”为题向中外朋友介绍你的想法，请你用英语写一篇发言稿，内容包括：
1. 触动你的一件事情；
2. 这件事给你的启示；
3. 你的倡议。
注意：
1. 词数：100左右。
2. 内容完整（照抄阅读语篇不得分）
3. 文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。
Starting from me and now
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20．（2023·江苏扬州·中考真题）为丰富校园生活，弘扬中华优秀传统文化，近期你校校报英语专栏举行了Getting close to traditional Chinese culture征文活动，请根据表格中的内容提示写一篇英语短文，向此专栏投稿，介绍中国传统手工艺（handicraft）风筝的历史、特征及其文化重要性，并分享你的看法。
Kites
History Mozi, in the Warring States period
Characteristics materials for making kites:… shapes of kites:…
Cultural importance kites: ● a traditional Chinese handicraft ● … kite flying: ● a popular outdoor activity… ● the World Kite Capital: Weifang, Shandong Province…
Your ideas …
要求：(1) 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
(2) 必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥；
(3) 词数：100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
(4) 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Kites
Kites have a history of about 2,300 years in China.
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中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
21世纪教育网(www.21cnjy.com)
21世纪教育网(www.21cnjy.com)
参考答案与试题解析
1．例文
I once met with a difficulty in my life. It is so special that I will never forget the experience that I overcame my shyness and become confident.
I still remember when I came to the new school, things didn’t go on as smoothly as I expected. I was afraid to speak English in public. In order to solve this dilemma, I took part in English-speaking clubs which is meaningful. As time went by, I became outgoing than before and made many friends who have the same interest as me.
As the saying goes, “Where there is a will, there is a way.” When you are in trouble, don’t give up!
【解析】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇材料作文。
时态：一般过去时。
提示：根据题目要求，描述一次遇到的困难、如何克服以及从中学到的经验。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出文章的主题；
第二部，描述遇到的困难并说明如何克服困难。
第三步，分享从中学到的经验。
[亮点词汇]
① be afraid to do sth. 害怕做某事
② go by 流逝
③ as the saying goes 俗话说
[高分句型]
① It is so special that I will never forget the experience that I overcame my shyness and become confident.（so ... that引导结果状语从句；that引导定语从句）
② Where there is a will, there is a way.（习语“有志者，事竟成”）
2．例文一：
Thank you for your question. I understand how you feel about John’s behavior. Losing interest in everything else and neglecting schoolwork is not healthy. However, it seems like John has lost himself in online computer games, which is a common problem nowadays. I highly suggest that you can talk to him calmly and express your concerns. Let him know that you care about him and want him to be healthy and happy. Encourage him to seek professional help if necessary. Remember, you can’t force him to change, but you can be there for him and support him.
Amy
例文二：
Thank you for your question. I understand how you feel, but having a younger brother or sister is not easy. It is common for older brothers or sisters to feel this way, just like you. However, younger children do need more care. As your little brother grows older, this will change and your parents will treat you the same. But for now, he will need a little more attention from your parents.
Think of this as a chance to become more independent. You can learn to live without getting as much attention from your parents—you’ll move out of the home someday anyway, so you might get used to it as well.
Amy
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是材料作文；
②时态：主体时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：本文要求根据所给的关于青少年生活和学习中遇到的问题进行答复，要注意给出的建议合理，不要泄露个人信息。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明对问题的态度，表达能理解朋友沉迷网络游戏的痛苦或对方不被父母爱；
第二步，对问题进行分析；
第三步，给出合理的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①professional help 专业帮助
②healthy and happy 健康快乐
③force sb. to do 强迫某人做某事
[高分句型]
①I highly suggest that you can talk to him calmly and express your concerns.（宾语从句）
②However, it seems like John has lost himself in online computer games, which is a common problem nowadays. (定语从句)
3．例文
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua from Class 1, Grade 9. Today I’d like to share a story that happened in my class.
One day, our teacher announced that there would be a math test the next day. Everyone was worried, except for Tom. He was always confident and had a smile on his face. When the test started, I found the questions very difficult and I was stuck. I looked around and saw Tom still smiling. His smile was like a ray of sunshine, making me feel less nervous. After the test, I asked him how he could be so calm. He said, “A smile can make everything better. When you smile, you feel more confident and you can think more clearly.” His words made me realize the power of a smile.
Since then, I have tried to smile more often. When I meet difficulties, I smile and tell myself to be brave. When I see my classmates, I smile to show my friendliness. A smile can really make a difference.
Do you often smile Thank you!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般过去时；
③提示：根据提示内容谈谈班级里与微笑有关的故事，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，谈谈班级里与微笑有关的故事；
第三步，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①except for除了
②look around环顾四周
③make a difference有影响
[高分句型]
①One day, our teacher announced that there would be a math test the next day. (that引导的宾语从句)
②When the test started, I found the questions very difficult and I was stuck. (when引导的时间状语从句)
③His smile was like a ray of sunshine, making me feel less nervous. (现在分词作状语)
4．例文
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Li Hua. I’m writing to recommend myself to be the volunteer of the library in our community.
I have some advantages for this volunteer work. I love reading and I am always willing to help others. I am also careful and responsible in my work.
If I am lucky enough to be a volunteer, I will try my best to do the following things. I will organize reading activities to encourage residents to read more books. I will recommend a good book every week to inspire their interest in reading. I also plan to set up a reading corner where residents can share their reading experiences.
I believe that doing voluntary work is very meaningful. It can not only help others improve their reading skills but also enrich my own life.
I will be thankful if I get the chance.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封自荐信；
②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般将来时；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的优势；
第二步，介绍自己的工作设想；
第三步，介绍志愿工作的意义。
[亮点词汇]
①be willing to do sth.乐意做某事
②encourage sb. to do sth.鼓励某人做某事
③set up建立
[高分句型]
①If I am lucky enough to be a volunteer, I will try my best to do the following things. (if引导的条件状语从句)
②I also plan to set up a reading corner where residents can share their reading experiences. (where引导的定语从句)
5．例文
A famous person in the history of Xuzhou
Su Shi, also known as Su Dongpo, was a famous poet, writer, and politician in ancient China. He is widely regarded as one of the greatest poets in Chinese history and his works have been admired for centuries. Su Shi’s contributions to Xuzhou, in particular, are significant and have left a lasting influence on the city.
He led people to finish the construction of the famous Su Causeway and the Huanglou Pavilion, which helped to control flooding and protect the people of Xuzhou. Su Shi also discovered coal in the area. Besides his achievements, Su Shi was a productive poet. Su Shi’s time in Xuzhou was a period of great creativity and productivity, and his works reflect his love for the city and its people. When Su Shi eventually left Xuzhou, the people were very sad.
Su Shi’s legacy in Xuzhou lives on through his writings, the structures he helped build, and the memories of the people he touched. He is remembered as a hero and a cultural icon in Xuzhou, and his contributions to the city will never be forgotten.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般过去时为主；
③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意不要漏写你的感受，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简单阐述苏轼的身份以及成就；
第二步，苏轼在任徐州知州之间的经历；
第三步，说说你的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①be regarded as被认为
②admire...for...因……羡慕
③contribute to对……做贡献
[高分句型]
①When Su Shi eventually left Xuzhou, the people were very sad.（时间状语从句）
②He led people to finish the construction of the famous Su Causeway and the Huanglou Pavilion, which helped to control flooding and protect the people of Xuzhou.（定语从句）
6．
例文：
To be a better self
Dear schoolmates,
I am Li Hua. I am glad to be here to give a speech about “To be a better self”. Being a better self, I think, means more than being excellent in study but being an all-round person.
In order to become a better version of ourselves, we should first be grateful. We should love our parents. We also use our spare time to serve the community. If we meet people in need of help, we should lend a hand in time. Second, we should get close to nature. We should protect the environment and care for animals. We also do volunteer work to promote the importance of animals and plants. Finally, we have to love ourselves. We should live a healthy life and develop our hobbies. We should learn ways to relax ourselves and keep a good mood. I strongly believe that a better self can definitely lead us to a better future and let’s make changes from now on.
That’s all. Thanks for your listening!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包括三个要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，引出话题“做更好的自己”；
第二步，从懂感恩、亲自然、爱自己三个方面具体阐述怎么做。
第三步，总结话语。
[亮点词汇]
①get close to亲近
②keep a good mood保持好心情
[高分句型]
①If we meet people in need of help, we should lend a hand in time. (if引导的条件状语从句)
②I strongly believe that a better self can definitely lead us to a better future and let’s make changes from now on. (宾语从句)
7．例文
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to receive your letter. I understand how you feel. I used to dislike sports too, but now I enjoy running. Running is very good for health. It not only keeps us healthy but also makes us more energetic.
When I started running, I found it difficult at first. But soon I started to feel stronger and happier. Moreover, running every morning helped me focus better during the day.
My advice is to start slowly and set small goals. Then try listening to music or thinking about your favourite things while running, which will make running more enjoyable.
Give yourself a chance to try running, I’m sure you’ll love it.
Yours,
Li Ping
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据Peter的信谈谈自己对跑步的看法、跑步经历并给出建议；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，谈谈自己对运动/跑步的看法；
第二步，介绍自己的跑步经历；
第三步，给出关于跑步的一些建议；
第四步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①used to do sth. 过去常常做某事
②not only...but also 不仅……而且……
③think about 思考
[高分句型]
①When I started running, I found it difficult at first.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②Then try listening to music or thinking about your favourite things while running, which will make running more enjoyable.（which引导的定语从句）
8．例文
Dear Tom,
Traditional festivals are an important part of the Chinese culture. I’m writing to tell you something about the Spring Festival.
Spring Festival is one of the most important traditional festivals in China and it usually falls on the first month of the Chinese Lunar Calendar. Before the spring festival, people usually have a thorough cleaning and put up couplets on their doors. No matter how faraway people are, they’ll try to return to their home. On the New Year’s Eve, people have a big dinner and watch the Spring Festival Gala. On the first day of the New Year, people set off the fireworks to celebrate the beginning of a new year. People usually visit their relatives each other. I like the Spring Festival best, because I can get lucky money.
Can you tell me something about the festivals in your country
Yours truly
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：本文主要介绍一个中国传统节日，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出“最喜欢的节日是春节”的话题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“时间、庆祝方式”等方面进行介绍；
第三步，书写结语，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①put up couplets贴春联
②set off the fireworks燃放烟花
[高分句型]
①Spring Festival is one of the most important traditional festivals in China and it usually falls on the first month of the Chinese Lunar Calendar. (and连接的并列句)
②I like the Spring Festival best, because I can get lucky money. (because引导的原因状语从句)
9．例文
Title: Trouble is a friend
After reading Auggie’s story, I’m really touched. And I think trouble is a friend.
The meaning of this sentence is that although trouble may be frustrating and upsetting, it is also a reminder to be more careful and avoid bigger problems, just like a friend.
In my English study last year, my grammar was very bad. That was a big trouble for me, because it lowered my English score. But thanks to the help of my deskmate, she helped me make a grammar study schedule and helped me with grammar every week. And I spent an hour studying grammar every day. In the end, my grammar improved greatly.
In my opinion, trouble is bad, but it sometimes makes us better. It reminds us not to give up when facing difficulties and to face them bravely.
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：选择一个话题完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，请先填写你所选的标题并介绍你对这句话的理解；
第二步，结合实际生活举例说明；
第三步，最后表达你得到的启发。
[亮点词汇]
① thanks to多亏
② help sb do sth帮助某人做某事
③ in my opinion在我看来
[高分句型]
①The meaning of this sentence is that although trouble may be frustrating and upsetting, it is also a reminder to be more careful and avoid bigger problems, just like a friend.（表语从句，让步状语从句）
②That was a big trouble for me, because it lowered my English score.（原因状语从句）
10．例文
Duanwu Festival — A celebration of patriotism
Duanwu Festival is also called the Dragon Boat Festival. It is one of the most important and traditional festivals in China. It falls on the lunar May fifth. People all across China eat rice dumplings and dragon boat races are held in many places to remember a great ancient patriotic poet Qu Yuan.
Qu Yuan sacrificed for his country, which showed us the spirit of patriotism. People’s dragon boat racing is closely related to honor Qu Yuan.
As a teenager, I believe it is our duty and responsibility to strive for the prosperity and strength of our motherland. First, By working hard and pursuing excellence in our studies, we can make a significant impact on the development of our country. Second, By dedicating ourselves to protect the earth, we also can be a better person and it is good for our country.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍端午节；
第二步，介绍屈原故事的精神和赛龙舟的精神；
第三步，说明如何实践爱国。
[亮点词汇]
①is closely related to息息相关
②strive for奋发图强
[高分句型]
①Qu Yuan sacrificed for his country, which showed us the spirit of patriotism.（定语从句）
②As a teenager, I believe it is our duty and responsibility to strive for the prosperity and strength of our motherland.（宾语从句）
11．参考范文一：
Dear Kevin,
I am glad that you like the small gift I made by myself.
As the Dragon Boat Festival was coming, I decided to make a Xiang Bao for you. People in China, especially children wear it at the festival. We believe it can bring us good luck.
To make it, I prepared some string and a small bag that looks like a rice dumping. I also collected some leaves of a special plant called Ai Cao. Then, I put Ai Cao into the bag and tied it with the string.
Next time you come to China, I’ll show you how to make it.
Yours,
Li Hua
参考范文二：
Dear Kevin,
I am glad that you like the small gift I made by myself.
It’s an unusual picture of us. I hope it can remind you of the happy time we were together.
Here is how to make it. First, choose a picture you like. It should be large and clear. Second, cover the picture with a piece of paper and draw along the lines. Then stick colorful beans and rice on the paper according to the drawing. Make sure you choose the proper color for each part so that your picture may look natural.
Hope you enjoy it. Looking forward to your work.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息。可以适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先介绍自己送的礼物是什么；
第二步，介绍自己为什么送这件礼物，阐明原因；
第三步，着重介绍制作这份礼物的方法或过程。
[亮点词汇]
①decide to do sth.决定做某事
②remind sb. of sth.提醒某人某事
③so that以便
④look forward to期待
[高分句型]
①We believe it can bring us good luck.（省略that的宾语从句）
②Make sure you choose the proper color for each part so that your picture may look natural.（so that引导目的状语从句）
12．例文
Dear classmates,
I’m glad to be here to give a speech. My topic is “Better Exercise, Better Life”.
My favorite exercise is playing basketball. I often play basketball for about ten hours a week. Because I think it is interesting and relaxing and it also enables me to make friends with others.
I think we should do morning exercises every day to start our day. What’s more, when we have PE lessons, we can take part in different kinds of activities. We can also run for half an hour every day to build up our body. If we have time, we can ride bikes on weekends with our friends.
I hope everyone can exercise more and have a better life.
That’s all for my speech. Thank you for listening.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据表格中的提示信息进行写作，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，介绍自己的日常锻炼；
第三步，介绍给同学的建议；
第四步，发出号召。
[亮点词汇]
①make friends with sb.和某人交朋友
②take part in参与
③on weekends在周末
[高分句型]
①when we have PE lessons, we can take part in different kinds of activities.(when引导的时间状语从句)
②I hope everyone can exercise more and have a better life.(省略that的宾语从句)
13．例文
Being with You
You’ve always been my sunshine. I like being with you, my English teacher, Miss Li. You are very kind and hard-working. You are so helpful that you are ready to help almost every student in our class.
Two years ago, I was afraid to speak English and was poor at English. But you tried your best to help me solve my problem. Thanks to your help, I made great progress in my English study. Now I can speak English in public and don’t feel nervous any more.
You teach me not only to learn but also to be a kind and warm-hearted person. I hope I’ll be with you forever.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：文章开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接短文开头，引出喜欢同行的是谁或某个物品；
第二步，按照提示说明你喜欢与之相伴的原因，至少给出两、三个原因，可列举具体的事例；
第三步，表达愿与其一直同行的意愿并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be ready to help sb乐于帮助某人
②thanks to多亏，由于
③not…any more不再
④not only…but also…不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
①You are so helpful that you are ready to help almost every student in our class.（so…that引导的结果状语从句）
②I hope I’ll be with you forever.（省略引导词that引导的宾语从句）
14．例文
Listening carefully plays an important role in our life.
In class, we should listen to teachers carefully. It can not only help us have a better understanding of what the teachers say, but also it can improve learning efficiency. What’s more, we should listen to our classmates carefully. It can show that we are listening to our classmates and we care about them so that it can strengthen our relationship.
We should be good listeners at home. We should listen to our parents carefully in order to know about our parents’ ideas and avoid arguing with each other.
In a word, listening to others carefully is important in our daily life, so we should learn to become good listeners.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据题干中的提示内容介绍倾听的重要性。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，介绍在学校生活中要倾听及理由；
第三步，介绍在日常生活中要倾听及理由。
第四步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①not only...but also 不但……而且
②care about 关心
③in order to 为了
[高分句型]
①It can show that we are listening to our classmates and we care about them so that it can strengthen our relationship. (that引导的宾语从句，以及so that引导的目的状语从句)
②We should listen to our parents carefully in order to know about our parents’ ideas and avoid arguing with each other. (动词不定式作目的状语)
15．例文
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m happy to hear that there is an empty area in our school for building a Culture Corner or a Vegetable Garden. In my opinion, it’s better to build a vegetable garden. The reasons are as follows.
First of all, our country advocates labor education. Second, students can work with their classmates in the garden to strengthen their friendship. Third, working in the garden can help students learn farming skills. Fourth, a garden built on the empty land can harvest a lot of vegetables, such as tomatoes, potatoes, carrots and so on, which can save the cost of food for the school. Last but not least, students can form the habit of labor by planting vegetables.
This is not only good for the school, but also good for the growth of students.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据表格选择一种方案；
第二步，就选择的方案结合提示信息介绍下你的想法和建议。
[亮点词汇]
①first of all首先
②help sb do sth帮助某人做某事
③last but not least最后也是最重要的
[高分句型]
Fourth, a garden built on empty land can harvest a lot of vegetables, such as tomatoes, potatoes, carrots and so on, which can save the cost of food for the school.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
16．例文
Dear Editor,
I am glad to tell you something about the after-school services in our school and the voluntary work we do.
Our school provides various after-school services, such as music, basketball, and more. I enjoy taking part in the art club where I can express my creativity.
In addition to these services, we also have opportunities for voluntary work. By helping others solve problems and assisting in community service events, we gain valuable experience and develop important skills.
Through these activities, I have gained confidence and improved my abilities. I believe that these experiences will benefit me greatly in the future.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容介绍学校的课后服务和志愿工作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出对课后服务和志愿工作的介绍；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从课后服务和志愿工作两个方面重点介绍；
第三步，表达自己的收获。
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②take part in参加
③In addition to另外
④in the future在未来
[高分句型]
①By helping others solve problems and assisting in community service events, we gain valuable experience and develop important skills.（动名词作宾语）
②I believe that these experiences will benefit me greatly in the future.（that引导的宾语从句）
17．例文：
Dear Mr. Friend,
I’m writing to you about the problem I’m facing at the moment.
These days I’m not happy. I always argue with my parents. They only care about my schoolwork. The summer holiday is coming. They plan to choose lots of after-school classes for me. But I don’t want to take these classes and don’t want to be so busy. I’m interested in painting. I just want to take painting lessons during the holiday. They disagree with me. I don’t know what to do. And how can I improve the relationship with my parents Can you give me some advice
I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据要求讲述自己的烦恼。注意不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明自己遇到了问题。
第二步，讲述自己的烦恼并寻求建议。
第三步，书写结尾。
[亮点词汇]
①argue with和某人争吵
②care about关心
③take painting lessons上绘画课
[高分句型]
①The summer holiday is coming. (现在进行时表示将来的动作)
② I don’t know what to do. (疑问词+动词不定式)
18．例文
I am proud to be a student in Taizhou. There is a good educational environment. The campus here is beautiful, and there are many celebrities, such as Hu Yuan, Wang Anshi and so on. There are also many libraries and famous universities.
The teachers here are also excellent. Most of them are teachers who graduated from famous universities, and some even returned from studying abroad. They have advanced teaching methods and teaching ideas. They also produce a large number of excellent students.
In addition to learning cultural knowledge, I also join many clubs, such as basketball club, chess club, dancing club and so on. Here I not only learn cultural knowledge, but also learn a lot of life philosophy.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容介绍泰州的教育，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍泰州良好的教育环境；
第二步，介绍优秀的老师；
第三步，介绍自己的学习表现。
[亮点词汇]
①be proud of为……感到自豪
②graduate from毕业于
③a large number of许多
[高分句型]
①Most of them are teachers who graduated from famous universities, and some even returned from studying abroad.（who引导的定语从句）
②Here I not only learn cultural knowledge, but also learn a lot of life philosophy.（not only...but also...连接并列结构）
19．例文
Starting from me and now
Last weekend, I went to the city park with my classmates. When we got there, we were amazed that there were different kinds of rubbish on the ground. We felt very sad about that. The city is our home, so we should try our best to keep the city clean.
First of all, we should protect our environment. Don’t throw rubbish around or spit anywhere. We’d better plant more trees to make the air clean. Second, we are supposed to be friendly and helpful to others. Third, we ought to obey the traffic rules. Don’t ride too fast or play on the street. Last but not least, remember to save energy. Turn off the lights and taps in time.
As long as we try our best and starting from me and now, I believe Suzhou will become more and more beautiful.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：要求根据题干中的提示介绍如何让自己的家乡变得更美，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍触动你的一件事情以及这件事情给你的启示；
第二步，为了使苏州变得更美，介绍你的倡议；
第三步，书写结语。表达“希望家乡会更美丽”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①different kinds of 各种各样的
②be supposed to do sth. 应该做某事
③remember to do sth. 记得做某事
④in time 及时
[高分句型]
①When we got there, we were amazed that there were different kinds of rubbish on the ground.（when引导时间状语从句）
②We’d better plant more trees to make the air clean. （“sb. had better do sth.”表建议的句型）
③I believe Suzhou will become more and more beautiful.（宾语从句）
20．例文：
Kites
Kites have a history of about 2,300 years in China. The kite was invented by a man called Mozi in the Warring States period. He made a bird out of wood. It was the first kite in history. Later, his student Lu Ban used bamboo to make kites. During the Eastern Han Dynasty, with the invention of paper, people began to use paper to make kites. Kites have also begun to take on different shapes, such as airplanes, eagles and so on.
The World Kite Capital is Weifang, Shandong Province. There are many grand kite competitions held there every year. People all over the world want to go there. Flying kites is deeply loved by people. It is a very popular outdoor activity. Every weekend, I can see many people flying kites in the park. They play happily. But the kites we fly now are all bought from stores. Few people make their own kites.
I believe that as a traditional Chinese handicraft, kites should continue to be passed down. We should protect traditional Chinese handicrafts.
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍风筝的历史情况以及特点；
第二步，介绍风筝的文化特点以及如今风筝的发展情况；
第三步，最后提出自己的观点。
[亮点词汇]
① with the invention of paper随着纸的发明
② take on呈现
③ all over the world全世界
[高分句型]
① I believe that as a traditional Chinese handicraft, kites should continue to be passed down.（宾语从句）
② But the kites we fly now are all bought from stores.（定语从句）
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