专题09 期末复习之书面表达 20篇 (含参考范文+写作详解)-2024-2025学年八年级英语下学期（牛津深圳版）

2024-2025学年八年级英语下学期（牛津深圳版）
专题09 期末复习之书面表达 20篇
一、书面表达
1． 假如你是托尼，打算同丹尼尔一起去儿童福利中心（Children's Welfare Centre）做义工。请根据以下内容和提示要求给丹尼尔写一封约80词的提示信。文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数。1.见面时间：7月23日，早上7点2.见面地点：公交车站3.交通工具：5路公共汽车4.活动安排：为孩子们表演节目；做游戏；帮忙装饰教室。5.携带物品：自由发挥（至少列举两种）
21 July
Hi Daniel,
This is to remind you about our voluntary work in the Children's Welfare Centre.
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See you soon!
Tony
2．假如你是某国际学校学生会主席李华，你校学生会将邀请一位研究濒危动物的专家来校开展讲座。请你为校广播站拟一则英语通知稿，内容包括:
①讲座目的：使学生了解濒危动物以及保护措施
②时间：本周五上午9:30-11:00;
③地点：学校礼堂;
④注意事项:……（至少两条）。
要求：
①要点齐全，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范，可适当发挥;
②词数：80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：endangered濒危的，hall礼堂
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3．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Paul来信问你暑假的安排，请写封回信向他介绍你暑假做志愿者的计划。
要点：1）志愿者活动的时间和地点;
2）志愿者活动的具体内容;
3）你希望从志愿者活动中得到的收获。
要求：1）至少70词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数;
2）文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;
3）可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯；
4）标点正确，书面整洁。
Dear Paul，
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Li Hu
4．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Henry对武术感兴趣。请你根据图表提示，用英语给他写一封电子邮件，邀请他暑期来观摩你校举办的首届武术节，感受中华武术文化。词数80左右。
Time July 7 to 9,2018
Activities Competitions, shows
History of Wushu Thousands of years
Benefits (益处) of Wushu ……
注意事项：1）必须包含所提示的信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2）意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3）请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及提示信息以外的地名。
参考词汇：practise Wushu练武
Dear Henry,
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Yours,
Li Hua
5．今年"五·四"青年节。你校举行了一次为贫困儿童募捐的活动。假如你参加了这次活动，请你根据下面表格的提示写一篇英语短文，介绍这次活动的情况。
活动时间 5月4日上午
活动地点 学校操场
活动目的 帮助贫困儿童
筹到物资 各种学习用品（如书本……）
数千元钱
你的感想 ……（不少于2点）
写作要求：1）短文内容必须包含所给要点，并适当发挥；
2）语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
3）中不能出现学生的真实姓名、校名和地名；
4）词数80左右。
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6．假如你是李明，请给报社写一封关于拯救老虎的信，要点如下：
1）老虎是国家保护动物，目前数量日趋减少，我国所剩不多；
2）有人为了赚钱，滥捕滥杀老虎，且森林的过量砍伐破坏了它们的生存环境；
3）呼吁国家采取措施、制定法律保护老虎，严惩捕猎者；
4）希望大家共同努力，创造一个人类和动物共同生活的幸福家园。
注意：1）书信必须包括所有要点，但不要逐条翻译；
2）词数：80左右。
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7．随着生活水平的提高，人们开始重视自己的生活质量。越来越多的人开始热衷于养宠物。可爱的小动物给人们带来了无穷的快乐；然而，对于那些不喜欢动物的人来说，宠物的存在会给他们的生活增添很多烦恼。请结合此话题，写一篇英语短文，谈谈你的看法：人们该不该养宠物。为什么 （根据要求写一篇90词以上的文章，开头已给出，不计入总词数，请选择其中一个观点来写作）
观点：养宠物
原因：1）宠物可以让我们放松心情； 2）对于老人来说，养宠物可以减轻寂寞感； 3）……（自己增加一到两条原因）
强调并总结自己的观点
观点：不养宠物
原因：1）需要我们花很多时间去照顾它们； 2）宠物容易滋生细菌（breed bacteria）、污染环境； 3）……（自己增加一到两条原因）
强调并总结自己的观点
Nowadays, more and more people are fond of keeping pets because they can bring pleasure. But others don't think so. They think it's terrible to do it. In my opinion, …
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8．假如你是Jack，你所在的学校有许多学生是志愿者，你也是其中的一员。下周，报社的记者将会去你校采访，他们想了解一些你的情况。请根据下列提示，写一篇80词左右的英语短文为大家介绍你的志愿者工作。
提示：
Name Jack
Place the city library
How often once a week, every Saturday after noon, two hours each time
Things you do clean the books, count the magazines and newspapers and guide readers
How you feel happy, want to help more
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9．借助身势语是否能帮助我们更有效地与他人沟通呢？请根据以下提示，写一篇短文。
内容提示：⑴身势语可以帮助我们更好地表达，使别人更容易理解我们；
⑵使用身势语还能让人在交流中感到放松；
⑶注意文化差异，避免使用不恰当的身势语而造成误解；
⑷只有正确地使用身势语才能有效地沟通。
要求：⑴条理清晰，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确，逻辑严谨；
⑵80词左右，可适当扩展。
Body language is often used in communication.
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10．最近，学校校刊正以"shopping in the past and present"为题，进行征文活动。请你根据下面的提示，写一篇英语短文投稿。词数80左右。文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My parent's teenage days now
地点 商店 商店、网络等
时间 9: 00 a.m.-9: 00 p. m. 任何时间
选择 少 多
支付方式 现金(cash) 现金、手机、电脑
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11．自2018年1月1日起，我国全面禁止象牙贸易，国内所有的象牙及其制品交易都是违法的。假如你是李华，请你根据以下内容提示用英语写一封保护大象的倡议书，并将其发表在你校英文网站上。词数80左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
内容提示: ⑴陆地上最大的哺乳动物，可以活到80岁。
⑵目前数量在减少，原因：人们砍伐森林，大象渐渐失去家园；人们捕杀大象，获取象牙。
⑶保护措施(不少于三条)。
参考词汇：哺乳动物 mammal；象牙 ivory
Dear schoolmates,
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12．连日来，深圳市民感受到了夏季烈日炎炎的“厚爱“”高温黄色预警信号持续生效中，据市气象台发布消息称，今年的深训天气创41年来最高温，甚至出现超过35℃的高温天气。
你的外国朋友Tracy听说了此事来信向你询问有关情况。请你以Joe的身份给她回倍， 内容包括以下要点。
要点：1）深圳的高温现象：气温太高，人们只能打开空调，待在室内；
2）造成高温的主要原因：空气污染导致温室效应，温度上升：汽车排放废气，温度更高；
3）应对办法：保护环境，最好步行或乘坐公交。
要求：1）涵盖以上所有要点，并提出至少1点你自己的建议；
2）信开头和结尾己给出，不计入总词数；
3）100词左右。
参考词汇：temperature温度 ℃摄氏度 the greenhouse effect温室效应
Dear Tracy,
In your e-mail, you asked me about the on-going high temperature in Shenzhen. Now I am writing to tell you more.
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13．暑假就要到了，你打算在暑假做一些有意义的事，请你根据要点提示，以My summer holiday plan 为题写一篇短文，介绍你的暑假计划。
要点：
1）.多陪陪父母，多做家务活；
2）.和朋友一起做志愿工作，帮助他人；
3）.其他计划，自拟两点。
要求：
1）. 文章必须包含所有要点内容，可作适当发挥；
2）. 表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书面规范；
3）. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
4）. 字数要求80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
My summer holiday plan
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14．请以My Future Life为题写一篇80词左右的作文, 畅想一下你未来的生活。
提示语: grow up, raise one's family, achieve one's goal
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15．众所周知, 健康对每个人都很重要, 怎样保持健康呢 我们可以适当运动, 比如：散步, 游泳等; 吃适量的蔬菜水果; 睡眠充足, 早睡早起等。请你以How to keep heathy 为题写一篇80词左右的短文。
提示：keep healthy, go for a walk, have enough sleep
How to keep healthy
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16．写作
每个人喜欢的卡通形象（cartooncharacter）各不相同，请你根据以下提示写一篇短文，描述你喜欢的卡通形象及原因。要求80词左右，可适当发挥。
内容提示：
1. 你喜欢的卡通形象的外貌及衣着；
2. 你喜欢的卡通形象的基本特征，如饮食习惯、性格特点等；
3. 你喜欢它的原因。
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17．写作
目前中学生学习任务重，学习压力大，而广泛的阅读有利于开拓视野，调节身心。在课业学习和业余生活中，你喜欢阅读吗？你喜欢读什么样的书呢？作为中学生的你，是如何看待阅读的呢？请就这个话题，谈谈你的想法和理由，可适当给出建议。
注意：①词数：80词左右；
②条理清楚，语意连贯，字迹工整，可适当发挥。
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18．写作
微笑是一种态度。请你以“Learn to Smile”为题，为你校《英语园地》写一篇文章。
内容要点包括：
① 学会对自己微笑；
② 学会对他人微笑；
③微笑是一种语言。
参考词汇：态度attitude；自信心confidence
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19． 现代技术的进步使我们的学习方式发生了变化，通过网络进行学习正变得越来越受欢迎，但同时也存在不少弊端。请根据以下信息，以"Online Learning"为题，谈谈现代网络学习的利与弊，并阐述你的看法。
网络学习优点 1. 学习时间灵活
2. 有丰富的学习资源
3. ……
网络学习缺点 1. 对眼睛不好
2. 对学习有影响
你的看法 ……
参考词汇：灵活的 flexible 资源 resource
注意：1. 文中请勿使用真实人名、校名和地名；2. 内容应包含提示信息并适当发挥；3. 词数：80词左右；4. 文章的开头已给出，但不计入总词数。
Online Learning
With the development of modern technology, the way of learning is changing.
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20． 作为一名中学生，我们不仅要有独立意识还需有团队合作意识。在团队合作学习中，我们能互相学习，互相帮助，共同讨论。能分享学习中的快乐与悲伤，能感受到爱与被爱。让团队合作精神伴随我们成长！
请你以"How to learn together as a team "为标题写一篇英语演讲稿，代表学校参加达州市中学生英语演讲比赛。
要求：
1.卷面整洁(无污迹)，书写工整(有美感)。
2.全文字数90左右。文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
3.条理清楚，句式规范，标点符号和大小写使用正确。
4.内容尽量包括提示信息，并适当发挥；文中不能出现真实的人名、地名。
5.参考词汇： friendly, help, discuss (talk, listen), share, grow up。
How to learn together as a team
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. Today my topic is "How to learn together as a team".
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That's all for my speech. Thank you!
答案解析部分
1．21 July
Dear Daniel,
This is to remind you about our voluntary work in the Children's Welfare Centre.
I will meet you at the bus station at 7 a.m. on 23rd July. And then, we'll take Bus No.5 to get there. There are several things you should remember to prepare. First, bring your camera or mobile phone to take photos. Second, bring your guitar—we're going to give the children a show. Oh, you don't forget to wear comfortable clothes and shoes because we'll play games with them and offer help to decorate their classrooms. I feel happy and excited and I can't wait to go there now.
See you soon!
Tony
这是一篇书信作文，本文要求按照所给内容写一封提示信。写作中要包含见面的时间及地点和交通工具，活动安排及需要带的物品等。根据材料内容可知时态主要为"一般将来时"，人称主要为第一人称。文章的开头和结尾已给出，写作中注意上下文过渡要符合逻辑关系。
这篇短文根据所给内容分三步进行了陈述，第一步，承接开头，介绍见面的时间及地点和交通工具；第二步，介绍活动安排及需要带的物品；第三步，书写结语，期待见面。内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚。一些固定短语，如remember to do sth，can't wait to do sth，play games with sb等表达准确。There are several things you should remember to prepare. there be句型及定语从句，运用得体，使文章更加流畅自然。
2．Hello everyone! May I have your attention, please In order to make student understand endangered animals and protection measures, we will invite an expert who studies endangered animals to give a lecture. (讲座目的) It will be held in the school auditorium from 9: 30 to 11: 00 this Friday morning, (时间、 地点)If you come, pay attention to discipline and hygiene. At the same time, be careful not to walk.
That's all. Thank you.
这是一篇应用文写作，注意时态是一般将来时和一般现在时，首先介绍讲座的目的、时间和地点；然后介绍讲座的注意事项。注意运用好词好句，同时注意恰当使用连词，使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
作文内容全面，运用好词好句，如：in order to do；make sb. do sth.；from...to...；pay attention to；at the same time；be careful to do等。定语从句、被动语态、状语从句、祈使句的运用为文章增色不少，如In order to make student understand endangered animals and protection measures, we will invite an expert who studies endangered animals to give a lecture. (讲座目的) It will be held in the school auditorium from 9: 30 to 11: 00 this Friday morning, (时间、 地点)If you come, pay attention to discipline and hygiene. At the same time, be careful not to walk.等。连词and、if、at the same time的运用使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
3．Dear Paul,
How are you It's great to hear from you. I'm writing to share my summer holiday plan for with you.
To make my holiday more meaningful, I plan to do some voluntary work in Luohu Library every morning from July 27th to August 10th. What I mainly need to do is to put the books in order. Besides, I may offer to clean the library.
I hope that I can gain valuable experience. More importantly, I believe that I will have more chances to read books. Do you think so
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
这是一篇应用文写作。根据提示，要求给你的英国笔友Paul回封英语信函，向他介绍你暑假做志愿者的计划。先介绍志愿者活动的时间和地点；再介绍志愿者活动的具体内容，最后介绍你希望从志愿者活动中得到的收获。写作时要求语言通顺，条理清楚，书写规范，要点齐全，内容可适当发挥。时态主要以一般将来时为主，人称用第一人称。
考查应用文写作。文章紧扣题目提示要点展开叙述，语句通顺完整，表达清楚流畅，单词拼写正确，语法运用准确，上下文连接流畅，逻辑合理，能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想。例如：What I mainly need to do is to put the books in order.我主要需要做的是把书整理好。是what引导的主语从句。又如：I hope that I can gain valuable experience.我希望我能获得宝贵的经验。是由that引导宾语从句。词汇、短语、句型及语法都运用的很恰当，达到了预期的写作目的。
4．Dear Henry, I am glad that you are interested in Wushu. Here I've got good news for you. The first Wushu Festival of our school is going to be held from July 7 to 9, 2018. I'd like to invite you to the festival. You can watch many Wushu competitions and enjoy wonderful shows. Chinese Wushu has a history of thousands of years. Practising Wushu is a good way to improve our health. Besides, it helps us to develop strong wills. Most of us like it very much. I hope you will come and experience Chinese Wushu culture. Looking forward to seeing you soon. Yours, Li Hua
这是一篇应用文写作。要求假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Henry对武术感兴趣。请你根据图表提示，用英语给他写一封电子邮件，邀请他暑期来观摩你校举办的首届武术节，感受中华武术文化。词数80左右。 题目中给出了一些提示，可以依据这些提示，结合自己对武术的了解，组织语言，串联成文。审题可知，短文应以一般现在时态为主。注意用一些固定搭配和固定句型为文章增色，同时注意使用连词，使文章上下文联系更紧密。
这篇短文使用了一般现在时和大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如are interested in，would like to do sth , thousands of , Looking forward to等。而The first Wushu Festival of our school is going to be held from July 7 to 9, 2018. 被动语态的使用，和I am glad that you are interested in Wushu. I hope you will come and experience Chinese Wushu culture. 等从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。
5．In the morning, we had an activity on the playground in order to help the poor children on May 4th. We collected all kinds of things for them, such as some new books, dictionaries, clothes and schoolbags. Children like books and dictionaries very much. In addition, we also collected thousands of yuan. We can use the money to help the poor children buy some necessary things. Certainly, it can help more poor children go back to school and continue their school life. I think this activity is very meaningful. It can help poor children get the things they want. More importantly, this activity teaches us to be kind. I hope more people can join us in helping them.
这是一篇提纲作文。本文要求按照表内提供的信息写一篇英语短文来介绍活动的情况。写作中要包含所给的五个方面的内容，活动时间，地点，目的，筹到的物资以及你的感想。根据表格内容可知本文要用一般过去时，人称主要是第一人称复数和第三人称单数，注意并列连词的使用及主谓一致问题，写作中注意上下文的过渡，要符合逻辑关系，符合英语的表达习惯。
这篇文章写出了表格中五个方面的内容。文章条理清楚，内容符合题目要求。文章使用了常用的短语，例如：in order to do sth；on the playground；all kinds of；such as；in addition；thousands of；go back to school等以及句型结构We collected all kinds of things for them, such as some new books, dictionaries, clothes and schoolbags. More importantly, this activity teaches us to be kind. I hope more people can join us in helping them.文章句式结构简单，容易理解。
6．Dear editor, I'm writing to you because I want humans to save the endangered tigers. It is said that there are only a few tigers left in our country. As is known to us all, tigers are protected animals. But some people kill them in order to make money. Besides, too many trees have been cut down, destroying their habitats. So I think that the government should take necessary measures and pass laws to protect tigers and punish the hunters. I do hope we all try our best to make our Earth pleasant and peaceful, not only for human beings but also for animals. Yours, Li Ming
这是一篇应用文写作。要求假如你是李明，请你围绕拯救老虎这一主题给报社写一封信。先分析需要写的内容，书信必须包括所有要点，但不要逐条翻译，可以适当发挥。人称主要用第一和第三人称，时态用一般现在时。写作时注意表达准确，语句通顺，做到上下文联系紧密，要符合英文表达方式。
这篇文章内容全面，涵盖所有信息，表达清楚准确，时态与人称使用得当。使用了一些连词Besides，So使短文层次分明，同时使用了固定搭配如in order to，too many，cut down，take measures，try our best to，not only ... but also和句型It is said that there are only a few tigers left in our country. 和I think that the government should take necessary measures and pass laws to protect tigers and punish the hunters. 这些短语或句子给文章增色不少。
7． Nowadays, more and more people are fond of keeping pets because they can bring pleasure. But others don't think so. They think it's terrible to do it. In my opinion, keeping pets will do good to our family and ourselves. First, it's relaxing to have a pet accompany us because it is cute and smart, for example, a dog may understand you well when you are upset or tired. We can talk about our problems with the pets. Second, for the old, keeping a pet means having a family along with them so they will feel less lonely. What's more, when there is a fire or something bad happens, the pet may warn the keeper about the danger. In this way, many people can be saved by their pets. All in all, try keeping a pet in your family and I am sure you will get a lot from it.
这是一篇提纲作文。要求从养宠物的快乐，和养宠物所带了的烦恼两个方面，挑选其中一个观点，发表个人看法，并写明理由。写作中应包含材料所列举的所有信息，并在最后发表自己的观点。根据材料内容可知本文主要使用一般现在时，人称以第三人称为主，表述观点时，使用第一人称，注意在论述观点时并列连词的使用。写作时上下文过渡要符合逻辑关系。
本篇短文从养宠物给人们带来快乐的角度，从三个角度进行阐释，并在每个角度加入事例论证。内容切题，意思连贯，表述清楚、完整，时态运用灵活准确，使用First，Second，What's more，All in all等连接词，使文章更有逻辑性、流畅、自然。文章中活用常识，如What's more, when there is a fire or something bad happens, the pet may warn the keeper about the danger.来增强个人论点的说服性。
8． Hello, I'm Jack! I'm a volunteer in the city library. I help in the library once a week. I work there every Saturday afternoon and I stay there for two hours every time. I help do many things in the library such as cleaning the books, counting the magazines and newspapers. Sometimes, I'm a guide in the library. I tell readers how to borrow the books and how to return the books. I feel really happy to be a volunteer, because I learn a lot. I want to help more people in the future.
这是一篇材料作文，要求根据表格信息，写一篇说明文，介绍自己的志愿者工作。根据所给材料，可知文章时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称，写作时注意保持语意连贯及上下文通顺。
这篇文章内容充实、表达准确、逻辑清晰，恰当地使用了连词、副词、固定搭配等，其中一些用法，如：once a week；every time；help do；such as；Sometimes；how to borrow；return the books；feel really happy to be；a lot；in the future等，都是可圈可点之处。
9． Body language is often used in communication. It is very useful because it can help us express ourselves better and make us easily understood by others. Using body language can also help people feel relaxed in communication. However, body language is different from culture to culture, so if the speakers do not know the culture well, some misunderstanding can come out naturally. Therefore, to effectively communicate, we should use body language in a proper way when we are talking with others.
这是一篇材料，注意时态是现在进行时和一般现在时，首先介绍手势的作用；然后介绍手势的文化差异；最后介绍正确使用手势。注意运用好词好句，同时注意恰当使用连词，使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
作文内容全面，运用好词好句，如：want to do；plan to do；like doing等。be going to do和宾语从句的运用为文章增色不少，如：Using body language can also help people feel relaxed in communication.to effectively communicate, we should use body language in a proper way when we are talking with others. 等。连词however，so，therefore，and的运用使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
10． When my parents were young, they only could shop in the physical store from 9: 00 a.m. to 9: 00 p. m. They have few choices and they only used cash to pay for the things that they had bought. But now, we can shop in the physical store ,supermarket and online anytime. We have many choices to buy the goods that we like. The way of paying has changed a lot, we can use cash, bank card, phone and computer to pay. More and more old people also like to use wetchant payment and alipay to pay for the goods, it is very convenient.
这是一篇提纲作文，主题为“ Shopping in the past and present ”。动笔前要先认真阅读要点，尽量将提示的内容利用上；以提示的问题作为写作的主线，结合材料内容，可知本文主要是第一人称，一般现在时和过去时态进行叙述。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
这篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性更富有条理。本文运用的定语从句，比如We have many choices to buy the goods that we like. 固定短语more and more，change a lot等。
11．One possible version:
Dear schoolmates.
I believe everyone's contribution can make a big difference. Elephants are the largest mammals on land. They can live as long as 80 years. However, these days the number of elephants is becoming much smaller. They are losing their homes because people are cutting down forests. Also, people kill them for their ivory. Elephants are in great danger. I think we should try our best to protect them. First, we should help make rules to stop people from killing elephants. Second, we shouldn't cut down trees. Third, we mustn't buy anything made of ivory.
I believe everyone's contribution can make a big difference.
Li Hua
这是一篇提纲作文。本文要求按照所给的提示内容完成这篇关于保护大象的倡议书。写作中要包含大象的类别，寿命，数量减少及其基本原因；还有保护措施等。根据材料内容可知本文要用一般现在时，人称主要是第三人称单数，写作中注意上下文的语句的过渡，要符合逻辑关系，符合英语的表达习惯。
这篇文章比较详细，将所提示内容完整无误的表达了出来，其中也不乏有非常优美的语句。比如 They can live as long as 80 years. 它们可以活到80多岁。涉及到短语as...as结构；复合句 we should help make rules to stop people from killing elephants. 我们应该帮助制定规则阻止人们捕杀大象。还有三个表示顺序的词，first；second以及third。
12．Dear Tracy, In your e-mail, you asked me about the on-going high temperature in Shenzhen. Now I am writing to tell you more.The increasingly high temperature makes it impossible for people to go out. Therefore, they have to slay indoors with the air conditioner on. There are two main causes of this phenomenon. The first one is that air pollution leads to the greenhouse effect, which further causes the temperature to go up. In addition, experts also attribute this matter to the exhaust fumes which is released by the cars. Measures should be taken to deal with the problem right now. In my opinion, people should protect the environment. More strict laws on limiting the emission and pollution should be carried out. Individuals should also raise their awareness and try to take a bus or walk instead of travelling by cars. We live in the same world, so let's protect it together.
这篇作文要求按照所给的材料，以Joe的身份给Tracy写一封回信。通过分析可知时态用一般现在时，人称主要用第三人称。文中的开头已给出，作者首先介绍了深圳的高温现象，然后说出了产生高温的两个主要原因，最后呼吁采取措施解决这个问题。层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用Therefore, In addition ，In my opinion等词和短语，起到了很好的连接作用。而make it +形容词+for sb to do sth ;以及从句和被动语态句式结构的运用，使本文内容丰富，表达流畅，是短文的亮点。
材料作文。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点应注意描述的全面性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯,尽量利用有把握的句式。注意动词的正确形式，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
13．Summer holiday is coming. I want to do something meaningful in my summer holiday. Here is my plan.
First, I will spend more time with my parents. I will help them do more housework. Besides, there are many people in need. I will do some voluntary work to help them with my friends. In addition, I want to read some books I am interested in. At last, I plan to keep a dog as my pet, because it can help me learn how to care for others.
I am looking forward to my summer holiday.
本题属于题干类作文，主要应该叙述你在暑假做的一些有意义的事，在写作时应注意符合题意，根据要表达的内容确定所用时态，语言表达要符合英语中的习惯。
一、阅读提示，弄清题目信息，明确写作要点。
1.多陪陪父母，多做家务活； spend more time with my parents
2.和朋友一起做志愿工作，帮助他人；do some voluntary work to help them with my friends
3.读自己感兴趣的书； read some books I am interested in
二、根据要点，写出关键词，短语或句子。
三、组词成句，连词成篇。注意使用一般将来时。
本题考查学生写作的能力，应熟练使用相关短语，对题干正确理解，注意词性的搭配，时态的把握，人称的使用等细节问题。
14．My Future Life I want to grow up as soon as possible. When I grow up, I can do many things that I can't do now. However, at the same time, I don't know what my future life would be. Look around myself, some people are busy working for having enough food to eat and live better, some are achieving every goal that they make, some may live in the poor situation. I don't know what kind of life l would have in the future. But I know that everyone's life is in their hands. So I will try my best to work hard for a better future life.
这是一篇以My Future Life为题的命题作文。
写作步骤：
一、写作内容包括：
（1）我想快点长大，当我长大时，我可以做很多现在不能做的事情。I want to grow up as soon as possible. When I grow up, I can do many things that I can't do now.
（2）周边人的现状：有些人忙于工作为了有足够多的食物或活得更好。some people are busy working for having enough food to eat and live better；有些努力达成他们制作的每个目标。some are achieving every goal that they make；有些过着贫穷的生活。some may live a poor life。
（3）自己对未来生活的想法。我认为每个人的生活掌握在自己手中。 I know that everyone's life is in their hands；我会尽力努力工作为了更好的未来。I will try my best to work hard for a better future life.
二、连句成篇，注意句子的前后连贯性，可适当应用一些连词如and，when，so等等。
在平时的英语学习中，要多背诵一些好词好句，写句子时要注意句子的结构符合英文结构，表述要符合英文习惯，同时考虑时态的正确应用。
15．How to keep healthy As we all know, being healthy is very important to everybody. But do you really know how to stay healthy Here are some useful tips. First, we should do exercise if we have time. For example, we can go to swim in the summer holiday. Or we can take a walk after supper. Doing exercise makes us healthy and strong. Second, we should take more vegetables and fruit and less candies. Stop eating junk food and drinking beers. Last but not least, we should go to bed early and wake up early. We should have enough sleep, or we will get sleepy in the day time. If we pay more attention to the tips above, we will have healthier body. I wish everybody has a strong and healthy body.
这是一篇以How to keep healthy 为题的命题作文。
写作步骤：
一、写作内容包括：
（1）众所周知, 健康对每个人都很重要, 怎样保持健康呢 As we all know, being healthy is very important to everybody. But do you really know how to stay healthy
（2）具体的建议有：①有时间应该做运动。 比如：饭后散步,夏天游泳等。we should do exercise if we have time.For example, we can go to swim in the summer holiday. Or we can take a walk after supper. 因为健康可以使我们变得健康和强壮，Doing exercise makes us healthy and strong. ②多吃蔬菜水果,不要吃垃圾食品和喝酒。we should take more vegetables and fruit. Stop eating junk food and drinking beers. ③早睡早起，睡眠充足。we should go to bed early and wake up early．We should have enough sleep.
（3）总结。如果我们注意以上提到的建议，我们就会有更健康的身体。If we pay more attention to the tips above, we will have healthier body.
二、连句成篇，在提建议时，可以用first，second，finally等表示顺序的词过渡。
在平时的英语学习中，要多背诵一些好词好句，写句子时要注意句子的结构符合英文结构，表述要符合英文习惯，同时考虑时态的正确应用。
16． My favourite cartoon character is Micky Mouse. Micky Mouse is a country mouse. He has a lovely face and a small black nose. He always wears white gloves and red clothes. He doesn't have any brothers or sisters, but he has a lot of friends. He is very different from other mice. For example, he doesn't like eating cheese. He just likes eating vegetables and chicken wings. I like him because Micky Mouse is a bit like me in character! He is kind and friendly, and so am I.
本题是写一篇给定材料的书面表达，写作的话题为My Favourite Cartoon Character，在写作时应注意符合题意，根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。
写作步骤：
一、阅读提示，弄清所有信息，明确写作要点。
1.我最喜欢的卡通形象是……。My favourite cartoon character is
2.外貌及衣着
3.基本特征，如饮食习惯、性格特点等
4.喜欢它的原因
二、根据要点，写出关键词、短语或句子。
三、组词成句。连句成篇。注意使用一般现在时。
本题考查对本单元所学知识的综合运用，熟练使用相关短语、单词和句型，注意词性的搭配，时态的把握，人称的使用等细节问题。
17．范文：
I am a student. Though I'm busy with my lessons, my free time is full of happiness and joy. I love reading because it helps me study better. I often do some reading in the evening. I think books are our best friends. They give us much knowledge. I find reading books is a good way to relax myself. At the same time it can also help me broaden my horizons. So I suggest that teachers should give us less homework to do so that we can have more time to read.
（1）仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。 （2） 提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语， 按照一定逻辑关系来写。（3）根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。
18．范文：
Learn to Smile
Smile is an attitude towards life. We should face everything with smile.
In our life, there may be something unpleasant. For example, you fail an examination; or you are misunderstood by your friends. These things may make you feel bad. Then what will you do Why not learn to smile Smile to yourself can bring back your confidence and forget the unhappy feelings. Sometimes your greatest enemy is yourself. Most important of all, smiling benefits your health.
We should also learn to smile to others, and it will help us to get closer to other people. Therefore, smile is the most widely understood language.
Let's learn to smile, I believe our world will be more wonderful and our life will be happier and happier.
（1）仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。 （2） 提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语， 按照一定逻辑关系来写。（3）根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。
19．Online Learning
With the development of modern technology, the way of learning is changing. Online learning is getting more and more popular.
On the one hand, it's good for us to learn online. Firstly, we can have a flexible timetable. We can make a plan by ourselves. In this way, we can have more free time to arrange our life. Secondly, online learning provides us with rich learning resources. We can get any information we like easily. In addition, we can be able to go on lerning without leaving the house, especially under the bad weather.
On the other hand, there are also some disadvantanges. For example, learning for a long time is bad for our eye. Even worse, we can't control ourselves and do something like playing computer games, which will have a bad effect on our study.
In my opinion, I enjoy the modern learning on the Internet and we must try our best to make good use of it in our study.
本文是命题作文，文章时态要用一般现在时，人称主要用第一第三人称。在写作的时候，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；词汇，句式要丰富多样，避免句式单一。对于这道初中英语作文题目"Online Learning"，写作思路可以围绕以下几个方面展开：首先，介绍现代技术进步对学习方式的影响，特别是网络学习如何变得越来越受欢迎。这是文章的引入部分，可以通过一两句话简要概述这一现象。接着，进入文章主体部分，分别讨论网络学习的优点和缺点。在论述优点时，可以首先提及学习时间的灵活性，即学生可以根据自己的时间安排进行学习；其次，可以强调网络学习提供了丰富的学习资源，使得学生能够接触到更多样化的知识和信息。这里可以进一步发挥，比如提到在线课程、学习平台等具体资源。然后，转到网络学习的缺点。首先，可以指出长时间使用电子设备对眼睛的伤害；其次，可以讨论网络学习可能对学习本身产生的影响，比如学生可能因为缺乏监督和自律而分心或拖延学习。同样，这部分也可以结合实际情况进行具体阐述。最后，在阐述个人看法时，可以综合权衡网络学习的利与弊，提出自己的观点。比如，可以认为虽然网络学习存在一些问题，但其优点仍然使得它成为一种值得推广的学习方式。同时，也可以提出一些建议或策略，以更好地利用网络学习来提高学习效果。整篇文章应该保持逻辑清晰、条理分明，同时注意使用题目中给出的参考词汇，并在词数限制内完成写作。
这篇范文结构清晰、内容丰富且语言准确。首先，文章明确指出了网络学习的两面性，既谈到了其优点也指出了其缺点，体现了作者全面客观的思考能力。其次，文章在论述优点时，列举了多个方面，如学习时间的灵活性、丰富的学习资源以及无需出门即可学习的便利性，这些论述都具体且深入，展示了作者对网络学习深刻的理解。同时，在描述缺点时，也通过具体例子（如长时间学习对眼睛的伤害、无法自控导致分心等）进行了生动的阐述，增强了文章的说服力。范文中的好词好句包括"we can have a flexible timetable"、"online learning provides us with rich learning resources"以及"learning for a long time is bad for our eyes"等，这些句子不仅准确表达了文章的意思，还通过丰富的词汇和句式展现了作者的英语水平。特别是"make a plan by ourselves"和"go on learning without leaving the house"等表达，既简洁又生动，为文章增色不少。总之，这篇范文以其清晰的结构、丰富的内容和准确的语言，充分展示了作者的写作能力和对英语学习的深入理解，因此获得了高分。
20．How to learn together as a team
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. Today my topic is "How to learn together as a team".
Teamwork is always very important. It offers us chances to learn how to get along well with others and to share our experiences with others. We can learn from each other and help each other. But how could we learn together as a team
In my opinion, we should be friendly to each other. When we have problems, we should offer help to others. Maybe we don't know how to do, but we can discuss together and find a solution at last. After all, when I walk along with others, I may able to learn from them. Meanwhile working together with others helps us grow up. Many hands make light work. We need teamwork in our daily life.
That's all for my speech. Thank you!
这是一篇命题作文，要求以"How to learn together as a team "为标题写一篇演讲稿，演讲稿中要体现团队合作学习的优点，比如相互学习、相互帮助、分享学习中的快乐和悲伤等，文章使用一般现在时态，要满足字数要求，内容要丰富多彩。
考查命题作文。所给例文首先阐述了团队学习的重要性，使用了offer sb. sth.、get along well with others、share with、learn from等短语，然后用问句 But how could we learn together as a team 进行内容过渡，过渡到怎样进行团队学习。在介绍怎样进行团队学习时，使用了be friendly to、offer sth. to sb.、after all、grow up等短语。文章逻辑清晰，内容丰富。