专题10 期末复习之书面表达20篇 【含参考范文+写作详解】-2024-2025学年八年级英语下学期（牛津译林版）

2024-2025学年八年级英语下学期（牛津译林版）
专题10 期末复习之书面表达20篇
一、书面表达
1．与单元话题相关，给出范文
班级准备举办一个“Good Manners in the UK”的讲座，你准备给其他同学介绍一些关于英国人礼仪方面的事，要点如下。词数在80词左右。
要点：1）英国人第一次和你见面时会问好或握手
2）喜欢谈论天气、假期或其他的话题，避谈年龄、体重；
3）甚至在家时也“请”和“谢”字不离口；
4）吃饭时总是表现得很礼貌，他们会等每个人吃完再离席；
5）这些小建议都对我们很有帮助……
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2．为了锻炼学生社会实践能力，阳光中学图书馆将在八年级学生中招聘一名图书管理员助理（librarian assistant），负责外文书籍区的服务工作。假设你是Lucy，你将参加本次竞聘面试，请根据下列所示内容用英文写一篇面试稿，介绍你的个人情况及竞聘优势。
个人信息 1、八（5）班学生，法国人； 2、来到阳光中学学习已两年。
性格爱好 1、待人亲切，乐于助人（举例）； 2、喜欢阅读，有很好的阅读习惯（举例）； 3、最喜欢的书是……
阅读建议 在图书馆要有良好的阅读礼仪，如……
要求∶
1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯;
2）必须包括提示中所有要点内容，并适当发挥;
3）词数∶100词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）;
4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Hi, I'm Lucy, from Class 5, Grade 8. I'm French and I've been here for 2 years. I'm here to challenge the position. I think I'm able to be a good librarian assistant.
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I hope you can accept me. Thanks for your time!
3．假设你是李华，对电脑很感兴趣，梦想成为电脑工程师，经常阅读电脑方面的书。但你的父母认为这样会影响你的学习，为此你经常和父母争吵，你感到很苦恼。请你写一封电子邮件向你的朋友Susan 倾诉你的烦恼，并请她给你一些建议。
要求：
1）词数80左右。短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入单词总数；
2）短文需包含所有内容要点，可适当发挥，不要逐词翻译。
Dear Susan,
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Yours,
Li Hua
4．假如李明是你校的一名学生，他每个周末都到你们学校附近的十字路口做志愿活动，如阻止行人闯红灯、帮助老人和儿童过马路等。假如你是校英语广播站的一名记者，请你就此写一篇英语广播稿，将李明的事迹分享给大家。不少于100词，可适当发挥。
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5．假如你叫李英，是一名初二学生，你们班英语老师让同学们以"How to be a student with good manners"为题写一篇英语演讲稿。请你根据下表内容，写一篇演讲稿。
节约能源 不让水龙头一直流着；出去要关灯
公共场所 不大声讲话或大笑；在图书馆保持安静；……（自拟一点）
爱护环境 不在公园里摘花；不乱扔垃圾
出行礼仪 遵守交通规则；给老人和其他需要的人让座
就餐礼仪 不要嘴巴里满是食物时讲话；……（自拟一点）
要求：
1）应包含表格中所有内容，可以适当发挥，条理清楚
2）词数80左右。
How to be a student with good manners
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6．为共创文明城市，我校将举行以 Civilized City 为主题的演讲比赛。请结合以下要点用英语写一篇演讲稿。内容必须包括以下要点∶
个人修养 1. 对人友善，礼貌待人； 2. ……
公共礼仪 1. 保持干净整洁，不乱扔垃圾； 2. 不在公共场所大声喧哗，在图书馆、阅览室保持安静； 3. ……
绿色生活 1. 节能减排，垃圾分类； 2. ……
注意：
1）文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2）内容要点齐全，可以适当发挥；
3）语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
4）词数80左右，文章的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。Civilized City
Dear classmates,
Our city is now making its effort to be a civilized city. I think we can do something for it.
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Let's start from ourselves. Try our best to make our hometown more beautiful and civilized. Thank you!
7．书面表达
在日常生活（daily life）中，国际互联网起着越来越重要的作用。请根据以下提示，以On the Internet为题写一段50－70字的短文。
国际互联网的主要用途：
信息 看国内新闻，获取其他信息
通讯 发e-mail，打电话
学习 上网上学校，阅览各种书籍，自学外语
娱乐 欣赏音乐，观看体育比赛，玩棋牌游戏
生活 购物
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8．假如你是报社的一位记者，你对陈先生进行了采访，想了解一下阳光镇的变化。根据以下信息写一段采访稿，要点如下： 1. 阳光镇过去是个破旧的小镇，但是现在已经变成了一个现代化的镇。2. 镇上的钢厂过去常常把废料扔进河里，政府已经采取行动改善了这个情况。3. 他的大多数朋友已经搬走了，所以他常常感到孤独。4. 即使这样，他仍然很高兴能看到这些变化。
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9．书面表达。
为了节能环保及方便出行, 提高生活质量, 苏州市政府近年来在很多地段为市民免费提供自行车服务, 但部分市民对此了解不够。假如你是一位志愿者, 周日上午, 你来到中心广场对市民进行自行车借用宣传。请根据以下提示写出一篇演讲稿。
提示：1. 苏州市民可以在很多地方免费借用自行车, 非常方便； 2. 如果借用自行车, 请注意爱惜, 并及时归还； 3. 希望大家多骑车出行……（请至少列出骑车出行的两点好处。）
要求：1. 演讲稿内容必须包括以上提示, 可适当发挥； 2. 表达清楚, 语句通顺, 意思连贯, 书写规范； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；写一篇90字左右的演讲稿。演讲稿的开头和结尾已经给出, 不计入总词数。
参考词汇：resident, convenient, low-carbon, advantage
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen!
May I have your attention, please I'm glad to tell you something about using bikes for free in Suzhou. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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Thank you for your listening. Have a nice weekend!
10．书面表达
在日常生活中，互联网起着越来越重要的作用．请根据以下提示，以“On the Internet”为题，写一篇70词左右的短文．
互联网的主要用途：
信 息 看国内外新闻，获取其他信息
通 讯 发邮件，打电话
学 习 上网校，阅览各种书籍，自学外语
娱 乐 欣赏音乐，观看体育比赛，玩棋牌游戏
生 活 购物，交友
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11．“保护环境, 人人有责”, 你想成为一名绿色使者吗 请行动起来吧! 其实, 环保就在我们身边。请以“How to be a greener person”为题, 写一篇短文。
内容包括： 1.骑自行车或坐公交车上学; 2.节约用水、用电、用纸; 3.回收玻璃、塑料和废纸; 4.自拟2点。
注意： 1.词数90左右。短文的题目和开头已写好, 不计入总词数。2.短文须包括所有要点, 不要逐词翻译, 可适当发挥, 使短文连贯、通顺。3.短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
How to be a greener person
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12．作为即将进入初三的学生，你经历了各种各样“成长的烦恼”，也积累了很多的成长经验。请以“My View(观点)on Growing Pains”为题，写一份演讲稿送给初一的学弟学妹们。
你的演讲必须包括以下内容:
⒈用30词左右陈述你对growing pains的理解(例如成长对你的人生意味着更多的经历和担当，烦恼意味着……):
⒉谈谈自己的一个growing pain的例子(例如你和父母之间的分歧，和朋友之间的矛盾……)，并结合它提出解决此问题的建议。
注意：
⒈词数90左右；
⒉可适当发挥，增加过渡句，使行文连贯；
⒊短文中不得出现与本人真实姓名、学校相关的信息；
⒋短文己给开头部分不计入总词数。
My View on Growing Pains
Dear brothers and sisters,
As one of the experienced hands, I would like to share my view on growing pains.
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13．现在电脑被广泛使用，因特网越来越受欢迎，但同学和老师及父母对此看法不一样。请根据以下要点，写一篇短文，并表达自己的观点。
学生的观点 可以上网聊天，交朋友和购物； 可以打游戏，听音乐使自己放松； 可以学到很多知识。
老师和家长的观点 网上交友不安全；浪费时间，影响学习。
我的观点 很有用，可以查资料、画画、收发邮件、看电影等； 不要沉迷于游戏和聊天而影响学习。
要求：1）词数80左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2）短文必须包含所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使其连贯、通顺。
Today，computers are widely used and the Internet is becoming more and more popular.
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14．根据要点提示，请用英语写一篇关于王叔叔的报道，词数90词左右。
过去 1）王叔叔在大城市教书，生活舒适； 2）他从一个电视节目了解到一所贫困地区的学校没有足够教师，许多孩子无法上学； 3）他下定决心伸出援助之手，到学校去做一名志愿者。
现在 1）在他的帮助下，许多孩子已经回到学校，学习读书写字； 2）王叔叔.……（自由发挥）
要求：
1）要点完整，可适当发挥，使文章通顺、连贯；
2）正确使用时态，书写认真、整洁。
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15．现在，上网已经变得越来越流行了，很多学生都迷上了网络。你是怎么看待上网的？请谈谈你的观点。提示如下：
1）因特网使得交流更加简单，它已成为人们日常生活最重要的部分之一；
2）很多同学每天上网学习，发电子邮件……
3）但是还有很多同学沉迷于上网聊天，打电脑游戏，这对他们的健康很不利。
4）作为学生，我们应该以学习为先……
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16．根据提示写对A New Educational CD-ROM Called Daily English的介绍，词数在60个左右。
1)它是一个来自澳大利亚的新英语课程，它包括一本书和五个光盘；
2)对学生和游客有益；
3)可以了解有关使用电话、问答问题以及谈论天气和时间；
4)话题包括了旅行、宾馆、食品、饮料、购物及货币；
5)你一定会从中受益非浅的。
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17．书面表达。
要想获取知识，那么我们就离不开阅读。我们应该从小就培养良好的阅读习惯，把阅读作为终身的爱好。请以Reading Is a Good Hobby为题目，写一篇英语短文。
要求:1）表达清楚，语法正确;
2）80词左右。
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18．养成好的读书习惯对我们来说十分重要。请你根据下表所提供的信息，用英文写一篇题为"Good reading habits"的演讲稿，谈谈你是如何做的。
好的读书习惯的重要性 不仅帮助我们学得更好，而且会影响我们一生； 使我们能够获取更多的知识，思考得更加深入。
好的读书习惯的做法 坚持阅读很重要； 阅读时可以记笔记； ……(自拟一条)
我的读书习惯 我爱读的书是……； 我读书的时间是在……
注意：
⒈词数：90词左右。短文的开头和结尾己给出，不计入总词数；
⒉短文必须包括表格中所有的信息，并作适当的发挥；
⒊短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。
Good reading habits
Hello, everybody! Today, the topic of my speech is about reading habits.
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19．为了向全世界展示绿色中国，你校学生会倡议每位同学围绕“如何进行低碳生活”的话题写一篇短文，介绍自己是如何从身边小事做起，进行低碳生活的。请根据表格内容，写一篇80—100词的英语短文。
低碳生活
意义 ① 可以节约能源
②有利于减少污染，改善环境
措施 ①外出时最好骑自行车代替开车
② 多植树
③外出时及时关掉电脑和电视机
④用纸袋代替塑料袋(plastic bags)
How to live a low carbon life
As we all know, having a low-carbon life is very important to us.
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20．假设你是李华，请根据下面表格中的提示，用英语写一篇日记，叙述你今天参加的一次郊游活动，并简要谈谈你的感受。
活动地点 距离你家约十公里的里湖
交通工具 骑自行车
活动时间 ⒈上午九点出发 ⒉十点到达 ⒊下午五点半返回
活动内容 自定(至少谈及三项活动)
要点：1）日记必须包含表格中所有信息，可适当发挥；
2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
3）不少于80词。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：outing郊游 Li Lake里湖
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答案解析部分
1．One possible version
British people say "hello" or "nice to meet you" or shake your hand when they meet you for the first time. They like to talk about weather, holidays or something else and avoid talking about age and weight. They say "please" and "thank you" all the time even at home. They always behave politely while eating and they wait for everyone to finish before they leave the table. I think these tips are very helpful to us. Good manners can bring us many friends.
首先认真审题，了解要写的是一个关于英国人礼仪方面的事，要确保语句通顺，行文连贯，要点要全，时态要以一般现在时为主。
这篇作文语句通顺、行文连贯，包括了所有要点，说明了英国人的礼仪。利用了所学的短语和知识，例如：talk about, avoid doing，behave politely, 使文章言简意赅，最后一句Good manners can bring us many friends. 升华了主题。
2． Hi, I'm Lucy, from Class 5, Grade 8. I'm French and I've been here for 2 years. I'm here to challenge the position. I think I'm able to be a good librarian assistant.
I am a kind and helpful girl. I always treat people around me properly and often help someone in need. I like reading because I think reading makes a full man. I also have reading habits. On weekdays, I usually read for an hour before going to bed. I am interested in different types of books and novels. Recently I have read Little Woman, the story of the girl really touched me.
It's important for us to have good manners in the library. We'd better keep quiet. What's more, it's necessary for us to return the books in time after reading.
I hope you can accept me. Thanks for your time!
这是一篇提纲作文。要求写一篇竞聘图书管理员助理的面试稿。从表格中可知面试稿包含三部分内容，分别是：个人信息（包含年级、国籍和在校时间）、性格爱好（乐于助人的事例、喜欢阅读的事例和介绍自己最喜欢的书）和阅读建议。其中个人信息部分作文中已经给出，只需要将其余两部分内容补充完整即可，注意性格爱好方面要添加具体事例进行佐证，由于本文描述的是客观事实，因此多采用一般现在时态。
考查提纲作文。所给例文用"kind、helpful、properly、in need"等词或短语勾勒出了一个善良阳光、乐于助人的女孩儿形象，用"On weekdays, I usually read for an hour before going to bed. "介绍了自己的阅读习惯，" Recently I have read Little Woman, the story of the girl really touched me."一句介绍了自己最喜欢的书籍，用"had better、what's more、in time、necessary"等词多短语有条理的给出阅读建议，文章内容完整，条理清晰，值得学习。
3．Dear Susan,
I'm upset now. You know I'm interested in computer. My dream is to be a computer engineer. So I often read books about computer. But my parents think it's bad for my study. So they are always angry with me. Sometimes they even take my computer books away from me. Because of this, I'm not happy and often argue with them. I am really sad. What should I do Could you give me some advice
Yours,
Li Hua
这是一篇英文书信，要注意书信的书写格式。文章的内容要按照题目的要求去写。文章要包含题目所给的所有的内容，文章的句子的时态是一般现在时。文章的上下文的逻辑关系要合理，层次要清楚。文章中不要出现语法和拼写错误。
这篇文章作者用简单的话语描写了自己的存在的问题，文章使用了常用的句式结构，例如be upset; be interested in; computer engineer; be bad for; be angry with sb.; away from; because of; argue with sb.等。文章的句式结构简单，容易理解，是一篇不错的文章。
4． How do you usually spend your weekend？Most of us may spend lots of time playing or watching TV, but Li Ming has something more meaningful to do .Every Sunday, he does some volunteer work at a crossing near our school. When the light is red, he stops people who try to cross the road, and when it is green, he guides people across the road. He also helps the old and the young cross the road safely. "Don't you ever get tired？" I asked. "Well, it's not an easy job," Li Ming said. "But I feel happy because I can help others. It's better to give than to receive."
本文是一篇记叙文，全文要用一般现在时进行描述，重点突出李明的事迹。文章必须覆盖所提供的各个提纲的要点，行文间要注意简化描述，用简短的语句代替冗长的语句，在作文完成的时候，应该检查、修改，以免遗漏一些需要表达清楚的要点和细节，写作时，要注意谓语动词形式的变化，写作要点已给出，不可以逐词翻译。
文章用提问的方式开头，使得语言灵活 ，文中适当运用定语从句 people who try to cross the road 和时间状语从句 when it is green, he guides people across the road ，语法规则正确，使整篇短文意思连贯，表达流畅。
5．How to be a student with good manners
To be a student with good manners, we have a lot to do and not to do.
We must save energy. We mustn't leave the tap running. We should turn off the lights before going out.
In public places, we can't talk or laugh loudly. We have to keep quiet in the library and queue for our turn.
We should love and protect the environment. We can't pick flowers in the park and we shouldn't drop litter carelessly.
We should obey traffic rules. We should give our seats to the old or people in need.
When we are at table, we'd better not talk with the mouth full or reach over others' plates for food.
这是一篇提纲作文。通过表格的形式给出提纲。此类文章我们一般选用总分总结构，即开头提出中心论点We should be a student with good manners.然后从五方面 save energy 、 public places 、 protect the environment 、 obey traffic rules 和table manners入手阐述如何做一个有良好习惯的人，注意段落之间的衔接要紧密，不能遗漏图表中所给的提示。
考查提纲作文。从所给表格我们可以看出五方面的每一方面都可以采用总分结构进行写作，但是为了避免所有段落都是总分结构，作者在这里进行了适当调整，一三四方面采用总分结构，二五方面在段落编排上进行了适当调整。情态动词can、may、must、should等的合理使用，使演讲稿语言表达更具感染力。
6．Civilized City
Dear classmates,
Our city is now making its effort to be a civilized city. I think we can do something for it.
As a student, we should be kind to others and often help people. For example, we can give our seats to people in need on the bus and be polite to others. We should care about our classmates and offer help if necessary.
In public, we shouldn't litter everywhere and should keep it clean. It is not polite to speak loudly in public places, and we should keep quiet in libraries, reading rooms and other places like that. Moreover, we should obey the traffic rules ad always queue for our turn.
To make our city more beautiful, we should have a green life. It is important to save energy and reduce waste. We should also separate the waste and try our best to recycle them.
Let's start from ourselves. Try our best to make our hometown more beautiful and civilized. Thank you!
1.题干解读：本文以"Civilized City"为题，根据题干中所给的要点进行写作，可适当增加细节。2.写作指导：阐述做法应用一般现在时，多以第一人称为主，注意连词的使用，使文章过渡自然。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰，逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
考查提纲作文。所给文章从学生视角“as a student”介绍了创建文明城市该采取的行为。用“be kind to”句式引出了学生应该具备的个人修养，同时用for example给出具体事例；然后列举了在公共场所“in public”应该做的和不应该做的事情，期间使用了“it is +形容词+不定式”结构，起到强调作用。通过“To make our city more beautiful, we should have a green life. It is important to save energy and reduce waste. ”引出绿色生活。文章内容连贯，语言简洁，紧扣中心。
7．The Internet is very important in our daily life. On the Internet, we can learn news both at home and in the world. And we can also learn all kinds of information. We can send e-mails to our friends by Internet. We can even make phone calls, go to net school, read many books and learn foreign languages alone. If you are free, we can enjoy music, watch sports and play chess and cards on the Internet. We can do shopping, have a chat with others and make friends with them.
这篇文章要求我们以On the Internet为题，并介绍国际互联网的主要用途，要点要包括信息，通讯，学习，娱乐，生活这五个方面，并且每个方面的用途都已经给出，所以我们在行文的时候不能遗漏它列出的要点，并使行文流畅。
范文开篇先从国际互联网在生活中的重要性谈起，然后按照顺序列举出了各项用途，无一遗漏，而且句式整散结合，避免了句式过于繁琐，是文章看起来简洁明了。make phone call,打电话；do shopping购物；have a chat with和某人聊天；make friends with和.....做朋友.
这篇偏向说明的小散文最重要的是在全部列举要点的前提下使行文流畅。避免单纯的逐字翻译。
8． Sunshine Town used to be a small old town, but now it has become a modern town. The steel factory in the town used to put waste into the river. The government has taken action to improve the situation. Most of Mr Chen's friends have moved away, so he often feels lonely. Anyway, he's still happy to see the changes.
本文根据题干中的要点书写的清楚明了。文中运用了used to；put waste into；be happy totaken action to等短语增加了文章的亮点。
本文运用了modern， improve，lonely等有色彩的词汇，使文章看起来丰富且能让人眼前一亮,印象深刻。
文中使用了but, so等连接词，使文章连贯又有特色。
考查英语词汇量和翻译的能力，将英语可以运用实际的生活中。
9．Good morning, ladies and gentlemen! May I have your attention, please I'm a volunteer. I'm glad to tell you something about using bikes for free in Suzhou. As we all know, environment pollution and energy waste have become some of the most important topics in this world. The best way to solve these problems is to live a low-carbon life. Since Suzhou is a crowded industrialized city, it is very necessary for our residents to change ways of traffic and take advantages from free bikes provided in dozens of rental points all around the city. Moreover, it is obviously convenient if we ride a free bike in a traffic jam. However, if you make a decision to use free bike service, please take care of the bike and return it on time. Remember, riding a bike is not only good for our city, but also for your health. Thank you for your listening. Have a nice weekend!
本题要求写一篇演讲稿, 演讲稿的内容是对市民进行自行车借用宣传。根据提纲提示, 写作时要注意以下写作要点：1. 苏州市民可以在很多地方免费借用自行车, 非常方便；2. 如果借用自行车, 请注意爱惜, 并及时归还；3. 希望大家多骑车出行……短文用第一人称形式, 一般现在时态。
考查提纲作文。本范文开头是简短的问候和自我介绍；接下来从环境问题入笔, 自然引出保护环境, 过低碳生活, 使用苏州市提供的免费自行车, 然后讲述它的优点、注意事项等等。最后是结束语。短文条理分明, 表达清楚, 语句通顺, 意思连贯。所大量使用的复杂句式及短语句型等等使短文生动, 增加了可读性和感染力。
10． On the Internet
The Internet is becoming more and more important in our daily life. On the Internet, we can learn news both at home and abroad. And we can also get all kinds of information. We can send emails to our friends by Internet. We can even make phone calls, go to online schools, read many books and learn foreign languages by ourselves. If we are free, we can enjoy music, watch sports matches and play chess or cards on the Internet. We can do shopping, have a chat with others and make friends with them online.
本题是一篇命题作文“On the Internet”，且写作的主要内容已给出，在写作时应注意结合所给内容，不要遗漏，根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态，语态，语言表达要符合英语习惯。
写作步骤：
一：阅读提示，弄清所有信息，明确写作要点。
1.看国内外新闻，获取其他信息。 news both at home and abroad；get all kinds of information
2.发邮件，打电话。 send emails；make phone calls
3.上网校，阅览各种书籍，自学外语。 go to online schools；read many books； learn foreign languages by ourselves
4.欣赏音乐，观看体育比赛，玩棋牌游戏。 enjoy music；watch sports matches ；play chess or cards
5.购物，交友。 do shopping；make friends
二：根据要点，写出关键词、短语、句子。
三：组词成句，连句成篇。本文是一篇议论性文章，使用一般现在时即可。注意根据写作需要，变换句型，表达清晰合理。
本题以给题目和提纲，考查对信息的整理和运用，应熟练使用相关单词短语和句型，注意连词的搭配和词性，语态的把握。
11．How to be a greener person It's our duty to protect the environment around us. First, we can go to school by bike or by bus. Second, we should save water when we wash hands. Remember not to leave the tap running. We can save power by turning off the lights when we leave a room. We may use both sides of the paper. Third, we can recycle many things, such as glass, plastic and waste paper. Fourth, we'd better take the cloth bags to the supermarket, and we mustn't drop litter in public places. It is important for us to develop a green lifestyle. Let's work together to make the earth more and more beautiful.
本题是以“How to be a greener person”为题目、以保护环境为中心的提纲作文。提纲内容主要是如何在日常生活中保护环境的, 要表达清楚。短文要从环保的重要性, 环保的措施及自己的建议等等方面展开写作。短文用第一人称, 一般现在时态。短文要包括提纲的所有要点, 并适当发挥, 短文要注意意思连续, 语句通顺。
考查提纲作文。本文首先开门见山, 指出保护环境是非常重要的, 是我们的责任, 用了不定式作主语的句式展开; 然后, 对环境保护应该如何做进行详细阐述, 环境保护要从日常生活中的小事做起, 要注意日常行为习惯养成。因此本文按照提纲的提示, 说明如何在日常生活的点点滴滴中注意到环境保护。文中用到了we'd better, It's important for us to, We are supposed to等不同句式, 生动具体。最后, 短文用一句话进行总结, 说明如果这样做世界将会变得更美。点明主题, 突出中心。
12．My View on Growing Pains
As one of the experiences hands, I would like to share my view on growing pains. Just as the two words stand for, growing pains are the two sides of one coin To grow, one is ready to suffer, with pains, one can grow more steadily.
When I was in Grade 7, I liked computer games very much and didn't want to study any more. To solve the problem, I talked with parents and asked them to let me play once a week. The key is that I didn't lose myself. Now entering a famous high school is my aim. So I advise you to face the pains directly and found a balance.
这是一篇命题作文，要求根据提示内容给初一的学弟学妹们写一篇演讲稿。写作包括两部分内容：一部分是陈述对growing pains的理解，另一部分是自己的一个growing pain的例子，并结合自己的实例提出解决问题的方法和建议。本文主要用一般现在时和一般过去时，人称主要为第一人称和第二人称单数，注意连词的使用和主谓一致问题。写作中注意上下文的过渡要符合逻辑关系，符合英语的表达习惯。标点正确，词数符合要求。
这篇文章根据所给的提示进行了详细、全面地阐述，内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整，时态运用灵活准确。一些固定短语，如would like；very much；any more等以及句型结构，如时间状语从句 When I was in Grade 7, I liked computer games very much and didn't want
to study any more.；that引导的表语从句 The key is that I didn't lose myself.等的使用较为得体。表达比较准确，使文章更加流畅、自然，富有条理性。
13． Today, computers are widely used and the Internet is becoming more and more popular. Many students like chatting, making friends and shopping online. They think chatting and listening to music can make them relaxed and they can learn a lot of knowledge online. However, most teachers and their parents don't think it is safe to make friends online. They think it is a waste of time to chat online and play games. They are bad for their studies. I think computers are useful. We can search for information, draw pictures, send and receive emails and watch films. They can bring us much joy, but we shouldn't spend too much time playing games or chatting. We should use them in the right way.
这是一篇材料作文，主要介绍对电脑使用的看法。时态是现在进行时和一般现在时，首先介绍许多学生对使用电脑的看法；然后介绍老师和家长对使用电脑的看法；最后介绍自己的观点。为文章增色，注意运用好词好句，同时注意恰当使用连词，使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
写作时作文内容全面，运用好词好句，如：more and more poplar；like doing；make friends；listen to music；make sb.+形容词；be+形容词+to do；be bad for；a waste of time；search for；bring sb. sth.；spend+时间+doing；too much；in a right way等。被动语态、比较级、和宾语从句的运用为文章增色不少，如：Today, computers are widely used and the Internet is becoming more and more popular.They think chatting and listening to music can make them relaxed and they can learn a lot of knowledge online. However, most teachers and their parents don't think it is safe to make friends online. They think it is a waste of time to chat online and play games.等。连词and、however、but、or的运用使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
14． Uncle Wang was once a teacher of a big city. He lived a comfortable life. One day, he learned from a TV programme that many children still couldn't go to school because there weren't enough teachers in that school. He made up his mind to give a helping hand. So he left the city and became a teacher as a volunteer there.
Now, with his help, some children have returned to school and learn to read and write. He doesn't have as much money as before, but he is happy and he thinks his life is more meaningful.
这篇作文要求根据表格所给的提纲，写一篇关于王叔叔的报道。人称用第三人称，时态用一般过去时和一般现在时。需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。写作时注意上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。
考查提纲作文。本文紧扣提纲要点，内容完整，表述准确，语言的表述符合语法的结构，造句符合英语的表达习惯。高分亮点：短语：learn from，make up one's mind to do sth，with one's help，as…as等。句型： One day, he learned from a TV programme that many children still couldn't go to school because there weren't enough teachers in that school. （宾语从句，状语从句）。
15． Internet has made communication much easier. It has become one of the most important parts in people's daily life. Many students use the Internet to study, send emails and search for information. But many others are crazy about chatting online or playing computer games. It is bad for their health. As students, we should know study comes first. And we should spend more time doing sports instead of playing computer games.
本文叙述了现在上网已经变得越来越流行了，很多学生都迷上了网络。叙述的是现在的情况，所以句子的时态应该用现在时，所写的句子应该符合英语语法，用一些高级词汇。短文用了一些短语和句式，如：in people's daily life在人们的日常生活中； search for information寻找信息；be bad for 对某物或某人有害；sb spend some time doing 某人花费时间做某事； instead of代替。用了连词but，and等，增加了文章的亮点。
16． A New Educational CD-ROM Called Daily English is a new English course from Australia. It includes a book and five CD-ROMs. It is good for tourists and students. We can learn about using the telephone, asking and answering the questions, talking about the weather and the time through it. Its topics cover travel and hotels, food and drink, shopping and money. You will learn a lot from it.
根据题干要求可知，这是一篇新书介绍的说明文，写作时要紧紧围绕所给出的5个要点提示去组织习作的素材。认真思考如何选用恰当的短语及句式去完成汉语提示中的英文翻译。由于是介绍新英语课程，因此时态应以一般现在时态为主，人称为第三人称，注意主谓一致关系。写作中用到的词组有：be good for , learn about, use the telephone, talk about, learn from等。最后要注意文章的自然流畅，检查有无语法错误。
17．参考例文
Reading Is a Good Hobby
With development of science and technology, new Knowledge comes every day. If you stop learning even for a day, you will be lost. Reading is a good way to help you keep in touch with the outside world. Read widely and you'll be rich in knowledge. Reading is also a good way to relax yourself. You can get a lot of fun in the books. A good book is a good friend to comfort you when you are unhappy. So long as you have a good book at hand, you'll never feel lonely. Every valuable book will open a new world before you.
这是一篇话题作文，介绍培养读书的好习惯以及读书的好处。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第二人称、单数第三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：If you stop learning……，Reading is a good way to......，You can……，A good book is…….等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系.
本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了学习新知识的重要性，接下来介绍读书的好处：帮助与外界保持联系，丰富知识，放松自己，最后介绍好书的作用。此处用了with the development of, stop doing sth, a good way to do sth, keep in touch with, so long as, at hand等这些词组，也让文章增色不少。
18．Good reading habits
Hello. everybody! Today. the topic of my speech is about reading habits.
Good reading habits not only help us learn better, but also make a difference to our whole life. Also, they can make us get more knowledge and think more deeply.
There are many good reading habits. First, keep reading is very important. Second, it is good to take notes while reading. Moreover, we can discuss what to read with my friends.
I love reading. I am interested in history books, and I also like to read some novels. Usually. I spend two or three hours reading those books at weekends.
Let good books become our good friends. Thank you for listening.
这是一篇命题类的应用文写作，要求以 "Good reading habits" 为题写一篇演讲稿。写作要包含三部分内容： 好的读书习惯的重要性、做法及作者的读书习惯。根据材料内容可知，本文主要是一般现在时，人称主要是第一人称单复数。注意并列连词的使用和主谓一致问题。写作中注意上下文的过渡要符合逻辑关系。标点正确，词数符合要求。
这篇演讲稿根据所给内容的提示将三个方面的内容逐一进行了陈述，内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整，时态运用灵活准确，一些固定短语，如not only...but also...；make a difference to；take notes等以及高级句型，there be句型 There are many good reading habits. ；宾语从句的简化 Moreover, we can discuss what to read with my friends.等运用较为得体，表达比较准确，使文章更加流畅、自然。
19．How to live a low carbon lifeAs we all know, having a low-carbon life is very important to us.First, I think having a low-carbon life can help us save a lot of energy. What's more, it can help us reduce pollution and improve our environment.We should pay attention to details in our daily life. One small step can make a big difference. For example, when we go outside, we had better ride a bike instead of driving a car. In order to keep the environment clean, we can plant more trees. When we leave the room, we should turn off computers or TV in time. While shopping, we can use paper bags instead of plastic bags.
本题是写一篇给定材料的书面表达。在写作时应注意符合主题，根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态，语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。
写作步骤：
一，阅读提示，弄清所有信息，明确写作要点。
1.可以节约能源help us save a lot of energy.
2.有利于减少污染，改善环境help us reduce pollution and improve our environment.
3.外出时最好骑自行车代替开车when we go outside, we had better ride a bike instead of driving a car.
4.多植树plant more trees
5.外出时及时关掉电脑和电视机. When we leave the room, we should turn off computers or TV in time.
6.用纸袋代替塑料袋use paper bags instead of plastic bags
二，根据要点，写出关键词，短语和句子。
三，组词成句。连句成篇。注意使用一般现在时。
本题属于给出内容写作型作文，需要考生熟练使用相关短语，单词，和句型，注意词性的搭配，时态的把握，人称的使用等细节问题
20． Today I went for a pleasant outing with my friends. We went to Li Lake. It was about ten kilometers away from my home. We rode our bikes at 9：00 in the morning .One hour later, we got there. We went boating on the lake first, and then went fishing by the lake. The fish in the lake are big and fresh. They were all our meals at noon. In the afternoon, we went swimming in a swimming pool beside the lake. We felt relaxed and comfortable in the water. At 5：30 in the afternoon, we returned together. We all had a good time for our outing.
这是一篇日记，属于记叙文。以第一人称和一般过去时来写作。写作时要注意要点齐全，不能遗漏。文章主要是按照时间的顺序来叙述，包括活动的地点、时间、活动的内容、自己的感受和出行的交通方式。写作中应适当使用连词。做到上下文联系紧密。符合逻切关系。 同时注意日记的格式。
如果文章中使用了非常好的短语或句子会给文章增色。如 We went boating on the lake first, and then went fishing by the lake.固定搭配的使用； We all had a good time for our outing. 结束句的恰当的使用。还运用了副词 first, and then... 等使上下文衔接的更好。