【期末专项训练】查漏补缺专题09：书面表达（含答案解析）-2024-2025学年英语八年级下册译林版

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【期末专项训练】查漏补缺专题09：书面表达-2024-2025学年英语八年级下册译林版
1．研学旅行是通过集体旅行来开展学习和体验相结合的校外教育活动，深受学生的喜爱，为此，请你给校报英语专栏写一篇短文，介绍学校开展的研学活动并发表看法。
内容要点如下：
(1) Learn about tea picking;
(2) Observe (观察) plants and animals;
(3) Plant trees along the river;
(4) Visit places of interest and museums.
注意：
(1) 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；
(2) 词数80左右；
(3) 内容连贯，不要逐条翻译，补充一两点个人看法；
(4) 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：experience v. 体验 nature n.自然 meaningful adj.有意义的
The study trip is a kind of school education which is held outside and popular with students. Our school has also held many study trips. Here are my experiences.
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2．为了提高社区居民的环保意识、创建优质的居住环境，社区居委会正在举办以“Live a Low-Carbon Life”为题的征文活动。请你根据以下要点提示写一篇英语短文参加活动。
提示：
1.为什么要过低碳生活？
2.如何过低碳生活？请提出三条建议。
要求：
1.语句通顺，逻辑清晰，可适当发挥；
2.100词左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
参考词汇：energy能源；plastic 塑料；mode 模式
Live a Low-Carbon Life
As we all know, protecting the environment is important.
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3．Write at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)
学校每年组织远足活动 (如：春游和秋游等)，下周学校将举行“Our school trip”为主题的英语沙龙活动，请根据以下要点提示，写一篇短文和同学们分享。
1. What do you think of school trips 2. What did you do in one of your school trips 3. What advice can you offer to make the school trip more meaningful
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4．生活中不只有眼前的试卷和作业，还有诗和远方。暑假快到了，你们校刊的英文栏目正在征集“The place I want to go most”稿件，请你投稿吧！
写作内容：
1.你最想去的地方是哪里；
2.你为什么想去这个地方；
3.你打算在那里做些什么。
写作要求：
1.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名字；
2.词数要求90左右。
The place I want to go most
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5．
愚公移山的故事在中国家喻户晓，在古代要人工搬移大山是一件艰巨而又难以完成的工作，你作为旁观者，对这件事情有何看法，请根据提示写一篇英语作文，发表你的观点。
提示：
1. Tell the story simply;
2. Do you agree with Yu Gong’s action Why or why not
要求：
1、要点齐全，并适当发挥；
2、词数 80 个左右；
3、文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称
We all know the famous Chinese story called Yu Gong Moves a Mountain. Once upon a time,
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6．学校正在开展以“A Greener city, a better life”为题的英语征文活动。请根据所给提示，用英语写一篇短文。
注意事项：1. 词数80词左右；2. 文章必须包含所提供的主要信息，并作适当发挥。
A greener city, a better life
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7．假如你是 Nancy，今天你班开展了“珍爱地球，保护环境”主体班会活动，通过此次活动，你对环境正在恶化有了深刻的认识。会后，你打算写一份以“Going green”为主题的倡议书，号召全校同学立刻行动起来，为保护环境而努力。倡议书必须包括下面表格中内容。
steps should shouldn’t
公共交通 1.步行或骑自行车去上学；2.…… ……
节约能源 1.较短时间淋浴；2.…… ……
减少污染 像塑料、纸这些东西被分类，然后被回收 ……
你的希望 ……
注意：
1.文中不得出现真实人名、单位名：
2.补齐要点，适当发挥；
3.词数在90左右，已给出的文字不计入总词数。
相关词汇：交通车辆 transport 减少 reduce
Dear friends,
As we all know, our environment is getting worse and worse. It’s time for us to go green. Here are some simple steps to take.
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Yours,
Nancy
8．你的美国朋友Lucy计划暑假来中国旅游。请你根据以下图示，用英语在微信中给她留言，介绍并推荐你的家乡山西，词数70左右。
要求：1. 需包含所有提示信息（开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
Hi, Lucy. I’m glad to hear that you’re planning to travel around China during the summer vacation. I’d like to invite you to my hometown Shanxi for a visit.
Shanxi lies ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m looking forward to meeting you!
9．文明从点滴做起，城市因你我而美丽。近期，淮安正在创建全国文明典范城市，以文明之风，创文明之城。值此暑假来临之际，请你写一篇“How to be a civilized (文明的) middle school student ”为主题的短文。内容应包含以下要点：
行为习惯 遵守交通规则，公共场合举止礼貌……
公益活动 捐钱给慈善机构，做志愿者……
绿色生活 节约用水，选择公共交通……
暑假计划 按时完成作业，多读有意义的书……
注意：
1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2. 短文须包括所有内容要点, 并适当发挥；
3. 词数80左右，短文开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
How to be a civilized middle school student
The summer holiday is coming soon! As middle school students, I think we can do something to make Huai’an more civilized
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From now on, let’s join together to be civilized students. And we’ll have a happy and meaningful summer holiday!
10．学校在“人与自然”主题活动周中，倡议全体学生了解保护珍稀野生动物。请你以李华同学的身份写一篇宣传保护野生动物的短文。
提示：
1.补全标题内容；
2.简单介绍此动物的生存现状及面临的问题；
3.提出对动物保护的倡议。
要求：字迹工整；语言简洁准确；80词左右。
Saving _______
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《【期末专项训练】查漏补缺专题09：书面表达-2024-2025学年英语八年级下册译林版》参考答案
1．例文
The study trip is a kind of school education which is held outside and popular with students. Our school has also held many study trips. Here are my experiences.
Firstly, we went to pick tea in person and made things by hand to experience life. Secondly, we got close to nature and learnt more knowledge by watching real plants and animals. Then, after we visited some museums as well as places of interest, we understood Chinese history and culture more deeply. Finally, we saw some meaningful movies and felt the great changes of our country.
In my opinion, the study trip is helpful for us. We can experience different activities and get close to nature. We can also learn more meaningful things. I hope we will have more chances to take part in these study trips.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏内容要点中的信息，介绍学校组织的到产茶名地“杭州”开展的研学活动。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出这次活动；
第二步，介绍活动中做了什么，体验并学习到了什么；
第三步，介绍自己的看法及感受。
[亮点词汇]
①in person 亲自
②by hand 用手
③in one’s opinion 在某人看来
④take part in 参加
[高分句型]
①Then, after we visited some museums as well as places of interest, we understood Chinese history and culture more deeply.（after引导的时间状语从句）
②I hope we will have more chances to take part in these study trips.（宾语从句）
2．例文
Live a Low-Carbon Life
As we all know, protecting the environment is important. Living a low-carbon life is crucial for us. Currently, the excessive emission of carbon dioxide has led to global warming and various environmental problems. Here are some ways to live a low-carbon life.
First, choose green transportation. We can walk or ride bikes for short-distance trips, and take buses or subways instead of driving cars when going far. Second, reduce the use of plastic products. Replace plastic bags with reusable cloth bags and avoid using disposable plastic tableware. Third, save energy. Turn off lights and electrical appliances when leaving rooms, and try to use natural light during the day.
Let’s take action and live a low-carbon life to make the earth a better place.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本题是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文用一般现在时；
③提示：介绍低碳生活，提出关于低碳生活的建议，需要遵照所给要求，信息覆盖全面，适当补充细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，阐述低碳生活的重要性，以及过低碳生活的原因；
第二步，提出关于低碳生活的建议，注意细节充分，三观正确；
第三步，号召大家一起过低碳生活，注意用词准确，行文流畅。
[亮点词汇]
①be crucial for 对……很重要
②instead of 代替，反而
③take action 采取行动
[高分句型]
①Living a low-carbon life is crucial for us.（动名词作主语）
②Let’s take action and live a low-carbon life to make the earth a better place.（不定式做目的状语）
3．范文
Our trip to Xuhui campus Last week, we had a school trip to Xuhui campus.
We started on a sunny day in the morning. It took us two hours to drive there. When we got there, we were attracted by the landscape garden of Xuhui campus. Then we visited the history of Rongqiao middle school in the museum. We were deeply moved by the spirit of Rongqiao people. Finally, we tasted the delicious food of Xuhui canteen.
To make school trips more meaningful, I think we could do some research about the destination before the trip and take notes during the visit. In this way, we can gain more knowledge and have a better understanding of what we see. All in all, we had an interesting and meaningful school trip.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记述学校旅行经历的文章；
②时态：主要为一般过去时；
③提示：文章包含学校旅行的相关要点，介绍旅行去徐汇校区，描述旅行当天的行程，还给出让学校旅行更有意义的建议。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点明主题，介绍上周进行了一次去徐汇校区的学校旅行；
第二步，按时间顺序详细描述学校旅行当天的经历，包括出发时间、路上用时，到达后被校园景观吸引，参观学校历史博物馆，被荣桥人精神打动，以及品尝食堂美食等；
第三步，就如何让学校旅行更有意义提出自己的建议，旅行前对目的地做研究、旅行中做笔记，并强调这样做能带来的收获，最后总结此次旅行有趣且有意义。
[亮点词汇]
①attracted吸引
②moved感动
③gain获得
[高分句型]
①It took us two hours to drive there. (It takes sb some time to do句型)
②To make school trips more meaningful, I think we could do some research about the destination before the trip and take notes during the visit. (不定式作目的状语)
4．例文：
The place I want to go most
There are so many wonderful places to have a holiday. This time, the place I want to go most is Sanya.
As we all know, Sanya is a good place to relax ourselves. It has beautiful sea and clean beaches. The weather there makes people comfortable. Another reason I want to go there is Sanya’s hotels. Most of the hotels have wonderful condition and service. I really want to have a try.
If I go there, I’ll lie in the sunshine and swim in the sea. I’ll also taste seafood and try something new. I think a day is not enough for me, and Sanya is really the place where I want to go most.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：这是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要采用“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据写作要点展开，适当发挥，注意条理清晰和语法正确。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍最想去的地方是三亚；
第二步，介绍为什么想去三亚；
第三步，介绍打算在三亚做些什么；
[亮点词汇]
①as we all know众所周知
②have a try试一试
③try something new尝试一些新的东西
[高分句型]
If I go there, I’ll lie in the sunshine and swim in the sea. (if引导条件状语从句)
5．例文
We all know the famous Chinese story called Yu Gong Moves a Mountain. Once upon a time, there was an old man named Yu Gong. His house was blocked by a big mountain, so he decided to move it with his family. They worked very hard every day, but the mountain was still there. Some people laughed at him, but he never gave up.
I agree with Yu Gong’s action. Although it seemed impossible to move the mountain, his spirit of never giving up is very important. Sometimes, if we keep trying, we can achieve our goals. Yu Gong’s story teaches us to be brave and persistent, no matter how difficult the task is.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般过去时；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍对愚公移山的看法，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简要介绍愚公移山的故事；
第二步，介绍自己对愚公移山的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①decide to do sth.决定做某事
②laugh at嘲笑
③agree with同意
[高分句型]
①Although it seemed impossible to move the mountain, his spirit of never giving up is very important. (让步状语从句)
②Sometimes, if we keep trying, we can achieve our goals. (条件状语从句)
6．One possible version
A greener city, a better life
As middle school students, we should create a greener city to live a better life. However, it’s a pity that we often see some people drop litter everywhere. Some forget to turn off the lights when leaving a room.
To create a greener city, ride or walk to school instead of taking a car. Also, we can plant more trees and flowers. Besides, it’s a good idea to sort the rubbish into different groups so that things like bottles and cans can be recycled.
In all, if everyone does his part, we can live a better life in a greener city.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍出现的问题；
第二步，介绍提出的建议；
第三步，表达自己的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①turn off关掉
②instead of代替，作为……的替换
③sort the rubbish into different groups把垃圾分成不同的组
[高分句型]
①However, it’s a pity that we often see some people drop litter everywhere.（that引导的宾语从句）
②To create a greener city, ride or walk to school instead of taking a car.（动词不定式作目的）
③Besides, it’s a good idea to sort the rubbish into different groups so that things like bottles and cans can be recycled.（so that引导的目的状语从句）
④In all, if everyone does his part, we can live a better life in a greener city.（if引导的条件状语从句）
7．One possible version:
Dear friends,
As we all know, our environment is getting worse and worse. It’s time for us to go green. Here are some simple steps to take.
First, whenever possible, we should take public transportation, walk or ride our bikes to school to reduce the amount of carbon emissions from cars. We’d better not drive our cars if not necessary. Second, we should take a short shower and turn off the lights and electronic devices when they are not in use. It is not advisable to leave the water running and the lights always on. Third, we should sort our rubbish and recycle plastic, paper and other materials to reduce pollution. We’d better not mix different wastes.
Small changes in our daily lives can make a big difference to the environment. Let’s work together to create a cleaner, greener, and more beautiful world for ourselves.
Yours,
Nancy
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文；
②时态：本文以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：题目要求根据提示写一篇保护环境的倡议书，主要从公共交通、节约能源和减少污染三方面谈谈如何保护环境，最后谈谈自己的希望。写作时注意适当增加细节，不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题（已给出）；
第二步，根据所给要点，依次从公共交通、节约能源和减少污染三方面谈谈如何保护环境，讲述应该做和不应该做的事情；
第三步，最后表达自己的希望。
[亮点词汇]
①take public transportation 乘坐公共交通
②had better not do 最好不做
③turn off 关掉
[高分句型]
①Second, we should take a short shower and turn off the lights and electronic devices when they are not in use.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②It is not advisable to leave the water running and the lights always on.（it作形式主语）
8．One possible version:
Hi, Lucy. I’m glad to hear that you’re planning to travel around China during the summer vacation. I’d like to invite you to my hometown Shanxi for a visit.
Shanxi lies in the north of China with Taiyuan as its capital city. It has a population of over 37 million. Have you ever tried Shanxi food Shanxi is famous for its food, such as sliced noodles, mutton soup and fried boiled pork. If you come, I’ll treat you to delicious food. With a history of thousands of years, there are many places of interest in Shanxi, like Yungang Grottoes and Mount Wutai. These places are really worth visiting. Another great thing about Shanxi is that it has convenient transport. You can get here easily by plane. I believe you’ll have a great time in Shanxi.
I’m looking forward to meeting you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图；
第二步，具体介绍并推荐Lucy来山西旅游；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be famous for 以……而闻名
②such as 例如
③be worth doing 值得做某事
④have a great time 玩得开心
[高分句型]
①If you come, I’ll treat you to delicious food.（if引导的条件状语从句）
②I believe you’ll have a great time in Shanxi.（省略that的宾语从句）
9．例文
How to be a civilized (文明的) middle school student？
The summer holiday is coming soon! As middle school students, I think we can do something to make Huai’an more civilized.
First, we should always obey traffic rules when crossing the road. In public places, it is necessary to behave politely. For example, we must keep quiet in the library. Then, learning to care about others is also important. We can donate our pocket money to charities and work as volunteers at the community centre.During the summer holiday, we can also take part in charity activities.
Moreover, we can save water by taking shorter showers. (At the same time, we can save energy by turning off the lights when we leave a room). It’s wise for us to choose public transport, because protecting the environment can help us live a green life.
Finally, as a middle school student, I plan to finish my homework on time and read more meaningful books in the next two months. Besides, I am going to travel to Beijing to learn more about the history and culture with my parents. Just as the saying goes, read ten thousand books and travel ten thousand miles.
From now on, let’s join together to be civilized students. And we’ll have a happy and meaningful summer holiday!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，为记叙文。
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中如何做一个文明的中学生的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“近期，淮安正在创建全国文明典范城市，以文明之风，创文明之城。值此暑假来临之际，请你写一篇“How to be a civilized (文明的) middle school student ”为主题的短文。”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“行为习惯、公益活动、暑假计划等”几个方面重点介绍如何做一个文明的中学生的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语，表达“我们将有一个快乐而有意义的暑假”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①care about关心；
②take part in参加；
③plan to do sth计划做某事；
④from now on从现在起。
[高分句型]
①In public places, it is necessary to behave politely. (“It’s+形容词+to do sth”句型)
②Besides, I am going to travel to Beijing to learn more about the history and culture with my parents. (动词不定式作目的状语)
10．例文
Saving pandas
Pandas are known as one of national treasures. There are now fewer than 2000 pandas living in the forests. Pandas do not have many babies. The babies often die from illness. As the forests get smaller, pandas can’t find enough food.
We should not cut down bamboo forests. Don’t throw food when visiting pandas in panda museum. This will help protect the giant panda. There is less and less bamboo. For example, we should build more nature reserves for them. We shouldn’t buy fur clothes.
Let’s take action to save these endangered animals!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，补全题目，确定主题。
第二步，介绍熊猫的现状，及原因；
第三步，详细介绍如何做来保护熊猫；
第四步，呼吁大家一起行动。
[亮点词汇]
①be known as被称为
②die from死于
③cut down砍伐
④take action to采取行动做某事
[高分句型]
①Don’t throw food when visiting pandas in panda museum.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②There is less and less bamboo.（比较级+and+比较级）
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