【高考押题卷】2025年高考英语预测考前冲刺--记叙文读后续写(含答案与解析)

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高考英语考前冲刺押题预测 记叙文读后续写
一.书面表达(共20小题)
1.(2025 佛山模拟)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When Jane taught the sixth﹣grade class at Morris School,all 34 of her students were dear to her,while Mark was truly special.He had that happy﹣to﹣be﹣alive attitude that made even his occasional tricks delightful.
Mark talked all the time.Jane reminded him again and again that talking without permission was unacceptable,and his response always sounded sincere:"Thank you for correcting me,Sister!"
One morning,Jane's patience was growing thin when Mark talked once too often.She looked at Mark and said,"If you say one more word,I'm going to tape your mouth shut!"Not even ten seconds passed before someone said,"Mark is talking again."Having stated the punishment in front of the class,Jane decided she had to act on it.She walked to Mark's desk,tore off two pieces of tape,made a big X with them over his mouth,and then returned to the front of the classroom.
As Jane glanced at Mark to see how he was doing,he winked(眨眼) at her.That did it!Jane started laughing.The entire class cheered as she shook her head and walked back to remove the tape.His first words were,"Thank you for correcting me,Sister."
One Friday afternoon,after working hard on a new idea all week,the students were getting discouraged and starting to get annoyed with each other.To help lift their spirits and encourage a positive atmosphere,Jane asked them to write down the nicest things about the other students on a piece of paper and hand them in.Mark appeared nervous as if he was worrying his classmates would forget anything nice about him.That Saturday,Jane wrote down each student's name on a separate sheet of paper and listed what everyone else had said about them.
On Monday,Jane gave each student their lists.As the children read them,the classroom was filled with quiet excitement and soft laughter.
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Mark's eyes widened as he read his paper._________________________
Jane was overjoyed to see Mark again at school after so many years.___________________
2.(2025 南通二模) It was a presentation for my literature class,where every student had to present their analysis of a classic novel.My knees were shaking,and my throat felt drier with every passing second.As I looked around,30 pairs of eyes were fixed on me,waiting for me to speak.
Though I was comfortable sharing my ideas in small group discussions,I felt nervous about speaking in front of the whole class.Fear flooded me,and my mind went blank.I could hear my heart beating in my ears,blocking out the words I wanted to say.I ended up messing up the presentation.
With another presentation coming soon,I refused to let fear hold me back again.I decided to sign up to perform at a campus comedy club event.I admired how confident stand﹣up comedians were,and I hoped I could act like them.When I spoke there later,though my jokes didn't get much of a reaction,I surprisingly enjoyed being on stage and felt I could do better next time.
Inspired by this,I knew I needed advice from someone more experienced.That was when I noticed Sania,a talented performer whose humor and confidence made her the highlight of the evening.I gathered the courage to talk to her and introduced myself as a beginner speaker looking to improve.She listened closely and gave me great advice,"Attend more open microphone(麦克风) events and watch more comedy performances."
Over the next few weeks,I attended more open microphone events and observed how Sania and other skilled comedians made their performances.Surprisingly,this helped me understand literature in a new way.I started to think of literature as something to be told.The characters I analyzed became lively figures in a story that I could explain in a more interesting way.Having prepared for some time,I took a chance and asked Sania if she would like to watch my novel presentation and offer advice.She gladly agreed and we met at a study hall one afternoon after school.
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I introduced the novel's main characters to Sania,still a bit nervous.
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When the time came for my next class presentation,I was quite different.
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3.(2025 岳麓区校级模拟) At 7:30 a.m.on Christmas Eve,Ivy White got a call from an unknown number. "Hi.You don't know me,but I have your brother." It was Sha' Kyra Aughtry,a Buffalo resident who had rescued Ivy's brother,Joey White,amid the deadly winter storm.
Joey,then 64,was mentally disabled.Before the storm hit the city,Ivy called Joey and instructed him not to leave his group home where he lives.But as Buffalo's worst blizzard(暴风雪) in almost 50 years struck the city,Joey ventured outside.
It's unclear what purpose Joey had for leaving home.He braved the snowstorm and walked a considerable distance before finally stopping outside Aughtry's house,just seven﹣minute drive from the North Park Theatre,where he had worked as a janitor since 1980.Before the blizzard hit,the theater's manager had called Joey,telling him not to come to work.However,Joey was used to following a routine,and even during the pandemic when the theater was closed,he had shown up several times.
At around 6:30 a.m.,Aughtry noticed a man standing helplessly in front of a snowbank from her balcony.He was crying out in pain.Aughtry went downstairs and tried to communicate with him,but he was too frightened to speak,continuing to shout uncontrollably.Aughtry had no choice but to return home and call her husband.Together,they went into the storm once more.After Aughtry spoke to him gently,assuring him he was safe,Joey's cries softened,and began to calm down.With steady hands and reassuring words,Aughtry and her husband carefully guided him through the snow,step by step,until they finally brought him into the warmth of their home.
When they got back home,they carefully examined the poor old man's condition.Having wandered in the storm,he was totally wet and couldn't help trembling,his clothes frozen hard,his fingers and toes frozen numb without sensation.It was unclear how the man had managed to walk so far in the blizzard,but it was obvious he was terrified.No matter how they tried to ask him questions,he couldn't utter a single word.
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"We should warm him up fast," said Aughtry.
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"It is a phone number that he said," one of the boys said.
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4.(2025 武汉二模) I hurried into Lehman's grocery store.I was there to buy my grandmother's hearing aid batteries.More importantly,this was my chance to visit the love of my life﹣Artie.
I ran to the shelf he was on,and there he was,right where I last saw him:a grey little guy with a large mouth that fit perfectly over my shoulder as I hugged him tightly.I adored that stuffed dolphin.As I held Artie,Mrs.Lehman,who had always been kind to me,passed by and smiled knowingly,"Hugging that dolphin again,huh?"
But my brother,Rick,noticed I took a long time in Lehman's,saying,"You are a thirteen﹣year﹣old girl now.You are supposed to be quicker.Next time,I will go with you."Oh,great!My brother,Rick.He always laughed at me.
But I wouldn't give up.So,as we walked into the store,I suggested to Rick that he get the batteries,since he was older.Then I headed towards Artie.There he was,awaiting me.I grabbed him and hugged him tightly.Just then,I heard Rick saying,"What in the world are you doing?"
"This is Artie,"I said."I hug him every single time I come here.I can't afford it so I hope he doesn't get sold because I just love this little guy."The look on Rick's face was unreadable,but I knew deep down that he wasn't going to make fun of me.In fact,a few times when he accompanied me to Lehman's,he said,"go on and hug your dolphin,if it's still there."
One day,Rick was not home,so I went to Lehman's alone.I went straight to Artie's shelf.But he was gone.I searched every shelf but couldn't find him.Suddenly,a voice from the counter interrupted my search.
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It was Mrs.Lehman herself.
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To my surprise,I found a box lying on my bed.
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5.(2025 宽城区校级模拟) Emily,39 years old,is a runway model,a disability﹣rights activist and a freelance writer whose work has been featured in The New York Times and Glamour.
From her early childhood,Emily was interested in fashion,fascinated by beautiful clothes and skirts.Unfortunately,fashion didn't show much interest in her.Due to a genetic bone and muscle disorder,she was less than 1.21 meters tall and couldn't walk.To treat her disease,she underwent seven surgeries before the age of 17.Fortunately,she got better and could even walk a short distance.
As Emily grew older,her passion for fashion only intensified.Every time she saw models shining on the runway on TV,an envious glimmer would flash across her face.Among those models,she particularly admired a model named Grace,who was not only a leader in the fashion world but also frequently encouraged people to show concern for the disabled.
One day,when Emily was doing rehabilitation training in the park,she came across a special community fashion show.One particular model left a deep impression on Emily.The model was dressed in a graphic T﹣shirt,tight pants and an oversize vest with a flurry fur coat.When Emily's eyes swept over the model's arms,she was shocked to find that both of the model's sleeves were empty.However,her smile was so bright and brilliant.This sight deeply touched Emily.
From that day on,Emily worked even harder for her dream.She watched every fashion show of Grace online,carefully learned her stylish outfits and even posted selfies on Twitter every day,hoping to draw public attention towards the fashion industry for individuals with disabilities.In addition,she followed the"Dream Runway"show on Twitter,which her idol Grace often attended.Driven by her passion,she even mustered up the courage to send an email to the"Dream Runway"show,applying to be one of the 24 models for their fall fashion show.Then,one day,a long﹣awaited reply arrived from the show,extending a warm invitation for her to step onto the runway as a model.
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Finally came the big day,which she had been longing for.
As she went off the stage,she saw Grace smiling at her.
6.(2025 腾冲市校级二模) It was a cool autumn morning when the school announced the annual sports day.For most students,it was a day of excitement and joy,but for me,it was just another event I wanted to avoid.I had always been the type to shy away from group activities,preferring the company of my books and thoughts.
Our class monitor,Sarah,noticed my unwillingness.She was the very image of enthusiasm and leadership,always trying to bring the class together.One day,she approached me during lunch. "Why don't you join us for the relay race?It'll be fun," she said with a warm smile.I hesitated,but her persistence was hard to ignore.
The next day,Sarah organized a practice session.I unwillingly joined,feeling out of place among my more athletic classmates.As we ran,I tripped and fell,scraping (擦伤) my knee.Embarrassed,I wanted to quit,but Sarah was there in an instant,offering a hand and words of encouragement. "It's okay,we're a team," she said.At this time,other fellow classmates came to encourage me.Their kindness made me feel less alone.
As the days went by,I found myself looking forward to the practices.The care and support among my classmates was infectious.I began to see the value of teamwork and the joy of shared experiences.My initial unwillingness melted away,replaced by a newfound sense of belonging.
The anticipation for the sports day filled me with excitement.I dream of the cheers,the applauding crowd,and the thrill of competition.Training hard,I longed to showcase my skills,push my limits,share and feel the joy of victory.This event was more than a game;it means a lot for me.I could not wait to be part of it!
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The day I looked forward to came eventually.
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Our opponent winning narrowly,I blamed our failure on myself.
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7.(2025 浙江模拟) The afternoon sunlight streamed through laboratory windows as Emily and Liam adjusted their safety goggles.Their chemistry teacher Mr.Wilson had challenged the class to design an original experiment exploring reaction rates ﹣ a frequent topic in recent national college entrance exams.
"Let's test how catalyst(催化剂) concentration affects hydrogen peroxide decomposition," Liam suggested,arranging test tubes containing different manganese dioxide concentrations.Emily carefully measured 10 ml H2and O2 for each trial,her lab notebook open to a neatly drawn data table.
During their third trial,something unexpected occurred.The reaction in Tube C suddenly accelerated violently,spewing foamy bubbles over the bench. "The 0.5% catalyst solution shouldn't cause this!" Emily exclaimed,grabbing paper towels.Liam checked their labels and froze ﹣ they'd accidentally used 5% concentration in Tube C.
Mr.Wilson approached,observing their flustered cleanup. "Mistakes can be valuable if analyzed properly.Document everything you've observed." His words reminded Emily of last year's Gaokao question about experimental error analysis.
Reviewing their notes,Liam noticed inconsistent timing records. "We rushed the measurements after the first successful trials," he admitted.Emily bit her lip,recalling textbook principles about controlled variables.The clock showed only 25 minutes remaining in class.
"We need to restart systematically," Emily declared.They prepared fresh solutions,triple﹣checking concentrations.As Liam started the stopwatch,Emily positioned the gas collection tube precisely.The revised experiment proceeded smoothly until...
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Paragraph 1:
Just as the gas volume reached 25 ml in the final trial,the classroom lights flickered and went out,casting their workstation into semi﹣darkness.
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Paragraph 2:
Three days later,Emily stood before the class presenting their findings,her finger trembling slightly as she clicked to the final PowerPoint slide titled "Unexpected Discoveries".
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8.(2025 江西模拟) In Shanghai,a unique bond began to form between two students from different corners of the world.Li Ming,a cheerful and curious Chinese student,and John,an American,were paired as roommates during an international student exchange program.At first,their interactions were filled with awkward silences and misunderstandings.The language barrier and cultural differences seemed like high walls,making it difficult for them to connect.
However,as days turned into weeks,Li Ming and John started to find common ground.Li Ming,with his warm smile,would patiently teach John a few Chinese phrases,while John would share stories about American culture and traditions.Slowly,the walls began to fall.They discovered that despite their differences,they shared a love for adventure,a passion for learning,and a mutual respect for each other's cultures.Their friendship blossomed,and they spent countless hours exploring the city together,trying new foods,and visiting local markets.
The highlight of their time together was a weekend trip to Zhujiajiao Ancient Town.Li Ming showed John the beauty of traditional Chinese architecture,while John introduced Li Ming to the concept of American road trips.They laughed,they argued playfully,and they learned from each other.The experience deepened their bond,and they realized that their friendship had gone beyond the boundaries of language and culture.
Since then,their friendship has become stronger.They became inseparable and stayed together throughout the exchange program.They got to know each other better and better,and both considered each other as their best friends.
When the exchange program came to an end,both Li Ming and John felt a heavy sense of sorrow.They had grown so close that the thought of parting was almost unbearable.Standing at the airport,they made a promise to each other:No matter where life took them,they would stay in touch and never forget the memories they had created together.They exchanged addresses and contact information,and with a final hug,John boarded the plane back to the United States.
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Years passed,and life took them on different paths.________
When John arrived in China again,Li Ming was there to greet him with open arms.________
9.(2025 德州一模) I had always wanted a dog since young.My parents were against the idea,saying that taking care of a dog was a lifetime commitment.
On my tenth birthday,Father stepped into the house and announced, "Nancy,you have a new puppy!" I shouted in delight and ran towards Father,only to find it was a toy puppy.My face fell.I turned away.Father explained, "This is a 'Think﹣It﹣Over' puppy.You should try taking care of it before deciding about a real dog."
The puppy did look like a real dog from a distance and it even had a dog smell.Inside its body was a computer programmed to make barking sounds.Father handed me a key,which could be stuck into its back to stop its barking.I accepted the puppy,which I named Friday since it was Friday that day.
That evening,my friends and I decided to take Friday to a dog café.It was freezing cold,so I wrapped it in a blanket as if it were a real dog.The computer inside could tell if someone treated it badly,like shaking or not caring for it,and I did not want that recorded.
Having waited in line,we finally got a table.The waiter,not knowing I was carrying a false puppy,asked attentively if I would need a basket with cushion.I told him, "Oh,it's not a real puppy,but..." Before I could finish my sentence,he gave me an unpleasant look,turned and served other diners who were right there to play with the café's dogs.I might have seemed unusual to him.During our meal,my friends and I received strange looks from the other dog owners in the café.We ignored them and continued with our own conversation.
After dinner,we went to a nearby shopping mall,where customers were selecting their favorites.My friends were looking at clothes,but I couldn't.The puppy I was carrying was becoming increasingly heavy.Extremely tired of Friday,I put it down in a corner and just wandered around,seeking clothes I could try on.
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Suddenly,Friday started to bark like a real dog.
The moment I got home,I handed Friday to Father,tears in eyes.
10.(2025 渝中区校级二模) I am driving on Highway 75 west of Atlanta.My wife Carolyn and I(both sixty﹣eight) are on our way to check out Tellico Village,a retirement community south of Knoxville.I am worried.I'm fine with our plans to move from our home in Florida.That's not the problem.The problem is that we booked two nights in a private home through one of those Internet home﹣sharing services.
When Carolyn first mentioned the idea a month ago,I questioned why we couldn't just stay at a motel like usual.She explained that this place was located right in Tellico Village,and we' d be staying with someone who could give us an insider's view.I expressed concern about staying with a stranger,but Carolyn assured me our host Jo Ann had great reviews.I tried arguing about cost,but she countered that this was actually cheaper.When she suggested it would be nice to try something different,I diplomatically chose not to respond,knowing I'd already lost the argument.
Our GPS leads us more efficiently than I would have liked to the front door of our host's home.If I could drag my feet outside the car to slow us down,I would.But here we are in a neighborhood of beautiful homes.Jo Ann has a lovely single﹣story house,well landscaped and with two large white rocking chairs waiting on a porch (门廊) decorated with flowers.The house is dark inside.It is 4:00 p.m. ,the exact time we said we would arrive.
"So where is she?" I ask.I have a hint of"I told you so" in my voice. "Didn't she confirm our arrival time?"
"Yes," says Carolyn.She rings the doorbell.No answer.
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I dial Jo Ann' number,thinking this wouldn't have happened if we had booked a motel.
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At 10:00 p.m. ,I hear a key turn in the door and Jo Ann is back.
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11.(2025 陕西模拟) By the time Charlie Brown was in the sixth grade,he was the smallest and the youngest boy in his class.Being a good student didn't last forever.Later,school was all but impossible for Charlie.He failed every subject in the eighth grade.By the time Charlie was in junior high,he began to have trouble.He flunked physics in high school,getting a grade of zero.By the tenth grade,Schulz said that he had"failed everything in sight."
Charlie also failed in Latin,algebra,and English.He didn't do much better in sports.Although he did manage to make the school's golf team,he promptly lost the only important match of the season.There was a consolation match but he lost that too.
Throughout his youth,Charlie was awkward,socially.He was not actually disliked by the other students and no one cared that much.He was astonished if a classmate ever said hello to him outside of school hours.
There is no way to tell how he might have done at dating.Charlie never asked a girl out in high school.He was too afraid of being turned down.
Charlie was a loser.He,his classmates...everyone knew it.So he went with it.Charlie had made up his mind early in life that if things were meant to work out they would.Otherwise,he would content himself with what appeared to be his inevitable mediocrity.
However,one thing was important to Charlie.That is drawing.He was proud of his artwork.In kindergarten,after seeing one of his drawings,the teacher said,"Someday,Charlie,you're going to be an artist."Of course,no one else appreciated it.In his senior year of high school,he handed in some cartoons to the editors of the yearbook.The cartoons were turned down.Despite this,Charlie was so convinced of his ability that he decided to become a professional artist.
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After completing high school,he wrote a letter to Walt Disney Studios.
So Charlie decided to write his own autobiography(自传) in cartoons.
12.(2025 嘉兴三模) Eight﹣year﹣old Faris had to get on a ship to go to his new school.What would it be like at his new school?He worried about this for the whole journey.He was also anxious that the other pupils might make fun of his teeth as he had two extra teeth in his upper jaw.Would anybody want to be his friend?
Faris didn't realise that many of the other boys felt just as lonely as he did.He eventually gathered the courage to start chatting with the other pupils,covering his teeth with his hand.He soon made some new friends.
His teachers believed that the best way to help students who were homesick was to cheer them up with sports and activities.Then there was music!The students had to take part in choir (合唱) practice,and that was when the music teacher noticed that Faris had an extraordinary voice.He hit every note perfectly!
When Faris was twelve,his friends told him about a new kind of music from Britain and America.
"It's called rock 'n' roll! " whispered David. "The headmaster says it's a bad influence and we shouldn't listen to it…" Bruce showed Faris a black﹣and﹣white picture cut out of a magazine.It was of a handsome man with an impossibly cool haircut standing on his toes (脚趾) as he sang with his eyes closed.That guy's called Elvis!The government wants to ban him because he makes his fans go crazy.He's the greatest music star in the world!This sounded exciting to Faris —the shy boy liked the idea of people going crazy for him,too.
He and four of his friends slipped into the teachers' office one night.They gathered around the radio and switched it on…There was a rolling beat,a loud guitar.and a bouncing piano rhythm (旋律) that made Faris want to get up and dance.It was the most exciting thing in the world!
He and his friends listened to several rock 'n' roll songs before slipping back to the dormitory.They were too excited to sleep.
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Paragraph 1: "We should form a band." Bruce whispered.________
Paragraph 2:Stepping onto the stage,Faris took the microphone and began to sing.________
13.(2025 梅河口市校级二模)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
In a bustling art district,there lived a young and ambitious painter named Leo.He had an persistent passion for art and spent countless hours in his small studio,brushes in hand,trying to bring his vivid imagination to life on the paper.His works were filled with bold colors and unique perspectives,yet they seemed to lack a certain something making them truly stand out.
One sunny afternoon,Leo decided to display some of his recent paintings in a local park.He set up an easel (画架) and carefully arranged his artworks,hoping to gather some feedback (反馈).As the park was always crowded with people from all walks of life,he thought it would be the perfect place to showcase his talent.
Soon,a small crowd began to gather around Leo's display.People whispered among themselves,pointing at different paintings and sharing their thoughts.One elderly gentleman stepped closer to a particular painting that showed a peaceful countryside scene.
"Young man," the old man said in a gentle voice, "This painting has great potential.But look here,the way the flowers in the front are painted makes them seem unclear.If you added a bit more definition,it would draw the viewer's eye right into the heart of the scene." Leo listened intently,his eyes widening with realization.He thanked the old man sincerely,already picturing how he could make the change.
Not long after,a young lady stopped in front of another painting.This one was an abstract piece,full of winding shapes and contrasting hues (色调).She shook her head,with a thoughtful expression on her face. "I love the energy of this painting," she said, "but I feel like it's a bit too chaotic.If you reduced some of the brighter colors in a few areas and added a touch of something soft,it would create a better balance." Leo nodded eagerly.
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That evening,Leo returned,recalling all the comments from passers﹣by.________
Weeks later,Leo once again displayed his improved works in the park.________
14.(2025 浙江二模) It was never a question whether or not my mother loved me —it was a given,the cornerstone of my life that shaped everything about who I was.
However,I'm not sure about my father's love.There are photographs of us laughing together,with me in diapers when I was a baby.I've watched recordings of my older sister and me lining up in turns for my father to hold and toss us into the air —all three of us shrieking(尖叫) with delight.
Did I love him then?
I feel I must have loved him because the film says so —the infant child is laughing,and she is embracing the man beside her.When I turn off the tape to search my own childhood for proof of my father's love,and proof that we shared something like love,there is one impressive memory I can name.
At some point during my first year of school,I peed(尿湿了) my pants in class.I was sent to the school nurse for a change of clothes,and for the rest of the day,I wore a pair of over﹣large,bright orange sweat pants.I remember exactly how the teacher looked at me and exactly what the other students said,but they were the least of my worries.
I was in terror at the thought of showing up at home with different pants.
All afternoon I planned how I would enter the house very quietly and run to my room before my father even noticed I was there.During the entire bus ride home I rehearsed(默默练习) again and again the plan I had in mind that would allow me to escape my father's wrath(盛怒) and his triangle eyes.
Triangle eyes.This was the name my sister Shira and I used to use whenever my father's eyes would tense up into two hard triangles,with the calm of his face having fled away in a flash of anger.Their appearance was sudden and unpredictable,ignited by a poor exam score from Shira,or when I burnt the bread in the toaster.He'd point out the door and yell, "Get out!"
Who knew what peeing pants in class would get you.
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So I carefully planned to avoid his notice,but the plan backfired.
Everything he did told me that HE LOVED ME!
15.(2025 如皋市模拟) On a gray Monday morning.Sarah hurried along the crowded sidewalk.She'd overslept and was already running late for work.The sky was overcast,and the air carried a damp chill,making her wish she'd worn a heavier coat.As she rushed toward her office building,she could feel the weight of the day pressing down on her﹣meetings,deadlines,and the usual chaos of a busy workweek.
Inside the office lobby (大堂),colleagues rushed past,their footsteps echoing against the marble floors,each one lost in their own world of deadlines and to﹣do lists.Some were busy typing on the keyboard.Some were talking to clients on the phones,gesturing wildly trying to explain a campaign strategy.
After swiping her ID card at the entrance,Sarah rushed toward the elevator.She pressed the button,impatiently tapping her foot as she waited.When the elevator arrived,she stepped inside,pressing the button for the 10th floor without a second thought.The doors closed,and she sighed,leaning against the wall as she took a sip of her coffee.The other passengers in the elevator were mostly strangers,their faces wearing the same tiredness that Sarah felt.A man in a suit stood nearby,checking his watch for the tenth time,while a woman in a business casual outfit carried a stack of papers,her eyes turning from one page to the next.
But then,the lights started to flash,and a strange noise replaced the usual hum (嘈杂声).Sarah's stomach dropped as the elevator suddenly came to a stop,trapping her between floors.Panic surged through her,but she managed to stay calm.She pressed the emergency button and spoke into the intercom,her voice trembling as she explained her situation.The operator assured her that help was on the way but warned it might take time due to the malfunction (故障).As the minutes ticked by,Sarah's phone signal began to fade.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Several minutes passed,but no help came.
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Bang!They were filled with renewed hope when they heard the firefighters on the other side of the lift.
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16.(2025 龙岗区校级三模) One of my teachers once asked my class what our favourite memory was.She was asking for the moment in which "you felt the best,you felt that you had the world in the palm of your hand. " Some described grand awards;others described winning a tournament.But I felt the best when I first learned how to ride my bike at thirteen.I didn't mind my classmate's stares and snickering,because I knew there was more to the story.
My brother and I shared a typical brotherly relationship:we couldn't stand each other.Or,to be honest,he couldn't stand me.I hero﹣worshipped him.My clothes mysteriously looked like his,and even my words tended to mimic those I heard from him.Many times,I even wanted to literally follow my brother,sobbing every time I was prevented from hanging around with him.Needless to say,I was an annoyance to him.Any sort of conversation we had usually degraded to fighting,and try as I might,my brother usually won.
After a while,I stopped trying to impress him and learned to be totally indifferent;perhaps the silent treatment would get more approval.I was wrong.We soon fell into a sad pattern—I avoided him,he ignored me,and deep inside,it hurt.Indifferent or hostile,he was only a brother in name.So that's how it was between us.I believed we would forever be apart,two housemates without conversation,two strangers without warmth.And nothing more.
I still remember the day I learned to ride a bike.I had received it that Christmas,which was great,until I realized I had no idea how to ride it.My mom was too busy and had long since abandoned any attempt to teach me.I decided to teach myself to ride,a little bit each day,but in vain.On that fateful day,it was no different.I was coming to the end of my daily one﹣hour torture,and I was so frustrated that I threw my bike aside and began to cry.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I guess that was what caused my brother to come outside.______
An hour later,I was showing off my riding skill to my mom.______
17.(2025 丽水二模)阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
Tim had always struggled with his weight.He loved food,but at school,he often found himself the target of cruel jokes and teasing.
His classmates would call him names like"Big Tim"and make fun of his size,and though Tim tried to ignore it,it still hurt.Every day,he wished he could be like the athletic kids,running fast and playing sports with ease,but that always seemed out of reach.
One day,a group of his classmates﹣three boys who were notorious for their pranks(恶作剧)﹣decided to play a trick on him.They knew Tim wasn't athletic,and they thought it would be funny to sign him up for the upcoming school's long﹣distance race.They figured he'd panic when he found out and that it would be fun to watch him fail.Without telling Tim,they registered his name for the race.
On race day,as Tim walked across the track trying to join his classmates in the stands,he saw some of them holding giant posters of his face with slogans like"The Big Runner"and"Go Tim!"He froze.He realized what had happened﹣the boys had tricked him into racing.His face turned red with embarrassment,but the crowd was already watching,and he felt trapped.
The starting gun fired,and to everyone's surprise,Tim began to jog.It wasn't fast,and he could barely keep up with the other runners,but he kept moving.His legs burned with each step,and his breath came in sharp gasps,but he didn't stop.His classmates' laughter echoed in his ears,but he ignored it.
As the race went on,something shifted.A few students who weren't part of the prank started cheering for him. "Come on,Tim!You can do it!"they yelled.Their encouragement made Tim feel lighter,and his pace picked up just a little.It wasn't about winning anymore;it was about proving to himself that he could finish.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式作答。
By the time Tim reached the final lap,he was tired out.______________________
The crowd erupted in applause.______________________________
18.(2025 绍兴二模)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
At a local high school in San Francisco.Mr.Adams was well﹣loved by his pupils.He taught music,something he was passionate about ever since he was a child.
Not all students were fond of playing musical instruments and singing,but because of Mr.Adams' fun and easy lessons,he instantly became every pupil's favorite teacher.He would teach them how to play instruments and have jamming sessions(即兴演奏) with them where they performed the students' favorite songs.
"You know,the key to making the kids love your lessons is to make it relatable to them,"he told his fellow teachers. "Once you catch their attention,it'll be easier for them to absorb what you' re trying to teach them.""
Mr.Adams taught Grade 11 and 12 high school students.Thanks to his fun nature,his students respected him as a teacher but treated him like a friend.They went to him for advice and would hang out with him outside of class to play music and exchange stories.
One day,his students scheduled a day to spend time with him to make the playlist of their upcoming prom.It was such a formal dance that they would spend a lot buying dresses and suits.He was glad to help them and scheduled their session for Friday that week.
However,that Friday,Mr.Adams didn't show up to class for the first time."I wonder if he's okay,"one student said,worried."He's never been absent before!"
The students waited inside the music room patiently.After a couple of minutes,though,the school director entered the room and said that Mr.Adams would not be returning any time soon.
"I know how much you all love Mr.Adams,so I'm disclosing this information.Last night,a forest fire burned down his house,and he was devastated.He worked hard to put up that house,but he couldn't save it.He was only able to retrieve a few items,but other than that,everything he owned is gone,"she revealed.The news saddened Mr.Adams' students.
注意:(1)续写词数应为150左右:(2)请按如下格式作答。
Paragraph 1:"We have to help him!"the student council president said._________________
Paragraph 2:When Mr:Adams finally made it to the prom,he was surprised to see everyone in casual wear instead of the formal clothes.______________________
19.(2025 金华模拟)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
In the neighbourhood,my dad,Mr.Duane,is always referred to as "Collector Duane".He is an enthusiastic collector,who is always on the hunt for old items to repurpose,believing that with a bit of creativity,these forgotten objects can be transformed into something useful and new.Recently,he came across an old bicycle wheel,an old﹣fashioned metal milk box,an antique lamp,a dirty vase and some old clothes at a flea market,imagining all the possibilities they held.
My parents have a neighbor:Helen Fox.She is a 91﹣year﹣old widow (寡妇) .My parents,along with several other neighbors,look after Helen,ensuring she feels loved and supported.
Helen had long suffered from a problem:her mailbox.For some reason,the mailbox was placed insecurely down a somewhat steep (陡峭的) driveway off a busy highway,making it a daily danger for her to fetch her mail.Besides,it was old and rusty,as if it had suffered multiple violent impacts.Its once﹣bright red paint had faded to a dull pink.The door hung loosely,creaking (嘎吱作响) with every gust of wind.The letters on it had faded over the years.The 'F' was no longer clear,the 'O' had lost its shape,and the 'X' was almost gone.Helen wanted to replace it with a new one and move it to a new location,but she had no idea where to start.
The minute my dad heard about it,he made it his mission to settle the problem.He began by contacting the local rural mail service,arranging to relocate Helen's mailbox.He also talked with Yancey,their shared rural postman,explaining the upcoming change.A relatively safe place was easy to find.But the real challenge was finding a perfect mailbox.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150左右;
(2)请按如下格式作答。
Paragraph 1:Then he remembered the old objects he had recently collected._________________
Paragraph 2:The next day,he showed up at Helen's house with a shiny new mailbox._______________
20.(2025 福建二模) The day before yesterday,my class played a basketball game.As their chemistry teacher and class advisor,I watched as our team,led by Tom,the captain,fought hard.Tom's quick moves and precise passes inspired his teammates.They battled as one,making every play count.The game was intense,with both teams neck and neck.In the final seconds,Tom made a daring drive to the hoop(篮筐),but the opponent scored a last﹣minute shot.We lost by just one point.
The next morning,the classroom was filled with a heavy atmosphere.Tom sat quietly,his head down,still weighed down by the loss.The rest of the class mirrored his mood﹣silent and withdrawn.It was clear that the defeat had dampened their spirits.I knew I had to do something to lift their spirits and remind them to paying more attention to the process.
The first class of the day was chemistry.As I looked at the lesson plan quickly,an idea began to take shape.I quickly prepared the necessary laboratory equipment and walked into the classroom.
"Alright,everyone,"I said,trying to get their attention."I'm going to conduct an experiment,and I want you to observe it carefully.You'll need to describe what you see afterward."The room grew a little quieter as curiosity began to catch on.They turned their attention to me,and I could see a sign of interest in their eyes.
I picked up a piece of magnesium ribbon(镁条) and held it with a holder.When I brought it close to the burner fire,the ribbon started to flash.The whole class watched the experiment in amazement,their eyes wide open,focusing on my operation in awe.The magnesium ribbon burned away,leaving behind a soft white powder.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
"What impressed you most in the experiment?"I asked.________
With my encouragement,Tom opened up and shared more.________
高考英语考前冲刺押题预测--记叙文读后续写
参考答案与试题解析
一.书面表达(共20小题)
1.(2025 佛山模拟)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When Jane taught the sixth﹣grade class at Morris School,all 34 of her students were dear to her,while Mark was truly special.He had that happy﹣to﹣be﹣alive attitude that made even his occasional tricks delightful.
Mark talked all the time.Jane reminded him again and again that talking without permission was unacceptable,and his response always sounded sincere:"Thank you for correcting me,Sister!"
One morning,Jane's patience was growing thin when Mark talked once too often.She looked at Mark and said,"If you say one more word,I'm going to tape your mouth shut!"Not even ten seconds passed before someone said,"Mark is talking again."Having stated the punishment in front of the class,Jane decided she had to act on it.She walked to Mark's desk,tore off two pieces of tape,made a big X with them over his mouth,and then returned to the front of the classroom.
As Jane glanced at Mark to see how he was doing,he winked(眨眼) at her.That did it!Jane started laughing.The entire class cheered as she shook her head and walked back to remove the tape.His first words were,"Thank you for correcting me,Sister."
One Friday afternoon,after working hard on a new idea all week,the students were getting discouraged and starting to get annoyed with each other.To help lift their spirits and encourage a positive atmosphere,Jane asked them to write down the nicest things about the other students on a piece of paper and hand them in.Mark appeared nervous as if he was worrying his classmates would forget anything nice about him.That Saturday,Jane wrote down each student's name on a separate sheet of paper and listed what everyone else had said about them.
On Monday,Jane gave each student their lists.As the children read them,the classroom was filled with quiet excitement and soft laughter.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150左右;
(2)请按如下格式作答。
Mark's eyes widened as he read his paper._________________________
Jane was overjoyed to see Mark again at school after so many years.___________________
【答案】 Mark's eyes widened as he read his paper.His usual playful grin faded as he carefully examined each word,his fingers tracing the lines as if they held something precious."I never knew they thought this way about me,"he whispered,his voice filled with surprise and emotion.Jane could see the impact those kind words had on him.From that day on,a subtle change occurred in Mark﹣though he still loved to talk,he seemed more confident and kinder in the way he interacted with others.Years passed,and Jane often wondered where life had taken her students﹣until one afternoon,when she was surprised to see a smiling face outside her classroom.It was Mark!
Jane was overjoyed to see Mark again at school after so many years.Mark had grown into a confident young man,and as they sat down to catch up,he brought up that Friday exercise."I still have that list,"he said with a smile."It reminded me that I mattered,even when things got tough."Jane listened,her heart swelling with pride,as Mark shared how her lessons had shaped his outlook on life.As they parted ways,Jane couldn't help but feel grateful for the privilege of having been a part of Mark's journey.
【分析】本文以人物为线索展开,主要讲述了Jane老师与学生Mark之间的故事,从Mark爱讲话受罚,到Jane老师让学生写同学优点,Mark深受触动,多年后Mark感谢Jane老师改变了他的人生。
高分句型一:Years passed,and Jane often wondered where life had taken her students﹣until one afternoon,when she was surprised to see a smiling face outside her classroom.
翻译:几年过去了,简经常想知道生活把她的学生带到了哪里,直到一天下午,她惊讶地看到教室外有一张笑脸。
分析:本句使用了where引导的宾语从句;when引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二:As they parted ways,Jane couldn't help but feel grateful for the privilege of having been a part of Mark's journey.
翻译:当他们分道扬镳时,简忍不住感激有幸成为马克旅程的一部分。
分析:本句使用了as引导的时间状语从句。
【解答】 Mark's eyes widened as he read his paper.His usual playful grin faded as he carefully examined each word,his fingers tracing the lines as if they held something precious."I never knew they thought this way about me,"he whispered,his voice filled with surprise and emotion.Jane could see the impact those kind words had on him.From that day on,a subtle change occurred in Mark﹣though he still loved to talk,he seemed more confident and kinder in the way he interacted with others.Years passed,and Jane often wondered where life had taken her students﹣until one afternoon,when she was surprised to see a smiling face outside her classroom.【高分句型一】It was Mark!(Mark因论文中的暖心评价深受触动,性格渐趋沉稳自信;多年后经师重逢,惊喜见证昔日学生蜕变成长)
Jane was overjoyed to see Mark again at school after so many years.Mark had grown into a confident young man,and as they sat down to catch up,he brought up that Friday exercise."I still have that list,"he said with a smile."It reminded me that I mattered,even when things got tough."Jane listened,her heart swelling with pride,as Mark shared how her lessons had shaped his outlook on life.As they parted ways,Jane couldn't help but feel grateful for the privilege of having been a part of Mark's journey.(Mark珍藏当年激励清单,坦言师言重塑人生信念;师生重逢印证教育真谛,细微善意成就生命蜕变)
【点评】(1)品读原文,确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路,通过精读文章,找到该篇文章的写作线索。
(2)仔细审题,明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此次短文续写的具体要求,如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。续写段落的首句提示,这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
(3)回扣原文,揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求,再次快速阅读短文,抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思路。
(4)拟写草稿,修改错词病句
拟写时,注意句子结构的多样性,语言的丰富性,并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用,使上下文连贯。
2.(2025 南通二模) It was a presentation for my literature class,where every student had to present their analysis of a classic novel.My knees were shaking,and my throat felt drier with every passing second.As I looked around,30 pairs of eyes were fixed on me,waiting for me to speak.
Though I was comfortable sharing my ideas in small group discussions,I felt nervous about speaking in front of the whole class.Fear flooded me,and my mind went blank.I could hear my heart beating in my ears,blocking out the words I wanted to say.I ended up messing up the presentation.
With another presentation coming soon,I refused to let fear hold me back again.I decided to sign up to perform at a campus comedy club event.I admired how confident stand﹣up comedians were,and I hoped I could act like them.When I spoke there later,though my jokes didn't get much of a reaction,I surprisingly enjoyed being on stage and felt I could do better next time.
Inspired by this,I knew I needed advice from someone more experienced.That was when I noticed Sania,a talented performer whose humor and confidence made her the highlight of the evening.I gathered the courage to talk to her and introduced myself as a beginner speaker looking to improve.She listened closely and gave me great advice,"Attend more open microphone(麦克风) events and watch more comedy performances."
Over the next few weeks,I attended more open microphone events and observed how Sania and other skilled comedians made their performances.Surprisingly,this helped me understand literature in a new way.I started to think of literature as something to be told.The characters I analyzed became lively figures in a story that I could explain in a more interesting way.Having prepared for some time,I took a chance and asked Sania if she would like to watch my novel presentation and offer advice.She gladly agreed and we met at a study hall one afternoon after school.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I introduced the novel's main characters to Sania,still a bit nervous.
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When the time came for my next class presentation,I was quite different.
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【答案】 I introduced the novel's main characters to Sania,still a bit nervous.Sania listened carefully,nodding now and then.When I finished,she smiled warmly."You did well,but try to slow down and make your points clearer," Sania suggested."And if you feel nervous,take a deep breath.Focus on connecting with your audience,not just presenting to them.Think of them as friends who are curious to hear your story." Her specific advice removed my anxiety and increased my confidence.It made me feel well prepared.
When the time came for my next class presentation,I was quite different.As I spoke,I remembered Sania s advice about engaging the audience with proper eye contact.I slowed down,focusing on connecting with my classmates as if they were my friends.Then I continued to express myself smoothly and confidently.This time,I received a round of loud applause,unlike the previous silence.I realized that effective communication is just as important as the content itself.And thanks to Sania's patience and support,I have experienced important growth in the process.
【分析】这是一篇记叙文,文学课演讲失利后,作者借喜剧表演历练获自信,经观察学习悟得生动解读法,终以新视角重构演讲艺术。
高分句型一:Sania listened carefully,nodding now and then.
翻译:萨尼亚仔细地听着,不时地点头。
分析:本句使用了现在分词短语nodding now and then作状语。
高分句型二:I realized that effective communication is just as important as the content itself.
翻译:我意识到有效的沟通与内容本身同样重要。
分析:本句使用了that引导的宾语从句。
【解答】 I introduced the novel's main characters to Sania,still a bit nervous.Sania listened carefully,nodding now and then.【高分句型一】When I finished,she smiled warmly."You did well,but try to slow down and make your points clearer," Sania suggested."And if you feel nervous,take a deep breath.Focus on connecting with your audience,not just presenting to them.Think of them as friends who are curious to hear your story." Her specific advice removed my anxiety and increased my confidence.It made me feel well prepared.(Sania以具体建议助作者克服紧张,学会清晰表达与互动,显著增强演讲信心)
When the time came for my next class presentation,I was quite different.As I spoke,I remembered Sania s advice about engaging the audience with proper eye contact.I slowed down,focusing on connecting with my classmates as if they were my friends.Then I continued to express myself smoothly and confidently.This time,I received a round of loud applause,unlike the previous silence.I realized that effective communication is just as important as the content itself.【高分句型二】And thanks to Sania's patience and support,I have experienced important growth in the process.(作者实践建议获热烈掌声,领悟沟通真谛,感激导师耐心指引成长之路)
【点评】(1)品读原文,确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路,通过精读文章,找到该篇文章的写作线索。
(2)仔细审题,明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此次短文续写的具体要求,如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。续写段落的首句提示,这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
(3)回扣原文,揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求,再次快速阅读短文,抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思路。
(4)拟写草稿,修改错词病句
拟写时,注意句子结构的多样性,语言的丰富性,并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用,使上下文连贯。
3.(2025 岳麓区校级模拟) At 7:30 a.m.on Christmas Eve,Ivy White got a call from an unknown number. "Hi.You don't know me,but I have your brother." It was Sha' Kyra Aughtry,a Buffalo resident who had rescued Ivy's brother,Joey White,amid the deadly winter storm.
Joey,then 64,was mentally disabled.Before the storm hit the city,Ivy called Joey and instructed him not to leave his group home where he lives.But as Buffalo's worst blizzard(暴风雪) in almost 50 years struck the city,Joey ventured outside.
It's unclear what purpose Joey had for leaving home.He braved the snowstorm and walked a considerable distance before finally stopping outside Aughtry's house,just seven﹣minute drive from the North Park Theatre,where he had worked as a janitor since 1980.Before the blizzard hit,the theater's manager had called Joey,telling him not to come to work.However,Joey was used to following a routine,and even during the pandemic when the theater was closed,he had shown up several times.
At around 6:30 a.m.,Aughtry noticed a man standing helplessly in front of a snowbank from her balcony.He was crying out in pain.Aughtry went downstairs and tried to communicate with him,but he was too frightened to speak,continuing to shout uncontrollably.Aughtry had no choice but to return home and call her husband.Together,they went into the storm once more.After Aughtry spoke to him gently,assuring him he was safe,Joey's cries softened,and began to calm down.With steady hands and reassuring words,Aughtry and her husband carefully guided him through the snow,step by step,until they finally brought him into the warmth of their home.
When they got back home,they carefully examined the poor old man's condition.Having wandered in the storm,he was totally wet and couldn't help trembling,his clothes frozen hard,his fingers and toes frozen numb without sensation.It was unclear how the man had managed to walk so far in the blizzard,but it was obvious he was terrified.No matter how they tried to ask him questions,he couldn't utter a single word.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
"We should warm him up fast," said Aughtry.
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"It is a phone number that he said," one of the boys said.
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【答案】 "We should warm him up fast," said Aughtry.She helped Joey removed wet clothes and made him warm tea.Her husband fetched some of his clothes for Joey to change into and turned up the heat to make him warmer.Their three boys also joined in,bringing thick blankets to wrap around Joey and kneeling beside him patiently to comfort him with gentle words.Slowly,Joey stopped trembling,and the fear in his eye faded away.He looked at the family with gratitude,murmuring something softly.
"It is a phone number that he said," one of the boys said.Aughtry realized this must be a way to contact his family.After gently asking.she learned it was his sister's number.She immediately dialed the number and Ivy answered.Ivy thanked Aughtry repeatedly and promised to come right away.When Ivy arrived,she hugged Joey tightly,tears streaming down her face.Aughtry smiled,knowing that they had done the right thing.Though the blizzard blocked the way,kindness lit the day.
【分析】这是一篇记叙文,圣诞前夕,智障男子暴雪中走失,幸得夫妇冒险救回,获救时已冻僵失语。
高分句型一:He looked at the family with gratitude,murmuring something softly.
翻译:他感激地看着这家人,轻声咕哝着什么。
分析:本句使用了现在分词短语murmuring something softly作状语。
高分句型二:When Ivy arrived,she hugged Joey tightly,tears streaming down her face.
翻译:当Ivy到达时,她紧紧地拥抱了Joey,泪水顺着脸颊流了下来。
分析:本句使用了when引导的时间状语从句;独立主格结构tears streaming down her face。
【解答】 "We should warm him up fast," said Aughtry.She helped Joey removed wet clothes and made him warm tea.Her husband fetched some of his clothes for Joey to change into and turned up the heat to make him warmer.Their three boys also joined in,bringing thick blankets to wrap around Joey and kneeling beside him patiently to comfort him with gentle words.Slowly,Joey stopped trembling,and the fear in his eye faded away.He looked at the family with gratitude,murmuring something softly.【高分句型一】(Aughtry一家协力为Joey脱湿衣、饮热茶、换干衣,Joey含泪轻念出妹妹电话号码)
"It is a phone number that he said," one of the boys said.Aughtry realized this must be a way to contact his family.After gently asking.she learned it was his sister's number.She immediately dialed the number and Ivy answered.Ivy thanked Aughtry repeatedly and promised to come right away.When Ivy arrived,she hugged Joey tightly,tears streaming down her face.【高分句型二】Aughtry smiled,knowing that they had done the right thing.Though the blizzard blocked the way,kindness lit the day.(Aughtry拨通Ivy电话助其团聚,暴风雪中姐妹相拥而泣,救助者以善意之举融化寒冬,彰显人间温情)
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4.(2025 武汉二模) I hurried into Lehman's grocery store.I was there to buy my grandmother's hearing aid batteries.More importantly,this was my chance to visit the love of my life﹣Artie.
I ran to the shelf he was on,and there he was,right where I last saw him:a grey little guy with a large mouth that fit perfectly over my shoulder as I hugged him tightly.I adored that stuffed dolphin.As I held Artie,Mrs.Lehman,who had always been kind to me,passed by and smiled knowingly,"Hugging that dolphin again,huh?"
But my brother,Rick,noticed I took a long time in Lehman's,saying,"You are a thirteen﹣year﹣old girl now.You are supposed to be quicker.Next time,I will go with you."Oh,great!My brother,Rick.He always laughed at me.
But I wouldn't give up.So,as we walked into the store,I suggested to Rick that he get the batteries,since he was older.Then I headed towards Artie.There he was,awaiting me.I grabbed him and hugged him tightly.Just then,I heard Rick saying,"What in the world are you doing?"
"This is Artie,"I said."I hug him every single time I come here.I can't afford it so I hope he doesn't get sold because I just love this little guy."The look on Rick's face was unreadable,but I knew deep down that he wasn't going to make fun of me.In fact,a few times when he accompanied me to Lehman's,he said,"go on and hug your dolphin,if it's still there."
One day,Rick was not home,so I went to Lehman's alone.I went straight to Artie's shelf.But he was gone.I searched every shelf but couldn't find him.Suddenly,a voice from the counter interrupted my search.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
It was Mrs.Lehman herself.
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To my surprise,I found a box lying on my bed.
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【答案】 It was Mrs.Lehman herself.She leaned over the counter,her eyes crinkling with warmth. "Looking for your little friend,dear?A young man bought him yesterday.Said something about 'saving him from shelf limbo'." My heart sank.Before I could ask more,she added, "He left this note for you." Hand trembling,I unfolded the paper: "Check your bed at noon. —R." Glancing at the clock—11:55 a.m.—I bolted home,confusion and hope tangled in my chest.
To my surprise,I found a box lying on my bed.A familiar floppy fin peeked through the ribbon.Tears blurred my vision as I cradled Artie,his soft fur pressing against my cheek.Beneath him lay another note: "Even pirates need first mates.Don't drown him in your tears. —Captain Rick." Laughter bubbled through my sniffles.From the doorway,Rick grumbled, "You're gonna wear his stitching out," but his ears flushed pink.That night,Artie guarded my pillow,while Rick's snores echoed from the next room—a gruff lullaby of unexpected love.
【分析】本文以情感为线索展开。讲述了作者对一个心爱的玩偶Artie的深厚感情,以及在家庭和生活中经历的一系列温暖的故事。故事通过作者与Artie的互动,展现了家庭成员之间复杂而真挚的情感,以及爱与支持的力量。
高分句型一:Hand trembling,I unfolded the paper: "Check your bed at noon. —R."
翻译:我颤抖着展开纸:"中午检查你的床。"
分析:本句使用了独立主格结构Hand trembling。
高分句型二:Tears blurred my vision as I cradled Artie,his soft fur pressing against my cheek.
翻译:我抱着Artie,泪水模糊了我的视线,他柔软的皮毛紧贴着我的脸颊。
分析:本句使用了as引导的时间状语从句;独立主格结构his soft fur pressing against my cheek。
【解答】 It was Mrs.Lehman herself.She leaned over the counter,her eyes crinkling with warmth. "Looking for your little friend,dear?A young man bought him yesterday.Said something about 'saving him from shelf limbo'." My heart sank.Before I could ask more,she added, "He left this note for you." Hand trembling,I unfolded the paper: "Check your bed at noon. —R."【高分句型一】Glancing at the clock—11:55 a.m.—I bolted home,confusion and hope tangled in my chest.(描写Mrs.Lehman告知作者Artie被买走的消息,以及作者内心的失落和意外发现的希望。)
To my surprise,I found a box lying on my bed.A familiar floppy fin peeked through the ribbon.Tears blurred my vision as I cradled Artie,his soft fur pressing against my cheek.【高分句型二】Beneath him lay another note: "Even pirates need first mates.Don't drown him in your tears. —Captain Rick." Laughter bubbled through my sniffles.From the doorway,Rick grumbled, "You're gonna wear his stitching out," but his ears flushed pink.That night,Artie guarded my pillow,while Rick's snores echoed from the next room—a gruff lullaby of unexpected love.(描写作者回到家发现Artie被送来的惊喜,以及与哥哥Rick的对话。)
【点评】(1)品读原文,确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路,通过精读文章,找到该篇文章的写作线索。
(2)仔细审题,明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此次短文续写的具体要求,如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。续写段落的首句提示,这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
(3)回扣原文,揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求,再次快速阅读短文,抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思路。
(4)拟写草稿,修改错词病句
拟写时,注意句子结构的多样性,语言的丰富性,并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用,使上下文连贯。
5.(2025 宽城区校级模拟) Emily,39 years old,is a runway model,a disability﹣rights activist and a freelance writer whose work has been featured in The New York Times and Glamour.
From her early childhood,Emily was interested in fashion,fascinated by beautiful clothes and skirts.Unfortunately,fashion didn't show much interest in her.Due to a genetic bone and muscle disorder,she was less than 1.21 meters tall and couldn't walk.To treat her disease,she underwent seven surgeries before the age of 17.Fortunately,she got better and could even walk a short distance.
As Emily grew older,her passion for fashion only intensified.Every time she saw models shining on the runway on TV,an envious glimmer would flash across her face.Among those models,she particularly admired a model named Grace,who was not only a leader in the fashion world but also frequently encouraged people to show concern for the disabled.
One day,when Emily was doing rehabilitation training in the park,she came across a special community fashion show.One particular model left a deep impression on Emily.The model was dressed in a graphic T﹣shirt,tight pants and an oversize vest with a flurry fur coat.When Emily's eyes swept over the model's arms,she was shocked to find that both of the model's sleeves were empty.However,her smile was so bright and brilliant.This sight deeply touched Emily.
From that day on,Emily worked even harder for her dream.She watched every fashion show of Grace online,carefully learned her stylish outfits and even posted selfies on Twitter every day,ho