书面表达
备战 2025 年中考英语新课标(核心素养)二轮复习之优秀
生拔高重难题型特训
【预测分析】
一、重难点分析
1、语言准确性
语法与拼写错误:主谓一致、时态混乱(如过去完成时误用)、冠词缺失(如“play piano”
漏“the”)是高频扣分点。
中式英语表达:如“I very like it”(应改为“I like it very much”)或“make a speech”(正确为
“deliver a speech”)。
2、结构逻辑与连贯性
段落衔接生硬:缺乏过渡词(如 however/therefore),导致逻辑断裂。
论据不足:议论文仅用“First...Second...”但缺乏具体案例支撑(如环保议题未结合福建垃圾
分类数据)。
3、文化表达与本土化内容
文化负载词误用:如“京剧—Peking Opera”拼写错误,或“土楼—Hakka Tulou”未加连字符。
跨文化对比:需平衡中西文化差异(如节日习俗),避免刻板印象(如将春节仅描述为“eat
dumplings”)。
4、创意与个性化表达
观点同质化:议论文论点雷同(如“AI 利大于弊”缺乏辩证分析),需结合个人经历或社会
热点提出独特见解。
情感表达单一:记叙文情感描写单薄(如仅用“happy”而忽略“proud/relieved”)。
二、解题步骤与技巧
1、审题与立意(5 分钟)
圈关键词:明确体裁(书信/议论文)、话题(环保/文化)、对象(如笔友 Henry)。
确定结构:总分总三段式(引言→主体→结论),主体段分 2-3 个论点。
2、列提纲与框架(5 分钟)
应用文:书信需包含称呼、正文(3 要点)、结尾敬语;议论文需明确论点(如“是否支持
在线学习”)。
记叙文:按时间线(过去/现在/未来)组织内容,突出情感变化(如“挫折→成长”)。
3、写作与语言优化(15 分钟)
替换基础词汇:如“good→beneficial”“big→significant”。
使用复合句:定语从句(Students who...)、条件句(If AI is properly regulated...)。
衔接手段:添加过渡词(Firstly, Moreover, In conclusion)。
4、检查与修改(5 分钟)
语法检查:主谓一致、时态统一、冠词/介词。
格式与拼写:书信落款(Yours sincerely)、避免拼写错误(如“environment”)。
三、2025 年命题趋势预测
1、本土文化主题主导
预测方向:围绕福建非遗(如木偶戏、土楼)、生态保护(武夷山国家公园)展开,要求描
述文化特色或提出保护建议。
示例题目:
书信:“邀请外宾体验闽南春卷制作”(需包含步骤与文化意义)。
议论文:“传统技艺与 AI 技术的融合是否必要”。
2、社会热点与科技结合
预测方向:环保(碳中和行动)、科技(AI 对学习的影响)。
示例题目:
倡议书:“校园无塑行动”(需列 3 条措施+呼吁)。
演讲稿:“AI 如何改变我们的生活”(辩证分析利弊)。
3、题型设计新特点
复合题型:如“辩论赛实录”“研学路线设计”,需结合说明与议论。
开放性结尾:如“提出你的建议”或“描述未来愿景”。
4、高频考点分布
应用文(40%):书信、邮件、倡议书,重点考查格式与交际功能。
议论文(35%):观点对比(如“线上学习 vs 传统课堂”),需逻辑清晰、论据充分。
记叙文(25%):校园生活、环保实践,强调细节描写与情感升华。
四、备考建议
1、强化高频主题素材积累
文化类:整理福建非遗词汇(如 Hakka Tulou, Min Opera)、生态保护术语(如 carbon
neutrality)。
科技类:积累 AI、智能设备相关表达(如 smart grid, renewable energy)。
2、真题模拟与结构优化
精析福建真题:如 2024 年“垃圾分类倡议书”,模仿其“问题→措施→呼吁”结构。
仿写高分句型:
强调句:“It is the protection of traditional culture that makes Fujian unique.”
倒装句:“Not only does reading broaden horizons, but it also enriches the soul.”
3、提升语言准确性
每日纠错:整理易错点(如冠词、介词),制作错题本。
限时写作:每周完成 2 篇不同文体作文,限时 20 分钟。
4、关注社会热点与本土案例
阅读福建英文媒体:如《福建日报》环保专栏,积累本土案例(如红树林修复工程)。
模拟辩论与演讲:针对“电子书 vs 纸质书”等话题练习辩证表达。
【基础试题】
A
假如你是李华,你的英国好友 Mike 向父母征询送什么生日礼物给同学 Jack,他们意
见不统一,给他造成困惑。请你根据以下图文中的相关信息,写一封邮件,向他推荐其中一
个生日礼物并阐述理由。
注意:
1)邮件需包含所选礼物至少两点相关信息,可适当发挥;
2)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
3)词数:80 左右;邮件的首尾和第一句已给出,不计入总词数。
B
自从国家推行“双减”政策以来,学生有了更多的课余时间开展课外活动。你校英语社
团将举办“怎样让我们的课余生活更有意义?”的演讲比赛,请你以“How to make our spare
time more meaningful ”为主题,用英语写一篇演讲稿,分享你的课外活动和感受。
内容要点:
1. 参加志愿者活动,如:看望老人,……;
2. 参加俱乐部,如:音乐俱乐部,……;
3. ……(至少补充两项活动);
4. 你的感受。
注意:
1. 词数 80-100,已经给出的部分不计入总词数;
2. 演讲稿必须包括所有要点,可以适当发挥,使其连贯、通顺;
3. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名和地名等相关信息。
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C
现在,随着技术的不断提高,相比较传统的燃油车,新能源车(EVs)越来越受欢迎。某
新能源车销售商想要征集一篇文章,帮助其宣传新能源车的优点。请你参考以下信息,写一
篇演讲稿去投稿。
参考信息:
be environmentally gasoline (汽油), zero waste gas (废气), air pollution, greenhouse
friendly gas, climate (气候)…
cheap price, maintenance (维护), the charging cost (充电费) …
driving experience quiet, smooth, accelerate (加速) quickly...
policy (政策) support subsidies (补贴)…
…
要求:
1. 80—120 词;开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
Electric vehicles (EVs) are becoming increasingly popular worldwide, and for good reason.
Compared with traditional gasoline cars, ______________________________________________
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【提升试题】
A
为了了解学生们如何安排自己的课余时间,你校在校园网上发布了一个主题为“My
free time”的英文帖子,学生们纷纷跟帖留言,分享自己的课余生活。但是,你却从中发现了
普遍存在的问题。请你仔细阅读以下三名学生的跟帖内容,找出他们共同的问题并给出理由,
最后提出解决问题的方法。
Student 1: I find a good way to relax—watching short videos on mobile phone. It’s fun. I often
do it for a few hours.
Student 2: I like playing computer games and I spend most of the time on them. Sometimes I
will forget to do my homework.
Student 3: I love reading novels on my iPad. Every day before going to bed, I read novels for
nearly an hour.
要求:
1)不得出现真实人名、校名和地名等信息;
2)要点齐全,语句通顺,表达清晰,书写规范;
3)词数:90 左右,文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
4)参考词汇:electronic products 电子产品
From the statements of the three students, we can see that different students have different
ways to spend their free time, but they have the same problem. ____________________________
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B
你校校报英语专栏正在举行以“A Moving Story”为题的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇
短文,向校报投稿,分享你平凡生活里不期而遇的温暖,走进那个被泪水浸润又被笑容照亮
的故事,去触摸人性最本真的温度。
要求:
1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁,词数不少于 80 个;
2. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计;
3. 请将短文写在答题卡上,写在本试题卷上无效。
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C
全球变暖是大家共同面对的危机,保护环境是每一个人的职责,请你根据以下内容提
示问题,写一份倡议书,号召大家从身边的小事做起,一起行动起来,做环保小卫士。
1.Why should we do something to protect our earth now
2.What can we do to play a part in protecting our earth
3.How can we call for others to join us
Something more about environmnental protection.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息;词数 100 词左右;标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Let’s Take Action Now!
As we all know, we are facing a serious problem-global warming. ___________________
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【拔高试题】
A
回望初中三年, 学校似一方舞台,无数活动精彩呈现。或是一场好书推荐会, 或是一
幕角色扮演, 或是一次 DIY 创作实践 随着毕业季脚步渐近, 育英学校公众平台英语角
(English Corner)栏目为毕业生发起“A School Activity I’ll Never Forget”征文活动, 诚邀同
学们用英文记录难忘的学校活动。请你浏览推送内容, 撰写一篇英语文章投稿。
要求:
1. 100 词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 文中不能出现真实的人名和校名;
3. 参考图文信息,适当拓展,以使行文连贯。
A School Activity I Will Never Forget
In the past three years, there have been many. colorful activities in our school. I will never
forget__________________________________________________________________________
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I will remember the experience forever.
B
“‘班超’来了!邀你来接力!”……春天的操场热闹非凡, 各校的班级超级联赛持续上演,
同学们纷纷燃动起运动的激情与青春的活力。
假设你是李华,你校英语社团的公众号正在做“班级超级联赛我参与”的系列推送。请
你用英语给公众号留言, 谈谈你们学校举办了什么体育比赛, 你做了什么以及你的收获。
提示词语: basketball, take part in, cheer on, strong, teamwork
提示问题:
●What matches did your school hold
●What did you do
●What have you learned from the matches
I’m Li Hua from Class 1, Grade 9.
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C
旅游已经走进了我们的生活。每年假期,越来越多的人们走出家门,外出旅游。但与
此同时,我们更应该注意自己的言行举止,做到文明旅游。请你就此话题写一篇短文,号召
全体同学文明出游。
要点:
1.在车站或机场,排队等候;
2.公共场合不大声喧哗;
3.禁止乱写乱画,带走垃圾并扔进垃圾桶(dustbin);
4.遵守规则,如果不允许拍照,就不要拍照;
5.如果做到这些,我相信……
写作要求:
1.不得使用真实姓名和学校名;
2.包含以上所有要点,可适当增加细节,使内容充实,行文连贯;
3.字迹工整,语言精练,表达准确,条理清楚;
4.词数 80 词左右。(开头已给出,不计入总词数。)
Boys and girls,
As more and more people would like to travel in the holiday, we hope everyone can show
good manners during the trip. Here is some advice for all of us.____________________________
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_______________________________________________________________________________书面表达
备战 2025 年中考英语新课标(核心素养)二轮复习之优秀
生拔高重难题型特训
【预测分析】
一、重难点分析
1、语言准确性
语法与拼写错误:主谓一致、时态混乱(如过去完成时误用)、冠词缺失(如“play piano”
漏“the”)是高频扣分点。
中式英语表达:如“I very like it”(应改为“I like it very much”)或“make a speech”(正确为
“deliver a speech”)。
2、结构逻辑与连贯性
段落衔接生硬:缺乏过渡词(如 however/therefore),导致逻辑断裂。
论据不足:议论文仅用“First...Second...”但缺乏具体案例支撑(如环保议题未结合福建垃圾
分类数据)。
3、文化表达与本土化内容
文化负载词误用:如“京剧—Peking Opera”拼写错误,或“土楼—Hakka Tulou”未加连字符。
跨文化对比:需平衡中西文化差异(如节日习俗),避免刻板印象(如将春节仅描述为“eat
dumplings”)。
4、创意与个性化表达
观点同质化:议论文论点雷同(如“AI 利大于弊”缺乏辩证分析),需结合个人经历或社会
热点提出独特见解。
情感表达单一:记叙文情感描写单薄(如仅用“happy”而忽略“proud/relieved”)。
二、解题步骤与技巧
1、审题与立意(5 分钟)
圈关键词:明确体裁(书信/议论文)、话题(环保/文化)、对象(如笔友 Henry)。
确定结构:总分总三段式(引言→主体→结论),主体段分 2-3 个论点。
2、列提纲与框架(5 分钟)
应用文:书信需包含称呼、正文(3 要点)、结尾敬语;议论文需明确论点(如“是否支持
在线学习”)。
记叙文:按时间线(过去/现在/未来)组织内容,突出情感变化(如“挫折→成长”)。
3、写作与语言优化(15 分钟)
替换基础词汇:如“good→beneficial”“big→significant”。
使用复合句:定语从句(Students who...)、条件句(If AI is properly regulated...)。
衔接手段:添加过渡词(Firstly, Moreover, In conclusion)。
4、检查与修改(5 分钟)
语法检查:主谓一致、时态统一、冠词/介词。
格式与拼写:书信落款(Yours sincerely)、避免拼写错误(如“environment”)。
三、2025 年命题趋势预测
1、本土文化主题主导
预测方向:围绕福建非遗(如木偶戏、土楼)、生态保护(武夷山国家公园)展开,要求描
述文化特色或提出保护建议。
示例题目:
书信:“邀请外宾体验闽南春卷制作”(需包含步骤与文化意义)。
议论文:“传统技艺与 AI 技术的融合是否必要”。
2、社会热点与科技结合
预测方向:环保(碳中和行动)、科技(AI 对学习的影响)。
示例题目:
倡议书:“校园无塑行动”(需列 3 条措施+呼吁)。
演讲稿:“AI 如何改变我们的生活”(辩证分析利弊)。
3、题型设计新特点
复合题型:如“辩论赛实录”“研学路线设计”,需结合说明与议论。
开放性结尾:如“提出你的建议”或“描述未来愿景”。
4、高频考点分布
应用文(40%):书信、邮件、倡议书,重点考查格式与交际功能。
议论文(35%):观点对比(如“线上学习 vs 传统课堂”),需逻辑清晰、论据充分。
记叙文(25%):校园生活、环保实践,强调细节描写与情感升华。
四、备考建议
1、强化高频主题素材积累
文化类:整理福建非遗词汇(如 Hakka Tulou, Min Opera)、生态保护术语(如 carbon
neutrality)。
科技类:积累 AI、智能设备相关表达(如 smart grid, renewable energy)。
2、真题模拟与结构优化
精析福建真题:如 2024 年“垃圾分类倡议书”,模仿其“问题→措施→呼吁”结构。
仿写高分句型:
强调句:“It is the protection of traditional culture that makes Fujian unique.”
倒装句:“Not only does reading broaden horizons, but it also enriches the soul.”
3、提升语言准确性
每日纠错:整理易错点(如冠词、介词),制作错题本。
限时写作:每周完成 2 篇不同文体作文,限时 20 分钟。
4、关注社会热点与本土案例
阅读福建英文媒体:如《福建日报》环保专栏,积累本土案例(如红树林修复工程)。
模拟辩论与演讲:针对“电子书 vs 纸质书”等话题练习辩证表达。
【基础试题】
A
假如你是李华,你的英国好友 Mike 向父母征询送什么生日礼物给同学 Jack,他们意
见不统一,给他造成困惑。请你根据以下图文中的相关信息,写一封邮件,向他推荐其中一
个生日礼物并阐述理由。
注意:
1)邮件需包含所选礼物至少两点相关信息,可适当发挥;
2)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
3)词数:80 左右;邮件的首尾和第一句已给出,不计入总词数。
【答案】Possible version 1:
Dear Mike,
How is everything going I’ve got a very good idea about birthday gifts that you must hear.
I strongly recommend flowers as birthday gifts rather than books for three reasons. First,
flowers show love. Choosing someone's favourite flowers proves you truly care. Secondly,
flowers bring nature’s beauty. Blooms immediately cheer up rooms like sunshine. Finally, they
leave you sweet memories. Their lovely smell reminds people of the birthday happy moments.
Unlike ordinary gifts, flowers speak the language of the heart.
I’m sure your friend will love your gift.
Warm regards.
Yours,
Li Hua
Possible version 2:
Dear Mike,
How is everything going I’ve got a MUST-SHARE idea about birthday gifts!
Forget books—go with flowers! Here are the reasons. First, flowers show love. Picking
people’s favorite flowers shouts “I care!” louder than any text message. Second, flowers bring
nature’s beauty. Blooms brighten rooms faster than lightning flashes! Finally, they create lasting
sweet memories, bottling birthday happiness. I’m sure whenever Jack catches the smell of the
flowers, it will immediately remind him of the special thoughtful gift you chose. Books gather
dust, but flowers make hearts dance!
Warm regards.
Yours,
Li Hua
Possible version 3:
Dear Mike,
How is everything going Don’t hesitate about the birthday gift. Choose a book instead of
flowers. Here are the reasons.
First, books bring happiness. They can take him to adventures, make him laugh, or teach
him cool facts, lighting up his day. Second, books can improve his language skills. Reading
secretly builds up vocabulary and grammar skills without any boring experience. Finally, books
can lead him to explore the world. From space science to ancient history, books open doors to new
knowledge and cultures!
Flowers fade in a week, but a great book can become a lifelong friend. Go and buy a book
as the gift.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
Possible version 4:
Dear Mike,
How is everything going I’m glad to share my thoughts on birthday gifts.
Honestly, I prefer books rather than flowers. There are many reasons for it. First of all,
books can make him relaxed and bring him happiness, which is beneficial to his emotional
well-being. Secondly, reading books is a great way to improve his language skills, as it exposes
him to different vocabulary, and writing styles. Most importantly, books expand his world
knowledge, enriching his daily life with new ideas.
Hope my advice can help you.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【难度】0.85
【知识点】意见/建议
【详解】以例文 1 为例作如下解析:
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封邮件。
②时态:时态以 “一般现在时” 为主,
③提示:文章围绕 “推荐生日礼物” 这一要点展开,从三个方面详细阐述推荐鲜花而非书籍
作为生日礼物的理由,内容完整,条理清晰,语言表达自然流畅,合理运用语法、词汇和句
型,较好地完成了写作任务。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,引出话题:
第二步,具体阐述写作内容:从三个维度详细说明推荐鲜花作为生日礼物的原因。
第三步,书写结语,表达对推荐的自信和对 Mike 朋友收到礼物的美好期待。
[亮点词汇]
①strongly recommend 强烈推荐
②rather than 而不是
③cheer up 使高兴,使振奋
④speak the language of the heart 诉说心声
[高分句型]
①I’ve got a very good idea about birthday gifts that you must hear. (定语从句)
②Choosing someone’s favourite flowers proves you truly care. (动名词短语作主语)
B
自从国家推行“双减”政策以来,学生有了更多的课余时间开展课外活动。你校英语社
团将举办“怎样让我们的课余生活更有意义?”的演讲比赛,请你以“How to make our spare
time more meaningful ”为主题,用英语写一篇演讲稿,分享你的课外活动和感受。
内容要点:
1. 参加志愿者活动,如:看望老人,……;
2. 参加俱乐部,如:音乐俱乐部,……;
3. ……(至少补充两项活动);
4. 你的感受。
注意:
1. 词数 80-100,已经给出的部分不计入总词数;
2. 演讲稿必须包括所有要点,可以适当发挥,使其连贯、通顺;
3. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名和地名等相关信息。
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Dear friends,
Since the “Double Reduction” policy was carried out, we have had more spare time to
enjoy after-school activities. Now let me tell you how I make my spare time more meaningful.
First, we can take part in more voluntary work, such as visiting the old and chatting with
them. Second, we can join different clubs like music clubs or sports clubs. Third, it’s good to help
our parents do some housework to show our love for them. Fourth, it is a good chance for us to get
close to nature and relax ourselves.
Through these activities, I’ve learned teamwork and responsibility. They make me happy
and confident.
That’s all. Thank you.
【难度】0.85
【知识点】方法/策略、政治/政策
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,注意字母大小写以
及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步:开篇点题,引出话题;
第二步:根据提示,分享自己的课外活动和感受;
第三步:书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①carry out 实施
②take part in 参加
③get close to 接近
[高分句型]
①Now let me tell you how I make my spare time more meaningful.(how 引导宾语从句)
C
现在,随着技术的不断提高,相比较传统的燃油车,新能源车(EVs)越来越受欢迎。某
新能源车销售商想要征集一篇文章,帮助其宣传新能源车的优点。请你参考以下信息,写一
篇演讲稿去投稿。
参考信息:
be environmentally gasoline (汽油), zero waste gas (废气), air pollution, greenhouse
friendly gas, climate (气候)…
cheap price, maintenance (维护), the charging cost (充电费) …
driving experience quiet, smooth, accelerate (加速) quickly...
policy (政策) support subsidies (补贴)…
…
要求:
1. 80—120 词;开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
Electric vehicles (EVs) are becoming increasingly popular worldwide, and for good reason.
Compared with traditional gasoline cars, ______________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Electric vehicles (EVs) are becoming increasingly popular worldwide, and for good reason.
Compared with traditional gasoline cars, they provide more advantages.
First, EVs are environmentally friendly. They don’t use gasoline, so they produce zero
waste gas and bring no air pollution or greenhouse gas. This is really good for the climate.
Second, EVs are cheaper to use. Now the price of EVs is becoming lower and lower. They
require less maintenance. And the charging cost is also cheaper than the gasoline.
Third, EVs bring a better driving experience. They provide a quieter and smoother driving
experience. And they can also accelerate quickly.
Last, there’s now great policy support for EVs. The government provides a lot of subsidies.
In a word, EVs are not only good for the environment but also make a difference in your
life.
【难度】0.85
【知识点】时文/广告/布告
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,注意字母大小写以
及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、承接已给的开头,引出话题;
第二步、根据提示,介绍新能源车的优点;
第三步、书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①environmentally friendly 环保的
②not only…but also 不仅……而且
③make a difference 有影响
[高分句型]
Second, EVs are cheaper to use.(动词不定式主动表示被动)
【提升试题】
A
为了了解学生们如何安排自己的课余时间,你校在校园网上发布了一个主题为“My
free time”的英文帖子,学生们纷纷跟帖留言,分享自己的课余生活。但是,你却从中发现了
普遍存在的问题。请你仔细阅读以下三名学生的跟帖内容,找出他们共同的问题并给出理由,
最后提出解决问题的方法。
Student 1: I find a good way to relax—watching short videos on mobile phone. It’s fun. I often
do it for a few hours.
Student 2: I like playing computer games and I spend most of the time on them. Sometimes I
will forget to do my homework.
Student 3: I love reading novels on my iPad. Every day before going to bed, I read novels for
nearly an hour.
要求:
1)不得出现真实人名、校名和地名等信息;
2)要点齐全,语句通顺,表达清晰,书写规范;
3)词数:90 左右,文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
4)参考词汇:electronic products 电子产品
From the statements of the three students, we can see that different students have different
ways to spend their free time, but they have the same problem. ____________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
From the statements of the three students, we can see that different students have different
ways to spend their free time, but they have the same problem. They spend most of their free time
on electronic products, such as watching short videos on the mobile phone, playing computer
games and reading novels on the iPad. I think it’s bad for their eyes or study. Here are my
suggestions.
Students should spend more time on study instead of electronic products. They had better
stay away from them if they want to study quietly. They can arrange their spare time reasonably.
For example, take part in more meaningful activities. It is also a good idea to exercise an hour a
day. I hope my suggestions are helpful.
【难度】0.65
【知识点】青少年问题、意见/建议
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:要求根据提示内容,找出问题并解决问题,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,找出三人的共同问题;
第二步,针对问题给出建议;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①such as 例如
②be bad for 对……有害
③instead of 而不是
④stay away from 远离
[高分句型]
①They spend most of their free time on electronic products, such as watching short videos on the
mobile phone, playing computer games and reading novels on the iPad.(and 连接并列成分)
②I hope my suggestions are helpful.(省略 that 的宾语从句)
B
你校校报英语专栏正在举行以“A Moving Story”为题的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇
短文,向校报投稿,分享你平凡生活里不期而遇的温暖,走进那个被泪水浸润又被笑容照亮
的故事,去触摸人性最本真的温度。
要求:
1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁,词数不少于 80 个;
2. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计;
3. 请将短文写在答题卡上,写在本试题卷上无效。
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
A Moving Story
Last winter, I saw something that warmed my heart. On a freezing morning, an old man
slipped and fell on the icy road. Before I could react, a stranger rushed over, helped him up, and
even bought him a hot drink from a nearby shop.
What touched me most was their conversation. The old man, with tears in his eyes, kept
thanking him. The stranger just smiled and said, “We all need help sometimes.”
That moment taught me kindness needs no reason. A small act can light up someone’s
day—and my heart too.
【难度】0.65
【知识点】情感、叙事忆旧
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
② 时态:时态以“一般过去时”为主;
③ 提示:根据所给话题“A Moving Story”完成写作,叙述自己的真实生活经历,注意确保语
句通顺。
[写作步骤]
第一步,用时间状语和场景描写引出故事背景;
第二步,具体描述其中的经历;
第三步,总结感悟。
[亮点词汇]
① slip and fall 滑倒
② with tears in one’s eyes 含泪
③ light up 点亮
[高分句型]
①Last winter, I saw something that warmed my heart.(定语从句)
②Before I could react, a stranger rushed over, helped him up, and even bought him a hot drink
from a nearby shop.(时间状语从句)
C
全球变暖是大家共同面对的危机,保护环境是每一个人的职责,请你根据以下内容提
示问题,写一份倡议书,号召大家从身边的小事做起,一起行动起来,做环保小卫士。
1.Why should we do something to protect our earth now
2.What can we do to play a part in protecting our earth
3.How can we call for others to join us
Something more about environmnental protection.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息;词数 100 词左右;标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Let’s Take Action Now!
As we all know, we are facing a serious problem-global warming. ___________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Let’s Take Action Now!
As we all know, we are facing a serious problem—global warming. It’s caused by
excessive greenhouse gas emissions. Ice-caps are melting, sea levels are rising, and extreme
weather is becoming more frequent. This not only endangers wildlife but also threatens our own
future.
What can we do First, save energy. Turn off lights and unplug chargers when not in use.
Second, reduce waste. Recycle paper, plastic, and glass. Third, choose green transportation like
walking or cycling instead of driving cars.
To call for others to join us, we can organize community clean-up events and share
environmental knowledge on social media. Let’s be environmental guardians and take action now!
【难度】0.65
【知识点】环境保护、意见/建议
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇倡议书;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:本文的要点以问题的形式呈现,写每个要点时要衔接顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步,阐述为什么要保护地球;
第二步,具体阐述应该如何做;
第三步,呼吁人们参与进来,表达对美好环境的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①not only...but also...不但……而且……
②as we all know 众所周知
③instead of 代替
④call for 号召
[高分句型]
①To call for others to join us, we can organize community clean-up events and share
environmental knowledge on social media.(动词不定式作目的状语)
【拔高试题】
A
回望初中三年, 学校似一方舞台,无数活动精彩呈现。或是一场好书推荐会, 或是一
幕角色扮演, 或是一次 DIY 创作实践 随着毕业季脚步渐近, 育英学校公众平台英语角
(English Corner)栏目为毕业生发起“A School Activity I’ll Never Forget”征文活动, 诚邀同
学们用英文记录难忘的学校活动。请你浏览推送内容, 撰写一篇英语文章投稿。
要求:
1. 100 词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 文中不能出现真实的人名和校名;
3. 参考图文信息,适当拓展,以使行文连贯。
A School Activity I Will Never Forget
In the past three years, there have been many. colorful activities in our school. I will never
forget__________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
I will remember the experience forever.
【答案】
The School Activity I Will Never Forget
In the past three years, there have been many colorful activities in our school. I will never
forget the club activity in Grade Eight. I was a member of the English Drama Club. Every
Tuesday, we joined together in the room and learned to act interesting plays. It was my favourite
time at my school. Last year, our teacher encouraged us to perform in front of all the students. We
felt nervous at first, but our teacher believed us. To make it successful, we spent several weekends
practising. It was tiring but no one gave up. Finally, we performed excellently and all the teachers
and students praised us. Every member was satisfied with it. Thanks to the club activity, I not only
achieved my acting dream but also made some true friends.
I will never forget the experience.
【难度】0.4
【知识点】文体活动、叙事忆旧、个人经历
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态:时态以 “一般过去时” 为主。
③提示:文章紧扣 “难忘的学校活动” 主题,从活动介绍、参与过程、取得成果及个人收获
等方面进行描述,条理清晰,完整且生动地完成写作任务,同时融入个人情感,表达自然。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题:开篇点明在过去三年学校有许多丰富多彩的活动,直接表明 “永远不会
忘记八年级的俱乐部活动”,迅速引出文章主题,明确写作意图。
第二步,具体阐述:详细介绍活动内容,说明自己是英语戏剧俱乐部成员及日常活动;讲述
去年老师鼓励表演的经历,包括开始的紧张、周末的练习以及最终的出色表现和大家的赞扬,
从多个角度全面地展现活动过程。
第三步,书写结语:结尾总结此次活动对自己的意义,不仅实现表演梦想,还交到真朋友,
升华主题,表达对这次活动的难忘之情与深刻感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①joined together 聚在一起
②encouraged us to 鼓励我们去……
③satisfied with 对…… 感到满意
④Thanks to 多亏,由于
[高分句型]
①In the past three years, there have been many colorful activities in our school(. There be 句型的
现在完成时态)
②To make it successful, we spent several weekends practising.(动词不定式作目的状语)
B
“‘班超’来了!邀你来接力!”……春天的操场热闹非凡, 各校的班级超级联赛持续上演,
同学们纷纷燃动起运动的激情与青春的活力。
假设你是李华,你校英语社团的公众号正在做“班级超级联赛我参与”的系列推送。请
你用英语给公众号留言, 谈谈你们学校举办了什么体育比赛, 你做了什么以及你的收获。
提示词语: basketball, take part in, cheer on, strong, teamwork
提示问题:
●What matches did your school hold
●What did you do
●What have you learned from the matches
I’m Li Hua from Class 1, Grade 9.
_____________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________
____________
【答案】
I’m Li Hua from Class 1, Grade 9. This term our school held a lot of matches, such as
basketball, football, table tennis and so on. My classmates and I were very excited. I joined the
class basketball team. And we spent about an hour practicing basketball every day. During the
matches, I worked hard with my teammates. And we helped and supported each other. Moreover,
my classmates cheered us on all the time. Even though we didn’t win the first prize, all of us were
happy because we tried our best. We all worked hard and had a great time.
These matches not only made our bodies stronger but also enriched our school life. What’s
more, from these matches, I realized the importance of teamwork.
【难度】0.4
【知识点】文体活动、个人经历
【详解】【总体分析】
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,主要讲述学校举办班级超级联赛以及个人的参与经历和收获;
②时态:全文以一般过去时为主,结尾部分使用现在完成时和一般现在时;
③提示:涵盖所有提示要点并适当发挥,内容完整,语言流畅,无语法和拼写错误 。
【写作步骤】
第一步,开篇点明身份与背景,接着介绍学校举办班级超级联赛的背景,引出下文对比赛相
关内容的描述,快速切入主题;
第二步,详细叙述比赛相关内容,生动展现比赛过程中的团队氛围和个人努力,虽未获奖但
强调尽力后的快乐,使内容真实且富有情感;
第三步,总结比赛收获,升华文章主题,使留言不仅是经历的分享,更有思想的提炼。
【亮点词汇】
①excited 兴奋的
②supported 支持
③enriched 丰富
【高分句型】
①Even though we didn’t win the first prize, all of us were happy because we tried our best.(Even
though 引导让步状语从句以及 because 引导原因状语从句)
②These matches not only made our bodies stronger but also enriched our school life.(使用“not
only...but also...”结构)
C
旅游已经走进了我们的生活。每年假期,越来越多的人们走出家门,外出旅游。但与
此同时,我们更应该注意自己的言行举止,做到文明旅游。请你就此话题写一篇短文,号召
全体同学文明出游。
要点:
1.在车站或机场,排队等候;
2.公共场合不大声喧哗;
3.禁止乱写乱画,带走垃圾并扔进垃圾桶(dustbin);
4.遵守规则,如果不允许拍照,就不要拍照;
5.如果做到这些,我相信……
写作要求:
1.不得使用真实姓名和学校名;
2.包含以上所有要点,可适当增加细节,使内容充实,行文连贯;
3.字迹工整,语言精练,表达准确,条理清楚;
4.词数 80 词左右。(开头已给出,不计入总词数。)
Boys and girls,
As more and more people would like to travel in the holiday, we hope everyone can show
good manners during the trip. Here is some advice for all of us.____________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Boys and girls,
As more and more people would like to travel in the holiday, we hope everyone can show
good manners during the trip. Here is some advice for all of us.
Firstly, always wait in line at stations or airports. When we are on a bus, we should give our
seats to the old or the woman with a child. Secondly, keep quiet in public places. Thirdly, never
draw on walls and remember to put rubbish into dustbins. Besides, follow the rules strictly—if
photos are not allowed, don’t take them. If everyone does these, I believe our trips will be more
enjoyable and we’ll leave beautiful places to future generations.
Let’s be civilized travelers together!
【难度】0.4
【知识点】旅行、守则、意见/建议
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要注意不要遗漏材料中的内容,并适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,具体阐述写作内容,在旅游时要遵守哪些规则;
第二步,介绍如果做到这些,会有什么结果;
第三步,书写结语,呼吁大家共同努力,让旅行更文明。
[亮点词汇]
①wait in line 排队
②keep quiet 保持安静
[高分句型]
①When we are on a bus, we should give our seats to the old or the woman with a child.(when 引
导的时间状语从句)
②If everyone does these, I believe our trips will be more enjoyable and we’ll leave beautiful
places to future generations.(if 引导的条件状语从句)