书面表达
备战 2025 年中考英语新课标（核心素养）二轮复习之优秀
生拔高重难题型特训
【预测分析】
一、核心重难点分析
1、语言准确性
语法与拼写错误：主谓一致、时态混乱（如过去完成时误用）、冠词缺失（如“play piano”
漏“the”）是高频扣分点。
中式英语表达：如“I very like it”（应改为“I like it very much”）或“make a speech”（正确为
“deliver a speech”）。
2、结构逻辑与连贯性
段落衔接生硬：缺乏过渡词（如 however/therefore），导致逻辑断裂。
论据不足：议论文仅用“First...Second...”但缺乏具体案例支撑（如环保议题未结合安徽本土
数据）。
3、文化表达与本土化内容
文化负载词误用：如“京剧—Peking Opera”拼写错误，或“黄山松—Huangshan Pine”未加连字
符。
跨文化对比：需平衡中西文化差异（如节日习俗），避免刻板印象（如将春节仅描述为“eat
dumplings”）。
4、创意与个性化表达
观点同质化：议论文论点雷同（如“AI 利大于弊”缺乏辩证分析），需结合个人经历或社会
热点提出独特见解。
情感表达单一：记叙文情感描写单薄（如仅用“happy”而忽略“proud/relieved”）。
二、解题步骤与技巧
1、审题与立意（5 分钟）
圈划关键词：明确题目要求（如体裁、话题、对象）及情感倾向（如“描述一次难忘经历”）。
确定文体：应用文（书信/通知）需注意格式（称呼、结尾敬语），议论文需明确论点（如“是
否支持在线学习”）。
2、列提纲与框架（5 分钟）
三段式结构：
引言：背景+观点（1-2 句）；
主体：分论点+支撑细节（2-3 句/段）；
结论：总结+呼吁/建议（1-2 句）。
记叙文要素：时间线（过去/现在/未来）、人物关系、情感变化（如“挫折→成长”）。
3、写作与语言优化（15 分钟）
高级词汇替换：
基础词→升级词：good→beneficial, think→argue。
复杂句型应用：
定语从句：Students who participate in volunteering gain practical skills.
条件句：If AI is properly regulated, it will revolutionize education。
4、检查与修改（5 分钟）
重点检查：主谓一致、时态统一、冠词/介词。
格式错误：书信缺少“Dear...”或“Yours sincerely”。
三、2025 年命题趋势预测
1、话题预测
环保类：碳中和行动倡议（如“低碳生活”）、安徽本土生态保护（如巢湖治理措施）。
科技类：人工智能对学习/生活的影响（利弊分析）。
文化类：非遗传承（如徽派建筑技艺、黄梅戏创新）。
社会热点：青少年心理健康、双减政策下的校园活动。
2、题型预测
应用文：占比约 40%，侧重书信（建议信/感谢信）、通知（活动安排）。
议论文：占比约 35%，要求观点对比（如“线上学习 vs 线下学习”）或问题解决型（如“如
何缓解学业压力”）。
图画/图表作文：占比约 25%，需描述图表数据并分析趋势（如“安徽中学生阅读习惯调查”）。
3、能力考查重点
语言综合运用：语法精准性（如时态、从句）与词汇丰富性（同义替换）。
批判性思维：议论文需辩证分析（如“AI 的利弊”需兼顾正反观点）。
文化意识：本土文化词汇（如“文房四宝”）及跨文化对比（如中西节日差异）。
四、备考建议
1、高频素材积累
模板句式：
开头：With the development of..., ... has become a hot topic.
结尾：In conclusion, it is essential to...。
主题词汇：环保类（recyclable, emission）、科技类（innovation, sustainable）。
2、真题训练与复盘
限时模拟：每篇书面表达限时 25 分钟，强化速度与结构规划。
错题归类：按错误类型（语法/逻辑/词汇）整理，针对性强化。
3、长难句与文化表达专项
长难句拆解：标注主句、从句（如定语从句中的关系代词“which/that”）。
本土文化翻译：练习翻译安徽特色词汇（如“黄山迎客松”→“Huangshan Welcoming Guests
Pine”）。
总结：2025 年安徽中考书面表达将延续对语言准确性、逻辑连贯性及文化意识的考查，考
生需通过“审题-提纲-写作-优化”的闭环训练，重点突破本土化命题与复合句应用，强化高频
话题素材积累及批判性思维训练。
【基础试题】
A
时光如梭，初中三年的学习生活转瞬即逝。在这三年中，我们的个人素养在各个方面
都有了很大的提升。请根据图表提示，从三个方面中选择一个方面，谈谈自己的收获及感悟。
注意：
1. 词数 100 左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 文中请勿提及真实的校名及姓名。
Time flies! My three-year journey in junior high school is coming to an end. Looking back,
I realize that_____________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
B
在学校里，有人认为学生应该自己选择座位，有人认为老师安排座位更合适。你更赞
同哪一种方式？校刊英语专栏正在以“Let students pick their seats or let teachers assign seats ”
为题开展征文活动，请你根据写作要求，结合自身实际，从以下两种方式中任选其一，用英
语写一篇短文，陈述你的理由，向校刊投稿。
Let students pick their seats Let teachers assign (分配) seats
☆feel more comfortable and ☆make friends with those who have different
relaxed abilities and characters
☆feel trusted by teachers ☆avoid distractions (干扰)
要求：
1）文中须包含所选方式的要点提示，可适当发挥；
2）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
3）词数 100 左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
Let students pick their seats or let teachers assign seats
Some students like to pick their own seats in the classroom while others believe that
teachers should assign seats.________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
C
生活在现代化社会的我们感受到了科技发展日新月异，尤其是 ChatGPT 和最近
DeepSeek 的出现使人工智能 AI (artificial intelligence) 一度成为热门话题，同时也引发了人
们对于人工智能取代人类的担忧。
写作要点：
1. 告诉人们不必过于担心人工智能的发展；
2. 列举人工智能发展带来的好处 (至少两点)，并举例说明；
3. 谈谈你对未来人工智能发展的期待。
要求：
1. 短文应包括以上所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 短文中不能出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息；
3. 词数 100 词左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
The invention of ChatGPT and DeepSeek has made AI a hot topic among people in our
society.________________________________________________________________________
_
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
【提升试题】
A
假如你叫李华，上周六，你参加了你们社区举办的以“Protect Our Mother River”为主题
的户外公益活动。请根据以下提示，向你的英国笔友 David 写封信介绍一下此次活动的安排
及意义。
Where&When Yellow River National Wetland Park, 8:00 a.m.
How By bus
1. planted some trees and flowers;
Activities 2. cleaned up the park;
3. ……（至少再补充一项活动内容）
1. realized the importance of protecting the environment; Meaning
2. ……（至少再补充一点）
写作要求：
1.信件内容必须包括所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；
3.词数 80 词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear David,
How’s everything going I’m so glad to tell you about the volunteering activity our
community held last Saturday.______________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
What kind of volunteer work do you often do in you country I’m looking forward to your
reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
B
近来，国家卫生健康委员会提出实施“体重管理年”三年行动计划，旨在普及健康生活
方式，加强慢性病防治。作为中学生，我们该如何科学管理体重呢？请结合自身情况，写一
篇英语短文，给校英文报投稿，谈谈你的具体计划和理由。
注意：字数 80~100。开头已给，不计入总词数。文中不得出现个人信息。
The Three-Year Action Plan for Weight Management
Present Situation healthy/overweight/underweight…
a healthy diet/do sports/ healthy Changes and Plans
habits…
Importance of the Action live a healthy life…
Recently, our government carried out a policy called The Three-Year Action Plan for
Weight Management. _____________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
C
假设你是白冰，为庆祝“春节”被列入联合国教科文组织人类非物质文化遗产代表作名
录，你校英文网正在开展以“The Spring Festival in My Eyes”为主题的征文活动，请你用英语
写一篇短文并投稿，介绍你的春节经历和收获。
https://www.
“The Spring Festival in My Eyes” Story SharingWe call on all middle school students (Grades 7-9)
to share the special Spring Festival experiences online.
· What did you do during the Spring Festival
· Why is the Spring Festival important to you and your family
· What have you learned from the experience
Hope all of you join in the activity and enjoy storytelling together!
参考词汇：the Spring Festival, red envelope, visit relatives, family reunion dinner
要求：
1.投稿必须包含网站发布的要点信息，选择使用参考词汇，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.文章中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4.词数：不少于 70。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数。）
The Spring Festival in My Eyes
The Spring Festival is the happiest time for me. ___________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
【拔高试题】
A
青春正是奋斗的大好时光。在你的初中生活中，你曾为了什么而拼搏奋斗 通过奋斗，
你获得了怎样的感悟 请你以 “Youth Is a Good Time for Fighting（奋斗）” 为题，用英语写
一篇短文，分享一次你奋斗的经历，并分享它给你带来的感悟。
要求：
1. 根据所给题目，写一篇短文，词数不少于 80；
2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；
3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；
4. 请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
B
上周，你校举办了学校开放日。当天，你作为志愿者出色地完成了任务。请你根据以
下思维导图内容提示写一篇短文，向学校宣传部投稿，回顾此次开放日的情况。
注意：
（1）可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。
（2） 词数 80 词左右。
（3）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
The School Open Day
Last week, our school held an Open Day.________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
C
今年全国两会期间，国家卫健委主任雷海潮表示，将持续推进“体重管理年”行动，这一
度让“减肥”成为社会热议的焦点。为持续推进“体重管理年”三年行动，普及健康生活方式，
学校团委也开展了“运动使生活更美好”为主题的英语演讲比赛。假如你是李华，请你紧扣主
题，利用所给信息，完成一篇演讲稿，代表班级去参加本次演讲比赛。
写作要点：
1. 你对运动的看法；
2. 推荐两到三种适合中学生的运动项目；
3. 运动对青少年的生活和学习的影响。
写作要求：
1. 写作内容必须包括所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；
3. 词数 80 左右 (演讲的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
Good morning, dear teachers and schoolmates. I’m Li Hua from Class 4, Grade 8. It’s my
honor to be here to share my speech with you. _________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thanks for your listening.书面表达
备战 2025 年中考英语新课标（核心素养）二轮复习之优秀
生拔高重难题型特训
【预测分析】
一、核心重难点分析
1、语言准确性
语法与拼写错误：主谓一致、时态混乱（如过去完成时误用）、冠词缺失（如“play piano”
漏“the”）是高频扣分点。
中式英语表达：如“I very like it”（应改为“I like it very much”）或“make a speech”（正确为
“deliver a speech”）。
2、结构逻辑与连贯性
段落衔接生硬：缺乏过渡词（如 however/therefore），导致逻辑断裂。
论据不足：议论文仅用“First...Second...”但缺乏具体案例支撑（如环保议题未结合安徽本土
数据）。
3、文化表达与本土化内容
文化负载词误用：如“京剧—Peking Opera”拼写错误，或“黄山松—Huangshan Pine”未加连字
符。
跨文化对比：需平衡中西文化差异（如节日习俗），避免刻板印象（如将春节仅描述为“eat
dumplings”）。
4、创意与个性化表达
观点同质化：议论文论点雷同（如“AI 利大于弊”缺乏辩证分析），需结合个人经历或社会
热点提出独特见解。
情感表达单一：记叙文情感描写单薄（如仅用“happy”而忽略“proud/relieved”）。
二、解题步骤与技巧
1、审题与立意（5 分钟）
圈划关键词：明确题目要求（如体裁、话题、对象）及情感倾向（如“描述一次难忘经历”）。
确定文体：应用文（书信/通知）需注意格式（称呼、结尾敬语），议论文需明确论点（如“是
否支持在线学习”）。
2、列提纲与框架（5 分钟）
三段式结构：
引言：背景+观点（1-2 句）；
主体：分论点+支撑细节（2-3 句/段）；
结论：总结+呼吁/建议（1-2 句）。
记叙文要素：时间线（过去/现在/未来）、人物关系、情感变化（如“挫折→成长”）。
3、写作与语言优化（15 分钟）
高级词汇替换：
基础词→升级词：good→beneficial, think→argue。
复杂句型应用：
定语从句：Students who participate in volunteering gain practical skills.
条件句：If AI is properly regulated, it will revolutionize education。
4、检查与修改（5 分钟）
重点检查：主谓一致、时态统一、冠词/介词。
格式错误：书信缺少“Dear...”或“Yours sincerely”。
三、2025 年命题趋势预测
1、话题预测
环保类：碳中和行动倡议（如“低碳生活”）、安徽本土生态保护（如巢湖治理措施）。
科技类：人工智能对学习/生活的影响（利弊分析）。
文化类：非遗传承（如徽派建筑技艺、黄梅戏创新）。
社会热点：青少年心理健康、双减政策下的校园活动。
2、题型预测
应用文：占比约 40%，侧重书信（建议信/感谢信）、通知（活动安排）。
议论文：占比约 35%，要求观点对比（如“线上学习 vs 线下学习”）或问题解决型（如“如
何缓解学业压力”）。
图画/图表作文：占比约 25%，需描述图表数据并分析趋势（如“安徽中学生阅读习惯调查”）。
3、能力考查重点
语言综合运用：语法精准性（如时态、从句）与词汇丰富性（同义替换）。
批判性思维：议论文需辩证分析（如“AI 的利弊”需兼顾正反观点）。
文化意识：本土文化词汇（如“文房四宝”）及跨文化对比（如中西节日差异）。
四、备考建议
1、高频素材积累
模板句式：
开头：With the development of..., ... has become a hot topic.
结尾：In conclusion, it is essential to...。
主题词汇：环保类（recyclable, emission）、科技类（innovation, sustainable）。
2、真题训练与复盘
限时模拟：每篇书面表达限时 25 分钟，强化速度与结构规划。
错题归类：按错误类型（语法/逻辑/词汇）整理，针对性强化。
3、长难句与文化表达专项
长难句拆解：标注主句、从句（如定语从句中的关系代词“which/that”）。
本土文化翻译：练习翻译安徽特色词汇（如“黄山迎客松”→“Huangshan Welcoming Guests
Pine”）。
总结：2025 年安徽中考书面表达将延续对语言准确性、逻辑连贯性及文化意识的考查，考
生需通过“审题-提纲-写作-优化”的闭环训练，重点突破本土化命题与复合句应用，强化高频
话题素材积累及批判性思维训练。
【基础试题】
A
时光如梭，初中三年的学习生活转瞬即逝。在这三年中，我们的个人素养在各个方面
都有了很大的提升。请根据图表提示，从三个方面中选择一个方面，谈谈自己的收获及感悟。
注意：
1. 词数 100 左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 文中请勿提及真实的校名及姓名。
Time flies! My three-year journey in junior high school is coming to an end. Looking back,
I realize that_____________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Time flies! My three-year journey in junior high school is coming to an end. Looking back,
I realize that I have gained a lot in terms of personal growth. One significant aspect is my ability
to communicate effectively with others.
During these years, I have learned the importance of communication in both academic and
social settings. Through group projects and class discussions, I have improved my listening and
speaking skills. I have also learned to express my ideas clearly and respectfully, which has helped
me build strong relationships with my classmates and teachers. Moreover, I have become more
confident in public speaking. Participating in school debates and presentations has taught me how
to organize my thoughts and deliver them confidently. This skill will be invaluable as I move
forward in my education and future career.
In conclusion, the ability to communicate effectively is a key skill I have developed in
junior high school. It has not only enhanced my academic performance but also prepared me for
future challenges. I am grateful for the opportunities I have had to grow in this area.
【难度】0.85
【知识点】个人信息、个人经历
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态：时态主要为“现在完成时”和“一般现在时”。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的每一项提示，适当添加细节，
并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步：承接给出的开头，点明自己在人际交往方面得到了提升；
第二步：介绍自己在人际交往方面的进步及体现；
第三步：写出总结。
[亮点词汇]
①in terms of 就……而言
②participating in 参加
③in conclusion 总之
[高分句型]
①I have also learned to express my ideas clearly and respectfully, which has helped me build
strong relationships with my classmates and teachers. (which 引导的非限制性定语从句)
②Participating in school debates and presentations has taught me how to organize my thoughts
and deliver them confidently. (动名词作主语)
B
在学校里，有人认为学生应该自己选择座位，有人认为老师安排座位更合适。你更赞
同哪一种方式？校刊英语专栏正在以“Let students pick their seats or let teachers assign seats ”
为题开展征文活动，请你根据写作要求，结合自身实际，从以下两种方式中任选其一，用英
语写一篇短文，陈述你的理由，向校刊投稿。
Let students pick their seats Let teachers assign (分配) seats
☆feel more comfortable and ☆make friends with those who have different
relaxed abilities and characters
☆feel trusted by teachers ☆avoid distractions (干扰)
要求：
1）文中须包含所选方式的要点提示，可适当发挥；
2）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
3）词数 100 左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
Let students pick their seats or let teachers assign seats
Some students like to pick their own seats in the classroom while others believe that
teachers should assign seats.________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Let students pick their seats or let teachers assign seats
Some students like to pick their own seats in the classroom while others believe that
teachers should assign seats.
As for me, I prefer letting teachers assign seats to us. The main reason is that students can
communicate with classmates of different abilities and characters. For example, stronger students
can help those who may find it hard to get good grades. In this case, they can develop a sense of
teamwork. Secondly, assigned seating also helps to avoid distractions. Friends sitting together
may chat and make some noise instead of paying attention to the lesson. By placing students in
this way, they can keep quiet and listen carefully. Lastly, assigned seating is good for children’s
social skills. By sitting next to someone unfamiliar, they have the chance to build new friendship.
In conclusion, while some students may hope to choose their own seats, I believe that
having teachers assign seats is more beneficial.
【难度】0.85
【知识点】青少年问题、教育
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇议论文，针对“学生是否应该自己选择座位”这一话题，需要表明个人观
点并给出理由。
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生需从“Let students pick their seats”或“Let teachers assign seats”
两种方式中任选其一，结合自身实际，陈述理由。写作时应注意不要遗漏所选方式的要点提
示，并适当发挥，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。直接点明个人观点，即支持学生自己选择座位或老师安排座位中的
某一种方式。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。针对所选方式，从“个人感受、社交能力、学习环境”等几个方
面重点阐述理由。
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①pick one’s own seats 挑选自己的座位
②assign seats 分配座位
③have a chance to do sth. 有机会做某事
④in this case 在这种情况下
⑤pay attention to 关注
[高分句型]
①The main reason is that students can communicate with classmates of different abilities and
characters. (表语从句)
②Friends sitting together may chat and make some noise instead of paying attention to the lesson.
(现在分词作后置定语)
C
生活在现代化社会的我们感受到了科技发展日新月异，尤其是 ChatGPT 和最近
DeepSeek 的出现使人工智能 AI (artificial intelligence) 一度成为热门话题，同时也引发了人
们对于人工智能取代人类的担忧。
写作要点：
1. 告诉人们不必过于担心人工智能的发展；
2. 列举人工智能发展带来的好处 (至少两点)，并举例说明；
3. 谈谈你对未来人工智能发展的期待。
要求：
1. 短文应包括以上所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 短文中不能出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息；
3. 词数 100 词左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
The invention of ChatGPT and DeepSeek has made AI a hot topic among people in our
society.________________________________________________________________________
_
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
The invention of ChatGPT and DeepSeek has made AI a hot topic among people in our
society. Many people feel worried about the development of AI.
There is no need for people to worry too much about the development of AI. AI will never
completely take the place of human beings. Instead, it has many advantages. First of all, AI can be
used to do dangerous jobs and keep workers safe. If people don’t want to do the same boring and
tiring work day after day, they can ask AI for help. AI can also help a lot in scientific
development. It improves the accuracy of data and helps scientists to do research.
In my opinion, AI is a trend of the world. We will live happily and more conveniently with
the help of it.
【难度】0.85
【知识点】发明与创造、科学技术、意见/建议
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息，考生结合自身经历，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，直接表明人们不必过度担忧人工智能发展，强调其不会完全取代人类，接着从三个
方面列举优势；
第三步，表达自己对人工智能的总体看法，升华主题。
[亮点词汇]
①the development of……的发展
②first of all 首先
③in my opinion 在我看来
[高分句型]
If people don’t want to do the same boring and tiring work day after day, they can ask AI for help.
(if 引导的条件状语从句)
【提升试题】
A
假如你叫李华，上周六，你参加了你们社区举办的以“Protect Our Mother River”为主题
的户外公益活动。请根据以下提示，向你的英国笔友 David 写封信介绍一下此次活动的安排
及意义。
Where&When Yellow River National Wetland Park, 8:00 a.m.
How By bus
1. planted some trees and flowers;
Activities 2. cleaned up the park;
3. ……（至少再补充一项活动内容）
1. realized the importance of protecting the environment; Meaning
2. ……（至少再补充一点）
写作要求：
1.信件内容必须包括所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；
3.词数 80 词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear David,
How’s everything going I’m so glad to tell you about the volunteering activity our
community held last Saturday.______________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
What kind of volunteer work do you often do in you country I’m looking forward to your
reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear David,
How’s everything going I’m so glad to tell you about the volunteering activity our
community held last Saturday.
We went to Yellow River National Wetland Park by bus at 8:00 a.m. First, we planted trees
and flowers near the riverbank. Then, we cleaned up the park by picking up litter. After that, we
made posters about river protection and taught visitors how to reduce pollution. Through this
activity, I realized the importance of protecting the environment. Also, working together made our
community closer. It was tiring but meaningful!
What kind of volunteer work do you often do in your country I’m looking forward to your
reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【难度】0.65
【知识点】志愿服务、环境保护
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
② 时态：以一般过去时为主（描述已发生的活动），辅以一般现在时（表达感想和意义）；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生需涵盖表格中的时间、地点、交通方式、活动内容、活动
意义，并补充至少一项活动和意义。需注意行文连贯，避免遗漏关键信息。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图。开篇直接点明活动主题“Protect Our Mother River”和参与情况；
第二步：具体阐述活动内容。按表格提示分点描述地点、交通方式、植树、清理公园、补充
活动（如环保宣传），并说明活动意义（环保意识、社区凝聚力等）；
第三步：书写结语。询问对方国家的志愿活动，表达期待回信的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
① plant trees and flowers 植树种花
② clean up 清理
③ pick up litter 捡垃圾
④ reduce pollution 减少污染
⑤ work together 共同努力
[高分句型]
① Then, we cleaned up the park by picking up litter.（“by+动名词短语”作方式状语）
② After that, we made posters about river protection and taught visitors how to reduce
pollution. （and 连接两个并列动词短语；“how+动词不定式”作宾语补足语）
③ Also, working together made our community closer.（“make sth+形容词”句型）
B
近来，国家卫生健康委员会提出实施“体重管理年”三年行动计划，旨在普及健康生活
方式，加强慢性病防治。作为中学生，我们该如何科学管理体重呢？请结合自身情况，写一
篇英语短文，给校英文报投稿，谈谈你的具体计划和理由。
注意：字数 80~100。开头已给，不计入总词数。文中不得出现个人信息。
The Three-Year Action Plan for Weight Management
Present Situation healthy/overweight/underweight…
a healthy diet/do sports/ healthy Changes and Plans
habits…
Importance of the Action live a healthy life…
Recently, our government carried out a policy called The Three-Year Action Plan for
Weight Management. _____________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Recently, our government carried out a policy called The Three-Year Action Plan for
Weight Management. As a middle school student, I’m a bit overweight. This really affects my
daily life and sports performance.
To change this situation, I’ve made some plans. Firstly, I’ll adjust my diet. I’ll reduce the
intake of junk food like hamburgers and fried chicken, and instead, eat more fruits, vegetables and
whole grains. Secondly, I’ll do sports regularly. I plan to run for half an hour every morning and
play badminton with my friends after school.
Managing weight is of great importance. It helps us build a strong body and develop
healthy habits, which will enable us to live a healthy life.
【难度】0.65
【知识点】计划、健康饮食、健康与运动、青少年问题、减肥
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息，考生结合自身经历，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简要介绍国家卫健委提出的“体重管理年”三年行动计划，引出话题；
第二步，结合自身情况，提出具体的体重管理计划；
第三步，阐述体重管理行动的重要性，升华主题。
[亮点词汇]
①a bit 稍微，有点
②be of great importance……是重要的
③develop healthy habits 培养健康的习惯
[高分句型]
It helps us build a strong body and develop healthy habits, which will enable us to live a healthy
life. (which 引导的定语从句)
C
假设你是白冰，为庆祝“春节”被列入联合国教科文组织人类非物质文化遗产代表作名
录，你校英文网正在开展以“The Spring Festival in My Eyes”为主题的征文活动，请你用英语
写一篇短文并投稿，介绍你的春节经历和收获。
https://www.
“The Spring Festival in My Eyes” Story SharingWe call on all middle school students (Grades 7-9)
to share the special Spring Festival experiences online.
· What did you do during the Spring Festival
· Why is the Spring Festival important to you and your family
· What have you learned from the experience
Hope all of you join in the activity and enjoy storytelling together!
参考词汇：the Spring Festival, red envelope, visit relatives, family reunion dinner
要求：
1.投稿必须包含网站发布的要点信息，选择使用参考词汇，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.文章中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4.词数：不少于 70。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数。）
The Spring Festival in My Eyes
The Spring Festival is the happiest time for me. ___________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
The Spring Festival in My Eyes
The Spring Festival is the happiest time for me. During this special holiday, I did many
interesting things with my family. First, we cleaned the house together to welcome the new year.
Then, we had a big family reunion dinner. We ate delicious food like dumplings and fish, which
symbolize good luck and prosperity. After dinner, I received red envelopes from my grandparents,
which made me very happy.
The Spring Festival is important to me and my family because it is a time for us to get
together and share our love. I have learned that the Spring Festival is not just about having fun, but
also about showing respect and care for our family and traditions.
I really enjoyed this Spring Festival, and I hope to celebrate it in the same way next year!
【难度】0.65
【知识点】庆祝活动、传统节日
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意
上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，具体阐述春节期间所做的事情；
第二步，介绍春节为什么对你和家人很重要；
第三步，最后表达对于春节的感受和收获。
[亮点词汇]
① family reunion dinner 家庭团圆饭
② red envelope 红包
③ get together 聚在一起
[高分句型]
① We ate delicious food like dumplings and fish, which symbolize good luck and prosperity.
（which 引导的非限制性定语从句）
② I have learned that the Spring Festival is not just about having fun, but also about showing
respect and care for our family and traditions.（that 引导的宾语从句）
【拔高试题】
A
青春正是奋斗的大好时光。在你的初中生活中，你曾为了什么而拼搏奋斗 通过奋斗，
你获得了怎样的感悟 请你以 “Youth Is a Good Time for Fighting（奋斗）” 为题，用英语写
一篇短文，分享一次你奋斗的经历，并分享它给你带来的感悟。
要求：
1. 根据所给题目，写一篇短文，词数不少于 80；
2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；
3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；
4. 请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Youth Is a Good Time for Fighting
Youth is full of hope, and it’s the best time to fight for our dreams. In my second year of
middle school, I decided to improve my English.
I used to be afraid to speak in class and made many mistakes in writing. I worked hard
every day. I read English stories, listened to English songs, and practiced speaking with my
classmates. Slowly, I became more confident. In the final exam, I got a much better grade than
before. I was so proud of myself!
Through this experience, I learned that nothing is impossible if you are brave and work
hard. Youth is short, so we should fight for what we believe in.
【难度】0.4
【知识点】哲理感悟、情感、个人经历
【详解】［总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：提示内容已给出，可适当增加细节。
［写作步骤］
第一步，开篇点题，强调青春是奋斗的黄金时期；
第二步，介绍自己的个人经历；
第三步，总结感悟。
［亮点词汇］
①be full of 充满
②used to 过去常常，曾经
③be proud of 以……为傲
［高分句型］
①Youth is full of hope, and it’s the best time to fight for our dreams. (it 特殊句型)
②Through this experience, I learned that nothing is impossible if you are brave and work hard.
(that 宾语从句)
B
上周，你校举办了学校开放日。当天，你作为志愿者出色地完成了任务。请你根据以
下思维导图内容提示写一篇短文，向学校宣传部投稿，回顾此次开放日的情况。
注意：
（1）可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。
（2） 词数 80 词左右。
（3）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
The School Open Day
Last week, our school held an Open Day.________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
The School Open Day
Last week, our school held an Open Day. A variety of activities were organized to
showcase the school’s features. There was an exhibition of students’ artworks, where paintings
and handicrafts were displayed, showing the creativity of students. Also, a science experiment
show was carried out, which attracted many visitors.
As a volunteer, I was busy but fulfilled. I guided parents and guests around the campus,
answering their questions patiently. When they showed great interest in our school, I felt proud. I
also helped with the exhibition, introducing the artworks to the visitors.
This Open Day was a great opportunity for our school to communicate with the outside. I’m
glad I could contribute to it and I hope there will be more such activities in the future.
【难度】0.4
【知识点】社团/俱乐部、志愿服务、文体活动
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要为 “一般过去时”；
③提示：文章完整涵盖了学校开放日活动的介绍、作者作为志愿者的经历和感受以及对开放
日活动的总结评价，内容要点齐全，且通过具体细节生动展现活动过程与个人体验。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点明主题，介绍学校举办了开放日活动，并阐述学校组织了各类展示特色的活
动，如学生艺术作品展览和科学实验展示，清晰阐述写作背景；
第二步，详细叙述自己作为志愿者的经历，包括引导家长和客人参观校园、耐心解答问题、
协助展览并介绍艺术作品，突出个人在活动中的参与和感受；
第三步，总结开放日活动的意义，表明这是学校与外界交流的良好契机，表达自己为活动做
出贡献的喜悦之情以及对未来更多此类活动的期待，对整个事件进行了评价和展望。
[亮点词汇]
①a variety of 各种各样的
②showcase 展示
③carry out 开展
④contribute to 为……做贡献
[高分句型]
①There was an exhibition of students’ artworks, where paintings and handicrafts were displayed,
showing the creativity of students. (where 引导定语从句，现在分词短语作结果状语)
②I guided parents and guests around the campus, answering their questions patiently. (现在分词
短语作伴随状语)
C
今年全国两会期间，国家卫健委主任雷海潮表示，将持续推进“体重管理年”行动，这一
度让“减肥”成为社会热议的焦点。为持续推进“体重管理年”三年行动，普及健康生活方式，
学校团委也开展了“运动使生活更美好”为主题的英语演讲比赛。假如你是李华，请你紧扣主
题，利用所给信息，完成一篇演讲稿，代表班级去参加本次演讲比赛。
写作要点：
1. 你对运动的看法；
2. 推荐两到三种适合中学生的运动项目；
3. 运动对青少年的生活和学习的影响。
写作要求：
1. 写作内容必须包括所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；
3. 词数 80 左右 (演讲的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
Good morning, dear teachers and schoolmates. I’m Li Hua from Class 4, Grade 8. It’s my
honor to be here to share my speech with you. _________________________________________
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That’s all. Thanks for your listening.
【答案】
Good morning, dear teachers and schoolmates. I’m Li Hua from Class 4, Grade 8. It’s my
honor to be here to share my speech with you.
As students, we need sports to keep fit, and there are different kinds of sports that we can
do after class. As for me, I highly recommend jogging because it improves health and requires no
special equipment or specific location. Jogging for half an hour daily is enough. Another favorite
of mine is football. It’s so exciting that my friends and I often play it after school.
There is no doubt that doing sports is helpful to us. We can not only build strong bodies but
also keep ourselves healthy. What’s more, sports help reduce stress and relax our minds.
Additionally, we make new friends while exercising.
Let’s do more sports, stay active, and enjoy a healthier, happier life together!
That’s all. Thanks for your listening.
【难度】0.4
【知识点】健康与运动、意见/建议
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点和开头结尾部分已给出，应注意要求中的内容，充实细节，并突出写作重
点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头进行问候和自我介绍，表明演讲主题；
第二步，阐述学生需要运动保持健康，并结合自身经历说明运动的益处；
第三步，结尾呼吁大家积极参与运动，并结束演讲表达感谢。
[亮点词汇]
①keep fit 保持健康
②recommend 推荐
③specific 特定的
④reduce stress 减轻压力
⑤additionally 此外
[高分句型]
① As students, we need sports to keep fit, and there are different kinds of sports that we can do
after class. (that 引导的定语从句)
② As for me, I highly recommend jogging because it improves health and requires no special
equipment or specific location. (because 引导的原因状语从句)
