高考英语考前押题卷 读后续写
一.书面表达(共15小题)
1.(2023秋 东莞市期末) Have you ever felt the need to grab a pen and start writing your thoughts on a piece of paper?Tom had always been a lover of stories,and of words that come together to create vivid imagery (意象).He would spend hours writing down his thoughts and ideas,crafting worlds and people with his pen and paper.
But when it came to his parents,they didn't believe how much he enjoyed writing.In fact,they discouraged him,telling him that he should focus on more practical career fields like becoming a lawyer.
The annual writing competition arrived once again,which was a time to show creative writing as well as the vivid imagination of students.Although Tom had a burning passion for writing,he had always hesitated to enter the race.He was worried that his parents would disapprove of him spending so much time writing,leading him to miss the competition in previous years.But this time,he decided to take a chance and see if he could win this race.Perhaps if his parents saw how talented he truly was,they would come to support him.
Days passed as he carefully prepared his writing,pouring his heart and soul into every word.When he finished,he read it over and felt proud of what he had written.He prepared to hand in his writing,but his parents still believed he was wasting time.He still decided to submit his entry anyway.
Weeks went by before the contest's results were announced.Tom waited anxiously,wondering if his writing was good enough to win a prize.He checked out his mailbox every day after school.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Finally,the day arrived and the winners were announced.
Just then,the door opened and Tom's parents returned home from work.
2.(2023春 凉州区校级期中)读后续写阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Caught in"the Web"!
Dave and Kelly loved their computer.Their parents got it for them a couple of months ago,and they had taught their kids how to use it.They bought some computer games for the kids to play and connected the computer to the Internet.The kids loved going on the Internet and visiting websites.They got to do research for their homework,play games,print colouring pages and read stories.They also got to email their friends and even chat with other kids,after getting their parents' permission.
Because the kids liked the Internet so much,they would finish their homework,and then go to surf the Internet.Very often,they didn't feel the passage of time and found themselves almost falling asleep in front of the computer screen.
One day they stayed up late surfing the Internet after they were done with their homework.They watched a video about a science fiction story,which described two alien species hunting human information,because aliens had a wicked intention to conquer the Earth.The species coming from a distance tried to collect every aspect of data about humans,but in vain.They were detected and driven away by watchful humans.After a while they started getting tired and they were almost falling asleep.While they were in the twilight between being asleep and being awake,they felt a strong suction coming from the computer screen.It felt like a huge vacuum cleaner!
By now,they were fully awake,but when they looked around,they did not see their living room anymore.Instead,they were drawn into the computer itself by that mysterious power.They were surrounded by a complex system of tubes and small boxes and columns.They were all in different shapes,such as being tall,short,wide,narrow,round,square,etc.More strangely,they all felt a little warm and some even were shining with real,blue or orange light.They saw themselves floating in a long tube with speeding chunks of alphabets,numbers,images and sounds.They were INSIDE the computer!
注意:续写词数应为150左右。
Their dream came true and they decided to let loose and drift along the long tubes and have some fun.
But after a few days they started missing something and that was the feel of love.
3.(2019 黄浦区一模)Directions:Read the following passage.Summarize the main idea and the main point(s) of the passage in no more than 60 words.Use your own words as far as possible.
Sport Tourism
Tourism is the world's largest industry and is predicted to grow well into the years to come.Increasingly,the economic importance of tourism has been recognized by governments around the world.At the same time,the tourism industry has become more complicated in its development and marketing new forms of tourism.One of the fastest growing parts of the tourism industry is travel related to sport and physical activity.A recent survey found that while the traditional beach and sight﹣seeing vacations continue to predominate,22% of those surveyed reported that opportunities to participate in sports were important when selecting a vacation.
The term sport tourism has been adopted in recent years to describe sport﹣related leisure travel.It is generally recognized that three are three broad categories of sport tourism.The first category.Watching sporting events or Sports Event Tourism includes hallmark events such as FIFA World Cup Football Championships,and the Olympic games.Tournament sponsored by the Professional Golf Association or the World Tennis Association are also part of the spectator﹣centered sector of sport tourism.
The second type of sport tourism,celebrity and nostalgia sport tourism involves visiting famous sports﹣related attractions.Visits of the sports halls of fame fall into this category.Another form of celebrity and nostalgia sport tourism that has emerged in recent years is meeting famous sports personalities.The cruise industry has been experienced in this area.Sports theme cruise such as "the NBA basketball cruise" arrange for passengers to meet personalities from sports while on board.
Active participation is the third category of sports tourism.This is composed of individuals who travel to participate in golf,skiing,and tennis in particular,although other sports such as fishing,and scuba diving are popular in the US.
4.(2023秋 宁波期末) Through the dining room window,the rays of the setting sun glowed orange and gold.It looked like a huge traditional lantern(灯笼)lit in the sky for the whole world to see,as Ramadan(斋月),the Muslim(穆斯林)holy month,came to an end.
During Ramadan,Muslim children dance in the streets,swinging traditional lanterns of all sizes.This year,Ayasha's grandparents in Egypt had sent a lantern to Kamil,Ayasha's younger brother.Kamil's lantern was bright blue,with a battery﹣powered flashing light instead of a candle.Ever since Kamil had opened the package,he had been joyously swinging(旋转)his flashing lantern.
"His lantern is really just a holiday toy," Ayasha said to herself as she watched him, "My lantern is special,something I want to keep forever".Her lantern,made of beautiful shiny glass,was a loving touch of home.Her grandparents had sent it to her when her family moved to America for her dad's new engineering job.Ayasha smiled proudly as she lit the candle inside her lantern.
Tomorrow would be a day for celebration—for wearing new clothes to morning prayers(祷告)for sharing gifts and sweet treats and for showing love to family and friends.Ayasha couldn't wait.
"Time for dinner!The food smells delicious!" Dad announced. "My favorite cake!" Kamil cried excitedly,swinging his lantern in circles. "Be careful,Kamil!" Mom cried and carefully avoided the swinging lantern as she carried a large bowl of soup to the table.But Kamil was too excited to calm down.The blue light kept swinging until unfortunately,he knocked into Mom.His lantern fell onto the sofa and was intact(完好无损的),but the bowl Mom was holding fell to the floor,spilling(洒)he soup and sending broken pieces everywhere!
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1:
To make things worse,Kamil stumbled(绊倒)against the table,knocking over Ayasha's glass lantern.______
Paragraph 2:
Ayasha opened the door and saw Kamil standing there with his most﹣treasured lantern.______
5.(2025 广宁县模拟) In our weekly staff meeting,our editor Ashley was not pleased with the quality of our reporting."Our readership is way down.We need better stories for this Thursday's school newspaper.Does anybody have any ideas?"she said.
I handed her my article about our basketball team beating Deerfield High School the previous night by one point."Sports stories are fun,"she said,"but not good enough for the front page.We need something to really get people's attention."
After our meeting,we left the newsroom together and heard someone screaming,"Perry is missing!"Perry was a big red parrot and had been our school mascot(吉祥物) for ten years.He played an important role in students"lives,both in and out of class.He had also been a constant presence at school events,inspiring a sense of unity among students.
Everyone gathered around Perry's empty cage,heartbroken.Suddenly,a student from the crowd came over and showed me a photo. "You're a reporter for the school paper,right?I happened to take this yesterday,"he said.In the photo was a Deerfield High School basketball player with something large hidden under his shirt around the size of a parrot.
"He must have stolen Perry to get back at us for winning the game!"Ashley cried.We hurried back to the newsroom,agreeing to run the photo on the front page with the headline "Deerfield Stole Perry.""This is just the story we need.Everyone will read it,"Ashley said confidently.
After she left,I took a closer look at the photo.The clock in the background read 4:15 pm,but our game against Deerfield hadn't started until 4:30 pm.Why would the boy have taken Perry before we even played?An uneasy feeling came over me that we might have falsely accused someone.
I went to Perry's usual caretaker to ask if he knew Perry was missing."He's not missing.He's retired.He's ready for some quieter days,"he said.Learning the truth,I immediately told Ashley and suggested writing a story to say goodbye to Perry.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
To my surprise,Ashley insisted on reporting the "Deerfield Stole Perry" story.______
On Thursday,the paper came out with the headline "Bye﹣Bye,Perry" on the front page.______
6.(2024秋 吉林期末) When Jaron Casillas was very young,his parents discovered that he saw the world a bit differently:a Texas sunrise for example.
One morning,Jaron's mom was driving him to school beneath an especially spectacular Texas sunrise.She heard his little voice from the car seat behind her say, " Look,Mommy!Look at the beautiful green sunshine!" She turned to look at it.The rising sun was so beautiful,flooding the earth with warmth and red light.However,Jaron's mom was about to cry." Oh dear,my poor boy," she thought.
Without delay,the parents rushed Jaron to the hospital for a check﹣ up,which turned out to be color blindness.
On that fateful day,Jaron's parents were shocked to learn that their son was color blind —a condition that affects a person's ability to see colors in the same way as others.There is no cure,but special glasses can help individuals like Jaron distinguish between different colors.Unfortunately,these glasses are often too expensive for most families to afford.
The parents were sad,but Jaron remained calm and even comforted his parents.He saw his condition as something special and decided to keep it a secret.However,his silence caused him to feel left out when others talked about colors.
One day,during a class discussion,the teacher,Christina Hayes,asked the students to share a secret about themselves.Working up his courage,Jaron revealed his condition to his classmates,explaining that he saw gray instead of colors like purple,green,and blue.When the teacher asked if there was anything that could help him,Jaron mentioned the special glasses,but noted that they were too expensive for his family.
Hearing Jaron's words,the teacher fought back tears and praised the boy for his bravery.The other students looked at Jaron with newfound understanding and empathy.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1:After class,Jaron's classmates privately approached Hayes.
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Paragraph 2:Seeing the special glasses,Jaron was puzzled.
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7.(2024秋 辛集市期末)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I am a mother of three and have recently completed my college degree.
The last class had to take was Sociology(社会学).The teacher was absolutely inspiring with the qualities that I wish every human had been graced with.Her last project of the term was called "Smile".The class was asked to go out and smile at three people and record their reactions.I am a very friendly person and always smile at everyone and say hello anyway,so,I thought this would be a piece of cake.Soon after we were given the project,my husband,my youngest son,and I went out to McDonald's one cold March morning.It was just our way of sharing special playtime with our son.We were standing in line,waiting to be served,when all of a sudden everyone around us began to back away,and then even my husband did.It did not move a bit.A strong feeling of fear welled up inside of me as turned to see why they had moved.As I turned around I smelled a terrible "dirty body" smell,and there standing behind me were two poor homeless men.As I looked down at the short gentleman,close to me,he was "smiling".His beautiful sky blue eyes were full of hope as he searched for acceptance.
He said "Good day" as he counted the few coins he had been holding.The second man was obviously mentally disabled.I held my tears as I stood there with them.The young lady at the counter asked him what they wanted.He said "Coffee is all.Miss" because that was all they could afford.(If they wanted to sit in the restaurant and warm up,they had to buy something.He just wanted to be warm.)
Then I really felt the desire was so great that I almost reached out and hugged the little man with the blue eyes.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
That was when I noticed all eyes in the restaurant were set on me,judging my every action.______________
I turned in "my project" and the instructor read it.___________________
8.(2024秋 英吉沙县期末)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
One afternoon after school,Mary and her brother,Keith,were eating at a cafe near their home.That afternoon,they had to share their table with another person.That person was a young lady in her twenties.After eating,she went to the restroom.Without realizing,she had left her cellphone on the table.Five minutes later,she came out and walked out of the cafe without looking back.
Mary saw the cellphone on the table.She quickly told Keith, "Keith,the girl left behind her cellphone." Keith looked at the cellphone.It took his breath away.It was one of the latest models on the market.Keith had always wanted a cellphone.But his parents had told him, "You don't need one.You can always use the house phone," He stared at it for some minutes.Then he said slowly,pausing on every word, "I want to take the cellphone." Mary could not believe her ears.She merely stared at her brother. "You can't!What if the owner comes to look for it?"
After making the decision,Keith quickly grabbed the cellphone and put it in his schoolbag.Then,he took Mary's hand and led her out of the cafe quickly.
Once back home,Keith locked his room door with trembling hands.Inside his room,he took out the piece of beauty.Oh,he liked it so much.He had his own cellphone.Soon,he was polishing it happily.But Mary told him, "Keith,you cannot keep the cellphone.What will you tell our father about this?He will ask you how you got the cellphone." Keith said quickly, "I will say a friend lent it to me," Mary said, "Now you are lying too.Oh dear!When had Keith turned so dishonest?"
Then Mary saw a house phone number on the plastic cover of the cellphone. "This is the girl's phone number.Why don't we just call this number?We will talk to her and ask her to come and take back her cellphone.She was trying to talk some sense into him.
注意:续写词数应为150左右。
That night,Keith turned over in bed from time to time.
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Mary was very happy to hear that.
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9.(2024秋 铁东区校级期末)In the first and second grades,I was extremely shy.I had friends,but it just wasn't in my personality to be very outgoing,even if I knew someone well.I was even quieter with strangers,and so I wasn't very good at meeting new people.I was afraid that I would do or say something wrong.
So in our school's annual grand play,I usually sat in a secluded (僻静的) corner to watch the performance alone.I hoped to sit in the background and watch the actors sweat in front of all those pairs of eyes.
One day in the third grade,my teacher Mrs.Sally called me into her office and said, "Oh,Mary,you re great at memorizing things,and you have such a sweet personality.Perfect for Jenny! ' But I bowed my head and dared not speak.The teacher saw this and then said, "Of course,plenty of girls would love the role,and I could find somebody else.But I hope you could try it for me.I had you in mind for Jenny while writing the play!If you really don't want to,I won't force you.It's your choice."
My mind was spinning (快速旋转) faster than the windmill (风车) on the school playground.Mrs.Sally,whom I loved and admired,wanted me to play this role.She believed in me.My eyes moved across the room to a poster I had never noticed before.It showed a shooting star and read, "If you reach for the stars,you might at least grab a piece of the moon." I looked into Mrs.Sally's shining blue eyes and said, "Okay,I'll try." I realized it was time to throw off my shy mask and show the world who I really was.
In the following five months,the teacher taught me how to set,put on makeup,memorize lines,create costumes and so on.Gradually,I mastered (掌握) my lines and songs.
注意:1、续写词数应为150左右;
2、请按如下格式作答。
The big day came at last.
At that time,Mrs.Sally came backstage for her final check﹣up and noticed my nervousness.
10.(2024秋 呼伦贝尔期末)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
David and George were best friends at school.They sat together in the same school classroom,shared sandwiches during lunch breaks,and had countless adventures together.
As George's birthday approached,David noticed something that concerned him.It was George's shoes,the soles(鞋底)of which were nearly worn through.They were no longer as comfortable as they should be,and David could tell that George needed a new pair of shoes and he decided to do something special for his friend on his birthday.
David's thoughtful plan started with a conversation with his mum.He explained how much he cared for his friend George and how he wanted to gift him a pair of shoes for his birthday.
His mum,a kind and wise woman,agreed that it was a wonderful idea.She also wanted to teach David an important lesson about earning and giving.So,they discussed a plan together. "David, "his mum said, "I think it's a lovely idea to buy shoes for George.But how about this?I can give you some money for doing extra housework around the house.You can earn the money you need to buy the shoes.What do you think?"David's eyes lit up,and he smiled widely. "That's a great idea,Mum!I want to do it. "
David became a whirlwind (旋风)of activity around the house.He swept the floor,watered the plants,washed the clothes,and even helped his mum with the dishes.His determination to earn enough money for George's gift shone through his every action.
As days turned into weeks,David saved penny by penny.His mum was impressed by his hard work.She knew that her son's surprise for George would not only make his friend happy but would also teach David the joy of giving.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Finally,George's birthday came and David invited George to his home celebration.______
George was so moved by the gift he received.______
11.(2024秋 仁寿县期末)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
After filling out fifty applications,going through four interviews,and winning one offer,I took what I could get﹣a teaching job at what I considered a distant wild area:western New Jersey.My characteristic optimism was alive only when I reminded myself that I would be doing what I had wanted to do since I was fourteen﹣teaching English.
School started.I was teaching English.I worked hard,taking time off only to eat and sleep.And then there was my sixth﹣grade class.The students were only six years younger than me.I was struggling in my work as a young idealistic teacher.I wanted to make literature come alive and to promote a love for the written word.The students wanted to throw spitballs(纸团)and whisper dirty words in the back of the room.
In college,I had been taught that a successful educator should ignore bad behavior.As the textbook had said,the bad behavior would disappear as I gave my students positive attention.But in fact,humans,particularly teenagers,rarely seem to be reasonable.By the time my boss,who was also my taskmaster,known to be the strictest,most demanding,most quick to fire inexperienced teachers,came into the classroom to observe me,the students exhibited very little good behavior to praise.
My boss sat in the back of the room.The boys in the class were making animal noises,hitting each other while the girls filed(锉) their nails or read magazines.I just pretended it all wasn't happening and went on lecturing and tried to ask some inspiring questions.My boss,sitting in the back of the room,seemed to be growing bigger and bigger.After twenty minutes,he left silently.Visions of unemployment marched before my eyes.I felt mildly proud that I got through the rest of class without crying,but at my next free period,I knew I had to face him.
注意:(1)续写词数应为150左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
After class,I walked to his office,took a deep breath and opened the door.
Inspired by his advice,I walked toward the classroom,determined to make a change.
12.(2024秋 保定期末)
The Ice Cream Truck
"Never give up!Never give up!" chanted two young children,Max and Lily,as they marched barefoot behind their grandmother Mimi who was leading them on a great adventure,straight off the beach where they had spent the day building sand castles and swimming in the sea.They were seeking the mysterious ice﹣cream truck!
Over the years,Mimi had become an example of positivity for her family.It was not a title she earned without effort,however.Her husband died early and at only forty years old she was left to raise her daughter alone.She faced the heart﹣breaking disaster powerful enough.She could have lived under a black cloud.But she challenged herself to find joy every day instead.She was always up for a new challenge,whether that was hiking across the rocky mountain in Austria to get a better view of the breathtaking scenery,or signing up for tap﹣dancing classes at fifty.Leading by example,Mimi taught her daughter just how much one could achieve with a positive attitude.
And obviously she had taken the same approach in her relationship with her grandchildren as well.Before starting her adventure with Max and Lily on that hot July afternoon,Mimi heard the ice﹣cream man's bell from her beach chair.She turned and saw him briefly,spotting his green shirt and catching the sight of his waving bell before he turned and disappeared.The ice﹣cream man visited the beach on a daily basis,although the delay between the sound of his bell and the disappearance of his truck is not long.One must be quick to catch him.
Max and Lily were disappointed when they didn't catch him in time that day.That was until Mimi's eyes shone and she said, "Never give up!" She explained that the truck might be gone,but they could hurry up to find it at its next stop.
They walked block after block.Not knowing which direction the truck had taken,they had to make their best guess about where to search.The kids' tiny legs were tired,but they went on,continuing the chant, "Never give up!Never give up!"
注意:(1)所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
(2)续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好。
After about twenty minutes of walking,Max's faith started to get shaken in the burning sun.
Just two blocks later,they found it.
13.(2024秋 新会区校级期末)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Priscilla and I had been classmates for several years but we never really liked each other.We had different groups of friends.Priscilla's friends were very good at sports while my friends and I performed well in our studies.Priscilla was our school's top athlete and was constantly praised by our teachers.I was jealous of her athletic abilities and her popularity at school.Maliciously (怀有恶意地),I thought she was just manipulating the teachers and her friends with her charm.I felt she was an insincere and shallow person.Therefore,I wanted to have nothing to do with her.
One afternoon,our class attended an adventure camp.One of the activities we participated in was rock climbing.I was very keen to learn rock climbing.We practiced first on a rock climbing wall,and once we had mastered the skills,we could go on to climb the cliff in the forest reserve.Rock climbers must work with a partner.While one person climbs,the partner must hold on tightly to the other end of the rope for safety.If the climber falls,the partner is responsible for stopping the fall.
The trainer assigned Priscilla to be my partner!I was very upset.How could I trust Priscilla?She would not stop me from falling.She would probably wish that I would fall.However,there was nothing I could do because the trainer wouldn't allow us to change partners.So I climbed and Priscilla held on to the safety rope.
While climbing,a wave of joy and confidence came over me.I cautiously made my way up the wall,caught each notch (凹槽) above tightly,and pulled myself up.Every muscle in my body was shaking from the strain of climbing but I wanted to prove to everyone that I was a better rock climber than Priscilla.Thinking about outperforming Priscilla,my focus on climbing left me as I reached for a notch that was too far from my reach.I took a risk and jumped up to grab it.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The next thing I knew was that I was falling down quickly.
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Fortunately,Priscilla came to the rescue just in time.
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14.(2024秋 市中区期末)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Hannah and I have been best friends since primary school and we spend almost every day with each other,sharing everything happening in our daily life and discussing problems in our school work.Sometimes,other children say we are no fun because we are both very academic and like to study,but we like it that way.We are both very hard﹣working and always get good grades at school.
Last Monday,we had a surprise math quiz.Thinking it was quite easy,I was not worried about the results at all.I must have sounded very proud of myself after the quiz,saying how easy it was and how I was sure to get a good grade.Unexpectedly,the next day after class,my math teacher told me that I had the lowest grade in the class!My heart sank and a great sense of shame washed over me;I must be really stupid to fail a simple math quiz!
Afterwards,I pretended to be cheerful,as if nothing had happened,but Hannah sensed something was wrong.When we went to wash our hands in the girls' washroom before lunch,Hannah tried to figure out what was the matter.Struggling to hold back my tears,I admitted I had failed the math quiz. "But you are a born math genius and you have put all your efforts in it.There must be some mistakes!" Hannah couldn't believe her ears. "I shouldn't have been so confident.Would you please keep it a secret for me?" I begged.Hannah nodded,promising not to tell anyone else about the secret.
However,that afternoon I noticed that my classmates were staring at me as I came into math class and,when I went to sit down,I was shocked to find a piece of paper on my desk that said, "Stupid Sarah got a D!" I was so upset that I felt like crying.I thought that Hannah must have told my classmates about my grade after promising not to.Everyone must have been laughing behind my back!
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I was so angry that I went straight to Hannah.________
The next morning,my math teacher came to me,apologizing for his carelessness.________
15.(2024秋 衡阳县校级期末) 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
注意:
(1)续写的词数应为150左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Catherine was the coolest kid in her class.Wherever she went,she was in the spotlight,with a bunch of kids following her and doing everything she did.
Her desk mate,Landy,however,was not in the cool kids' group.Being the tallest kid in her class,she was teased by her classmates,who were always chanting "Landy,Landy,long as spaghetti(意大利面)".Every time Landy heard those silly chants,she could feel her face burst into flames.God knew how she wished the ground to crack and swallow her!
Catherine didn't really like it when the kids chanted" Landy,Landy,long as spaghetti".But she never told them to stop either,and nor did she ever talk to her.She liked being popular.
One weekend,Catherine went over to her grandfather for Thanksgiving.Her grandfather lives on a farm at the opposite end of town,where he keeps chickens.While helping to feed the chickens,Catherine noticed a peculiar one.Curling in the corner,it looked smaller than the others and was almost half﹣bare!
"What's the matter with it?" She asked her grandfather,with a puzzled frown on her face.Her grandfather told her how chickens could act. "They have a pecking(啄) order," he explained,wrinkles of concern spreading around his forehead. "If one chicken is different,the others will push it away and keep pecking it.Sometimes they peck it so much that it dies."
"Oh,what a poor little thing!" Catherine let out a sigh as she scooped(捧起) the frightened chicken up in her arms,whose heart was beating fast in the bony little body.
Suddenly,she thought of Landy,the girl being "pecked" by her classmates.
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"Hey,guys,that's enough!" Catherine's voice was firm and loud.
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高考英语考前押题卷 读后续写
参考答案与试题解析
一.书面表达(共15小题)
1.(2023秋 东莞市期末) Have you ever felt the need to grab a pen and start writing your thoughts on a piece of paper?Tom had always been a lover of stories,and of words that come together to create vivid imagery (意象).He would spend hours writing down his thoughts and ideas,crafting worlds and people with his pen and paper.
But when it came to his parents,they didn't believe how much he enjoyed writing.In fact,they discouraged him,telling him that he should focus on more practical career fields like becoming a lawyer.
The annual writing competition arrived once again,which was a time to show creative writing as well as the vivid imagination of students.Although Tom had a burning passion for writing,he had always hesitated to enter the race.He was worried that his parents would disapprove of him spending so much time writing,leading him to miss the competition in previous years.But this time,he decided to take a chance and see if he could win this race.Perhaps if his parents saw how talented he truly was,they would come to support him.
Days passed as he carefully prepared his writing,pouring his heart and soul into every word.When he finished,he read it over and felt proud of what he had written.He prepared to hand in his writing,but his parents still believed he was wasting time.He still decided to submit his entry anyway.
Weeks went by before the contest's results were announced.Tom waited anxiously,wondering if his writing was good enough to win a prize.He checked out his mailbox every day after school.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Finally,the day arrived and the winners were announced.
Just then,the door opened and Tom's parents returned home from work.
【答案】Finally,the day arrived and the winners were announced.His heart raced with anticipation as he nervously scrolled down the list of names.And then he saw it:his name in bold letters was there.Tears filled his eyes as he felt a mixture of joy and relief,and he let out a yell.Winning the race was not only a proof of his writing ability but also a reminder to follow his heart.But he still worried whether his parents would change their attitude and support him.
Just then,the door opened and Tom's parents returned home from work.Tom quickly gathered himself and went to show them the email, "Mom,Dad,I made it." His parents looked at him in surprise. "Writing may be a better choice," Tom exclaimed with determination.His parents' faces softened as they figured out what happened.His mother gave him a tight hug, "Becoming a lawyer may lead you to a successful life,but passion can lead you to a happy one." Tom had won not just the race but also his parents' support.
【分析】本文以事件为线索展开,讲述了Tom非常喜欢讲故事,喜欢写作,会花时间写下自己的想法,创造出自己的世界和人物。但是他的父母并不相信他对写作的喜欢,他们劝阻他,希望他更专注于其他的职业领域。虽然每年都有写作比赛,但是因为担心父母会不赞成,Tom总是错过比赛。今年Tom决定尝试一下,看看是否能够获奖,希望父母在看到他的才华后,能够支持他。他全身心地进行创作,为自己的作品感到自豪,虽然父母仍然认为他是在浪费时间,但他还是提交了自己的参赛作品,焦急地等待着比赛结果。
高分句型一:Tears filled his eyes as he felt a mixture of joy and relief,and he let out a yell.
翻译:泪水充满了他的眼睛,他感到既高兴又宽慰,他大叫了一声。
分析:本句运用了as引导的时间状语从句。
高分句型二:But he still worried whether his parents would change their attitude and support him.
翻译:但他仍然担心父母是否会改变态度支持他。
分析:本句运用了whether引导的宾语从句。
【解答】Finally,the day arrived and the winners were announced.His heart raced with anticipation as he nervously scrolled down the list of names.And then he saw it:his name in bold letters was there.Tears filled his eyes as he felt a mixture of joy and relief,and he let out a yell. 【高分句型一】Winning the race was not only a proof of his writing ability but also a reminder to follow his heart.But he still worried whether his parents would change their attitude and support him.【高分句型二】(描写了Tom看到自己获奖,以及内心高兴又担心的复杂心理活动)
Just then,the door opened and Tom's parents returned home from work.Tom quickly gathered himself and went to show them the email, "Mom,Dad,I made it." His parents looked at him in surprise. "Writing may be a better choice," Tom exclaimed with determination.His parents' faces softened as they figured out what happened.His mother gave him a tight hug, "Becoming a lawyer may lead you to a successful life,but passion can lead you to a happy one." Tom had won not just the race but also his parents' support.(描写了Tom告知父母自己获奖的消息,以及父母的反应,他们对Tom想从事写作的态度的转变)
【点评】(1)品读原文,确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路,通过精读文章,找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜(结尾)"。
(2)仔细审题,明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此次短文续写的具体要求。续写段落的首句提示,这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
(3)回扣原文,揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求,再次快速阅读短文,抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思路。
(4)拟写草稿,修改错词病句
拟写时,注意句子结构的多样性,语言的丰富性,并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用,使上下文连贯。
2.(2023春 凉州区校级期中)读后续写阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Caught in"the Web"!
Dave and Kelly loved their computer.Their parents got it for them a couple of months ago,and they had taught their kids how to use it.They bought some computer games for the kids to play and connected the computer to the Internet.The kids loved going on the Internet and visiting websites.They got to do research for their homework,play games,print colouring pages and read stories.They also got to email their friends and even chat with other kids,after getting their parents' permission.
Because the kids liked the Internet so much,they would finish their homework,and then go to surf the Internet.Very often,they didn't feel the passage of time and found themselves almost falling asleep in front of the computer screen.
One day they stayed up late surfing the Internet after they were done with their homework.They watched a video about a science fiction story,which described two alien species hunting human information,because aliens had a wicked intention to conquer the Earth.The species coming from a distance tried to collect every aspect of data about humans,but in vain.They were detected and driven away by watchful humans.After a while they started getting tired and they were almost falling asleep.While they were in the twilight between being asleep and being awake,they felt a strong suction coming from the computer screen.It felt like a huge vacuum cleaner!
By now,they were fully awake,but when they looked around,they did not see their living room anymore.Instead,they were drawn into the computer itself by that mysterious power.They were surrounded by a complex system of tubes and small boxes and columns.They were all in different shapes,such as being tall,short,wide,narrow,round,square,etc.More strangely,they all felt a little warm and some even were shining with real,blue or orange light.They saw themselves floating in a long tube with speeding chunks of alphabets,numbers,images and sounds.They were INSIDE the computer!
注意:续写词数应为150左右。
Their dream came true and they decided to let loose and drift along the long tubes and have some fun.
But after a few days they started missing something and that was the feel of love.
【答案】Their dream came true and they decided to let loose and drift along the long tubes and have some fun.They travelled all over the world and they found themselves even in the White House;they found it was fun to spy on people that couldn't see them.They travelled through the long tubes to see things and people that they had always wanted to see.They got to watch the president who stayed up and they were the first ones to know about his new decisions.They had a blast.
But after a few days they started missing something and that was the feel of love.Life wasn't all that fun without a hug from their mama and daddy;they wanted to come home but how could they?There was only one way and that was through the heart.They had to want to come back so badly that it even meant they had to listen to the rules that Mum and Dad made and do research for schoolwork instead of playing computer games so much.They finally opened their eyes as their mother said it was time to get up for school.
【分析】本文为记叙文。文章主要讲述了Dave和Kelly的父母给他们买了电脑,他们沉迷于电脑,一天他们熬夜玩电脑,醒来的时候,发现自己被吸到电脑里面了。
高分句型一:They travelled through the long tubes to see things and people that they had always wanted to see.
译文:他们穿过长长的管道去看他们一直想看的东西和人。
分析:这句话使用了that引导的定语从句。
高分句型二:They got to watch the president who stayed up and they were the first ones to know about his new decisions.
译文:他们看到了熬夜的总统,他们是第一个知道他的新决定的人。
分析:这句话使用了who引导的定语从句。
【解答】Their dream came true and they decided to let loose and drift along the long tubes and have some fun.They travelled all over the world and they found themselves even in the White House;they found it was fun to spy on people that couldn't see them.They travelled through the long tubes to see things and people that they had always wanted to see. 【高分句型一】They got to watch the president who stayed up and they were the first ones to know about his new decisions. 【高分句型二】They had a blast.(他们在电脑里面玩得很开心)
But after a few days they started missing something and that was the feel of love.Life wasn't all that fun without a hug from their mama and daddy;they wanted to come home but how could they?There was only one way and that was through the heart.They had to want to come back so badly that it even meant they had to listen to the rules that Mum and Dad made and do research for schoolwork instead of playing computer games so much.They finally opened their eyes as their mother said it was time to get up for school.(他们觉得无聊了,想要回来,他们努力学习,不熬夜,等他们醒来的时候,妈妈让他们起床上学)
【点评】解题方法点拨
(1)品读原文。确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路,通过精读文章,找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜(结尾)"。
(2)仔细审题,明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此类短文续写的具体要求,如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。续写段落的首句提示,这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
(3)回扣原文,揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求,再次快速阅读短文,抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思路。同时结合文章画线词语提示,确定续写段落的内容。
(4)拟写草稿,修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后。最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时,注意句子结构的多样性,语言的丰富性,并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用,使上下文连贯。
3.(2019 黄浦区一模)Directions:Read the following passage.Summarize the main idea and the main point(s) of the passage in no more than 60 words.Use your own words as far as possible.
Sport Tourism
Tourism is the world's largest industry and is predicted to grow well into the years to come.Increasingly,the economic importance of tourism has been recognized by governments around the world.At the same time,the tourism industry has become more complicated in its development and marketing new forms of tourism.One of the fastest growing parts of the tourism industry is travel related to sport and physical activity.A recent survey found that while the traditional beach and sight﹣seeing vacations continue to predominate,22% of those surveyed reported that opportunities to participate in sports were important when selecting a vacation.
The term sport tourism has been adopted in recent years to describe sport﹣related leisure travel.It is generally recognized that three are three broad categories of sport tourism.The first category.Watching sporting events or Sports Event Tourism includes hallmark events such as FIFA World Cup Football Championships,and the Olympic games.Tournament sponsored by the Professional Golf Association or the World Tennis Association are also part of the spectator﹣centered sector of sport tourism.
The second type of sport tourism,celebrity and nostalgia sport tourism involves visiting famous sports﹣related attractions.Visits of the sports halls of fame fall into this category.Another form of celebrity and nostalgia sport tourism that has emerged in recent years is meeting famous sports personalities.The cruise industry has been experienced in this area.Sports theme cruise such as "the NBA basketball cruise" arrange for passengers to meet personalities from sports while on board.
Active participation is the third category of sports tourism.This is composed of individuals who travel to participate in golf,skiing,and tennis in particular,although other sports such as fishing,and scuba diving are popular in the US.
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】高分句型一:Sport Tourism is growing fast in recent ,which has been used to describe sport﹣related leisure travel.
译文:体育旅游近年来发展迅速,已被用来描述体育休闲旅游.
分析:这句话使用which引导的非限制性定语从句.
高分句型二:Besides,meeting famous sports personalities is also a kind of sport tourism.
译文:此外,会见著名的体育名人也是一种体育旅游.
分析:这句话使用动名词作主语.
【解答】Sport Tourism is growing fast in recent ,which has been used to describe sport﹣related leisure travel. 【高分句型一】(要点一)The second type of sport tourism is visiting famous sports﹣related attractions.(要点二) Besides,meeting famous sports personalities is also a kind of sport tourism.【高分句型二】(要点三)People have gone through the cruise industry.Participating actively is the third kind of sports tourism. (要点四)
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文,我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.动笔前,一定要认真分析要点,理解要点要表达的含义,不能遗漏要点,跑题偏题.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次.特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化.平时除了加强词汇积累,写作联系以外,还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文,这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果.
4.(2023秋 宁波期末) Through the dining room window,the rays of the setting sun glowed orange and gold.It looked like a huge traditional lantern(灯笼)lit in the sky for the whole world to see,as Ramadan(斋月),the Muslim(穆斯林)holy month,came to an end.
During Ramadan,Muslim children dance in the streets,swinging traditional lanterns of all sizes.This year,Ayasha's grandparents in Egypt had sent a lantern to Kamil,Ayasha's younger brother.Kamil's lantern was bright blue,with a battery﹣powered flashing light instead of a candle.Ever since Kamil had opened the package,he had been joyously swinging(旋转)his flashing lantern.
"His lantern is really just a holiday toy," Ayasha said to herself as she watched him, "My lantern is special,something I want to keep forever".Her lantern,made of beautiful shiny glass,was a loving touch of home.Her grandparents had sent it to her when her family moved to America for her dad's new engineering job.Ayasha smiled proudly as she lit the candle inside her lantern.
Tomorrow would be a day for celebration—for wearing new clothes to morning prayers(祷告)for sharing gifts and sweet treats and for showing love to family and friends.Ayasha couldn't wait.
"Time for dinner!The food smells delicious!" Dad announced. "My favorite cake!" Kamil cried excitedly,swinging his lantern in circles. "Be careful,Kamil!" Mom cried and carefully avoided the swinging lantern as she carried a large bowl of soup to the table.But Kamil was too excited to calm down.The blue light kept swinging until unfortunately,he knocked into Mom.His lantern fell onto the sofa and was intact(完好无损的),but the bowl Mom was holding fell to the floor,spilling(洒)he soup and sending broken pieces everywhere!
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1:
To make things worse,Kamil stumbled(绊倒)against the table,knocking over Ayasha's glass lantern.______
Paragraph 2:
Ayasha opened the door and saw Kamil standing there with his most﹣treasured lantern.______
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】本文为记叙文。文章主要讲述了在穆斯林斋月的时候,父母送了Kamil一个漂亮的灯笼,Ayasha也有自己的灯笼,她非常满意自己的灯笼。要吃晚饭了。Kamil还在激动地提着灯笼旋转,但是撞到妈妈,妈妈手里的汤撒了。
高分句型一:Mom broke the silence with a sigh as she wiped up the spills.
译文:妈妈一边擦去溅出的水,一边叹了一口气,打破了沉默。
分析:这句话使用了as引导的时间状语从句。
高分句型二:In a fit of anger,Ayasha stormed into her bedroom with her broken lantern,slamming the door behind her.
译文:在一阵愤怒中,阿亚莎拿着破碎的灯笼冲进卧室,砰地关上门。
分析:这句话使用了现在分词短语slamming the door behind her作状语。
【解答】Paragraph 1:
To make things worse,Kamil stumbled(绊倒)against the table,knocking over Ayasha's glass lantern.Its breaking glass sounded like a warning bell,and the candle inside blew out immediately.The room was very quiet for a moment. "Accidents happen," Mom broke the silence with a sigh as she wiped up the spills.【高分句型一】In a fit of anger,Ayasha stormed into her bedroom with her broken lantern,slamming the door behind her.【高分句型二】The bright Ramadan sunset faded to darkness,and her excitement faded with it.For her,the celebration was spoiled before it even started.Ayasha cried herself to sleep.Suddenly,she was waken up by a knock on the door.(Kamil绊倒,将Ayasha的灯笼打碎,Ayasha非常气愤,将自己关在卧室里面,哭着睡着了,突然她被敲门声吵醒)
Paragraph 2:
Ayasha opened the door and saw Kamil standing there with his most﹣treasured lantern.With his head drooping,he said softly, "You can have my lantern since I broke yours." Knowing how much his first lantern meant to him,Ayasha was touched by his offer.Ramadan was a time for family and forgiveness,and lanterns were only symbols.The real light and warmth came from acts of kindness.Ayasha embraced her brother and answered, "Thank you,Kamil,but keep your lantern.Go to bed early tonight.We don't want to be late for morning prayers tomorrow." Ayasha smiled,determined to give thanks for strength,health,and all the blessings in life.(Kamil将自己的灯笼送给Ayasha。Ayasha被感动了,和弟弟和好了)
【点评】解题方法点拨
(1)品读原文。确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路,通过精读文章,找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜(结尾)"。
(2)仔细审题,明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此类短文续写的具体要求,如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。续写段落的首句提示,这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
(3)回扣原文,揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求,再次快速阅读短文,抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思路。
(4)拟写草稿,修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后。最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时,注意句子结构的多样性,语言的丰富性,并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用,使上下文连贯。
5.(2025 广宁县模拟) In our weekly staff meeting,our editor Ashley was not pleased with the quality of our reporting."Our readership is way down.We need better stories for this Thursday's school newspaper.Does anybody have any ideas?"she said.
I handed her my article about our basketball team beating Deerfield High School the previous night by one point."Sports stories are fun,"she said,"but not good enough for the front page.We need something to really get people's attention."
After our meeting,we left the newsroom together and heard someone screaming,"Perry is missing!"Perry was a big red parrot and had been our school mascot(吉祥物) for ten years.He played an important role in students"lives,both in and out of class.He had also been a constant presence at school events,inspiring a sense of unity among students.
Everyone gathered around Perry's empty cage,heartbroken.Suddenly,a student from the crowd came over and showed me a photo. "You're a reporter for the school paper,right?I happened to take this yesterday,"he said.In the photo was a Deerfield High School basketball player with something large hidden under his shirt around the size of a parrot.
"He must have stolen Perry to get back at us for winning the game!"Ashley cried.We hurried back to the newsroom,agreeing to run the photo on the front page with the headline "Deerfield Stole Perry.""This is just the story we need.Everyone will read it,"Ashley said confidently.
After she left,I took a closer look at the photo.The clock in the background read 4:15 pm,but our game against Deerfield hadn't started until 4:30 pm.Why would the boy have taken Perry before we even played?An uneasy feeling came over me that we might have falsely accused someone.
I went to Perry's usual caretaker to ask if he knew Perry was missing."He's not missing.He's retired.He's ready for some quieter days,"he said.Learning the truth,I immediately told Ashley and suggested writing a story to say goodbye to Perry.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
To my surprise,Ashley insisted on reporting the "Deerfield Stole Perry" story.______
On Thursday,the paper came out with the headline "Bye﹣Bye,Perry" on the front page.______
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】本文为记叙文,讲述了作者在一家报社工作,他们的吉祥物佩里被迪尔菲尔德高中的篮球运动员偷走了,调查得知是佩里退休了。阿什利本来想报道被偷这件事,但是作者说明了可能对选手和报纸的声誉造成的潜在伤害。最后阿什利放弃了,他们报道了佩里退休的新闻,这一报道取得了成功。
高分句型一:Noticing her hesitant expression,I further explained the potential harm it would cause to the player and our paper 's reputation.
译文:注意到她犹豫的表情,我进一步解释了这会对球员和我们报纸的声誉造成的潜在伤害。
分析:这句话使用了现在分词短语Noticing her hesitant expression作状语,it would cause to the player and our paper 's reputation是省略关系代词的定语从句修饰the potential harm。
高分句型二:Many were disappointed with Perry's sudden departure,but were comforted by the fact that he was in good care.
译文:许多人对佩里的突然离开感到失望,但他得到了很好的照顾,这让他们感到安慰。
分析:这句话使用了that引导的同位语从句。
【解答】To my surprise,Ashley insisted on reporting the "Deerfield Stole Perry" story. "This is the very story we need to attract more readers,"she argued.To convince her,I defended that if we wrote this article,we would be telling a lie.Noticing her hesitant expression,I further explained the potential harm it would cause to the player and our paper 's reputation. 【高分句型一】After some discussion,Ashley finally gave in,"OK,let's try with real stories." Then I went to gather all the necessary information to write an article about Perry and the precious memories we shared over the years. (作者反对这一决定,说明了其中的危害以及他们最后决定报道佩里退休的事情)
On Thursday,the paper came out with the headline "Bye﹣Bye,Perry" on the front page.Soon,it sparked heated discussions among students about Perry.Many were disappointed with Perry's sudden departure,but were comforted by the fact that he was in good care. 【高分句型二】The story also evoked sweet memories of Perry.Some students even requested to share their stories of him in our paper!Seeing the story's success,Ashley came to me and said sincerely,"You are right!It's a good story." Her words brought me a great sense of fulfillment.Indeed,true stories might not always draw attention,but they have the power to touch and connect.(报道佩里退休的新闻产生的影响以及取得成功)
【点评】解题方法点拨
(1)品读原文。确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路,通过精读文章,找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜(结尾)"。
(2)仔细审题,明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此类短文续写的具体要求,如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。续写段落的首句提示,这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
(3)回扣原文,揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求,再次快速阅读短文,抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思路。
(4)拟写草稿,修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后。最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时,注意句子结构的多样性,语言的丰富性,并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用,使上下文连贯。
6.(2024秋 吉林期末) When Jaron Casillas was very young,his parents discovered that he saw the world a bit differently:a Texas sunrise for example.
One morning,Jaron's mom was driving him to school beneath an especially spectacular Texas sunrise.She heard his little voice from the car seat behind her say, " Look,Mommy!Look at the beautiful green sunshine!" She turned to look at it.The rising sun was so beautiful,flooding the earth with warmth and red light.However,Jaron's mom was about to cry." Oh dear,my poor boy," she thought.
Without delay,the parents rushed Jaron to the hospital for a check﹣ up,which turned out to be color blindness.
On that fateful day,Jaron's parents were shocked to learn that their son was color blind —a condition that affects a person's ability to see colors in the same way as others.There is no cure,but special glasses can help individuals like Jaron distinguish between different colors.Unfortunately,these glasses are often too expensive for most families to afford.
The parents were sad,but Jaron remained calm and even comforted his parents.He saw his condition as something special and decided to keep it a secret.However,his silence caused him to feel left out when others talked about colors.
One day,during a class discussion,the teacher,Christina Hayes,asked the students to share a secret about themselves.Working up his courage,Jaron revealed his condition to his classmates,explaining that he saw gray instead of colors like purple,green,and blue.When the teacher asked if there was anything that could help him,Jaron mentioned the special glasses,but noted that they were too expensive for his family.
Hearing Jaron's words,the teacher fought back tears and praised the boy for his bravery.The other students looked at Jaron with newfound understanding and empathy.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1:After class,Jaron's classmates privately approached Hayes.
______
Paragraph 2:Seeing the special glasses,Jaron was puzzled.
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【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】这是一篇记叙文。讲述了一个关于Jaron Casillas因色盲而看到的世界与众不同的故事,详细叙述了从发现病情、面对困难到最终在老师和同学们的帮助下找到希望的整个过程。
高分句型一:Knowing the expense of the special glasses was a hurdle for Jaron's family,they organized a fundraising campaign among themselves and reached out to the school community for support.
翻译:知道特殊眼镜的费用对Jaron的家人来说是一个障碍,他们组织了一场筹款活动,并向学校社区寻求支持。
分析:本句使用了现在分词短语Knowing the expense of the special glasses was a hurdle for Jaron's family作状语。
高分句型二:For the first time,he saw the vibrant colors that others had always taken for granted.
翻译:他第一次看到了其他人一直认为理所当然的鲜艳色彩。
分析:本句使用了that引导的限制性定语从句。
【解答】 After class,Jaron's classmates privately approached Hayes.They discussed Jaron's situation and decided to help him in any way they could.Knowing the expense of the special glasses was a hurdle for Jaron's family,they organized a fundraising campaign among themselves and reached out to the school community for support.【高分句型一】Posters were put up,and announcements were made during school assemblies,appealing for donations to help Jaron achieve his dream of seeing the world in its true colors.The response was overwhelming;within a few days,enough money had been raised to purchase the special glasses.(Jaron的同学得知他因特殊眼镜昂贵而无法购买后,自发组织筹款活动,得到学校社区的广泛支持,很快筹集到足够资金。)
Seeing the special glasses,Jaron was puzzled.Hayes called him to the front of the class and presented him with the box containing the glasses.Jaron's eyes widened in surprise as he slowly opened the box.Hayes explained that his classmates and the school community had come together to make this possible.With tears in his eyes,Jaron put on the glasses and looked around the room.For the first time,he saw the vibrant colors that others had always taken for granted.【高分句型二】He turned to his classmates and teacher,a look of gratitude shining in his eyes.From that day on,Jaron wore his glasses with pride,knowing that he was not alone in his journey and that the world was a little brighter because of the kindness and support of those around him.(Hayes老师在课堂上将眼镜赠予Jaron,他首次看到世界的多彩,感激之情溢于言表,从此自豪地戴着眼镜,感激周围人的善良与支持。)
【点评】(1)品读原文,确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路,通过精读文章,找到该篇文章的写作线索。
(2)仔细审题,明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此次短文续写的具体要求,如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。续写段落的首句提示,这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
(3)回扣原文,揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求,再次快速阅读短文,抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思路。
(4)拟写草稿,修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后,拟写时,注意句子结构的多样性,语言的丰富性,并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用,使上下文连贯。
7.(2024秋 辛集市期末)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I am a mother of three and have recently completed my college degree.
The last class had to take was Sociology(社会学).The teacher was absolutely inspiring with the qualities that I wish every human had been graced with.Her last project of the term was called "Smile".The class was asked to go out and smile at three people and record their reactions.I am a very friendly person and always smile at everyone and say hello anyway,so,I thought this would be a piece of cake.Soon after we were given the project,my husband,my youngest son,and I went out to McDonald's one cold March morning.It was just our way of sharing special playtime with our son.We were standing in line,waiting to be served,when all of a sudden everyone around us began to back away,and then even my husband did.It did not move a bit.A strong feeling of fear welled up inside of me as turned to see why they had moved.As I turned around I smelled a terrible "dirty body" smell,and there standing behind me were two poor homeless men.As I looked down at the short gentleman,close to me,he was "smiling".His beautiful sky blue eyes were full of hope as he searched for acceptance.
He said "Good day" as he counted the few coins he had been holding.The second man was obviously mentally disabled.I held my tears as I stood there with them.The young lady at the counter asked him what they wanted.He said "Coffee is all.Miss" because that was all they could afford.(If they wanted to sit in the restaurant and warm up,they had to buy something.He just wanted to be warm.)
Then I really felt the desire was so great that I almost reached out and hugged the little man with the blue eyes.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
That was when I noticed all eyes in the restaurant were set on me,judging my every action.______________
I turned in "my project" and the instructor read it.___________________
【答案】That was when noticed all eyes in the restaurant were set on me,judging my every action.I smiled and asked the waitress to give me two more breakfast on a separate tray.I put the tray on the table and the blue﹣eyed gentleman looked up at me tearfully.I started to cry as I walked away.When I sat down,my husband smiled at me.We held hands firmly.I returned to college,on the last evening of class,with this story in hand.
I turned in "my project"and the instructor read it.Then she said, "Can I share this?" I nodded as she got the attention of the class.She began to read and that was when I knew that we,as humans,should share this need to help people and to be helped.In my own way,I had touched the people at McDonald's husband's,my son,the instructor,and every soul that shared the classroom on the last night I spent as a college student.I graduated with one of the biggest lessons I would ever learn:"UNCONDITIONAL ACCEPTANCE."
【分析】本文为记叙文。作者在麦当劳遇到了两个身无分文的穷人,想要买杯咖啡暖暖身子。
高分句型一:
That was when noticed all eyes in the restaurant were set on me,judging my every action.
译文:就在这时,我注意到餐厅里所有的眼睛都盯着我,评判我的一举一动。
分析:使用了现在分词做伴随状语。
高分句型二:
When I sat down,my husband smiled at me.
译文:当我坐下时,我丈夫对我微笑。
分析:使用了when引导的时间状语从句。
【解答】That was when noticed all eyes in the restaurant were set on me,judging my every action. 【高分句型一】I smiled and asked the waitress to give me two more breakfast on a separate tray.I put the tray on the table and the blue﹣eyed gentleman looked up at me tearfully.I started to cry as I walked away.When I sat down,my husband smiled at me.【高分句型二】We held hands firmly.I returned to college,on the last evening of class,with this story in hand.(作者给那两个人买了食物))
I turned in "my project"and the instructor read it.Then she said, "Can I share this?" I nodded as she got the attention of the class.She began to read and that was when I knew that we,as humans,should share this need to help people and to be helped.In my own way,I had touched the people at McDonald's husband's,my son,the instructor,and every soul that shared the classroom on the last night I spent as a college student.I graduated with one of the biggest lessons I would ever learn:"UNCONDITIONAL ACCEPTANCE."(老师分享了我的故事,我学到了一门最重要的课程:"无条件接受")
【点评】解题方法点拨
(1)品读原文,确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路,通过精读文章,找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜(结尾)"。
(2)仔细审题,明确续写要求
一般