【中考专项训练】必考系列：书面表达（含答案解析）-2025年中考英语

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【中考专项训练】必考系列：书面表达-2025年中考英语
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．丰富多彩的初中生活已经接近尾声。在这三年里，你一定有很多学习习惯。请你以 “好习惯，促成长” 为话题，介绍一种好的学习习惯。
内容包括：
写作要求：
1. 词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 内容完整，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
3. 文章中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
参考词汇：improve my skills, grow up, be interested in, not only. but also.
Good habits develop growth
Good habits benefit a person’s whole life.
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2．在日常学习中，有的学生喜欢独自学习，有的则喜欢和大家一起学习。你更喜欢哪一种学习方式？校刊英语专栏正在以“Studying alone or studying with a group ”为题开展征文活动，请你结合自身实际，从两种学习方式中任选其一，用英语写一篇短文，陈述你的理由，向专栏投稿。
要求：（1）文中须包含所选学习方式的要点。
（2）短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
（3）词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Studying alone or studying with a group
Some students like to study alone. Others enjoy studying with a group.
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3．为了培养学生们的全面素质，减轻他们的学业压力，促进教育公平，近年来中共中央办公厅，国务院办公厅颁布了“双减”政策（“Double Reduction” policy），有效地减轻了学生的负担，但是作为肩负祖国未来使命的初中生，你们该如何有效地利用空余时间呢？就此，请谈谈自己的看法。
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4．________ Is Important
提示：人的一生中会遇到许多重要的人和事，对你的生活或人生有重要的意义。请以“________ Is Important”为题，用英语写一篇短文，记述一次重要的经历及你的感受或谈谈某人、某事的重要性。
要求：1. 请将题目补充完整后写一篇短文，词数不少于80个；
2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；
3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；
4. 请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。
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5．学校英文报正在征集“多彩校园 ”主题文章。假如你是李欣，你的初中三年经历过许多精彩有趣的校园活动，如运动会、新年晚会、演讲比赛、读书分享会等。请你根据以下提示， 写一篇英语短文介绍你最难忘的一次校园活动经历。
What was the school event
What did you do in this event
How do you like it
Something more about it.
注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息，词数 100 词左右（开头已给出的词不计入总词数）。
My Most Unforgettable School Event
My name is Li Xin.
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6．摘掉“小眼镜”、不当“小胖墩”、挺直“小脊梁”……近年来，青少年的健康问题引起了大家的关注。作为中学生，你是否感受到需要运动的紧迫性？是否在跑步、打球、跳绳中找到了快乐？是否用行动带动了身边的人？
某英语报社为了呼吁青少年加强体育锻炼，开展了以“我运动，我健康”为主题的征文活动。假如你是韩林，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿。
内容包括：·运动对你身心的改变；
·结合亲身经历分享你坚持锻炼的“小秘诀”；
·对同龄人的建议。
要求：1. 词数不少于80词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文中不能出现真实的人名、校名。
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I’m glad to write to tell you about my story.
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Thanks.
Yours,
Han Lin
7．教育部颁发的《义务教育劳动课程标准》要求中小学校开展劳动教育必修课，并且规定了中小学每周课外活动和家庭生活中的劳动时间。请根据表格提示，谈一谈作为中学生可以在校内外从事的劳动，以及这些劳动对中学生的意义。
要求：
1.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
2.词数100左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
Nowadays, labor education is becoming more and more important for teenagers.
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8．随着科学技术的发展，AI宠物开始走进人们的视野。请以“Would you like to keep an AI pet ”为题，并根据以下提示，写一篇英语短文，谈谈你对养AI宠物的想法。
内容提示：
1. In your opinion, what are the advantages of keeping AI pets
2. Why would you prefer AI pets to real pets
3. How do AI pets affect (影响) our daily life
要求：
1. 书写规范认真，词数不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 包含问题内容，语句通顺，表达正确，可适当发挥；
3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名。
Would you like to keep an AI pet
With the rapid development of technology, AI pets are coming into our lives. So would you like to keep an AI pet
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9．Write at least 60 words according to the situation given. (请根据所给情境，写一篇不少于60个词的短文。标点符号不占格)
美好的初中生活即将画上句号，你的班级正在征集毕业纪念册照片。假如你是李华，你在自己的相册里选一张照片提供给班级，请你描述一下提供的这张照片，并阐述你提供这张照片的理由。
(注意：1. 文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇内容不得分。)
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10．假设你是李华，你的英国朋友Adam通过邮件的方式向你寻求帮助，请你对他的邮件进行回复。可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
TO LiHua@ SUBJECT Need your HELP!
Hi Li Hua, Next week is the reading week of our school, and our teacher asks us to make a reading card about Chinese classics. There are so many great books in China, so it’s hard for me to choose one. Also, I haven’t made any reading cards before. Can you recommend a book to me What parts does a reading card have I do need your help. Look forward to your reply! Yours, Adam
参考信息：
1. Some of the Chinese classics

2. Reading card (possible version)
要求：
1. 80—120词。文章开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
Dear Adam,
I’m glad to help you with your reading card project!
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Yours,
Li Hua
11．假如你是李飞，你的好朋友王明是一个不喜欢劳动，不愿意干家务活的男生，在他的房间里，东西总不能及时归位，房间乱作一团，他很苦恼，因此写信向你寻求帮助。希望你给他分享你对于劳动的认识和想法，并给他提一些合理的劳动建议，让他能深刻认识到劳动的重要性和意义，并积极行动起来。
要求：
1. 结合连词成句中王明的生活习惯，给王明提出合理化建议；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4. 词数：不少于70。（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。）
提示词：help with housework；develop our independence；depend on parents；water flowers；do the dishes；clean the bedroom.
Dear Wang Ming,
I am glad you asked me for help to solve your problem. I’d love to share my ideas with you.
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If you follow my advice, you may solve your problem and do better at home.
Yours,
Li Fei
12．假如你是晨光中学的学生李华，平时坚持用英语写日记。请根据以下要点，描述你周日下午在眼镜店所看到的事情，并表达自己的想法。
（1）一位男孩在图书馆读书时，他的眼镜坏了。
（2）男孩来到店里，他的口袋里只有五元钱，担心钱不够。
（3）店主看到他是学生，告知免费为他修理。
（4）眼镜修好后，男孩默默地把钱留在桌上，迅速离开。
（5）你觉得……
参考词汇：眼镜店the optician’s
店主the owner
要求：
（1）词数：80~100个。
（2）日记格式和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
Sunday
When I went to the optician’s this afternoon, I
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《【中考专项训练】必考系列：书面表达-2025年中考英语》参考答案
1．One possible version
Good habits benefit a person’s whole life. Among the habits I’ve developed in junior high, daily reading has helped me grow the most. Every evening, I spend 30 minutes reading English articles or stories. I underline new words, look them up in the dictionary, and try to use them in my writing.
This habit not only improved my language skills but also made me more interested in different cultures. For example, after I read about scientists’ stories, I became curious about how the world works. Gradually, my grades in English and science rose. More importantly, daily reading taught me patience and focus.
Now, I realize that small habits like reading can shape our future. They help us grow not only in knowledge but also in character. Let’s build good habits and embrace a brighter tomorrow!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：主要运用“一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题目要求中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点；
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。文章开头强调好习惯的重要性，并介绍自己好习惯“每日阅读”；
第二步，具体阐述“每日阅读”的好处；
第三步，书写结语。总结好习惯给自己带来的收获。
[亮点词汇]
①look up查阅
②try to do sth尝试做某事
③for example例如
④build good habits养成好习惯
[高分句型]
①For example, after I read about scientists’ stories, I became curious about how the world works.（时间状语从句）
②Now, I realize that small habits like reading can shape our future.（宾语从句）
2．例文1
Studying alone or studying with a group
Some students like to study alone. Others enjoy studying with a group. As for me, I like studying alone better.
Firstly, studying alone helps me learn to solve problems on my own. Most of the time, I need to think hard about them all by myself. So my thinking ability is improved at the same time. Secondly, when I study alone, I can keep my mind on what I’m doing. With a clear head, I am able to finish my homework quickly. In this way, I will gradually develop a good learning habit.
I think studying alone is really a good way and it will benefit me a lot in my life.
例文2
Studying alone or studying with a group
Some students like to study alone. Others enjoy studying with a group. As for me, I prefer to study with a group. As the saying goes, “Two heads are better than one.” With a group, I can learn a lot from others. Whenever I have some problems, they are always ready to help. With their help, I become more and more confident in my study. Also, when I study with my classmates, we can discuss whatever puzzles me face to face. Through discussion, we can share different ideas and get to know more about each other.
All in all, I think studying with a group provides many chances to improve myself and helps me to be a better person.
【详解】以例文1为例
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求以“Studying alone or studying with a group ”为题，根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明自己更喜欢哪种学习方式；
第二步，具体介绍为什么喜欢这种方式；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①solve problems on my own 自己解决问题
②at the same time 同时
③keep my mind on... 集中注意力在……
④develop a good learning habit 养成良好的学习习惯
[高分句型]
①Secondly, when I study alone, I can keep my mind on what I’m doing.（when引导的时间状语从句和宾语从句）
②I think studying alone is really a good way and it will benefit me a lot in my life.（省略that的宾语从句和并列句）
3．例文
Since the “Double Reduction” policy was carried out, we junior high school students have more free time. Here are some ways to make good use of it.
Firstly, reading is a great choice. We can read various books, such as novels, science-popularization books. Reading can broaden our horizons and enrich our knowledge. Secondly, physical exercise is essential. We can play basketball, run or swim. It not only keeps us healthy but also helps relieve stress. Thirdly, we can develop hobbies like painting, playing the guitar. Hobbies can bring us joy and a sense of achievement. Additionally, we can participate in volunteer activities. Helping others can make us realize our own value and learn to get along well with different people.
In a word, with proper arrangement, we can lead a colorful and meaningful life during our free time.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：本文主要围绕如何有效地利用空余时间展开，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，说明自从颁布了“双减”政策，学生有了更多的空余时间；
第二步，具体阐述如何有效地利用空余时间；
第三步，说明合理安排时间会使生活丰富多彩。
[亮点词汇]
①make good use of好好利用
②broaden拓宽
③essential必要的
④achievement成就
[高分句型]
①Helping others can make us realize our own value and learn to get along well with different people.（动名词短语作主语）
4．例文：
Failure Is Important
Failure is something that we can’t avoid in life, but it’s really important.
Once, I wanted to do really well in a math competition, but I failed badly. At first, I was really sad and felt down. But soon, I came to know that failure was like a good teacher. It let me see where I was not good at in math. I looked closely at my mistakes, asked my teachers for help, and did more exercises.
Because of this failure, I became more hard-working and learned that we should keep trying no matter what. It made me become better and stronger. So, failure isn’t something to be afraid of. It’s a step on the way to success.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：这是一篇话题作文；
②时态：主要采用“一般过去时”；
③提示：围绕话题展开，讲述经历和感悟，注意条理清晰和语法正确。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍本文主题；
第二步，介绍一次失败的经历；
第三步，描述此次经历的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①feel down情绪低落
②look closely at审视
③ask for help寻求帮助
④on the way to success在通往成功的道路上
[高分句型]
①Failure is something that we can’t avoid in life, but it’s really important. (定语从句)
②Because of this failure, I became more hard-working and learned that we should keep trying no matter what. (宾语从句)
5．Sample writing:
My Most Unforgettable School Event
My name is Li Xin. Among all wonderful school activities, the English Speech Contest impressed me most.
As a student taking part, I spent weeks preparing my speech “My Dream”. Although I felt shy at the beginning, my teachers helped me practice until I felt more sure of myself. Standing on the platform to share my speech, I spoke louder and clearer as I went on. What moved me most was hearing my classmates’ friendly cheers. Their smiling faces gave me power to overcome fear. To my surprise, I won second prize!
This event has not only improved my English but also taught me that courage grows when facing challenges.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：以一般过去时为主；
③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，介绍印象最深的一次校园活动；
第二步，具体阐述这次校园活动经历；
第三步，自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①go on继续
②to one’s surprise令人惊讶的是
③overcome fear克服害怕
[高分句型]
①What moved me most was hearing my classmates’ friendly cheers.（主语从句）
②This event has not only improved my English but also taught me that courage grows when facing challenges.（宾语从句）
6．例文
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I’m glad to write to tell you about my story. Doing sports has changed me a lot. Last year I was weak and often felt tired. Now I run every morning and play basketball with friends after school. My body is stronger and I feel happier.
My secret is setting small goals. For example, I started with 10-minute runs and now can run 30 minutes. Choosing sports I enjoy also helps me keep going. To other teenagers, I suggest finding a sport partner. When my classmate and I exercise together, we encourage each other. Remember, every step counts! Let’s all be active and healthy!
Thanks.
Yours,
Han Lin
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、承接已给的开头，介绍运动对自己身心的改变；
第二步、结合亲身经历分享自己坚持锻炼的“小秘诀”；
第三步、对同龄人的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①set goals设定目标
②suggest doing sth.建议做某事
③each other彼此
[高分句型]
When my classmate and I exercise together, we encourage each other.(when引导时间状语从句)
7．例文
Nowadays, labor education is becoming more and more important for teenagers. There is no doubt that it plays a vital role in shaping our character and preparing us for the challenges of life. There are many different ways for us to join some labor activities. We can help our parents take out the rubbish and do the dishes so that they can feel happy. At school, we can clean the classroom and grow vegetables to beautify our learning environment and experience the joy of harvesting. In our neighborhood, we can clean up city parks and plant trees.
Taking part in labor can not only improve our life skills, but also enrich our spare time life. I hope we teenagers can take part in labor as much as possible.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息。需结合图表中校内、校外不同场所的劳动示例，阐述中学生可参与的劳动项目，并说明劳动对中学生的意义。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点明劳动教育对青少年日益重要这一现状；
第二步，分别从家庭、学校、社区等场所举例说明中学生可从事的劳动活动；
第三步，总结劳动对中学生在提升生活技能、丰富课余生活等方面的意义，并发出积极参与劳动的呼吁。
[亮点词汇]
①play a vital role in 在……中起重要作用
②take out the rubbish 倒垃圾
③clean up 清理
[高分句型]
①There is no doubt that it plays a vital role in shaping our character and preparing us for the challenges of life. (that引导同位语从句)
②Taking part in labor can not only improve our life skills, but also enrich our spare time life. (not only...but also...连接并列谓语)
8．例文
Would you like to keep an AI pet
With the rapid development of technology, AI pets are coming into our lives. So would you like to keep an AI pet I would like to keep an AI pet not a real pet. It’s a great idea because AI pets don’t need food or water. Keeping an AI pet is convenient, because they don’t need taking care of and won’t get sick or die. I can not only save more time on raising pets, but also enjoy the fun of playing with them. I think they are perfect for busy people like me. AI pets can also remind me of important things and stay with me all the time when I am alone. An AI pet can become a good friend who will never leave me.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明自己的态度，是养AI宠物还是真实的宠物；
第二步，说明自己的理由；
第三步，阐述AI宠物会如何影响日常生活。
[亮点词汇]
①take care of照顾
②not only... but also不但……而且……
③remind sb of sth提醒某人某事
[高分句型]
①It’s a great idea because AI pets don’t need food or water.（because引导原因状语从句）
②I think they are perfect for busy people like me.（宾语从句）
9．参考范文（一）
Hello everyone,
I’m Li Hua. I selected a photo from our charity sale event. In the picture, we are working hard to raise money for those in need. This picture captures our dedication and compassion. Participating in the charity sale not only allowed us to support a good cause but also brought our class together. I believe this photo is a perfect reminder of our shared efforts and warm hearts.
Thank you!
参考范文（二）
Hello everyone,
I’m Li Hua. I chose a photo of us playing basketball. In the photo, everyone is giving their best for our class. This picture shows our teamwork and youthful energy. The basketball game not only helped us stay fit but also strengthened our class unity. I hope this photo can be a reminder of the wonderful times we worked hard together.
Thank you!
Li Hua
参考范文（三）
Hey there! You’re looking at the photo. It shows a scene of a volunteer activity where I am participating in maintaining traffic in a public place. Wondering why I chose to share this with you Here’s my thought! This photo represents my promise to community service. I want to show the joy of volunteering and encourage my classmates to get involved. By seeing me actively contributing, I hope to inspire them to make a positive impact too. Let’s all lend a helping hand!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇图片描述类应用文，属于活动回顾性质；
② 时态： “一般现在时”和“现在进行时”；
③ 提示：写作要求以及图片已给出，考生需要结合图片进行写作，详细描述图片内容，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头自我介绍并引出图片；
第二步，中间段对图片内容及意义进行描述，并给出选择该图片的原因；
第三步，结尾段表达自己的感想。
[亮点词汇]
①raise money筹钱
②dedication奉献
③participate in参加
[高分句型]
①Participating in the charity sale not only allowed us to support a good cause but also brought our class together.（not only...but also...句型表示“不仅……而且……”）
②I believe this photo is a perfect reminder of our shared efforts and warm hearts. （宾语从句）
10．例文：
Dear Adam,
I’m glad to help you with your reading card project! In my opinion, Journey to the West is well worth reading because the story is filled with exciting adventures. Also, the characters in it are attractive, especially the Monkey King, who keeps fighting to help the weak and never gives up.
As for the reading card, you can start with the name of the book. Then, list some main characters like the Monkey King. Describe the settings, such as different countries and landscapes in their journey. Finally, write about your favorite part, like the Monkey King’s fights against demons. In this way, the reading card can give readers a clear introduction about the book and make them interested in it.
Hope this helps and I’m looking forward to your reading card!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据邮件中的问题进行写作，可适当增添细节，注意行文连贯，表述完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，介绍自己推荐的中国名著；
第二步，给出写阅读卡的建议；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己的希望。
[亮点词汇]
①be filled with充满
②give up放弃
③as for至于
④in this way这样
[高分句型]
①In my opinion, Journey to the West is well worth reading because the story is filled with exciting adventures. (because引导原因状语从句)
②Also, the characters in it are attractive, especially the Monkey King, who keeps fighting to help the weak and never gives up. (who引导定语从句)
11．例文
Dear Wang Ming,
I am glad you asked me for help to solve your problem. I’d love to share my ideas with you.
I think it is important and necessary for students to help with housework. Because we can’t depend on our parents all the time. Also, doing chores is a good way to help to develop our independence.
It is true that we are all tired after working all day at school. But we can do some simple housework to make our home more beautiful. For example, we can water flowers on the weekend or do the dishes after dinner. Besides, we can clean our bedroom when we finish our homework early. When you see a tidy room, I believe you will feel happy and relaxed.
If you follow my advice, you may solve your problem and do better at home.
Yours,
Li Fei
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
② 时态：主要使用“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写信目的并总述劳动的重要性；
第二步：具体分析劳动的意义；
第三步：给出具体可行的家务建议；
第四步：总结并鼓励行动。
[亮点词汇]
① depend on 依赖
② develop independence 培养独立性
③ Besides 此外
[高分句型]
①I think it is important and necessary for students to help with housework.（宾语从句）
②When you see a tidy room, I believe you will feel happy and relaxed. （时间状语从句）
12．例文
Sunday
When I went to the optician’s this afternoon, I saw something that made me touched.
A boy’s glasses were broken while he was reading in the library. Because he wanted to continue his reading, he went to the optician’s to repair his glasses. But he had only got five yuan in his pocket. He was worried that he didn’t have enough money. Considering he was a student, the owner of the optician’s decided to repair his glasses for free. After the glasses was repaired, the boy left the money on the desk in silence. And then the boy left the optician’s as quickly as possible.
I am deeply moved by the owner and the boy. They are kind-hearted and think more about each other. I believe that with the love and the care our society will be better and better.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇日记；
②时态：时态为一般过去时；
③提示：根据提示内容描述你周日下午在眼镜店所看到的事情，并表达自己的想法，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，详细描述你周日下午在眼镜店所看到的事情；
第三步，表达自己的想法。
[亮点词汇]
①be worried about担心
②in silence沉默地
③as quickly as possible尽可能快地
[高分句型]
①A boy’s glasses were broken while he was reading in the library. (while引导的时间状语从句)
②Because he wanted to continue his reading, he went to the optician’s to repair his glasses. (because引导的原因状语从句)
③I believe that with the love and the care our society will be better and better. (that引导的宾语从句)
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