【期末热点.重难点】2024-2025学年外研版（三年级起点）英语五年级下册 书面表达（含解析）
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期末热点.重难点 书面表达
一．书面表达（共15小题）
1．（2024春 聊城期中）书面表达。
我们的生活每天都在变化。请选取一个或多个方面，对比过去和现在的不同。不少于5句话。
2．（2024春 千山区期中） 请给你的好朋友Jack写一封电子邮件，向他介绍你一天的生活，以My day为题写一篇作文，要求：条理清晰、语句通顺、标点正确，书写工整、规范，不少于50个单词。
3．（2024春 潍城区期中）中国是一个非常美丽的国家，特别是首都北京四季分明，每个季节都有独特的美好。身处英国的Lingling想向英国朋友们介绍北京不同季节的天气、美景以及活动等。请你选择一个季节，帮助Lingling描述一下吧。
要求：（1）围绕一个季节具体描述至少十句话。（2）内容包含提示信息，可适当发挥。（3）时态准确。（4）书写规范、工整。
4．（2024春 诸城市期中）写一篇题为"Last week"的作文，描述你上个星期做了哪些有意义的事情。注意动词的过去式。
要求：不少于五句话，至少50单词。
5．（2024春 琼山区期中）假如你是Liu Jie，请你根据下表格的信息提示，给大家介绍你昨天的饮食情况。
Name Age （年龄） Job （职业） Breakfast Lunch Dinner
Liu Jie fifteen student Hainan noodles hamburgers and juice dumplings
Hello，I'm Liu Jie.
6．（2024春 沈丘县期中） 你的书包是什么样子的呢？请根据所学知识介绍一下自己的书包。
提示：可以从颜色、大小、轻重等方面介绍。
要求：
（1）书写工整规范，语句通顺，条理清晰，标点符号正确；
（2）不少于5句话。
7．（2023春 潍坊期中）你的家庭曾经如何呢？现在又怎样呢？请用至少五句话描述它的变化。
提示：lived，old，small，didn't have，now
8．（2023春 大田县期中）Mary制作了成长卡，写了自己这些年的变化。请你根据卡片信息，仿照已给例句，帮她完成"My changes"。 （至少5句，可适当发挥哦！）
Before Now
short liked singing couldn't skip went to school on foot ... tall like reading can skip go to school by bus ...
My changes Hello!I'm Mary. Before I was short.Now I'm tall. I'm happy for my changes.
9．（2024春 兴文县期末）以下是Xiaowei家人的个人信息，表格中已提供相关短语，请选择填空完成下列小短文。
In the past（过去） Now
Grandma a singer likes dancing
Grandpa worked in the hospital likes learning English
Mum an English teacher ten years ago a nurse in a hospital
Dad a Maths teacher five years ago a policeman
My name is Xiaowei.My grandma was（1） .But now she likes dancing.My grandpa worked（2） .Now，he likes（3） .My mum was an English teacher ten years ago.Now she is（4） in a hospital.My dad was a Maths teacher （5） .Now he is a policeman.
10．（2024春 原州区期末）假设你是李明，请根据图片内容和句型提示描述一下你的周末计划。
I'm going to （1） this Saturday.I'm going to （2） .There are some （3） .I want to（4） .
11．（2024春 安丘市期末） 假定你是Jack，去年夏天到北京拜访了你的叔叔，并参观了很多风景名胜。请根据图片和提示，介绍自己这次北京之旅，并简单描述一下今年暑假的旅游规划。请以My Travel为题帮助Jack书写本短文。
要求：
（1）使用合适的单词，运用恰当的时态，全文要逻辑清晰、表达流畅。
（2）使用"手写印刷体"，字母、单词和标点符号的间距要适当。
（3）至少写出6个正确句子，不少于40个单词。（开头已给出不计入）。
温馨提示： Where did you go？ What did you do？ How did you go there？ When did you do？ How did you feel？
12．（2024春 昌邑市期末）小练笔。
为了丰富校园生活，学校准备组织英语风采大赛。大赛第一个环节是用英语介绍自己，请用学过的英语知识展示一下你的个人风采吧。
要求：1.假设你是Mike。2.展示内容参考思维导图，可以适当合理发挥。3.条理清晰，语句通顺，标点正确，书写清晰、规范。4.不少于8句话。
Hello，everyone.I'm Mike.
13．（2024春 海口期末）开头语和结束语已给出。
When last week
Where Shanghai
Location（位置） in the east of China
Characteristics（特征） big and famous
How to go by plane
What to do visited Shanghai Museum
POSTCARD
Dear Grandpa and Grandma，
How are you？ I miss you.
Love，
Tom
14．（2023春 化州市期末）书面表达。
玲玲的生日马上到了，请你根据参考问题，写一段话，为她挑选一份合适的礼物并说说理由。
参考问题：（1）How old is Lingling？
（2）Where does she live？
（3）What does she like？
（4）What present will you buy？Why？
要求：①结合参考问题；
②语句通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，标点正确，书写规范、清晰，无语法错误；
③不少于5个句子。
15．（2023春 铁东区期末）你是赵林，在动物园工作，请以"My Day"为题，写一写你一天的工作吧。（参考提示，内容不少于五句话。）
Time Activities
7：00 am feed the elephants
9：30 am clean the bear's house
10：00 am play with pandas
12：30 pm feed the birds
4：00 pm clean the monkey's hill
My Day
My name is Zhao Lin.I work in a big zoo.I'm very busy every day.I usually
期末热点.重难点 书面表达
参考答案与试题解析
一．书面表达（共15小题）
1．（2024春 聊城期中）书面表达。
我们的生活每天都在变化。请选取一个或多个方面，对比过去和现在的不同。不少于5句话。
Many changes have taken place in our life.Before，there were many small houses.Now，there are many tall buildings.In the past，people traveled on foot or by bike.Nowadays，people travel by car or by subway.Before，there were no televisions or mobile phones.Now，there are computers and mobile phones.
【考点】状物篇．
【答案】Many changes have taken place in our life.Before，there were many small houses.Now，there are many tall buildings.In the past，people traveled on foot or by bike.Nowadays，people travel by car or by subway.Before，there were no televisions or mobile phones.Now，there are computers and mobile phones.
【分析】写作要求：请选取一个或多个方面，对比过去和现在的不同。不少于5句话。
重点词汇：changes变化，travel旅行，mobile phones手机
重点句型：
Before，there were many small houses.
以前，有很多小房子。
使用there be句型可以表示某地有某物。
【解答】Many changes have taken place in our life.Before，there were many small houses.Now，there are many tall buildings.In the past，people traveled on foot or by bike.Nowadays，people travel by car or by subway.Before，there were no televisions or mobile phones.Now，there are computers and mobile phones.
我们的生活发生了许多变化。以前，有很多小房子。现在，有很多高楼大厦。以前，人们步行或者骑车出行。现在，人们开车或者坐地铁出行。以前，没有电视和手机。现在，有电脑和手机。
【点评】小学阶段，英文写作一般考查学生的语言运用能力，写作内容简单实用。学生必须掌握重要的单词拼写以及语法结构，写作时要认真审题，理解题意，根据要求来写。
2．（2024春 千山区期中） 请给你的好朋友Jack写一封电子邮件，向他介绍你一天的生活，以My day为题写一篇作文，要求：条理清晰、语句通顺、标点正确，书写工整、规范，不少于50个单词。
【考点】记事篇．
【答案】
My day
Dear Jack，
Today is Monday．First，I get up at 6：00．I have my breakfast at 6：30．Then，I go to school at 7：00．I do morning exercise at 7：50．I have eight classes a day．I play sports with my friends after class.I go home at 5：00．I do my homework after school．I watch TV after dinner．After an hour，I wash my face and brush my teeth．I go to bed at 9：00．This is my day．How about yours？
Yours，
Tom
【分析】写作思路：要求给自己的好朋友Jack写一封电子邮件，向他介绍自己一天的生活，以My day为题写一篇作文，不少于50个单词。
重点词汇：have breakfast吃早餐，do morning exercise做早操，do homework做作业。
重点句型：First，I get up at 6：00．首先我6点起床。
翻译：首先，我6点起床。
分析：get up起床，动词短语。
【解答】
My day
Dear Jack，
Today is Monday．First，I get up at 6：00．I have my breakfast at 6：30．Then，I go to school at 7：00．I do morning exercise at 7：50．I have eight classes a day．I play sports with my friends after class.I go home at 5：00．I do my homework after school．I watch TV after dinner．After an hour，I wash my face and brush my teeth．I go to bed at 9：00．This is my day．How about yours？
Yours，
Tom
我的一天
亲爱的杰克，
今天是星期一。首先，我6点起床。我早上六点半吃早饭。然后我七点钟去学校。七点五十做早操。我一天有八节课。下课后我和朋友们一起做运动。我5点就回家了。放学后我做我的功课。晚饭后我看电视。一小时后，我洗脸和刷牙。我9点去睡觉。这是我的一天。你的呢？
你的，
汤姆
【点评】小学阶段，英文写作一般考查学生的语言运用能力，写作内容简单实用。学生必须掌握重要的单词拼写以及语法结构，写作时要认真审题，理解题意，根据要求来写。
3．（2024春 潍城区期中）中国是一个非常美丽的国家，特别是首都北京四季分明，每个季节都有独特的美好。身处英国的Lingling想向英国朋友们介绍北京不同季节的天气、美景以及活动等。请你选择一个季节，帮助Lingling描述一下吧。
要求：（1）围绕一个季节具体描述至少十句话。（2）内容包含提示信息，可适当发挥。（3）时态准确。（4）书写规范、工整。
China is a very beautiful country，especially the capital Beijing，each season has its own unique beauty.Spring in Beijing is especially beautiful.Spring usually comes in March.The weather is warm.It often rains.The trees turn green.There are flowers everywhere.The birds sing merrily.People often take a walk in spring.Some children like to fly kites in spring.Old people get together in spring to do square dancing.What a beautiful spring in Beijing!
【考点】描景篇．
【答案】China is a very beautiful country，especially the capital Beijing，each season has its own unique beauty.Spring in Beijing is especially beautiful.Spring usually comes in March.The weather is warm.It often rains.The trees turn green.There are flowers everywhere.The birds sing merrily.People often take a walk in spring.Some children like to fly kites in spring.Old people get together in spring to do square dancing.What a beautiful spring in Beijing!
【分析】写作思路：要求向英国朋友们介绍北京不同季节的天气、美景以及活动等，围绕一个季节具体描述至少十句话。
重点词汇：especially尤其；Marc三月；warm暖和；take a walk散步；fly kites放风筝。
重点句型：What a beautiful spring in Beijing!
翻译：北京的春天多美啊！
分析：感叹句：What+a+形容词+可数名词单数+其他！
【解答】China is a very beautiful country，especially the capital Beijing，each season has its own unique beauty.Spring in Beijing is especially beautiful.Spring usually comes in March.The weather is warm.It often rains.The trees turn green.There are flowers everywhere.The birds sing merrily.People often take a walk in spring.Some children like to fly kites in spring.Old people get together in spring to do square dancing.What a beautiful spring in Beijing!
中国是一个非常美丽的国家，尤其是首都北京，每个季节都有自己独特的美丽。北京的春天特别美丽。春天通常在三月来临。天气很暖和。经常下雨。树木变绿。到处都是花。鸟儿欢快地歌唱。人们常在春天散步。有些孩子喜欢在春天放风筝。老人在春天聚在一起跳广场舞。北京的春天多美啊！
【点评】小学阶段，英文写作一般考查学生的语言运用能力，写作内容简单实用。学生必须掌握重要的单词拼写以及语法结构，写作时要认真审题，理解题意，根据要求来写。
4．（2024春 诸城市期中）写一篇题为"Last week"的作文，描述你上个星期做了哪些有意义的事情。注意动词的过去式。
要求：不少于五句话，至少50单词。
【考点】记事篇．
【答案】
Last week
Last week，I went to the park with my friends.We went there on foot because it's near.It was a fine day.We took some fruit and cookies.We played football there.We also had a picnic there.I sang an English song and Lucy danced.We all had a good time.
【分析】写作思路：要求写一篇题为"Last week"的作文，描述你上个星期做了哪些有意义的事情。注意动词的过去式，不少于五句话，至少50个单词。
重点词汇：park公园；on foot步行；fruit水果；have a picnic野餐。
重点句型：We all had a good time.
翻译：我们都玩得很开心。
分析：have a good time玩得开心。
【解答】
Last week
Last week，I went to the park with my friends.We went there on foot because it's near.It was a fine day.We took some fruit and cookies.We played football there.We also had a picnic there.I sang an English song and Lucy danced.We all had a good time.
上周
上周，我和朋友们去了公园。我们步行去那里，因为它很近。天气很好。我们带了一些水果和饼干。我们在那里踢足球。我们还在那里野餐。我唱了一首英文歌，露西跳舞。我们都玩得很开心。
【点评】小学阶段，英文写作一般考查学生的语言运用能力，写作内容简单实用。学生必须掌握重要的单词拼写以及语法结构，写作时要认真审题，理解题意，根据要求来写。
5．（2024春 琼山区期中）假如你是Liu Jie，请你根据下表格的信息提示，给大家介绍你昨天的饮食情况。
Name Age （年龄） Job （职业） Breakfast Lunch Dinner
Liu Jie fifteen student Hainan noodles hamburgers and juice dumplings
Hello，I'm Liu Jie. I'm fifteen years old.I am a student.I had Hainan noodles for breakfast yesterday.I had hamburgers and juice for lunch.I had dumplings for dinner.
【考点】记事篇．
【答案】Hello，I'm Liu Jie.I'm fifteen years old.I am a student.I had Hainan noodles for breakfast yesterday.I had hamburgers and juice for lunch.I had dumplings for dinner.
【分析】写作思路：要求根据下表格的信息提示，给大家介绍自己昨天的饮食情况。时态用一般过去时。
重点词汇：student学生；noodles面条；hamburgers汉堡；dumplings饺子。
重点句型：I had Hainan noodles for breakfast yesterday.
翻译：我昨天早餐吃了海南面。
分析：have sth.for breakfast早餐吃......
【解答】Hello，I'm Liu Jie.I'm fifteen years old.I am a student.I had Hainan noodles for breakfast yesterday.I had hamburgers and juice for lunch.I had dumplings for dinner.
你好，我是刘杰。我十五岁了。我是一个学生。我昨天早餐吃了海南面。我午餐吃了汉堡包，喝了果汁。我晚餐吃了饺子。
【点评】小学阶段，英文写作一般考查学生的语言运用能力，写作内容简单实用。学生必须掌握重要的单词拼写以及语法结构，写作时要认真审题，理解题意，根据要求来写。
6．（2024春 沈丘县期中） 你的书包是什么样子的呢？请根据所学知识介绍一下自己的书包。
提示：可以从颜色、大小、轻重等方面介绍。
要求：
（1）书写工整规范，语句通顺，条理清晰，标点符号正确；
（2）不少于5句话。
【考点】状物篇．
【答案】I have got a schoolbag.My mother bought it for me last year.It's green and white.It's very big and heavy.It has got two wheels.So it's easy for me to carry.And it has got a panda on it.It's very cute.I like my schoolbag.
【分析】写作思路：要求根据所学知识介绍一下自己的书包，可以从颜色、大小、轻重等方面介绍，不少于5句话。
重点词汇：bought买；wheels轮子；panda熊猫；cute可爱的。
重点句型：So it's easy for me to carry.
翻译：这样便于我携带。
分析：it's+adj.+ for sb.to do sth.对于某人来说做某事怎么样。
【解答】I have got a schoolbag.My mother bought it for me last year.It's green and white.It's very big and heavy.It has got two wheels.So it's easy for me to carry.And it has got a panda on it.It's very cute.I like my schoolbag.
我有一个书包。我妈妈去年给我买的。它是绿白相间的。它非常大和重。它有两个轮子。这样便于我携带。上面有一只熊猫。它很可爱。我喜欢我的书包。
【点评】小学阶段，英文写作一般考查学生的语言运用能力，写作内容简单实用。学生必须掌握重要的单词拼写以及语法结构，写作时要认真审题，理解题意，根据要求来写。
7．（2023春 潍坊期中）你的家庭曾经如何呢？现在又怎样呢？请用至少五句话描述它的变化。
提示：lived，old，small，didn't have，now
I lived in a small village in the past.My house was very small and old.I didn't have a TV.But now I live in a city.My house is big and beautiful.I have a new TV.I love my new house very much.
【考点】记事篇．
【答案】I lived in a small village in the past.My house was very small and old.I didn't have a TV.But now I live in a city.My house is big and beautiful.I have a new TV.I love my new house very much.
【分析】写作思路：要求根据提示词，用至少五句话描述家庭的变化。时态用一般过去时和一般现在时。
重点单词和短语：in the past在过去；old旧的；TV电视；beautiful漂亮的。
重点句型：I didn't have a TV.
翻译：我没有电视。
分析：didn't帮助构成否定句。
【解答】I lived in a small village in the past.My house was very small and old.I didn't have a TV.But now I live in a city.My house is big and beautiful.I have a new TV.I love my new house very much.
我过去住在一个小村庄。我的房子又小又旧。我没有电视。但现在我住在一个城市。我的房子又大又漂亮。我有一台新电视。我非常喜欢我的新房子。
【点评】小学阶段，英文写作一般考查学生的语言运用能力，写作内容简单实用。学生必须掌握重要的单词拼写以及语法结构，写作时要认真审题，理解题意，根据要求来写。
8．（2023春 大田县期中）Mary制作了成长卡，写了自己这些年的变化。请你根据卡片信息，仿照已给例句，帮她完成"My changes"。 （至少5句，可适当发挥哦！）
Before Now
short liked singing couldn't skip went to school on foot ... tall like reading can skip go to school by bus ...
My changes Hello!I'm Mary. Before I was short.Now I'm tall. Before I liked singing.Now I like reading.Before I couldn't skip.Now I can skip.Before I went to school on foot.Now I go to school by bus. I'm happy for my changes.
【考点】记事篇．
【答案】
My changes
Hello!I'm Mary.
Before I was short.Now I'm tall.Before I liked singing.Now I like reading.Before I couldn't skip.Now I can skip.Before I went to school on foot.Now I go to school by bus.
I'm happy for my changes.
【分析】写作思路：要求根据卡片信息，仿照已给例句，帮她完成"My changes"，时态用一般过去时和一般现在时，不少于5句话。
重点词汇：on foot步行；sing唱歌；read读书；by bus乘公共汽车。
重点句型：Now I can skip.
翻译：现在我会跳了。
分析：can表示能力。
【解答】
My changes
Hello!I'm Mary.
Before I was short.Now I'm tall.Before I liked singing.Now I like reading.Before I couldn't skip.Now I can skip.Before I went to school on foot.Now I go to school by bus.
I'm happy for my changes.
我的变化
你好！我是玛丽。
在我变矮之前。现在我很高了。以前我喜欢唱歌。现在我喜欢读书。之前我不会跳。现在我会跳了。在我步行上学之前。现在我乘公共汽车上学。
我为自己的改变感到高兴。
【点评】小学阶段，英文写作一般考查学生的语言运用能力，写作内容简单实用。学生必须掌握重要的单词拼写以及语法结构，写作时要认真审题，理解题意，根据要求来写。
9．（2024春 兴文县期末）以下是Xiaowei家人的个人信息，表格中已提供相关短语，请选择填空完成下列小短文。
In the past（过去） Now
Grandma a singer likes dancing
Grandpa worked in the hospital likes learning English
Mum an English teacher ten years ago a nurse in a hospital
Dad a Maths teacher five years ago a policeman
My name is Xiaowei.My grandma was（1） a singer .But now she likes dancing.My grandpa worked（2） in the hospital .Now，he likes（3） learning English .My mum was an English teacher ten years ago.Now she is（4） a nurse in a hospital.My dad was a Maths teacher （5） five years ago .Now he is a policeman.
【考点】写人篇．
【答案】My name is Xiaowei.My grandma was a singer.But now she likes dancing.My grandpa worked in the hospital.Now，he likes learning English.My mum was an English teacher ten years ago.Now she is a nurse in a hospital.My dad was a Maths teacher five years ago.Now he is a policeman.
【分析】写作思路：要求根据表格中提供的相关短语，完成短文。
重点词汇：singer歌手；in the hospital在医院；English英语；nurse护士；five years ago五年前。
重点句型：Now，he likes learning English.
翻译：现在，他喜欢学习英语。
分析：like doing sth.喜欢做某事。
【解答】My name is Xiaowei.My grandma was a singer.But now she likes dancing.My grandpa worked in the hospital.Now，he likes learning English.My mum was an English teacher ten years ago.Now she is a nurse in a hospital.My dad was a Maths teacher five years ago.Now he is a policeman.
我的名字叫小伟。我奶奶是个歌手。但是现在她喜欢跳舞。我爷爷在医院工作。现在，他喜欢学习英语。我妈妈十年前是一名英语老师。现在她是一家医院的护士。我爸爸五年前是一名数学老师。现在他是一名警察。
【点评】小学阶段，英文写作一般考查学生的语言运用能力，写作内容简单实用。学生必须掌握重要的单词拼写以及语法结构，写作时要认真审题，理解题意，根据要求来写。
10．（2024春 原州区期末）假设你是李明，请根据图片内容和句型提示描述一下你的周末计划。
I'm going to （1） the zoo this Saturday.I'm going to （2） bring some food.I'm going to bring some bread and juice.I'm going to take some photos. .There are some （3） pandas in the zoo .I want to（4） take photos with them .
【考点】记事篇．
【答案】I'm going to the zoo this Saturday.I'm going to bring some food.I'm going to bring some bread and juice.I'm going to take some photos.There are some pandas in the zoo.I want to take photos with them.
【分析】写作要求：假设你是李明，请根据图片内容和句型提示描述一下你的周末计划。
重点词汇：Saturday周六，bread面包，photo照片
重点句型：
I'm going to take some photos.
我打算拍一些照片。
sb be going to do sth.表示某人打算做某事。
【解答】I'm going to the zoo this Saturday.I'm going to bring some food.I'm going to bring some bread and juice.I'm going to take some photos.There are some pandas in the zoo.I want to take photos with them.
这个周六我打算去动物园。我打算带一些食物。我打算带一些面包和果汁。我打算拍一些照片。动物园里有一些熊猫。我想要和它们拍照。
【点评】小学阶段，英文写作一般考查学生的语言运用能力，写作内容简单实用。学生必须掌握重要的单词拼写以及语法结构，写作时要认真审题，理解题意，根据要求来写。
11．（2024春 安丘市期末） 假定你是Jack，去年夏天到北京拜访了你的叔叔，并参观了很多风景名胜。请根据图片和提示，介绍自己这次北京之旅，并简单描述一下今年暑假的旅游规划。请以My Travel为题帮助Jack书写本短文。
要求：
（1）使用合适的单词，运用恰当的时态，全文要逻辑清晰、表达流畅。
（2）使用"手写印刷体"，字母、单词和标点符号的间距要适当。
（3）至少写出6个正确句子，不少于40个单词。（开头已给出不计入）。
温馨提示： Where did you go？ What did you do？ How did you go there？ When did you do？ How did you feel？
【考点】记事篇．
【答案】
My Travel
I'm Jack.Last summer，my family and I went to Beijing to visit my uncle.We went there by train at Weifang Train Station.We stayed at the Beijing Hotel.On July 5th，we visited Tian'anmen Square.The next day we climbed the Great Wall.On the third day we visited China Science Museum.We had a great time.I am going to Sanya with my parents this summer holiday.How about you？
【分析】写作思路：要求根据图片和提示，介绍自己去年夏天北京之旅，并简单描述一下今年暑假的旅游规划。以My Travel为题帮助Jack书写本短文。
重点词汇：visit拜访；by train乘火车；the Great Wall长城；have a great time玩得开心。
重点句型：We went there by train at Weifang Train Station.
翻译：我们在潍坊火车站乘火车去了那里。
分析：by train乘火车。
【解答】
My Travel
I'm Jack.Last summer，my family and I went to Beijing to visit my uncle.We went there by train at Weifang Train Station.We stayed at the Beijing Hotel.On July 5th，we visited Tian'anmen Square.The next day we climbed the Great Wall.On the third day we visited China Science Museum.We had a great time.I am going to Sanya with my parents this summer holiday.How about you？
我的旅行
我是杰克。去年夏天，我和我的家人去北京拜访我的叔叔。我们在潍坊火车站乘火车去了那里。我们住在了北京饭店。七月五日，我们参观了天安门广场。第二天我们爬了长城。第三天我们参观了中国科学博物馆。我们玩得很开心。这个暑假我要和我的父母去三亚。你呢？
【点评】小学阶段，英文写作一般考查学生的语言运用能力，写作内容简单实用。学生必须掌握重要的单词拼写以及语法结构，写作时要认真审题，理解题意，根据要求来写。
12．（2024春 昌邑市期末）小练笔。
为了丰富校园生活，学校准备组织英语风采大赛。大赛第一个环节是用英语介绍自己，请用学过的英语知识展示一下你的个人风采吧。
要求：1.假设你是Mike。2.展示内容参考思维导图，可以适当合理发挥。3.条理清晰，语句通顺，标点正确，书写清晰、规范。4.不少于8句话。
Hello，everyone.I'm Mike. I'm 11 years old.My father is a doctor.He goes to work by car.My mother is a teacher.She goes to work on foot.I like bread best.Yesterday I had bread for breakfast.I get up at six on the weekend.And then I run in the park.
【考点】写人篇．
【答案】Hello，everyone.I'm Mike.I'm 11 years old.My father is a doctor.He goes to work by car.My mother is a teacher.She goes to work on foot.I like bread best.Yesterday I had bread for breakfast.I get up at six on the weekend.And then I run in the park.
【分析】写作思路：要求参考思维导图，用英语介绍自己，不少于8句话。
重点词汇：doctor医生，by car开车，teacher教师，on foot步行，bread面包，get up起床。
重点句型：I get up at six on the weekend.
翻译：我周末六点起床。
分析：at后加具体时间。
【解答】Hello，everyone.I'm Mike.I'm 11 years old.My father is a doctor.He goes to work by car.My mother is a teacher.She goes to work on foot.I like bread best.Yesterday I had bread for breakfast.I get up at six on the weekend.And then I run in the park.
大家好。我是迈克。我11岁了。我爸爸是一名医生。他开车去上班。我妈妈是一名教师。她步行去上班。我最喜欢面包。昨天我早餐吃了面包。我周末六点起床。然后我在公园跑步。
【点评】小学阶段，英文写作一般考查学生的语言运用能力，写作内容简单实用。学生必须掌握重要的单词拼写以及语法结构，写作时要认真审题，理解题意，根据要求来写。
13．（2024春 海口期末）开头语和结束语已给出。
When last week
Where Shanghai
Location（位置） in the east of China
Characteristics（特征） big and famous
How to go by plane
What to do visited Shanghai Museum
POSTCARD
Dear Grandpa and Grandma，
How are you？ I went to Shanghai last week.It is in the east of China.It is big and famous.I went there by plane.I visited Shanghai Museum. I miss you.
Love，
Tom
【考点】应用篇．
【答案】
POSTCARD
Dear Grandpa and Grandma，
How are you？I went to Shanghai last week.It is in the east of China.It is big and famous.I went there by plane.I visited Shanghai Museum.I miss you.
Love，
Tom
【分析】写作要求：根据所给信息将明信片补充完整。
重点词汇：last上一个的，east东部，famous著名的。
重点句型：
I went there by plane.
翻译：我坐飞机去了那儿。
分析：sb did sth.表示某人做了某事。
【解答】
POSTCARD
Dear Grandpa and Grandma，
How are you？I went to Shanghai last week.It is in the east of China.It is big and famous.I went there by plane.I visited Shanghai Museum.I miss you.
Love，
Tom
明信片
亲爱的爷爷奶奶，
你们好吗？上周我去了上海。它在中国的东部。它是大的和著名的。我坐飞机去了那儿。我参观了上海博物馆。我想你们。
爱你们的，
汤姆
【点评】小学阶段，英文写作一般考查学生的语言运用能力，写作内容简单实用。学生必须掌握重要的单词拼写以及语法结构，写作时要认真审题，理解题意，根据要求来写。
14．（2023春 化州市期末）书面表达。
玲玲的生日马上到了，请你根据参考问题，写一段话，为她挑选一份合适的礼物并说说理由。
参考问题：（1）How old is Lingling？
（2）Where does she live？
（3）What does she like？
（4）What present will you buy？Why？
要求：①结合参考问题；
②语句通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，标点正确，书写规范、清晰，无语法错误；
③不少于5个句子。
Lingling is my good friend.She is eleven years old this year.She lives in Shanghai with her family.She likes dolls and animals.Her birthday is coming soon.I am going to buy her a teddy bear.Because she thinks teddy bears are very cute.
【考点】记事篇．
【答案】Lingling is my good friend.She is eleven years old this year.She lives in Shanghai with her family.She likes dolls and animals.Her birthday is coming soon.I am going to buy her a teddy bear.Because she thinks teddy bears are very cute.
【分析】写作思路：该题要求以第三人称描写朋友玲玲，包括她的年龄，爱好，居住地，然后描述自己将要买给她的礼物并说明原因。时态为一般现在时和一般将来时，注意语句通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，标点正确，书写规范、清晰，无语法错误；不少于5个句子。
重点词汇：good friend好朋友，years old……岁，lives in住在，doll玩偶，teddy bear泰迪熊，cute可爱的。
重点句型：I am going to buy her a teddy bear.
翻译：我打算给她买一只泰迪熊。
分析：be going to do sth.打算做某事。
【解答】Lingling is my good friend.She is eleven years old this year.She lives in Shanghai with her family.She likes dolls and animals.Her birthday is coming soon.I am going to buy her a teddy bear.Because she thinks teddy bears are very cute.
玲玲是我的好朋友。她今年十一岁。她和家人住在上海。她喜欢洋娃娃和动物。她的生日快到了。我打算给她买一只泰迪熊。因为她觉得泰迪熊很可爱。
【点评】小学阶段，英文写作一般考查学生的语言运用能力，写作内容简单实用。学生必须掌握重要的单词拼写以及语法结构，写作时要认真审题，理解题意，根据要求来写。
15．（2023春 铁东区期末）你是赵林，在动物园工作，请以"My Day"为题，写一写你一天的工作吧。（参考提示，内容不少于五句话。）
Time Activities
7：00 am feed the elephants
9：30 am clean the bear's house
10：00 am play with pandas
12：30 pm feed the birds
4：00 pm clean the monkey's hill
My Day
My name is Zhao Lin.I work in a big zoo.I'm very busy every day.I usually feed the elephants at 7：00 a.m.And I usually clean the bear's house at 9：30 a.m.After that，I usually play with pandas.Then I usually feed the birds at 12：30 p.m.At last，I usually clean the monkey's hill at 4：00 p.m.I'm a little tired but happy.
【考点】记事篇．
【答案】
My Day
My name is Zhao Lin.I work in a big zoo.I'm very busy every day.I usually feed the elephants at 7：00 a.m.And I usually clean the bear's house at 9：30 a.m.After that，I usually play with pandas.Then I usually feed the birds at 12：30 p.m.At last，I usually clean the monkey's hill at 4：00 p.m.I'm a little tired but happy.
【分析】写作思路：要求以"My Day"为题，写一写你在动物园一天的工作，时态用一般现在时，不少于5句话。
重点词汇：busy忙碌的；elephant大象；bear熊；monkey猴子。
重点句型：I'm a little tired but happy.
翻译：我有点累，但很高兴。
分析：but表转折。
【解答】
My Day
My name is Zhao Lin.I work in a big zoo.I'm very busy every day.I usually feed the elephants at 7：00 a.m.And I usually clean the bear's house at 9：30 a.m.After that，I usually play with pandas.Then I usually feed the birds at 12：30 p.m.At last，I usually clean the monkey's hill at 4：00 p.m.I'm a little tired but happy.
我的一天
我叫赵林。我在一家大动物园工作。我每天都很忙。我通常在早上7点喂大象。我通常在上午9点半打扫熊的房子。之后，我通常和熊猫一起玩。然后我通常在中午12点30分喂鸟。最后，我通常在下午4点打扫猴子的小山。我有点累，但很高兴。
【点评】小学阶段，英文写作一般考查学生的语言运用能力，写作内容简单实用。学生必须掌握重要的单词拼写以及语法结构，写作时要认真审题，理解题意，根据要求来写。
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一．书面表达（共15小题）
1．（2024春 聊城期中）书面表达。
我们的生活每天都在变化。请选取一个或多个方面，对比过去和现在的不同。不少于5句话。
2．（2024春 千山区期中） 请给你的好朋友Jack写一封电子邮件，向他介绍你一天的生活，以My day为题写一篇作文，要求：条理清晰、语句通顺、标点正确，书写工整、规范，不少于50个单词。
3．（2024春 潍城区期中）中国是一个非常美丽的国家，特别是首都北京四季分明，每个季节都有独特的美好。身处英国的Lingling想向英国朋友们介绍北京不同季节的天气、美景以及活动等。请你选择一个季节，帮助Lingling描述一下吧。
要求：（1）围绕一个季节具体描述至少十句话。（2）内容包含提示信息，可适当发挥。（3）时态准确。（4）书写规范、工整。
4．（2024春 诸城市期中）写一篇题为"Last week"的作文，描述你上个星期做了哪些有意义的事情。注意动词的过去式。
要求：不少于五句话，至少50单词。
5．（2024春 琼山区期中）假如你是Liu Jie，请你根据下表格的信息提示，给大家介绍你昨天的饮食情况。
Name Age （年龄） Job （职业） Breakfast Lunch Dinner
Liu Jie fifteen student Hainan noodles hamburgers and juice dumplings
Hello，I'm Liu Jie.
6．（2024春 沈丘县期中） 你的书包是什么样子的呢？请根据所学知识介绍一下自己的书包。
提示：可以从颜色、大小、轻重等方面介绍。
要求：
（1）书写工整规范，语句通顺，条理清晰，标点符号正确；
（2）不少于5句话。
7．（2023春 潍坊期中）你的家庭曾经如何呢？现在又怎样呢？请用至少五句话描述它的变化。
提示：lived，old，small，didn't have，now
8．（2023春 大田县期中）Mary制作了成长卡，写了自己这些年的变化。请你根据卡片信息，仿照已给例句，帮她完成"My changes"。 （至少5句，可适当发挥哦！）
Before Now
short liked singing couldn't skip went to school on foot ... tall like reading can skip go to school by bus ...
My changes Hello!I'm Mary. Before I was short.Now I'm tall. I'm happy for my changes.
9．（2024春 兴文县期末）以下是Xiaowei家人的个人信息，表格中已提供相关短语，请选择填空完成下列小短文。
In the past（过去） Now
Grandma a singer likes dancing
Grandpa worked in the hospital likes learning English
Mum an English teacher ten years ago a nurse in a hospital
Dad a Maths teacher five years ago a policeman
My name is Xiaowei.My grandma was（1） .But now she likes dancing.My grandpa worked（2） .Now，he likes（3） .My mum was an English teacher ten years ago.Now she is（4） in a hospital.My dad was a Maths teacher （5） .Now he is a policeman.
10．（2024春 原州区期末）假设你是李明，请根据图片内容和句型提示描述一下你的周末计划。
I'm going to （1） this Saturday.I'm going to （2） .There are some （3） .I want to（4） .
11．（2024春 安丘市期末） 假定你是Jack，去年夏天到北京拜访了你的叔叔，并参观了很多风景名胜。请根据图片和提示，介绍自己这次北京之旅，并简单描述一下今年暑假的旅游规划。请以My Travel为题帮助Jack书写本短文。
要求：
（1）使用合适的单词，运用恰当的时态，全文要逻辑清晰、表达流畅。
（2）使用"手写印刷体"，字母、单词和标点符号的间距要适当。
（3）至少写出6个正确句子，不少于40个单词。（开头已给出不计入）。
温馨提示： Where did you go？ What did you do？ How did you go there？ When did you do？ How did you feel？
12．（2024春 昌邑市期末）小练笔。
为了丰富校园生活，学校准备组织英语风采大赛。大赛第一个环节是用英语介绍自己，请用学过的英语知识展示一下你的个人风采吧。
要求：1.假设你是Mike。2.展示内容参考思维导图，可以适当合理发挥。3.条理清晰，语句通顺，标点正确，书写清晰、规范。4.不少于8句话。
Hello，everyone.I'm Mike.
13．（2024春 海口期末）开头语和结束语已给出。
When last week
Where Shanghai
Location（位置） in the east of China
Characteristics（特征） big and famous
How to go by plane
What to do visited Shanghai Museum
POSTCARD
Dear Grandpa and Grandma，
How are you？ I miss you.
Love，
Tom
14．（2023春 化州市期末）书面表达。
玲玲的生日马上到了，请你根据参考问题，写一段话，为她挑选一份合适的礼物并说说理由。
参考问题：（1）How old is Lingling？
（2）Where does she live？
（3）What does she like？
（4）What present will you buy？Why？
要求：①结合参考问题；
②语句通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，标点正确，书写规范、清晰，无语法错误；
③不少于5个句子。
15．（2023春 铁东区期末）你是赵林，在动物园工作，请以"My Day"为题，写一写你一天的工作吧。（参考提示，内容不少于五句话。）
Time Activities
7：00 am feed the elephants
9：30 am clean the bear's house
10：00 am play with pandas
12：30 pm feed the birds
4：00 pm clean the monkey's hill
My Day
My name is Zhao Lin.I work in a big zoo.I'm very busy every day.I usually
期末热点.重难点 书面表达
参考答案与试题解析
一．书面表达（共15小题）
1．（2024春 聊城期中）书面表达。
我们的生活每天都在变化。请选取一个或多个方面，对比过去和现在的不同。不少于5句话。
Many changes have taken place in our life.Before，there were many small houses.Now，there are many tall buildings.In the past，people traveled on foot or by bike.Nowadays，people travel by car or by subway.Before，there were no televisions or mobile phones.Now，there are computers and mobile phones.
【考点】状物篇．
【答案】Many changes have taken place in our life.Before，there were many small houses.Now，there are many tall buildings.In the past，people traveled on foot or by bike.Nowadays，people travel by car or by subway.Before，there were no televisions or mobile phones.Now，there are computers and mobile phones.
【分析】写作要求：请选取一个或多个方面，对比过去和现在的不同。不少于5句话。
重点词汇：changes变化，travel旅行，mobile phones手机
重点句型：
Before，there were many small houses.
以前，有很多小房子。
使用there be句型可以表示某地有某物。
【解答】Many changes have taken place in our life.Before，there were many small houses.Now，there are many tall buildings.In the past，people traveled on foot or by bike.Nowadays，people travel by car or by subway.Before，there were no televisions or mobile phones.Now，there are computers and mobile phones.
我们的生活发生了许多变化。以前，有很多小房子。现在，有很多高楼大厦。以前，人们步行或者骑车出行。现在，人们开车或者坐地铁出行。以前，没有电视和手机。现在，有电脑和手机。
【点评】小学阶段，英文写作一般考查学生的语言运用能力，写作内容简单实用。学生必须掌握重要的单词拼写以及语法结构，写作时要认真审题，理解题意，根据要求来写。
2．（2024春 千山区期中） 请给你的好朋友Jack写一封电子邮件，向他介绍你一天的生活，以My day为题写一篇作文，要求：条理清晰、语句通顺、标点正确，书写工整、规范，不少于50个单词。
【考点】记事篇．
【答案】
My day
Dear Jack，
Today is Monday．First，I get up at 6：00．I have my breakfast at 6：30．Then，I go to school at 7：00．I do morning exercise at 7：50．I have eight classes a day．I play sports with my friends after class.I go home at 5：00．I do my homework after school．I watch TV after dinner．After an hour，I wash my face and brush my teeth．I go to bed at 9：00．This is my day．How about yours？
Yours，
Tom
【分析】写作思路：要求给自己的好朋友Jack写一封电子邮件，向他介绍自己一天的生活，以My day为题写一篇作文，不少于50个单词。
重点词汇：have breakfast吃早餐，do morning exercise做早操，do homework做作业。
重点句型：First，I get up at 6：00．首先我6点起床。
翻译：首先，我6点起床。
分析：get up起床，动词短语。
【解答】
My day
Dear Jack，
Today is Monday．First，I get up at 6：00．I have my breakfast at 6：30．Then，I go to school at 7：00．I do morning exercise at 7：50．I have eight classes a day．I play sports with my friends after class.I go home at 5：00．I do my homework after school．I watch TV after dinner．After an hour，I wash my face and brush my teeth．I go to bed at 9：00．This is my day．How about yours？
Yours，
Tom
我的一天
亲爱的杰克，
今天是星期一。首先，我6点起床。我早上六点半吃早饭。然后我七点钟去学校。七点五十做早操。我一天有八节课。下课后我和朋友们一起做运动。我5点就回家了。放学后我做我的功课。晚饭后我看电视。一小时后，我洗脸和刷牙。我9点去睡觉。这是我的一天。你的呢？
你的，
汤姆
【点评】小学阶段，英文写作一般考查学生的语言运用能力，写作内容简单实用。学生必须掌握重要的单词拼写以及语法结构，写作时要认真审题，理解题意，根据要求来写。
3．（2024春 潍城区期中）中国是一个非常美丽的国家，特别是首都北京四季分明，每个季节都有独特的美好。身处英国的Lingling想向英国朋友们介绍北京不同季节的天气、美景以及活动等。请你选择一个季节，帮助Lingling描述一下吧。
要求：（1）围绕一个季节具体描述至少十句话。（2）内容包含提示信息，可适当发挥。（3）时态准确。（4）书写规范、工整。
China is a very beautiful country，especially the capital Beijing，each season has its own unique beauty.Spring in Beijing is especially beautiful.Spring usually comes in March.The weather is warm.It often rains.The trees turn green.There are flowers everywhere.The birds sing merrily.People often take a walk in spring.Some children like to fly kites in spring.Old people get together in spring to do square dancing.What a beautiful spring in Beijing!
【考点】描景篇．
【答案】China is a very beautiful country，especially the capital Beijing，each season has its own unique beauty.Spring in Beijing is especially beautiful.Spring usually comes in March.The weather is warm.It often rains.The trees turn green.There are flowers everywhere.The birds sing merrily.People often take a walk in spring.Some children like to fly kites in spring.Old people get together in spring to do square dancing.What a beautiful spring in Beijing!
【分析】写作思路：要求向英国朋友们介绍北京不同季节的天气、美景以及活动等，围绕一个季节具体描述至少十句话。
重点词汇：especially尤其；Marc三月；warm暖和；take a walk散步；fly kites放风筝。
重点句型：What a beautiful spring in Beijing!
翻译：北京的春天多美啊！
分析：感叹句：What+a+形容词+可数名词单数+其他！
【解答】China is a very beautiful country，especially the capital Beijing，each season has its own unique beauty.Spring in Beijing is especially beautiful.Spring usually comes in March.The weather is warm.It often rains.The trees turn green.There are flowers everywhere.The birds sing merrily.People often take a walk in spring.Some children like to fly kites in spring.Old people get together in spring to do square dancing.What a beautiful spring in Beijing!
中国是一个非常美丽的国家，尤其是首都北京，每个季节都有自己独特的美丽。北京的春天特别美丽。春天通常在三月来临。天气很暖和。经常下雨。树木变绿。到处都是花。鸟儿欢快地歌唱。人们常在春天散步。有些孩子喜欢在春天放风筝。老人在春天聚在一起跳广场舞。北京的春天多美啊！
【点评】小学阶段，英文写作一般考查学生的语言运用能力，写作内容简单实用。学生必须掌握重要的单词拼写以及语法结构，写作时要认真审题，理解题意，根据要求来写。
4．（2024春 诸城市期中）写一篇题为"Last week"的作文，描述你上个星期做了哪些有意义的事情。注意动词的过去式。
要求：不少于五句话，至少50单词。
【考点】记事篇．
【答案】
Last week
Last week，I went to the park with my friends.We went there on foot because it's near.It was a fine day.We took some fruit and cookies.We played football there.We also had a picnic there.I sang an English song and Lucy danced.We all had a good time.
【分析】写作思路：要求写一篇题为"Last week"的作文，描述你上个星期做了哪些有意义的事情。注意动词的过去式，不少于五句话，至少50个单词。
重点词汇：park公园；on foot步行；fruit水果；have a picnic野餐。
重点句型：We all had a good time.
翻译：我们都玩得很开心。
分析：have a good time玩得开心。
【解答】
Last week
Last week，I went to the park with my friends.We went there on foot because it's near.It was a fine day.We took some fruit and cookies.We played football there.We also had a picnic there.I sang an English song and Lucy danced.We all had a good time.
上周
上周，我和朋友们去了公园。我们步行去那里，因为它很近。天气很好。我们带了一些水果和饼干。我们在那里踢足球。我们还在那里野餐。我唱了一首英文歌，露西跳舞。我们都玩得很开心。
【点评】小学阶段，英文写作一般考查学生的语言运用能力，写作内容简单实用。学生必须掌握重要的单词拼写以及语法结构，写作时要认真审题，理解题意，根据要求来写。
5．（2024春 琼山区期中）假如你是Liu Jie，请你根据下表格的信息提示，给大家介绍你昨天的饮食情况。
Name Age （年龄） Job （职业） Breakfast Lunch Dinner
Liu Jie fifteen student Hainan noodles hamburgers and juice dumplings
Hello，I'm Liu Jie. I'm fifteen years old.I am a student.I had Hainan noodles for breakfast yesterday.I had hamburgers and juice for lunch.I had dumplings for dinner.
【考点】记事篇．
【答案】Hello，I'm Liu Jie.I'm fifteen years old.I am a student.I had Hainan noodles for breakfast yesterday.I had hamburgers and juice for lunch.I had dumplings for dinner.
【分析】写作思路：要求根据下表格的信息提示，给大家介绍自己昨天的饮食情况。时态用一般过去时。
重点词汇：student学生；noodles面条；hamburgers汉堡；dumplings饺子。
重点句型：I had Hainan noodles for breakfast yesterday.
翻译：我昨天早餐吃了海南面。
分析：have sth.for breakfast早餐吃......
【解答】Hello，I'm Liu Jie.I'm fifteen years old.I am a student.I had Hainan noodles for breakfast yesterday.I had hamburgers and juice for lunch.I had dumplings for dinner.
你好，我是刘杰。我十五岁了。我是一个学生。我昨天早餐吃了海南面。我午餐吃了汉堡包，喝了果汁。我晚餐吃了饺子。
【点评】小学阶段，英文写作一般考查学生的语言运用能力，写作内容简单实用。学生必须掌握重要的单词拼写以及语法结构，写作时要认真审题，理解题意，根据要求来写。
6．（2024春 沈丘县期中） 你的书包是什么样子的呢？请根据所学知识介绍一下自己的书包。
提示：可以从颜色、大小、轻重等方面介绍。
要求：
（1）书写工整规范，语句通顺，条理清晰，标点符号正确；
（2）不少于5句话。
【考点】状物篇．
【答案】I have got a schoolbag.My mother bought it for me last year.It's green and white.It's very big and heavy.It has got two wheels.So it's easy for me to carry.And it has got a panda on it.It's very cute.I like my schoolbag.
【分析】写作思路：要求根据所学知识介绍一下自己的书包，可以从颜色、大小、轻重等方面介绍，不少于5句话。
重点词汇：bought买；wheels轮子；panda熊猫；cute可爱的。
重点句型：So it's easy for me to carry.
翻译：这样便于我携带。
分析：it's+adj.+ for sb.to do sth.对于某人来说做某事怎么样。
【解答】I have got a schoolbag.My mother bought it for me last year.It's green and white.It's very big and heavy.It has got two wheels.So it's easy for me to carry.And it has got a panda on it.It's very cute.I like my schoolbag.
我有一个书包。我妈妈去年给我买的。它是绿白相间的。它非常大和重。它有两个轮子。这样便于我携带。上面有一只熊猫。它很可爱。我喜欢我的书包。
【点评】小学阶段，英文写作一般考查学生的语言运用能力，写作内容简单实用。学生必须掌握重要的单词拼写以及语法结构，写作时要认真审题，理解题意，根据要求来写。
7．（2023春 潍坊期中）你的家庭曾经如何呢？现在又怎样呢？请用至少五句话描述它的变化。
提示：lived，old，small，didn't have，now
I lived in a small village in the past.My house was very small and old.I didn't have a TV.But now I live in a city.My house is big and beautiful.I have a new TV.I love my new house very much.
【考点】记事篇．
【答案】I lived in a small village in the past.My house was very small and old.I didn't have a TV.But now I live in a city.My house is big and beautiful.I have a new TV.I love my new house very much.
【分析】写作思路：要求根据提示词，用至少五句话描述家庭的变化。时态用一般过去时和一般现在时。
重点单词和短语：in the past在过去；old旧的；TV电视；beautiful漂亮的。
重点句型：I didn't have a TV.
翻译：我没有电视。
分析：didn't帮助构成否定句。
【解答】I lived in a small village in the past.My house was very small and old.I didn't have a TV.But now I live in a city.My house is big and beautiful.I have a new TV.I love my new house very much.
我过去住在一个小村庄。我的房子又小又旧。我没有电视。但现在我住在一个城市。我的房子又大又漂亮。我有一台新电视。我非常喜欢我的新房子。
【点评】小学阶段，英文写作一般考查学生的语言运用能力，写作内容简单实用。学生必须掌握重要的单词拼写以及语法结构，写作时要认真审题，理解题意，根据要求来写。
8．（2023春 大田县期中）Mary制作了成长卡，写了自己这些年的变化。请你根据卡片信息，仿照已给例句，帮她完成"My changes"。 （至少5句，可适当发挥哦！）
Before Now
short liked singing couldn't skip went to school on foot ... tall like reading can skip go to school by bus ...
My changes Hello!I'm Mary. Before I was short.Now I'm tall. Before I liked singing.Now I like reading.Before I couldn't skip.Now I can skip.Before I went to school on foot.Now I go to school by bus. I'm happy for my changes.
【考点】记事篇．
【答案】
My changes
Hello!I'm Mary.
Before I was short.Now I'm tall.Before I liked singing.Now I like reading.Before I couldn't skip.Now I can skip.Before I went to school on foot.Now I go to school by bus.
I'm happy for my changes.
【分析】写作思路：要求根据卡片信息，仿照已给例句，帮她完成"My changes"，时态用一般过去时和一般现在时，不少于5句话。
重点词汇：on foot步行；sing唱歌；read读书；by bus乘公共汽车。
重点句型：Now I can skip.
翻译：现在我会跳了。
分析：can表示能力。
【解答】
My changes
Hello!I'm Mary.
Before I was short.Now I'm tall.Before I liked singing.Now I like reading.Before I couldn't skip.Now I can skip.Before I went to school on foot.Now I go to school by bus.
I'm happy for my changes.
我的变化
你好！我是玛丽。
在我变矮之前。现在我很高了。以前我喜欢唱歌。现在我喜欢读书。之前我不会跳。现在我会跳了。在我步行上学之前。现在我乘公共汽车上学。
我为自己的改变感到高兴。
【点评】小学阶段，英文写作一般考查学生的语言运用能力，写作内容简单实用。学生必须掌握重要的单词拼写以及语法结构，写作时要认真审题，理解题意，根据要求来写。
9．（2024春 兴文县期末）以下是Xiaowei家人的个人信息，表格中已提供相关短语，请选择填空完成下列小短文。
In the past（过去） Now
Grandma a singer likes dancing
Grandpa worked in the hospital likes learning English
Mum an English teacher ten years ago a nurse in a hospital
Dad a Maths teacher five years ago a policeman
My name is Xiaowei.My grandma was（1） a singer .But now she likes dancing.My grandpa worked（2） in the hospital .Now，he likes（3） learning English .My mum was an English teacher ten years ago.Now she is（4） a nurse in a hospital.My dad was a Maths teacher （5） five years ago .Now he is a policeman.
【考点】写人篇．
【答案】My name is Xiaowei.My grandma was a singer.But now she likes dancing.My grandpa worked in the hospital.Now，he likes learning English.My mum was an English teacher ten years ago.Now she is a nurse in a hospital.My dad was a Maths teacher five years ago.Now he is a policeman.
【分析】写作思路：要求根据表格中提供的相关短语，完成短文。
重点词汇：singer歌手；in the hospital在医院；English英语；nurse护士；five years ago五年前。
重点句型：Now，he likes learning English.
翻译：现在，他喜欢学习英语。
分析：like doing sth.喜欢做某事。
【解答】My name is Xiaowei.My grandma was a singer.But now she likes dancing.My grandpa worked in the hospital.Now，he likes learning English.My mum was an English teacher ten years ago.Now she is a nurse in a hospital.My dad was a Maths teacher five years ago.Now he is a policeman.
我的名字叫小伟。我奶奶是个歌手。但是现在她喜欢跳舞。我爷爷在医院工作。现在，他喜欢学习英语。我妈妈十年前是一名英语老师。现在她是一家医院的护士。我爸爸五年前是一名数学老师。现在他是一名警察。
【点评】小学阶段，英文写作一般考查学生的语言运用能力，写作内容简单实用。学生必须掌握重要的单词拼写以及语法结构，写作时要认真审题，理解题意，根据要求来写。
10．（2024春 原州区期末）假设你是李明，请根据图片内容和句型提示描述一下你的周末计划。
I'm going to （1） the zoo this Saturday.I'm going to （2） bring some food.I'm going to bring some bread and juice.I'm going to take some photos. .There are some （3） pandas in the zoo .I want to（4） take photos with them .
【考点】记事篇．
【答案】I'm going to the zoo this Saturday.I'm going to bring some food.I'm going to bring some bread and juice.I'm going to take some photos.There are some pandas in the zoo.I want to take photos with them.
【分析】写作要求：假设你是李明，请根据图片内容和句型提示描述一下你的周末计划。
重点词汇：Saturday周六，bread面包，photo照片
重点句型：
I'm going to take some photos.
我打算拍一些照片。
sb be going to do sth.表示某人打算做某事。
【解答】I'm going to the zoo this Saturday.I'm going to bring some food.I'm going to bring some bread and juice.I'm going to take some photos.There are some pandas in the zoo.I want to take photos with them.
这个周六我打算去动物园。我打算带一些食物。我打算带一些面包和果汁。我打算拍一些照片。动物园里有一些熊猫。我想要和它们拍照。
【点评】小学阶段，英文写作一般考查学生的语言运用能力，写作内容简单实用。学生必须掌握重要的单词拼写以及语法结构，写作时要认真审题，理解题意，根据要求来写。
11．（2024春 安丘市期末） 假定你是Jack，去年夏天到北京拜访了你的叔叔，并参观了很多风景名胜。请根据图片和提示，介绍自己这次北京之旅，并简单描述一下今年暑假的旅游规划。请以My Travel为题帮助Jack书写本短文。
要求：
（1）使用合适的单词，运用恰当的时态，全文要逻辑清晰、表达流畅。
（2）使用"手写印刷体"，字母、单词和标点符号的间距要适当。
（3）至少写出6个正确句子，不少于40个单词。（开头已给出不计入）。
温馨提示： Where did you go？ What did you do？ How did you go there？ When did you do？ How did you feel？
【考点】记事篇．
【答案】
My Travel
I'm Jack.Last summer，my family and I went to Beijing to visit my uncle.We went there by train at Weifang Train Station.We stayed at the Beijing Hotel.On July 5th，we visited Tian'anmen Square.The next day we climbed the Great Wall.On the third day we visited China Science Museum.We had a great time.I am going to Sanya with my parents this summer holiday.How about you？
【分析】写作思路：要求根据图片和提示，介绍自己去年夏天北京之旅，并简单描述一下今年暑假的旅游规划。以My Travel为题帮助Jack书写本短文。
重点词汇：visit拜访；by train乘火车；the Great Wall长城；have a great time玩得开心。
重点句型：We went there by train at Weifang Train Station.
翻译：我们在潍坊火车站乘火车去了那里。
分析：by train乘火车。
【解答】
My Travel
I'm Jack.Last summer，my family and I went to Beijing to visit my uncle.We went there by train at Weifang Train Station.We stayed at the Beijing Hotel.On July 5th，we visited Tian'anmen Square.The next day we climbed the Great Wall.On the third day we visited China Science Museum.We had a great time.I am going to Sanya with my parents this summer holiday.How about you？
我的旅行
我是杰克。去年夏天，我和我的家人去北京拜访我的叔叔。我们在潍坊火车站乘火车去了那里。我们住在了北京饭店。七月五日，我们参观了天安门广场。第二天我们爬了长城。第三天我们参观了中国科学博物馆。我们玩得很开心。这个暑假我要和我的父母去三亚。你呢？
【点评】小学阶段，英文写作一般考查学生的语言运用能力，写作内容简单实用。学生必须掌握重要的单词拼写以及语法结构，写作时要认真审题，理解题意，根据要求来写。
12．（2024春 昌邑市期末）小练笔。
为了丰富校园生活，学校准备组织英语风采大赛。大赛第一个环节是用英语介绍自己，请用学过的英语知识展示一下你的个人风采吧。
要求：1.假设你是Mike。2.展示内容参考思维导图，可以适当合理发挥。3.条理清晰，语句通顺，标点正确，书写清晰、规范。4.不少于8句话。
Hello，everyone.I'm Mike. I'm 11 years old.My father is a doctor.He goes to work by car.My mother is a teacher.She goes to work on foot.I like bread best.Yesterday I had bread for breakfast.I get up at six on the weekend.And then I run in the park.
【考点】写人篇．
【答案】Hello，everyone.I'm Mike.I'm 11 years old.My father is a doctor.He goes to work by car.My mother is a teacher.She goes to work on foot.I like bread best.Yesterday I had bread for breakfast.I get up at six on the weekend.And then I run in the park.
【分析】写作思路：要求参考思维导图，用英语介绍自己，不少于8句话。
重点词汇：doctor医生，by car开车，teacher教师，on foot步行，bread面包，get up起床。
重点句型：I get up at six on the weekend.
翻译：我周末六点起床。
分析：at后加具体时间。
【解答】Hello，everyone.I'm Mike.I'm 11 years old.My father is a doctor.He goes to work by car.My mother is a teacher.She goes to work on foot.I like bread best.Yesterday I had bread for breakfast.I get up at six on the weekend.And then I run in the park.
大家好。我是迈克。我11岁了。我爸爸是一名医生。他开车去上班。我妈妈是一名教师。她步行去上班。我最喜欢面包。昨天我早餐吃了面包。我周末六点起床。然后我在公园跑步。
【点评】小学阶段，英文写作一般考查学生的语言运用能力，写作内容简单实用。学生必须掌握重要的单词拼写以及语法结构，写作时要认真审题，理解题意，根据要求来写。
13．（2024春 海口期末）开头语和结束语已给出。
When last week
Where Shanghai
Location（位置） in the east of China
Characteristics（特征） big and famous
How to go by plane
What to do visited Shanghai Museum
POSTCARD
Dear Grandpa and Grandma，
How are you？ I went to Shanghai last week.It is in the east of China.It is big and famous.I went there by plane.I visited Shanghai Museum. I miss you.
Love，
Tom
【考点】应用篇．
【答案】
POSTCARD
Dear Grandpa and Grandma，
How are you？I went to Shanghai last week.It is in the east of China.It is big and famous.I went there by plane.I visited Shanghai Museum.I miss you.
Love，
Tom
【分析】写作要求：根据所给信息将明信片补充完整。
重点词汇：last上一个的，east东部，famous著名的。
重点句型：
I went there by plane.
翻译：我坐飞机去了那儿。
分析：sb did sth.表示某人做了某事。
【解答】
POSTCARD
Dear Grandpa and Grandma，
How are you？I went to Shanghai last week.It is in the east of China.It is big and famous.I went there by plane.I visited Shanghai Museum.I miss you.
Love，
Tom
明信片
亲爱的爷爷奶奶，
你们好吗？上周我去了上海。它在中国的东部。它是大的和著名的。我坐飞机去了那儿。我参观了上海博物馆。我想你们。
爱你们的，
汤姆
【点评】小学阶段，英文写作一般考查学生的语言运用能力，写作内容简单实用。学生必须掌握重要的单词拼写以及语法结构，写作时要认真审题，理解题意，根据要求来写。
14．（2023春 化州市期末）书面表达。
玲玲的生日马上到了，请你根据参考问题，写一段话，为她挑选一份合适的礼物并说说理由。
参考问题：（1）How old is Lingling？
（2）Where does she live？
（3）What does she like？
（4）What present will you buy？Why？
要求：①结合参考问题；
②语句通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，标点正确，书写规范、清晰，无语法错误；
③不少于5个句子。
Lingling is my good friend.She is eleven years old this year.She lives in Shanghai with her family.She likes dolls and animals.Her birthday is coming soon.I am going to buy her a teddy bear.Because she thinks teddy bears are very cute.
【考点】记事篇．
【答案】Lingling is my good friend.She is eleven years old this year.She lives in Shanghai with her family.She likes dolls and animals.Her birthday is coming soon.I am going to buy her a teddy bear.Because she thinks teddy bears are very cute.
【分析】写作思路：该题要求以第三人称描写朋友玲玲，包括她的年龄，爱好，居住地，然后描述自己将要买给她的礼物并说明原因。时态为一般现在时和一般将来时，注意语句通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，标点正确，书写规范、清晰，无语法错误；不少于5个句子。
重点词汇：good friend好朋友，years old……岁，lives in住在，doll玩偶，teddy bear泰迪熊，cute可爱的。
重点句型：I am going to buy her a teddy bear.
翻译：我打算给她买一只泰迪熊。
分析：be going to do sth.打算做某事。
【解答】Lingling is my good friend.She is eleven years old this year.She lives in Shanghai with her family.She likes dolls and animals.Her birthday is coming soon.I am going to buy her a teddy bear.Because she thinks teddy bears are very cute.
玲玲是我的好朋友。她今年十一岁。她和家人住在上海。她喜欢洋娃娃和动物。她的生日快到了。我打算给她买一只泰迪熊。因为她觉得泰迪熊很可爱。
【点评】小学阶段，英文写作一般考查学生的语言运用能力，写作内容简单实用。学生必须掌握重要的单词拼写以及语法结构，写作时要认真审题，理解题意，根据要求来写。
15．（2023春 铁东区期末）你是赵林，在动物园工作，请以"My Day"为题，写一写你一天的工作吧。（参考提示，内容不少于五句话。）
Time Activities
7：00 am feed the elephants
9：30 am clean the bear's house
10：00 am play with pandas
12：30 pm feed the birds
4：00 pm clean the monkey's hill
My Day
My name is Zhao Lin.I work in a big zoo.I'm very busy every day.I usually feed the elephants at 7：00 a.m.And I usually clean the bear's house at 9：30 a.m.After that，I usually play with pandas.Then I usually feed the birds at 12：30 p.m.At last，I usually clean the monkey's hill at 4：00 p.m.I'm a little tired but happy.
【考点】记事篇．
【答案】
My Day
My name is Zhao Lin.I work in a big zoo.I'm very busy every day.I usually feed the elephants at 7：00 a.m.And I usually clean the bear's house at 9：30 a.m.After that，I usually play with pandas.Then I usually feed the birds at 12：30 p.m.At last，I usually clean the monkey's hill at 4：00 p.m.I'm a little tired but happy.
【分析】写作思路：要求以"My Day"为题，写一写你在动物园一天的工作，时态用一般现在时，不少于5句话。
重点词汇：busy忙碌的；elephant大象；bear熊；monkey猴子。
重点句型：I'm a little tired but happy.
翻译：我有点累，但很高兴。
分析：but表转折。
【解答】
My Day
My name is Zhao Lin.I work in a big zoo.I'm very busy every day.I usually feed the elephants at 7：00 a.m.And I usually clean the bear's house at 9：30 a.m.After that，I usually play with pandas.Then I usually feed the birds at 12：30 p.m.At last，I usually clean the monkey's hill at 4：00 p.m.I'm a little tired but happy.
我的一天
我叫赵林。我在一家大动物园工作。我每天都很忙。我通常在早上7点喂大象。我通常在上午9点半打扫熊的房子。之后，我通常和熊猫一起玩。然后我通常在中午12点30分喂鸟。最后，我通常在下午4点打扫猴子的小山。我有点累，但很高兴。
【点评】小学阶段，英文写作一般考查学生的语言运用能力，写作内容简单实用。学生必须掌握重要的单词拼写以及语法结构，写作时要认真审题，理解题意，根据要求来写。
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