2025届考生必备中考英语热点话题写作指导学案 Lesson 6 环保类
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Writing Lesson 6 环保类
中国正在积极推进 "双碳" 目标（碳达峰、碳中和），某英文报社以 "Small Actions, Big Change" 为题开展征文活动。请你以李华的身份，结合家乡环境变化，写一篇英语短文投稿。内容需包含：
过去环境问题（如燃煤污染、植被破坏）
中国环保举措（如 "绿水青山就是金山银山" 理念、清洁能源推广）
个人行动案例（如低碳出行、垃圾分类）
全球环境责任（如 "人类命运共同体" 视角）
一．审题要点
人称：第一人称（I/we）
时态：一般过去时（问题描述）+ 现在完成时（变化成果）+ 一般现在时（现状与建议）新增得分点：政策术语（"Double Carbon Goals"、"lucid waters and lush mountains"）、数据对比（如 "PM2.5 下降 30%"）、国际视野（"shared responsibility for global climate"）体裁：征文格式，增加引言段和数据支撑
二、提纲优化与细节拓展
段落 内容 细节/亮点
第一段 （问题引入） 家乡过去环境问题 具体数据："PM2.5 年均值曾达 85μg/m ，远超国家标准" 生动描述："thick smoke from coal stoves blanketed the sky"
第二段 （政策与行动） 中国环保政策 + 地方实践 政策引用："Implementing the 'lucid waters and lush mountains' philosophy" 清洁能源："install solar panels on 80% of rural rooftops" 个人行动："switch to biking and carry a reusable water bottle"
第三段 （成果与展望） 环境改善数据 + 全球责任 数据对比："PM2.5 降至 35μg/m ，森林覆盖率提升至 45%" 国际视角："As a global citizen, I believe China's efforts inspire the world"
三、遣词造句升级（附中考高频表达）
基础句型 升级句型（高分句型） 句式解析
People burned wood for heat. In the past, nearly 90% of households relied on coal and wood stoves, releasing heavy particulate matter into the air. 数据量化问题，"particulate matter" 为环保专业词汇
Laws were made to stop this. Local governments enforced strict regulations, banning coal burning and offering subsidies for solar heaters. "enforced strict regulations" 体现政策力度； "subsidies" 展示经济手段
Plant more munity tree-planting drives have added 50,000 new trees, creating green corridors across the town. "green corridors" 形象化表达； "community drives" 体现全民参与
四、句型总结（新增中考高频句型）
1. 问题描述：
The excessive use of fossil fuels not only polluted the air but also threatened local biodiversity.（not only...but also... 结构）
Statistics show that air quality index (AQI) exceeded the safe limit for 200 days a year in the past.（数据引用）
政策响应：
Thanks to the national "Green Development" policy, our town has transformed into a model eco-community.（thanks to 结构）
Renewable energy now accounts for 60% of our town's power supply, reducing carbon emissions by 40%.（数据对比）
3.个人行动：
Every small step, like refusing single-use plastics, contributes to the larger goal of carbon neutrality.（动名词作主语）
Let's remember: protecting the environment is not a choice but a shared duty.（哲理总结）
五、强化版填空训练-根据中文提示补全句子，注意使用升级表达：
1.In the past, my hometown suffered from severe air pollution ____________________ (由于大量燃煤).
2. ____________________ (多亏 "双碳" 政策), local factories have switched to ____________________ (可再生能源) like wind and solar.
3. Our school launched a ____________________ (绿色校园倡议), encouraging us to ____________________ (进行垃圾分类) and ____________________ (节约用电).
4. ____________________ (数据显示) that water quality in the local river has improved by 50% since 2020.
5. As teenagers, we can ____________________ (做出贡献) by ____________________ (选择公共交通) and ____________________ (减少食物浪费).
答案示例：
due to heavy coal burning
Thanks to the Double Carbon Goals; renewable energy
Green Campus Initiative; sort waste; save electricity
Statistics show
make a difference; choosing public transport; reducing food waste
六、参考范文（2025 中考标准范文）
Small Actions, Big Change
My hometown, once plagued by thick smog from coal stoves, has undergone a remarkable transformation. In the past, the air was so polluted that we could hardly see blue skies, with PM2.5 levels averaging 85μg/m —more than twice the safe limit. Trees were cut down for firewood, leaving hills bare and rivers dry.
However, everything changed when China prioritized the "lucid waters and lush mountains" philosophy. Local governments banned coal burning, subsidized solar panel installations, and planted millions of trees. My family replaced our old stove with a solar heater, and I started biking to school instead of taking the car. Across the town, factories upgraded to clean energy, and communities built recycling centers. These efforts have paid off: today, PM2.5 levels have dropped to 35μg/m , and the hills are covered in green forests again.
As China strives for its Double Carbon Goals, I realize every individual action matters. Whether it’s carrying a reusable water bottle, sorting waste, or advocating for green policies, each step contributes to a healthier planet. Remember, we share this earth with future generations—it’s our duty to protect it. Together, small changes can create a sustainable legacy for all.
七、中考冲刺小贴士
政策词汇：熟记 "Double Carbon Goals"（双碳目标）、"lucid waters and lush mountains"（绿水青山）、"carbon neutrality"（碳中和）等官方英文表述。
数据技巧：虚构合理数据（如 "PM2.5 下降 XX%"、"森林覆盖率提升 XX%"）增强说服力，但需符合常识。
国际视角：结尾段可关联 "human community with a shared future"（人类命运共同体），体现全球责任，符合中考 "中国情怀与国际视野" 考点。
Writing Lesson 6 环保类
中国正在积极推进 "双碳" 目标（碳达峰、碳中和），某英文报社以 "Small Actions, Big Change" 为题开展征文活动。请你以李华的身份，结合家乡环境变化，写一篇英语短文投稿。内容需包含：
过去环境问题（如燃煤污染、植被破坏）
中国环保举措（如 "绿水青山就是金山银山" 理念、清洁能源推广）
个人行动案例（如低碳出行、垃圾分类）
全球环境责任（如 "人类命运共同体" 视角）
一．审题要点
人称：第一人称（I/we）
时态：一般过去时（问题描述）+ 现在完成时（变化成果）+ 一般现在时（现状与建议）新增得分点：政策术语（"Double Carbon Goals"、"lucid waters and lush mountains"）、数据对比（如 "PM2.5 下降 30%"）、国际视野（"shared responsibility for global climate"）体裁：征文格式，增加引言段和数据支撑
二、提纲优化与细节拓展
段落 内容 细节/亮点
第一段 （问题引入） 家乡过去环境问题 具体数据："PM2.5 年均值曾达 85μg/m ，远超国家标准" 生动描述："thick smoke from coal stoves blanketed the sky"
第二段 （政策与行动） 中国环保政策 + 地方实践 政策引用："Implementing the 'lucid waters and lush mountains' philosophy" 清洁能源："install solar panels on 80% of rural rooftops" 个人行动："switch to biking and carry a reusable water bottle"
第三段 （成果与展望） 环境改善数据 + 全球责任 数据对比："PM2.5 降至 35μg/m ，森林覆盖率提升至 45%" 国际视角："As a global citizen, I believe China's efforts inspire the world"
三、遣词造句升级（附中考高频表达）
基础句型 升级句型（高分句型） 句式解析
People burned wood for heat. In the past, nearly 90% of households relied on coal and wood stoves, releasing heavy particulate matter into the air. 数据量化问题，"particulate matter" 为环保专业词汇
Laws were made to stop this. Local governments enforced strict regulations, banning coal burning and offering subsidies for solar heaters. "enforced strict regulations" 体现政策力度； "subsidies" 展示经济手段
Plant more munity tree-planting drives have added 50,000 new trees, creating green corridors across the town. "green corridors" 形象化表达； "community drives" 体现全民参与
四、句型总结（新增中考高频句型）
1. 问题描述：
The excessive use of fossil fuels not only polluted the air but also threatened local biodiversity.（not only...but also... 结构）
Statistics show that air quality index (AQI) exceeded the safe limit for 200 days a year in the past.（数据引用）
政策响应：
Thanks to the national "Green Development" policy, our town has transformed into a model eco-community.（thanks to 结构）
Renewable energy now accounts for 60% of our town's power supply, reducing carbon emissions by 40%.（数据对比）
3.个人行动：
Every small step, like refusing single-use plastics, contributes to the larger goal of carbon neutrality.（动名词作主语）
Let's remember: protecting the environment is not a choice but a shared duty.（哲理总结）
五、强化版填空训练-根据中文提示补全句子，注意使用升级表达：
1.In the past, my hometown suffered from severe air pollution ____________________ (由于大量燃煤).
2. ____________________ (多亏 "双碳" 政策), local factories have switched to ____________________ (可再生能源) like wind and solar.
3. Our school launched a ____________________ (绿色校园倡议), encouraging us to ____________________ (进行垃圾分类) and ____________________ (节约用电).
4. ____________________ (数据显示) that water quality in the local river has improved by 50% since 2020.
5. As teenagers, we can ____________________ (做出贡献) by ____________________ (选择公共交通) and ____________________ (减少食物浪费).
答案示例：
due to heavy coal burning
Thanks to the Double Carbon Goals; renewable energy
Green Campus Initiative; sort waste; save electricity
Statistics show
make a difference; choosing public transport; reducing food waste
六、参考范文（2025 中考标准范文）
Small Actions, Big Change
My hometown, once plagued by thick smog from coal stoves, has undergone a remarkable transformation. In the past, the air was so polluted that we could hardly see blue skies, with PM2.5 levels averaging 85μg/m —more than twice the safe limit. Trees were cut down for firewood, leaving hills bare and rivers dry.
However, everything changed when China prioritized the "lucid waters and lush mountains" philosophy. Local governments banned coal burning, subsidized solar panel installations, and planted millions of trees. My family replaced our old stove with a solar heater, and I started biking to school instead of taking the car. Across the town, factories upgraded to clean energy, and communities built recycling centers. These efforts have paid off: today, PM2.5 levels have dropped to 35μg/m , and the hills are covered in green forests again.
As China strives for its Double Carbon Goals, I realize every individual action matters. Whether it’s carrying a reusable water bottle, sorting waste, or advocating for green policies, each step contributes to a healthier planet. Remember, we share this earth with future generations—it’s our duty to protect it. Together, small changes can create a sustainable legacy for all.
七、中考冲刺小贴士
政策词汇：熟记 "Double Carbon Goals"（双碳目标）、"lucid waters and lush mountains"（绿水青山）、"carbon neutrality"（碳中和）等官方英文表述。
数据技巧：虚构合理数据（如 "PM2.5 下降 XX%"、"森林覆盖率提升 XX%"）增强说服力，但需符合常识。
国际视角：结尾段可关联 "human community with a shared future"（人类命运共同体），体现全球责任，符合中考 "中国情怀与国际视野" 考点。