备战2025学年中考英语高分题型突破(浙江专用)
06书面表达
(一)
学校英语报针对学生的学习方式展开讨论, 假如你是李华, 请根据表格中提供的信息,选择一种你喜欢的学习方式进行阐述并提出不足之处。
Study in a group Study alone
Advantages fixed learning plans, learner faster, develop students’ teamwork spirit, support each other personal learning plans, learn more quietly, improve the ability of self-control form the habit of thinking
Disadvantages ...
注意:
1.所写内容必须包括一种学习方式的所有信息并提出不足之处;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
3.词数 80 左右:文章的开头已给出, 不计入总词数。
Different students like different ways to study. However, personally, I would rather ___________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
(二)
假如你是Chen Jie,你的外国朋友Lee浏览你校公众号(official account)后,对学生活动版块非常感兴趣。请你阅读他的邮件与学校公众号截屏,给他写一封回信。
注意:1. 词数80-100左右,邮件的首尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 回复需符合要求,包含所提内容,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯、通顺;
3. 文中不得出现真实人名、学校等信息。
Dear Lee,
Glad to receive your e-mail.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
How about your school activities Could you tell me some Have a good time!
Yours,
Chen Jie
(三)
假定你是李平,请你对你的笔友Lucy的邮件进行回复,词数80左右。
To: Liping@.cn
From: Lucy@
Dear Li Ping, How are you I’m writing to ask for your advice. I am upset these days because of my parents. They pay much attention to my study. I have to report my test results to them every time. Even worse, they don’t allow me to have time for my hobbies. I have to study all the time. Could you tell me what I shall do I look forward to hearing from you soon. Lucy
To: Lucy@
From: Liping@.cn
Dear Lucy, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours, Li Ping
(四)
初中三年,时间匆匆流逝,相信你一定有不少难忘的经历吧。请分享一个特别值得铭记的高光时刻。那一刻,可能是你获得某项荣誉的瞬间,可能是你与同学们共同努力取得成果的刹那,也可能是你克服重重困难、实现自我突破的一刻。经历过这些,你对高中又有什么期待呢?……请以“A Shining Moment”为题,根据以下要点,写一篇文章向学校公众号“英语专栏”投稿。
(1) What was your shining moment How did you make it
(2) What have you learned from it
(3) What are you looking forward to in high school
注意:(1)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;(2)词数80左右;开头已给出,不计入总词数。
A Shining Moment
How time flies! It’s time to say goodbye to my junior high school life. Looking back, a shining moment stands out.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
(五)
假如你是李华,你校英语社团将举行以“劳动(Labor)”为主题的社会实践活动,现向全校学生征集活动创意,请根据以下相关信息,给社团负责人Tom写一封邮件,分享自己的劳动经历、收获并提供一条活动建议。
Labor is meaningful!My Experiences>swept the floor >... My Gains (收获) >develop life skills >... My Idea >...
注意:
1. 邮件必须包括以上所有要点,补充内容至少各一条,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
3. 词数80词左右(邮件的第一句已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Tom,
Labor is an important part of our life. ________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,
Li Hua
(六)
假如你是张华,你的英国好友Alice下学期将来中国进行游学。请根据以下相关信息,写一封邮件,向她推荐一个合适的社团。
I have learned Chinese for several years in the UK because I’m so interested in traditional Chinese culture. And the Chinese food. is really delicious.
Chinese Folk Music Club*in the music room *classes about music forms *... Chinese Cooking Club*in the school dining hall *classes about traditional food *...
注意:
(1)邮件需包含所选社团的至少两点相关信息,可适当发挥:
(2)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
(3)词数80左右;邮件的首尾和第一句已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Alice,
I’m so excited to know that you will come to China soon.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,
Zhang Hua
(七)
假如你是李华,计划在“五一”期间进行一次以“体验中国文化”为主题的旅行。请根据下图提示,用英语写一份文化游计划,并在英语课上与同学们分享。
注意:1.计划需包含至少三个活动,以上活动仅供参考;2.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息;3.词数80—100左右;开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Hi, class. I’m glad to share my plan about May Day cultural tour with you.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
(八)
假如你是李华,你的美国网友 Cindy计划利用暑假来中国体验中国文化。请根据以下相关信息,写一封邮件,向她推荐一个合适的夏令营。
Literature Camp learn about the stories of some Chinese poets and their poems role play some scenes from Journey to the West. Traditional Culture Camp ● learn some traditional handicrafts, like making paper cutting ● experience the local culture by visiting places of interest …
注意:
1.邮件需包含所选夏令营相关信息,可适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
3.词数80左右;邮件的首尾和第一句已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Cindy,
How is it going _________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Li Hua
(九)
学校英语校刊正在举行主题为“Life skills for the future”的征文活动。哪些生活技能你认为很重要?你平时是如何做的?请从下图中选择两类技能写一篇英语短文进行投稿,也可自行补充其他生活技能。
要求:词数80左右;短文首尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Life skills are important for our future.________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ All in all, if we try our best to improve these life skills now, we’ll be better prepared for the future.
(十)
英语杂志Sunny Teens正在征集中学生对体育运动的看法。你校开展了调查,下图是“What do you enjoy most about playing sports ”这一问题的汇总数据。请用英语向杂志投稿,简要介绍调查结果 (不少于三条),并结合个人爱好谈谈你对该问题的看法。
注意:(1)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
(2)词数80左右;文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Our school did a survey among students last week, asking what we enjoy most about playing sports. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________备战2025学年中考英语高分题型突破(浙江专用)
06书面表达
(一)
学校英语报针对学生的学习方式展开讨论, 假如你是李华, 请根据表格中提供的信息,选择一种你喜欢的学习方式进行阐述并提出不足之处。
Study in a group Study alone
Advantages fixed learning plans, learner faster, develop students’ teamwork spirit, support each other personal learning plans, learn more quietly, improve the ability of self-control form the habit of thinking
Disadvantages ...
注意:
1.所写内容必须包括一种学习方式的所有信息并提出不足之处;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
3.词数 80 左右:文章的开头已给出, 不计入总词数。
Different students like different ways to study. However, personally, I would rather ___________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文
Different students like different ways to study. However, personally, I would rather study in a group.
To start with, fixed learning plans are arranged in group study, which plays a crucial role in keeping us well-organized. What’s more, sharing ideas among group members enables us to learn at a faster pace. Moreover, it contributes to developing our teamwork spirit, and we always stand by each other when meeting difficulties. However, every coin has two sides. Group study has its own disadvantages. Sometimes, group discussions tend to deviate from the topic, leading to a waste of precious time, Additionally, some students are likely to depend too much on others, failing to think independently.
In short, despite the disadvantages, I still believe group study benefits me most.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为一般现在时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏提示中的要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,先写出不同学生喜欢不同的学习方式,写出自己喜欢的学习方式;
第二步,写出这种学习方式的优点和缺点;
第二步,总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①To start with首先
②group discussions小组讨论
③What’s more此外
[高分句型]
①To start with, fixed learning plans are arranged in group study, which plays a crucial role in keeping us well-organized.(定语从句)
②I still believe group study benefits me most.(宾语从句)
(二)
假如你是Chen Jie,你的外国朋友Lee浏览你校公众号(official account)后,对学生活动版块非常感兴趣。请你阅读他的邮件与学校公众号截屏,给他写一封回信。
注意:1. 词数80-100左右,邮件的首尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 回复需符合要求,包含所提内容,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯、通顺;
3. 文中不得出现真实人名、学校等信息。
Dear Lee,
Glad to receive your e-mail.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
How about your school activities Could you tell me some Have a good time!
Yours,
Chen Jie
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Lee,
Glad to receive your e-mail.
Our school held some interesting students’ activities this term. Let me tell you two of them.
In April, we took part in the Science Club. We learned to use AI and made useful robots. It really made us excited. Besides, what impressed me most was the Cultural Festival. During the festival, we learned how to make Qingtuan together. In addition, we learned to act a play. It was really an unforgettable experience.
All those activities not only tell us that we should try to learn science to make our country stronger, but also remind us the traditional stories about our culture.
How about your school activities Could you tell me some Have a good time!
Yours,
Chen Jie
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③内容:紧扣邮件主题,详细介绍两项学校活动,包含活动时间、内容及个人感受,语言表达流畅,无语法和拼写错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步,回应对方来信,接着表明要介绍学校活动,自然开启下文,符合书信交流的逻辑;
第二步,详细介绍学校活动,表达感受;强调活动难忘,使读者能清晰了解活动内容与意义;
第三步,总结活动带来的启示。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in参加
②impressed给……留下深刻印象
③in addition此外
[高分句型]
①Besides, what impressed me most was the Cultural Festival.(主语从句)
③All those activities not only tell us that we should try to learn science to make our country stronger, but also remind us the traditional stories about our culture.(“not only...but also...”结构和宾语从句)
(三)
假定你是李平,请你对你的笔友Lucy的邮件进行回复,词数80左右。
To: Liping@.cn
From: Lucy@
Dear Li Ping, How are you I’m writing to ask for your advice. I am upset these days because of my parents. They pay much attention to my study. I have to report my test results to them every time. Even worse, they don’t allow me to have time for my hobbies. I have to study all the time. Could you tell me what I shall do I look forward to hearing from you soon. Lucy
To: Lucy@
From: Liping@.cn
Dear Lucy, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours, Li Ping
【答案】例文
Dear Lucy,
I know well what you are going through and it’s my pleasure to give you some suggestions.
It’s normal for parents to care about your study, but they shouldn’t push you so hard. Why don’t you sit down and have a heart-to-heart talk with them Tell them your stress and explain to them that you have studied really hard. Secondly, make a time list and show it to your parents. Promise to them you will focus on study, but they should also let you have time for your hobbies and friends. Besides, maybe you could ask your teachers for help. They are usually more experienced and patient.
Be relaxed about life and study. And remember your parents are the ones who truly care about you. Hope everything will work out soon.
Yours,
Li Ping
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇电子邮件;
② 时态:以“一般现在时”为主;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏邮件中每一项内容,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,回应Lucy的情绪,表达理解;
第二步,针对父母过度关注学习的问题,提出具体建议;
第三步,表达支持和期待。
[亮点词汇]
① push sb so hard对某人很苛刻
② promise to do sth承诺做某事
③ care about关心
[高分句型]
And remember your parents are the ones who truly care about you.(定语从句)
(四)
初中三年,时间匆匆流逝,相信你一定有不少难忘的经历吧。请分享一个特别值得铭记的高光时刻。那一刻,可能是你获得某项荣誉的瞬间,可能是你与同学们共同努力取得成果的刹那,也可能是你克服重重困难、实现自我突破的一刻。经历过这些,你对高中又有什么期待呢?……请以“A Shining Moment”为题,根据以下要点,写一篇文章向学校公众号“英语专栏”投稿。
(1) What was your shining moment How did you make it
(2) What have you learned from it
(3) What are you looking forward to in high school
注意:(1)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;(2)词数80左右;开头已给出,不计入总词数。
A Shining Moment
How time flies! It’s time to say goodbye to my junior high school life. Looking back, a shining moment stands out.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文
A Shining Moment
How time flies! It’s time to say goodbye to my junior high school life. Looking back, a shining moment stands out.
Last year, I won the second prize in an English speech contest. To prepare the contest, I practiced daily, recorded my voice, and asked teachers for advice. Though nervous, I spoke confidently on stage. When my name was announced, my heart raced with joy.
This experience taught me that effort leads to growth. Even small progress builds courage. Now I realize challenges are opportunities to shine.
In high school, I look forward to joining more activities. Every challenge will be a chance to create new shining moments.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点题,引出话题;
第二步,介绍自己的高光时刻以及自己是如何做到的;
第三步,介绍自己的收获以及在高中期待什么。
[亮点词汇]
①look back回顾过去
②English speech contest英语演讲比赛
③ask…for help请求……帮助
④look forward to期待
[高分句型]
When my name was announced, my heart raced with joy. (when引导的时间状语从句)
(五)
假如你是李华,你校英语社团将举行以“劳动(Labor)”为主题的社会实践活动,现向全校学生征集活动创意,请根据以下相关信息,给社团负责人Tom写一封邮件,分享自己的劳动经历、收获并提供一条活动建议。
Labor is meaningful!My Experiences>swept the floor >... My Gains (收获) >develop life skills >... My Idea >...
注意:
1. 邮件必须包括以上所有要点,补充内容至少各一条,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
3. 词数80词左右(邮件的第一句已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Tom,
Labor is an important part of our life. ________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】参考范文:
Dear Tom,
Labor is an important part of our life. Here are my experiences and suggestion.
Last week, I did some housework like making the bed, sweeping the floor, doing the dishes, and so on. Helping with chores not only helps me form good habits, but also helps to develop my life skills. Also, sharing housework can help our parents free from heavy chores after work.
For the coming activity, I have a great suggestion. I think holding competitions about labor skills is an excellent idea. Students will learn about the importance of hard work and the value of labor.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇电子邮件;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,整体说明劳动的重要性;
第二步,具体阐述自己的劳动经历和收获;
第三步,提供一条活动建议。
[亮点词汇]
① not only...but also...不但……而且……
② develop life skills 培养生活技能
③ the value of labor劳动的价值
[高分句型]
I think holding competitions about labor skills is an excellent idea.(宾语从句)
(六)
假如你是张华,你的英国好友Alice下学期将来中国进行游学。请根据以下相关信息,写一封邮件,向她推荐一个合适的社团。
I have learned Chinese for several years in the UK because I’m so interested in traditional Chinese culture. And the Chinese food. is really delicious.
Chinese Folk Music Club*in the music room *classes about music forms *... Chinese Cooking Club*in the school dining hall *classes about traditional food *...
注意:
(1)邮件需包含所选社团的至少两点相关信息,可适当发挥:
(2)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
(3)词数80左右;邮件的首尾和第一句已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Alice,
I’m so excited to know that you will come to China soon.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,
Zhang Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Alice,
I’m so excited to know that you will come to China soon. Knowing your love for traditional Chinese culture and delicious food, I strongly recommend joining the Chinese Cooking Club.
The club meets in the school dining hall, where professional teachers guide us to cook authentic Chinese dishes. Last week, we learned to make dumplings, a symbol of Chinese festivals. We also discussed how food reflects Chinese values, like family reunion. Besides hands-on cooking, we share stories behind each dish, which deepens our understanding of Chinese culture.
I’m sure you’ll enjoy every moment there. Looking forward to cooking with you!
Yours,
Zhang Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态为 “一般现在时”;
③提示:根据提示要点介绍推荐社团,可适当增添细节,注意行文连贯,并突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点明主题,直接表明向Alice推荐中国烹饪社团。
第二步,具体介绍所推荐的社团活动的相关信息。
第三步,书写结语,表达对Alice加入社团的期待。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣
②make dumplings包饺子
③hands-on亲自动手的
[高分句型]
①Knowing your love for traditional Chinese culture and delicious food, I strongly recommend joining the Chinese Cooking Club. (现在分词短语作原因状语)
②Besides hands-on cooking, we share stories behind each dish, which deepens our understanding of Chinese culture. (which引导非限制性定语从句)
(七)
假如你是李华,计划在“五一”期间进行一次以“体验中国文化”为主题的旅行。请根据下图提示,用英语写一份文化游计划,并在英语课上与同学们分享。
注意:1.计划需包含至少三个活动,以上活动仅供参考;2.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息;3.词数80—100左右;开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Hi, class. I’m glad to share my plan about May Day cultural tour with you.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文
Hi, class. I’m glad to share my plan about May Day cultural tour with you.
I’m going to Xi’an by train during the May Day holiday. Xi’an is a city full of historical and cultural heritages.
First, I’ll visit the Terracotta Army. It’s a world-famous wonder. I can learn a great deal about the history and art of the Qin Dynasty there. Second, I’m looking forward to trying local food like roujiamo and yangrou paomo. By tasting these special foods, I can experience the local food culture. Also, I plan to visit the ancient City Wall. Walking on it, I can enjoy the scenery and imagine what life was like in the past.
I believe this trip will be a great chance for me to experience Chinese culture deeply.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:一般现在时与一般将来时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点,并适当添加细节,突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍去西安的旅游以及旅行活动;
第二步,介绍活动原因,以及感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①full of充满
②looking forward to期待
[高分句型]
I believe this trip will be a great chance for me to experience Chinese culture deeply.(宾语从句)
(八)
假如你是李华,你的美国网友 Cindy计划利用暑假来中国体验中国文化。请根据以下相关信息,写一封邮件,向她推荐一个合适的夏令营。
Literature Camp learn about the stories of some Chinese poets and their poems role play some scenes from Journey to the West. Traditional Culture Camp ● learn some traditional handicrafts, like making paper cutting ● experience the local culture by visiting places of interest …
注意:
1.邮件需包含所选夏令营相关信息,可适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
3.词数80左右;邮件的首尾和第一句已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Cindy,
How is it going _________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Cindy,
How is it going I know you want to experience Chinese culture this summer. I think the Literature Camp is perfect for you!
At this camp, you can learn about famous Chinese poets and their poems. For example, you’ll study Li Bai’s beautiful poems and Du Fu’s meaningful works. The best part is the role-playing! You can act out scenes from Journey to the West. You might get to be the Monkey King and fight bad guys. It’ll be so cool!
The camp is fun and you can learn a lot. I’m sure you’ll love Chinese culture more after the camp. Can’t wait to hear from you!
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态为一般现在时;
③提示:根据给定的两个夏令营信息,向计划来中国体验文化的网友推荐合适的夏令营,需包含所选夏令营相关信息,并可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点明写信目的;
第二步,根据提示内容详细介绍所推荐的俱乐部的信息;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①learn about 了解
②act out表演出来
③hear from收到……的来信
[高分句型]
①I know you want to experience Chinese culture this summer.(宾语从句)
②The camp is fun and you can learn a lot.(and连接的并列句)
(九)
学校英语校刊正在举行主题为“Life skills for the future”的征文活动。哪些生活技能你认为很重要?你平时是如何做的?请从下图中选择两类技能写一篇英语短文进行投稿,也可自行补充其他生活技能。
要求:词数80左右;短文首尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Life skills are important for our future.________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ All in all, if we try our best to improve these life skills now, we’ll be better prepared for the future.
【答案】例文
Life skills are important for our future. Among the many skills, I believe cooking and effective communication are necessary. Cooking is a basic daily living skill that helps us stay healthy and independent. I often help my parents in the kitchen, learning how to prepare simple meals like fried rice and vegetable soup. This not only saves money but also ensures I eat nutritious food.
Communication, on the other hand, is a important social skill. It helps us build strong relationships and work well with others. I practice this by actively listening to my friends and expressing my thoughts clearly during group discussions. This has improved my teamwork and problem-solving abilities.
All in all, if we try our best to improve these life skills now, we’ll be better prepared for the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,整体说明生活技能的重要性;
第二步,具体阐述两类生活技能及其重要性;
第三步,总结并表达对未来生活的信心。
[亮点词汇]
① independent 独立的
② on the other hand 另一方面
③ all in all 总之
[高分句型]
Cooking is a basic daily living skill that helps us stay healthy and independent.(定语从句)
(十)
英语杂志Sunny Teens正在征集中学生对体育运动的看法。你校开展了调查,下图是“What do you enjoy most about playing sports ”这一问题的汇总数据。请用英语向杂志投稿,简要介绍调查结果 (不少于三条),并结合个人爱好谈谈你对该问题的看法。
注意:(1)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
(2)词数80左右;文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Our school did a survey among students last week, asking what we enjoy most about playing sports. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】范文:
Our school did a survey among students last week, asking what we enjoy most about playing sports. The results are quite interesting.
According to the survey, 30% of the students enjoy learning new skills through sports. Another 25% like sports because it helps them reduce stress. 20% of the students find having fun as the most appealing part, and 20% think being fit and healthy is the best thing about sports. Only 5% chose “Others”.
As for me, I really like playing basketball. I enjoy the process of learning new skills like dribbling and shooting. It’s a great way to challenge myself. Also, when I play basketball with my friends, we have a lot of fun. We laugh, cheer for each other, and the stress from study just fades away. Moreover, it keeps me fit and energetic. So, playing sports is not only good for our body but also brings us joy and new skills.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇看图作文;
②时态:时态为 “一般现在时”;
③提示:根据提示内容进行写作,可适当增加细节,注意行文连贯,表述完整并突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接开头,引出下文;
第二步,介绍图表调查结果;
第三步,结合自身,谈论自己喜爱的运动及原因。
[亮点词汇]
①as for至于,关于
②fade away逐级消失
[高分句型]
①Another 25% like sports because it helps them reduce stress. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②Also, when I play basketball with my friends, we have a lot of fun. (when引导的时间状语从句)