(8)陕西、甘肃——2025届高考英语各地联考最新写作汇编
一、书面表达
(1) [2025·甘肃·综合模拟]假设你叫李津,你看了抖音上关于健康饮食的科普短视频后,想给学校报社写一封信,谈谈你对改善学校食堂餐饮的建议,内容包括:
(1)健康饮食对于身心的重要性;
(2)提供具体的改善建议。
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Editor,
After watching the popular science video clips on healthy diet on TikTok, I can’t wait to discuss the significance of healthy diet with you.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Jin
(2) [2025·甘肃天水·三模] 我们除了感谢他人,也应该感谢自己。在高中生活即将结束之际,请根据自身的情况,给自己写一封感谢信,看到美好的自己和更美好的未来。
注意:
1.词数应为80左右;
2.信的开头和结尾已经给出。
Dear Self,
I’m writing to express my thanks to you.
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Self
(3) [2025·甘肃张掖·一模] 假设你校开展了一系列劳动实践课程,包括蔬菜种植、手工制作、家电维修等等。请你写一篇短文向校英文报投稿,内容包括:
1. 你喜爱的课程;
2. 你的心得体会;
3. 对课程的建议。
My Favorite Hands-on Course
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(4) [2025·甘肃张掖·三模] 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国笔友Chris想了解不同颜色在中国文化中的含义。请你用英文给他回一封邮件,内容包括:
1.颜色及其含义;
2.生活中的实例。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
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Yours,
Li Hua
(5) [2025·陕西西安·三模] 假如你是李华,某校英文歌曲合唱团的一员,你的指导老师Mr. Jenkins安排你们近期排练一首英文歌Auld Lang Syne《友谊地久天长》作为春节联欢会的节目,但是你觉得他选的歌曲不合适,请向他写一封信表达想法。要点包括:
(1)提出观点并陈述理由;
(2)给出建议。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
参考词汇:合唱团 choir
Dear Mr. Jenkins,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(6) [2025届·陕西咸阳·三模]你校英文报社正举办以"My Path to Self-Improvement in High School Life"为题的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿。内容包括:
1. 曾面临的挑战;
2. 应对策略;
3. 收获与感受。
注意:1. 词数:80词左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡上的相应位置作答。
My Path to Self-Improvement in High School Life
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二、读后续写
(1) [2025·甘肃·综合模拟] 阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整故事。
The Green Hero
In a small town between rolling hills and deep forests, there lived a young girl named Emily. Emily was an ordinary teenager with an extraordinary passion for the environment. She had always been fascinated by nature and spent most of her weekends exploring the nearby woods and streams. But as she grew older, Emily noticed something alarming—the once beautiful greenery was slowly dying. The trees were wilting (枯萎), the rivers were polluted, and the air quality was worsening. Determined to save her beloved town, Emily decided to take action.
Emily started by educating herself about environmental issues. She read books, attended workshops, and even reached out to local experts. Armed with knowledge, she launched a campaign called “Green Future”. Her first step was to organize a community cleanup event at the local park. She put up posters, made announcements on social media, and even knocked on doors to spread the word. To her delight, many residents showed up with gloves and trash bags in hand. Together, they collected tons of litter that day, making a noticeable difference.
However, not everyone was thrilled about Emily’s initiative. Mr. Johnson, the owner of the largest factory in town, saw her efforts as a threat to his business. His factory was one of the main sources of pollution, and he didn’t want any changes that could affect his profit. He began spreading rumors(谣言) that Emily was just a young woman who didn’t understand how things worked in the real world. Some people started to believe him, and Emily’s campaign faced resistance.
Despite the challenges, Emily refused to give up. She knew that education was key to changing people’s attitudes toward the environment. She organized school presentations and invited guest speakers to talk about sustainability. She also started a recycling program at her school, which gained support from both students and teachers. Slowly but surely, more people began to join her cause. Even some of Mr. Johnson’s employees expressed their concern about the working conditions and the state of the environment.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
One day, Emily was invited to attend a town hall meeting for new environmental policy.
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With the new policy in place, the town began to change.
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(2) [2025·甘肃天水·三模] I still remember the day when we decorated the house, I was ten and it was two weeks before Christmas. I was looking forward to my presents. Since I’m the youngest in the family, all of the family members would give me a gift one way or another. Sometimes it was a cookie or a hug but it was always there. I was the only center of attention and it was feeling good.
My uncles usually would ask me what I wanted before Christmas and that year I knew what I wanted. It was the spaceship I saw in the ads. I was dreaming of opening a big gift box, and it was there. But that year it came in a way that I wasn’t expecting.
It was two weeks before Christmas. Just two weeks. She couldn’t wait. My dear mother told my father that it was time, and then we went to the hospital. After an hour, they told me that I had a sister now. But I didn’t want a sister. I wanted a spaceship. The next few days went so fast. No one was caring about me. Everyone was talking about her and I knew that my life is never going to be the same ever again. I wasn’t ready to grow up, to be a big brother. But it just happened in an instant.
On the day before Christmas, everyone was in our home, talking only about my newborn sister. My family was becoming hers. Even my uncles didn’t ask me anything about the gift. She stole everything I’d ever had, my life and my presents. Thinking about this, I cried to sleep. I had a nightmare (噩梦) and woke up at the middle of the night. Shadows were all around me, and I was defenseless and so weak. I ran into my parents’ bedroom but couldn’t wake up my poor parents who were just too worn out. I was standing near their bed, trying not to cry when I saw her. She was awake and looking at me with her big eyes in her small bed.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Suddenly a long shadow came into the bedroom and she started crying.
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After having comforted her, something slowly changed inside me.
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(3) [2025·甘肃张掖·一模] When I was in middle school, my family moved to Seattle, where my parents started their new business — a small grocery store downstairs from my house. As a girl of shy and reserved nature, I had to take a fresh start to fit into the sophisticated city life.
One sunny day, my school announced an exciting event, a talent show for the local food bank. Students were encouraged to showcase their unique talents in front of the public in the city hall on National Day. A buzz of excitement fed the school as everyone began preparing for the big day. Deep down, I felt a spark of curiosity and a desire to participate. However, my self-doubt held me back, “I don’t have any special skills to share.”
Days turned into weeks, and the talent show drew closer. I couldn’t shake the upsetting feeling until one day, Emma, one of the most popular girls in my class, came to me while I was helping in the grocery store after class. “How about singing together in the talent show ” She grinned, “I heard you singing a tune, along the way back home. I can’t help following you here.” Gosh, I couldn’t believe my ears. Emma, with personality and popularity, acknowledged my little talent. Since Emma had the world’s prettiest voice, I felt like being favoured by fortune.
“You two The talent show for the food bank ” My mum bent towards us and her face lit up. “A big occasion.” Then a light bulb seemed to go in her head. “Why not practise right now upstairs I bet you’ll be a perfect match.” Winking at us, she seemed to know we were thinking alike.
Emma and I embarked on rehearsing almost every single day after school. We brainstormed, exchanged ideas and rehearsed the scene. As the days rolled by, I was feeling pretty good about our act. But the day before the performance, Emma called that she had an acute stomachache and was not in any shape to perform.
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I was completely knocked out by the news.
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Finally came the big moment.
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(4) [2025·甘肃张掖·三模] 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The Araguaia River is one of the biggest rivers in Brazil. It is home to thousands of animals, including bright blue and yellow macaws(金刚鹦鹉). River dolphins swim and play in the water, and there are many different colored fish.
In one town, a 13-year-old boy named Rhenan would walk along the river every day. But looking at the river made him worry because there was rubbish everywhere. He saw plastic bottles, old clothing, and empty food packages. The water looked dark and ugly.
At school, Rhenan asked about the dirty river. "You wouldn’t want trash in your house," said his teacher. "Think about the poor animals!" For days, Rhenan couldn’t stop thinking about the river. It didn’t seem right to him that this big, powerful river was filled with trash. "It’s hurting the animals in my area," he thought. "And it’s also hurting the families who live here."
Then Rhenan had an idea. The next morning, Rhenan talked to his mother about his plan for the river. He wanted to go around his town and ask for everyone’s help. Maybe if they all worked together, they could clean up the river! Rhenan’s mother loved his idea. "I believe the most important thing for you, Rhenan, is learning how to change things that you care about. That will stay with you forever," she told him. She told him she would help him all along the way.
The next day, Rhenan went to the police department. Then he went to the Mayor’s office. He visited other schools, offices, and businesses. Soon he had a very big group of people who liked his idea!
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Over an entire day, they all worked together to clean up the rubbish.
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Looking at the clean river, Rhenan decided to stop this problem from happening again.
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(5) [2025·陕西西安·三模] 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
As my dad and I stood on the beach watching the sunrise, a perfect, spotted shell was washed ashore. I couldn’t believe my eyes. All vacation I had hoped to find such a treasure. I ran to my dad happily. "It is a gift from the sea. Take good care of it," Dad said. I turned it over. Inside, the shell was as pink as a bunny’s ear. "I will," I assured him, cradling (轻柔地抱着) the shell carefully.
Back in the hotel room, my older brother Vikram was taking pictures of seagulls on the balcony. "Vikram, look!" I said, holding out my treasure. "An ordinary shell. No big deal," he replied, seeming uninterested. My mom had just emerged from the bathroom and saw the shell. "Pretty," she exclaimed, adding that it was something to share with my classmates. Suddenly, I couldn’t wait for school to start.
"Let’s visit the boardwalk," my mom suggested, and that evening, we would pack for home. As I slipped the shell into my pocket, my mom warned me that it might get lost if I took it with me. "Best to leave it here," she stroked my hair.
I placed the shell on my nightstand (床头柜) and then headed to the boardwalk with my mom. Dad stayed at the hotel. So did Vikram, who was busy taking pictures.
At the boardwalk, I saw shells for sale, but none were as special as mine. For the whole walk, I had been thinking about it. Back at the hotel, I just couldn’t wait to run to my room to admire the shell. However, it was gone! Only a pinch of sand remained.
"My shell!" I cried, "Did you see my shell, daddy " Dad asked me to think about where I had put it. I checked everywhere I could think of, and I was on the verge of crying. Even Vikram joined me in searching for my treasure. Suddenly, he saw something. "Look!" pointed Vikram.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
"It’s a hermit crab!" exclaimed Vikram.
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As Vikram and I walked to the beach, I stared down at the shell I so wanted to keep.
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(6) [2025·陕西咸阳·三模] 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Ever since I was a kid, my mum Cynthia knew that I had a talent for music. When I was one year old, my mum bought me a toy with a xylophone (木琴), drums, all kinds of instruments. The moment I saw the toy, I fell in love with it. It was at this time that Cynthia learned her son must be into music.
However, my music career almost didn’t happen. When I was in secondary school, I started playing rugby (橄榄球). There were three things I was really interested in: languages, sports and music. But I decided that I wanted to focus on sports for the time being. My rugby career took me all over the world on tours in South Africa, Europe and elsewhere.
When I was around 16 years old, I got an injury. It was quite severe, keeping me out of the field for several months. And my doctor informed me that I could no longer continue playing professional rugby. During this period of recovery, I had a lot of time to reflect on my life and my passions. I realized that injuries had kept me from being a professional player. Although I loved rugby, music had always been a part of me. Music was something I had never truly let go of, even when I was fully buried in my rugby career. After much thought, I decided to pick up the guitar again and start writing songs.
My mum was thrilled when I told her I wanted to return to music. She had always believed in my musical talent. After moving away from rugby, with her support, I began taking music lessons and discovered that I possessed a wealth of creativity and emotion to channel into my music. I loved singing and continued my music lessons for years, even as I was preparing to go to university.
One day, a record producer approached my music teacher to inquire whether she knew of anyone interested in joining a band, so my teacher asked me whether to audition (试唱).
注意:1. 续写词数应为150词左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡上的相应位置作答。
With a slight hesitation, I asked my mum for help with this audition.
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As audition day came, I was a mixture of nerves and excitement.
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答案以及解析
一、书面表达
(1) 【答案】
Dear Editor,
After watching the popular science video clips on healthy diet on TikTok, I can’t wait to discuss the significance of healthy diet with you. Keeping a healthy diet will not only provide us with stronger muscles, bones and teeth, but more importantly, give us a better mood and sharper memory.
As senior high students, the two most frequented places where we have our meals are our homes and the school dining hall. Therefore, it’s of vital importance to provide healthy food for students at the school dining hall. Less processed food, more fruits, vegetables and no sugared snacks or drinks will be better choices for us students. At the same time, measures such as staggered dining and strengthening the management of dining order also help every student to have their favorite meals in a timely manner.
I hope the administrators of the dining hall can take my suggestion into consideration, helping students keep a healthy diet and form a healthy lifestyle.
Yours sincerely,
Li Jin
(2) 【答案】
Dear Self,
I’m writing to express my thanks to you. As time goes by, I will graduate from high school soon. Looking back on the three years of high school life, I thank you for your courage and hard work. In the face of difficulties, you are never afraid of failure. Over the past three years, you have been getting along well with your classmates and teachers, leaving many good memories of your high school life. Your dream university is Zhejiang University, which is one of the key universities in China. As long as you work hard, you will realize your college dream. I believe a bright future is waiting for you.
I wish you can be admitted to your dream university.
Self
(3) 【答案】
In response to the call of nationwide labor education, a series of hands-on courses were launched last term in our school, ranging from planting vegetables to making traditional handicrafts.
Sewing is one of my favorite courses, where I obtained fundamental knowledge of essential life skills such as sewing a button, knitting a scarf, and making a cushion by operating the sewing machine. It was surely a rewarding and fulfilling experience, which not only enriched our extracurricular life but also helped us acquire practical basic working capabilities for livelihood and form the good habit of labouring.
The hands-on courses have won wide popularity among students and exerted a positive effect on the personal growth of everyone involved. If possible, an exhibition could be held to demonstrate students’ well-designed works and display their creativity.
(4) 【答案】
Dear Chris,
I hope you are doing great! Knowing that you are interested in the implication of colors in Chinese culture, I am writing to share my ideas with you.
In our culture, many colors hold deep symbolic meanings. For instance, red, the color of celebration and joy, symbolizes good luck and prosperity. Black, on the other hand, embodies a sense of depth and mystery, which often lends a mysterious touch.
These symbolic meanings are reflected in various aspects in our daily lives. Take black for example. In art forms like ink painting and calligraphy, black ink is used skillfully to convey a sense of harmony and balance. In traditional martial arts, black is also a sign of inner exploration.
How do colors play a role in your culture Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
(5) 【答案】
Dear Mr. Jenkins,
I’m Li Hua from the school English song choir. Regarding the song chosen for the Spring Festival party, I’m writing to express my opinions and suggestions.
Firstly, I’m more than glad and grateful that you have been making efforts to select an appropriate program. However, I’m afraid Auld Lang Syneis not a good choice for its melody. In China, the Spring Festival has been a symbol of reunion and festivity, whose atmosphere should be happy and joyful. What’s more, the performers and audience may be immersed in an ocean of sorrow when appreciating Auld Lang Syne.
Therefore, a song full of happiness and joy can be a better choice. Time permitting, a play reflecting students’ daily life composed by ourselves can leave a deep impression.
I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestion into consideration. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(6) 【答案】
My Path to Self-Improvement in High School Life
During my high school years, I faced a significant challenge: I found it hard to express myself in English class, always feeling nervous when speaking. To overcome this, I practiced speaking English daily, joined the English club, and participated in speech contests bravely. These efforts paid off. Now, I’m more confident and fluent. High school taught me that with determination, every obstacle can be turned into an opportunity for growth.
二、读后续写
(1) 【答案】
One day, Emily was invited to attend a town hall meeting for a new environmental policy. This was her big chance to make a difference. With trembling hands but a determined heart, she presented her case, backed by facts and proofs from other community members. Her speech was convincing, and many in the audience were moved by her dedication and the undeniable evidence she provided. After much debate, the town council voted in favor of stricter environmental regulations and the new environmental policy was finally carried out.
With the new policy in place, the town began to change. The factory had to set up modern purification systems, and other businesses followed suit. People became more conscious of their waste and started adopting eco-friendly practices. The park was revitalized, new trees were planted, and wildlife returned. Emily’s efforts had paid off, and she was called as the “Green Hero” of her town. She continued to advocate for the environment, knowing that one person’s actions can indeed make a difference.
(2) 【答案】
Suddenly a long shadow came into the bedroom and she started crying. Panic at first, I then realized that it was just a car passing by. But she felt uneasy, her mouth wide open, arms waving, and legs kicking. I thought she might be scared too, so I held out my hand to hold hers, patting her on the back with the other. I even moved a bit closer to her little bed, whispering my favorite song to her ears, just as my mum did when I got scared. Surprisingly, she seemed to understand me and stopped crying. Looking into her big eyes, I breathed a sigh of relief.
After having comforted her, something slowly changed inside me. The sense of loneliness was replaced by the responsibility of being an elder brother. Even though her arrival took over the center of the whole family initially, she started to become the center of my attention too. With her cute round face and sparkling eyes, she also won my love and care for her. I looked around and found my parents, awake, smiling at me. With a shadow of a happy family cast on the window, I felt my little sister was the best gift I'd ever got.
(3) 【答案】
I was completely knocked out by the news. What should I do Having prepared for such a long time, I didn’t think of that coming up. Feeling at a loss, I was brainstorming as hard as I could to think of a solution, when a gentle touch on my back brought me back to reality. It was my mum, who looked at me with care and concern. “You have prepared for it enough. You can do it by yourself.” She said after my stumbling explanation. I looked back at her eyes, and a sense of confidence and warmth swelled up in my heart. Yes, I could do it myself.
Finally came the big moment. Looking around the audience, I stepped onto the stage, with butterflies in my stomach. My voice trembled at first, but with the melodies flying around, the nervousness was gone with the wind. Emotions filled my song, I performed as naturally as I spoke every day. I saw my mum, who was looking at me with reassurance and care. It turned out to be a good performance, which helped me conquer my fears and turned me into a new person.
(4) 【答案】
Over an entire day, they all worked together to clean up the rubbish. Rhenan and his group of volunteers filled up many bags with plastic bottles, old clothing, and empty food packages from the river. They walked along the riverbank and the surrounding area, picking up all kinds of litter. More people from all walks of life, young or old, joined them to make a positive change in their community. Hard as the work was, they were all happy to help. Looking at the clean river, they felt a sense of pride.
Looking at the clean river, Rhenan decided to stop this problem from happening again. He came up with the idea of raising the awareness of the importance of protecting the environment by making posters and flyers with pictures of the clean river and the animals that lived in it. It was with the students who he first held discussions about how it could help to keep the river clean and also benefit the community. What’s more, he suggested that the Mayor and other officials set up recycling programs to make it easier for people to dispose of their waste properly. Rhenan’s dedication showed that one person can make a huge difference.
(5) 【答案】
“It’s a hermit crab!” exclaimed Vikram. Everyone looked. The beautiful, spotted shell had shiny eyes and brown legs that raced for the door. I ran over and picked it up. Then it disappeared inside. “I got you!” I peeked into the shell with joy. “You can live at my house.” “He already has a house,” teased Mom. “And a home,” said Dad, looking into my eyes. I remembered how my hermit crab had washed up from the ocean. That was its real home. That was where it wanted to be.
As Vikram and I walked to the beach, I stared down at the shell I so wanted to keep.Every step was painful. I put it down at the beach. Its legs reappeared and carried itself to the water’s edge. With the next wave, it was gone. “Goodbye,” I whispered, feeling good and awful at the same time. “It really was a cool shell,” Vikram said, “but don’t be sad. You can still show it to your friends.” Vikram held up his camera, winking. At this, a smile crept upon my face. “Thanks, brother.” Now it was time for us to go back home.
(6) 【答案】
With a slight hesitation, I asked my mum for help with this audition. She hugged me tightly and said, "Darling, this is the chance you’ve been waiting for. Remember how much you love music and how far you’ve come. You have a unique voice and style, and I’m sure they’ll be blown away." Her words were like a warm breeze, calming my jitters. She helped me choose the perfect songs, practiced vocal techniques with me, and even gave me tips on stage presence. With her unwavering support, I felt a new surge of confidence and began to look forward to the audition with anticipation.
As audition day came, I was a mixture of nerves and excitement. Stepping into the audition room, I took a deep breath and started singing. My voice filled the room, steady and confident. When I finished, the producers nodded approvingly. I had made it! Overjoyed, I rushed home to share the news with my mum, grateful for her love and support that made my musical dream come true.