时事热点书面表达 押题练 2025年中考英语三轮复习备考

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时事热点书面表达 押题练
2025年中考英语三轮复习备考
1．2025年中国春晚节目《秧BOT》展现了中华传统艺术与现代科技的完美结合，吸引了全世界的目光，人工智能AI (Artificial Intelligence) 已经极大地改变了我们的生活。请你以“What AI Brings to Us”为题，简介AI，让世界看到中国科技的发展与进步。
参考词汇：personalized learning 个性化的学习；smart home devices 家用智能设备
要求：
1. 根据导图所示，适当增减、发挥；
2. 文中不得提及真实的校名和姓名；
3. 词数80＋，短文首句已给出，不计入总词数。
What AI Brings to Us
With the development of science and technology, AI is everywhere and has become______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2．假如你是李华，昨天你和朋友去了市展览馆(the city exhibition hall)参观了中华传统艺术展(a Chinese traditional art exhibition)。请根据下表，写一篇短文，记录你的所见所感。
What you see How you feel
paper cutting works（剪纸作品） 每一幅作品都在讲述着一个有趣的故事
shadow puppet works（皮影作品） 它们能够演艺精彩的戏曲
Chinese calligraphy works（书法作品） 汉字有这么漂亮的写法
Chinese painting（中国画） ……
要求：1.选择使用参考词汇，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.不得出现真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4.词数：不少于70词。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数。）
I went to visit the city exhibition hall with my friend Tom yesterday. There was a ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
From what I saw there, I become much prouder of the Chinese traditional art.
3．目前，AI正悄然改变着我们生活的方方面面。我校英语报正以“AI in Our Life”为题向大家征稿，请你结合生活实际，谈谈AI带来的便利与挑战，并提出如何与AI共处的应对策略。
要求：
1. 80—120词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考信息：
AI in Our Life
In today’s world, AI is like a new friend that has come into our lives.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4．根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
假设你是李华，你校英语社团决定举办一场环保活动，以激发师生关注并参与资源回收再利用，目前正针对活动安排征集师生建议。请你给英语社团公众号留言，提供一个有关资源回收再利用的活动设计方案并说明理由。
提示词语：organize, recycle, artworks, creative, awareness（意识）
内容提示：
● What do you suggest for the activity
● Why do you suggest doing that
I’m Li Hua, a Grade 9 student.
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I hope my idea can be considered. Thanks.
5．2025年蛇年春节是申遗成功后的第一个春节，意义非凡，引发了广泛关注。作为青少年，我们肩负着传承和发扬中华民族传统文化的光荣使命。在众多的传统佳节里，如春节、元宵节、中秋节、端午节等，请你以“My favorite traditional festival”为题,用英语写一篇短文。
1.要点：
(1)你最喜爱的传统佳节是什么；
(2)人们如何庆祝这个节日；
(3)我们如何做去传承这个节日。
2.要求：
(1)文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名；
(2)词数100左右。
My favorite traditional festival
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6．假设你是李华，你校将举办国潮文化节（China-Chic Cultural Festival）。请结合以下思维导图，用英语写一封邮件，邀请你的外国好友Jason来参加。
注意：
1. 包含提示内容，可适当增加细节；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名；
3. 词数80个左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Jason,
I know you are interested in Chinese culture. Here is good news for you.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
7．“五育并举”是中华文化传统中的五个教育要素，其中劳动教育旨在培养学生的动手能力和实践经验，也是中华民族的传统美德，是中学生成长的必修课，学校英语公众号正在进行征文活动。请阅读征文信息并写一篇英语短文投稿。
Dear students, we want to know your ideas about the topic "Grow up in Labor (劳动)". What kind of labor can you do What can you learn from labor □At home: make the bed... □At school: sweep the floor… □In community: pick up the rubbish... School English
要求：
(1)结合你的生活经历，谈谈你的劳动内容以及劳动带给你的启示或收获，包含以上所有要点；
(2)文中不得出现个人真实的姓名和校名；
(3)词数90词左右，标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Grow up in Labor
Love of labor is a virtue of the Chinese nation and the course of growth. As teenagers, how will we grow up in labor
First, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8．假如你是李华，你校从今年春季新学期开始，课间时长由原来的10分钟延长至15分钟，旨在鼓励学生“动起来”。最近学校英语广播站以“如何度过我的15分钟课间”为主题举办征文活动，请根据以下要点提示，以“How to Spend My 15-minute Break Time”为题投稿。
要求：
1. 短文须包含题目要点，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 短文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4. 词数：不少于70。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数。）
How to Spend My 15-minute Break Time
As we all know, at the start of the spring semester in 2025, our school increased the break time to 15 minutes.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
9．从春节档《哪吒2》的海外热映，到3月甲亢进中国行直播观看热潮，再到4月关税贸易战引起的全球对中国的关注，越来越多的外国人想了解真正的中国。假如你是Peter，你的澳大利亚网友Jason就是其中之一，他打算7月来华旅行。在来中国之前，他在网上向你咨询一些中国的社交习俗和礼仪。请你给他发一封e-mail，从问候、去朋友家做客、就餐三个方面，给他一些如何举止得体的建议。除此之外，你还做了2点提醒。
写作要点:1. Advice on greeting, visiting a friend’s home and having meals in China;
2. What else should Jason pay attention to (eg: money, weather, transport…选择2点)
写作要求：1.表达清楚，语言通顺，书写规范；
2.文中不得出现个人真实姓名和校名；
3.词数不少于100，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jason,
I’m so glad that you are coming to China soon. Just as the saying goes, “When in Rome, do as the Romans do.” When you are in China, you should follow the customs here.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope you will have a wonderful time in China.
Yours,
Peter
10．在动画电影《哪吒之魔童闹海》中，哪吒面临诸多挑战，踏上了自我发现与成长之旅。作为九年级的学生，我们在生活中也会遭遇各种困难，请以“How to Overcome Difficulties”为题写一篇作文。
写作要点：
（1）What difficulties did Ne Zha face What difficulties do junior high school students face in study and life
（2）What can we learn from Ne Zha’s experience
（3）Share some ways to overcome difficulties, like adjusting attitude and asking for help.
参考词汇：have trouble in在……方面有困难；get along with与……相处；prejudice偏见；fight against对抗；strong will坚强的意志
写作要求：
（1）作文应包含上述所有写作要点，条理清晰，行文连贯；
（2）作文中不得出现真实的人名和地名；
（3）90—100词。
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11．Write at least 60 words to the situation given. 请根据所给情境，以 “The world bestows me ________ (世界赠与我……)” 为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格
2025年春晚，王菲的歌曲《世界赠与我的》引起了广泛关注。歌中唱到：“世界赠与我虫鸣，也赠与我雷霆。”世界赠与了我们许多东西，他们可以是有形的，也可以是无形的。它可以是快乐、成功。也可以是痛苦、失败。这些体验，无论好坏，都是生命中不可或缺的一部分。请你结合自己的亲身经历，谈谈世界赠与你的“礼物”以及你的感悟。
参考信息：
tangible 有形的 intangible 无形的 bestow 赠予 foster 促进
resilient 有韧性的 setback 挫折 appreciate 感恩 determined 坚定的
sufferings 痛苦
(注意：1. 文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其他信息，否则不予评分。2. 照抄阅读内容不得分。)
The world bestows me ________
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12．端午节是中国传统节日之一。为了加深对于传统文化的理解，我校英文报社正在举办关于端午节的征文比赛。请你根据以下内容，写一篇短文投稿。
要求：1.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
2.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)；
3.词数：不少于70词。
The Dragon Boat Festival
The Dragon Boat Festival is one of the traditional Chinese festivals. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考答案
1．例文
What AI Brings to Us
With the development of science and technology, AI is everywhere and has become an important part of our daily lives. It brings us both convenience and new opportunities.
In learning, AI tools like Doubao and Deepseek help students study more conveniently. For example, AI can check grammar mistakes in English writing, provide personalized learning plans, and even explain difficult math problems step by step. Some apps even use games to make memorizing words fun! At home, AI makes our life easier and smarter. Smart home devices can control lights, TVs, and home robots through simple voice commands. Robot cleaners keep floors clean. Moreover, AI can even help parents plan healthy meals. However, protecting private information is important when using AI devices.
In conclusion, I believe if we use AI properly and creatively, it can bring us a brighter future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包括思维导图所提供的要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第三人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总述AI的普及以及其对日常生活的重要性，点明AI带来便利和新机遇的双重影响；
第二步，分述AI在学习和家庭生活中的具体应用，强调其便利性与功能性，同时提及隐私保护的重要性；
第三步，总结全文，强调合理、创新使用AI对未来的积极意义。
[亮点词汇]
①step by step 逐步地
②check grammar mistakes 检查语法错误
[高分句型]
①However, protecting private information is important when using AI devices. (动名词作主语)
②In conclusion, I believe if we use AI properly and creatively, it can bring us a brighter future. (if引导条件状语从句)
2．参考范文：
I went to visit the city exhibition hall with my friend Tom yesterday. There was a Chinese traditional art exhibition. We saw many amazing works. The paper cutting works were full of creativity—each piece told an interesting story, like folk tales or historical events. The shadow puppet works impressed us most. They could act out wonderful operas, and the way they moved made the stories come alive. The Chinese calligraphy works showed how beautiful Chinese characters could be written, with different styles from ancient masters. As for Chinese paintings, they used simple ink and brush to create peaceful mountains and rivers, making me feel the beauty of nature and traditional aesthetics.
From what I saw there, I become much prouder of the Chinese traditional art.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：根据所给表格中的要点完成写作，不能遗漏信息，适当添加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍和朋友去参加了中华传统文化展，引出下文；
第二步，具体介绍本次展览的内容；
第三步，表达自己通过参观，对中国传统艺术产生的强烈自豪感，点明主旨。
[亮点词汇]
①be full of充满
②come alive活跃起来
③the beauty of nature自然之美
[高分句型]
①They could act out wonderful operas, and the way they moved made the stories come alive.(并列句)
②The Chinese calligraphy works showed how beautiful Chinese characters could be written, with different styles from ancient masters.(宾语从句+被动语态+伴随状语)
3．范文：
AI in Our Life
In today’s world, AI is like a new friend that has come into our lives. And it’s changing our world really fast.
On the one hand, AI brings many advantages. It can make our life more convenient. For example, it helps check homework and look up information effectively. Besides, it can also make our homes smarter and avoid traffic jams on the way to school or work. What’s more, it even helps doctors analyze X-rays and find new medicines. On the other hand, there are also some challenges. Some people worry that relying on AI may make us lose our ability to choose. Also, false information may be given.
In my opinion, we should see AI as a helper. We should keep learning and be careful with our personal information. We need to make good use of AI while avoiding its disadvantages. Only in this way can AI do more good for us and serve us well.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作提示已给出，不要遗漏信息，可适当增加细节，注意上下文的逻辑关系。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，人工智能正迅速地改变着世界；
第二步，具体阐述人工智能带来的优点和不利方面；
第三步，介绍自己的观点，提出关于AI应对策略。
[亮点词汇]
①on the one hand...一方面……
②in my opinion在我看来
[高分句型]
On the other hand, there are also some challenges. (there be句型)
4．例文
I’m Li Hua, a Grade 9 student. I’m excited to share my idea for the activity.
I suggest organizing a “Recycling Art Competition” with three steps. First, a teacher can give a short talk on recycling and show practical examples, such as making flower pots from plastic bottles. Then, participants will have one week to create their own artworks using waste materials. After the creation period, art teachers will judge the artworks to select the best ones. The top 10 works will receive prizes, like eco-friendly notebooks or recycled-material pens.
This activity not only encourages creative thinking, but also helps participants better understand recycling principles, making them more likely to adopt these practices in daily life.
I hope my idea can be considered. Thanks.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步、承接已给的开头，推荐一个活动；
第二步、提供活动内容设计并说明理由；
第三步、书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①give a short talk on recycling关于回收的简短演讲
②receive prizes领取奖品
③think critically批判性思考
not only ... but also...不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
①The top 10 works will receive prizes, like eco-friendly notebooks or recycled-material pens.（or连接并列成分）
This activity not only encourages creative thinking, but also helps participants better understand recycling principles, making them more likely to adopt these practices in daily life.（not only ... but also...连接并列成分）
5．例文
My favorite traditional festival
Out of all the important festivals, the Dragon Boat Festival stands out as my favorite. It falls on the fifth day of the fifth lunar month in memory of the poet—Qu Yuan.
As a traditional festival rich in cultural significance, it has a history of about 2,000 years. People celebrate it in various ways such as participating in or watching dragon boat races and eating the traditional food—zongzi.
From my point of view, we teenagers should make an effort to promote this festival. To begin with, we plan to make a poster about the festival’ s development, and put it up in our library. Furthermore, we will make a video with both Chinese and English introductions. I believe we should take pride in traditional Chinese culture and try to pass on its values to the world.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍最喜欢的节日端午节；
第二步，介绍端午节的来历和庆祝方式；
第三步，阐述传承这个节日的具体方法。
[亮点词汇]
①stand out 突出
②in memory of 为了纪念……
③significance 重要性
④in various ways 用不同的方式
⑤participate in 参加
⑥make an effort to do 努力做某事
⑦take pride in 为……感到自豪
[高分句型]
①I believe we should take pride in traditional Chinese culture and try to pass on its values to the world. (省略that的宾语从句)
6．例文
Dear Jason,
I know you are interested in Chinese culture. Here is good news for you.
Our school will hold the China-Chic Cultural Festival at 2:00 p.m. on May 30th in the school playground. During the event, we will watch folk activities such as lantern making and paper cutting. At the same time, we will enjoy Beijing Opera and martial arts performances. We all love the festival because it’s a good chance to look back on history and a wonderful time to get together. I hope you can come to celebrate it with us. You should bring a camera to take photos and pay attention to safety.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：时态主要为“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，完善表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，介绍国潮文化节举行的时间和地点；
第二步，介绍具体的活动安排；
第三步，给出注意事项。
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②at the same time同时
③look back on回顾
④pay attention to注意
[高分句型]
①We all love the festival because it’s a good chance to look back on history and a wonderful time to get together.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②At the same time, we will enjoy Beijing Opera and martial arts performances.（and连接并列成分）
7．例文：
Grow up in Labor
Love of labor is a virtue of the Chinese nation and the course of growth. As teenagers, how will we grow up in labor
First, at home, I often wash the dishes after meals, which not only lightens my parents’ burden but also makes me understand their hard work.
At school, I’m responsible for watering the plants in the classroom. Watching them grow healthily makes me feel like I’m nurturing life and understand the meaning of patience and care.
In the community, I help to sort out the books in the library. This experience teaches me the importance of order and organization.
Through these kinds of labor, I’ve learned that labor can shape our character and make us better individuals.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”，穿插“现在完成时”。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意要点齐全，可适当补充。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。用“作为青少年，我们该如何在劳动中成长呢？”引出下文。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“在家、在学校、在社区”几个方面给出建议。
第三步，书写结语。表达“我明白了劳动能够塑造我们的性格，使我们成为更好的人”，进行情感升华。
[亮点词汇]
①feel like感觉像是
②the meaning of……的意义
③the importance of……的重要性
[高分句型]
①First, at home, I often wash the dishes after meals, which not only lightens my parents’ burden but also makes me understand their hard work. (which引导的定语从句)
8．例文
How to Spend My 15-minute Break Time
As we all know, at the start of the spring semester in 2025, our school increased the break time to 15 minutes. The main purpose is to encourage us students to “move around”.
During the 15-minute break, I usually take part in various activities. Sometimes, I play badminton with my classmates on the playground. At other times, I walk around the campus, enjoying the fresh air and the beautiful scenery. I chat with my friends about interesting things, which can relieve my stress from study.
This longer break makes me feel relaxed and ready for the next class. It’s truly a great change that benefits us a lot.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以一般现在时为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏字数要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步，解释延长课间时长的目的；
第二步，从自身实际出发，介绍课间活动；
第三步，阐述课间时长延长对你的影响。
[亮点词汇]
①encourage sb to do鼓励某人做某事
②take part in参加
③walk around四处走动
[高分句型]
①I chat with my friends about interesting things, which can relieve my stress from study.（which引导的定语从句）
②It’s truly a great change that benefits us a lot.（that引导的定语从句）
9．例文
Dear Jason,
I’m so glad that you are coming to China soon. Just as the saying goes, “When in Rome, do as the Romans do.” When you are in China, you should follow the customs here.
When you meet somebody for the first time in China, you should shake hands and say, “How do you do ” You don’t need to bow or kiss the side of the face. When you are eating at the table, it’s impolite to stick your chopsticks into the food. You are not supposed to point others with your chopsticks. You’d better not speak with your mouth full. If you visit a friend’s home, it’s polite to bring a small gift and take off your shoes before entering the house.
By the way, you should be attention to the weather in July. It might be quite hot, so bring some light and thin clothes. Also, make sure you have enough money for your trip, as it’s not convenient to exchange money in some places.
I hope you will have a wonderful time in China.
Yours,
Peter
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步：引出话题。简要表达对Jason即将来中国旅行的高兴之情，并引出接下来要介绍的中国社交习俗和礼仪。
第二步：从问候、去朋友家做客、就餐三个方面，给他一些如何举止得体的建议。
第三步：从天气和现金方面做两点提醒；
第四步：书写结语，表达祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①shake hands握手
②be not supposed to不应该
③point sb with sth用某物指某人
[高分句型]
①When you meet somebody for the first time in China, you should shake hands and say, “How do you do ”(when引导的时间状语从句)
②If you visit a friend’s home, it’s polite to bring a small gift and take off your shoes before entering the house.(if引导的条件状语从句)
10．例文：
How to Overcome Difficulties
In the film, Ne Zha was seen as a demon and had trouble controlling his power. For us junior high school students, we face study pressure like hard subjects and too much homework. Also, getting along with others can be tough.
From Ne Zha, we learn to be strong-minded. When facing difficulties, we should adjust our attitude. If we’re stressed about exams, we should think it’s a chance to show what we’ve learned. And don’t be shy to ask teachers or classmates for help. With these ways, we can overcome difficulties.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意要点齐全，可适当补充细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。用“对于我们这些初中生来说，我们面临着诸如繁重的课程和过多的作业等学习压力”引出下文。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。说明我们从哪吒的经历中学到了什么，并分享克服困难的方法。
第三步，书写结语。表达“通过这些方法，我们就能克服困难”，进行情感升华。
[亮点词汇]
①pressure压力
②tough坚韧的
③attitude态度
[高分句型]
If we’re stressed about exams, we should think it’s a chance to show what we’ve learned. (if引导的条件状语从句)
11．例文
The world bestows me gifts
The world has bestowed upon me both tangible and intangible gifts. One of the most precious gifts I have received is friendship. During a difficult time in my life, when I faced setbacks and felt lost, my friends stood by me, offering support and encouragement. Their presence reminded me of the importance of resilience and the power of human connection.
Another gift I cherish is the beauty of nature. The warmth of sunshine and the sound of birdsong have often brought me peace and clarity. These moments have taught me to appreciate the simple joys in life and to find strength in the natural world.
Through both joyful and challenging experiences, I have learned to be more determined and grateful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题目要求中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开头直接指出世界给予自己各类礼物，引出下文对具体礼物的描述。
第二步，具体阐述。详细讲述在困难时期友谊的珍贵，描绘自然之美给自己带来的内心感受，从不同角度深入阐述所获礼物的价值。
第三步，书写结语。总结从经历中获得的成长。
[亮点词汇]
①bestow 给予
②tangible 有形的
③intangible 无形的
④precious 珍贵的
⑤setback 挫折
⑥lost 迷茫的
⑦stand by 支持；陪伴
⑧encouragement 鼓励
⑨resilience 韧性
[高分句型]
①One of the most precious gifts I have received is friendship.（定语从句）
②During a difficult time in my life, when I faced setbacks and felt lost, my friends stood by me, offering support and encouragement.（when引导的时间状语从句）
12．范文：
The Dragon Boat Festival
The Dragon Boat Festival is one of the traditional Chinese Festivals. The Dragon Boat Festival, which falls on May 5th in the Chinese lunar calendar, is a day for us to remember Qu Yuan. On that day, I am always excited to watch the dragon boat races.
Another important custom is that people will eat zongzi with their family. My mother tells me that in ancient times, people were moved by Qu Yuan’ story, so they threw zongzi into the Miluo River to keep the great body from being eaten by fish.
In my opinion, the Dragon Boat Festival is not only a day for us to honor Qu Yuan, but also a day to express our love for our country.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先介绍端午节的时间；
第二步，具体介绍端午节的活动，例如看龙舟赛、吃粽子、纪念屈原等；
第三步，书写结束语，表达自己对此节日的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①remember 纪念，缅怀
②be excited to do 做某事很兴奋
③throw...into... 把……扔进……
④keep...from... 使免于
⑤in my opinion 在我看来
⑥not only...but also... 不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
①The Dragon Boat Festival, which falls on May 5th in the Chinese lunar calendar, is a day for us to remember Qu Yuan. (which引导的非限制性定语从句)
②Another important custom is that people will eat zongzi with their family. (that引导的表语从句)
③My mother tells me that in ancient times, people were moved by Qu Yuan’ story, so they threw zongzi into the Miluo River to keep the great body from being eaten by fish. (that引导的宾语从句)
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