（期末考点培优）专题15 书面表达-2024-2025学年八年级英语下册期末复习考点培优专项仁爱科普版（含答案解析）

中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
2024-2025学年八年级英语下册期末复习专项仁爱科普版
（期末考点培优）专题15 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．你的美国朋友Lucy计划暑假来中国旅游。请你根据以下图示，用英语在微信中给她留言，介绍并推荐你的家乡山西，词数70左右。
要求：1. 需包含所有提示信息（开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
Hi, Lucy. I’m glad to hear that you’re planning to travel around China during the summer vacation. I’d like to invite you to my hometown Shanxi for a visit.
Shanxi lies ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m looking forward to meeting you!
2．饮食也是一种文化。中国的饮食文化丰富多彩，源远流长。假如你是李华，请你写信向你的外国笔友Mark介绍一下中国的特色美食粽子，介绍制作粽子的方法、味道并弘扬中国美食文化。
提示：
（1）材料：大米，粽叶（reed leaves），红枣（red dates），蜂蜜，糖；
（2）步骤：洗净所有食材；将大米和红枣放入粽叶中，加一些糖；把粽叶折叠（fold）好；然后放入锅（pot）里，烹调约一小时；根据需要加一些蜂蜜。
要求：
（1）必须包含提示里所有内容，可适当发挥；
（2）100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mark,
Knowing that you take a great fancy to traditional Chinese food, especially Zongzi, I would love to introduce it to you.
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3．随着《我的阿勒泰》的热播，来自新疆的草原、雪山、旷野和森林震撼了无数人的心灵，让新疆再度成为网友心目中旅游的热门地点之一。假如你是李华，你校英语报正在举办以“Beautiful Xinjiang”为主题的英语征稿活动，让更多的朋友了解新疆，请你根据以下提示内容，用英语写一篇文章简单地介绍一下新疆并投稿。
内容包括：
1. 新疆位于我国西部；交通方便；人们热情好客；
2. 日照丰富，因此水果的产量和种类丰富，在这里人们可以品尝各种水果和美食；
3. 有许多著名的旅游景点，如天山(The Tianshan Mountains)、赛里木湖(Sayram Lake);
4. 旅游时间及原因(至少一条)。
要求：
1. 意思连贯，表达准确，书写规范，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不能出现考生真实的人名、校名及所在地等信息；
3. 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数，不得抄袭试卷原文。
Beautiful Xinjiang
Hello, everyone. Welcome to Xinjiang! Let me introduce Xinjiang to you.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4．今年五一，河南凭借丰富的旅游资源和优质的服务，吸引了世界各地的游客前来“打卡”， 在校园英语文化周，你将代表班级做关于“旅行”的英语演讲。请根据以下要点提示写一篇英语演讲稿。
注意事项：
1. 简要介绍你对旅游的态度或看法，并详细介绍一个旅游胜地；
2. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 词数100左右，文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear schoolmates,
Good morning! I’m glad to make a speech here.
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That’s all. Thank you!
5．假如你是Helen，上周日你和妹妹一起逛商场买衣服，你对自己和妹妹买的衣服很满意，并想把这份快乐与好朋友Lily分享，所以你就给她发了一封邮件，讲述你所买的衣物的情况。
提示：
1. 你买了一件杭州产的白色的丝绸连衣裙，你喜欢它的面料、颜色和款式。
2. 你妹妹买了一件广州产的蓝色的棉质牛仔裤。
注意：可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。要求：
1. 文中要包含上面所给要点，须用上被动语态；
2. 词数：80左右。
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6．我们都收到过礼物，每个礼物的背后或多或少都有一些故事。那么，你最喜爱的礼物是什么呢？你拥有它多长时间了？对你来说，它有什么特殊的意义？请以“The Story Behind My Favorite Gift”为题写一篇英语短文。
提示词：favorite gift; have had
要求：
1. 参考提示信息，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
3. 文章不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4. 词数：不少于60词。
The Story Behind My Favorite Gift
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7．假如你是李华，你与Bob叔叔及其家人约定了一起去北京旅行，请你给 Bob 叔叔写一封英文电子邮件，告知你的旅行安排。
When 7月5日下午2：00机场见
Where 北京， 酒店已定好， 直接前往
Who 我和我父母
What 1.观看升旗仪式 2.游长城 3.吃北京烤鸭 4.参观故宫 5…
How …
1.文章内容必须包括所有要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯；
2.对省略部分作1—2 句话的合理发挥；
3.词数不少于 80 词，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
提示词语： book 预定；directly 直接地；flag-raising ceremony 升旗仪式；the Palace Museum 故宫
Dear Uncle Bob,
I’m so glad to hear from you about visiting Beijing. Here’s the trip plan.
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Li Hua
8．随着东北旅游的兴起，我们的家乡齐齐哈尔也逐渐走进全国游客的心里。黑龙江省旅游发展大会也在齐齐哈尔胜利召开，假设你是这次旅发大会的志愿者，请你根据下面的提示，向游客们介绍一下咱们的家乡。
My Hometown Location
People
Environment
My favorite place
Great changes
Feelings
写作要求：
1.字迹工整，语言准确，内容完整连贯，可适当发挥；
2.80词以上，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear friends,
Welcome to my hometown—Qiqihar!
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Welcome to my hometown. I’m sure you’ll have a lot of fun here!
9．2024年5月17日，习近平总书记指出，近年来，我国旅游发展步入快车道，成功走出了一条独具特色的中国旅游发展之路。加快建设旅游强国，让旅游业更好服务美好生活、促进经济发展、构筑精神家园，离不开每个人的努力。作为青少年的我们，更应该走在队伍的前列。请结合习总书记的讲话，联系你的生活实际，写一次你到某地的旅行。
要点：
1.描述一次旅行的经过。
2.旅行中遇到的问题，以及带给你的影响和启发。
要求：
1.文中不能出现真实的姓名、地名、学校；
2.语言通顺，表达正确，要点齐全，适当补充；
3.词数不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：pay a visit to...去某地的旅行；make our economy stronger 使得我们国家的经济实力强大；build our spiritual home 构建我们的精神家园；make an effort to do sth 努力做某事
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10．我们每一位淄博人都以家乡为傲。假设你是来自淄博的李华，请你以“Beautiful things in Zibo”为题，写一篇80词左右的英文短文，介绍一下家乡之美，内容包括本地特色产品是什么，这些特色产品由什么制成，以及它们为什么是本地特色等。
提示：陶瓷 ceramic 烧烤 barbecue
要求：内容要点齐全，可适当发挥，语言流畅。
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11．假如你校微信公众号正在开展“假期游记”的英语征文活动，请你结合下面图示信息，根据写作要求，以“My summer holiday trip”为题，用英语写一篇短文，介绍你和家人的暑假旅行。
写作要求：1) 文中须包含上图提示的所有信息，可适当发挥；
2) 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
3) 书写规范，意思连贯，语句通顺；
4) 词数80左右（短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
My summer holiday trip
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12．假如你叫李华，国际奥委会(the International Olympic Committee)在其官网上发布了招募2024年巴黎奥运会志愿者的海报。请你根据下列提示问题，用英文给相关负责人Sam写一封自荐信。
提示问题： 1. What’s your personal information
2. Why do you want to be a volunteer
3. What can you do for the games
要求：1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息 (姓名、校名和地名等)；
4. 词数：不少于70词 (开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数)。
Dear Sam,
I’m writing to express my interest in volunteering for the 2024 Paris Olympic Games.
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Yours,
Li Hua
13．旅游不仅可以使人开阔眼界，也可以让人身心放松。假如你是李华，去年暑假你受朋友之邀到陕西省西安市参观，请你根据下面表格中的提示，用英语写一篇短文，介绍一下西安以及这次参观活动。
Location (位置) In the center of Shaanxi Province
History More than 6,000 years
Places of interest The Terracotta Army, Bell Tower, ...
Food Liangpi, Roujiamo, …
Feelings ... ...
要求：
1.参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.文中不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4.词数：不少于60词。（题目和开头已给出，但不计入总词数）
An unforgettable experience
Last summer vacation, my friend invited me to visit Xi’an.
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14．旅游能让人们有机会了解世界各地的文化、历史和风景，从而拓宽视野，增加知识。你喜欢旅游吗？你去过哪些地方请你根据以下提示，写一篇英语短文，记述自己印象最深刻的一次旅游经历。
内容包括：
1. 你什么时候与什么人如何去了什么地方；
2. 你做了哪些事；
3. 你对该地方有了哪些了解；
4. 你的感想。
要求：
1. 语句通顺，符合逻辑，包含以上所有信息，可根据需要作适当的发挥。
2. 80词左右。
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15．旅行可以使人放松，开阔眼界。假如你是八（1）班的李海，很喜欢旅行，请用英语写一篇短文，分享你的旅行经验。内容需包括以下要点：
1. 旅行的好处；
2. 介绍一次你的旅行经历（时间、地点、人物、经过、感受）；
3. 关于旅行的建议。
要求：1. 词数在80词左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数；
2. 内容须包括所有要点，并适当发挥，文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等信息。
As one of the lifestyle for the modern humans, travelling is loved by more and more people.
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参考答案及试题解析
1．One possible version:
Hi, Lucy. I’m glad to hear that you’re planning to travel around China during the summer vacation. I’d like to invite you to my hometown Shanxi for a visit.
Shanxi lies in the north of China with Taiyuan as its capital city. It has a population of over 37 million. Have you ever tried Shanxi food Shanxi is famous for its food, such as sliced noodles, mutton soup and fried boiled pork. If you come, I’ll treat you to delicious food. With a history of thousands of years, there are many places of interest in Shanxi, like Yungang Grottoes and Mount Wutai. These places are really worth visiting. Another great thing about Shanxi is that it has convenient transport. You can get here easily by plane. I believe you’ll have a great time in Shanxi.
I’m looking forward to meeting you!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图；
第二步，具体介绍并推荐Lucy来山西旅游；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be famous for 以……而闻名
②such as 例如
③be worth doing 值得做某事
④have a great time 玩得开心
[高分句型]
①If you come, I’ll treat you to delicious food.（if引导的条件状语从句）
②I believe you’ll have a great time in Shanxi.（省略that的宾语从句）
2．[例文]
Dear Mark,
Knowing that you take a great fancy to traditional Chinese food, especially Zongzi, I would love to introduce it to you.
To make this special food, we need to have rice, reed leaves, red dates, honey and sugar.
First, wash all the ingredients carefully. Next, put the rice and red dates into the reed leaves and add some sugar lightly. Then fold the leaves well. After that, put them into the pot slowly and boil them, first with big fire, then turn to small fire for about an hour. Finally, add some honey if you like. Then you can enjoy them. They taste soft and delicious.
Making and eating Zongzi is a popular custom during the Dragon Boat Festival. You are welcome to taste more delicious Chinese food. I believe you will enjoy it.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是书信作文；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示”的要求均要一一阐述，适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图。告诉Mark信中将为他介绍粽子的做法。
第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点介绍包粽子的具体步骤。
第三步：书写结语。表达“希望Mark能享受品尝中国美食”的期待。
[亮点词汇]
①introduce … to把……介绍给
②need to do需要做
③be welcome to欢迎拥有或做某事
[高分句型]
①Making and eating Zongzi is a popular custom during the Dragon Boat Festival.（动名词作主语）
②I believe you will enjoy it.（I believe +宾语从句）
3．One possible version:
Beautiful Xinjiang
Hello, everyone. Welcome to Xinjiang! Let me introduce Xinjiang to you.
Xinjiang is located in the west of China. It’s very convenient for people to come here by train or by plane. People here are very kind and friendly. Xinjiang has enough sunshine so it’s home to different kinds of fruits. If you come here, you can enjoy delicious fruits. There are many famous places of interest, such as The Tianshan Mountains and Sayram Lake. They are very beautiful. I suggest you come in summer, which is very cool and you can enjoy beautiful scenery.
Come to Xinjiang! I’m sure you will enjoy yourself.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
②时态：本文以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：题目要求根据提示介绍一下新疆，包括它的位置、交通、特产以及旅游景点，并推荐一下旅游时间。写作时注意适当增加细节，不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题（已给出）；
第二步，根据所给要点，依次介绍新疆的位置、交通、特产以及旅游景点，并推荐一下旅游时间；
第三步，最后表达祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①different kinds of 不同各类的
②such as 比如
③enjoy oneself 玩得开心
[高分句型]
① It’s very convenient for people to come here by train or by plane.（it作形式主语）
② If you come here, you can enjoy delicious fruits.（if引导的条件状语从句）
4．参考例文:
Dear schoolmates,
Good morning! I’m glad to make a speech here.
Now more and more people are interested in travelling. I think trip is an opportunity for us to experience life and increase knowledge. At the same time, it can also broaden our horizon.
Last Wednesday, we went on a trip to Jiyuan. Jiyuan is a modern and tidy city, where there are many places of interest. It was a fine warm day. In the morning, we climbed the Wangwu Mountain. On the way, we met an Australian. He was kind and patient. We had fun practising speaking English. In the next day, we went to Wulongkou and saw many monkeys on the mountain. I had a great time.
I think if we want to attract more tourists, we should provide better service for tourists.
That’s all. Thank you!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据内容提示，介绍自己的旅游经历和感受，不要遗漏要点，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简要介绍你对旅行的态度或看法；
第二步，详述你的一次旅游或出行经历；
第三步，提出自己的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣
②at the same time同时
③places of interest名胜古迹
[高分句型]
①Jiyuan is a modern and tidy city, where there are many places of interest.（非限制性定语从句）
②I think if we want to attract more tourists, we should provide better service for tourists.（宾语从句；if引导的条件状语从句）
5．
Dear Lily,
I had a good time with my sister last Sunday. We went shopping happily and bought beautiful clothes.
I bought a white silk dress. It was made in Hangzhou. It feels very soft and comfortable, and it fits me well. I like its material, color and style very much. My sister bought a pair of cotton jeans, which was blue. They were made in Guangzhou. They were cheap and just cost fifty yuan. She looks very cool in the blue jeans, so she loves them a lot.
After that, we went back home. We were tired but we felt happy because we all enjoyed ourselves very much.
Yours,
Helen
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏任何信息提示，可根据需要适当添加内容，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，直入主题；
第二步，介绍自己以及妹妹买的衣服；
第三步，表达对这次购物的感受。
[亮点词汇]
① be made in 制造于
② enjoy oneself 过得快活，感到愉快
[高分句型]
① My sister bought a pair of cotton jeans, which was blue. (which引导非限定性定语从句)
② We were tired but we felt happy because we all enjoyed ourselves very much. (because引导原因状语从句)
6．例文
The Story Behind My Favorite Gift
My favorite gift is a book named The Old Man and the Sea. I have had this book for half a year.
When I received the book on my eleventh birthday, I was a little surprised. I was happy, too. I didn’t pass the exam a few days ago. I felt very upset those days. My mother wanted to encourage me to be strong and not to give up so she bought me that book. I finished reading it the next day. I learned a lot from the book and understood the love my mother gave me.
Since then, I never give up. I think it is the best gift I have ever received.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”；
③提示：围绕“礼物背后的故事”进行写作，注意条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己最喜欢的礼物是什么以及拥有它多久了；
第二步，讲述这个礼物背后的故事；
第三步，讲述这个礼物的特殊意义。
[亮点词汇]
①encourage sb. (not) to do sth.鼓励某人（不要）做某事
②give up放弃
③finish doing sth.完成做某事
[高分句型]
①When I received the book on my eleventh birthday, I was a little surprised.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②I think it is the best gift I have ever received.（省略that的宾语从句；省略关系代词的定语从句）
7．例文
Dear Uncle Bob,
I’m so glad to hear from you about visiting Beijing. Here’s the trip plan.
We’ll meet at the airport at 2 p.m. on July 5th. We can go to the hotel directly to have a rest as I’ve already booked the rooms. The next day we’ll watch the flag-raising ceremony at Tian’anmen Square early in the morning. It must be amazing! On the third day, we’ll visit the Great Wall. What about the Great Wall It is worth visiting and you’ll be impressed. On the fourth day, we’ll visit the the Palace Museum. It is interesting for me to enjoy the old buildings. How wonderful they are. At last, we’ll have the delicious food, Beijing roast duck. And buy some presents for our friends. Honestly, I am getting excited about the trip.
Look forward to meeting all of you in Beijing.
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为一般将来时；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己的旅行安排，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题（已给出）；
第二步，根据提示内容详细介绍自己的旅行安排；
第三步，表达希望。
[亮点词汇]
①have a rest休息
②the flag-raising ceremony升旗仪式
③be worth doing值得做某事
④look forward to期待
[高分句型]
We can go to the hotel directly to have a rest as I’ve already booked the rooms. (as引导的原因状语从句)
8．例文
Dear friends,
Welcome to my hometown—Qiqihar! My hometown is a beautiful and quiet city. This is a city which has a very long history. It is worth traveling there. It lies in the north of China. The air is fresh and the water is clean. People are very kind and friendly here. There are many places of interest in our city, such as Zhalong Nature Reserve and Longsha Park. Longsha Park is my favorite place. You will enjoy yourselves there. Over the past years, great changes have taken place in my hometown. More roads, hospitals and tall buildings were built. People’s lives have improved a lot. It is becoming more and more beautiful. We are all trying our best to make it better and better.
Welcome to my hometown. I’m sure you’ll have a lot of fun here!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：根据要点提示写作，可适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点题，要介绍的是家乡齐齐哈尔；
第二步，详细介绍齐齐哈尔的具体位置、人民、环境、景点等；
第三步，收尾，欢迎人们来齐齐哈尔。
[亮点词汇]
①in the north of在……北部
②places of interest名胜古迹
③such as例如
[高分句型]
①This is a city which has a very long history. It is worth traveling there.（定语从句）
②There are many places of interest in our city, such as Zhalong Nature Reserve and Longsha Park.（there be句型）
9．例文
Last weekend, I paid a visit to the Great Wall with my family.
Climbing up the steps, I felt the history breathing in every brick. The view from the top was wonderful, making me proud of our country’s ancient achievements. During the trip, we got lost in the path. It was scary at first, but we worked together to find our way out. This taught me that when we face challenges, a team can turn difficulties into valuable lessons. The Great Wall not only increased my love for our country but also inspired me to make an effort to protect it.
As a young person, I realize my role in building our spiritual home and making our economy stronger. I’ll continue to share my experiences and encourage others to explore more of our beautiful country.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍自己去的景点。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，描述旅行经过和遇到的问题。
第三步，书写结语，描述影响和启发。
[亮点词汇]
①wonderful美妙的
②valuable有价值的
③encourage鼓励
[高分句型]
①This taught me that when we face challenges, a team can turn difficulties into valuable lessons. （宾语从句）
②The Great Wall not only increased my love for our country but also inspired me to make an effort to protect it.（not only...but also...句型）
10．例文
Beautiful things in Zibo
I’m Li Hua, proudly from Zibo, a city famous for its charm and rich heritage. Among the beautiful things, ceramics stand out prominently. Crafted from fine clay and fired to perfection, these delicate art pieces show the city’s centuries old tradition of pottery making. They come in different designs.
Another local delight is our famous barbecue. Skilled chefs grill meats and vegetables over hot coals, equipped them with a unique smoky flavor that can only be found in Zibo. These gatherings not only satisfy our taste buds but also embody the warmth of our hometown.
In Zibo, we value these treasures, because they are not just products but a reflection of our culture, history, and pride.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包括三个方面的内容要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第三人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，整体介绍家乡之美；
第二步，介绍本地特色产品：陶瓷和烧烤，具体包括由什么制成，为什么是淄博特色；
第三步，最后表达对于本地特色的喜爱以及对家乡的自豪。
[亮点词汇]
①equip...with...配备
②embody the warmth of体现……的温暖
③a reflection of……的反映
[高分句型]
①These gatherings not only satisfy our taste buds but also embody the warmth of our hometown.（not only...but also句型）
②In Zibo, we value these treasures, because they are not just products but a reflection of our culture, history, and pride.（原因状语从句）
11．例文
My summer holiday trip
My family and I went on vacation this summer. I went to Beijing with my parents by plane on August 1st. Beijing is really a big city. We were very tired when we got there, so the first day we rested in the hotel. On the second day, we visited many places, such as the Forbidden City, the Great Wall, the Beijing Museum and so on. We also tasted Beijing roast duck. It’s more delicious than we thought. We also bought a lot of presents in Beijing. We stayed in Beijing for seven days in total. Although we were very tired these days, we were very happy. If there is a chance in the future, I would like to travel to Beijing again. I hope my dream will come true.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容，适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：引出话题，介绍旅行的时间、地点、人物、交通方式等；
第二步：具体阐述旅行的活动内容；
第三步：表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①such as比如
②come ture实现
③and so on等等
[高分句型]
①If there is a chance in the future, I would like to travel to Beijing again.（if引导的条件状语从句）
②I hope my dream will come true.（省略that的宾语从句）
12．例文
Dear Sam,
I’m writing to express my interest in volunteering for the 2024 Paris Olympic Games.
I’m Li Hua. I’m from China. I’m 15 years old. I study at Yucai Middle school. I’m good at English, especially spoken English, which will be useful to communicate with the people all over the world. I like sports. I know about the Olympic Games. I hope to take part in the Olympic Games one day. I am an outgoing girl and I am ready to help others. So I can get on well with others.
I’m sure that I’ll be a good volunteer. I hope you give me the chance. I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，写一封自荐信；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的提示要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图（文章已给出）；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，介绍一下个人信息，为什么想当志愿者以及你能为比赛做些什么。
第三步，书信结尾。表达你希望Sam给你这个机会，期待他的答复。
[亮点词汇]
①be from来自……
②be good at擅长
③ take part in参加
④be ready to help others乐于助人
⑤get on well with与……相处融洽，与……相处得好
[高分句型]
①I’m good at English, especially spoken English, which will be useful to communicate with the people all over the world.（定语从句）
② I’m sure that I’ll be a good volunteer.（宾语从句）
13．例文
An unforgettable experience
Last summer vacation, my friend invited me to visit Xi’an. It’s a beautiful city. It lies in the center of Shaanxi Province. With a history of more than 6,000 years, there are many places of interest in Xi’an.
I enjoyed the beautiful scenery along the way. After arriving in Xi’an, I first visited the Terracotta Army and Bell Tower. How amazing they were! At noon, I ate a lot of delicious food in Xi’an Food Street, such as Liangpi and Roujiamo. In the afternoon, I went to the shopping street to buy gifts for my parents.
What a happy day! Although I was tired, I had a good time.
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍西安的位置和历史；
第二步，介绍自己参观的风景名胜以及尝试的食物等；
第三步，最后表达感受。
[亮点词汇]
① such as比如
② have a good time玩得开心
[高分句型]
Although I was tired, I had a good time.（让步状语从句）
14．例文
Last summer vacation I visited the Great Wall with my parents. We went there by train.
We got to the foot of the Great Wall at nine in the morning. I had never seen so long a wall. We stepped on the wall and walked along it. It’s about nine to ten meters wide. Because it’s built on the top of the mountains, it’s so amazing. Standing on the wall, I wondered how the ancient people built such a great project. From the guide I knew that the Great Wall has a history of over 2,000 years and most of the Great Wall that remains now was built in the Ming Dynasty. We enjoyed the beautiful views and took many photos there.
We really had fun on the Great Wall. I hope to visit it again next time.
【解析】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
提示：写作要点已给出，考生应根据提示要点进行书面表达，不要遗漏要点。应能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。引出“印象最深刻的一次旅游经历”这一话题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从什么时候与什么人如何去了什么地方、做了哪些事、该地方有了哪些了解以及感想等方面来介绍这次旅游经历的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语。表达再次来旅游的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①get to the foot of到了……脚下
②enjoy the beautiful views欣赏美丽的景色
③take photos拍照片
④have fun玩得高兴
[高分句型]
①Standing on the wall, I wondered how the ancient people built such a great project.（现在分词作状语；how引导的宾语从句从句）
②Because it’s built on the top of the mountains, it’s so amazing.（Because引导的原因状语从句）
15．例文
As one of the lifestyle for the modern humans , travelling is loved by more and more people. Traveling can not only broaden our horizon, but also relax us physically and mentally.
Last summer holiday, I took a trip to Yunnan with my family. Yunnan is in the southwestern part of our country. It’s a good place with beautiful mountains, clean rivers and kind people. Trees and flowers could be seen everywhere. The fruits there were very fresh. We stayed there for about one week. We went to Kunming, Dali and the Old Town of Lijiang. We enjoyed the local food. We also went to climb the mountains and took many photos. We all had a good time. Although it was a bit tiring, I still think it was the most unforgettable experience.
When we travel somewhere, we should pay attention to the local weather. We also need to bring some common medicines.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据所给提示要点完成写作，不能遗漏信息，适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，介绍旅行的好处；
第二步，具体介绍自己的一次旅行经历；
第三步，提出关于旅行的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①not only…but also…不仅……而且……
②took photos照相
③had a good time玩得高兴
④pay attention to注意
[高分句型]
①Trees and flowers could be seen everywhere.(情态动词的被动语态)
②Although it was a bit tiring, I still think it was the most unforgettable experience.(让步状语从句；宾语从句)
③When we travel somewhere, we should pay attention to the local weather.(时间状语从句)
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