七下Unit 7 A day to remember 主题作文指导(共14张PPT)

(共14张PPT)
本单元话题为“学校旅行”
Unit 7　　A Day to Remember
主题作文指导
主要描述旅行期间所发生事情的经过和自己的感受。
My School Trip
Revision
Sam’s
diary
Time
process
feeling
Friday, 30 May
a school trip to a farm
in the morning:
in the afternoon:
in the evening:
explored; learnt; pick;
cut; watered;
learnt; cooked; ...
tiring; fun; enjoyed; a day to remember
When did you go
Where did you go
What did you do/see
What did you learn
How did you feel
Let’s discuss about your last trip!
Free talk
When did you go
Where did you go
What did you do/see
What did you learn
How did you feel
My school trip was really a day to remember!
How about your school trip
Make notes about your last school trip.
2a
My School Trip
1. Where did you go
.
.2. What did you do / see
.
.
3. How did you feel
.
4. What did you learn
.
.
Pre-writing
Write a diary entry about the school trip. Use your notes in 2a and theexpressions to help you.
2b
I had a(n) amazing / good / bad / terrible day today.
Our class went on a school trip to ...
What a day!
Friday, 6 June
I had a really good day today. Our class went on a school trip to an art museum...
人称：
第一人称
时态：
一般过去时
布局：
三段式
（总分总结构）
Beginning开头
Body 正文
Ending 结尾
Beginning 开头
开篇点题
When and Where did you go
eg.
We went on a school trip to a science museum last weekend.
Para 1（第1段）
We went on a school trip to a farm last Sunday.
How did you like it
It was tiring
but great fun.
It was a really tiring but interesting tip.
Body 正文
Para 2（第2段）
What did you do/see ？
(你做了/看见了什么？)
What did you learn？
(你学到了什么？)
Places Activities 活动
farm
picked strawberries
fed chickens
milked cows
watered the plants
cut branches and leaves
learned a lot about farming
science museum
saw many interesting things
talked with robots
took some photos
learned some information about space station
park
went boating
had a picnic
flew kites
rode bikes
drew some pictures
Body 正文
Activities 活动
eg.
In the morning, we explored the farm .
First, we picked some strawberries.
Para 2（第2段）
In the afternoon, the farmer taught us how to cut branches and leaves.
Finally, we watered the plants.
按时间顺序来描述
First
（首先）
Then
（然后）
Next（接下来）
After that
（在那之后）
Finally （最后）
可用linking words（连接词）来表顺序
Ending 结尾
Conclusion（总结）
eg.
We learned a lot and had a great time on the farm.
I will never forget this trip because it made me think of the saying“ every grain comes from hard work”.
　

Para 3（第3段）
a day to remember .
talk about feeling（感受）
It was really
We were tired but happy.
请根据下面的提示内容,以“Our school trip”为题写一篇英语短文,描述你们上周六去农场郊游时的经历。
写作要点:1. What did you do/see
2. What did you learn
3. How did you feel？
写作练兵
要求:1.词数70左右;
2.文中不能出现真实的人名、校名。
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Last Saturday we went on a school trip to a farm.It was tiring but great fun.
范文一
In the morning, we milked cows and fed chickens. It seemd easy, but it took time to get it right.we also went to the field to pick some fresh vegetables.It was tiring, but I enjoy working with my hands.
In the afternoon,
we watered the plants on the farm. We talked with the farmer and he told us something about his farm, so I learned a lot about farming.
We were tired but happy. It was really a day to remember.
Last Sunday, we went on a school trip to a farm . It was tiring but great fun!
范文二
In the morning, we met at the school gate and took a bus to the farm. It took us two hours to get there . First , we picked some strawberries in the large tents . They were fresh and delicious . Then, we fed chickens and sheep . They were cute and friendly . After that, we milked the cows. Finally, we took a lot of beautiful photos .I learned a lot about farming from the farmer.
All in all , we had a good time. It was really a day to remember.