2025届高考英语应用文写作三部曲学案(无答案)

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高考英语应用文写作三部曲
高考书面表达要想拿高分,必须做到三个要求——内容全面完整,语言准确高级,字迹工整清晰。
内容全面完整:即要符合题目要求,要求写什么就写什么,不要来搞笑,可以适当增添细节,使行文连贯即可,字数要足够。
语言准确高级:陈述不如倒装妙,分词结构不能少;主动不如被动巧,从句结构必须好,句子连贯少不了。
字迹工整清晰:尽量避免“鸡哈”式的书写,以及“蝌蚪文”,字迹清晰工整就可以,当然,一手漂亮的字体肯定会博人眼球,会留给改卷老师很好的第一印象,分自然不会低。
假定你是李华,你们班级的节目“哈姆雷特(Hamlet)”将参加下个月学校“英语文化节”话剧drama比赛, 你给度假中的外教Mr. Hurst写一封电子邮件,并附上节目录像,请他给予你相关的指导。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好。
Dear Mr. Hurst,
Yours
Li Hua
第一步:一审(审题)
审体裁:书信格式(电子邮件)
审人称:第一、二人称
审时态:(现在时、过去时):一般现在时、将来时
审结构(段落):Para. 1 开头(两个句子);Para. 2 正文(5个句子);
Para. 3 结尾(2个句子)
第二步:二列(列提纲/要点,适当增加细节)
Para. 1 开头:
你们班级的节目“哈姆雷特(Hamlet)”将参加下个月学校“英语文化节”话剧drama比赛。
Our performance Hamlet will take part in the Drama Competition in our school’s English Cultural Festival next month.
写信给外教,并附上节目录像,请他给予你相关的指导(建议)
I’m writing to you. I hope that you can give us some advice.
Para. 2 正文:
为什么要他指导?
You know it is my first time to take part in the English Drama Competition.
希望他指导的内容
I am not sure whether the language, clothing, light and sound effect are good enough. I am facing with the problems. I am eager to get your help. Would you please give me some advice about them
希望得到他的指导,相信指导后的成果同时说明附上的视频。
I sincerely hope that you can give me some guidance. I have the confidence that we can improve our performance with your advice. Please find the video on the attachment.
Para. 3 结尾:结束语(谢意,意愿)
Thank you for your kindness and looking forward to your reply.
第三步:三连、定(连句成篇并定型,注意:亮点呈现,句式升华)
Para. 1 Our performance Hamlet will take part in the Drama Competition in our school’s English Cultural Festival next month. I’m writing to you. I hope that you can give us some advice.
In order to tell you that our performance Hamlet will take part in the Drama Competition in our school’s English Cultural Festival next month,I’m writing to you. I hope that you can give us some advice.
Para. 2 You know it is my first time to take part in the English Drama Competition. I am not sure whether the language, clothing, light and sound effect are good enough. I am facing with the problems. I am eager to get your help. Would you please give me some advice about them I sincerely hope that you can give me some guidance. I have the confidence that we can improve our performance with your advice. Please find the video on the attachment.
As you know, it is my first time to take part in the English Drama Competition. I am not sure whether the language, clothing, light and sound effect are good enough. I am facing with the problems. I am eager to get your help. Would you please give me some advice about them Finally, I sincerely hope that you can give me some guidance. I have the confidence that we can improve our performance with your advice. Please find the video on the attachment.
Para. 3 Thank you for your kindness and looking forward to your reply.
定(定稿)
Dear Mr Hurst,
In order to tell you that our performance Hamlet will take part in the Drama Competition in our school’s English Cultural Festival next month, I’m writing to you. I hope that you can give us some advice.
As you know, it is the English Drama Competition that is my first time to take part in. I am not sure whether the language, clothing, light and sound effect are suitable. Faced with the problems, I am eager to get your help. Would you please give me some advice about them Finally, I sincerely hope that you can give me some guidance. I have the confidence that we can improve our performance with your advice. Please find the video on the attachment.
Thank you for your kindness and looking forward to your reply.
注意:全面检查。
文章完成后,需要认真检查与修改,力求减少失误。具体如下:
1.要点是否有遗漏。
2.时态和语态是否恰当。
3.拼写是否有误。
4.文章是否连贯。
5.词数是符合要求等。
6.一篇好的文章必须书写工整,卷面整洁。作文如同一件产品,只有包装好才能卖个好价钱,只有卷面好才能得高分。
近几年的高考书面表达写作大都是提纲式书信(电子邮件),这类作文特点是要点明确,范围具体,因此提纲中所列举的要点要全部涉及,一个也不能遗漏。这类作文主要考查的内容有:说明主题、分析原因或解释做法;提纲作文的另一特点是思维空间灵活、开放。因此为了提高文章档次,考生应在保证内容要点齐全的同时进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥。
应用文写作核心模式:R A P= Reason+ Action+ Polite
Reason – Introduce why you are writing. 背景、目的及主旨
Action – Tell them what you need them to do. 内容、意义及影响
Polite close – Thank them and say goodbye. 礼貌性结尾
掌握12种常见的应用文书写模板所用的必备短语和套用格式很有必要。
发言稿/演讲稿(主要用来交流思想、表达感情、发表看法;也可用来介绍自己的学习情况和经验等。写发言稿分三步走:自我介绍并表明发言稿的主题 发言稿的具体内容 进行总结并提出期望。)
发言稿模板:
Boys and girls/Ladies and gentlemen,
It’s a great honor for me to stand here and give my speech.(表示荣幸)My name is .(自我介绍)The topic of my speech is .(提出演讲主题)
To begin with, many people suggest that .(话题或现象列举)Secondly, . Thirdly, .
What I want to stress is that .(重申主题).
Thank you for your listening/Thank you.
写发言稿必备短语:
1. be qualified for 胜任
2.study efficiently高效地学习
get actively involved in class 上课积极参与
effective learning methods有效的学习方法
enjoy a colorful life 享受丰富多彩的生活
take responsibility to do sth.负责做某事
get on /along with sb. 与某人相处融洽
on behalf of our school代表我们学校
develop/form/ acquire a good habit of... 养成......的好习惯
express one’s warm welcome to sb.向某人表示热烈的欢迎
套用格式:
It is my great honor to have a chance to speak here.
Welcome to the English speech competition/lecture.
It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere.
I believe that with your great efforts, you will enjoy a colorful life here.
I hope what is mentioned above might be helpful to you.
Exx:(活学活用)
假定你是星光中学的高中毕业生李华,母校将为高一新生举办主题为“What to learn in senior high school ”的英语沙龙活动,特邀你结合自身经历谈谈自己的体会。请根据以下提示准备一份发言稿。
学会学习:方法、习惯等; 2. 学会做人:真诚、友善; 3. 学会其他:考生自拟。
注意:1. 词数100左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Good morning, everyone! It is my honor to be here to share with my opinions on what to learn in senior high school.
In the coming three years, our school life will be challenging. Firstly, we should learn efficiently. Developing a good habit is also of importance. It really benefited me a lot to preview lessons, get actively involved, and review what have been taught after class. In addition, we should learn how to get along well with others.At school, I respected teachers and was friendly with classmates. It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere. Finally, we are supposed to take part in sports and outdoor activities frequently. They were really helpful to build up my body and enrich my school life.
With your great efforts, I am sure that you will enjoy a colorful life here.
Thank you!
假定你是李华,下周有英国学生访问你校,你将作为学生代表致欢迎辞。请为此写一篇发言稿,内容包括:
表示欢迎;
介绍活动安排;
表达祝愿。
注意:1.词数8o左右; 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。Distinguished guests:
Distinguished guests:
On behalf of our school, I would like to convey my sincere welcome for your visiting.We have arranged various activities during your visit here.
At first, it is of _____1______(significant) to fully understand the school. As _____2_____(schedule), all of you will visit the museum, ___3___ contains the splendid history of our school. Furthermore, our classes are worthy of being attended, for you can appreciate the differences between Chinese and western teaching methods. After that, it is at canteen ____4__ you can have a special lunch with our students.
As mentioned above, I ______5______(extreme) expect your coming. May you have an _____6_______ experience.
(2024年全国高考甲卷)
英语课要求做课堂展示,请你根据所给图片,以 Development of Transport in China为题写一篇发言稿。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.题目和首句已为你写好。
Development of Transport in China
From the vehicle of horses to today’s convenient transport, Chinese transport has seen enormous development. Chinese transport has undergone remarkable transformations, giving the Chinese people access to different ways of travelling.
Firstly, _____(share) bicycles have emerged as a symbol ___ urban mobility, offering an ________(afford) and green alternative for short trips. Secondly, the introduction of high- speed trains has _____________(dramatic) shortened travel times, making intercity travel faster and more comfortable. Lastly, the proliferation of new energy vehicles underscores China’s dedication to environmental sustainability, reducing reliance on fossil fuels. These developments illustrate China’s journey towards a modern and efficient transportation network that balances convenience with environmental responsibility.
In short, China’s transport system is embracing innovation and eco-friendliness.
Thank you for listening!
你校英语社团将举办以“人工智能(AI)与生活”为主题的演讲比赛。请你写一篇演讲稿 参赛,内容包括:
AI 带来的便利和挑战; 2. 你的看法。
Dear teachers and fellow students,
I am honored to share my thoughts on artificial intelligence(AI).
To begin with, AI has brought revolutionary changes to our lives. For example, AI helps doctors detect diseases earlier, saving lives. In addition, personalized learning systems analyze students’ weaknesses and provide suitable exercises. Moreover, self-driving cars will reduce the number of traffic accidents by reacting faster.
However, AI also raises concerns. It’s feared that AI may replace repetitive jobs, leading to unemployment. Additionally, the misuse of personal data can threaten privacy.
In my opinion, governments should establish technological principles to guide AI’s development. Let’s embrace AI with both enthusiasm and caution. Thank you!
邀请信
邀请信是邀请亲朋好友或知名人士、专家等参加某项活动时所发的信件。写邀请信要简洁明了,通常要写清楚以下几个方面:1. 邀请对方参加的活动内容、时间和地点; 2. 邀请对方参加的原因; 3. 期待对方接受邀请。
邀请信模板:
Dear ,
I’m writing to invite you to .(发出邀请)
There are some points you may want to know about . (活动主题)During ________, we will have lots of activities you are interested in .(活动的具体内容)First, .(活动介绍一)Second, .(活动介绍二)
I believe that you will be very interested in them. I really hope you can come/I’m looking forward to ________.(提出希望)
Yours
Li Hua
必备短语:
1. invite sb. to do sth. 2. in order to do sth.
3.hold a party 4. in the Meeting Hall
take place 6. take part in/participate in/ compete in
make progress 8. look forward to
9.accept one’s invitation 10. long for your coming
套用格式: 1. I’m writing to invite you to join us in the Talent Show.
2.We are going to hold a party for Tom’s birthday.
We sincerely hope that you could come.
I’d appreciate it if you could come.
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Exx:(活学活用) 假定你是李华,当前在伦敦的孔子学院(Confucius Institute)做志愿者。 你的英国朋友Henry 对孔子特别感兴趣,请你写封邮件邀请他参观孔子学院,要点如下:1. 简述孔子及中国文化在世界上的影响;
告知参观时间:11月6日(本周六)上午8点;
介绍参加的活动:汉语班,剪纸,书法。
Dear Henry,
I am glad to know that you are keen on Confucius and the Chinese culture. Confucius, whose ideas have a great impact on the Chinese culture, is considered the greatest ancient educator. As an increasing number of foreigners want to learn about the Chinese culture, more Confucius Institutes have been set up in many foreign countries.
Since I am a volunteer working in the Confucius Institute in London, I’d like to invite you to visit it at 8:00 am on Saturday, November 6.
During the visit, we can attend some Chinese classes, which will be followed by some activities such as practising paper-cutting and Chinese calligraphy.
I sincerely hope that you could come.Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
假定你是李华,计划组织一次郊游,请给你的英国朋友Chris写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括:
参加者;
时间、地点;
活动: 登山、野餐等。
注意: 1.词数80左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Chris,
I am _____1_____(sincere) inviting you to join us to go for an outing this weekend. Aiming ____2____(enhance) our relation and build up our bodies, the trip involves climbing mountains and a picnic.
As is scheduled, the activity will take place at 8: 00 am on Saturday at the gate of our school and we hope all the students in our class will take an active ______3_____ in it. Climbing is an important part of the trip. While pushing our ____4_____(strong) to the limit,we are also _____5____(呼吸)fresh air and _____6_____(欣赏) the gorgeous ______7____(风景) on the way.
Hope you won't miss the joyful activity. Your ______8_____(attend) is greatly expected.
Yours
Li Hua
(2022年全国新高考英语)假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华,请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括:
1、节目介绍;
2、访谈的时间和话题。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Caroline,
I am Li Hua, a student in charge of the program “talk and talk” launched in the broadcasting station of our school. I am writing to invite you to an interview in this program.
___you know, “talk and talk”, ______(design) to expose students to authentic English environment, has been gaining tremendous currency, where knowledge concerning English and culture is displayed through interviews with foreign teachers, lectures, and so on. In response ___ students’ request, this Friday afternoon, specifically at 3:00 p.m., you _________ (invite) to be interviewed during the show to talk about the development of English idioms.
I am confident that your _______(involve) will add much spice to the show. Looking forward to your earliest reply.
Yours sincerely
Li hua
求职信
求职信或申请信是写信人就某一职位向收信人提出请求的信件。信件内容包括三个方面:1.提出申请(阐述得知招聘信息的来源和自己申请的职位);2.申请理由(个人信息和能力);3.表示感谢(请求给予面试机会并表示感谢)。
求职信模板:
Dear ,
I write this letter to apply for the position that you advertised in of .(信息来源)
____________________(申请理由:个人信息和能力)Please contact me at any time at .(提供个人联系方式)
Thank you for considering my application, and I’m looking forward to meeting you.(结束语,表达感谢和期望)
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
必备短语:
apply for a chance to work as
like, be fond of, be keen on, be crazy about, have a preference for
take/show interest in, be interested in
be equal to, be competent/qualified /fit/suitable for
master, have a good command of, be equipped with the skills of
be good at doing sth, be able to do sth., have the ability to do sth., be capable of doing sth.
have some basic knowledge of, have a wide range of knowledge of
have/show a talent for, be gifted in
sign up for , enter for, participate in, take part in
meet one’s requirements
套用句式
I am writing to apply for a chance to work as a volunteer.
I sincerely hope that my application will be taken into consideration.
I would be appreciate it if I am chosen, and I am convinced thatI can perfectly live up to your expectations.
I would be more than grateful if my application could be favorably considered.
If I am luckily chosen, I will spare no effort to shoulder the responsibility and contribute my efforts.
Exx:(活学活用)
假设你叫李华,听闻《中国日报》(China Daily)为了宣传中国传统文化,正在招募志愿者向海外介绍中国著名历史文化景点.你很想参加本次宣传活动,请你就此给报社写一封信,内容包括:
1. 写信目的;
2. 个人优势;
3. 希望获准.
注意:
词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm Li Hua, a high school student.I'm so excited to hear that China Daily is in need of some volunteers to introduce Chinese culture overseas that I can't wait to apply for the position, convinced that my efforts will contribute to its success.(写信目的)
First and foremost,I consider it my responsibility to make Chinese historical and cultural attractions well known to the whole world and I'd like to be devoted to the career.In addition, I have been to numerous famous scenic spots, and developed an outgoing and open﹣minded personality, which makes it easy for me to get along well with others. Last but not least, it is worth mentioning that I got 7 points in IELTS early this year, which guaranteed my fluent expressing and effective communication with foreigners.So, I firmly believe that I'm the very person you're looking for.(个人优势)
Give me a chance and I'll try my best!I would appreciate it if you could take my application into careful consideration and reply to me at your earliest convenience.(希望获准)
Yours,
Li Hua
咨询信
咨询信的主要目的是寻求所需的信息或帮助。信件主要分为三部分:1.自我介绍(根据实际情况而定)、说明写信意图/目的;2. 具体询问事宜; 3. 表示感谢、期盼回复。
咨询信模板:
Dear ,
I am .(自我介绍)I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding .(要询问的内容)
First of all, what are Secondly, when will Thirdly, is (要咨询的问题罗列)
I would also like to inquire . Could you be so kind to send me some relevant booklets?
Thank you for your kindness, and your prompt attention to this letter will be highly appreciated.(表示感谢)
Yours sincerely,
________
必备短语:
come across无意中看到/发现
be interested in
enquire about sth. 咨询某事
in the hope of/that
provide sb. with sth.
inform sb. of sth.
further details
for further information concerning sth.
prompt/immediate reply
look forward to a favorable reply at your earliest convenience
套用句式
I happened to come across your advertisement in the paper/on a web page/on your website.
Quite interested in the language course, I am writing to enquire about further details.
I wonder whether/if it is convenient for you to inform me when and where the course will be given.
I would appreciate it if you could offer more details I specially need to pay attention to.
I am looking forward to your prompt/immediate /early reply.
活学活用: 假设你是李华, 你英国朋友Tim邀请你参加他们学校组织的暑假夏令营。你想参加,现在就此事向他咨询该活动的相关事宜。请你根据以下提示给他写封信。
感谢他的邀请;
询问夏令营的相关事宜(具体日程安排,需要携带的物品.......);
希望尽快得到回信。
注意:
词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.
Hi Tim,
Thank you so much for inviting me to take part in the summer camp organized by your school in the approaching summer holiday. Quite interested, I am writing to enquire about further details.
Above all, I wonder if it is convenient for you to inform me of the specific schedule. Besides, this being my first experience to participate in such an activity, would you be kind enough to offer any suggestions on what items I specially need to take with me
I am really excited and looking forward to it. I would appreciate it if you could give me a reply at your earliest convenience.
Yours,
Li Hua
(2021全国·历年真题)假定你是李华。你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会并在英文网站展示。请你写一封邮件给外国朋友Chris,向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人。邮件内容包括:
1.阐明写信事由;
2.征求建议;
3.表示感谢。
Dear Chris,
I hope this email finds you well. My school is planning a themed class to introduce Chinese traditional culture, which will be showcased on our English website. As a foreign friend who has experienced Chinese culture firsthand, your perspective would be invaluable.
Could you share which aspects of Chinese traditional culture you find most fascinating For example, is it calligraphy, traditional festivals like the Spring Festival, or perhaps something else Your suggestions will help us present the culture in a way that truly resonates with international audiences.
Thank you so much for your time and insights. I look forward to hearing your thoughts!
Best regards,
Li Hua
五.求助信/请求信
求助信指当一个人遇到问题无法解决时向别人求助或请别人代劳最近无法完成的事情的一种书信,通常包括求助与请求两种形式。其内容一般为:直言目的(求助/请求)---描述困难---希望得到帮助并表示感激---(联系方式)。
求助信模板:
Dear ,
I am .(自我介绍)I am writing to tell you about .(要求助的内容). And I also want you to do me a favor.
First of all, . Secondly, . Finally, .(罗列要求助的原因)
I would also like to .(希望对方如何帮助自己)Thank you for your kindness, and looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
________
必备短语:
ask sb. a favor/ask for help
come across some problems
be faced with difficulties
have difficulty/ trouble in doing sth.
plan to do sth.
make preparations for sth.
offer sb. a hand
offer some constructive guidance
be grateful to sb. for sth.
套用句式
I’m writing to tell you something about my plan for... and I also want you to do me a favor.
Unfortunately, I find it really difficult to...
Faced with the problems mentioned above, I am eager for your help, and would you please give me some advice on...
I would be very grateful if you could...
Thanks for your kind consideration and I look forward to receiving your earliest reply.
活学活用: (2020年全国3卷)假定你是李华,你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教Miss Evans写封邮件,请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括:1. 剧情简介;2. 指导内容;3. 商定时间地点 。
注意:1. 词数 100 左右; 2. 结束语已为你写好。
Dear Miss Evans,
I am Li Hua, and I'm writing to ask if you could help me and my classmates in changing our text into a short play.
Our play will be based on the text "Horse". The text tells a story of a king and an artist. In the story, the king asked the artist to draw him a beautiful horse, misunderstood the artist, and in the end forgave him because of his effort. My classmates and I are struggling with the lines of the play, as we always stumble over pronunciation. We will have a rehearsal next Wednesday afternoon in the school hall, and I hope you can come and give us some advice.Please consider our request.
Thank you for your kindness, and I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
感谢信
感谢信是指在日常学习和生活中,当受惠者对给予自己帮助、支持、关心或其他受益时,给对方表示感谢的信件。信件包括以下内容:1. 写信目的(表示感谢);2. 感谢的原因(详细展开);3. 对方的作用和对自己的意义; 4. 再次表示感谢。
感谢信模板:
Dear ,
Thank you very much for/Thanks a lot for/Many thanks for /I’m writing to you about my gratitude for /I’m very grateful to you for .(开门见山地交代感谢原因)
But for/Without your help, .(从反面衬托对方的作用)/It’s very kind of you to .(从正面说明对方的作用)
I hope to have the opportunity to express my gratitude to you/repay your kindness. I will feel very honored and pleased if .(提出回报对方的方式).
Would you please let me know (希望对方给予回应)Thank you again for what you have done.(再次表达感谢)
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
必备短语:
take the opportunity
It was really kind of you...
return one’s kindness
with one’s help/with the help of
express one’s gratitude / thanks for
recall those beautiful days
I sincerely appreciate...
thanks to/because of your encouragement
be patient with sb./ have much patience with sb.
without your help, I wouldn’t...
套用格式:
My true gratitude is beyond any words/description.
We all thank you and are very grateful for what you did for us.
I am writing to express my thanks for your helping me improve my spoken English.
Thank you again for your wonderful hospitality and I am looking forward to seeing you soon.
I’d like to take this opportunity to express my great appreciation for your timely help and assistance.
活学活用:(2019年6月浙江卷)假定你是李华,经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 表示感谢;2. 回顾Alex对你的帮助;3. 临别祝愿。
注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Alex,
Learning that you’re leaving for the United States soon, I’m writing to express my sincere appreciation to you for your help.
It is under your professional guidance that I have made such unbelievable progress in English. It’s so nice of you to teach me plenty of practical learning skills. Whenever I encounter difficulties, you always cheer me up and help me out, which fuels my enthusiasm for English and inspires me to recover tremendous confidence. It’s indeed a pleasant surprise for me to even rank first in a recent English speech contest. No words are strong enough to convey how grateful I am.
My gratitude is extended to you again and wish you a pleasant journey home.
Yours,
Li Hua
推荐信
推荐信是写给个人或单位的求职或求学的信件,应对方的需求在内容上有不同的侧重点,一般包括以下内容:1. 推荐人与被推荐人的关系;2. 被推荐人的能力与经历;3. 被推荐人的个性特点。不论何种推荐信, 都是以第三人称展示个人技能或特点。
推荐信模板:
Dear ,
It is my great honor to recommend .(被推荐人)
He/She has a good command of .(被推荐人的能力、经历及个性特点)
I hope my recommendation will receive your favorable consideration.
Yours sincerely,
________
必备短语:
recommend to you my best friend
an all-around student
be qualified for /be equal to
have a good command of
sense of responsibility
be experienced in
work as a part-time assistant
posses a great team spirit
with a pleasant mature attitude
easy to get along with
套用格式:
I am writing this letter to strongly recommend to you my best friend Li Ming, a promising youth.
He is an all-around student with excellent grades in all subjects, which ensures his good performance for the position.
It is my belief that with his intelligence, diligence and rich experience, he has great potential for further development in the field of...
I genuinely hope that you could schedule an interview with him at your earliest convenience.
I recommend him to you without any reservation. Please do not hesitate to inquire further if I can be of help to you.
活学活用:假定你是李华,你校外籍老师Williams想暑假期间到中国各地旅游,需要聘请一位旅游爱好者做他的导游。请写封邮件推荐你的朋友李明给他。要点如下:
写信目的; 2. 介绍李明的优势;3,希望安排面试。
注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 文章的开头和结尾已为你写出; 3. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr Williams,
Informed that you want a companion as a guide to travel around China, I strongly recommend to you my best friend Li Ming.
Li Ming is a graduate majoring in English, which helps him communicate with you without difficulty. Moreover, he is enthusiastic about tourism and has worked as a part-time guide. It’s his relevant experiences that ensure him more qualified for this position. What makes him admirable is that under no circumstance will he fail to cope with emergencies.
Should you favor him with the position, I’m convinced that he would live up to your expectations. I hope you can schedule an interview with him at your earliest convenience. Please contact me at 18074609758.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Liz来信表示对中国烹饪很感兴趣。正好这学期你校要开设*Exploring Chinese cuisine"的线上课程,请你回信向他推荐此课程。内容包括:
开课时间; 2. 课程内容; 3.报名方式。
注意:1.词数80左右; 2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Liz,
The online course "Explore Chinese cuisine" is going to be included in the curriculum this semester in my school. Knowing you have a great ____1_____for Chinese cuisine, I can't wait to tell you the good news.
Chinese cuisine culture is extensive and profound, which can be roughly _____2___(divide) into eight regional cuisines. Our course will introduce the features of each regional type by _____3____(focus) on the cooking materials, cooking methods and seasoning. Here comes the highlight of the course. The school has invited famous _____4____(chef) in the town as the guest teachers. They will show us how to cook the most typical dishes of each regional type. Sounds amazing, doesn't it
To _____5_____(popular) Chinese food culture and enhance its influence, this online course is open up to the students worldwide. After logging on to the official website of my school and registering a new user, you will be asked to fill in an _____6____(apply) form.The course takes place every Saturday at 8 p. m. and you can't afford to miss it.
建议信
建议信是写给对方一些建议的信件。一般包括以下内容:1. (自我介绍)+写信原因+写信目的; 2.建议内容并适当拓展; 3.愿望+期待回复。
建议信模板:
Dear ,
I am very to know that .(写信的原因)I’m looking forward to .(表示期待)
I’m afraid that .(表述提出建议的原因)I’d like to suggest that . First ; then .(提出建议)I believe this kind of arrangement will ________________________________.(建议的作用)Moreover, if , it is necessary for you to .(补充建议)
Wish .(祝愿)
Yours sincerely,
________
必备短语:
knowing from your e﹣mail
upon knowing that
offer you some advice
shown as follows
In your last letter you mentioned that
a specialty related to
套用格式:
1.I would like to suggest that...
2.I strongly recommend that...
3.It is necessary for you to do...
4.You'd better do...
5.If I were you, I would do...
6.You are supposed to do...
7. You have the obligation to do...
8. It’s highly recommended that ...(万能模板句)
活学活用: 假如你是 李华,你收到worried来信,他在英语学习上遇到了一些困难,打算放弃,希望你能给他一些英语学习方面的建议。请给worried写一封回信,要求包含以下内容:
1,自信
2,学习方法:
<1> 记词组、句型、造句 <2> 阅读、 背诵
<3> 写日记
注意:
1.不要逐字翻译,可以适当增加细节以使行文连贯。
2.词数120左右 3. 参考词汇:
词组 set phrases
句型 sentence structures
背诵 recite
Dear Worried
I have received and read your letter. Having learned that you have some difficulty in English learning, I'm writing this letter to give you my suggestions.
As we all know, self-confidence plays a significant role in English learning, so the first suggestion is that you should have confidence in learning English well. Secondly, words, set phrases and sentence structures are the foundation of English. As a result , it is necessary for you to keep them in mind and frequently make sentences with them. Thirdly, I strongly recommend that you read and often recite some good passages, which can increase your vocabulary and improve your reading comprehension ability. Lastly, keeping a diary in English every day is a good way to improve your English writing skill .
I hope my suggestions are helpful for you to learn English and that you will be becoming better and better in it. I'm looking forward to your good news.
yours
Li Hua
(2023年全国新高考1卷)假定你是李华,外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组,让大家课后练习口语,你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件,内容包括;
1. 说明问题; 2. 提出建议。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右:
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3. I think it’s not a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken English training after class. The reasons are as follows.
To begin with, randomly pairing up students may lead to unbalanced language abilities within the groups. This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving little room for the other students to improve. Besides, students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they don’t get along with or have difficulty communicating with.
My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners. This way, everyone can feel more comfortable practicing and improving their spoken English together.
Thank you for considering my suggestion.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
九、约稿信
约稿信是向某作者发出为某杂志、报刊等撰写稿件的请求信件。包括四个部分:1.栏目介绍;2. 稿件内容;3. 稿件长度;交稿日期。
约稿信模板:
Dear ,
How’s everything going I’d like to invite you to write an article for .(某杂志/报刊)
(栏目介绍). I wonder if you could write something concerning___________(稿件内容) You can write anything relevant so long as it’s interesting and informative. 500 words would be fine. It would be better if we have your article before _______(交稿日期).
I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
________
必备短语:
carry articles written by... about...
anything relevant/concerned
the ...section in our newspaper
extend the deadline
interesting and informative
write an article with the theme of
intend to publish articles with the theme of
especially welcome articles from...about...
hand in one’s articles
some relevant details about the articles we need
套用格式:
I’d like to invite you to write an article for the English newspaper.
I wonder if you can write something about Chinese poems.
Your article is supposed to be written within300 words./ 300 words would be fine.
It would be better if we have your article before June 1.
We will extend the deadline if you consider the time is not enough.
活学活用: 假如你是李华,你在某杂志社做暑期工, 你负责的栏目“中国文化”拟刊登外国友人对于中国传统民族乐器的了解与看法。请给美国外教Allan写信约稿。要点如下:
栏目介绍; 2. 稿件内容; 3. 稿件长度:约500词;
交稿日期:6月29前
注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可适当增加细节,以时行文连贯。
Dear Allan,
How is everything going I am doing a part-time job in a magazine agency during my summer holiday. Thus, I’d like to invite you to write an article for magazine.
The Chinese Culture section in our magazine is very popular among our students. It carries articles written by foreign friends regarding the culture of Chinese traditional instruments. I wonder if you can write something about Chinese traditional instruments as well as your views on it. And we would especially welcome articles between the Chinese traditional instruments and foreign traditional instruments in your own perspective. You can write anything relevant so long as it’s interesting and informative. 500 words would be fine. It would be better if we have your article before June 29.
I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
十、道歉信
道歉信一般是向对方表示不能按时做某事、犯错或给他人带来不便的行为表示歉意的信件。信件通常包括以下内容:1. 写信目的(表示歉意); 2. 解释原因; 3.询问对方能否接受补救方案。
道歉信模板:
Dear ,
I’m so sorry to tell you that .Now, I am writing you this letter to show my deep regret.(就某事道歉)I do hope you can understand me and excuse me for ________(希望得到谅解)
I will be very grateful if you are kind to listen to my explanation. The reason for my delay/absence was/is that . Therefore, .(解释原因)
I wonder if ________.(询问对方能够接受补救方案)
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
活学活用: 假定你是李华,与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去敬老院,因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件,内容包括:
1.表示歉意;2.说明原因;3.另约时间。
注意:
1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Bob,
I feel ashamed that I cannot go to the nursing home with you. I am writing to express my deep apology to you.
To be honest, I am more than delighted to go to the nursing home with you. However, it is because of the novel coronavirus that I have got to break the appointment. So serious is the pandemic that everyone is supposed to do whatever he or she can to contain its spread. So I participate in the volunteer activities to support Wuhan. Therefore, I cannot keep my word. If possible, shall we go on with the appointment next Sunday If not, please tell me what time suits you best.
In short, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused.
Yours,
Li Hua
假定你是李华,外教Mr. Chuck发现你的作文完全由AI生成,判为不及格。请你给外教写一封邮件,内容包括:
(1)承认错误; (2)做出许诺; (3)补救措施。
Dear Mr. Chuck,
I’m sincerely sorry for submitting an AI-generated essay.
I realize it violated academic integrity and deeply regret my actions. This shortcut reflects poorly on my commitment to learning, and I take full responsibility. I promise this will never happen again. From now on, I will complete all assignments independently, focusing on developing genuine writing skills through careful practice and research. To make amends, I’ll rewrite the essay manually this weekend, consulting only approved materials. I welcome any additional tasks you might suggest to regain your trust.
Thank you for your understanding.
十一、回复信(告知信)
回复信(告知信)是一种用于传达重要信息或通知的正式信件,通常涉及事件变更或特定事项的更新。就对方来信中的要求给予回复的信件。介绍信旨在向收信人介绍相关对象,以帮助对方更好地了解。信件通常包括以下内容:1. 写信目的; 2. 回复要求; 3.希望对方能够接受。
回复询问信(告知信)模板:
Dear ,
Knowing that you (信中向了解的内容). Now, I am writing to inform you about what I know.
.(具体告知对方要知道的内容)
I hope that what I mentioned above will be of great use to your ....
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
活学活用:假如你是李华,你的留学生朋友Jim给你来信,很想了解你最近参加的园艺基地(Gardening Base)学习插花的社会实践活动。请你给他回信,内容包括:
1. 活动的时间和地点;2. 活动的目的和内容;3. 你的感受。
注意:
1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Jim,
Seeing that you are interested in my recent social practice, I am writing to share with you some relevant information.
The social practice, scheduled from 8:00 to 10:00 on the morning of last Friday, took place at the Gardening Base near our school. Aiming to expose us to an enjoyable and meaningful atmosphere, a variety of activities were held. Upon our arrival , we were initially instructed to appreciate flowers in bloom. Then came a lecture delivered by an expert about flower arrangement. Lastly, under the guide’s patient introduction, I managed to accomplish my flower arrangement.
In my eyes, not only does it broaden our minds, but it also helps us have a further understanding of labour.
Yours,
Li Hua
假定你是李华,上周你校组织了一次长城观光之旅,请给你的新西兰笔友 Jack 写封邮件, 分享此次经历,内容包括: 1. 旅行的过程; 2. 你的感受; 3. 发出邀请。 注意: 1. 写作词数应为 80 个左右; 2. 请按如下格式作答。
Dear Jack,
I hope this email finds you well! I’m writing to share an unforgettable trip to the Great Wall that my school organized last week. During the journey, we climbed the ancient steps, enjoyed breathtaking views, and learned about the fascinating history behind this magnificent structure. This experience was both enjoyable and educational. Not only did I feel proud of our cultural heritage, but I also realized the importance of teamwork when we helped each other during the trip. It was a perfect combination of physical challenge and cultural exploration.
I sincerely invite you to visit China and explore the Great Wall yourself. I’m sure you’ll be amazed by its beauty and historical significance.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
介绍信(六件套)介绍信旨在向收信人介绍相关对象,以帮助对方更好地了解。
首段:背景介绍+写作目的
主体:内容介绍+补充细节
尾段:进行总结+提升价值
(2024年全国新高考1卷)假定你是李华,上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历,内容包括:
(1)你完成的作品;
(2)你的感想。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
I'm writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday.
We were tasked with drawing or painting something that impressed us most. Inspired by the fantastic scenery , I decided to create a watercolor painting of the small bridge over the park's pond, surrounded by blooming flowers .
The entire experience was incredibly refreshing. Being surrounded by nature not only sparked my creativity but also offered a much-needed break from the usual hustle and bustle of school life, I felt a deep sense of peace as I painted.
In a word, it was not just an art class, it was a moment of connection with nature that l truly cherished.
Yours.
Li Hua
假设你是李华,你的英国朋友 Tony 对“中国红”一词很感兴趣,想了解“中国红”在中国人日常生活中的体现,请你写一封回信帮助他了解
It’s great to receive your letter. I'm writing to tell you how Chinese people use Chinese red in their daily life.
As we all know, Chinese red, which is considered as the symbolic color of China, is extremely popular with Chinese people. lt usually represents happiness and we believe that it can bring us good luck. Therefore, people in our country attach great importance to Chinese red that they use many red objects in some important events. For instance, in a wedding, you can see that the bride(新娘)is in a red wedding dress and the wedding room is decorated with red. What’s more, the houses are also filled with red paper cuttings, lanterns and Chinese Knots during the Spring Festival. Furthermore,children will get red pockets for best wishes as well. Obviously, Chinese red plays a significant role and enjoys the highest popularity in China.In a word,Chinese red plays an irreplaceable role in Chinese culture so truly hope my letter will help you understand better about Chinese red.
If you want to learn more about Chinese traditional culture ,l sincerely invite you to visit China
十三、通知模板
Ladies and gentlemen,
May I have your attention, please I have an announcement to make.(称呼语及开场白).
__________________________________(正文部分,说明具体通知事项)
All the teachers and students are required to attend it. Please take your notebooks and make notes./Please listen carefully and we’ll have a discussion in groups. Make sure you’ll come on time and don’t be late.(说明通知对象和注意事项)
Please come and join in it./Everybody is welcome to attend it./I hope you’ll have a nice time here.(重申希望大家参加之情)
That’s all. Thank you.(结束语)
假如你是校英语社团 (the English Club) 负责人李华,打算在全校发起讲英语故事大赛。请你写一则通知。内容包括:
活动目的与安排; 2.呼吁报名参加。
Notice
To enhance students’ interest in English, our school is going to initiate an English story-telling contest. Here are some details about this activity.
The contest will be held in the school auditorium, from 4:00 pm to 6:00 pm, next Friday afternoon. Five foreign teachers working at our school will serve as judges. Those who are interested are welcome to participate. Please sign up at the English Club by this Friday afternoon.
We are convinced that this activity will be a great success. Let’s seize the opportunity to make progress together!
假定你是校学生会主席李华,你校将举办以“The Role of Youth in Shaping the Future”为 主题的英语写作比赛,请你写一则通知,内容包括:
参赛要求; 2. 鼓励报名。
Notice
We are excited to announce that we will hold an English writing competition on the theme of “The Role of Youth in Shaping the Future”.
The event aims to inspire creativity and encourage students to reflect on the significant impact young people can have on the world. All students are welcome to participate in the competition. Participants are required to submit an essay with a word limit of 500 words to the Student Union’s office or to the Student Union’s email address, . The deadline for submission is 6:00 pm this Friday. Seize this valuable opportunity to showcase your writing talent and share your unique perspectives.
Student Union
投稿
投稿是作者向出版社、杂志、报纸或在线平台提交自己的作品(如文章、故事等)以供发表的行为。投稿的目的在于分享知识、观点或创意。
短文投稿结构
第一段:直接点明主题第一句:开门见山,直接说明投稿主题
第二句:强调话题的重要性,或活动的意义等
第二段:文章主体部分
记叙文类:
第一句:概述活动的时间、地点、主题、受众等
第二句:描述活动的推进过程,环境气氛,参与者的情绪等
非记叙文类:
第一句:强调所讨论话题对人们生活的重要性
第二句:论述优势与不足
第三句:提出具体的建议措施
第三段:稿件短文收尾
记叙文类:强调个人感受或活动的意义和影响等
非记叙文类:再次强调所讨论话题的意义,并提出倡议
【2022年全国甲春】
你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题,举办英语征文比赛。请你写一篇短文投稿,内容
包括:
(1)海洋的重要性;
(2)保护海洋的倡议。
Our Oceans, Our Responsibility
June 8th was officially named by the UN in 2009 as World Oceans Day. Apparently, it attaches great importance to ocean protection.
The oceans are to our human beings what water is to fish. Not only does it provide us with abundant resources, but it also plays a key role in maintaining the balance of our ecosystem. Unfortunately, as our economy advances, recent years have seen the oceans being polluted.Therefore, it is high time that we took measures to protect the oceans. Countries, around the world, should team up with one another to work out practical plans regarding ocean protection. We, as individuals, are expected to reduce our “white pollution” by restricting the use of disposable plastic bags.
It is my firm belief that only with joint efforts can we have a better tomorrow.
校英文报现向全体高三同学征稿,话题为“高三学生是否需要参加校外辅导”。请撰写一篇短文投稿。内容包括:1. 你的观点;2. 你的理由。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
My View on Off-campus Tutoring for Senior Three Students
With college entrance exam approaching, I think off-campus tutoring is of benefit to senior three students.
For one thing, off-campus tutoring can provide targeted assistance. School teachers have to cater to the overall level of the class, thus neglecting individual problems. By contrast, tutorial teachers can offer tailored instructions based on the unique needs of everyone. For another, in tutorial classes, students have more chances to interact with the tutor and receive timely feedback, which helps fulfil their potential and makes the learning process more joyful.
In summary, off-campus tutoring can enhance learning efficiency, so it is advantageous f or senior three students. (102w)
上周末,在你市举办的国际马拉松比赛上,你作为志愿者为运动员和观众提供服务。请你写一篇短文给校英文报投稿,内容包括:
你的工作内容; 2. 你的感受。
Volunteering at the International Marathon
Last weekend, I had the honor of serving as a volunteer at the International Marathon held in our city. My primary responsibilities included distributing water and energy drinks to runners, guiding participants along the correct routes, and helping to maintain order at the event.
The experience was both rewarding and inspiring. The determination and perseverance of the runners deeply moved me, and their words of gratitude made all the hard work worthwhile.
This opportunity taught me the value of dedication and service. It reminded me that even small acts of kindness could make a big difference. I am proud to have been part of such a meaningful event.
15. 记叙文模板
One day, ________, ________.(事情发生的时间、地点等)
When I was ________, something strange happened ________.(事情发生的过程)Finally, ________.(结果)
I’ll never forget ________(感受)
16. 说明原因型说明文模板
Nowadays, there are more and more in some big cities. It is estimated that .(用具体数据说明某现象)
Why have there been so many Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows. The first reason is that .(原因一)Besides, .(原因二)The third reason is .(原因三)To sum up, the main cause of is due to .(指出主要原因)
It is high time that something should be done. For one thing, .(解决建议一)For another thing, . All these measures will certainly .(解决建议二)
17. 描述事物型说明文模板
What I have known about is that .(具体描述某事物)
Firstly, .(描述要点一) .(具体阐述要点一)Secondly, .(描述要点二) (具体阐述要点二). As a college student, .(结合自身描述要点三)All in all, .(做出总结)Therefore, we should .(提出建议)
18. 问题解决型说明文模板
In recent days, there has been a problem , which is becoming more and more serious.(说明问题及其现状)First, . Second, .(进一步阐释现状)
We should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For>Personally, I believe that ________/Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because ________.(结尾段,指出"我"的信心及理由)
19. 谚语/警句型议论文模板
The good old proverb reminds us that . Indeed, we can learn many things from it.(引出名言,阐明含义)
First of all, . For example, . Secondly, . Another case is that . Furthermore, .(举例说明理由)
In my opinion, .(自己的观点)In short, whatever you do, please remember the saying . If you understand it and apply it to your study or life, you’ll necessarily benefit a lot from it.(总结)
20. 正反观点对比型议论文模板
There is a widespread concern over the issue that . But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.(引出话题)
A majority of people think that .(观点一)In their view there are two factors contributing to this attitude as follows: In the first place, .(支持观点一的原因一)In the second place, .(支持观点一的原因一)So it goes without saying that .
The other people, however, differ in their opinion on this matter. They hold the idea that .(观点二)In their point of view, on the one hand, ; on the other hand, .(支持观点二的原因)Therefore, there is no doubt that .
As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that . It is not only because , but also because . The more , the more .("我"的观点)
21.利弊对比型议论文模板
Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over .(引出话题或对象)
In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in . Generally speaking, it is widely believed that there are several positive aspects as follows. Firstly, .(优点一)And secondly, .(优点二)
Just as a popular saying goes, "Every coin has two sides." is no exception, and in other words, it still has negative aspects. To begin with, .(缺点一)In addition, .(缺点二)
To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time. In that case, we will definitely make a better use of .(总结)
22. 图画作文模板
As is vividly shown in the picture, .(描述图画内容)The picture/cartoon informs us of the phenomenon that .(图画反映的现象)
These may/might be several factors contributing to/responsible for the phenomenon/problem. To start with, . Secondly, . What’s more, . Last but not least, .(说明原因)
In my opinion, the government/the school/we should take measures to/something must be done to . Only in this way can the problem be really solved./ Only when everyone can do so will our world become more and more beautiful.(解决问题的方法)
23. 图表作文模板
As the bar chart shows, .(说明图表反映的问题)
Several factors contribute to . And, . Furthermore, . All these result in .(分析问题产生的原因)
However, is faced with some problems. With , the effect of is not only discouraging, but also challenging. So my principle is to pay your attention to , but not just to .(提出解决措施)
下列提供八大写作技法:
技法一:认真审题,拟全要点(1.审题裁,避免格式错误; 2. 审时间,避免时态错误; 3. 审内容,避免要点缺失。)
技法二:引人入胜的开头语(英语书信的开头语特点是开门见山,我们常用I’m writing to do sth.来表达目的; 用I’d like to do sth. 来表示打算。 当然不同的应用文开头固然不尽相同。)
技法三:丰富充实的细节信息(高考书面表达多为开放性作文,题目要求中的提示内容很少。如果只是简单翻译提示内容,词数肯定不够,因此在写作时需要适当充实一些与提示内容相关的细节信息。)
技法四:巧妙地过渡,连贯的衔接(为使作文的上下文语义连贯,逻辑关系清晰,在句与句之间恰当地使用一些承上启下的连接性词语是非常必要的。文章可以分为三至四段,不能一段到底。展开段落的方式有顺序法、举例法、比较法、因果法、说明法、归纳法等,可以根据需要选择一种或几种方法。
展开段落常见的关系词有:firstly, secondly, thirdly... finally/ to begin with, then, furthermore, last but not least/ on the one hand , on the other hand / for one thing, for another等。
表递进关系的:also, besides, as well, in addition, what’s more 等。
表因果关系的:therefore, consequently, accordingly, as a result, for this reason, so that 等。
表转折关系的: otherwise ,yet, still, however, nevertheless等。)
技法五:高级的词汇,复杂的句式(写作时恰当得体使用高中学过的、别人可能想不到的词汇, 这样标新立异,给阅卷人耳目一新的感觉
普通词汇 高级词汇
realize be aware of
be against be opposed to /object to
be lost in be buried in/ be absorbed in
be very important be of great importance
hard challenging
He is nice. He is very lovely/wise/self-confident /humorous…
;短语优先以增加文采;复杂句式,使文章升华。如:定语从句,名词性从句,状语从句,倒装句式,强调句式,非谓语动词,甚至运用虚拟语气句式等。
运用定语从句。
eg. He got high marks and this made his mother happy.
变为:He got high marks,which made his mother happy.
His father is a policeman. We all know this.
变为:As we all know, / As is known to all, his father is a policeman.
运用名词性从句。(What 主谓is/was 宾)
e.g. We should noticed that technology has many strengths.
变为:What we should noticed is that technology has many strengths.
e.g. He is not clever and he doesn’t study hard. He often doesn’t pass the exam.
变为:The reason why he often doesn’t pass the exam is that he is not clever and he often doesn’t study hard.
运用倒装句式。
eg. Rose recites 10 English words every day. In this way she often gets high marks in the English exam.
变为:Rose recites 10 English words every day and only in this way does she often get high marks in the English exam.
He is very clever and he is working very hard.
变为:Not only is he very clever but also he is working very hard.
利用强调句式。
eg. He came across his old friend in the street yesterday.
变为: It was in the street that he came across his friend yesterday.
运用非谓语动词形式。
eg. He stayed in his room and he is preparing his speech.
变为: He stayed in his room , preparing his speech.
He was buried in his novel and he didn’t notice me.
变为:Buried in his novel ,he didn’t notice me.
利用with 复合结构。
eg. He will have much work to do and he can’t come out to go to the park with us.
变为:With much work to do, he can’t come out to go to the park with us.
The thief came in and his hands was tied behind his back.
变为:The thief came in ,with his hands tied behind his back.
技法六:规避重复,使用多样化表达
技法七:使用地道英语,避免汉语式表达
技法八:画龙点睛的结束语(结尾有概括全文内容,进一步强调或肯定文章的中心思想,升华主题的作用。 1. 照应开头; 2. 复述中心; 3. 总结式 4. 引用式; 5. 希望式; 6. 问题式)