（期末考点培优）专题15 书面表达-2024-2025学年八年级英语下册期末复习考点培优专项冀教版（含答案解析）

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2024-2025学年八年级英语下册期末复习专项冀教版
（期末考点培优）专题15 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Jack发来邮件称他对中国传统节日很感兴趣。恰逢端午节来临，请你根据表格中的提示给他回一封邮件，向他介绍中国的传统节日——端午节(DragonBoat Festival).
Date May 5th of the Chinese Lunar Calendar
Activities ◆eat zongzi ◆wear a perfume pouch (香包) drink realgar wine (雄黄酒) ◆…
Purpose In memory of Qu Yuan, a famous Chinese poet
参考词汇：celebrate, important, traditional, be known for, exciting,.
要求：1.参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.文中不得出现任何真实信息 (姓名、校名和地名等)；
4.词数：不少于60词。(开头已给出，但不计入总词数)
Dear Jack,
Glad to hear from you. I would like to tell you something about the Dragon Boat Festival in China.
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Yours,
Li Hua
2．在我们的生活中，友谊是非常重要的，那么我们该如何去维系我们的友谊呢？请以“How to Keep a Friendship”为题，并根据下面的提示写一篇英语短文。
提示：
1. 互帮互助；
2. 真诚相待；
3. 乐于分享；
4. 珍视友谊。
要求：
1. 书写规范，字迹工整，条理清晰；
2. 包括全部提示内容，可适当发挥；
3. 词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
How to Keep a Friendship
For us, friendship is very important.
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3．友谊对我们每个人而言都十分珍贵。假设你正在参加学校举办的以“My Best Friend”为题的英语演讲比赛, 请你根据以下提示，写一篇英文演讲稿。
提示:
1. What is your best friend like
2. Why did you become friends
3. What have you learned from him/her
参考词汇: tall, kind, help, share, care,...
要求：
1.参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.文中不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)；
4.词数：不少于60词。(开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数)
My Best Friend
Dear teachers and students,
I’m very glad to be here to give a speech about my best friend
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4．一路成长一路歌，总会在不知不觉中留下一些难忘的过往：请你以“An Unforgettable Experience”为题，谈谈你的难忘的一次经历。
要点：
1. 描述事情发生的时间，地点和经过。
2. 描述自己在这件事情中的感受以及收获等。
3. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称，词数100左右。
An Unforgettable Experience
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5．假如你叫梁浩，你远在美国的笔友Paul想了解中国春节的情况。请你根据下表信息给他回一封电子邮件。
Time January or February
Activities 1. On the eve of the Spring Festival, family members get together and have a big dinner; 2. After dinner, watch Spring Festival Gala (春晚); 3. Set off fireworks; 4. Get lucky money;
Meaning The most important day in China
要求：1) 包含全部要点，可适当发挥；
2) 不能出现真实的校名及姓名；
3) 开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数；
4) 词数不少于 80。
Dear Paul,
Thank you very much for your e–mail.
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Yours,
Liang Hao
6．英语课上，老师组织大家讨论在家该不该养宠物狗。请你从正反两个观点中选择一个，写一篇英语小短文。内容要点提示如下：
A Good Idea Not a Good Idea
1. cute 2. bring happiness 3. learn responsibility (责任) 4.… 1. noisy 2. leave hair 3. spend much money 4.…
注意：
1.短文必须包含表中你所选观点的所有信息，可适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息；
3.词数：80~100。短文开头仅供参考，不计入总词数。
短文开头：Keeping a pet dog is …
Keeping a pet dog is
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7．你校英文报正在就中学生对于友谊的看法进行征文，假设你是李华，请你给主编Jesse写一封信， 谈谈你的想法。
写作要点：
1.谈谈你对友谊的理解；
2.简单介绍一下你的好朋友以及你们成为好朋友的原因；
3.对于如何保持友谊给出建议（至少2条）。
写作要求：
1.短文须包含写作要点，可适当增加细节， 以使行文连贯；
2.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
3.词数不少于80（短文首句已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Jesse,
I am glad to share with you my ideas on friendship.
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Yours,
Li Hua
8．地球是人类的家园，动物是人类的好朋友。请你根据下面表格中提示的信息，以“Protect the earth and love animals”为题写一篇英语演讲稿，呼吁全体师生积极行动，构建人类与自然命运共同体。
Problems pollution; cut down trees; kill wild animals…
Ways plant trees, love animals…
Your idea share the same home with nature; it’s important to…
要求：1. 70词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 可适当发挥，以使行文连贯，不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息。
Protect the earth and love animals
Good morning, everyone! Today I am very happy to be here to give a talk about protecting the earth and loving animals.
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9．一碗汤圆，一个灯谜……会让你想到元宵佳节，你校《中学生英语栏目》举行了一次以中国传统节日为题的征文比赛活动，请以“The Lantern Festival”为题谈谈你了解的元宵佳节及你是怎样度过的，请写一篇80词左右的短文并投稿。
内容包括：
1. What have you known about the Lantern Festival
2. How did you celebrate this festival
3. What do people think about the Lantern Festival
参考词汇： on the 15th day of the first lunar month; see dragon and lion dances观看舞龙舞狮；hang lanterns挂灯笼；guess lantern riddles猜灯谜；eat tangyuan, sweet rice balls吃汤圆和元宵；show family love and good luck
要求：
1.包含所给信息，可适当发挥；
2.条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；
4.题目已给出，不计入总词数。
The Lantern Festival
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10．网络的应用给人们带来了很多便利，同时也存在许多弊端。请你根据以下提示，写一篇英语短文。
提示：
（1） What are the Internet’s advantages and disadvantages
（2） What do you think of it What should we do with it
要求：（1）短文须包含所给提示，可适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
（3）词数70 个左右。
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11．某英文报正在举行“家乡美”为主题的征文活动，你打算以“Beauty in my hometown”为题写一篇英语短文投稿，请根据以下问题提示完成征文。
提示：(1) What is weather like in your hometown
(2) Which place do you like best in your hometown
(3) How is the food in your hometown
要求：（1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
（2）必须包括提示中的所有信息，并适当发挥；
（3）词数：80 词左右；
（4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Beauty in my hometown
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12．大熊猫丫丫的“回家之旅”屡上热搜，又一次提高了人们对大熊猫保护工作的关注。假如你和你的同桌正在参加学校举办的以Giving pandas a good life为主题的英文手抄报评选。你的同桌负责手抄报的绘制，而你负责文本的撰写。请根据如下提示，完成一篇英语短文。
personality 1. cute and shy 2. friendly
living habits 1. eat bamboo 2. like sleeping
danger 1. cut down lots of trees 2. die of illness easily
measures (措施) 1. build natural panda homes 2. ....
注意：
（1）短文必须包括所有要点，并适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
（3）词数不少于80；标题已给出，不计入总词数。
Giving pandas a good life
What animal has 6 fingers and wears a black and white coat Yes, it’s the panda!
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13．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友John来信想了解你们家乡的文化，并询问你的暑假计划。请根据以下提示，给他写一封回信。
家乡 烟台龙口
文化 春节…… 习俗……
暑期计划 学习…… 看望爷爷奶奶…… 志愿服务一次,帮助他人……
要求：1. 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 100词左右，开头与结尾已经给出，不计入总词数；
3. 不得出现真实校名、人名；
4. 有卷面分。
Dear John,
Thanks for your e-mail.
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Yours,
Li Hua
14．每个人都离不开朋友，朋友是雨中递来的伞，是支援的手，是善意的笑脸，友谊让我们的生活变得更精彩更有意义。你校英文周刊正以“My best friend”为题征稿，请你根据以下要点提示，用英语写一篇短文投稿，介绍你的好朋友李华。
内容要点：
1.你朋友的基本信息（外貌，性格，爱好）；
2.你们是如何成为好朋友（起因，经过，结果）；
3.你想对他/她说的话及祝福。
写作要求：
1.必须包含所有内容要点；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.文中不得透露个人信息；
4.词数80左右（短文开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：share happiness and sadness (分享快乐和悲伤), hard-working (adj. 努力的), cherish (v. 珍惜), forever (adv. 永远)
My best friend
A life without a friend is a life without the sun. Friends play an important role in our lives. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
15．假设昨天是端午节，你邀请来自美国的同学Linda来你家过节。你们在一起吃了各种各样的粽子和一顿大餐。然后和其他同学一起到户外看龙舟赛，唱歌，跳舞。你们都觉得过得特别开心。Linda说她过了一个难忘的端午节。
请根据以上内容，写出意思连贯，内容清晰的短文。
具体要求：（1）必须包括以上全部内容。
（2）不少于60词。
提示词：端午节Duanwu Festival 粽子Zongzi 龙舟赛dragon boat race
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16．假如你是李华，请根据以下提示，给你的笔友Peter用英文写一封电子邮件，向他介绍中国传统节日——端午节以及今年你是如何度过的。
1.端午节是中国最传统的节日之一。
2.中国人自从战国时期就庆祝端午节。
3.端午节这一天，家家户户都吃粽子、纪念诗人屈原。
4.今年妈妈教我包粽子。
5.爸爸带我们观看海河上的龙舟比赛。
参考词汇：战国时期the Warring States Period；龙舟赛boat races；海河the Haihe River
要求：1.要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
2.词数：60个左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
3.书写工整占1分。
Dear Peter,
The Dragon Boat Festival falls on the fifth day of the fifth lunar month every year. It is also known as the Duanyang Festival.
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I hope to see you soon. I’ll make zongzi for you.
Yours,
Li Hua
17．某英语报正在举行以“Let’s protect ________”为题的征文活动，请将题目补充完整并根据以下问题提示，写一篇英语短文向报社投稿。
问题提示：
1. What should we protect ( an animal/environment/forest(eyes/...)
2. Why should we protect it/them
① Give some information about it/them, eg. looks/abilities/habits/...
② Is it important /Are they important Why
3. What should we do to protect it/them
要求：
1. 词数不少于80词；
2. 文中不要出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。
Let’s protect
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18．假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Jack对中国传统文化很感兴趣，给你发邮件询问有关孔明灯和元宵节的信息。请你给他回复邮件，至少从材料、用途及象征意义等方面向他介绍孔明灯，并从时间、美食及庆祝活动等方面介绍元宵节。
要求：
1. 涵盖所有要点，并做适当补充。
2. 不少于80词。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jack,
You wanted to know about Chinese sky lanterns and the Lantern Festival. Here I’m glad to tell you something about them.
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Yours,
Li Hua
19．同学们，在美国，每年五月的第二个星期日是母亲节。今年的母亲节是五月十二日，虽然这是一个美国的节日，但并不影响我们表达对母亲的爱。在这一天你表达了对母亲的爱吗？如果表达了，你是怎么表达的？用了什么方式？如果没表达，你会在什么时候表达对母亲的爱？你打算用什么方式去表达呢？你对母亲节有什么看法？说说你的想法。
要求：
1. 文章可根据参考词汇表达你的观点，也可以用自己的语言表达；
2. 结构完整，条理清晰，行文流畅，内容积极；
3. 全文不少于 80 词。
参考词汇：
1. help mom do some housework, make a breakfast for her...
2. buy her some flowers, write a card/letter to her..
3. see a movie with her...
4. ...
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20．你校即将举行“My good friend and I”交流会，请根据以下写作内容分享你的好朋友李华与你之间的友情。
写作内容：
1. 成为朋友的原因（从性格和爱好等方面）；
2. 保持友情的方式（至少两个方式）；
3. 你对友情的愿望。
写作要求：
1. 内容必须包括所给要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 语篇完整，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
3. 文中不能出现透露个人信息的语句，否则不予评分。
4. 词数不少于80词。短文已给出开头，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：
keep the friendship 保持友情
My good friend and I
My good friend is Li Hua. We have been friends for years.
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文：
Dear Jack,
Glad to hear from you. I would like to tell you something about the Dragon Boat Festival in China.
It is one of the most important traditional festivals. People celebrate it on May 5th of the Chinese Lunar Calendar every year. During the festival, we eat zongzi, a kind of sticky rice dumpling wrapped in bamboo leaves. We also wear perfume pouches and drink realgar wine to stay healthy. The most exciting activity is dragon boat racing. People hold races to remember Qu Yuan, a famous Chinese poet who lived long ago. This festival is not only fun but also full of cultural meaning.
I hope you can come to China to experience it someday!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。直接说出要介绍的传统节日并引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“时间、活动、目的”等几个方面重点介绍端午节；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①stay healthy保持健康
②hold races举办比赛
③not only...but also...不但……而且……
[高分句型]
①People hold races to remember Qu Yuan, a famous Chinese poet who lived long ago.（定语从句）
②I hope you can come to China to experience it someday! （宾语从句）
2．例文
How to Keep a Friendship
For us, friendship is very important. If we have a close friend, we can share happiness and worries, which can make us enjoy a much happier life. Since friendship makes a great difference to us, we need to take it seriously and try our best to keep a friendship. My tips are as follows.
Firstly, we should always keep in touch with our friends by sending e-mails, writing letters or spending some time together regularly. Secondly, we should respect our friends and be honest with them. In addition, good friends are supposed to help each other when in trouble. Just as the old saying goes, “A friend in need is a friend indeed.”
In a word, if we want to keep a friendship, we’d better treat our friends as we want to be treated. And we should treasure friendship.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头点题，提出友谊这个话题；
第二步，具体阐述怎样维持一段友谊；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①make a great difference产生重大影响
②In addition此外
③each other彼此
④In a word总之
[高分句型]
①If we have a close friend, we can share happiness and worries, which can make us enjoy a much happier life. (if引导的条件状语从句和which引导的定语从句)
②In addition, good friends are supposed to help each other when in trouble. (when引导的时间状语从句)
3．例文：
My Best Friend
Dear teachers and students,
I’m very glad to be here to give a speech about my best friend. Everyone needs friends. So do I. And I think a good friend plays a very important role in my growth.
My best friend is Linda, a tall slim girl with long black hair and big eyes. She always wears a smile on her face. I remember the first day when I came to the new school, I felt very nervous. At that moment, Linda came up to me and said “Hi”. Then she introduced each teacher to me and shared some interesting stories in our class. It made me feel warm and relieved.
Since then, we have been best friends. She has shown me how to be a kind and helpful person who brings care and love to others.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文的主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：结合写作要点，进行自我介绍，避免遗漏要点，避免出现语法错误，可适当加入细节，使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，介绍好朋友的作用；
第二步，介绍我的好朋友是什么样的人，我们为什么会成为好朋友；
第三步，介绍我从好朋友身上学到了什么。
[亮点词汇]
①play a role in起作用于
②at that moment在那时
③come up to sb.走近某人
④since then从那时起
[高分句型]
①I remember the first day when I came to the new school, I felt very nervous.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②She has shown me how to be a kind and helpful person who brings care and love to others.（who引导的定语从句）
4．例文
An Unforgettable Experience
Everyone has his own unforgettable experience. Let me share my unforgettable experience with you.
Last month, I failed in the exam. At that time, I was crying in the classroom. I felt so sad that I wanted to give up. My best friend saw me. He came to hug me to encourage me. He was so kind that he talked with me for a long time. After the talk, I learned many ways to study. I really know I can learn by studying with a group. I can ask teachers for help. Thanks to my friend, I got good grades in the following exams.
From this experience, I learned that a friend in need is a friend indeed. We will help each other in the future.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：这是一篇话题作文，为记叙文；
②使用：主要采用“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点和题目已经给出，要围绕写作要点进行写作，并可以适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，并引出下文的具体经历；
第二步，介绍事情发生的时间，地点和经过；
第三步，描述自己在这件事情中的感受和收获。
[亮点词汇]
① share sth with sb 与某人分享某事
② ask sb for help 向某人寻求帮助
③ thanks to 幸亏
[高分句型]
① I felt so sad that I wanted to give up. (so...that引导结果状语从句)
② From this experience, I learned that a friend in need is a friend indeed. (宾语从句、引用谚语)
5．例文
Dear Paul,
Thank you very much for your e-mail. Let me tell you something about our Spring Festival. It is the most important festival in China. It is always in January or February. On the eve of the Spring Festival, family members get together and then have a big dinner. After dinner, people like to watch TV. There is a great Spring Festival Gala on TV every year. We like to set off fireworks at night. They are really wonderful. During the Spring Festival, we get lucky money from our grandparents, parents, aunts and uncles.
We always have a good time in the Spring Festival. Welcome to our country.
Yours,
Liang Hao
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍春节的时间及意义；
第二步，介绍春节的相关活动；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①on the eve of…在……的前夕
②get together聚在一起
③set off fireworks放烟花
④have a good time玩得愉快
[高分句型]
There is a great Spring Festival Gala on TV every year. (there be句型)
6．例文
Keeping a pet dog is a good idea. I think dogs are our good friends. Keeping a pet dog can bring us lots of pleasure.
First, pet dogs are cute. When we are alone, they can bring us some comfort. Second, they can play with us and bring us happiness. Third, keeping a pet dog teaches us how to care for others and helps us learn responsibility. What’s more, we can also learn some important skills while taking care of pets.
So I strongly agree with keeping a pet dog. This is my opinion. Do you agree If you don’t agree, what is your opinion
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本题是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：本文用一般现在时；
③ 提示：阐述自己对于养宠物狗的观点，需要遵照所给要求，适当补充细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，陈述自己对于养宠物狗的观点，为文章确定基调：
第二步，阐述自己的观点，要注意理由充分合理，价值观正确；
第三步，总结观点，得出结论。
[亮点词汇]
① lots of 很多
② comfort 安慰
③ care for 关心，关爱
[高分句型]
① When we are alone, they can bring us some comfort. （时间状语从句）
② Third, keeping a pet dog teaches us how to care for others and helps us learn responsibility.（疑问词+动词不定式）
7．例文
Dear Jesse,
I am glad to share with you my ideas on friendship. Friends are important in our life. They not only make us feel less lonely but also can bring us pleasure. In fact, a life without friends is just like a day without sunshine.
I have a good friend called Mike. He is very friendly and humorous. We have been friends since 2 years ago. We both like playing basketball and we play it almost every day. We also help each other with our study. As a result, we have made great progress together.
To be a good friend, it’s important to trust each other. Always be ready to help when our friends are in trouble. Just as the saying goes, “A friend in need is a friend indeed.”
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③要点：写作时应从交朋友的重要性、朋友之间能相互督促共同进步和朋友之间应相互信任等方面来介绍。注意不要遗漏信息，语句应通顺连贯有逻辑。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，直接引出朋友的重要性；
第二步，介绍自己的好朋友以及成为好朋友的原因；
第三步，对于如何保持友谊给出建议。
[亮点词汇]
①in fact 事实上
②help each other互相帮助
③as a result 因此
④make great progress取得很大的进步
[高分句型]
①Always be ready to help when our friends are in trouble.（时间状语从句）
②Just as the saying goes, “ A friend in need is a friend indeed.”（引用谚语）
8．One possible version
Protect the earth and love animals
Good morning, everyone! Today I am very happy to be here to give a talk about protecting the earth and loving animals. Nowadays, the pollution is quite serious. Some people cut down a lot of trees and kill wild animals for money. I think there are some ways to protect the earth and animals. We can plant more trees and love animals. We should stop throwing rubbish everywhere. We can tell people the importance of protecting the environment. Humans share the same home with nature. It’s important to protect the earth and love animals.
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先依据表格内容介绍目前出现的一些问题；
第二步，具体介绍保护地球和动物的一些措施；
第三步，分享自己的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①give a talk about关于某个话题做演讲
②cut down砍倒
③the importance of……的重要性
④share…with与……分享
[高分句型]
①I think there are some ways to protect the earth and animals.(省略that的宾语从句)
②It’s important to protect the earth and love animals.(动词不定式作主语)
9．例文
Lantern Festival is a traditional festival in China. It falls on the fifteenth day of the first lunar month. People celebrate it happily. On that day, we usually eat yuanxiao and sweet rice balls, a kind of sweet dumplings which show family love and good luck. And we also watch lantern displays, guess lantern riddles on the lanterns and do many other things. For children, they enjoy lion dances a lot. Chinese love this festival very much. They always have a good time at Lantern Festival.
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为一般现在时；
③ 提示：写作主题已给出，写作时主要结合主题展开，增添细节，使文章内容丰富饱满。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍元宵节的日期；
第二步，描写家人在元宵节的具体活动；
第三步，书写结语，表达中国人对元宵节的喜爱。
[亮点词汇]
①guess lantern riddles猜灯谜
② have a good time玩得开心
[高分句型]
①On that day, we usually eat yuanxiao and sweet rice balls, a kind of sweet dumplings which show family love and good luck（定语从句）
② And we also watch lantern displays, guess lantern riddles on the lanterns and do many other things. （并列动词短语）
10．例文
The Internet has changed people’s life. In many ways it makes life easier and simpler. It helps us get things done more quickly. It opens up the world to us. We also chat with our friends and do some research on the Internet. But every coin has two sides. Spending too much time online is harmful to people’s health. And some bad people may steal others’ personal information. I think that we should use the Internet carefully and properly.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，为议论文。
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中网络的利弊的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“网络的应用给人们带来了很多便利，同时也存在许多弊端。请你根据以下提示，写一篇英语短文。”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“网络的好处、网络的弊端、自己的观点等”几个方面重点介绍网络的利弊的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语，表达“我认为我们应该谨慎而正确地使用互联网”的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①help sb do sth帮助某人做某事；
②chat with和……聊天；
③do some research做研究；
④be harmful to对……有害。
[高分句型]
①Spending too much time online is harmful to people’s health. (动名词作主语)
②I think that we should use the Internet carefully and properly. (that引导的宾语从句)
11．例文
Beauty in my hometown
My hometown is very beautiful. It is along the Changjiang River.
In my hometown, different seasons have different weather. It is often cool and comfortable in spring and autumn. Sometimes it is too hot and rainy in summer while it is too cold and dry in winter. I like the park best in my home town, where there are many treees and colorful flowers. There is a river around the park, where fishes always swim hanppily and visitors can boat. We can also see many people work out in the park. There are also lots of delicious dishes in my hometown, such as Hot Pot, roast duck, dumpling and so on.
My hometown is full of life and power. It gives us energy and hope. I love my hometown very much.
【解析】【总体分析】
题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
提示：写作要点已给出，考生应根据提示要点进行书面表达，不要遗漏要点。
【写作步骤】
第一步，表明写作意图。引出“Beauty in my hometown”这一话题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从家乡的天气、你最喜欢的地方以及家乡的美食等方面来具体介绍；
第三步，书写结语。表达对家乡的热爱。
【亮点词汇】
colorful flowers多彩的花
work out锻炼
delicious dishes美食
【高分句型】
Sometimes it is too hot and rainy in summer while it is too cold and dry in winter.（while连接的并列句）
I like the park best in my home town, where there are many treees and colorful flowers.（where引导的定语从句）
12．例文
Giving pandas a good life
What animal has 6 fingers and wears a black and white coat Yes, it’s the panda! Pandas are so popular because they are cute and shy. They are also friendly to people. They like eating bamboo. It seems that they like sleeping all day if possible.
It is known that pandas are endangered. For one thing, many people cut down lots of trees so they may have terrible living conditions. For another, they may die from illnesses because many of them are out of protection.
I hope the government can build more nature reserves. Also, it is necessary that everyone should treat them as friends and protect them.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，介绍熊猫的性格和生活习惯；
第二部，介绍熊猫面临的危险；
第三步，介绍保护熊猫的措施。
[亮点词汇]
①be friendly to 对……友好
②cut down 砍倒
③die from 死于
[高分句型]
①Pandas are so popular because they are cute and shy.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②Also, it is necessary that everyone should treat them as friends and protect them.（it固定句型）
13．例文
Dear John,
Thanks for your e-mail. I will tell you something about my hometown and my summer vacation plan.
My hometown is Longkou, which is in Yantai. It is a beautiful city. The most important festival of my hometown is the Spring Festival. We usually prepare delicious food, and clean our homes. On Chinese New Year’s Eve, the family all get together happily for a big dinner. We set off crackers for good luck.
As for my summer vacation plan, I will study hard and prepare for the next term and spend most of the time with my grandparents, because I miss them very much. What’s more, I will choose to be a volunteer, I want to help others.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，包括家乡的描述和暑假计划的详细介绍。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先简单介绍自己的家乡——龙口；
第二步，描述家乡的主要节日——春节，以及在春节期间的一些活动；
第三步，阐述自己的暑假计划，包括学习、陪伴祖父母以及志愿者工作。
[亮点词汇]
① get together 聚集在一起
② set off 使爆炸
③ prepare for 为……做准备
[高分句型]
① My hometown is Longkou, which is in Yantai. (which引导的定语从句)
② As for my summer vacation plan, I will study hard and prepare for the next term and spend most of the time with my grandparents, because I miss them very much. (because引导的状语从句)
14．例文
My best friend
A life without a friend is a life without the sun. Friends play an important role in our lives. My best friend is Li Hua. He is tall and has black hair and big eyes. Li Hua is hard-working and outgoing, and always ready to help others. He likes basketball and he is good at playing it.
Li Hua has helped me a lot since we met each other for the first time. I was very interested in a singing competition, but I was afraid to sing in front of others. Li Hua encouraged me to try and told our music teacher about this. I got lots of help from our teacher. Finally, I got the first prize. Since then, we have become good friends.
I really want to say “Thank you” to him and we will share happiness and sadness in the future and cherish our friendship forever!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：“一般现在时”，“一般过去时”“现在完成时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：要求以“My best friend”为题，根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍朋友的重要性以及自己的好朋友是谁；
第二步，具体介绍你们是如何成为好朋友；
第三步，表达自己想跟朋友说的话。
[亮点词汇]
①be ready to 愿意做某事
②be good at 擅长
③each other 彼此
④encourage sb to do sth 鼓励某人做某事
[高分句型]
①I was very interested in a singing competition, but I was afraid to sing in front of others.（并列句）
②I really want to say “Thank you” to him and we will share happiness and sadness in the future and cherish our friendship forever!（并列句和并列结构）
15．例文
It was Duanwu Festival yesterday. I invited my classmate Linda, an American girl, to my home to have the festival together. We ate many kinds of Zongzi and we had a big dinner. After dinner we went out with some other classmates. We watched the dragon boat race. Then we sang songs happily and danced hand in hand. We all thought that we had a very good time. And Linda said she would never forget it in her life.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文属于材料作文写作；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：文章写作要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇引出话题；
第二步，根据提示的要点具体介绍如何度过这个端午节，可列举具体的事例；
第三步，抒发对这个端午节的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①invite sb to some place to do sth邀请某人到某地做某事
②hand in hand手拉手
[高分句型]
We all thought that we had a very good time.（that引导的宾语从句）
16．例文：
Dear Peter,
The Dragon Boat Festival falls on the fifth day of the fifth lunar month every year. It is also known as the Duanyang Festival. It is one of the most traditional festivals in China. Chinese people have celebrated the festival since the Warring States Period. On the day of Dragon Boat Festival, every family eats zongzi in order to remember the great poet Qu Yuan.
We buy zongzi every year. However, this year, my mother taught me how to make zongzi. I found that I was good at making it. What’s more, my father drove us to the HaiheRiver to watch boat races. We had a good time.
I hope to see you soon. I’ll make zongzi for you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材： 本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态： 本文以一般在时和一般过去时为主，其他时态为辅；
③提示：以李华的身份给笔友Peter用英文写一封电子邮件，向他介绍中国传统节日-端午节以及你是如何度过的。提示要点要齐全，行文连贯，符合英文表达习惯，可适当发挥，注意要书写工整。
[写作步骤]
第一步， 引言：文章开始于对龙舟节的介绍，包括日期、别称、历史背景以及传统习俗。
第二步， 主体：文章接着转向个人经历，讲述了作者家庭如何庆祝这个节日。
第三步， 结尾：文章以对未来见面的期望和对朋友的承诺结束。
[亮点词汇]
① be known as作为……而出名
② in order to do sth为了做某事
③ be good at擅长
④ have a good time玩得开心
[高分句型]
① It is one of the most traditional festivals in China. (形容词最高级)
②I found that I was good at making it. (that引导的宾语从句)
17．
例文
Let’s protect wild animals
We should protect the wild animals.
We should protect the wild animals. Protecting wild animals is very important for our natural environment. If we don’t protect the wild animals, we are likely to get sick and the natural environment will be destroyed. Wild animals are our friends, we should live in harmony with them. We should cut down trees less and protect their homes.
We are not alone in the world. We human beings could not live without all the plants and animals around us. So protecting wildlife animals is very important. We must take action to keep plants from being destroyed and stop animals from being killed. If each of us can plant a tree and build a birdhouse, the world will be more beautiful. It is very easy but useful.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作的要点提示已给出，考生应围绕要点来展开写作，注意用词，避免出现单词拼写和语法方面的错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。引出要重点介绍的保护动物；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从应该保护动物及保护动物的重要性两个方面阐述；
第三步，书写总结。表达了保护动物从小事做起。
[亮点词汇]
① be important for 对……重要的
② stop … from 阻止
③ take action 采取行动
[高分句型]
① Protecting wild animals is very important for our natural environment. （动词ing作主语）
② If each of us can plant a tree and build a birdhouse, the world will be more beautiful.（If引导的条件状语从句）
18．例文
Dear Jack,
You wanted to know about Chinese sky lanterns and the Lantern Festival. Here I’m glad to tell you something about them.
Sky lanterns, also known as Kongming lanterns, are made from thin bamboo frames covered with paper or silk. They serve as symbols of peace and good wishes. People often write messages on the lanterns before releasing them into the sky, hoping that their wishes will come true. The Lantern Festival falls on the 15th day of the first lunar month, which marks the end of the Spring Festival celebrations. Families gather to enjoy a special dish called Tangyuan. This food symbolizes family unity. In many places, there are also dragon dances, lion dances, and riddle-guessing games attached to the lanterns. More and more people are interested in it.
I hope you’ll come to China one day.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】【总体分析】
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中孔明灯的材料、用途及象征意义等方面的介绍，并从时间、美食及庆祝活动等方面介绍元宵节。适当添加细节，语句连贯，条理清楚，突出重点。
【写作步骤】
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“英国笔友杰克对中国传统文化很感兴趣，询问有关孔明灯和元宵节的信息”来引出文章的重点内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从“材料”“用途”“象征意义”三个维度介绍孔明灯，并从“时间”“美食”“庆祝活动”三方面介绍元宵节。
第三步，书写结语。表达“欢迎杰克来中国”。体现了友好的态度。
【亮点词汇】
①be made from由……制成
②come true实现
③serve as充当
④be interested in对……感兴趣
【高分句型】
①Sky lanterns, also known as Kongming lanterns, are made from thin bamboo frames covered with paper or silk.（过去分词作定语）
②People often write messages on the lanterns before releasing them into the sky, hoping that their wishes will come true.（that引导的宾语从句）
③The Lantern Festival falls on the 15th day of the first lunar month, which marks the end of the Spring Festival celebrations.（非限制性定语从句）
19．例文
Mother’s Day, celebrated on the second Sunday of May, fell on May 12th this year. I did express my love on this special day by making a breakfast for her. Cooking her favorite pancakes and serving them with fresh fruit and a cup of coffee, I saw the joy in her eyes as she tasted the food. Besides this, I also wrote a card, expressing my gratitude for her support and love throughout the years. We also saw a movie together, which would bring us closer and create memories.
As for my thoughts on Mother’s Day, I believe it’s a beautiful reminder to appreciate the invaluable role mothers play in our lives. It encourages us to express gratitude not just once a year but every day, in little ways that show we care.
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己是否在母亲节那天表达对母亲的爱；
第二步，介绍自己是如何表达的以及表达的方式；
第三步，最后介绍你对母亲节的看法。
[亮点词汇]
① besides除了
② as for至于
③ encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事
[高分句型]
①I saw the joy in her eyes as she tasted the food.（as引导的时间状语从句）
②We also saw a movie together, which would bring us closer and create memories.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
20．例文
My good friend and I
My good friend is Li Hua. We have been friends for years. He is polite and always smiles at everyone. He likes telling jokes, so I never feel lonely when we’re together. Doing sports is our favorite hobby. We often play basketball after school. That’s why I want to make friends with him.
How can we keep the friendship First, we often help each other. He often helps me with English and I often give him a hand when he needs. Second, we keep in touch. Now we get separated because we are in different schools, but we still stay in touch by calling or writing letters. We often share our happiness and sadness.
I will treasure our friendship. I hope we can be good friends forever.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接短文开头，从性格和爱好等方面介绍成为朋友的原因；
第二步，介绍保持友情的方式；
第三步，表达对友情的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①give sb. a hand帮助某人
②keep in touch保持联系
[高分句型]
①He likes telling jokes, so I never feel lonely when we’re together.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②That’s why I want to make friends with him.（why引导的表语从句）
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