专题10 书面表达20篇-2024-2025年八年级英语下期期末高频易错考点专练（人教版）(带参考答案详解）

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备战2024-2025年八年级英语下期期末高频易错考点专练（人教版）
专题10 书面表达20篇
1．（23-24八年级下·山东日照·期末）亲爱的同学们，时间如指缝流沙，转眼又一年过去了。你对未来的自己有着怎样的期待呢？在此岁末年初，请你以“I want to be a(n) ...”为题写一篇文章，勉励一下自己。内容提示及要求如下：
1. 你要成为一个什么样的人；
2. 你即将从事的职业、原因以及达成途径；
3. 文中不得使用本人姓名及真实的学校名称，否则不评分；
4. 语句通顺，合乎逻辑，书写规范。80词左右，可适当发挥。
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2．（23-24八年级下·北京顺义·期末）某英文网站正在开展以“我最想感谢的人”为主题的征文活动，假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈谁是你最想感谢的人，他/她是怎样帮助你的，以及你的收获。
提示词语: trouble, encourage, improve, stick to
提示问题: .
·Who do you want to thank most
·How did he/she help you
·What have you learned from him/her
In my life, many people helped and influenced me a lot.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．（23-24八年级下·云南德宏·期末）生活中的每一天对我们来说都很有意义，你可以做美食、做运动、去旅行等等。请以“A Meaningful Day”为题，用英语写一篇短文，叙述对你有意义的一天并谈谈你的感受。
要求：
1．根据所给题目，写一篇短文，词数不少于80个；
2．语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；
3．文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。
A Meaningful Day
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4．（23-24八年级下·山东临沂·期末）每个人都会有一个专属的童年，在这期间，你也许会有一些(个)格外珍惜的物品，它(们)会给你留下比较深刻的回忆。你孩童时代最喜欢并且保留的东西是什么呢 请你根据下面的问题提示写一篇英语短文，介绍一下吧。
1. What is your favourite thing from childhood which you still have
2. How long have you had it
3. How did you get it Did someone give it to you Who
4. Why do you like it so much Can you say something more about it
写作要求：
1. 紧扣主题，结合提示信息，适当发挥，语言表达准确、语义通顺连贯；
2. 书写工整，不少于80词。请考生将题目写在答题卡相应处；
3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(校名，姓名，地名等)。
My favourite thing from childhood
My favorite thing from childhood is
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5．（23-24八年级下·云南昆明·期末）阅读是我们手中握有的最神奇的钥匙，不仅能带领我们走进科学的殿堂、文学的花园、历史的长廊，更是一扇通向广阔世界的窗。让我们在方寸之间心游万仞，思接千载。请你以“Reading makes me ________”为题，写一篇英语短文，叙述你的阅读经历并谈谈你在阅读中的收获或阅读给你带来的改变。
要求：
1. 请先将题目补全后，再作答；
2. 紧扣主题、语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于 80个；
3. 文中不得使用考生的真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；
4. 请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。
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6．（23-24八年级下·云南玉溪·期末）生活处处有精彩，你一定经历过无数难忘的事，或遇到过无数难忘的人。请以“An Unforgettable ________”为题，写一篇英语短文，分享你的经历和感受。
要求：
1. 请先将题目补充完整再作答，词数不少于80个；
2. 语言流畅，内容连贯，书写规范, 卷面整洁；
3. 文中不得出现真实地名、校名和人名，否则以零分记；
4. 请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。
An Unforgettable ________
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7．（23-24八年级下·黑龙江双鸭山·期末）暑假即将来临，很多同学已经开始计划如何度过一个有意义的暑假。假如你是李华，请你以“How to Spend a Safe and Meaningful Holiday”为话题，给你的好友Mike写封信，要点如下：
1.尝试做一些志愿者工作（举例说明做什么志愿者工作），通过志愿者工作提高自立能力(develop one’s independence)。
2.保护(protect)自己，远离(keep away from)河流等危险的地方。
3.多读书，锻炼，强健体魄。
4.帮父母干家务活。
注意：
1. 字迹工整，词数90—100词。
2.可适当发挥使行文连贯。
3.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
4.开头结尾已给出不计入总词数。
Dear Mike,
How are you going I am writing to tell you how I will spend a safe and meaningful holiday. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
How will you spend your holiday I’m looking forward to your letter.
Yours,
Li Hua
8．（23-24八年级下·广西河池·期末）你校在课后服务活动中，根据学生的需求开设了丰富多彩的课程。你选修了其中的一门，收获颇丰。学校广播站面向全校学生举办一场以“我最喜爱的课外活动”为主题的英语征文活动。假设你是李华，请你根据以下提示，以 “My favourite after-school activity”为题，用英语写一篇短文投稿。
内容要点：1.介绍你最喜爱的一项课后活动（活动名称，活动时间、地点……）；
2.这项课后活动的好处；
3.号召大家积极参与课后活动。
写作要求：1.内容必须包含以上所有信息；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.文中不得透露个人信息；
4.词数为 80左右（短文首句已给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：colorful (丰富多彩的)，meaningful (有意义的)，make sb. relax (让某人放松)， take up (培养)
My favourite after-school activity
I’m Li Hua. I’m glad to share my favourite after-school activity with you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
9．（23-24八年级下·四川自贡·期末）学校正在开展“我劳动，我快乐”的主题征文活动，请你以“我做过的最有意义的家务事”为题， 写一篇短文投稿。
要点提示：
1. 介绍你做过的最有意义的家务事。
2. 谈谈它的意义所在 (至少写3点)。
写作要：
1. 词数70左右；
2. 短文标题、开头和结尾已给出；
3. 不得使用真实姓名和校名等。
The most meaningful housework I have done
Doing housework is important for us. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Let’s do housework now. It can make our life better.
10．（23-24八年级下·新疆克拉玛依·期末）公众健康日（7月7日），旨在倡导“全民健康，快乐为本”的理念。随着生活水平的提高，健康越来越受到重视。你们准备组织一个关于“健康”主题的演讲活动，请你准备一篇题为How to live a healthy and happy life的演讲稿。
内容提示：
1.健康饮食；适当锻炼；充足睡眠。
2.积极乐观；与人为善；
3. ……
注意事项：
1.包含如上要点，词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。
How to live a healthy and happy life
Hi, my dear classmates,
With the improvement of our living conditions, we are paying more and more attention to our health. Then how can we students live a healthy and happy life
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11．（23-24八年级下·吉林松原·期末）假设你是 Linda，请以“Changes in My Hometown”为题，介绍一下你家乡的变化。
内容包括：
1. 这些年来，我的家乡发生了很大变化；
2. 我的家乡过去是一个安静的小城。道路又窄又脏，到处是垃圾。人们住在又小又旧的房子里。人们只能靠步行或骑自行车出行；
3. 后来，政府采取措施改善了这种情况。现在街道宽阔干净，两边绿树成荫。人们出行靠公交车或出租车。许多家庭甚至有了私家车。
4. 我认为……（此处请用 1-2 句话适当发挥）
提示词：narrow 窄的；take action 采取行动；improve 改善
要求：
1. 内容必须包括所有要点；
2. 不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 语句通顺，字迹工整，时态正确 ；
4. 词数在80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Changes in My Hometown
There have been great changes in my hometown over the years. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
12．（23-24八年级下·湖北咸宁·期末）阅读可以拓宽我们的知识面，增长我们的见识，也可以提高我们的修养和内涵。但是目前许多中学生不重视课外阅读，却把很多时间花在上网和玩手机上。请根据以下表格内容，以“I Love Reading”为题，写一篇英语短文。
要点提示：
阅读的益处 书籍是人类的好朋友； 帮助我们获取知识，开阔眼界，了解世界； 让生活丰富多彩，带给我们快乐……
阅读的计划 每天花半个小时阅读;阅读各种各样的书籍；做读书笔记……
希望 业余时间多读书，读好书……
写作要求：
1. 短文内容应包括表格中所有信息，条理清晰，可适当发挥。
2. 语句通顺，语法正确，80词左右。
3. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名和地名。
参考词汇：获取知识 get knowledge；开阔眼界 open one’s eyes；做笔记 take notes
I Love Reading
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13．（23-24八年级下·黑龙江哈尔滨·期末）假如你是李平，你的朋友 Peter询问你的家乡的变化情况。请根据以下提示，给他写一封回信。并谈谈中学生如何让家乡变得更好。
写作要点：
1. 对于Peter想了解你的家乡感到激动。
2. 介绍你家乡的变化情况：
（1）过去，我的家乡不是很大，人们过着贫穷的生活，房屋破旧。
（2）现在，我的家乡公路变宽了，许多人有他们自己的车。
3.谈谈中学生如何让家乡变得更好。
写作要求：
1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
3. 字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清晰。
4. 至少80词。
Dear Peter,
How are you doing __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ping
14．（23-24八年级下·河南周口·期末）假如你是陈倩，你的英国朋友Mike将要来北京交换学习，要住在当地的接待家庭。在出发前，他给你写信希望了解中国的就餐礼仪。请根据下列提示给他写一封回信，介绍一下中国的就餐礼仪。
要求：
①文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
②词数100左右。（开头，结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：a pair of serving chopsticks 一双公筷
Dear Mike,
How are you Glad to hear that you will study and live in China.
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Yours,
Chen Qian
15．（23-24八年级下·黑龙江绥化·期末）某英语报社正在举办以“How to Be a Good Learner ”为题的征文比赛。请你根据下列提示，写一篇英语征文稿。
提示：
1. 拥有良好的学习习惯；
2. 经常参加学习小组；
3. 不忘参加体育锻炼。
参考词汇：good habit, get ready for, go over, study in groups, work hard, do sports
要求：
1. 须包括全部要点，可以适当发挥。
2. 80词左右，文章标题已给出，不计入总词数。
How to Be a Good Learner
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16．（23-24八年级下·湖北十堰·期末）你们学校的英文月刊发起了题为“How to get on well with parents”的征文活动。请根据以下通知要求，并结合自身实际，用英文写一篇短文。
Notice It is common that there are some problems and worries in your life. What matters most is how you deal with them. Have you ever argued with your parents You can share the argument between your parents and you, the reason and the way you solve it. We are really looking forward to your opinions.
How to get on well with parents
In the past, I had difficulty in getting on well with my parents.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
17．（23-24八年级下·辽宁朝阳·期末）在“双减”政策的指导下，中学生们有了越来越多的课余活动时间。如何充实有意义地安排活动成为中学生们讨论的热点话题。请你以“Enjoy Our Happy After-school Life”为题，从关爱家人、提升自己、关心他人的角度对同学们的课余生活提出建议。
提示：
关爱家人 参与家务劳动
提升自己 参加体育锻炼；培养兴趣爱好……
关心他人 参加志愿者活动……
要求：
1. 不少于80词，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 包含提示内容，可适当发挥，语言通顺，条理清楚，书写规范；
3. 文中不能出现真实人名及校名等。
Enjoy Our Happy After-school Life
Thanks to the “Double Reduction Policy (双减政策)”, our spare time is much longer than before.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
18．（23-24八年级下·河南驻马店·期末）我国政府一直号召全民“拒绝浪费，文明用餐”，加入“光盘行动”。请根据提示，联系实际，以“Save Food and Eat Healthily”为题，用英语写一篇短文，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
要点：
1. 不要浪费太多食物；
2. 不要吃垃圾食品；
3. 应当吃光自己盘子里所有的食物。
要求：
1. 语句通顺，条理清楚，结构合理。
2. 词数90左右。
Save Food and Eat Healthily
Our government has called on the people to save food and eat healthily so that we can enjoy a happy life.
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19．（23-24八年级下·安徽安庆·期末）童年有很多值得回忆的东西, 你小时候最喜欢的东西是什么 请你根据下面的思维导图, 用英语写一篇短文, 向大家介绍一下你小时候最喜欢的东西。
要求:
1. 所有提示都要用上,可适当发挥；
2. 词数: 不少于 80 词。
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20．（23-24八年级下·甘肃天水·期末）假定你是李华，你的英国笔友 Chris对中国文化很感兴趣。他给你发来邮件，询问中国人日常生活中的基本社交礼仪，如待人接物、餐桌礼仪等。请你用英语回复一封邮件，介绍你所知道的相关礼仪。
提示词语:manners, shake hands, polite, gift, chopsticks
提示问题：
·What do we do when we meet people for the first time
·How do we behave properly at table
要求：
(1)根据所给提示，完成一篇不少于80词的英文写作；
(2)文中已给出内容不计入总词数；
(3)所给提示词语仅供选用；
(4)请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
Dear Chris,
I’m glad to know that you’re interested in Chinese social manners.
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参考答案
1．例文
I want to be an English teacher
I want to be an English teacher when I grow up. Firstly, I like English. I want to use it often in my daily life. Secondly, I like working with students, and enjoy being asked questions and answering them. Thirdly, I’m good at English. So I can teach my students the right way to learn English.
Now what I should do is to study hard and get high marks in English tests, and try to practice speaking English as much as possible. Only in this way can I realize my dream of being an English teacher one day.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，直切主题，说明自己长大后想从事什么工作；
第二步，分点阐述想要从事这个工作的原因；
第三步，说明将采取何种方式来实现梦想。
[亮点词汇]
①enjoy doing sth. 喜欢做某事
②be good at 擅长
③try to do sth. 努力做某事
④practice doing sth. 练习做某事
[高分句型]
①I want to be an English teacher when I grow up.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②Now what I should do is to study hard and get high marks in English tests, and try to practice speaking English as much as possible.（what引导的主语从句）
③Only in this way can I realize my dream of being an English teacher one day.（only引导的倒装句）
2．例文：
In my life, many people helped and influenced me a lot. My mother is my role model. I admire her very much.
My mother is responsible and careful. She is not only busy with her work but also takes good care of our family. What’s more, She did a lot for me when I was upset. Once I failed a singing competition and felt very upset. I was crying in the corner of the hall when my mother came to me. She handed me a piece of tissue and hugged me tenderly. She kept comforting me and encouraged me till I stopped crying. From her words, I became calm and found confidence again.
I love her and I will learn from her. She makes me know the importance of diligence. I will work hard and try my best to help others.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出“我最想感谢的人”的话题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“身份、事件、感悟”等方面进行介绍；
第三步，书写结语，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①admire钦佩
②diligence勤奋
③not only…but also…不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
①I was crying in the corner of the hall when my mother came to me.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②She kept comforting me and encouraged me till I stopped crying.（till引导的时间状语从句）
3．例文
A Meaningful Day
When I was young, I went through a thing which influenced me deeply.
One day, I went to school as usual. All of a sudden, I heard a voice crying. I knew there was something wrong. So I walked towards the direction of the voice. Then I found a child and he couldn’t find his mother. I decided to help him find his mother, and I took him to the police station nearby. After that I went to school in a hurry, but I was still late. My teacher was angry at first. But when she heard what happened, she excused me.
After the thing, I feel very happy to do good things.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：主要时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据题目要求，完成一篇有意义一天的书面表达，注意使用正确的时态，并正确使用连接词和短语，使得语言流畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点题，简要说明给你留下深刻印象的地方；
第二步，叙述你的经历；
第三步，谈谈你的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①All of a sudden突然
②walk towards走向
③decide to do sth决定做某事
④in a hurry匆忙
[高分句型]
①When I was young, I went through a thing which influenced me deeply. (时间状语从句)
4．例文
My favourite thing from childhood
My favorite thing from childhood is my teddy bear. I have had it since I was five years old. My grandmother gave it to me as the birthday gift on my birthday.
I like the teddy bear so much because it’s dressed in my favorite color. It’s special to me because my grandmother made it for me. She was always kind to me. Her words and the lovely toy bear made me feel better.
The teddy bear has given me many good memories. I remember when I was young, I was afraid of the dark, so I held my teddy bear to feel safe. Whenever I miss my grandmother, I will look at the toy bear, and it makes me feel happy and warm.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为一般过去时和一般现在时；
③提示：写作时注意围绕所给问题展开描述，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己孩童时期最喜欢的物品是什么；
第二步，介绍自己拥有该物品多久了，具体描述如何得来的该物品；
第三步，介绍自己喜欢该物品的原因及感想。
[亮点词汇]
①be kind to...对……友好
②be afraid of...害怕……
[高分句型]
①I like the teddy bear so much because it’s dressed in my favorite color. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②I remember when I was young, I was afraid of the dark, so I held my teddy bear to feel safe. (宾语从句及when引导的时间状语从句)
5．例文
Reading makes me happy
What is fun in the world Different people have different opinions. For me, I think reading is fun. Let me tell you why.
First, I began to read cartoons and fairytales when I was five years old. I found reading these books could make me read myself easily. And I opened my eyes. I knew something about the world. Second, when I grew older, reading made me understand others. I always put myself into others’ shoes when I was reading. In my daily life, when I got on with others, maybe there was misunderstanding, but I could solve it. Then I was relaxed.
In a word, reading has made my life more beautiful. So I think reading is fun.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：本文应该主要用第一人称来写；回忆过去时，要写得具体；同时要把阅读对自己的影响体现出来。
[写作步骤]
第一步，用形容词补全标题后，开头段要表明写作内容。说明阅读是你怎样；
第二步，回顾过去经历细节，并表明阅读对自己的影响；
第三步，总结并进行情感升华。表明阅读塑造了自己并让自己快乐生活。
[亮点词汇]
①put myself into others’ shoes站在别人的角度思考
②get on with...和某人相处
③In a word总而言之
[高分句型]
①I found reading these books could make me read myself easily.（省略了that的宾语从句）
②...when I got on with others, maybe there was misunderstanding...（when引导的时间状语从句）
6．例文
An Unforgettable Match
The most unforgettable thing in my school life is the football match which was held last term in the school playground. My class played against Class Five. Although I wasn’t the football player in the team, I watched the whole match. My class scored first and we were so excited. However, players from Class Five were strong-minded and got a point very soon. Nervous but hopeful, we kept cheering our players on. Finally, our class team scored again when the match almost came to an end.
The good result came from our hard work and strong will. We should always keep trying and fighting.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：根据所给题干完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，补全题目，介绍自己的一次难忘的经历；
第二步，介绍自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①play against对战
②score得分
③strong-minded意志坚强的
④cheer sb. on为某人加油
⑤come to an end结束
[高分句型]
The most unforgettable thing in my school life is the football match which was held last term in the school playground.(which引导定语从句)
7．例文
Dear Mike,
How are you going I am writing to tell you how I will spend a safe and meaningful holiday.
Firstly, I plan to try some volunteer work, like cleaning up the city parks or visiting the old to cheer them up. I believe through the volunteer work, I can develop my independence. Secondly, I will keep away from the dangerous places like rives and remember to protect myself. What’s more, I think it’s necessary to develop my body and mind. So I will read more books and get more exercise. Also, I plan to help my parents share the housework, because it’s also my duty to make our home clean and comfortable. I think my holiday will be colorful.
How will you spend your holiday I’m looking forward to your letter.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：主要是一般现在时和一般将来时；
③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意结合具体语境使用正确的时态，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，仔细阅读所给内容；
第二步，具体介绍你的暑假计划；
第三步，询问Mike的暑假计划。
[亮点词汇]
①independence自立
②keep away from远离
③necessary有必要的
④duty责任
[高分句型]
①What’s more, I think it’s necessary to develop my body and mind.（省略that的宾语从句）
②Also, I plan to help my parents share the housework, because it’s also my duty to make our home clean and comfortable.（because引导的原因状语从句）
8．例文
Possible version:
My favourite after-school activity
I’m Li Hua. I’m glad to share my favourite after-school activity with you. We have many colorful and meaningful after-class activities in our school. Such as ball games, reading, paintings, singing, running and so on. But my favorite after-school activity is collecting stamps.
First, I can learn a lot from the stamps. When I collect them, I can learn more about Chinese cultures. Second, I can make more friends with many other students because of the same hobbies and interests.
In a word, after-school activities can make us relaxed. You can take up a hobby that you like. Why not join in it
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己最喜欢的课后活动；
第二步，介绍这项课后活动的好处；
第三步，号召大家积极参与课后活动。
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②because of因为
③in a word总之
[高分句型]
①When I collect them, I can learn more about Chinese cultures.（when引导的时间状语从句）
9．例文
The most meaningful housework I have done
Doing housework is important for us. The most meaningful housework I have done is helping my dad plant flowers in our backyard. Last spring, we dug up the soil, planted seeds, and watered them every day. It was hard work, but seeing the tiny seeds grow into beautiful blooms was amazing.
This task meant a lot to me. Firstly, it taught me patience and the joy of waiting for something good to happen. Secondly, it showed me the power of nature and how every little effort can make a big difference. Lastly, it brought my dad and me closer as we worked together, sharing stories and laughter.
Let’s do housework now. It can make our life better.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文应使用“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点应注意题干给出的“介绍自己做过的最有意义的家务事”并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，借用文章开头，介绍自己做过的最有意义的家务事；
第二步，根据题干中的要点提示，详细介绍这件事的经过，意义等信息；
第三步，号召大家行动起来做家务，并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①dig up挖出
②make a difference产生影响
[高分句型]
①It was hard work, but seeing the tiny seeds grow into beautiful blooms was amazing. （but表转折）
②Lastly, it brought my dad and me closer as we worked together, sharing stories and laughter.（as引导的原因状语从句）
10．范文
How to live a healthy and happy life
Hi, my dear and classmates,
With the improvement of our living conditions, we are paying more and more attention to our health. Then how can we students live a healthy and happy life
Firstly, we should keep our bodies healthy. Not only do we need to eat healthy food, but we also need to exercise in a proper way every day. Meanwhile, we still need enough sleep every day. Secondly, mental health is also very important. We need to love our life and try to be active. We need to get along well with others as well. When we’re sad, we can communicate with our parents, teachers and friends frankly.
In a word, I hope everyone can have a healthy body and mind, and then we can have a healthy and happy life every day.
That’s all. Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍饮食、锻炼和睡眠对健康很重要；
第二步，从精神上介绍如何做；
第三步，最后书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
① get along well with sb和某人相处得好
② communicate with sb和某人交流
③ In a word总之
[高分句型]
①When we’re sad, we can communicate with our parents, teachers and friends frankly.(when引导的时间状语从句)
②In a word, I hope everyone can have a healthy body and mind, and then we can have a healthy and happy life every day.(省略that的宾语从句，and并列句)
11．例文
Changes in My Hometown
There have been great changes in my hometown over the years.
My hometown used to be a quiet small town. The roads were narrow and dirty. There was rubbish everywhere. People lived in small old houses. People travelled around on foot or by bike.
Later the government realized the problems and actively took action to improve the situation. Now the streets are wide and clean, with many green trees on both sides. People travel around by bus or taxi. Many families even have their own cars.
I think my hometown will become more and more beautiful in the future. I hope you can visit it some day.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般过去时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总述自己的家乡发生了很大的变化。
第二步，写家乡以前的样貌。
第三步，写家乡后来发生的一些变化。
第四步，写自己的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①used to be过去是
②on foot or by bike步行或骑自行车
③take action采取行动
[高分句型]
①I think my hometown will become more and more beautiful in the future. (宾语从句)
12．例文
I Love Reading
I love reading. Books are our real and best friends. By reading books, not only can we get all kinds of knowledge, but also we can open our eyes. Besides, it is a good way to know about the world. At the same time, reading can make our life more colourful and more enjoyable.
As students, it’s time for us to read more. I plan to spend half an hour reading all kinds of books every day. And I will take notes to remember what they said in the books.
All in all, I hope we should read more and better books in our spare time to improve ourselves.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的每一项提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出“我爱阅读”的话题并介绍阅读的益处；
第二步，阐述自己的阅读的计划；
第三步，书写结语，表达希望。
[亮点词汇]
①all kinds of各种各样的
②at the same time同时
③take notes记笔记
[高分句型]
①By reading books, not only can we get all kinds of knowledge, but also we can open our eyes. (倒装句)
②I hope we should read more and better books in our spare time to improve ourselves. (宾语从句以及动词不定式作目的状语)
13．例文
Dear Peter,
How are you doing I am very excited to hear that you are interested in learning about my hometown. Let me tell you about the changes that have taken place here.
In the past, my hometown was not very big, and people lived a poor life with old and shabby houses. However, things have changed a lot now. The roads have become wider, and many people have their own cars. The living standards have improved significantly.
As for how middle school students can make our hometown better, I believe we can start by doing small things. We should keep our environment clean by not littering and participating in community clean-up activities . We can also promote environmental awareness among our peers and families. Additionally, we should study hard to acquire knowledge and skills that will help us contribute to the development of our hometown in the future. Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ping
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表达出对Peter的想念和激动；
第二步，具体阐述家乡的变化；
第三步，谈谈中学生如何让家乡变得更好。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣
②in the past在过去
③acquire knowledge and skills获得知识和技巧
[高分句型]
①The roads have become wider, and many people have their own cars. (并列句)
②We should study hard to acquire knowledge and skills that will help us contribute to the development of our hometown in the future. (定语从句)
14．参考例文：
Dear Mike,
How are you Glad to hear that you will study and live in China.
Firstly, eating with serving chopsticks is necessary in China. Secondly, when dining with your host family, remember to let the older seat and start eating first. Secondly, in China, when we have dinner, we can talk to each other happily. But it’s impolite to talk loudly. Thirdly, it’s also considerate to finish eating neatly, without leaving too much food on your plate. Lastly, appreciating the food and thanking your hosts is crucial. Show your gratitude and expressing how much you enjoy it. A simple “thank you” goes a long way in Chinese culture.
Hope to see you soon.
Yours,
Chen Qian
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，写出几条具体的中国餐桌礼仪，让Mike学习。
第二步，结束语写出期待与Mike见面的心情。
[亮点词汇]
①talk to each other 互相交谈
②Chinese culture 中国文化
③go a long way 会有很大帮助
[高分句型]
①Secondly, when dining with your host family, remember to let the older seat and start eating first.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②Appreciating the food and thanking your hosts is crucial.（and连接并列成分）
15．例文
How to Be a Good Learner
As a good learner, we should have good habits and ways in learning. We need to get ready for our lessons before class and always listen carefully in class. After class, we must go over the lessons and finish our homework on time. It’s good to study in groups and help each other. As a student, working hard is important, but don’t forget to do sports and keep healthy. We should do more reading in our free time. If we have any problems, we’d better ask others for help. I hope all these will be helpful to us.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文；
②时态：本文以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：题目要求根据提示写篇文章，谈谈如何成为一名好的学习者，包括拥有良好的学习习惯、经常参加学习小组以及参加体育锻炼。写作时注意适当增加细节，不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题；
第二步，根据所给要点，具体介绍如何成为一名好的学习者，包括拥有良好的学习习惯、经常参加学习小组以及参加体育锻炼；
第三步，最后表达祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
① get ready for 为……做准备
② listen carefully 认真听
③ on time 准时
[高分句型]
① It’s good to study in groups and help each other.（it作形式主语）
② As a student, working hard is important, but don’t forget to do sports and keep healthy.（动名词作主语）
16．例文
How to get on well with parents
In the past, I had difficulty in getting on well with my parents. I used to argue with my parents too. I remember once I had a big fight because I didn’t want to take the after-school class my parents had signed me up for. But after I calmed down, I knew that my parents were doing this for my own good. So I took the initiative to admit my mistake to my parents. And I explained to them why I didn’t want to go. I also promised that I would use practical actions to prove that I do not need to go to after-school classes. After my parents listened, they forgave and understood me. Of course, I finally proved with practice that I can also improve my grades without going to tutoring classes. Through this incident, I understand that communication and understanding of parents is the best way to get along.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，介绍自己与父母相处的困难，常常争吵；
第二步，具体描述与父母争论的原因和解决方法；
第三步，书写结束语，总结如何与父母和睦相处。
[亮点词汇]
①used to do sth 过去常常做某事
②argue with 与……争论
③calm down 冷静下来
④initiative 主动性
⑤of course 当然
⑥incident 事件
[高分句型]
①And I explained to them why I didn’t want to go.（why引导的宾语从句）
②I also promised that I would use practical actions to prove that I do not need to go to after-school classes.（that引导的宾语从句）
17．例文
Enjoy Our Happy After-school Life
Thanks to the “Double Reduction Policy”, our spare time is much longer than before. So we have more free time to do what we like. But how to better use our free time Here is some of my advice.
First, it’s important to care for our family. Since our parents are busy with their work, we can share some housework like sweeping the floor, cleaning the rooms and doing the dishes. This can not only help develop our independence, but also make our parents relaxed and happy. Second, why not do something to improve ourselves We can do some sports to keep healthy or take up a new hobby. Last but not least, it’s a good idea to take part in the volunteer activities and help others. For example, we can visit the old people’s home or help the young children study. When we help others, we can also get a strong feeling of satisfaction.
All in all, let’s enjoy our after-school life and make it meaningful and colorful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意分点阐述你的建议，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题；
第二步，从关爱家人、提升自己、关心他人的角度对同学们的课余生活提出建议；
第三步，总结全文，建议同学们好好享受自己的课余生活。
[亮点词汇]
①care for关心
②not only...but also...不仅……而且……
③independence独立
④take up开始从事，培养
⑤all in all总而言之
[高分句型]
①Since our parents are busy with their work, we can share some housework like sweeping the floor, cleaning the rooms and doing the dishes.（since引导的原因状语从句）
②When we help others, we can also get a strong feeling of satisfaction.（when引导的时间状语从句）
18．例文
Save Food and Eat Healthily
Our government has called on the people to save food and eat healthily so that we can enjoy a happy life. We middle school students should do something for it.
To save food, we shouldn’t waste any of our food. We should eat up all the food. We shouldn’t order the food more than we can eat while dining out, because many people in the world don’t have enough to eat. To eat healthily, we shouldn’t eat junk food but healthy food. It’s good for our health to eat a balanced diet. We’d better not eat in small restaurants. The food and the oil they use are not clean or healthy enough. We’d better eat at school or at home if we have time.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，引出话题；
第二步，介绍节约食物的建议；
第三步，介绍健康饮食的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①call on呼吁
②eat up吃光
③dine out外出就餐
④a balanced diet均衡的饮食
[高分句型]
The food and the oil they use are not clean or healthy enough.(省略关系代词的定语从句)
19．例文
My favorite thing from childhood was a teddy bear. I have had it for 12 years. My grandma gave it to me on my third birthday as a birthday gift.
I liked my teddy bear very much because it was beautiful. I liked it also because my grandma made it by herself. The teddy bear has given me many sweet memories. I remembered when I was young, I was scared at night. So I slept with the teddy bear every night. It could make me feel safe. I want to say thanks to my teddy bear. I will keep it forever to remind me of my grandma.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“思维导图”中你最喜欢的东西、你如何得到这个东西以及你喜欢的原因，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。简单介绍我最喜欢的东西是什么以及我是从什么途径得到这一东西来引出重点介绍喜欢的原因；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，介绍喜欢的原因以及做出总结。表达我对这个东西的喜欢，之后也会好好珍惜。
[亮点词汇]
①childhood 童年
②sweet memories甜蜜的回忆
③remind sb. of sth. 提醒某人关于某事
[高分句型]
①I remembered when I was young, I was scared at night. （when引导的时间状语从句）
20．Dear Chris,
I’m glad to know that you’re interested in Chinese social manners. China is a country with a long history, so there are many customs here. Let me tell you some of them. Firstly, you are supposed to shake hands when you meet someone for the first time. Secondly, you should bring a gift when you are invited to a party and be sure to arrive on time or a few minutes earlier. Thirdly, when you eat meals with others, it’s rude to point at others with your chopsticks. And don’t make noise when you have your soup. I hope the above is helpful.
Please feel free to ask for more information.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并注意适当添加细节，突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍中国人与别人第一次见面应注意的事；
第二步，介绍被邀请去别人家做客应注意的事情；
第三步，介绍吃饭时应注意的事情。
[亮点词汇]
①shake hands握手
②be supposed to应该
[高分句型]
①Thirdly, when you eat meals with others, it’s rude to point at others with your chopsticks.（时间状语从句）
②China is a country with a long history, so there are many customs here.（并列句）