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高中英语应用文写作
观点议论类
汇报人:
CONTENTS
目录
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议论文(1)——只呈现一种观点型
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议论文(2)——正反观点型
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语言特点
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写作要求
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议论文(3)——利弊对比型
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议论文(4)——解决问题型
观点议论类应用文写作概览
观点议论类应用文写作要求针对某个问题、某件事或某种现象等进行分析、评论,表明自己的观点、立场、态度、看法和主张等。“周围的环境、学校生活、兴趣与爱好、个人情感、人际关系、计划与愿望、语言学习、世界与环境、热点话题、文学与艺术”等话题的写作都会涉及“观点议论类写作”。
语言特点
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语言特点
(1)时态较为统一:多用现在时,强调语言表达的客观性, 但阐述具体事例时用过去时;
(2)主要人称: 一般为第一人称;
(3)较多使用的词语和句子
条件状语从句、让步状语从句和情态动词, 名词性从句、定语从句、倒装句、It句式等复杂长句与短句的交替使用,非谓语动词的运用、拟人、比喻等多种修辞手法的合理使用。
(4)使用有举例、推理等含义的连接词和过渡词,常用的有:for example(例如),since(既然), now that(既然), therefore(因此), however(然而), in that case(在那种情况下)等;
写作要求
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写作要求
(1)明确观点:通常在第一段提出,用词的贴切与得体,注重词汇精准积累,自然表达要点;
(2)观点阐述要充分:
展示数据 (list data)、提供事例 (give examples)、借助常识 (common sense),利用亲身经历等(first-hand experience),表对比 (make comparisons),引用 (using quotes),制作图表 (making graphs),给出解释 (give explanation)
(3)层次应清楚:观点陈述层次要清晰,使读者一目了然;
(4)要点全覆盖,在第三段结尾需要重申自己的观点。
话题词汇
个人选择:
give up; follow; respect; stick to= insist on坚持; in favor of
活动感受:
have a good time; have a lot of fun; enjoy; rewarding and fulfilling
重申态度:
…… are worth sticking to because they can benefit us all.
表达观点:
personally; in my opinion; as far as I am concerned; from my perspective
话题词汇
表列举:
first, second, third, last; in the first / second / third place; above all首先; first of all
表举例:
for example, for instance, such as, a case in point
表补充:
besides, in addition, moreover, what’s more, furthermore, on top of this
话题词汇
表转折让步:
but, however, nevertheless, yet, in spite of, despite, though, although, even though/if
表对比:
on the one hand, … on the other hand; For one thing, … for another
表原因:
because, as, since, because of, now that, thanks to, due to, owing to, as a result of
话题词汇
表结果:
therefore, thus, as a result, so (that), consequently
表结论:
in a word, in brief, in general, in short, in conclusion, on the whole, to sum up, all in all
表解释::
That is (to say), namely, in other words
议论文(1)——只呈现一种观点型
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议论文(1)——只呈现一种观点型
构思:三段论
Para.1 审清题目要求,从以上两种做法中选择一种,表明观点;
Para.2 以具体事例阐述你选择的理由;
Para 3 重申态度。
议论文(1)——只呈现一种观点型
第一段:引出话题+ 呈现自己的观点
1. Recently, the problem of … has aroused people’s concern.
最近,……问题已引起人们的关注。
2. The Internet has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. It has brought a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.
互联网已在我们的生活中扮演着越来越重要的角色,它给我们带来了许多好处,但也产生了一些严重的问题。
3. The opinions concerning/anbout/on this hot topic vary from person to person.
人们对此有不同看法
4. People’s views on … vary from person to person. Some hold that …. However, others believe/argue/insist that …
人们对……的观点因人而异。有些人认为……,然而其他人却认为……
5. Attitudes towards … vary from person to person.
人们对待……的态度因人而异
6.Some/Most are in favor of the idea that...
一些/大多数赞成……的观点
7.People who are for/against the idea think that...
支持/反对这个想法的人认为
8. Some people oppose the view that ….
有些人反对这样的观点
议论文(1)——只呈现一种观点型
第一段:引出话题+ 呈现自己的观点
议论文(1)——只呈现一种观点型 第二段 (分论点+细节支撑)
1.逻辑细节——补充条件、原因、结果、目的等逻辑性内容
First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as you’ll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students.
2.事实细节——列举具体的实例;补充相关信息
I like reading books, such as novels, short stories, magazines and newspapers.
I'd like to seek a pen pal who is interested in traveling just like me. If possible, we can travel together or share traveling experiences.
3.数据细节——罗列相关数据 (考场作文中不推荐)
Students took an active part in the writing competition. Totally 758 students submitted their works and 100 of them won a prize because of their creative minds and expressive words.
4.引用——引用谚语或名人名言,增加说服力和可读性
Chance favors the prepared mind. I firmly believe that you will succeed as long as you spare no effort for it.不遗余力地付出
议论文(1)——只呈现一种观点型 第二段 (分论点+细节支撑)
其他句式
1. This phenomenon exists for a number of reasons. First, … Second, … Third, …
这一现象的存在是有许多原因的。首先,……;第二,……;第三,……
2. Why did … For one thing … For another … Perhaps the primary reason is …
为什么会……?一个原因是……,令一个原因是……。或许其主要原因是……
3. I quite agree with the statement that … The reasons are chiefly as follows.
我十分赞同这一论述,即……,其主要原因如下。
4. It is high time that we put an end to …. 该是我们停止……的时候了。
议论文(1)——只呈现一种观点型 第二段 (分论点+细节支撑)
5. It is time to take the advice of … and to put special emphasis on the improvement of …
是该采取……的建议和特别强调……的发展的时候了。
6. There is no doubt that enough concern must be paid to the problem of …
毫无疑问,对……问题应予以足够的重视。
7. Every coin has two sides. 事物都有两面性。 …
8. Only in this way can we … 只有这样,我们才能……
9. It is urgent that immediate measures should be taken to stop the situation.
很紧迫的是,应立即采取措施阻止这一事态的发展。
第三段结尾: 重申自己的观点
表示总结:in short; in brief; in conclusion; in a/one word; to sum up; all in all; on the whole; in general
增强语气:There’s no doubt that…; There’s no denying that…
强调句: It was…..that…..
双重否定: Never/By no means/ On no account can/should we do… 我们绝不能做…
第三段结尾: 重申自己的观点
1. Therefore, I am fully convinced that ... 因此,我深信……
2. All in all, I firmly believe / hold the idea that … 总之,我坚信……
3. From what has been discussed above, we may come to the conclusion that …
根据上面所探讨的,我们可以得出这个结论……
4. I cannot entirely agree with the idea that … 我无法完全同意这一观点……
5. Personally, I am standing on the side of … 就个人而言,我站在……的一边。
6. In my opinion, it is more advisable to do … than to do.
在我个人看来,做……比做……更明智。
7. Here are some suggestions for handling … 这是如何处理……的一些建议。…
2025 年 3 月温州二模---投稿---社区服务是否该列入毕业条件 假定你是高中生李华,你校英语报正在开展关于“社区服务是否该列入毕业条件”的讨论,请你写一篇文章投稿,内容包括:1.你的观点,2. 你的理由。
spark widespread debate:引发广泛争论
step out of one's comfort zone:走出舒适区
engage in:参与
diverse backgrounds:不同背景
cultivate a sense of:培养一种…… 感
social responsibility:社会责任
carry over into:延续到
make a difference:有影响,起作用
be crucial for sb. to do sth.:对某人做某事至关重要
wholeheartedly support:全心全意支持
Should Community Service be a Requirement for Graduation
In the ongoing conversation about high school graduation prerequisites, the proposal of making community service a compulsory part has become a hot - button issue. From my perspective, it is an excellent idea to make community service a graduation requirement.
Firstly, community service broadens our horizons. Through various volunteer activities, we are exposed to different aspects of society. For instance, when we help out at a local food bank, we get to know about the food insecurity problem in our community. This knowledge enriches our understanding of the real world and helps us become more well - rounded individuals.
Secondly, it builds character. Facing challenges during community service, such as dealing with difficult situations in a community garden project, teaches us perseverance and teamwork. These qualities are essential for our future success, whether in further education or in the workplace.
In conclusion, making community service a graduation requirement is beneficial. It broadens our knowledge, builds our character, and prepares us better for life after high school. Thus, I strongly advocate for its inclusion.
深圳一模
Dear Mr. Green,
I am writing to share my ideas on the logo design for our English literature reading room. I would like to choose “Open a Book, Open a World”. This logo is really appealing. It vividly conveys the idea that when we open a book, we are entering a brand - new world full of knowledge and imagination. It encourages students to explore the vast world within books and broadens our horizons. That's why I think it is the most suitable logo for our reading room.
2025 年 3 月广州一模---看法+理由---实体书店是否消失?
学校英语俱乐部计划在“世界读书日”举行英文演讲比赛,主题是“实体书店是否会消失 ”请你写一篇英文演讲稿,内容包括:1.你的看法;2. 你的理由。
Will Physical Bookstores Disappear
Today we gather to discuss a pressing question(一个紧迫的问题): Will Physical Bookstores Disappear I am convinced that it will not.(表明观点)
Take the Rainbow Bookstore from our textbook as an example. It was once on the edge of (在……的边缘) closing in that most young people preferred reading e-books and were attracted by online discounts(被网上折扣所吸引). However, the store, in Jennifer’s capable, creative hands, transformed into (变成)a place for literature-loving members of the community to get together. Now featuring(具有...特色) a café selling organic food and cultural gatherings—book readings, poetry recitals, even jazz concerts, it offers people a sensory engagement(感官体验) that cannot be downloaded.
2025 年 3 月广州一模---看法+理由---实体书店是否消失?
学校英语俱乐部计划在“世界读书日”举行英文演讲比赛,主题是“实体书店是否会消失 ”请你写一篇英文演讲稿,内容包括:1.你的看法;2. 你的理由。
As evidenced by Harvard research(正如哈佛大学的研究证明那样), 68% readers cherish the smell of books(珍惜书香)—a sensory pleasure no e-reader can produce.
The Bookstore is a shining example of physical bookstores’ survival in such an era. By blending the scent of paper with digital convenience(通过将纸张的气味与数字的便利相结合)—hosting VR book launches or AI-curated readings—these spaces will evolve into (发展成)third places for soul nourishment.
议论文(2)——正反观点型
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议论文整篇模版范文: 正反观点都要涵盖
Para1:主题观点+阐述+论点过渡
There is a widespread concern over the issue whether/that……But it is well known that the opinions concerning this hot topic vary from person to person. It can be illustrated from the following points. (论点过渡)
Para2: 分论点陈述正反论点+ 各类支撑细节
Some people believe (正方观点) There are two factors contributing to this attitude. In the first place, (原因一) .Furthermore,(原因二) .However,the flip side方面 of the coin is (反方观点).For one thing, (原因一).For anothe, (原因二).
Para3: 表达个人观点
In my opinion , (个人观点).First of all,_________.In addition,_________. In a word,only through...can we have a bright future. 总之,只有通过……我们才能有一个光明的未来.
探索太空正反方假设你是李华,举行了一次班会,班会的主题是:太空探险的意义。请结合下表内容,用英语给校报写一篇文章,客观地介绍班会上同学们讨论的情况并表达你自己的观点。
赞同的理由:1.获得新知识;2.从太空取得新资源;3.扩大人类未来的生存空间。
反对的理由:1.耗资巨大;2.宇航员的安全问题。
你自己的观点:……
Outer Space Explorations,YES or NO
We had an argument over whether it is necessary to carry out outer space explorations at a class meeting the other day. The opinions concerning this hot topic vary from person to person.
Some of us think it important to research the outer space because. First of all,people can get a better understanding of the outer space through their exploration. Second, new resources can be found there for human being, which are beneficial for your future generations. Third, this exploration can possibly bring about new living space for human life in the near future.
However, others are strongly against it. They believe that it takes so much money to do this kind of exploration, which is not worth the value. Besides, it is very dangerous for astronauts to do such work in the outer space.
In my view,people should be pioneering and therefore such explorations into the outer space are worth trying out.
(2025届浙江省绍兴市高三下学期二模英语试题)近期,你将参加学校组织的英语主题征文活动。请结合自身经历,就“技术支撑下的个性化学习”的主题写一篇短文,内容包括: (1) 陈述观点; (2) 分享体验。
My View on Technology-Supported Personalized Learning
Nowadays, more learners are applying technology to learning. However, some are not totally happy with AI lessons, since AI lacks natural responses. Personally, AI-driven platforms offer tailored learning experiences that adapt to individual needs.
From my experience, using AI tools to access resources has made learning more flexible and effective. Thanks to various language learning apps, I could practice listening at any time. Meanwhile, the apps also analyzed my mistakes, allowing me to focus on my weak areas.
In conclusion, by embracing technology, we can create a better learning environment, empowering every student to reach their full potential.
议论文(3)——利弊对比型
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这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状,再对比事物本身的利弊,有时也会单从一个角度(利或弊)出发,最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度(或对事物前景提出预测)。
一、文章结构
1.说明事物现状;2.事物本身的优缺点(或一方面);3.你对现状(或前景)的看法。
二、写作模板
Nowadays,there is a widespread concern over (the issue that) ______________ (讨论议题).In fact,there are both advantages and disadvantages in it.
Generally speaking,it is widely believed that there are several positive aspects as follows. Firstly,_______________ (优点一).And secondly,________________(优点二).Just as a popular saying goes,“Every coin has two sides”,_______________(讨论议题) is no exception. To begin with,_______________ (缺点一).In addition,_______________ (缺点二).
To sum up,we should try to bring the advantages of (讨论议题) _______________ into full play,and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time. In that case,we will definitely make better use of the ___ (讨论议题).
微信学习群的利弊分析微信学习群越来越受人们的欢迎。对此,不同的人持有不同的观点。请你根据以下提示,用英语给某英语报刊写一篇短文,并谈谈你的看法。字数80词
Nowadays, WeChat study groups is enjoying an increasing popularity among people. However, different people hold different opinions.
Some people advocate that people should study in WeChat study groups. Firstly, people can obtain new knowledge that they can’t get from books. Secondly, learners can make full use of their spare time to study.
However, others oppose this opinion. They emphasize that the groups are poorly managed, leading to much false information. Besides, studying by joining WeChat study groups is a waste of time. We might begin playing online games the instant we switch on the computer.
Taking everything into consideration, I have a preference for studying in WeChat study groups. After all, I can gain much motivation from peers and develop friendship with a lot of friends.
如今,微信学习群在人们中越来越受欢迎。然而,不同的人持有不同的意见。
有些人主张人们应该在微信学习群里学习。首先,人 们可以获得从书本上得不到的新知识。其次,学习者可以充分利用业余时间进行学习。然而,其他人反对这一观点。他们强调,这些团体管理不善,导致了许多虚假信息。此外,加入微信学习群学习是浪费时间。我们可能一打开电脑就开始玩网络游戏。
综合考虑,我更喜欢在微信学习群里学习。毕竟,我可以从同龄人那里获得很多动力,并与很多朋友发展友谊。
(2025届安徽省淮南市高三下学期二模英语试题)假定你是李华,你的英国网友Adam想向你了解高中生如何在周末利用AI进行自主学习。请你用英语给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
(1)简要介绍如何利用AI进行自主学习;
(2)分析利用AI进行自主学习的利弊。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Adam,
I am delighted to know that you’re curious about how to use AI for self-study on weekends. We can use AI tools like smart learning apps, language programs with virtual tutors, or study helpers that offer timely assistance. These tools adjust tasks based on personal progress and offer flexible learning time.
While AI improves study effectiveness and caters to individual needs, depending too much on it may weaken problem-solving skills. Also, long screen time could negatively impact our health.
AI is like a useful friend, but we must use it wisely.
Yours,
Li Hua
议论文(3)——解决问题型
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一、段落框架: 第一段:引出现象,并指出这种现象的后果
(1)Recently the rise in problem of/phenomenon of...has caused/aroused/captured public/popular/wide/worldwide concern.
(2) Recently the issue/problem of the phenomenon of...has been brought into focus/has been brought into public attention.
(3) Nowadays, there is a growing concern about the problem/phenomenon that...
(4) Nowadays, an increasing number of people come to realize/be aware of the importance of...
(5) Nowadays, more and more people are concerned about the problem of...
第二段:提出解决的办法
(1) We should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing,___________(解决方法一).For another,_________(解决方法二).Finally,___________(解决方法三).
(2)It is essential that proper/effective measures should be taken to reverse this situation/stop the trend.
(3)It is hoped/suggested that considerable/great efforts should be made to...
(4)There is no easy/immediate solution/approach to the issue of...but...might be beneficial/helpful.
第三段:总结这样做的好处: Only in this way can we...
二、写作模板
Currently,there is a widespread concern over (the issue that) _____________ (讨论议题).It is really an important concern to every one of us. As a result,we must spare no effort to take some measures to solve this problem.
As we know,there are many steps which can be taken to solve this problem. First of all,_____________(途径一).In addition,another way contributing to success of solving the problem is _____________ (途径二).
After all, to solve the problem of _____________ (讨论议题),we should find a number of various ways. But as far as I am concerned,I would prefer to solve the problem in this way,that is to say, _____________ (自己的方法).
一、投稿:校园是否设立涂鸦墙-正方观点 浙江省嘉兴市2025届高三下学期二模英语试题
你校英文报“Campus Culture”栏目正在开展关于是否设立涂鸦墙(graffiti wall)讨论,请你写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:1.你的见解;2.你的建议。
Should We Establish a Graffiti Wall
写作注意要点
1.基本时态为一般现在时。
2.写作思路:三段论。第一段陈述见解(要点1);第二段提出建议(要点2);第三段总结观点。
Should We Establish a Graffiti Wall
I'm all for establishing a graffiti wall in our campus.Not only does the graffiti wall function as a platform for students to showcase their creativity, it also elevates the school's cultural atmosphere.
To facilitate its healthy operation as expected, it is recommended that our school set up special graffiti areas on the side of the teaching building or around the playground, and establish specific usage guidelines.We can also introduce monthly themes ranging from environmental protection to friendship, to encourage more thoughtful artworks.Equally important is to establish a student management team to guarantee the daily maintenance and administration of the graffiti wall.
The graffiti wall is expected to emerge as the most dynamic cultural landmark on campus.
(2025 年广州零模---看法+建议---AI 技术辅助英语作文批改)假定你是李华,外教 Ryan 打算使用 AI 技术辅助英语作文批改,并向同学们征询意见。请你给外教写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 你的看法;2. 你的建议注意:
1. 词数 80 左右;2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
I hope this email finds you well. I have some thoughts on using AI for grading our English essays.
While I see the benefits of faster feedback(快速的反馈), I am concerned about the accuracy and reliability of Al in understanding the subtle details of our writing. AI might miss implied meanings(深意), humorous expressions(诙谐的表达), or the creativity in our essays, leading to incorrect evaluations.
To address these concerns(为了解决这些担忧), I suggest only using Al as a supplementary tool(辅助工具). It can provide initial feedback on grammar, spelling, and basic structure(语法、拼写和基本结构), while you can review the content, coherence, and overall quality(内容、连贯性和整体质量). This combined approach would ensure a more comprehensive and fair assessment.
Thank you for considering my perspective. I look forward to your feedback.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
THE END
谢谢