(期末考点培优)专题15 书面表达-2024-2025学年七年级英语下册期末复习考点培优专项鲁教版(五四学制)(含答案解析)

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2024-2025学年七年级英语下册期末复习专项鲁教版(五四学制)(期末考点培优)专题15 书面表达
学校:___________姓名:___________班级:___________考号:___________
1.请将短文写在答题卡相应的位置上。
“爆竹声中一岁除,春风送暖入屠苏,千门万户曈曈日,总把新桃换旧符。”春节是中华民族最盛大、最神圣的传统节日,也是中华传统文化的瑰宝。春节期间,人们会举行各种庆祝活动,如贴春联、放鞭炮、家人团聚、吃年夜饭、给压岁钱、穿新衣等。你的英国笔友Mary想了解关于中国春节的一些情况,请你给她写封回信,先简要介绍一下春节,然后讲述一下今年你是如何过节的。
WORD BANK 正月初一 the first day of the first lunar month 除夕夜 the Eve of the Spring Festival 春晚 the Spring Festival Gala 贴春联 paste Spring Festival couplets 放鞭炮 set off firecrackers 压岁钱 lucky money 团圆 reunion
内容包括:
1. When is the Spring Festival
2. Where did you spend your last Spring Festival
3. How’s the weather during the festival
4. What did you do to celebrate it
5. How did you feel about the festival
要求:
1. 不少于80词,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
2. 文中不能出现真实人名和校名。
3. 参考词汇仅供参考。
Dear Mary,
I’m so happy to get your letter. You want to know something about the Spring Festival. I’m writing to tell you about it. The Spring Festival is the most important festival for Chinese people. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope you can come to China and experience this wonderful festival with me someday. I’m sure you’ll fall in love with it.
Yours,
Li Hua
2.假设你是李华。作为学生会主席,你正在筹备学校放假前的“校园劳动日”活动,并想邀请交换生 Peter参加。请你用英文写一封电子邮件告知他活动内容及意义。
提示词语: sweep, water trees, joy, duty
提示问题: ●What activity do you plan to do on School Labor Day
●What can you get from the activity
Dear Peter, How is everything going I’m writing to invite you to join in our School Labor Day before summer vacation. Looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3.根据所给提示,完成一篇不少于50词的英语文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
快乐的暑假将要开始了,你一定有很多计划和想法吧!假如你是李华,请以“My Summer Holiday”为题写一篇短文,介绍你暑假计划做哪些活动以及做这些活动的原因。
提示词语:summer holiday, do homework, read books, housework, travel
提示问题:·What are you going to do in your summer holiday
·Why do you want to do these things
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4.本学期即将结束,在过去的一学期里,自己有哪些不足之处?下学期你将如何改进?请你根据以下提示写一篇英语短文。
要点提示:
1. What are your problems this term (study, health…)
2. What are your plans for the new term
写作要求:
1. 不少于 80词 (开头已经给出,不计入总词数);
2. 包含所给提示内容,可适当发挥;
3. 语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确,书写工整;
4. 文中不得出现真实学校、姓名等信息。
The term will be over. When I look back, I find some problems.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5.假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Amanda对中国的传统节日很感兴趣,她来信询问有关情况。请你根据下面的提示和要求,给她回一封信,介绍一个你最喜欢的中国传统节日。
提示:
① What’s your favorite festival
② When is your favorite festival
③ What do people do in the festival
具体要求:
1. 表达清楚,语句通顺,意思连贯,书写规范;
2. 包含所有信息,可适当发挥;
3. 短文中不得出现真实的地名或人名等信息;
4. 词数:70词左右。
Dear Amanda,
How are the things going I’m very glad that you are interested in Chinese festivals.
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I hope all is well with you!
Yours,
Li Hua
6.假设你是Li Ping,以下是你的美国笔友Tom发给你的邮件。请阅读邮件后回复。
Dear Li Ping, It was Dragon Boat Festival a few days ago. How did you and your family celebrate it this year What did you do What did you eat Write to me soon. Yours, Tom
注意:
(1)回复须回答邮件中的所有问题,可适当发挥。
(2)文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
(3)词数60个左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Tom,
Glad to get your email.
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Yours,
Li Ping
7.假设你是Mary,你邀请好友Tom来参加你明天的生日会。他不能参加并发了email来说明原因。请根据邮件内容进行回复,并给出合理化建议。
Dear Mary,
Thanks for inviting me to your birthday party. I’d love to come, but I’m very ill. I stayed up late to play computer games last night. Now I have a cold and have a headache and a sore throat. I feel terrible now. Anyway, I want to say “Happy birthday to you!”
Yours,
Tom
要求:
1. 语句通顺;表达正确;建议合理;
2. 文中不得出现与个人有关的真实信息;
3. 词数:100词左右。文章开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
I’m sorry to hear that you are ill.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope you’ll get better soon.
Yours,
Mary
8.假如你是来自英国的交换生Sally,请你为学校附近的蓝月亮餐厅写一则广告,介绍它的特色菜。
Blue Moon Restaurant
Specials Tomato and egg soup Beef and potatoes Vegetable salad
Prices 10 22 15
写作要求:
(1)短文应包含所有要点,可适当发挥;
(2)词数:60词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(3)文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称。
Welcome to Blue Moon Restaurant.
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We’re waiting for you!
9.愉快的暑假即将到来, 为了帮助同学们合理规划自己的暑假,学校英语角就“如何让暑假生活更有趣”组织同学们展开讨论。请你根据下表提示,以“How To Make My Summer Holiday More Interesting ”为题,用英语写一篇短文,谈谈你的想法和计划。
Study *do homework... *read books...
Activities *have outdoor activities... *raise a pet... *visit an old people’s home...
Plans *plans for the coming Grade 8... (不少于两点)
要求:
1.不少于90词, 开头已给出, 不计入总词数;
2.短文应包括所给信息,并适当发挥;
3.表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
4.不可使用真实的校名、姓名和地名等。
How To Make My Summer Holiday More Interesting
The Summer Holiday is coming. I will become a Grade 8 student soon. How can I make my Summer Holiday more interesting
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10.假定你是李辉,是你校科学社团的负责人。一个英国学生代表团下周将来你校访问,学校安排你介绍一下社团活动。请你结合以下要点用英文写一篇发言稿。
要点如下:
(1)活动内容 (2)未来计划 (3)发出邀请
注意:
(1)词数 60~80,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数:
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
参考词汇:做实验 do experiments
Dear friends,
I’m Li Hui. I’m happy to share something about our science club with you.
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Thank you.
11.你是学生李华,暑假即将来临,下周你班英文课将开展暑期旅行计划分享活动,请你根据以下提示,写一篇英文稿,分享你的计划。
想去的地方 如城市名称、地理位置等。
计划的活动 至少列出3点, 如参观著名景点等。
期待的收获 至少1 点。
参考词汇:著名景点 places of interest
要求:1.词数80左右 (开头已经给出,不计入总词数内);
2.中文不得出现真实姓名及学校名称;
3.可适当增加细节,以使语句通顺、条理清楚,意义连贯;
4.书写规范,卷面整洁。
My travel plan for the summer holiday
The summer holiday is coming soon.
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12.每个人都有自己的爱好, 一些人甚至希望将自己的爱好变成未来的职业。假定你是学生李辉,即将参加学校组织的演讲比赛,请根据下列提示谈谈如何把爱好变成职业。
要点如下:(1)介绍你的爱好;
(2)此爱好对未来职业的帮助;
(3)表达希望。
注意:(1)词数为80-100;开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称等。
Dear friends,
Everyone has a bobby and some people even want to change it into a future career. My hobby is _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
13.初中的第一个学年里,你认真学习做人做事,在学习、运动、文娱、劳动、人际交往等方面都有收获。请你用英语写一篇短文,给学校英文周刊“My Voice”专栏投稿,分享你的成长与计划。
内容要点:
1. 你现在会做的两件事情(如学习、运动、文娱或劳动等方面);
2. 你平时如何做这些事情;
3. 你未来提升自我的计划。
注意:
1. 词数为80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4. 短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:improve(v.提高), speak English(说英语), play basketball(打篮球), wash dishes(洗碗)
My life in middle school is very interesting and wonderful. I can learn many things. Now, I can ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
14.新学期开始了,红星学校七年级开展了校篮球队的队长竞选活动。假如你是参加竞选的王伟同学,请用表格中的提示词表述你过去打篮球的经历,以及现在能为校篮球队做的事情。
要求:
(1)词数:40~60个。
(2)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
Name Wang Wei
过去的经历 enjoy, start, join
现在能做的事情 score, win
Hello, everyone! My name is Wang Wei. I’d like to be the captain (队长) of our school basketball team.
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Choose me as the captain of our school basketball team and everyone in our team can be the best!
15.假设你是李华,最近收到外国好友John的电子邮件。请你阅读后回复他的邮件,可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
Dear Li Hua, How’s it going I’m so excited that I am going to study in your school next month. Can you tell me about your school life For example, what’s your favorite subject What do you usually do after school One more thing, I want to know about your summer plans. I hope to have a trip with you in China. Best wishes! Write to me soon. Yours, John
注意:
(1)内容须回答所给邮件中的所有问题,可适当发挥。
(2)邮件中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
(3)词数70词左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear John,
Everything goes well. I am glad to hear that you will study in my school.
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Best wishes! Hope to see you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
16.一岁一端午,一年一安康!端午节作为中国重要节日之一,也是一家人欢聚的日子。假如你是李华,今年已经和家人度过了一个愉快的端午节。你的网友Peter想知道今年端午节这天你是如何度过的。请你参考以下内容要点,用英语写封电子邮件,分享你的愉快节日。
内容要点:
(1)我和父母看望了祖父母;
(2)和祖父母一起做了很多有趣的事(①观看了龙舟比赛;②包了美味的粽子;③……);
(3)你的感受。
写作要求:
1.将节日名称补充在首句;
2.包含所有要点,可适当增加细节,使行文连贯;
3.词数70 左右(首句已给出,不计入总词数);
4.不得在文章中使用题目以外的校名,不得透露班级、人名等个人信息。
参考词汇:Dragon Boat Festival(端午节), dragon boat race(龙舟比赛), delicious zongzi(美味的粽子)
Dear Peter,
Thank you for your last e-mail. I’m very happy to tell you something about my
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I hope all is well with you!
Yours,
Li Hua
17.面对即将来临的暑假,你有哪些打算?假如你是李华,你们学校英语广播站正在举行征文比赛,请根据下表提示内容以“Plans for the Summer Vacation”为题写一篇英语短文参赛。
Plans for the Summer Vacation 做家务劳动……
与父母多交流……
参与志愿活动……
多运动,多读书……
……
要求:
1. 书写规范认真,词数不少于80词;
2. 包含内容提示,语句通顺,表达正确,可适当发挥;
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
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18.愉快的暑假即将来临,为了更好规划暑假生活,现校刊英文专栏以“My Summer Holiday Plan”为题征稿,请根据以下提示,用英语写一篇短文投稿。内容包括:
1.学习计划;
2.运动计划;
3.……计划;
4.你对暑假的期望。
注意:
1. 词数在70词左右;
2.可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4.短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇: homework (n. 家庭作业); do sports (做运动);meaningful (adj. 有意义的)
My Summer Holiday Plan
Summer holiday is coming.
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19.中国拥有悠久的历史和丰富的传统文化,中国传统节日更是传统文化的重要组成部分。假如你是李华,最近,你校英文杂志社发起了以“弘扬中华传统文化,畅谈中国传统佳节”为主题的征文活动,请你以“My Favorite Chinese Festival”为题,用英语写一篇短文投稿。
1. 内容提示:
①你最喜欢的传统节日是什么;
②讲述该节日主要有哪些庆祝方式;
③说说你对这个节日的感受及喜爱它的原因。
2. 写作要求:
①语句通顺,意思连贯,包含所有要点,可适当发挥;
②文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
③词数不少于 60。
My Favorite Chinese Festival
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20.学校组织一场去山上的school trip,假如你是你们班的班长,请根据提示写一则英语旅行规则及注意事项。
要点:
1. 明天上午8点在校门口集合,不能迟到;
2. 每个人都需要穿运动鞋,在山上行走时不能走道路的边缘。
3. 不能单独行动,不要去危险的地方,带上水和帽子。
要求:
1. 文中应该包括以上信息,可适当发挥,以使行文连贯,书写规范;
2. 文中不得出现涉及考生真实信息的人名、校名等;
3. 词数:80词左右。参考词汇:edge 边缘
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参考答案及试题解析
1.例文
Dear Mary,
I’m so happy to get your letter. You want to know something about the Spring Festival. I’m writing to tell you about it. The Spring Festival is the most important festival for Chinese people.
It usually falls on the first day of the first lunar month. This year, we spent the festival at my grandparents’ home. The weather was quite cold, but it didn’t stop us from having fun. On the Eve of the Spring Festival, we pasted Spring Festival couplets and set off firecrackers. We also watched the Spring Festival Gala together. On the day of the festival, we had a big family reunion and enjoyed a delicious dinner. My parents gave me some lucky money, which made me very happy. Overall, I felt joyful and deeply connected with my family during the festival.
I hope you can come to China and experience this wonderful festival with me someday. I’m sure you’ll fall in love with it.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,简单介绍春节的时间;
第二步,具体描述今年的春节你是如何度过的;
第三步,最后书写总结。
[亮点词汇]
① stop sb from doing sth阻止某人做某事
② set off firecrackers放烟花
③ be connected with与……相连
[高分句型]
My parents gave me some lucky money, which made me very happy.(定语从句)
2.One possible version:
Dear Peter,
How is everything going I’m writing to invite you to join in our School Labor Day before summer vacation. We will work together to sweep floors in the classrooms and pick up rubbish on the playground. In the afternoon, we will plant flowers and water the school vegetable garden.
I’m sure School Labor Day can give us a chance to experience the joy of labor. And it’s our duty to build a beautiful school. I believe we’ll have a meaningful day.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态为一般现在时和一般将来时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏提示中的要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,写出活动要做哪些内容。
第二步,写出这次活动会给我们带来的好处。
[亮点词汇]
①join in加入
②pick up rubbish捡垃圾
③give us a chance给我们一个机会
[高分句型]
①We will work together to sweep floors in the classrooms and pick up rubbish on the playground.(and连接并列成分)
②I believe we’ll have a meaningful day.(宾语从句)
3.例文
Summer holiday is coming. I prefer to travel with my parents to relax myself completely after the long-time study. I’ll choose to go somewhere interesting so that I can see the beautiful scenery and sense the nature. As a saying goes, travel is a great source of real knowledge. During the journey, I can learn more about history, culture and so on. What’s more, I’ll meet many different kinds of people and communicate with them. Traveling is also a good way to bring the family closer. I’ll have more sweet memories with my parents. That’s why I will choose a meaningful trip during this summer vacation. Of course, I also have to preview some lessons because I want to get better grades. Finally, I also want to play some games with my friends to relax myself.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般将来时”;
③提示:介绍暑期打算做的事情并说明原因;注意适当发挥,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍暑期打算做的事情;
第二步,阐述原因。
[亮点词汇]
①and so on 等等
②different kinds of 不同种类的
③relax oneself 放松自我
[高分句型]
①I’ll choose to go somewhere interesting so that I can see the beautiful scenery and sense the nature.(so that引导的目的状语从句)
②Of course, I also have to preview some lessons because I want to get better grades.(because引导的原因状语从句)
4.例文
The term will be over. When I look back, I find some problems. My English is not as good as Chinese or math. And I often have sore eyes this term. So I will make some changes next term. First, I’m going to join my classmates to learn English in a study group. Practice makes perfect. I believe I’ll get better grades if I practice it more. Second, I won’t watch videos on my phone after finishing my homework and I’ll take up a hobby to exercise. More exercise and less screen time will help me keep healthy.
In a word, I will try my best to be a better person.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:本文应使用“一般现在时”与“一般将来时”为主;
③提示:写作要点应注意题干给出的“介绍过去的一个学期自己的不足之处”并适当补充,使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍学期即将结束,自己发现了自己的不足之处;
第二步,根据题干中的要点,详细介绍自己的不足之处在哪里,以及以后的计划;
第三步,总结,表示要继续努力并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①take up开始从事
②in a word总而言之
[高分句型]
①I believe I’ll get better grades if I practice it more.(宾语从句,if引导的条件状语从句)
②Second, I won’t watch videos on my phone after finishing my homework and I’ll take up a hobby to exercise.(and表并列)
5.例文
Dear Amanda,
How are the things going I’m very glad that you are interested in Chinese festivals. Now let me tell one of the traditional festivals to you—the Mid-Autumn Festival.
The Mid-Autumn Festival is one of the most important traditional festivals in China. It is on August 15th in the Chinese lunar calendar. For Chinese people, all family members get together for a big dinner. At night, people enjoy traditional festival food such as mooncakes and enjoy the moon. Older people often tell stories about the festival, including the famous legend of Chang’e and Houyi.
In a word, both children and adults all like this festival because it is always great fun. I hope you can visit China and celebrate a happy Mid-Autumn Day with me next year!
I hope all is well with you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,是一封书信;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中国传统节日的介绍要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表达收到对方来信的心情和想要介绍中国传统节日的意愿;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容,从“节日名称、时间、习俗”等几个方面重点介绍中国传统节日;
第三步,书写结语,表达自己的欢迎和祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①let sb. do sth.让某人做某事
②lunar calendar农历,阴历
③in a word总而言之
[高分句型]
①The Mid-Autumn Festival is one of the most important traditional festivals in China.(one of+the+最高级+名词复数“最……的……之一”)
②I hope you can visit China and celebrate a happy Mid-Autumn Day with me next year!(省略that的宾语从句)
6.例文
Dear Tom,
Glad to get your email. I had a relaxing and happy Dragon Boat Festival.
We had three days off and I decided to stay at home to have a good rest. I didn’t go out to watch the boat race. My grandparents made zongzi and sent them to us. Dad cooked them. They were more delicious than the ones in supermarkets. My mum made special small bags for dad and me during the festival. I love the smell and wear it every day. It’s really relaxing to take our time to have good meals and talk at home. Look at the pictures I sent you. You will understand how happy I was during the festival.
Yours,
Li Ping
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”;
③提示:邮件开头以及要点已经给出,按照Tom的邮件内容进行回复,可以适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接邮件开头,引出话题;
第二步,根据Tom的邮件内提出的问题进行回答,介绍你和家人今年如何度过端午节,包括参加的活动和所吃的食物等,可列举具体的事例;
第三步,抒发端午节带来的感受并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①decide to do sth.决定做某事
②have a good rest好好休息
[高分句型]
①We had three days off and I decided to stay at home to have a good rest.(and连接两个并列分句)
②It’s really relaxing to take our time to have good meals and talk at home.(it作形式主语,动词不定式作真正的主语)
③Look at the pictures I sent you.(省略引导词的定语从句)
④You will understand how happy I was during the festival. (how引导的宾语从句)
7.例文
Dear Tom,
I’m sorry to hear that you are ill. Are you feeling better now Take some medicine on time, drink enough water and have a good rest, and I think you will get better soon. If you still feel terrible, you should go to a doctor.
I’d like to share with you some tips about how to keep healthy. Firstly, no sports, no life. You should take more exercise. Secondly, you can eat more fruit and vegetables. What’s more, to be healthy, you should get enough sleep, so don’t stay up late and keep away from computer games from now on.
I hope you’ll get better soon.
Yours,
Mary
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封回信,属于电子邮件写作;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:信件开头以及要点已经给出,按照提示的要点逐点阐述,可以适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接书信开头,对Tom的身体状况表示关心,并提出看医生吃药的建议;
第二步,就如何保持健康这一话题,给出相应的若干个建议,可列举具体的事例;
第三步,祝愿Tom早日康复并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①share sth with sb和某人分享某物
②stay up late熬夜
③keep away from远离
④from now on从现在起
[高分句型]
①if you still feel terrible, you should go to a doctor. (If引导的条件状语从句)
②What’s more, to be healthy, you should get enough sleep, so don’t stay up late and keep away from computer games from now on. (so连接两个表示因果关系的并列分句)
8.例文
Welcome to Blue Moon Restaurant. We have great specials for you. Special 1 is tomato and egg soup. It’s kind of salty and it’s only 10 yuan. Special 2 is beef and potatoes and it’s hot. It’s just 22 yuan. Special 3 is vegetable salad. It’s crispy and tasty. It’s just 15 yuan. We also have many other specials. Please come and enjoy the delicious food.
We’re waiting for you!
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇应用文,为启事类写作;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表示欢迎(已给出);
第二步,从特色菜的种类和价格来介绍;
第三步,让大家来餐馆吃饭。
[亮点词汇]
① kind of有点
② many other许多其他的
[高分句型]
Please come and enjoy the delicious food.(祈使句)
9.例文
How To Make My Summer Holiday More Interesting
The Summer Holiday is coming. I will become a Grade 8 student soon. How can I make my Summer Holiday more interesting
First of all, I think it is important for me to do my homework carefully. At the same time, I want to read some good books, because they are not only very interesting, but also help me learn more about the world.
Second, I will have some outdoor activities to keep healthy. I like playing basketball very much, so sometimes I will go to the park with my friends to play basketball. Of course, I will have a trip to relax myself. Besides, dogs are so cute that I want to keep one as a pet. I want to play with it when I am free. What’s more, I will visit an old people’s home once a week and do what I can to help the old.
Finally, I also have to make some plans for the coming Grade 8. I will spend more time learning English and Maths. Moreover, I will try my best to help others, because helping others is helping ourselves.
I hope I can have a good holiday.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,注意大小写,适当添加细节,突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。通过提出问题来引出下文;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。结合所给提示介绍自己的暑假是怎么过的;
第三步,书写结语。希望自己能有一个快乐的假期。
[亮点词汇]
①have a trip to 去……旅行
②spend more time learning 花更多的时间去学习
[高分句型]
①First of all, I think it is important for me to do my homework carefully. (it is adj. for sb to do sth.)
②At the same time, I want to read some good books, because they are not only very interesting, but also help me learn more about the world. (原因状语从句)
10.例文:
Dear friends,
I’m Li Hui. I’m happy to share something about our science club with you.
Here, you can see some of the most advanced scientific inventions in the world. At the same time, we will also do experiments with our own hands, through doing experiments, personally experience the fun of science. Then we exchange our views and meanings. We will hold invention competitions and invite experts to give speeches for us.
I hope you can join our club. You’re going to have a great time.
Thank you.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇发言稿;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”;
③提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,总体指出要分享一些关于科学俱乐部的事情;
第二步,介绍活动内容以及将来的计划;
第三步,最后邀请对方加入俱乐部。
[亮点词汇]
①share sth with sb与某人分享某物
②at the same time同时
③invite sb to do sth邀请某人做某事
[高分句型]
①I hope you can join our club. (省略that的宾语从句)
11.One possible version:
My travel plan for the summer holiday
The summer holiday is coming. I plan to go to Beijing, the capital of China. It lies in the north of China.
There are many things I’d like to do in Beijing. First, I will visit some places of interest, such as the Palace Museum. I can learn something about China’s past. Second, Beijing is also famous for its traditional food. I will try the local food such as Beijing duck and dumplings. In addition, Wangfujing Street is a good place to go shopping. I will go there and buy some gifts for my friends.
It is my first time to visit Beijing. I hope to learn new things and meet different people. I believe my trip will be fun. I can’t wait.
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍你暑假想去的地方;
第二步,具体描述计划的活动;
第三步,最后表达期待的收获。
[亮点词汇]
① plan to do计划做
② places of interest风景名胜
③ be famous for因……而著名
④ in addition此外
[高分句型]
①There are many things I’d like to do in Beijing.(定语从句)
②I believe my trip will be fun.(宾语从句)
12.
Dear friends,
Everyone has a bobby and some people even want to change it into a future career. My hobby is reading novels. When I am absorbed in reading, I can feel a sense of well-being and peace in mind. So I want to change it into my future job—a writer.
I think reading is of great help to my future job. Because it enables me to lay solid foundation for my writing. Besides that, reading not only broadens my eyes but also make me become a well-rounded individual.
I hope my dream will be achieved one day.
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
② 时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,简述自己的爱好;
第二步,讲述此爱好对未来职业的帮助;
第三步,书写结语,表达愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①be of great help很有帮助
②lay solid foundation打下扎实基础
③not only...but also...不但……而且……
[高分句型]
①When I am absorbed in reading, I can feel a sense of well-being and peace in mind.(时间状语从句)
13.例文
My life in middle school is very interesting and wonderful. I can learn many things. Now, I can take the initiative to make study plans and help my parents do housework. I make a daily schedule and complete each of my tasks according to it. At the same time, I also use my spare time to help my parents do housework every day, such as sweeping the floor, emptying the garbage, washing the dishes and so on. In the future, I want to take up a hobby—playing basketball, because I want to relax myself.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:一般现在时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点,并适当添加细节,突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍你现在会做的两件事情;
第二步,介绍你平时如何做这些事情;
第三步,说明你未来提升自我的计划。
[亮点词汇]
①take the initiative采取主动
②according to根据
③take up开始从事
[高分句型]
In the future, I want to take up a hobby—playing basketball, because I want to relax myself.(原因状语从句)
14.例文
Hello, everyone! My name is Wang Wei. I’d like to be the captain of our school basketball team.
Ever since I started playing basketball, I’ve enjoyed every moment on the court. My passion led me to join the team early on, where I developed a strong team spirit. Now, I’m capable of scoring key baskets to turn the tide of the game and helping us win. My goal is to unite our team, and we can achieve success.
Choose me as the captain of our school basketball team and everyone in our team can be the best!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
②时态:以“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏信息,并重点介绍“过去的经历”以及“现在能做的事情”。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开门见山,表达想要竞选校篮球队队长;
第二步,具体阐述过去打篮球的经历以及现在能为校篮球队做的事情;
最后,表达个人希望,希望当选为篮球队队长。
[亮点词汇]
①start doing sth.开始做某事
②lead sb. to do sth.带领某人做某事
③be capable of doing sth.有能力做某事
④achieve success取得成功
[高分句型]
①Ever since I started playing basketball, I’ve enjoyed every moment on the court.(ever since引导时间状语从句)
②My passion led me to join the team early on, where I developed a strong team spirit.(where引导非限制性定语从句)
15.例文
Dear John,
Everything goes well. I am glad to hear that you will study in my school. I’d like to tell you something about my school life.
My school life is very interesting. I have many subjects at school. English is my favorite. After school, I often play basketball with my classmates. Sometimes I run around the playground with my friends. I like my school life.
I also have big plans for summer. I plan a trip to Beijing. Would you like to go with me We can go to the Palace Museum. It will be fun.
Best wishes! Hope to see you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据原邮件介绍自己的学校生活以及暑期计划;注意适当发挥,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接开头,点明写作目的;
第二步,介绍自己的学校生活,具体包括最喜欢的科目、课后的活动等;
第三步,介绍暑期计划;
第四步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①play basketball 打篮球
②the Palace Museum 故宫博物馆
[高分句型]
I am glad to hear that you will study in my school.(that引导的宾语从句)
16.例文
Dear Peter,
Thank you for your last e-mail. I’m very happy to tell you something about my Dragon Boast Festival.
The Dragon Boat Festival falls on June 5th this year. On that day, I had a good time with my parents. In the morning, my parents and I drove to visit my grandparents who lived in the countryside. We did a lot of interesting things there. First, we watched the dragon boat races by the river. It was really fun and exciting. Then, we learnt to make all kinds of delicious zongzi and shared it together. In the afternoon, we fed the chickens, went fishing and played chess.
We all had a good time there! What a colorful and meaningful holiday!
I hope all is well with you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件。
②时态:时态为“一般过去在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中你如何度过端午节的介绍要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“端午节的日期、你参加的活动、你的感受等”几个方面重点介绍你如何度过端午节的具体情况;
第三步,书写结语,表达“多么丰富多彩的和有意义的节日啊”的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①have a good time玩得高兴;
②learn to do sth学习做某事;
③all kinds of各种各样的;
④play chess下象棋。
[高分句型]
①In the morning, my parents and I drove to visit my grandparents who lived in the countryside. (who引导的定语从句)
②What a colorful and meaningful holiday! (感叹句)
17.例文
Plans for the Summer Vacation
The summer vacation is coming. I’m going to have a meaningful vacation. I have made some plans.
First, I’m going to read more good books, do more housework and keep on exercising. They can make me relaxed and healthy. Second, I will communicate more with my parents. We’ll go on a trip around here at the weekend. Finally, I’m going to do some service in my community. I will clean up the streets. I think serving others can bring happiness to us.
All in all, I will have a meaningful summer vacation. What about your plans for the summer vacation Can you tell me
【解析】[总体分析]
题材:本文是一篇记叙文写作,为材料作文;
时态:时态以“一般将来时”为主;
提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏信息或偏题;适当添加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出主题;
第二步,详细描述暑假计划以及活动带来的意义;
第三步,书写结语,表示自己将会有一个意义非凡的假期。
[亮点词汇]
①meaningful有意义的
②keep on继续
③clean up清理
④All in all总而言之
[高分句型]
①I think serving others can bring happiness to us.(省略that的宾语从句)
18.例文
My Summer Holiday Plan
Summer holiday is coming. I will be very busy in the summer holiday. Here are my plans for the summer holiday.
Firstly, I will read some English books in the library because my English is poor. Maybe it’s a good idea to go to a summer school. Secondly, I’m going to play sports for at least two hours every day. For example, I’ll play basketball with my friends and swim with my parents. Thirdly, summer holiday is a good time to relax. So I’m going to watch some movies at the cinema and spend some time playing games with my cousins.
I believe all my wishes will come true during this summer holiday, and I’ll spend a colorful and meaningful holiday.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:以“一般将来时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。根据文章已给出的开头,引出“我”的暑假计划;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。包括学习、运动等暑假计划;
第三步,书写结语。表达对暑假的期望。
[亮点词汇]
① be busy 忙碌于
② at least 至少
③ for example 例如
④ come true 实现
⑤ spend time doing sth. 花费时间做某事
[高分句型]
① Firstly, I will read some English books in the library because my English is poor. (because引导原因状语从句)
② I believe all my wishes will come true during this summer holiday, and I’ll spend a colorful and meaningful holiday. (宾语从句)
③ I believe all my wishes will come true during this summer holiday, and I’ll spend a colorful and meaningful holiday. (不定式作主语)
19.参考例文:
My Favorite Chinese Festival
As we all know, there are many traditional festivals in China. Among them, I like the Lantern Festival best. It’s celebrated on the 15th day of the first lunar month. During the festival, we usually eat sweet dumplings, admire beautiful lanterns and enjoy the fantastic lion or dragon dances. The most interesting activity is guessing lantern riddles. We can have fun and learn something from it. The festival not only brings us joy, but also makes us know more about our culture, so it’s my favorite festival.
Let’s pay more attention to our traditional festivals. The more we learn about them, the more deeply we will love our culture.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,先表达在众多的传统节日中自己最喜欢的传统节日;
第二步,具体介绍这个传统节日的日期、以及该节日主要有哪些庆祝方式,并谈谈自己对这个节日的感受及喜爱它的原因;
第三步,书写结束语,号召大家重视传统节日,热爱我们的传统文化。
[亮点词汇]
①as we all know 众所周知
②admire 欣赏
③guessing lantern riddles 猜灯谜
④not only...but also... 不仅……而且……
⑤pay attention to 注意
[高分句型]
The more we learn about them, the more deeply we will love our culture.(比较级句型)
20.例文
Hello, everyone! Tomorrow we’ll go for a school trip in the mountains. We will get together at the school gate at 8:00 in the morning. Don’t be late. Before we start, there are some rules for you. First, everyone should wear sports shoes. Second, when you walk in the mountains, you mustn’t walk to the edge of the path. Third, you must walk together or you’ll get lost. Don’t go to dangerous places. Fourth, bring some water and a hat with you. The weather is hot tomorrow. Hope everyone can have a good trip.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:本文应使用“一般现在时”与“一般将来时”为主;
③提示:写作要点应注意题干给出的“介绍旅行规则及注意事项”并适当补充,使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点题,介绍明天有学校旅行;
第二步,根据题干给出的要点,介绍旅行的规则和注意事项;
第三步,希望大家都能玩得开心,并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①get together在一起
②in the morning在上午
[高分句型]
①Second, when you walk in the mountains, you mustn’t walk to the edge of the path.(when引导时间状语从句)
②Don’t go to dangerous places.(祈使句)
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