【期末专项训练】查漏补缺：书面表达（含答案解析）-2024-2025学年英语八年级下册译林版

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【期末专项训练】查漏补缺：书面表达-2024-2025学年英语八年级下册译林版
1．研学旅行是通过集体旅行来开展学习和体验相结合的校外教育活动，深受学生的喜爱，为此，请你给校报英语专栏写一篇短文，介绍学校开展的研学活动并发表看法。
内容要点如下：
(1) Learn about tea picking;
(2) Observe (观察) plants and animals;
(3) Plant trees along the river;
(4) Visit places of interest and museums.
注意：
(1) 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；
(2) 词数80左右；
(3) 内容连贯，不要逐条翻译，补充一两点个人看法；
(4) 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：experience v. 体验 nature n.自然 meaningful adj.有意义的
The study trip is a kind of school education which is held outside and popular with students. Our school has also held many study trips. Here are my experiences.
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2．为了提高社区居民的环保意识、创建优质的居住环境，社区居委会正在举办以“Live a Low-Carbon Life”为题的征文活动。请你根据以下要点提示写一篇英语短文参加活动。
提示：
1.为什么要过低碳生活？
2.如何过低碳生活？请提出三条建议。
要求：
1.语句通顺，逻辑清晰，可适当发挥；
2.100词左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
参考词汇：energy能源；plastic 塑料；mode 模式
Live a Low-Carbon Life
As we all know, protecting the environment is important.
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3．Write at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)
学校每年组织远足活动 (如：春游和秋游等)，下周学校将举行“Our school trip”为主题的英语沙龙活动，请根据以下要点提示，写一篇短文和同学们分享。
1. What do you think of school trips 2. What did you do in one of your school trips 3. What advice can you offer to make the school trip more meaningful
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4．生活中不只有眼前的试卷和作业，还有诗和远方。暑假快到了，你们校刊的英文栏目正在征集“The place I want to go most”稿件，请你投稿吧！
写作内容：
1.你最想去的地方是哪里；
2.你为什么想去这个地方；
3.你打算在那里做些什么。
写作要求：
1.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名字；
2.词数要求90左右。
The place I want to go most
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5．学校正在开展以“A Greener city, a better life”为题的英语征文活动。请根据所给提示，用英语写一篇短文。
注意事项：1. 词数80词左右；2. 文章必须包含所提供的主要信息，并作适当发挥。
A greener city, a better life
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6．Write at least 60 words on the topic “An unforgettable trip to ________” (以“一次去……的难忘之旅”为题写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）
The following points are only for reference:
When and where did you take the trip
What did you do there
Why was the trip unforgettable
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7．“The Weekend”杂志社正在举行“为家乡打call”的征文活动，请你以“Jining—My Hometown”为题，根据所给提示用英语写一篇推介家乡济宁的短文。
提示：
①有着超过7000年的历史 (has a long history)；
②位于山东省的西南部 (in the southwest of)；
③覆盖面积11000平方千米 (cover an area of)，人口830万 (8.3 million)；
④这里有很多种美食，夹饼 (Jiabing) 和甏肉干饭 (Bengrou Rice) 是最著名的；
⑤济宁是孔子 (Confucius) 及很多名人的故乡；你可以游览孔庙 (Confucius Temple)、微山湖 (Weishan Lake) 等等；
⑥这里天气宜人 (pleasant)，全年平均气温 (an average temperature) 大约为13℃；
⑦这里有飞机场 (an airport)，几个高铁站 (high-speed railway stations) 和多条高速公路 (expressways)，来这里非常便利 (convenient)。
要求：
①内容涵盖全面，可以适当拓展：
②100词左右。
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8．节约资源，保护环境，从我们身边的小事做起。假设你是李明，是一个注重“低碳”生活的中学生，请你根据下面的提示和要求，以“My low-carbon life”为题，写一篇短文，描述自己的“低碳”生活。
提示：
1. 每天步行或骑车上学；
2. 离开家时，不要忘记关灯；购物时带自己的购物袋；
3. 节约用纸。
要求：
1. 短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确。
3. 词数80词左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
My Low-carbon Life
My name is Li Ming.
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It’s important for us to live a low-carbon life. Because it can protect our environment.
9．习主席说过“地球是我们唯一可以称之为家园的地方”。珍爱和呵护地球是人类的唯一选择，也是我们每一个人的责任。我们在生活中的点滴小事上就能做出自己的贡献。请你以“Love the Earth”为题，写一篇英语短文。
提示：
1）我们为什么要爱护地球？
2）我们怎样来爱护地球？
3）你的希望是什么？
要求：
1）短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。
2）文中不得出现真实的人名和地名。
3）词数80左右。
Love the Earth
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10．读下面的文章，请根据问题提示，尽可能用自己的话写出大意总结，90词左右。
In many countries of the world people are saying, “We must do something to solve the problem of our rubbish. We don’t want our world to become one big landfill site (垃圾填埋场).”
The Irish (爱尔兰的) government was very worried about plastic (塑料) bags so they decided to make people pay for them. Since 2002 Irish people have been paying for the bags they take home from the shops. Of course, they soon stopped buying new bags and started taking bags with them when shopping.
Some countries have made even bigger changes. In 2006, the people of Zanzibar (桑吉巴尔) decided to stop making plastic bags. They were worried the bags were killing sea animals. They also said nobody could bring plastic bags into the country. Soon there were no plastic bags in the place.
One of the most exciting recycling ideas is Freecycle. It has grown around the world. People join a Freecycle group because they are looking for things or have things that they want to give to other people. Perhaps they have a chair they do not need any more, or they want a camera. They leave a message on the Internet to tell people what they want or what they are going to give. Nobody buys or sells anything—people give things to other people who want them. It is a good idea because it recycles useful things.
Recycling is important and sometimes it is exciting too, but it is only one part of the answer. Using less and reusing are also important answers to the problem of rubbish.
1. Do many countries try to solve the problem of rubbish
2. What did the Irish government ask people to do
3. What did people decide to do in Zanzibar What was the result
4. Who buys or sells things through Freecycle
5. What’s important to the problem of rubbish according to the article
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11．最近你所在的班级打算举办一次以“A City I’ve Ever Been to”为题的英文演讲比赛。假设你想参加这次演讲比赛，请你根据以下提示和要求准备一篇演讲稿。
提示：
1. How many times have you been to
2. What did you do there
3. What do you think of this city
要求：
1.语句通顺，条理清晰；
2.包含以上所有信息，可适当发挥；
3.不少于70词。（标题、开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。）
A City I’ve Ever Been to
Hi, boys and girls! Today I want to share my experience in
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Thanks for your listening.
12． Write at least 60 words according to the given situation.（根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
针对学生当中存在浪费电的现象，学校决定举行抵制浪费电的活动。假设你是学校学生会成员之一，请你在学校英文报上写一封倡议书。
1. 活动的理由及目的；
2. 节约用电的具体做法；
3. 呼吁从我做起，节约用电。
以下词汇仅供参考：
call on join hands take action
注意：
短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
照抄阅读语篇不得分；
短文开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear schoolmates,
Have you noticed that electricity waste happens every minute in our school I’d like to call on everyone to
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Students’ Union
June 16th
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1．例文
The study trip is a kind of school education which is held outside and popular with students. Our school has also held many study trips. Here are my experiences.
Firstly, we went to pick tea in person and made things by hand to experience life. Secondly, we got close to nature and learnt more knowledge by watching real plants and animals. Then, after we visited some museums as well as places of interest, we understood Chinese history and culture more deeply. Finally, we saw some meaningful movies and felt the great changes of our country.
In my opinion, the study trip is helpful for us. We can experience different activities and get close to nature. We can also learn more meaningful things. I hope we will have more chances to take part in these study trips.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏内容要点中的信息，介绍学校组织的到产茶名地“杭州”开展的研学活动。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出这次活动；
第二步，介绍活动中做了什么，体验并学习到了什么；
第三步，介绍自己的看法及感受。
[亮点词汇]
①in person 亲自
②by hand 用手
③in one’s opinion 在某人看来
④take part in 参加
[高分句型]
①Then, after we visited some museums as well as places of interest, we understood Chinese history and culture more deeply.（after引导的时间状语从句）
②I hope we will have more chances to take part in these study trips.（宾语从句）
2．例文
Live a Low-Carbon Life
As we all know, protecting the environment is important. Living a low-carbon life is crucial for us. Currently, the excessive emission of carbon dioxide has led to global warming and various environmental problems. Here are some ways to live a low-carbon life.
First, choose green transportation. We can walk or ride bikes for short-distance trips, and take buses or subways instead of driving cars when going far. Second, reduce the use of plastic products. Replace plastic bags with reusable cloth bags and avoid using disposable plastic tableware. Third, save energy. Turn off lights and electrical appliances when leaving rooms, and try to use natural light during the day.
Let’s take action and live a low-carbon life to make the earth a better place.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本题是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文用一般现在时；
③提示：介绍低碳生活，提出关于低碳生活的建议，需要遵照所给要求，信息覆盖全面，适当补充细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，阐述低碳生活的重要性，以及过低碳生活的原因；
第二步，提出关于低碳生活的建议，注意细节充分，三观正确；
第三步，号召大家一起过低碳生活，注意用词准确，行文流畅。
[亮点词汇]
①be crucial for 对……很重要
②instead of 代替，反而
③take action 采取行动
[高分句型]
①Living a low-carbon life is crucial for us.（动名词作主语）
②Let’s take action and live a low-carbon life to make the earth a better place.（不定式做目的状语）
3．范文
Our trip to Xuhui campus Last week, we had a school trip to Xuhui campus.
We started on a sunny day in the morning. It took us two hours to drive there. When we got there, we were attracted by the landscape garden of Xuhui campus. Then we visited the history of Rongqiao middle school in the museum. We were deeply moved by the spirit of Rongqiao people. Finally, we tasted the delicious food of Xuhui canteen.
To make school trips more meaningful, I think we could do some research about the destination before the trip and take notes during the visit. In this way, we can gain more knowledge and have a better understanding of what we see. All in all, we had an interesting and meaningful school trip.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记述学校旅行经历的文章；
②时态：主要为一般过去时；
③提示：文章包含学校旅行的相关要点，介绍旅行去徐汇校区，描述旅行当天的行程，还给出让学校旅行更有意义的建议。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点明主题，介绍上周进行了一次去徐汇校区的学校旅行；
第二步，按时间顺序详细描述学校旅行当天的经历，包括出发时间、路上用时，到达后被校园景观吸引，参观学校历史博物馆，被荣桥人精神打动，以及品尝食堂美食等；
第三步，就如何让学校旅行更有意义提出自己的建议，旅行前对目的地做研究、旅行中做笔记，并强调这样做能带来的收获，最后总结此次旅行有趣且有意义。
[亮点词汇]
①attracted吸引
②moved感动
③gain获得
[高分句型]
①It took us two hours to drive there. (It takes sb some time to do句型)
②To make school trips more meaningful, I think we could do some research about the destination before the trip and take notes during the visit. (不定式作目的状语)
4．例文：
The place I want to go most
There are so many wonderful places to have a holiday. This time, the place I want to go most is Sanya.
As we all know, Sanya is a good place to relax ourselves. It has beautiful sea and clean beaches. The weather there makes people comfortable. Another reason I want to go there is Sanya’s hotels. Most of the hotels have wonderful condition and service. I really want to have a try.
If I go there, I’ll lie in the sunshine and swim in the sea. I’ll also taste seafood and try something new. I think a day is not enough for me, and Sanya is really the place where I want to go most.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：这是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要采用“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据写作要点展开，适当发挥，注意条理清晰和语法正确。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍最想去的地方是三亚；
第二步，介绍为什么想去三亚；
第三步，介绍打算在三亚做些什么；
[亮点词汇]
①as we all know众所周知
②have a try试一试
③try something new尝试一些新的东西
[高分句型]
If I go there, I’ll lie in the sunshine and swim in the sea. (if引导条件状语从句)
5．One possible version
A greener city, a better life
As middle school students, we should create a greener city to live a better life. However, it’s a pity that we often see some people drop litter everywhere. Some forget to turn off the lights when leaving a room.
To create a greener city, ride or walk to school instead of taking a car. Also, we can plant more trees and flowers. Besides, it’s a good idea to sort the rubbish into different groups so that things like bottles and cans can be recycled.
In all, if everyone does his part, we can live a better life in a greener city.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍出现的问题；
第二步，介绍提出的建议；
第三步，表达自己的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①turn off关掉
②instead of代替，作为……的替换
③sort the rubbish into different groups把垃圾分成不同的组
[高分句型]
①However, it’s a pity that we often see some people drop litter everywhere.（that引导的宾语从句）
②To create a greener city, ride or walk to school instead of taking a car.（动词不定式作目的）
③Besides, it’s a good idea to sort the rubbish into different groups so that things like bottles and cans can be recycled.（so that引导的目的状语从句）
④In all, if everyone does his part, we can live a better life in a greener city.（if引导的条件状语从句）
6．例文：
An unforgettable trip to Beijing
I took an unforgettable trip to Beijing last summer vacation. I visited many famous places, such as the Great Wall, the Forbidden City and the Summer Palace. I was amazed by the beauty and history of these places.
I also tried some delicious food, like Beijing Roast Duck and Peking Noodles. The food was so delicious that I still remember the taste.
What made this trip unforgettable was that I made some new friends. We shared our experiences and had a lot of fun together.
This trip not only broadened my horizons but also gave me a lot of wonderful memories. I will never forget it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：介绍曾经去过的地方，分享个人的经历，避免语法错误，保持行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题，介绍一次难忘的旅行经历；
第二步，简要介绍去的地方、时间、交通方式、游玩的景点以及美食等；
第三步，总结全文，表达感受。
[亮点词汇]
①such as比如
②be amazed by对……感到惊讶
③not only…but also…不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
①The food was so delicious that I still remember the taste.（so…that引导结果状语从句）
②What made this trip unforgettable was that I made some new friends.（what引导的主语从句，that引导的表语从句）
7．例文
Jining—My Hometown
Have you ever been to Jining It is my hometown. Let me introduce it for you!
Jining has a long history of more than 7,000 years, which is in the southwest of Shandong Province, covering an area of 11,000 square kilometers and having a population of 8.3 million. There are many kinds of food. Jiabing and Bengrou Rice are the most famous. What’s more, Jining is the hometown of Confucius and many other famous people. You can visit Confucius Temple, Weishan Lake and so on. Besides, the weather in Jining is pleasant. An average temperature is about 13℃ all year round. There is an airport, several high-speed railway stations and many expressways in Jining. So it is convenient to come here.
Welcome to Jining. I would like to be your tour guide.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍自己的家乡；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“历史、地理位置、美食、景点、天气、交通方式”等方面进行介绍；
第三步，书写结语，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①what’s more再者
②the hometown of……的故乡
③besides此外
[高分句型]
①Jining has a long history of more than 7,000 years, which is in the southwest of Shandong Province, covering an area of 11,000 square kilometers and having a population of 8.3 million.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
②So it is convenient to come here.（it固定句式）
8．参考例文
My Low-carbon Life
My name is Li Ming. I am a middle school student. I ride or walk to school every day. I always remember to turn off the lights, the TV and the fan when I leave home. When I am not using water, I always turn off the tap. I often reuse water, for example, when I finish washing the clothes, I use the water to clean the floor or flush the toilet. When I go shopping, I always bring my own shopping bag and I never use plastic bags. I think saving paper is necessary, so I often make full use of paper.
It’s important for us to live a low-carbon life. Because it can protect our environment.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先自我介绍；
第二步，具体介绍自己的低碳生活，例如步行或骑车去上学、及时关闭各种电器、自备购物袋、节约用水和纸等；
第三步，总结低碳生活对环境保护的重要性。
[亮点词汇]
①remember to do记得要做某事
②turn off关闭
③for example例如
④finish doing完成做某事
⑤make full use of充分利用
[高分句型]
①When I go shopping, I always bring my own shopping bag and I never use plastic bags.（when引导的宾语从句）
②I think saving paper is necessary, so I often make full use of paper.（省略that的宾语从句）
9．例文
Love the earth The earth is the only place to call home. It provides us with air, water and other things we need for living. That’s why we should try our best to protect it.
With rapid development, the air we breathe is becoming dirtier and dirtier. And the air caused more and more illnesses. Besides, there are fewer and fewer fish in the river. We must take action to protect our home—the earth.
As students, we can take our own cloth bags to shop so that we can reduce the pollution. What’s more, we should take our own chopsticks to the restaurant when we eat out in order to protect the trees.
I hope people can take action to protect the earth at once. Love the earth as it is our only home.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，描述为什么要爱护地球以及地球环境现状；
第二步，谈论作为学生如何爱护地球；
第三步，最后谈自己的希望并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①provide sb. with为某人提供
②try one’s best to尽最大努力
③breathe呼吸
④take action采取行动
⑤reduce减少
⑥at once马上
[高分句型]
As students, we can take our own cloth bags to shop so that we can reduce the pollution.(so that引导目的状语从句)
10．例文：
Many countries try to solve the problem of rubbish. For example, the Irish government asked people to pay for plastic bags, so they started taking bags when shopping. In 2006, the people of Zanzibar decided to stop making plastic bags. As a result, there were no plastic bags in the place soon. Freecycle is one of the most exciting recycling ideas because nobody buys or sells things through it — they give things to other people who want them. Besides recycling, using less and reusing are also important to the problem of rubbish.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇小作文；
②时态：主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据文章和问题，归纳文章大意，考生注意不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据问题，确定答案，进行整体构思；
第二步，连句成文，写出大意。
[亮点词汇]
①as a result 因此
②besides 除此之外（还）
③be important to sb 对某人重要
[高分句型]
Freecycle is one of the most exciting recycling ideas because nobody buys or sells things through it — they give things to other people who want them.（because引导原因状语从句、who引导定语从句）
11．例文
A City I’ve Ever Been to
Hi, boys and girls! Today I want to share my experience in Hangzhou with you.
I have ever been there three times. I fell in love with this beautiful city when I first traveled there. There are many interesting places in the city. I once took a boat to watch the beautiful West Lake. I also had a look at the music fountain. But I liked the Hangzhou Amusement Park best. It is a theme park with many special activities. I had an exciting and happy time there. I really like this city for its special beauty.
Thanks for your listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，包括次数，景点以及对城市的印象，注意不要有遗漏，并适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作目的，即介绍自己去杭州的旅行经历；
第二步，具体介绍此次旅行，包括去杭州的次数，去了哪些景点，自己的感受和对这座城市的印象；
第三步，表达感谢。
[亮点词汇]
①fall in love with爱上……
②take a boat乘船
③have a look看一看
[高分句型]
①I fell in love with this beautiful city when I first traveled there.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②There are many interesting places in the city.（there be句型表示“某地有某物”）
12．例文
Dear schoolmates,
Have you noticed that electricity waste happens every minute in our school I’d like to call on everyone to save electricity because most of our electricity sources are converted from natural resources and they are limited because they are not renewable. Therefore, we must cherish them. Here are my suggestions on how to save electricity.
First, please remember to turn off the lights when you don’t need them. Second, try to use as little electronics as possible. Third, use new products that consume less electricity. Last, promote the principle of using less electricity to others.
I hope you can do this, but not for you, but for everyone. And if everyone can take action from now on, and everyone’s quality of life will become better.
Students’ Union
June 16th
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：本文的主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已经给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当增加细节补充内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，写出抵制浪费电的活动理由和目的；
第二步，说明节约用电的具体做法；
第三步，呼吁大家节约用电。
[亮点词汇]
① call on 号召
② natural resources 自然资源
③ therefore 所以
④ cherish 珍视
⑤ as...as possible 尽可能
[高分句型]
① I’d like to call on everyone to save electricity because most of our electricity sources are converted from natural resources and they are limited because they are not renewable. (原因状语从句）
② First, please remember to turn off the lights when you don’t need them. (时间状语从句)
③ And if everyone can take action from now on, and everyone’s quality of life will become better. (条件状语从句)
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