（期末考点培优）专题15 书面表达-2024-2025学年八年级英语下册期末复习考点培优专项鲁教版（五四学制）（含答案解析）
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中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
2024-2025学年八年级英语下册期末复习专项鲁教版（五四学制）（期末考点培优）专题15 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．2024“华夏之旅●国际中学生夏令营”将到访河北，活动主办方决定面向全省招募少年志愿者来用英语“讲好中国故事，让世界了解河北”。假如你是李华，请根据下面的招聘通知，并结合自身实际，用英文写一封自荐信。
Volunteers Wanted
Tour China Summer Camp 2024 is coming soon! We want volunteers for the summer camp.
What do you like to do How is your English Do you know something about Chinese history or culture Please introduce one of the places of interest in Hebei to us. We are looking forward to your letters and hope you can join us!
写作要求：
（1）你的自荐信至少包括通知中提到的要点；
（2）文中不得出现个人真实的姓名和校名；
（3）词数80左右，信件开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am Li Hua from Hebei Province. I’m writing to ask for the chance to work as a volunteer at the summer camp.
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Yours,
Li Hua
2．俗话说“瑞雪兆丰年”，长沙刚刚过去的一场大雪为庄稼带来了希望，也为我们带来了欢乐和新的一年。2024年春节即将来临，请根据以下提示，以My New Year’s Plan为题，写一篇不少于70字的短文，谈谈你的新年计划。
(1) 提高身体素质 (physical health：运动、饮食、睡眠……)
(2) 提高学业成绩 (study：……)
(3) 改善人际关系 (personal relationship：……)
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3．假设你是英语校刊Just Ask专栏的编辑李华，收到一封国际生Tom的英文来信。他在信中提出自己在本学期遇到的问题。请根据以下提示写一封70词左右的回信。
内容包括：
1.Tom在学习及生活方面遇到的问题；
2.你的建议及理由。
注意：
1.开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
Dear Tom,
I’m sorry to hear that you have some trouble now.
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I hope my advice can help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
4．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Chris对中国的传统节日很感兴趣。他给你发来邮件，想了解一下中国的传统节日。请你用英语回复一封邮件，介绍一个你最喜欢的中国传统节日，内容包括你最喜欢的中国传统节日是什么，在这个节日通常都做些什么，以及你喜欢这个节日的原因。
提示词语： the Spring Festival, watch, dumplings, get together, important
提示问题：
·What’s your favorite Chinese traditional festival
·What do you usually do during the festival
·Why do you like it
Dear Chris, How is it going I'm glad to introduce my favorite Chinese traditional festival to you. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ If you want to know more, please let me know. Yours, Li Hua
5．每个人都会有一个专属的童年，在这期间，你也许会有一些(个)格外珍惜的物品，它(们)会给你留下比较深刻的回忆。你孩童时代最喜欢并且保留的东西是什么呢 请你根据下面的问题提示写一篇英语短文，介绍一下吧。
1. What is your favourite thing from childhood which you still have
2. How long have you had it
3. How did you get it Did someone give it to you Who
4. Why do you like it so much Can you say something more about it
写作要求：
1. 紧扣主题，结合提示信息，适当发挥，语言表达准确、语义通顺连贯；
2. 书写工整，不少于80词。请考生将题目写在答题卡相应处；
3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(校名，姓名，地名等)。
My favourite thing from childhood
My favorite thing from childhood is
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6．暑假即将来临，很多同学已经开始计划如何度过一个有意义的暑假。假如你是李华，请你以“How to Spend a Safe and Meaningful Holiday”为话题，给你的好友Mike写封信，要点如下：
1.尝试做一些志愿者工作（举例说明做什么志愿者工作），通过志愿者工作提高自立能力(develop one’s independence)。
2.保护(protect)自己，远离(keep away from)河流等危险的地方。
3.多读书，锻炼，强健体魄。
4.帮父母干家务活。
注意：
1. 字迹工整，词数90—100词。
2.可适当发挥使行文连贯。
3.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
4.开头结尾已给出不计入总词数。
Dear Mike,
How are you going I am writing to tell you how I will spend a safe and meaningful holiday. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
How will you spend your holiday I’m looking forward to your letter.
Yours,
Li Hua
7．暑假即将来临，很多同学已经开始计划如何度过一个有意义的暑假。假如你是李华，请你以“How to Spend a Safe and Meaningful Holiday”为话题给你的好友Mike回信。
要点如下：1. 尝试做一些志愿者工作，提高自理能力。
2. 保护自己，远离河流等危险的地方。
3. 多读书、锻炼，合理饮食。
注意：1. 词数80—100。
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
4. 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：志愿者工作 volunteer work；提高自理能力 develop self-care abilities
Dear Mike,
How are you going I’m writing to tell you how I will spend a safe and meaningful holiday.
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How will you spend your holiday I am looking forward to your letter.
Yours,
Li Hua
8．拥有健康的身体和愉悦的心情能够让我们快乐地生活和学习。为倡导“健康生活、快乐学习”的理念，你的班级将召开一次以“How to have a healthy and happy life ”为主题的班会。请你用英文写一篇演讲稿。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
写作要点：
1. 健康和快乐的重要性；
2. 如何拥有健康快乐的生活（饮食、运动、与人相处等）；
3. 发出倡导，提出希望。
写作要求：
1. 可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；
3. 80~100词。
Hello, everyone. I’m glad to be here and give you a speech. My topic is How to have a healthy and happy life
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9．假如你是李华， 你校英语校刊要招聘学生记者， 你想要加入。请你用英语给校报的负责人王老师写一封电子邮件推荐自己。
内容要点：
（1） 你和师生相处融洽， 在学校交了很多朋友。
（2） 你擅长英语， 在伦敦参加过暑期英语课程。
（3） 你还喜欢英语写作， 写作给你带来快乐和成功。
（4） 你多次参加英语比赛， 并获得过一等奖。
（5） 你希望 ……
要求：
（1） 词数： 70~90 词。
（2） 邮件格式 、开头及结尾已给出， 不计入总词数。
（3） 要点齐全， 行文连贯， 可适当发挥。
Dear Miss Wang,
I’m a student from Class 1, Grade 8. I’m glad to know that you’re looking for the student reporters. I think
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I’m looking forward to your early reply (答复).
Yours,
Li Hua
10．阅读可以拓宽我们的知识面，增长我们的见识，也可以提高我们的修养和内涵。但是目前许多中学生不重视课外阅读，却把很多时间花在上网和玩手机上。请根据以下表格内容，以“I Love Reading”为题，写一篇英语短文。
要点提示：
阅读的益处 书籍是人类的好朋友； 帮助我们获取知识，开阔眼界，了解世界； 让生活丰富多彩，带给我们快乐……
阅读的计划 每天花半个小时阅读;阅读各种各样的书籍；做读书笔记……
希望 业余时间多读书，读好书……
写作要求：
1. 短文内容应包括表格中所有信息，条理清晰，可适当发挥。
2. 语句通顺，语法正确，80词左右。
3. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名和地名。
参考词汇：获取知识 get knowledge；开阔眼界 open one’s eyes；做笔记 take notes
I Love Reading
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11．本学期就要结束了，让我们一起对照年初的计划来对自己进行一次总结吧。请参考以下提示信息，用英语写一篇短文，盘点你完成了哪些计划，哪些尚未完成。
提示：
1. How was your term
2. What did you do Did you do exercise every day
3. How many books have you read
4. Have you been to somewhere interesting
5. Have you ever been a volunteer
要求：
1.80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2.要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
How time flies! This is the end of the term.
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12．你们学校的英文月刊发起了题为“How to get on well with parents”的征文活动。请根据以下通知要求，并结合自身实际，用英文写一篇短文。
Notice It is common that there are some problems and worries in your life. What matters most is how you deal with them. Have you ever argued with your parents You can share the argument between your parents and you, the reason and the way you solve it. We are really looking forward to your opinions.
How to get on well with parents
In the past, I had difficulty in getting on well with my parents.
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13．英语课中，外教Wendy要求小组讨论“What do you plan to do in the summer vacation Why ” 以下是你们小组的讨论结果。请你写一篇短文, 汇报讨论结果并谈谈自己的计划。
Students Plans Reasons.
Sally Help with housework Improve her life skills
Tom Volunteer at an animal hospital Know how to care for animals
Anna Have a yard sale Make money to give away to children’s home
You … …
注意:
1. 短文必须包含表格中的信息，可适当增加细节；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名等；
3. 词数80﹣100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
In our group, everyone has made a plan for the summer vacation.
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14．文明，是一座城市最温暖的底色。当前，南京正在加快创建全国文明典范城市的步伐，从“文明高地”向“文明高峰”攀登。值此暑假来临之际，请你写一篇演讲稿，以参加暑期“How to be a civilized (文明的) middle school student ”为主题的演讲比赛。内容应包含以下要点：
礼仪修养：遵守交通规则，公共场合举止礼貌……
关爱他人：参与慈善活动，做志愿者……
环境保护：节约能源，垃圾分类，公共交通……
暑假计划：按时完成作业，多读有意义的书，旅行……
注意：
1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2.短文须包括所有内容要点，并适当发挥；
3.词数80左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear classmates,
The summer holiday is coming soon! As middle school students, I think we can do something to make Nanjing more civilized.
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15．假定某英文杂志举办征文比赛，请你以“I have changed a lot”为题，根据所给提示，写一篇短文投稿。提示如下：
1.你六年级时某一性格特点；
2.你是如何改变这一性格的；
3.你对这一改变的看法。
要求：
1.词数 100左右；题目已给出，不计入总词数。
2.须包含所有要点提示，并可适当补充，以使语句通顺，行文连贯；
3.文中不得出现个人姓名、校名等真实信息。
I have changed a lot
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16．假如你是襄州四中李辉，你的英国笔友Jack暑假将要来襄阳学习汉语一个月。请你根据以下表格内所给的信息给他写一封电子邮件告知相关注意事项。
内容要点：
需带物品 身份证、短裤等衣服……
住宿地方 本人家里或者酒店
课后活动 带领参观襄阳名胜古迹、品尝美食……
表达希望 与同学建立亲密友谊……
注意：
1. 内容必须包含表格中的所有信息；
2. 可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不得透露个人信息；
4. 词数80左右；短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：名胜古迹places of interest；建立form
Dear Jack,
I am very glad to hear that
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Yours,
Li Hui
17．忙碌而又愉快的一学期就要结束了。在这个学期你有哪些收获？哪件事最让你难忘？暑假你有什么打算？请根据提示用英语写一篇短文，介绍给你的同学们。
举例：
1. 已经学习了大约 400个新英语单词，已经学习打篮球……
2. 难忘的一件事。 (你做了什么及感想)
3 .暑假有何打算。
写作要求：
1. 语句通顺；表达正确。
2. 内容必须包括提示的信息；可适当发挥。
3. 文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
词数：80词左右。
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18．假如你是 Kate，你的表妹 Betty 给你来信，讲述了她的烦恼。请你根据信中表妹的烦恼，结合要点提示，用英语给她写一封回信。
Dear Kate, I have a problem. You know Helen is my best friend. Last week, I broke her crayons carelessly. I don’t know why she is so angry that she doesn’t talk to me now. What should I do Yours, Betty
要点提示: 1. 接纳情绪：understand feelings…
2. 分析原因：her favorite, special…
3. 给出建议：say sorry to her, write to her…
4. 总结经验：be careful with others’ things…
要求：1. 文中需包含以上要点，并适当拓展；
2. 文中不得出现真实的校名和人名；
3. 字数 80 词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Betty,
I’m sorry to hear that
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I hope my advice can help you. Hope you and Helen can work things out.
Yours,
Kate
19．今年我市正开展“文明城市创建”活动，全体市民都已经积极行动起来。作为一名中学生，你打算为此做些什么呢？请根据下面提示，以 Let’s Volunteer For Xinyu 写一篇英语短文，描述你的打算。
1.积极参加志愿者活动；2.热情帮助老人，病人及有困难的群体；3.关爱动物、保护环境；4.遵守交通规则；5.帮助宣传“文明创建”活动的重要意义。
要求：1.短文涵盖上述要点，可适当发挥，行文需流畅，篇幅不少于80字；
2.文章中不得出现真实的人名和学校名。
参考词汇：文明的 civilized
Let’s Volunteer For Xinyu
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20．本卷阅读理解D篇提到孩子帮助做家务有利于改善孩子与父母之间的关系。暑假来临，你校准备开展“我劳动、我学习、我快乐”的主题活动。假如你是李明，正在给你的笔友Tom写一封邮件，谈论你对学校主题活动的想法和你的暑假劳动计划。
写作要点：
1. What’s your opinion about doing housework
2. Which kinds of housework do you plan to do or learn to do Why
3. How are you going to do that
要求：
1.短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
2.短文中不得出现真实的人名和地名。
3. 80词左右。（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。）
Dear Tom,
How’s it going Do you have some plans for the coming summer vacation In our school, we are asked to make a housework plan for the vacation.
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Yours,
Li Ming
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Hua from Hebei Province. I’m writing to ask for the chance to work as a volunteer at the summer camp.
I love talking to people and sharing stories. My English is good enough to communicate with international students. I know a lot about Chinese history and culture. For example, Chengde Mountain Resort in Hebei is a great place to visit. It has a long history and beautiful scenery. I can tell the stories behind it to the campers.
I really want to join you and help make the summer camp a success. I hope I can be part of this wonderful event.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为自荐信；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据所给的问题同时进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图（已给出）；
第二步，介绍自己的相关信息，并介绍河北的一个景点；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①communicate with和……交流
②for example例如
③be part of成为……的一部分
[高分句型]
①My English is good enough to communicate with international students.（动词不定式作结果状语）
②I hope I can be part of this wonderful event.（省略that的宾语从句）
2．例文：
My New Year’s Plan
The new year is coming. I make some new year’s resolutions.
The most important thing is that I will get over my bad habits. I will take up a hobby and learn to play the piano. Next year I will do more sports to keep healthy. For example, I can run to school every day. I can play football or basketball at school every day. I will have a healthy diet and have enough sleep. I also want to improve my personal relationship with others. I will spend more time with my parents. I am going to help my parents do the housework. And I will talk to them more often. I want to be an excellent student, so my last resolution is that I will work hard on all my subjects. I will do my homework on time and listen to my teachers carefully. I hope to get good grades.
In a word, I hope I can make great progress next year.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。直接说明要介绍新年计划；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。重点介绍提高身体素质、提高学业成绩及改善人际关系方面的计划；
第三步，书写结语。表达新年的希望。
[亮点词汇]
①get over克服
②take up a hobby培养一个爱好
③have a healthy diet有一个健康的饮食
④excellent优秀的
⑤progress进步
[高分句型]
①The most important thing is that I will get over my bad habits. (表语从句)
②In a word, I hope I can make great progress next year. (宾语从句)
3．例文
Dear Tom,
I’m sorry to hear that you have some trouble now.
You mentioned having difficulty with learning Chinese, and I believe that practicing your speaking skills as much as possible could really help. You can also watch some Chinese movies or listen to Chinese songs to improve your listening skills. As for your problem of making friends, you should be more active and try to talk to your classmates. Joining some clubs or taking part in activities is another great way to meet new people. Don’t be afraid to make mistakes. I believe you will make more friends soon.
I hope my advice can help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：一般现在时和一般过去时
③提示：写作要点和开头部分已给出，考试应注意要求中的内容，充实细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，表达自己对于Tom所遇到问题的理解心情；
第二步，列举出Tom所遇到问题，并给出自己的建议和看法；
第三步，希望所提出的建议和方法能够有所帮助。
[亮点词汇]
①mention提到，说起，
②have difficulty with 对某事有困难
③as for至于
④take part in 参加
[高分句型]
①You mentioned having difficulty with learning Chinese, and I believe that practicing your speaking skills as much as possible could really help. (并列句，宾语从句)
②I believe you will make more friends soon. (宾语从句)
4．例文：
Dear Chris,
How is it going I’m glad to introduce my favorite Chinese traditional festival to you. I like the Spring Festival best.
The Spring Festival is the most important festival in China. It usually comes in January or February. Before the festival, people do a lot of preparations, such as cleaning the house, decorating the rooms, buying new clothes and so on. On the eve of the festival, family members get together to have a big dinner. We eat traditional food like dumplings. After dinner we watch TV together, and then play fireworks. During the festival, people often visit the relatives and they give best wishes to each other. Old people give children red packets to show their love. We enjoy ourselves very much. I like this festival because it is a time for family reunions and it brings us happiness and hope for the new year.
If you want to know more, please let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是邮件；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述，适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图。借用“我最喜欢春节”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——最喜欢的节日、通常所做的事情以及喜欢的原因等均要一一阐述。
第三步：书写结语，表达“如果您想了解更多信息，请告诉我。”的真诚。
[亮点词汇]
①the most important festival最重要的节日
②enjoy ourselves玩得开心
③do a lot of preparations做很多准备
[高分句型]
①I like this festival because it is a time for family reunions and it brings us happiness and hope for the new year. (because引导的原因状语从句）
②If you want to know more, please let me know. (If引导的条件状语从句)
5．例文
My favourite thing from childhood
My favorite thing from childhood is my teddy bear. I have had it since I was five years old. My grandmother gave it to me as the birthday gift on my birthday.
I like the teddy bear so much because it’s dressed in my favorite color. It’s special to me because my grandmother made it for me. She was always kind to me. Her words and the lovely toy bear made me feel better.
The teddy bear has given me many good memories. I remember when I was young, I was afraid of the dark, so I held my teddy bear to feel safe. Whenever I miss my grandmother, I will look at the toy bear, and it makes me feel happy and warm.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为一般过去时和一般现在时；
③提示：写作时注意围绕所给问题展开描述，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己孩童时期最喜欢的物品是什么；
第二步，介绍自己拥有该物品多久了，具体描述如何得来的该物品；
第三步，介绍自己喜欢该物品的原因及感想。
[亮点词汇]
①be kind to...对……友好
②be afraid of...害怕……
[高分句型]
①I like the teddy bear so much because it’s dressed in my favorite color. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②I remember when I was young, I was afraid of the dark, so I held my teddy bear to feel safe. (宾语从句及when引导的时间状语从句)
6．例文
Dear Mike,
How are you going I am writing to tell you how I will spend a safe and meaningful holiday.
Firstly, I plan to try some volunteer work, like cleaning up the city parks or visiting the old to cheer them up. I believe through the volunteer work, I can develop my independence. Secondly, I will keep away from the dangerous places like rives and remember to protect myself. What’s more, I think it’s necessary to develop my body and mind. So I will read more books and get more exercise. Also, I plan to help my parents share the housework, because it’s also my duty to make our home clean and comfortable. I think my holiday will be colorful.
How will you spend your holiday I’m looking forward to your letter.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：主要是一般现在时和一般将来时；
③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意结合具体语境使用正确的时态，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，仔细阅读所给内容；
第二步，具体介绍你的暑假计划；
第三步，询问Mike的暑假计划。
[亮点词汇]
①independence自立
②keep away from远离
③necessary有必要的
④duty责任
[高分句型]
①What’s more, I think it’s necessary to develop my body and mind.（省略that的宾语从句）
②Also, I plan to help my parents share the housework, because it’s also my duty to make our home clean and comfortable.（because引导的原因状语从句）
7．例文：
Dear Mike,
How are you going I’m writing to tell you how I will spend a safe and meaningful holiday.
First, I think you should try some volunteer work. It’s a great way to develop our self-care abilities. We could do something at a local community center or help clean up a nearby park. This will teach us a lot. Second, safety is important. We should stay away from dangerous places like rivers. Last, don’t forget to read more books. Reading books and exercising are good for our minds and bodies. We also should eat healthy food.
In a word, let’s make sure to enjoy a safe and meaningful holiday.
How will you spend your holiday I am looking forward to your letter.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①体裁：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，应注意不要遗漏题干给出的要点，适当增加细节，灵活运用恰当的句型，使行文流畅自然。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表达问候，表达对暑假的规划；
第二步，详细谈谈如何度过一个有意义的暑假，列举有意义的活动；
第三步，总结并表达期望。
[亮点词汇]
①stay away from远离
②be good for对……有好处
③eat healthy food吃健康的食物
[高分句型]
①It’s a great way to develop our self-care abilities.（it固定句型）
②Reading books and exercising are good for our minds and bodies.（动名词短语作主语）
8． Hello, everyone. I’m glad to be here and give you a speech. My topic is How to have a healthy and happy life.
With the improvement of living conditions, we are paying more and more attention to our health, which includes both physical and mental health. Then how can we live a healthy and happy life
Firstly, we should keep our bodies healthy. Not only do we need to eat healthy food, but we also need to exercise in a proper way every day. For example, we can run for 30 minutes every morning.
Secondly, mental health is also very important. We need to get along well with others as well. When we’re sad, we can communicate with our parents, teachers and friends frankly.
In a word, I hope everyone can have a healthy body and mind, and then we can have a healthy and happy life every day.
That’s all. Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，表明健康和快乐的重要性；
第二步，介绍拥有健康快乐的生活的方式方法；
第三步，发出倡导，提出希望并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①paying more and more attention to越来越重视
②include包括
③not only…but also不仅……而且
④proper适当的
⑤get along well with…与……相处融洽
⑥communicate with sb.与某人沟通
[高分句型]
With the improvement of living conditions, we are paying more and more attention to our health, which includes both physical and mental health. (which引导非限制性定语从句)
9．例文
Dear Miss Wang,
I’m a student from Class 1, Grade 8. I’m glad to know that you’re looking for the student reporters. I think I’m the right person. I get along well with teachers and students and I make many friends in school. I am good at English and took a summer English course in London. I also like English writing, which brings me happiness and success. I have taken part in many English contests and won the first prize. I like sports, too. I like playing basketball. If I have time, I often go to the park to play basketball with my friends on weekends. I hope to be a student reporter for the English school newspaper.
I’m looking forward to your early reply (答复).
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：时态主要为一般现在时；
③提示：写作时注意围绕所给问题展开描述，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己在学校的人际关系，与师生相处融洽；
第二步，介绍自己的英语能力和对英语的态度；
第三步，表达想要当选学生记者的希望。
[亮点词汇]
①get along well with 与……相处融洽
②be good at 擅长……
③take part in参加
[高分句型]
①I get along well with teachers and students and I make many friends in school.(and连接的并列句)
②I also like English writing, which brings me happiness and success.(which引导的定语从句)
③If I have time, I often go to the park to play basketball with my friends on weekends.(if引导的状语从句)
10．例文
I Love Reading
I love reading. Books are our real and best friends. By reading books, not only can we get all kinds of knowledge, but also we can open our eyes. Besides, it is a good way to know about the world. At the same time, reading can make our life more colourful and more enjoyable.
As students, it’s time for us to read more. I plan to spend half an hour reading all kinds of books every day. And I will take notes to remember what they said in the books.
All in all, I hope we should read more and better books in our spare time to improve ourselves.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的每一项提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出“我爱阅读”的话题并介绍阅读的益处；
第二步，阐述自己的阅读的计划；
第三步，书写结语，表达希望。
[亮点词汇]
①all kinds of各种各样的
②at the same time同时
③take notes记笔记
[高分句型]
①By reading books, not only can we get all kinds of knowledge, but also we can open our eyes. (倒装句)
②I hope we should read more and better books in our spare time to improve ourselves. (宾语从句以及动词不定式作目的状语)
11．
One possible version:
How time flies! This is the end of the term. My term was quite busy but fulfilling.
At the beginning of the year, I made several plans. I did exercise every day to stay healthy. I have read eight books so far, which broadened my knowledge. I planned to visit some interesting places, but due to the pandemic, I couldn’t go anywhere. However, I did volunteer work in my community, helping the elderly and cleaning public areas.
Although some plans were not completed, I am happy with what I achieved and look forward to finishing the rest next term.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主，其他时态为辅；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点
[写作步骤]
第一步，总结这个学期的情况；
第二步，介绍自己完成了哪些计划，哪些尚未完成；
第三步，书写结语，表达感受。
[亮点词汇]
① at the beginning of在……开始
② due to由于
③ look forward to期待
[高分句型]
①I have read eight books so far, which broadened my knowledge.（which引导非限制性定语从句）
②Although some plans were not completed, I am happy with what I achieved and look forward to finishing the rest next term.（although引导让步状语从句，what引导宾语从句）
12．例文
How to get on well with parents
In the past, I had difficulty in getting on well with my parents. I used to argue with my parents too. I remember once I had a big fight because I didn’t want to take the after-school class my parents had signed me up for. But after I calmed down, I knew that my parents were doing this for my own good. So I took the initiative to admit my mistake to my parents. And I explained to them why I didn’t want to go. I also promised that I would use practical actions to prove that I do not need to go to after-school classes. After my parents listened, they forgave and understood me. Of course, I finally proved with practice that I can also improve my grades without going to tutoring classes. Through this incident, I understand that communication and understanding of parents is the best way to get along.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，介绍自己与父母相处的困难，常常争吵；
第二步，具体描述与父母争论的原因和解决方法；
第三步，书写结束语，总结如何与父母和睦相处。
[亮点词汇]
①used to do sth 过去常常做某事
②argue with 与……争论
③calm down 冷静下来
④initiative 主动性
⑤of course 当然
⑥incident 事件
[高分句型]
①And I explained to them why I didn’t want to go.（why引导的宾语从句）
②I also promised that I would use practical actions to prove that I do not need to go to after-school classes.（that引导的宾语从句）
13．例文
In our group, everyone has made a plan for the summer vacation. Sally plans to help her parents with housework because she wants to improve her life skills. Tom plans to volunteer at an animal hospital because he wants to know how to take care of animals. Anna plans to have a yard sale because she wants to earn some money to donate to the children’s home. I plan to take up a new hobby: basketball. I think it not only makes me physically healthier, but also makes my spare time happier.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。汇报小组讨论结果；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：注意主语为第三人称单数时，谓语动词的形式要用三单形，必须适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题，要介绍小组暑假计划的讨论结果；
第二步，介绍小组成员暑假计划及原因；
第三步，介绍自己的暑假计划。
[亮点词汇]
①take up a new hobby培养新的爱好
②not only...but also不但……而且……
[高分句型]
①I think it not only makes me physically healthier, but also makes my spare time happier.(宾语从句，not only...but also的固定句型)
14．例文
Dear classmates,
The summer holiday is coming soon! As middle school students, I think we can do something to make Nanjing more civilized.
First, we should always obey traffic rules when crossing the road. In public places, it is necessary to behave politely. We can take part in charity activities and work as volunteers at the community centre. Second, we can save energy by turning off the lights when we leave a room. Also, rubbish should be separated into different groups carefully. It’s wise for us to choose public transport. At last, I plan to finish my homework on time and read more meaningful books. Besides, I am going to travel to Beijing to learn more about the history and culture.
Let’s try our best to become civilized students. Wish you all have a happy and meaningful summer holiday!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述，可适当发挥，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图。借用“作为中学生，我想我们可以做些事情让南京变得更加文明。”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步：具体阐述写作内容。从“礼仪修养、关爱他人、环境保护、暑假计划”等方面具体介绍怎么做；
第三步：书写结语。表达“祝大家度过一个愉快而有意义的暑假”的美好愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①obey traffic rules遵守交通规则
②take part in参加
③save energy节约能源
[高分句型]
①Second, we can save energy by turning off the lights when we leave a room. (when引导状语从句)
②Also, rubbish should be separated into different groups carefully. (含有情态动词的被动语态）
15．例文：
I have changed a lot
Time goes by, I grow up every day. Of course l have changed a lot in the last few years. Let me show you my changes.
I used to be short and I often worried about it. But to my surprise, I’m much taller now. But the biggest change is about my character. I think this change is really great. I used to be very shy and quiet. I was always silent in class. I have no friends there. My teachers and classmates didn’t notice me. When I talked to people, my face often turned red. Now I’m much more outgoing and that makes me more popular. Now I can give a speech for the whole school. I also make lots of friends. As for my hobby, I used to like reading books. But now I’m more interested in playing sports. I often participate in school sports clubs with classmates. Now, I feel good about myself.
I am happy with this change, because it has brought me the happiness of growth.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时，一般过去时和现在完成时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，写出自己原来的性格和现在的改变，并具体说明。
第二步，写出这一变化对自己生活的影响和自己对这一改变的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①to my surprise令我惊讶的是
②be interested in对某事感兴趣
③the happiness of growth成长的快乐
[高分句型]
①I used to be short and I often worried about it.（and连接并列成分）
②When I talked to people, my face often turned red.（when引导时间状语从句）
16．Dear Jack,
I am very glad to hear that you are coming to Xiangyang. Now let me tell you something that you should pay attention to.
It’s very hot here at the moment, so make sure you bring some shorts, T-shirts and other summer clothes when you come here. Don’t forget your ID card. My home is very big and clean, if you like, you can stay in my home; if not, you can stay in a hotel. After class, I will take you to visit the places of interest in Xiangyang and taste the local food. You’re going to stay here for a month. I hope you can form close friendships with your classmates. That will be very good for your Chinese language learning.
If you have any questions, you can send me an email. I can’t wait to meet you here. I’m looking forward to your arrival.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包括表格内所列要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第二人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
［写作步骤］
第一步，开门见山，引出话题：告知注意事情；
第二步，依据表格内容，逐一陈述注意事项，适当拓展；
第三步，书写总结，表达心情。
［亮点词汇］
① make sure 确保
② can’t wait to do sth. 迫不及待去做某事
［高分句型］
① Now let me tell you something that you should pay attention to. (that引导限制性定语从句)
② If you have any questions, you can send me an email. (if引导条件状语从句)
17．例文
The busy and happy term has come to an end.
I have gained a lot. I have learned about 400 new English words. I have also learned to play basketball and swim to improve my health. In my spare time, I have read six Chinese classics. I didn’t go to school for two weeks because I was hurt badly last month. My classmate Liu Gang helped me with my lessons. I am really thankful for his help. Without his help, I could not pass the exam.
In the coming summer vacation, I plan to travel to Beijing to relax myself. Besides, I am going to help my parents do some housework. I think they will be very pleased.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封材料作文；
②时态：本文应使用“一般过去时”和“现在完成时”为主；
③提示：写作要点应注意题干给出的“介绍自己一学期的收获”并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己这学期学到了很多；
第二步，根据题干中的要点，详细描述自己的收获有哪些；
第三步，介绍暑假的打算，并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①learn about学习关于
②do housework做家务
[高分句型]
①I didn’t go to school for two weeks because I was hurt badly last month.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②I think they will be very pleased.（宾语从句）
18．Dear Betty,
I’m sorry to hear that. I know you may feel sad. You should know it’s common that good friends have some problems from time to time.
Perhaps Helen feels angry because the crayons you broke are her favorite, or maybe they are special gifts from someone important to her. So it was natural for her to be angry. And what you can do is to say sorry to her and write to her to tell her that you will try your best to pay for your own mistakes. If possible, you can buy similar crayons for her or give her other things that she like. What’s more, you should be careful with other’s things from now on.
I hope my advice can help you. Hope you and Helen can work things out.
Yours, Kate
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇信件；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：本文应该主要用第二人称来写，也要用到第三人称；分析原因时，要写得具体；同时要把歉意展现出来。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头要与Betty共情，并接纳她情绪，给以宽慰；
第二步，分析Helen生气的原因。然后，给出解决问题的建议；
第三步，总结经验。避免下次类似问题出现。
[亮点词汇]
①from time to time时不时
②say sorry to sb对某人说抱歉
③from now on从现在开始
[高分句型]
①Perhaps Helen feels angry because the crayons you broke are her favorite...（because引导的原因状语从句）
②And what you can do is to say sorry to her...（what引导的主语从句）
19．One possible version:
Let’s Volunteer for Xinyu
As a middle school student, I’m excited to do something for our city to make it more civilized. Here are my plans.
First of all, I plan to actively take part in volunteer activities, like cleaning up parks and streets. Then, I want to offer my help to the old, the sick, and others who neep help, making their life easier and happier. Besides, I’ll care for animals and protect our environment. What’s more, it’s really important for us to follow the traffic rules. Last but not least, I’ll try my best to let more people know the importance of creating a civilized city and make more people join the activity.
Let’s work together to make Xinyu a more civilized and beautiful place!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题；
第二步，结合要点提示，介绍自己打算为“创建文明城市”做的事情；
第三步，书写结语，号召大家一起行动起来，让新余成为一个更文明、更漂亮的城市。
[亮点词汇]
① take part in 参加
② clean up 清理
③ follow the traffic rules 遵守规则
[高分句型]
① Then, I want to offer my help to the old, the sick, and others who neep help, making their life easier and happier.（who引导的定语从句）
② What’s more, it’s really important for us to follow the traffic rules.（it作形式主语）
20．例文
Dear Tom,
How’s it going Do you have some plans for the coming summer vacation In our school, we are asked to make a housework plan for the vacation.
First, I will make my bed after getting up and take out the rubbish after breakfast every day. It’s not difficult so I think I can stick to it. Secondly, I am willing to help do the laundry and hang the clothes up twice a week. Also, I want to learn more skills. I am going to learn how to cook from my grandmother because I wish I could cook dinner for my whole family. If I can cook some simple meals, my parents will not worry about me when they are busy with work.
Do you often do housework at home How about joining me We can learn new skills to make our life better.
Yours,
Li Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：时态以“一般将来时”为主；
③短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己将会做什么家务活；
第二步，介绍自己将会学到什么技能；
第三步，最后介绍自己的收获。
[亮点词汇]
①help sb, with sth,在某方面帮助某人
②do chores做家务
③worry about担心
[高分句型]
①I am going to learn how to cook from my grandmother because I wish I could cook dinner for my whole family.（含有原因状语从句的复合句）
②If I can cook some simple meals, my parents will not worry about me when they are busy with work.（含有条件状语从句的复合句）
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2024-2025学年八年级英语下册期末复习专项鲁教版（五四学制）（期末考点培优）专题15 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．2024“华夏之旅●国际中学生夏令营”将到访河北，活动主办方决定面向全省招募少年志愿者来用英语“讲好中国故事，让世界了解河北”。假如你是李华，请根据下面的招聘通知，并结合自身实际，用英文写一封自荐信。
Volunteers Wanted
Tour China Summer Camp 2024 is coming soon! We want volunteers for the summer camp.
What do you like to do How is your English Do you know something about Chinese history or culture Please introduce one of the places of interest in Hebei to us. We are looking forward to your letters and hope you can join us!
写作要求：
（1）你的自荐信至少包括通知中提到的要点；
（2）文中不得出现个人真实的姓名和校名；
（3）词数80左右，信件开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am Li Hua from Hebei Province. I’m writing to ask for the chance to work as a volunteer at the summer camp.
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Yours,
Li Hua
2．俗话说“瑞雪兆丰年”，长沙刚刚过去的一场大雪为庄稼带来了希望，也为我们带来了欢乐和新的一年。2024年春节即将来临，请根据以下提示，以My New Year’s Plan为题，写一篇不少于70字的短文，谈谈你的新年计划。
(1) 提高身体素质 (physical health：运动、饮食、睡眠……)
(2) 提高学业成绩 (study：……)
(3) 改善人际关系 (personal relationship：……)
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3．假设你是英语校刊Just Ask专栏的编辑李华，收到一封国际生Tom的英文来信。他在信中提出自己在本学期遇到的问题。请根据以下提示写一封70词左右的回信。
内容包括：
1.Tom在学习及生活方面遇到的问题；
2.你的建议及理由。
注意：
1.开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
Dear Tom,
I’m sorry to hear that you have some trouble now.
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I hope my advice can help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
4．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Chris对中国的传统节日很感兴趣。他给你发来邮件，想了解一下中国的传统节日。请你用英语回复一封邮件，介绍一个你最喜欢的中国传统节日，内容包括你最喜欢的中国传统节日是什么，在这个节日通常都做些什么，以及你喜欢这个节日的原因。
提示词语： the Spring Festival, watch, dumplings, get together, important
提示问题：
·What’s your favorite Chinese traditional festival
·What do you usually do during the festival
·Why do you like it
Dear Chris, How is it going I'm glad to introduce my favorite Chinese traditional festival to you. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ If you want to know more, please let me know. Yours, Li Hua
5．每个人都会有一个专属的童年，在这期间，你也许会有一些(个)格外珍惜的物品，它(们)会给你留下比较深刻的回忆。你孩童时代最喜欢并且保留的东西是什么呢 请你根据下面的问题提示写一篇英语短文，介绍一下吧。
1. What is your favourite thing from childhood which you still have
2. How long have you had it
3. How did you get it Did someone give it to you Who
4. Why do you like it so much Can you say something more about it
写作要求：
1. 紧扣主题，结合提示信息，适当发挥，语言表达准确、语义通顺连贯；
2. 书写工整，不少于80词。请考生将题目写在答题卡相应处；
3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(校名，姓名，地名等)。
My favourite thing from childhood
My favorite thing from childhood is
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6．暑假即将来临，很多同学已经开始计划如何度过一个有意义的暑假。假如你是李华，请你以“How to Spend a Safe and Meaningful Holiday”为话题，给你的好友Mike写封信，要点如下：
1.尝试做一些志愿者工作（举例说明做什么志愿者工作），通过志愿者工作提高自立能力(develop one’s independence)。
2.保护(protect)自己，远离(keep away from)河流等危险的地方。
3.多读书，锻炼，强健体魄。
4.帮父母干家务活。
注意：
1. 字迹工整，词数90—100词。
2.可适当发挥使行文连贯。
3.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
4.开头结尾已给出不计入总词数。
Dear Mike,
How are you going I am writing to tell you how I will spend a safe and meaningful holiday. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
How will you spend your holiday I’m looking forward to your letter.
Yours,
Li Hua
7．暑假即将来临，很多同学已经开始计划如何度过一个有意义的暑假。假如你是李华，请你以“How to Spend a Safe and Meaningful Holiday”为话题给你的好友Mike回信。
要点如下：1. 尝试做一些志愿者工作，提高自理能力。
2. 保护自己，远离河流等危险的地方。
3. 多读书、锻炼，合理饮食。
注意：1. 词数80—100。
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
4. 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：志愿者工作 volunteer work；提高自理能力 develop self-care abilities
Dear Mike,
How are you going I’m writing to tell you how I will spend a safe and meaningful holiday.
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How will you spend your holiday I am looking forward to your letter.
Yours,
Li Hua
8．拥有健康的身体和愉悦的心情能够让我们快乐地生活和学习。为倡导“健康生活、快乐学习”的理念，你的班级将召开一次以“How to have a healthy and happy life ”为主题的班会。请你用英文写一篇演讲稿。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
写作要点：
1. 健康和快乐的重要性；
2. 如何拥有健康快乐的生活（饮食、运动、与人相处等）；
3. 发出倡导，提出希望。
写作要求：
1. 可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；
3. 80~100词。
Hello, everyone. I’m glad to be here and give you a speech. My topic is How to have a healthy and happy life
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9．假如你是李华， 你校英语校刊要招聘学生记者， 你想要加入。请你用英语给校报的负责人王老师写一封电子邮件推荐自己。
内容要点：
（1） 你和师生相处融洽， 在学校交了很多朋友。
（2） 你擅长英语， 在伦敦参加过暑期英语课程。
（3） 你还喜欢英语写作， 写作给你带来快乐和成功。
（4） 你多次参加英语比赛， 并获得过一等奖。
（5） 你希望 ……
要求：
（1） 词数： 70~90 词。
（2） 邮件格式 、开头及结尾已给出， 不计入总词数。
（3） 要点齐全， 行文连贯， 可适当发挥。
Dear Miss Wang,
I’m a student from Class 1, Grade 8. I’m glad to know that you’re looking for the student reporters. I think
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I’m looking forward to your early reply (答复).
Yours,
Li Hua
10．阅读可以拓宽我们的知识面，增长我们的见识，也可以提高我们的修养和内涵。但是目前许多中学生不重视课外阅读，却把很多时间花在上网和玩手机上。请根据以下表格内容，以“I Love Reading”为题，写一篇英语短文。
要点提示：
阅读的益处 书籍是人类的好朋友； 帮助我们获取知识，开阔眼界，了解世界； 让生活丰富多彩，带给我们快乐……
阅读的计划 每天花半个小时阅读;阅读各种各样的书籍；做读书笔记……
希望 业余时间多读书，读好书……
写作要求：
1. 短文内容应包括表格中所有信息，条理清晰，可适当发挥。
2. 语句通顺，语法正确，80词左右。
3. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名和地名。
参考词汇：获取知识 get knowledge；开阔眼界 open one’s eyes；做笔记 take notes
I Love Reading
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11．本学期就要结束了，让我们一起对照年初的计划来对自己进行一次总结吧。请参考以下提示信息，用英语写一篇短文，盘点你完成了哪些计划，哪些尚未完成。
提示：
1. How was your term
2. What did you do Did you do exercise every day
3. How many books have you read
4. Have you been to somewhere interesting
5. Have you ever been a volunteer
要求：
1.80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2.要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
How time flies! This is the end of the term.
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12．你们学校的英文月刊发起了题为“How to get on well with parents”的征文活动。请根据以下通知要求，并结合自身实际，用英文写一篇短文。
Notice It is common that there are some problems and worries in your life. What matters most is how you deal with them. Have you ever argued with your parents You can share the argument between your parents and you, the reason and the way you solve it. We are really looking forward to your opinions.
How to get on well with parents
In the past, I had difficulty in getting on well with my parents.
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13．英语课中，外教Wendy要求小组讨论“What do you plan to do in the summer vacation Why ” 以下是你们小组的讨论结果。请你写一篇短文, 汇报讨论结果并谈谈自己的计划。
Students Plans Reasons.
Sally Help with housework Improve her life skills
Tom Volunteer at an animal hospital Know how to care for animals
Anna Have a yard sale Make money to give away to children’s home
You … …
注意:
1. 短文必须包含表格中的信息，可适当增加细节；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名等；
3. 词数80﹣100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
In our group, everyone has made a plan for the summer vacation.
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14．文明，是一座城市最温暖的底色。当前，南京正在加快创建全国文明典范城市的步伐，从“文明高地”向“文明高峰”攀登。值此暑假来临之际，请你写一篇演讲稿，以参加暑期“How to be a civilized (文明的) middle school student ”为主题的演讲比赛。内容应包含以下要点：
礼仪修养：遵守交通规则，公共场合举止礼貌……
关爱他人：参与慈善活动，做志愿者……
环境保护：节约能源，垃圾分类，公共交通……
暑假计划：按时完成作业，多读有意义的书，旅行……
注意：
1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2.短文须包括所有内容要点，并适当发挥；
3.词数80左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear classmates,
The summer holiday is coming soon! As middle school students, I think we can do something to make Nanjing more civilized.
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15．假定某英文杂志举办征文比赛，请你以“I have changed a lot”为题，根据所给提示，写一篇短文投稿。提示如下：
1.你六年级时某一性格特点；
2.你是如何改变这一性格的；
3.你对这一改变的看法。
要求：
1.词数 100左右；题目已给出，不计入总词数。
2.须包含所有要点提示，并可适当补充，以使语句通顺，行文连贯；
3.文中不得出现个人姓名、校名等真实信息。
I have changed a lot
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16．假如你是襄州四中李辉，你的英国笔友Jack暑假将要来襄阳学习汉语一个月。请你根据以下表格内所给的信息给他写一封电子邮件告知相关注意事项。
内容要点：
需带物品 身份证、短裤等衣服……
住宿地方 本人家里或者酒店
课后活动 带领参观襄阳名胜古迹、品尝美食……
表达希望 与同学建立亲密友谊……
注意：
1. 内容必须包含表格中的所有信息；
2. 可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不得透露个人信息；
4. 词数80左右；短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：名胜古迹places of interest；建立form
Dear Jack,
I am very glad to hear that
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Yours,
Li Hui
17．忙碌而又愉快的一学期就要结束了。在这个学期你有哪些收获？哪件事最让你难忘？暑假你有什么打算？请根据提示用英语写一篇短文，介绍给你的同学们。
举例：
1. 已经学习了大约 400个新英语单词，已经学习打篮球……
2. 难忘的一件事。 (你做了什么及感想)
3 .暑假有何打算。
写作要求：
1. 语句通顺；表达正确。
2. 内容必须包括提示的信息；可适当发挥。
3. 文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
词数：80词左右。
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18．假如你是 Kate，你的表妹 Betty 给你来信，讲述了她的烦恼。请你根据信中表妹的烦恼，结合要点提示，用英语给她写一封回信。
Dear Kate, I have a problem. You know Helen is my best friend. Last week, I broke her crayons carelessly. I don’t know why she is so angry that she doesn’t talk to me now. What should I do Yours, Betty
要点提示: 1. 接纳情绪：understand feelings…
2. 分析原因：her favorite, special…
3. 给出建议：say sorry to her, write to her…
4. 总结经验：be careful with others’ things…
要求：1. 文中需包含以上要点，并适当拓展；
2. 文中不得出现真实的校名和人名；
3. 字数 80 词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Betty,
I’m sorry to hear that
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I hope my advice can help you. Hope you and Helen can work things out.
Yours,
Kate
19．今年我市正开展“文明城市创建”活动，全体市民都已经积极行动起来。作为一名中学生，你打算为此做些什么呢？请根据下面提示，以 Let’s Volunteer For Xinyu 写一篇英语短文，描述你的打算。
1.积极参加志愿者活动；2.热情帮助老人，病人及有困难的群体；3.关爱动物、保护环境；4.遵守交通规则；5.帮助宣传“文明创建”活动的重要意义。
要求：1.短文涵盖上述要点，可适当发挥，行文需流畅，篇幅不少于80字；
2.文章中不得出现真实的人名和学校名。
参考词汇：文明的 civilized
Let’s Volunteer For Xinyu
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20．本卷阅读理解D篇提到孩子帮助做家务有利于改善孩子与父母之间的关系。暑假来临，你校准备开展“我劳动、我学习、我快乐”的主题活动。假如你是李明，正在给你的笔友Tom写一封邮件，谈论你对学校主题活动的想法和你的暑假劳动计划。
写作要点：
1. What’s your opinion about doing housework
2. Which kinds of housework do you plan to do or learn to do Why
3. How are you going to do that
要求：
1.短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
2.短文中不得出现真实的人名和地名。
3. 80词左右。（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。）
Dear Tom,
How’s it going Do you have some plans for the coming summer vacation In our school, we are asked to make a housework plan for the vacation.
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Yours,
Li Ming
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Hua from Hebei Province. I’m writing to ask for the chance to work as a volunteer at the summer camp.
I love talking to people and sharing stories. My English is good enough to communicate with international students. I know a lot about Chinese history and culture. For example, Chengde Mountain Resort in Hebei is a great place to visit. It has a long history and beautiful scenery. I can tell the stories behind it to the campers.
I really want to join you and help make the summer camp a success. I hope I can be part of this wonderful event.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为自荐信；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据所给的问题同时进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图（已给出）；
第二步，介绍自己的相关信息，并介绍河北的一个景点；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①communicate with和……交流
②for example例如
③be part of成为……的一部分
[高分句型]
①My English is good enough to communicate with international students.（动词不定式作结果状语）
②I hope I can be part of this wonderful event.（省略that的宾语从句）
2．例文：
My New Year’s Plan
The new year is coming. I make some new year’s resolutions.
The most important thing is that I will get over my bad habits. I will take up a hobby and learn to play the piano. Next year I will do more sports to keep healthy. For example, I can run to school every day. I can play football or basketball at school every day. I will have a healthy diet and have enough sleep. I also want to improve my personal relationship with others. I will spend more time with my parents. I am going to help my parents do the housework. And I will talk to them more often. I want to be an excellent student, so my last resolution is that I will work hard on all my subjects. I will do my homework on time and listen to my teachers carefully. I hope to get good grades.
In a word, I hope I can make great progress next year.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。直接说明要介绍新年计划；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。重点介绍提高身体素质、提高学业成绩及改善人际关系方面的计划；
第三步，书写结语。表达新年的希望。
[亮点词汇]
①get over克服
②take up a hobby培养一个爱好
③have a healthy diet有一个健康的饮食
④excellent优秀的
⑤progress进步
[高分句型]
①The most important thing is that I will get over my bad habits. (表语从句)
②In a word, I hope I can make great progress next year. (宾语从句)
3．例文
Dear Tom,
I’m sorry to hear that you have some trouble now.
You mentioned having difficulty with learning Chinese, and I believe that practicing your speaking skills as much as possible could really help. You can also watch some Chinese movies or listen to Chinese songs to improve your listening skills. As for your problem of making friends, you should be more active and try to talk to your classmates. Joining some clubs or taking part in activities is another great way to meet new people. Don’t be afraid to make mistakes. I believe you will make more friends soon.
I hope my advice can help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：一般现在时和一般过去时
③提示：写作要点和开头部分已给出，考试应注意要求中的内容，充实细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，表达自己对于Tom所遇到问题的理解心情；
第二步，列举出Tom所遇到问题，并给出自己的建议和看法；
第三步，希望所提出的建议和方法能够有所帮助。
[亮点词汇]
①mention提到，说起，
②have difficulty with 对某事有困难
③as for至于
④take part in 参加
[高分句型]
①You mentioned having difficulty with learning Chinese, and I believe that practicing your speaking skills as much as possible could really help. (并列句，宾语从句)
②I believe you will make more friends soon. (宾语从句)
4．例文：
Dear Chris,
How is it going I’m glad to introduce my favorite Chinese traditional festival to you. I like the Spring Festival best.
The Spring Festival is the most important festival in China. It usually comes in January or February. Before the festival, people do a lot of preparations, such as cleaning the house, decorating the rooms, buying new clothes and so on. On the eve of the festival, family members get together to have a big dinner. We eat traditional food like dumplings. After dinner we watch TV together, and then play fireworks. During the festival, people often visit the relatives and they give best wishes to each other. Old people give children red packets to show their love. We enjoy ourselves very much. I like this festival because it is a time for family reunions and it brings us happiness and hope for the new year.
If you want to know more, please let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是邮件；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述，适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图。借用“我最喜欢春节”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——最喜欢的节日、通常所做的事情以及喜欢的原因等均要一一阐述。
第三步：书写结语，表达“如果您想了解更多信息，请告诉我。”的真诚。
[亮点词汇]
①the most important festival最重要的节日
②enjoy ourselves玩得开心
③do a lot of preparations做很多准备
[高分句型]
①I like this festival because it is a time for family reunions and it brings us happiness and hope for the new year. (because引导的原因状语从句）
②If you want to know more, please let me know. (If引导的条件状语从句)
5．例文
My favourite thing from childhood
My favorite thing from childhood is my teddy bear. I have had it since I was five years old. My grandmother gave it to me as the birthday gift on my birthday.
I like the teddy bear so much because it’s dressed in my favorite color. It’s special to me because my grandmother made it for me. She was always kind to me. Her words and the lovely toy bear made me feel better.
The teddy bear has given me many good memories. I remember when I was young, I was afraid of the dark, so I held my teddy bear to feel safe. Whenever I miss my grandmother, I will look at the toy bear, and it makes me feel happy and warm.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为一般过去时和一般现在时；
③提示：写作时注意围绕所给问题展开描述，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己孩童时期最喜欢的物品是什么；
第二步，介绍自己拥有该物品多久了，具体描述如何得来的该物品；
第三步，介绍自己喜欢该物品的原因及感想。
[亮点词汇]
①be kind to...对……友好
②be afraid of...害怕……
[高分句型]
①I like the teddy bear so much because it’s dressed in my favorite color. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②I remember when I was young, I was afraid of the dark, so I held my teddy bear to feel safe. (宾语从句及when引导的时间状语从句)
6．例文
Dear Mike,
How are you going I am writing to tell you how I will spend a safe and meaningful holiday.
Firstly, I plan to try some volunteer work, like cleaning up the city parks or visiting the old to cheer them up. I believe through the volunteer work, I can develop my independence. Secondly, I will keep away from the dangerous places like rives and remember to protect myself. What’s more, I think it’s necessary to develop my body and mind. So I will read more books and get more exercise. Also, I plan to help my parents share the housework, because it’s also my duty to make our home clean and comfortable. I think my holiday will be colorful.
How will you spend your holiday I’m looking forward to your letter.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：主要是一般现在时和一般将来时；
③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意结合具体语境使用正确的时态，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，仔细阅读所给内容；
第二步，具体介绍你的暑假计划；
第三步，询问Mike的暑假计划。
[亮点词汇]
①independence自立
②keep away from远离
③necessary有必要的
④duty责任
[高分句型]
①What’s more, I think it’s necessary to develop my body and mind.（省略that的宾语从句）
②Also, I plan to help my parents share the housework, because it’s also my duty to make our home clean and comfortable.（because引导的原因状语从句）
7．例文：
Dear Mike,
How are you going I’m writing to tell you how I will spend a safe and meaningful holiday.
First, I think you should try some volunteer work. It’s a great way to develop our self-care abilities. We could do something at a local community center or help clean up a nearby park. This will teach us a lot. Second, safety is important. We should stay away from dangerous places like rivers. Last, don’t forget to read more books. Reading books and exercising are good for our minds and bodies. We also should eat healthy food.
In a word, let’s make sure to enjoy a safe and meaningful holiday.
How will you spend your holiday I am looking forward to your letter.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①体裁：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，应注意不要遗漏题干给出的要点，适当增加细节，灵活运用恰当的句型，使行文流畅自然。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表达问候，表达对暑假的规划；
第二步，详细谈谈如何度过一个有意义的暑假，列举有意义的活动；
第三步，总结并表达期望。
[亮点词汇]
①stay away from远离
②be good for对……有好处
③eat healthy food吃健康的食物
[高分句型]
①It’s a great way to develop our self-care abilities.（it固定句型）
②Reading books and exercising are good for our minds and bodies.（动名词短语作主语）
8． Hello, everyone. I’m glad to be here and give you a speech. My topic is How to have a healthy and happy life.
With the improvement of living conditions, we are paying more and more attention to our health, which includes both physical and mental health. Then how can we live a healthy and happy life
Firstly, we should keep our bodies healthy. Not only do we need to eat healthy food, but we also need to exercise in a proper way every day. For example, we can run for 30 minutes every morning.
Secondly, mental health is also very important. We need to get along well with others as well. When we’re sad, we can communicate with our parents, teachers and friends frankly.
In a word, I hope everyone can have a healthy body and mind, and then we can have a healthy and happy life every day.
That’s all. Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，表明健康和快乐的重要性；
第二步，介绍拥有健康快乐的生活的方式方法；
第三步，发出倡导，提出希望并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①paying more and more attention to越来越重视
②include包括
③not only…but also不仅……而且
④proper适当的
⑤get along well with…与……相处融洽
⑥communicate with sb.与某人沟通
[高分句型]
With the improvement of living conditions, we are paying more and more attention to our health, which includes both physical and mental health. (which引导非限制性定语从句)
9．例文
Dear Miss Wang,
I’m a student from Class 1, Grade 8. I’m glad to know that you’re looking for the student reporters. I think I’m the right person. I get along well with teachers and students and I make many friends in school. I am good at English and took a summer English course in London. I also like English writing, which brings me happiness and success. I have taken part in many English contests and won the first prize. I like sports, too. I like playing basketball. If I have time, I often go to the park to play basketball with my friends on weekends. I hope to be a student reporter for the English school newspaper.
I’m looking forward to your early reply (答复).
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：时态主要为一般现在时；
③提示：写作时注意围绕所给问题展开描述，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己在学校的人际关系，与师生相处融洽；
第二步，介绍自己的英语能力和对英语的态度；
第三步，表达想要当选学生记者的希望。
[亮点词汇]
①get along well with 与……相处融洽
②be good at 擅长……
③take part in参加
[高分句型]
①I get along well with teachers and students and I make many friends in school.(and连接的并列句)
②I also like English writing, which brings me happiness and success.(which引导的定语从句)
③If I have time, I often go to the park to play basketball with my friends on weekends.(if引导的状语从句)
10．例文
I Love Reading
I love reading. Books are our real and best friends. By reading books, not only can we get all kinds of knowledge, but also we can open our eyes. Besides, it is a good way to know about the world. At the same time, reading can make our life more colourful and more enjoyable.
As students, it’s time for us to read more. I plan to spend half an hour reading all kinds of books every day. And I will take notes to remember what they said in the books.
All in all, I hope we should read more and better books in our spare time to improve ourselves.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的每一项提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出“我爱阅读”的话题并介绍阅读的益处；
第二步，阐述自己的阅读的计划；
第三步，书写结语，表达希望。
[亮点词汇]
①all kinds of各种各样的
②at the same time同时
③take notes记笔记
[高分句型]
①By reading books, not only can we get all kinds of knowledge, but also we can open our eyes. (倒装句)
②I hope we should read more and better books in our spare time to improve ourselves. (宾语从句以及动词不定式作目的状语)
11．
One possible version:
How time flies! This is the end of the term. My term was quite busy but fulfilling.
At the beginning of the year, I made several plans. I did exercise every day to stay healthy. I have read eight books so far, which broadened my knowledge. I planned to visit some interesting places, but due to the pandemic, I couldn’t go anywhere. However, I did volunteer work in my community, helping the elderly and cleaning public areas.
Although some plans were not completed, I am happy with what I achieved and look forward to finishing the rest next term.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主，其他时态为辅；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点
[写作步骤]
第一步，总结这个学期的情况；
第二步，介绍自己完成了哪些计划，哪些尚未完成；
第三步，书写结语，表达感受。
[亮点词汇]
① at the beginning of在……开始
② due to由于
③ look forward to期待
[高分句型]
①I have read eight books so far, which broadened my knowledge.（which引导非限制性定语从句）
②Although some plans were not completed, I am happy with what I achieved and look forward to finishing the rest next term.（although引导让步状语从句，what引导宾语从句）
12．例文
How to get on well with parents
In the past, I had difficulty in getting on well with my parents. I used to argue with my parents too. I remember once I had a big fight because I didn’t want to take the after-school class my parents had signed me up for. But after I calmed down, I knew that my parents were doing this for my own good. So I took the initiative to admit my mistake to my parents. And I explained to them why I didn’t want to go. I also promised that I would use practical actions to prove that I do not need to go to after-school classes. After my parents listened, they forgave and understood me. Of course, I finally proved with practice that I can also improve my grades without going to tutoring classes. Through this incident, I understand that communication and understanding of parents is the best way to get along.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，介绍自己与父母相处的困难，常常争吵；
第二步，具体描述与父母争论的原因和解决方法；
第三步，书写结束语，总结如何与父母和睦相处。
[亮点词汇]
①used to do sth 过去常常做某事
②argue with 与……争论
③calm down 冷静下来
④initiative 主动性
⑤of course 当然
⑥incident 事件
[高分句型]
①And I explained to them why I didn’t want to go.（why引导的宾语从句）
②I also promised that I would use practical actions to prove that I do not need to go to after-school classes.（that引导的宾语从句）
13．例文
In our group, everyone has made a plan for the summer vacation. Sally plans to help her parents with housework because she wants to improve her life skills. Tom plans to volunteer at an animal hospital because he wants to know how to take care of animals. Anna plans to have a yard sale because she wants to earn some money to donate to the children’s home. I plan to take up a new hobby: basketball. I think it not only makes me physically healthier, but also makes my spare time happier.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。汇报小组讨论结果；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：注意主语为第三人称单数时，谓语动词的形式要用三单形，必须适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题，要介绍小组暑假计划的讨论结果；
第二步，介绍小组成员暑假计划及原因；
第三步，介绍自己的暑假计划。
[亮点词汇]
①take up a new hobby培养新的爱好
②not only...but also不但……而且……
[高分句型]
①I think it not only makes me physically healthier, but also makes my spare time happier.(宾语从句，not only...but also的固定句型)
14．例文
Dear classmates,
The summer holiday is coming soon! As middle school students, I think we can do something to make Nanjing more civilized.
First, we should always obey traffic rules when crossing the road. In public places, it is necessary to behave politely. We can take part in charity activities and work as volunteers at the community centre. Second, we can save energy by turning off the lights when we leave a room. Also, rubbish should be separated into different groups carefully. It’s wise for us to choose public transport. At last, I plan to finish my homework on time and read more meaningful books. Besides, I am going to travel to Beijing to learn more about the history and culture.
Let’s try our best to become civilized students. Wish you all have a happy and meaningful summer holiday!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述，可适当发挥，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图。借用“作为中学生，我想我们可以做些事情让南京变得更加文明。”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步：具体阐述写作内容。从“礼仪修养、关爱他人、环境保护、暑假计划”等方面具体介绍怎么做；
第三步：书写结语。表达“祝大家度过一个愉快而有意义的暑假”的美好愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①obey traffic rules遵守交通规则
②take part in参加
③save energy节约能源
[高分句型]
①Second, we can save energy by turning off the lights when we leave a room. (when引导状语从句)
②Also, rubbish should be separated into different groups carefully. (含有情态动词的被动语态）
15．例文：
I have changed a lot
Time goes by, I grow up every day. Of course l have changed a lot in the last few years. Let me show you my changes.
I used to be short and I often worried about it. But to my surprise, I’m much taller now. But the biggest change is about my character. I think this change is really great. I used to be very shy and quiet. I was always silent in class. I have no friends there. My teachers and classmates didn’t notice me. When I talked to people, my face often turned red. Now I’m much more outgoing and that makes me more popular. Now I can give a speech for the whole school. I also make lots of friends. As for my hobby, I used to like reading books. But now I’m more interested in playing sports. I often participate in school sports clubs with classmates. Now, I feel good about myself.
I am happy with this change, because it has brought me the happiness of growth.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时，一般过去时和现在完成时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，写出自己原来的性格和现在的改变，并具体说明。
第二步，写出这一变化对自己生活的影响和自己对这一改变的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①to my surprise令我惊讶的是
②be interested in对某事感兴趣
③the happiness of growth成长的快乐
[高分句型]
①I used to be short and I often worried about it.（and连接并列成分）
②When I talked to people, my face often turned red.（when引导时间状语从句）
16．Dear Jack,
I am very glad to hear that you are coming to Xiangyang. Now let me tell you something that you should pay attention to.
It’s very hot here at the moment, so make sure you bring some shorts, T-shirts and other summer clothes when you come here. Don’t forget your ID card. My home is very big and clean, if you like, you can stay in my home; if not, you can stay in a hotel. After class, I will take you to visit the places of interest in Xiangyang and taste the local food. You’re going to stay here for a month. I hope you can form close friendships with your classmates. That will be very good for your Chinese language learning.
If you have any questions, you can send me an email. I can’t wait to meet you here. I’m looking forward to your arrival.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包括表格内所列要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第二人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
［写作步骤］
第一步，开门见山，引出话题：告知注意事情；
第二步，依据表格内容，逐一陈述注意事项，适当拓展；
第三步，书写总结，表达心情。
［亮点词汇］
① make sure 确保
② can’t wait to do sth. 迫不及待去做某事
［高分句型］
① Now let me tell you something that you should pay attention to. (that引导限制性定语从句)
② If you have any questions, you can send me an email. (if引导条件状语从句)
17．例文
The busy and happy term has come to an end.
I have gained a lot. I have learned about 400 new English words. I have also learned to play basketball and swim to improve my health. In my spare time, I have read six Chinese classics. I didn’t go to school for two weeks because I was hurt badly last month. My classmate Liu Gang helped me with my lessons. I am really thankful for his help. Without his help, I could not pass the exam.
In the coming summer vacation, I plan to travel to Beijing to relax myself. Besides, I am going to help my parents do some housework. I think they will be very pleased.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封材料作文；
②时态：本文应使用“一般过去时”和“现在完成时”为主；
③提示：写作要点应注意题干给出的“介绍自己一学期的收获”并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己这学期学到了很多；
第二步，根据题干中的要点，详细描述自己的收获有哪些；
第三步，介绍暑假的打算，并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①learn about学习关于
②do housework做家务
[高分句型]
①I didn’t go to school for two weeks because I was hurt badly last month.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②I think they will be very pleased.（宾语从句）
18．Dear Betty,
I’m sorry to hear that. I know you may feel sad. You should know it’s common that good friends have some problems from time to time.
Perhaps Helen feels angry because the crayons you broke are her favorite, or maybe they are special gifts from someone important to her. So it was natural for her to be angry. And what you can do is to say sorry to her and write to her to tell her that you will try your best to pay for your own mistakes. If possible, you can buy similar crayons for her or give her other things that she like. What’s more, you should be careful with other’s things from now on.
I hope my advice can help you. Hope you and Helen can work things out.
Yours, Kate
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇信件；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：本文应该主要用第二人称来写，也要用到第三人称；分析原因时，要写得具体；同时要把歉意展现出来。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头要与Betty共情，并接纳她情绪，给以宽慰；
第二步，分析Helen生气的原因。然后，给出解决问题的建议；
第三步，总结经验。避免下次类似问题出现。
[亮点词汇]
①from time to time时不时
②say sorry to sb对某人说抱歉
③from now on从现在开始
[高分句型]
①Perhaps Helen feels angry because the crayons you broke are her favorite...（because引导的原因状语从句）
②And what you can do is to say sorry to her...（what引导的主语从句）
19．One possible version:
Let’s Volunteer for Xinyu
As a middle school student, I’m excited to do something for our city to make it more civilized. Here are my plans.
First of all, I plan to actively take part in volunteer activities, like cleaning up parks and streets. Then, I want to offer my help to the old, the sick, and others who neep help, making their life easier and happier. Besides, I’ll care for animals and protect our environment. What’s more, it’s really important for us to follow the traffic rules. Last but not least, I’ll try my best to let more people know the importance of creating a civilized city and make more people join the activity.
Let’s work together to make Xinyu a more civilized and beautiful place!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题；
第二步，结合要点提示，介绍自己打算为“创建文明城市”做的事情；
第三步，书写结语，号召大家一起行动起来，让新余成为一个更文明、更漂亮的城市。
[亮点词汇]
① take part in 参加
② clean up 清理
③ follow the traffic rules 遵守规则
[高分句型]
① Then, I want to offer my help to the old, the sick, and others who neep help, making their life easier and happier.（who引导的定语从句）
② What’s more, it’s really important for us to follow the traffic rules.（it作形式主语）
20．例文
Dear Tom,
How’s it going Do you have some plans for the coming summer vacation In our school, we are asked to make a housework plan for the vacation.
First, I will make my bed after getting up and take out the rubbish after breakfast every day. It’s not difficult so I think I can stick to it. Secondly, I am willing to help do the laundry and hang the clothes up twice a week. Also, I want to learn more skills. I am going to learn how to cook from my grandmother because I wish I could cook dinner for my whole family. If I can cook some simple meals, my parents will not worry about me when they are busy with work.
Do you often do housework at home How about joining me We can learn new skills to make our life better.
Yours,
Li Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：时态以“一般将来时”为主；
③短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己将会做什么家务活；
第二步，介绍自己将会学到什么技能；
第三步，最后介绍自己的收获。
[亮点词汇]
①help sb, with sth,在某方面帮助某人
②do chores做家务
③worry about担心
[高分句型]
①I am going to learn how to cook from my grandmother because I wish I could cook dinner for my whole family.（含有原因状语从句的复合句）
②If I can cook some simple meals, my parents will not worry about me when they are busy with work.（含有条件状语从句的复合句）
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