（期末考点培优）专题15 书面表达-2024-2025学年八年级英语下册期末复习考点培优专项北师大版（含答案解析）

中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
2024-2025学年八年级英语下册期末复习专项北师大版
（期末考点培优）专题15 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．研学旅行是通过集体旅行来开展学习和体验相结合的校外教育活动，深受学生的喜爱，为此，请你给校报英语专栏写一篇短文，介绍学校开展的研学活动并发表看法。
内容要点如下：
(1) Learn about tea picking;
(2) Observe (观察) plants and animals;
(3) Plant trees along the river;
(4) Visit places of interest and museums.
注意：
(1) 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；
(2) 词数80左右；
(3) 内容连贯，不要逐条翻译，补充一两点个人看法；
(4) 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：experience v. 体验 nature n.自然 meaningful adj.有意义的
The study trip is a kind of school education which is held outside and popular with students. Our school has also held many study trips. Here are my experiences.
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2．暑假即将来临，很多同学已经开始计划如何度过一个有意义的暑假。假如你是李华，请你以“How to Spend a Safe and Meaningful Holiday”为话题给你的好友Mike写一封邮件。
要点如下：
1. 尝试做一些志愿者工作，提高自理能力；
2. 保护自己，远离河流等危险的地方；
3. 多读书和锻炼，增长知识，强健体魄。
注意：
1. 词数80～100；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 邮件的格式、开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Mike,
How are you going I’m writing to tell you how I will spend a safe and meaningful holiday.
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How will you spend your holiday I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
3．当你在学习、交友、家庭生活等方面遇到困难或烦恼时，是怎样应对和处理的呢？请你根据以下提示用英语写一篇短文，分享一次自己解决烦恼的经历并谈谈你的收获和感悟。
□ What was your trouble □ How did you solve it □ What have you learned from the experience
注意：1.短文须包含以上所有提示，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和个人信息；
3.词数80左右 (短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
People always have trouble in their daily life.
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4．提示：每个人都经历过童年，小时候的一些玩具总是令人难忘的。请以“My Favorite Toy”为题，用英语写一篇短文，向大家介绍你最爱的玩具以及你喜欢它的原因。
要求：1.根据所给题目，写一篇短文，词数不少于 80个；
2.语言流畅，书写规范，卷面整洁；
3.文中不得使用你的真实姓名，校名，否则以零分计；
4.请将短文写在答题卡上，如在本卷上作答，一律不得分。
My Favorite Toy
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5．建设平安校园是我们每个人的责任与义务。作为一名中学生，我们应珍惜自己的生命，注意自己的人身安全。假如你是Li Hua，请你就安全问题，向全校学生写一封安全倡议书。
提示要点：（1）不带管制刀具到学校；（2）不独自下河游泳；（3）不与他人打架；（4）上学放学途中注意交通安全；（5）不吃变质食物；（6）遇紧急情况，立即向警察或老师求助。
参考词汇：管制刀具：restricted knives；变质食物： spoiled food；紧急情况：emergency；交通安全： pay attention to the traffic
写作要求：（1）至少写出提示要点中的3个， 层次清晰，书写规范。
（2）可适当发挥，80词左右，开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数（3）严禁出现自己的真实姓名和学校等相关信息。
Dear students,
As we know, safety is the most important thing in our daily lives. So, we should try our best to make sure we are safe.
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In a word, following these safeties rules above can make us live in peace.
Yours,
Li hua
6．赤峰文旅火爆出圈，你的笔友Mike来信说他暑假要来赤峰旅行，请你用英文写一封回信，介绍一些本地的景点和特产，以及一些注意事项。内容包括：1.表示欢迎和期盼。2.介绍一些本地景点和特产。3.注意事项。
参考词汇：beef jerky（牛肉干）, Double Cooked Pork Slices（锅包肉）, Asihatu Stone Forest（阿斯哈图石林），grassland（草原，牧场）
要求：
1)文中不要出现与考生相关的真实信息；
2)适当增加细节，词数70左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Mike,
I’m glad to receive your letter.
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I’m looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
7．每个人都经历过童年，小时候的一些瞬间总是令人难以忘怀，那段无忧无虑、快乐无比的日子在我们的记忆中也将永不褪色 请根据提示以My childhood memory为题写一篇英语短文，向大家讲述你童年发生的故事。
写作提示：
1. When did it happen
2. What was your memory
写作要求：
1.内容包含提示要点，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写工整；
3. 80词左右。
My childhood memory
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8．每个人在生活中都会遇到困难和压力。作为初二的学生，Tom在英文交友留言板上发出了一封求助帖。假如你是李华，请你给他写一封回帖，帮助他走出困境。词数：80～100，格式和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
I feel very tired these days. I feel really stressed and can’t sleep well. I don’t have many friends at school, so I don’t know whom I can talk to. Also, my parents are very busy. I don’t know how I can communicate with them. Who can help me Tom
Dear Tom,
I have learned that you are facing some problems, so I am writing to help you. Here are some of my suggestions.
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Yours,
Li Hua
9．Write at least 60 words according to the given situation.（根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）
英语课上，你们班进行了一场有关网络小说（web novels）的讨论，同学们提出了不同的看法。请根据表格提示，写一篇不少于60词的英语短文，表述这次讨论的内容。
一些同学认为 另一些同学认为 你的看法
1.网络小说很有趣； 2.能够开阔视野，提高写作水平。 1.看网络小说影响视力； 2.浪费时间，容易沉迷其中，影响学习。 ……
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10．Write at least 60 words on the topic “An unforgettable trip to ________” (以“一次去……的难忘之旅”为题写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）
The following points are only for reference:
When and where did you take the trip
What did you do there
Why was the trip unforgettable
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11．减负之后，同学们有了更多的课余时间。你打算如何利用你的课余时间呢？你有什么样的建议呢 请你根据下图提示，以“How to Make Our Spare Time More Meaningful ”为题写一篇文章。
写作要求:
1. 写作内容至少包括导图提示中的两点，并给出相关原因。
2. 语言流畅，层次清晰，可以适当发挥。
3. 词数80-100，书写规范，卷面整洁。
4. 文中不能出现考生姓名和学校名称。
How to Make Our Spare Time More Meaningful
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12．在我们成长过程中，我们去过许多不同的地方。有的地方会给我们留下深刻的印象，成为我们心中最美好的回忆。请你根据以下提示要点，写一篇英语短文，介绍一下你去过的最好的地方。
要点如下：
(1) 去了哪里；
(2) 做了什么；
(3) 你的感受。
注意：
(1) 词数80-100，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
(2) 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
(3) 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
We have all been to many different places. The best place I have ever been to is
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13．假设你是英语校刊Just Ask专栏的编辑李华，收到一封国际生Tom的英文来信。他在信中提出自己在本学期遇到的问题。请根据以下提示写一封70词左右的回信。
内容包括：
1.Tom在学习及生活方面遇到的问题；
2.你的建议及理由。
注意：
1.开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
Dear Tom,
I’m sorry to hear that you have some trouble now.
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I hope my advice can help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
14．假如你是Jennifer，中国网友李华在邮件中向你诉说了自己无法与父母和谐相处的烦恼，请根据以下提示，给他回封邮件，并提出解决的建议。
写作要点：
1. 表达得知近况后的心情（遗憾）并表达对他的理解；
2. 父母与孩子相处过程中会遇到的问题。
(1)父母：过于关注成绩 （2）孩子：缺少沟通
3. 提出如何与父母和谐相处的建议。
写作要求：
1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名；
2. 可适当增添细节，行文连贯；
3. 字迹工整，语言精炼，条理清晰。
Dear Li Hua,
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Yours,
Jennifer
15．“读万卷书，行万里路。”你校英语社团将举办以“热爱阅读”为主题的征文活动。请根据以下提示，以“Enjoy Reading, Enjoy Life”为题写篇短文，分享你对阅读的看法，并提出建议。
内容要点：
1. 阅读给你和同学们带来了什么好处，如：开阔视野（open one’s eyes）……；
2. 同学们在阅读中还存在什么问题，如：一些人不愿意阅读，一些人没时间阅读……；
3. 针对存在的问题，提出你的建议。
要求：
1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不能出现你的真实姓名、校名和地名；
4. 词数：不少于60词。（开头已给出，不计入总词数）
Enjoy Reading, Enjoy Life
Reading has become part of our life.
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16．假如你是 Nancy，今天你班开展了“珍爱地球，保护环境”主体班会活动，通过此次活动，你对环境正在恶化有了深刻的认识。会后，你打算写一份以“Going green”为主题的倡议书，号召全校同学立刻行动起来，为保护环境而努力。倡议书必须包括下面表格中内容。
steps should shouldn’t
公共交通 1.步行或骑自行车去上学；2.…… ……
节约能源 1.较短时间淋浴；2.…… ……
减少污染 像塑料、纸这些东西被分类，然后被回收 ……
你的希望 ……
注意：
1.文中不得出现真实人名、单位名：
2.补齐要点，适当发挥；
3.词数在90左右，已给出的文字不计入总词数。
相关词汇：交通车辆 transport 减少 reduce
Dear friends,
As we all know, our environment is getting worse and worse. It’s time for us to go green. Here are some simple steps to take.
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Yours,
Nancy
17．一系列的“新”已成为大家关注的热词，学校教育也将翻开新的篇章。未来的教室会是什么样呢？请你以“My Dream Classroom”为题，根据思维导图提示写一篇英语短文，向同学们介绍你理想的教室。
My Dream Classroom What will it look like What will make it “new”
How will the students study
What do you think of the dream classroom
注意：1. 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息；
2. 词数80字左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入词数）；
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人真实信息，否则不予评分。
My Dream Classroom
Hello, everyone! Let me introduce my dream classroom to you.
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18．每个人都会有一个专属的童年，在这期间，你也许会有一些(个)格外珍惜的物品，它(们)会给你留下比较深刻的回忆。你孩童时代最喜欢并且保留的东西是什么呢 请你根据下面的问题提示写一篇英语短文，介绍一下吧。
1. What is your favourite thing from childhood which you still have
2. How long have you had it
3. How did you get it Did someone give it to you Who
4. Why do you like it so much Can you say something more about it
写作要求：
1. 紧扣主题，结合提示信息，适当发挥，语言表达准确、语义通顺连贯；
2. 书写工整，不少于80词。请考生将题目写在答题卡相应处；
3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(校名，姓名，地名等)。
My favourite thing from childhood
My favorite thing from childhood is
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19．健康强壮的身体是中学生有效学习的保证，但过多的上网时间抢走了我们的锻炼时间，垃圾食品威胁着我们的健康。学校广播站设立了一个《健康论坛》的栏目，号召同学们踊跃投稿。请你根据以下内容要点，以“How to Keep Healthy”为题用英语写一篇短文向学校广播站投稿。
内容包括：
1.健康的重要性；
2.如何保持健康 (如健康饮食、有规律地运动、保持良好的生活习惯等)；
3.呼吁大家热爱健康生活。
注意：
1.词数为80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4.短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇: health (n.健康), a balanced diet (平衡饮食), regularly (adv.有规律地), exercise (v &n,运动、锻炼)
How to Keep Healthy
As a middle school student, we should live a healthy life
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20．作为新时代的青少年，应当倡导健康生活理念，既要有责任担当意识，也要有不畏艰难、乐善好施的优秀品质。你校英语网站以“How to Be a Better Person”为题开展征文活动，请根据征稿内容写一篇短文，要点如下：
1. 健康生活，如：饮食、锻炼……
2. 牢记责任，如：保护环境……
3. 不畏艰难，如：勇敢面对……
4. 乐善好施，如：参与慈善……
要求：
1. 所写内容必须包括题目要求的所有信息，可适当发挥；
2. 词数不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等信息。
How to Be a Better Person
As a middle school student, I should try my best to be a better person. I will do the following things. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文
The study trip is a kind of school education which is held outside and popular with students. Our school has also held many study trips. Here are my experiences.
Firstly, we went to pick tea in person and made things by hand to experience life. Secondly, we got close to nature and learnt more knowledge by watching real plants and animals. Then, after we visited some museums as well as places of interest, we understood Chinese history and culture more deeply. Finally, we saw some meaningful movies and felt the great changes of our country.
In my opinion, the study trip is helpful for us. We can experience different activities and get close to nature. We can also learn more meaningful things. I hope we will have more chances to take part in these study trips.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏内容要点中的信息，介绍学校组织的到产茶名地“杭州”开展的研学活动。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出这次活动；
第二步，介绍活动中做了什么，体验并学习到了什么；
第三步，介绍自己的看法及感受。
[亮点词汇]
①in person 亲自
②by hand 用手
③in one’s opinion 在某人看来
④take part in 参加
[高分句型]
①Then, after we visited some museums as well as places of interest, we understood Chinese history and culture more deeply.（after引导的时间状语从句）
②I hope we will have more chances to take part in these study trips.（宾语从句）
2．例文
Dear Mike,
How are you going I’m writing to tell you how I will spend a safe and meaningful holiday. Firstly, I plan to try some volunteer work, like cleaning up the city parks or visiting the old to cheer them up. I believe through the volunteer work, I can develop my independence. Secondly, I will keep away from the dangerous places like rivers to protect myself. What’s more, I think it’s necessary to develop my body and mind. So I will read more books and get more exercise. Also, I plan to help my parents share the housework, because it’s also our duty to make our homes clean and comfortable. I think my holiday will be colorful.
How will you spend your holiday I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为邮件；
②时态：时态以“一般将来时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，引出本文主题；
第二步，介绍自己的暑假计划——尝试做志愿者工作、去保护自己的地方、多读书和锻炼。
第三步，总结全文，表达期待收到回信。
[亮点词汇]
①plan to do sth.计划做某事
②clean up清理
③keep away from远离
[高分句型]
①What’s more, I think it’s necessary to develop my body and mind. (宾语从句）
②Also, I plan to help my parents share the housework, because it’s also our duty to make our homes clean and comfortable. (because引导的原因状语从句）
3．例文
People always have trouble in their daily life. Last week, I failed in the math exam. When my mother knew the result, she felt very unhappy and we argued loudly with each other. I talked to my best friend about this problem. She told me it was wrong for me to talk back to my mother. After that, I said sorry to my mother. My mother also said sorry to me and encouraged me to study hard.
What I have learned from the experience is that when we have problems, we should find someone to talk about them and find some ways to solve them.
【详解】［总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态：主要运用“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题目要求中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
［写作步骤］
第一步，开篇点明日常生活中难免遇到麻烦，以自己数学考试失利为切入点，引发读者共鸣。
第二步，详细描述与母亲的争执、向朋友求助、彼此道歉和解的过程，展现沟通的重要性。
第三步，总结感悟，升华文章主题。
［亮点词汇］
①trouble麻烦
②fail in the exam考试失利
③result结果
④argue争吵
⑤talk to sb. about sth和某人谈论某事
⑥talk back顶嘴
⑦encourage鼓励
⑧solve解决
［高分句型］
①When my mother knew the result, she felt very unhappy and we argued loudly with each other.（When引导的时间状语从句）
②She told me it was wrong for me to talk back to my mother.（宾语从句）
③What I have learned from the experience is that when we have problems, we should find someone to talk about them and find some ways to solve them.（that引导的表语从句）
4．例文
My Favorite Toy
My favorite toy from childhood is my teddy bear. I have had it since I was a child. My grandmother gave it to me as a birthday gift on my fourth birthday. I love the teddy bear so much because it was very beautiful and cool. It is special to me because my grandmother made it for me by herself. I’ll keep it forever to remind me of my grandmother. The teddy bear has left many good and sweet memories in my heart. I always slept next to it when I was a child. It made me feel safe. I often played with it. It looked like my friend. Thanks to the teddy bear, I didn’t feel lonely. All in all, it may be a bit old but I like it very much.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要围绕主题，表述你最爱的玩具以及你喜欢它的原因。适当增加细节，表述完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步，直入主题表述我最喜欢的玩具是什么；
第二步，详细表述喜欢这个玩具的原因及玩具给自己带来的影响；
第三步，对文章做出总结。
[亮点词汇]
①remind sb of使某人想起
②Thanks to多亏
③All in all总之
[高分句型]
①I love the teddy bear so much because it was very beautiful and cool.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②I always slept next to it when I was a child.（when引导的时间状语从句）
5．例文
Dear students,
As we know, safety is the most important thing in our daily lives. So, we should try our best to make sure we are safe.
We mustn’t bring restricted knives or things to our school because these things may cause serious problems. Do not have a bath in rivers or ponds by ourselves without our parents permission. And, we should be friendly to others so fighting is strongly banned. Make sure that we should always pay attention to the traffic on our way to school or home. Furthermore, if we meet some emergency, we must call for help from the police or our teachers.
In a word, following these safeties rules above can make us live in peace.
Yours,
Li hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、开篇点题，引出话题；
第二步、介绍需要注意的安全问题；
第三步、书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be friendly to sb.对某人友好
②pay attention to注意
③call for help呼救
[高分句型]
①We mustn’t bring restricted knives or things to our school because these things may cause serious problems. (because引导原因状语从句)
6．例文
Dear Mike,
I’m glad to receive your letter. Welcome to Chifeng! There are many beautiful places to visit here. You can go to the Asihatu Stone Forest to see the wonderful stones. You can also go to the grassland to enjoy the fresh air and the blue sky. Don’t forget to try our local specialties, such as beef jerky and Double Cooked Pork Slices.
When you come here, you should pay attention to the weather. It can be very hot in summer, so you should bring some light clothes and sunscreen. Also, be careful when you are traveling.
I’m looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章围绕欢迎 Mike 来赤峰，介绍当地景点、美食及注意事项展开，内容较完整，符合书信交流场景。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表达收到来信的喜悦并欢迎 Mike 来到赤峰，点明当地有许多美丽景点可供游览；
第二步，具体介绍赤峰值得一去的景点，如阿斯哈图石林和草原，还推荐了当地特色美食；
第三步，提醒 Mike 来赤峰时要注意天气情况和旅行安全，最后表达期待其到来。
[亮点词汇]
①local specialties 当地特色美食
②pay attention to 注意
③look forward to 期待
[高分句型]
①Don’t forget to try our local specialties, such as beef jerky and Double Cooked Pork Slices.（否定祈使句）
② It can be very hot in summer, so you should bring some light clothes and sunscreen.（so 连接的因果关系并列句）
7．例文
My childhood memory
Like many children, I had a happy childhood under the care and love of my parents. My mother took me to the kindergarten and home every day. I thought mother was so kind and healthy that she would never get sick.
But one day, my father went to the kindergarten to get me back. I asked, “Why doesn’t my mother come ” “She is sick, and she is in hospital,” said Father. I felt sad and frightened. Then I began to cry. “Don’t cry, or your mother would worry. You should be a good child.” I seemed to understand my mother was too tired. I made up my mind I would look after my mother from then on.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，结合写作提示的两个问题，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，概括的介绍自己童年是快乐的，介绍我认为童年快乐的原因；
第二步，详细介绍我妈妈生病的经历；
第三步，总结妈妈生病对我的影响。
[亮点词汇]
① under the care and love 在照顾和关爱下
② never get sick 从不生病
③ from then on 从那时起
[高分句型]
①I made up my mind I would look after my mother from then on.（宾语从句）
8．例文
Dear Tom,
I have learned that you are facing some problems, so I am writing to help you. Here are some of my suggestions.
First of all, having a good study plan can really help you make better use of your time. This way, you can make sure you’ve got time to relax and sleep enough. It’s important to stay healthy. As for making friends, why not try joining some clubs or groups It’s a good way to meet people who share your interests. Also, remember, a smile can go a long way. It sounds like your parents are pretty busy, but I’m sure they care about you a lot. It’s better to talk with them about how you’re feeling so that they can understand you better.
I really hope the advice can be helpful to you. I hope everything will be better soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件。
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”。
③提示：根据求助帖回复。注意行文连贯，逻辑清晰，无拼写和语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接给出的开头，介绍自己的建议；
第二步，给出有关处理压力、保证睡眠、交朋友以及与父母沟通的建议；
第三步，希望建议有帮助。
[亮点词汇]
①First of all首先
②make better use of更好地利用
③make sure确保
[高分句型]
①It’s a good way to meet people who share your interests. (who引导的限制性定语从句)
②I really hope the advice can be helpful to you. (省略that的宾语从句)
9．例文
We have had a discussion about web novels in our class.
Some of my classmates consider that we can read web novels which are very interesting and can also open up our eyes and improve our writing skills. However, others do not agree. They think we shouldn’t do that, because there are too many web novels on the Internet, reading too much on the web is not good for eyesight. What’s worse, it is a waste of time to form the habit of reading network novels, which will not only affect our study but also affect our health.
As for me, I don’t want to spend my limited time on web novels now. If I want, I will do that in summer holidays, and try to achieve balance between physical exercise and reading to protect my eyesight well.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示要点，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作话题——有关网络小说的讨论；
第二步：阐述不同同学的看法；
第三步：表明自己的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①open up打开
②is good for对……有好处
③not only … but also …不但……而且……
[高分句型]
①Some of my classmates consider that we can read web novels which are very interesting and can also open up our eyes and improve our writing skills. (宾语从句和定语从句）
②They think we shouldn’t do that, because there are too many web novels on the Internet, reading too much on the web is not good for eyesight. (状语从句)
10．例文：
An unforgettable trip to Beijing
I took an unforgettable trip to Beijing last summer vacation. I visited many famous places, such as the Great Wall, the Forbidden City and the Summer Palace. I was amazed by the beauty and history of these places.
I also tried some delicious food, like Beijing Roast Duck and Peking Noodles. The food was so delicious that I still remember the taste.
What made this trip unforgettable was that I made some new friends. We shared our experiences and had a lot of fun together.
This trip not only broadened my horizons but also gave me a lot of wonderful memories. I will never forget it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：介绍曾经去过的地方，分享个人的经历，避免语法错误，保持行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题，介绍一次难忘的旅行经历；
第二步，简要介绍去的地方、时间、交通方式、游玩的景点以及美食等；
第三步，总结全文，表达感受。
[亮点词汇]
①such as比如
②be amazed by对……感到惊讶
③not only…but also…不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
①The food was so delicious that I still remember the taste.（so…that引导结果状语从句）
②What made this trip unforgettable was that I made some new friends.（what引导的主语从句，that引导的表语从句）
11．例文：
How to Make Our Spare Time More Meaningful
Nowadays, we students have much more spare time than ever before, but how to make our spare time more meaningful？
First, it’s good to help our parents do some housework to show love for them. Second, we will know more about the world by reading. Thirdly, it’s a good chance for us to listen to music and relax ourselves. What’s more, we can visit museums and broaden our horizons. Last but not least, we can take an active part in some special activities as volunteers to help those in need.
In a word, let’s make full use of our spare time and promote ourselves.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的每一项提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出“如何让我们的业余生活更有意义？”的话题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“分担家务、阅读书籍、听音乐、参观博物馆以及做志愿者”等方面阐述。
第三步，书写结语，呼吁好好利用业余时间。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in参加
②make full use of充分利用
③in a word总而言之
[高分句型]
① First, it’s good to help our parents do some housework to show love for them. (it作形式主语)
②In a word, let’s make full use of our spare time and promote ourselves. (祈使句)
12．例文
We have all been to many different places. The best place I have ever been to is Yunnan.
I went to Yunnan with my parents by car when I was 10 years old. When we got to Yunnan, we fell in love with its beauty of nature. My father didn’t use to like taking photos. To our surprise, he stopped the car on the way to Gaoli-gongshan Mountain and asked my mother and I to take some photos. We enjoyed different special food there. I also ate the worms as food for the first time.
As long as I have time, I will go to Yunnan again. It has not only beautiful scenery but also delicious food.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不用遗漏写作要点中的信息，并适当添加内容，使文章语句通顺。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，直接点出自己去过的最美的地方；
第二步，具体介绍自己去云南旅行的经历；
第三步，书写结尾，表达感受。
[亮点词汇]
①fall in love with 爱上
②to my surprise 让我惊讶的是
③neither...nor... 既不……也不……
[高分句型]
①I went to Yunnan with my parents by car when I was 10 years old.（时间状语从句）
②As long as I have time, I will go to Yunnan again.（条件状语从句）
13．例文
Dear Tom,
I’m sorry to hear that you have some trouble now.
You mentioned having difficulty with learning Chinese, and I believe that practicing your speaking skills as much as possible could really help. You can also watch some Chinese movies or listen to Chinese songs to improve your listening skills. As for your problem of making friends, you should be more active and try to talk to your classmates. Joining some clubs or taking part in activities is another great way to meet new people. Don’t be afraid to make mistakes. I believe you will make more friends soon.
I hope my advice can help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：一般现在时和一般过去时
③提示：写作要点和开头部分已给出，考试应注意要求中的内容，充实细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，表达自己对于Tom所遇到问题的理解心情；
第二步，列举出Tom所遇到问题，并给出自己的建议和看法；
第三步，希望所提出的建议和方法能够有所帮助。
[亮点词汇]
①mention提到，说起，
②have difficulty with 对某事有困难
③as for至于
④take part in 参加
[高分句型]
①You mentioned having difficulty with learning Chinese, and I believe that practicing your speaking skills as much as possible could really help. (并列句，宾语从句)
②I believe you will make more friends soon. (宾语从句)
14．例文：
Dear Li Hua,
How is everything going these days I know that you can’t get on well with your parents. But don’t worry about it. My classmates also have the similar problems to yours. For example, parents often pay more attention to grades. Children don’t like to communicate with parents and can’t understand them well. So they have a quarrel with each other. However, we should understand our parents. Here’s some advice.
First, when you meet something difficult, you should talk about it with your parents. They may understand you and help you. Second, tell your parents that grade is not the most important thing. Life shouldn’t just be about grades. Free time activities like sports and hanging out with friends are important, too. Third, do more chores at home. It can make your parents feel happy.
I hope things will be better for you soon.
Yours,
Jennifer
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件。
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意提出的建议应确实有效，符合实际且有条理。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。表明“我知道你和父母相处的不好，不要担心”，并安慰对方有一些建议，引出下文。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。给出具体的建议。
第三步，书写结语。对于对方的问题有一个美好的祈愿。
[亮点词汇]
①get on well with与……相处的好
②pay more attention to多关注
③communicate with与……沟通
[高分句型]
①Second, tell your mother that grade is not the most important thing.（祈使句，宾语从句）
15．例文
Enjoy Reading, Enjoy Life
Reading has become part of our life. It brings many benefits to us and our classmates. Firstly, reading can open our eyes and enrich our knowledge. Secondly, it can improve our language skills and creativity. However, some students are not willing to read and some don’t have enough time to read.
To solve these problems, I suggest that we should set aside some time for reading every day. We can start by reading short stories or articles that interest us. Also, we can join a reading club or share books with our friends to make reading more fun.
In a word, reading is very important and beneficial. Let’s enjoy reading and enjoy life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应根据提示要点进行书面表达，不要遗漏要点，可适当发挥。应能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，引出话题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。具体分享你对阅读的看法，并提出具体建议。
第三步，书写结语，表达愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①brings benefits to给……带来好处
②open one’s eyes开阔眼界
③be willing to do sth愿意做某事
④set aside some time for为……留出一些时间
[高分句型]
①However, some students are not willing to read and some don’t have enough time to read. (并列句)
②To solve these problems, I suggest that we should set aside some time for reading every day. (宾语从句)
16．One possible version:
Dear friends,
As we all know, our environment is getting worse and worse. It’s time for us to go green. Here are some simple steps to take.
First, whenever possible, we should take public transportation, walk or ride our bikes to school to reduce the amount of carbon emissions from cars. We’d better not drive our cars if not necessary. Second, we should take a short shower and turn off the lights and electronic devices when they are not in use. It is not advisable to leave the water running and the lights always on. Third, we should sort our rubbish and recycle plastic, paper and other materials to reduce pollution. We’d better not mix different wastes.
Small changes in our daily lives can make a big difference to the environment. Let’s work together to create a cleaner, greener, and more beautiful world for ourselves.
Yours,
Nancy
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文；
②时态：本文以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：题目要求根据提示写一篇保护环境的倡议书，主要从公共交通、节约能源和减少污染三方面谈谈如何保护环境，最后谈谈自己的希望。写作时注意适当增加细节，不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题（已给出）；
第二步，根据所给要点，依次从公共交通、节约能源和减少污染三方面谈谈如何保护环境，讲述应该做和不应该做的事情；
第三步，最后表达自己的希望。
[亮点词汇]
①take public transportation 乘坐公共交通
②had better not do 最好不做
③turn off 关掉
[高分句型]
①Second, we should take a short shower and turn off the lights and electronic devices when they are not in use.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②It is not advisable to leave the water running and the lights always on.（it作形式主语）
17．例文
My Dream Classroom
Hello, everyone! Let me introduce my dream classroom to you.
It will be a large and bright room with large windows and plenty of natural light. The walls will be painted in calming colors like blue and green. What makes it “new” is the advanced technology it will have. There will be interactive whiteboards, tablets for each student, and virtual reality headsets for immersive learning experiences. Students will study in a more engaging and interactive way, using these tools to explore subjects in depth. I believe this dream classroom will make learning more enjoyable and effective for everyone.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般将来时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍你理想中教室的外观；
第二步，介绍教室中使其“新”的先进技术；
第三步，说明学生将如何利用这些技术进行学习；
第四步，表达你对理想教室的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①large and bright 宽敞明亮
②natural light 自然光
③interactive whiteboards 互动白板
④virtual reality headsets 虚拟现实头戴设备
⑤immersive learning experiences 沉浸式学习体验
[高分句型]
①I believe this dream classroom will make learning more enjoyable and effective for everyone. (省略that的宾语从句)
②Students will study in a more engaging and interactive way, using these tools to explore subjects in depth. (现在分词作状语)
18．例文
My favourite thing from childhood
My favorite thing from childhood is my teddy bear. I have had it since I was five years old. My grandmother gave it to me as the birthday gift on my birthday.
I like the teddy bear so much because it’s dressed in my favorite color. It’s special to me because my grandmother made it for me. She was always kind to me. Her words and the lovely toy bear made me feel better.
The teddy bear has given me many good memories. I remember when I was young, I was afraid of the dark, so I held my teddy bear to feel safe. Whenever I miss my grandmother, I will look at the toy bear, and it makes me feel happy and warm.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为一般过去时和一般现在时；
③提示：写作时注意围绕所给问题展开描述，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己孩童时期最喜欢的物品是什么；
第二步，介绍自己拥有该物品多久了，具体描述如何得来的该物品；
第三步，介绍自己喜欢该物品的原因及感想。
[亮点词汇]
①be kind to...对……友好
②be afraid of...害怕……
[高分句型]
①I like the teddy bear so much because it’s dressed in my favorite color. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②I remember when I was young, I was afraid of the dark, so I held my teddy bear to feel safe. (宾语从句及when引导的时间状语从句)
19．例文：
How to Keep Healthy
As a middle school student, we should live a healthy life. Health is very important to us. Good health can help us enjoy our life more. But how to keep us healthy
First, we should eat healthy food, such as eating more vegetables and fruits. What’s more, we’d better have meals on time. It’s important to keep a balanced diet. Second, we need to exercise regularly to make us strong. We can play basketball or soccer with our friends after school. Finally, it’s necessary to keep good living habits and remember not to stay up late.
If we do like that, we’ll have a happy and healthy life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：以 “一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，强调健康重要性，引出如何保持健康的话题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。重点介绍如何保持健康的方法；
第三步，书写结语，呼吁大家热爱健康生活。
[亮点词汇]
①be important to 对……来说是重要的
②such as例如
③keep a balanced diet 保持一个平衡的饮食
④exercise regularly 定期锻炼
⑤stay up late 熬夜很晚
[高分句型]
①Finally, it’s necessary to keep good living habits and remember not to stay up late. (it作形式主语)
②If we do like that, we’ll have a happy and healthy life. (if 引导条件状语从句)
20．例文：
How to Be a Better Person
As a middle school student, I should try my best to be a better person. I will do the following things.
First of all, we should have healthy food and we had better do more exercise to build up our bodies. What’s more, it’s everyone’s duty to protect the environment. I can separate the waste into different groups so that it can be recycled in my daily life. Besides, I will not be afraid to face difficulties or challenges any more and try my best to solve problems in life and study. I will never give up trying. Moreover, I will be an honest person and never tell lies. Last but not least, it is necessary to be ready to help others. I can support some charities by donating money or working as a volunteer.
I think the most important thing is to be a useful person. If I start to develop these good habits, I believe I will become a better person and make a difference to the world.
【详解】[总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包括所列4个提示要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
［写作步骤］
第一步，介绍作为中学生要尽力去做一个优秀的人，从而引出话题；
第二步，根据所列要点，逐一陈述，适当拓展，介绍自己的做法；
第三步，书写总结。
［亮点词汇］
① try one’s best to do sth. 尽某人最大努力去做某事
② give up 放弃
［高分句型］
① What’s more, it’s everyone’s duty to protect the environment. (it作形式主语)
② I think the most important thing is to be a useful person. (宾语从句)
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