【小升初·高频·考点】专题24 书面表达（含答案）-2024-2025学年六年级英语下学期小升初高频考点培优（山西专版）

中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
2024-2025学年六年级英语下学小升初高频考点培优
(山西专版)专题24 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．书面表达。
根据所给信息，介绍一下这位著名人物，不少于5句话。
Name: Liu Yang Country: China Born: in October, 1978 When: June,2012 Spaceship: Shenzhou IX She did a lot of work there. She is the first Chinese female(女性)astronaut.
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2．书面表达。
从父辈们的过去到我们的现在，再到日新月异的未来，生活中的变化翻天覆地。请根据表格中的信息提示，用不同的时态描述生活中的变化，不少于5句话。
In the past Now In the future
washed clothes by hand use a washing machine will not need to be cleaned
watched black and white TV watch colour TV will have AI interactive(互动) TV
wrote letters write emails …
There are great changes in our lives. In the past, people washed clothes by hand. Now people ________. In the future, clothes will ______________. In the past,
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3．书面表达。
当前地球上野生动物的数量在逐渐减少，它们的生存已经受到了严重威胁，我们应该怎样保护它们呢？请以”How to protect wild animals”为题，写一篇短文。
要求：
(1)句型结构正确；
(2)首字母大写，标点符号正确；
(3)不少于5句话。
How to protect wild animals
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4．书面表达。
请根据情景编一段Betty、妈妈和售货员之间的对话。不少于3个来回。
情景：在星期五的晚上，Betty和妈妈去超市购物。妈妈想为Betty买一条连衣裙。Betty不喜欢粉色的裙子，她喜欢紫色的裙子。最后她们买了紫色的裙子。这条裙子165元。
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5．书面表达。
亲爱的同学们，你们作为中国的新一代，有责任也有义务向世界展现我们祖国的魅力。而北京这座古老而现代的城市，无疑是一张最具代表性的名片。 现在请你们根据思维导图，用英文描述一下美丽的首都城市北京吧。(不少于6句话。)

Beijing
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6．书面表达。
争创全国文明城市，共建和谐美好家园。我们的家乡正在创办卫生文明县城，作为其中的一员，我们也要做力所能及的事。请你根据要点提示，写一写我们应该怎么做吧。(不要出现真实姓名，60词左右)
要点提示：
（1）. 在学校经常打扫自己的桌椅，保持教室干净整洁，不要在楼梯上玩耍。
（2）. 在公交车上不要吃东西，要保持安静，给老人让座。
（3）. 在公园不踩草坪，不随地吐痰，要把垃圾扔进垃圾桶里。
（4）. 可展开思路，适当发挥。
参考词汇：tidy (整洁的) stairs (楼梯) spit (吐痰) bin (垃圾桶)
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7．书面表达。
假设你叫米兰，请根据参考内容，给你的笔友Dale写一封信，详细介绍一下你的家庭。
参考内容：
单词：family, photo, friend, dear
短语：thanks for, a picture of, here is
句型：1. There are. people in my family.
2. Let me tell you something about my family.
3. I have a happy family.
要求：（1）. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
（2）. 书信格式正确，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
（3）. 文中不得出现任何真实信息；
（4）. 词数不少于40词。
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8．书面表达。
时光飞逝，你的六年生活就要结束,即将升入初中,请你以“My school in the future”为题，写一写你对初中学校的期待。
要求：不少于5句话；可参考方框里的词汇，文中不得出现真实的人名或校名。
have a swimming pool have a lot of clubs; have a lot of books and magazines in the library have chess and cooking lessons
My school in the future
I am going to be a junior high school student. I hope my school will
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9．书面表达。
同护蓝天碧水圣地，共创卫生文明家园。近日来，盂县人民在创建卫生文明城市方面做了很多工作。作为新时代的小公民，你们能为盂县的创建卫生文明城市工作做出哪些贡献呢？请根据提示，用英文描述一下你们能做的事情吧！(不少于6句话)
One county one health
Yu County (盂县) is our home. We should keep our home clean.
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10．书面表达。
“Better changes, better me!” 小学几年里一直陪伴我们学习的小伙伴们都长高了，更能干了！请你也回顾一下自己的小学生活，根据下面的成长相册，以“My changes”为题写一篇英语短文，描述自己在外貌、性格、能力、喜好(季节、食物、课堂……)等方面的小变化。
要求：
（1）. 主题明确，语句通顺，行文流畅；
（2）. 50词左右，文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
My changes
How time flies! I changed a lot. Before,
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Better changes, better me! Thanks to my parents and teachers!
11．书面表达。(以下两项小练笔，任选其一作答。)
（1）.亲爱的同学们，请以“我的爱好”为题介绍一下你自己吧！要求：不少于5句话。
（2）.亲爱的同学们，请以“我的家庭”为题介绍一下你的家庭吧！要求：不少于5句话。
我选择的题目是：___________________
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12．阳泉是一座美丽的城市。现在请你们想一想，我们可以做些什么事情让阳泉变得更加美好呢？不少于 40 词
提示词：reuse old things, grow a lot of trees, put rubbish in the bin
Better city, better life.
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13．同学们，上个周末过得怎么样？请你和大家分享一下你上个周末做过些什么事或去过了什么地方，并把它写下来。
要求：（1）. 条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确，书写规范。 （2）. 不少于6句话。
Last weekend
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14．写作。
好朋友是一生的财富。当朋友有困难的时候，给他提出好的建议，当他快乐的时候，与他分享喜悦。请你根据提示，参照例句，写一篇短文，字数不少于30词，句子通顺，书写工整。
Name Feeling(感受) Should do
John ill see a doctor stay in bed
Amy angry take a deep breath count to ten
Zhang Peng happy sing and dance share happiness
Oliver sad read stories sing
Mike worried listen to music go to bed
If John feels ill, he should see a doctor and stay in bed.
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15．书面表达。
寒假即将到来，请制定你的寒假计划，度过一个有意义的假期吧！
参考短语: exercise more, read more books, study often, eat healthy food and eat better, spend more time with family and friends… (不少于 5 句话)
Winter holiday is coming. I am going to
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My winter holiday will be great!
16．写作。
动物是自然界赐予我们的宝贵财富，也是地球生态平衡的重要一环。珍爱动物，就是珍爱我们自己的生存环境。请以“My Favourite Animal”为题，写一种你最喜欢的小动物，想一想，它有什么外貌特征及生活习性。
要求：书写规范，语句通顺，语言连贯，不少于5句话且不少于30个词。
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17．书面表达。时光荏苒，6年的小学时光已悄然离去，请你结合以下提示，对比过去及现在的你，向即将要成为你初中新朋友作简单自我介绍，同时并想象一下你的未来，说一说你的理想。(要求：不少于六句话，可适当拓展写作。)
（1）. What did you look like in the past
（2）. How much do you weigh now
（3）. How tall are you
（4）. What’s your favourite sport
（5）. What’s your favourite subject
（6）. What would you like to be in the future
要求：语句通顺，条理清楚，书写工整。不少于6句话。
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18．书面表达。
同学们，你们即将结束自己的小学生活，并于今年的九月份，开启自己的中学生活，请根据提示用英语写一篇短文和大家分享一下即将开启的中学生活吧。要求不少于五句话。
say goodbye to our school meet new friends meet new teachers No. 1 Middle School learn many new things study Chinese, English, maths, history and music
My Middle School
We are going to leave our primary school soon. We are going to
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参考答案与试题解析
1．范文：
Liu Yang is a famous Chinese astronaut. She was born in October, 1978. In June, 2012, she flew into space in the spaceship Shenzhou IX. She did a lot of important work there. Liu Yang is the first Chinese female astronaut. She makes all Chinese people proud. We should learn from her hard-working spirit.
【解析】1.题干解读：该题目要求按照所给信息介绍著名人物，注意时态是一般现在时，用第三人称并要符合句子数量要求。
2.参考词汇与句型：
参考单词：Chinese astronaut中国航天员，female astronaut女航天员，important重要的，proud自豪，spirit精神
参考句型：She was...；she flew...；She did...；We should...
2． There are great changes in our lives. In the past, people washed clothes by hand. Now people use a washing machine. In the future, clothes will not need to be cleaned. In the past, people watched black and white TV. Now people watch colour TV. In the future, people will have AI interactive TV. In the past, people wrote letters. Now people write emails. In the future, people will probably use holographic communication to stay in touch, making communication more vivid and real.
【解析】1. 题干解读：该题目要求按照表格中的信息提示写一篇关于过去、现在和未来生活中的变化。注意描述过去的生活用一般过去时，描述现在的生活用一般现在时，描述将来的生活用一般将来时，并要符合句子数量要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考词汇：washed clothes by hand用手洗衣服，black and white TV黑白电视，colour TV彩色电视，AI interactive TV人工智能互动电视，washing machine洗衣机
参考句型：There are...；Now people use...；people will...
3．参考范文：
How to protect wild animals
Wild animals are in danger now. There were many pandas, South China tigers and blue whales in the wild in the past. But there are only a few now. We should do something to help them. We should stop killing them. We should plant more trees. We should keep water and air clean.
【解析】1. 题干解读：该题目要求以”How to protect wild animals”为题写一篇短文，主要阐述我们怎样保护野生动物。注意文章时态是一般现在时，并满足句数的要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考词汇：wild animals野生动物，in danger处于危险中，South China tigers东北虎，panda熊猫，blue whale蓝鲸，plant种植
参考句型：Wild animals are…；There were…；We should…
4．Betty: Wow! Mum, look! What a pretty dress! I like it very much.
Mum: Which one, the pink one or the purple one
Betty: I like the purple one. Can I try it on
Shopkeeper: Sure, here you are.
Betty: Thank you.
Mum: It’s just right for you.
Betty: How much is it
Shopkeeper: It’s 165 yuan.
Mum: OK. Here is the money.
Shopkeeper: Thank you.
【解析】1. 题干解读：该题目要求根据情景编一段Betty、妈妈和售货员之间的对话。主要内容写妈妈想为Betty买一条连衣裙。Betty不喜欢粉色的裙子，她喜欢紫色的裙子。最后她们买了紫色的裙子。这条裙子165元。注意文章为一般现在时态并要写3个来回。
2. 参考词汇和句型：
参考单词：dress连衣裙，purple紫色的，try on试穿，how much多少钱
参考句型：What a pretty…；Can I try it on ；How much is it
5．范文
Beijing
Beijing is a very big and beautiful city. It is the capital of China. It’s in the north of China. The city is clean and safe. There are many famous places in Beijing. Tourists can visit the Great Wall, the Palace Museum, Tian’anmen Square and some famous parks. Tourists can taste Beijing Roast Duck. It is very delicious. People in Beijing like eating dumplings too. Welcome to Beijing.
【解析】1. 题干解读：该题要求根据思维导图用第三人称描述北京这座城市，包括北京的建筑、人文、地理位置、环境状况等，时态为一般现在时，注意语句通顺，结构合理，不少于6句话。
2. 参考词汇和参考句型：
参考词汇：big and beautiful又大又漂亮，the capital of China中国的首都，north北方，clean and safe又干净又安全，famous places著名的地方，the Great Wall长城，the Palace Museum故宫，Tian’anmen Square天安门广场，Beijing Roast Duck北京烤鸭
参考句型：Beijing is...；It is...；There are...；Tourists can visit...；People in Beijing like...
6．参考答案
Better city, better life
To make our city a better place, we should do many things. At school, we should often clean our desks and chairs. We also should keep our classroom tidy. Don’t play on the stairs. On the bus, we shouldn’t eat food. We should keep quiet and give our seats to old people. In the park, we shouldn’t walk on the grass or spit. We should put the rubbish into the bin.
【解析】1. 题干解读：该题目要求根据提示写短文。然后再阐述应该做和不应该做的事情。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合单词字数要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考单词：clean打扫，tidy整洁的，stairs楼梯，keep quiet保持安静，spit吐痰，rubbish垃圾
参考句型：We should/shouldn’t …
7．范文：
Dear Dale,
I’m Amy. Thanks for your letter. I’m so happy. Here is a picture of my family. Let me tell you something about my family. There are four people in my family. My father is a doctor. He is helpful. My mother is a teacher. She is kind. And this is my brother. He is older than me. I have a happy family. I love them very much.
Yours,
Amy.
【解析】1.题干解读：该题要求用第一人称描述自己的家人，包括家人的职业以及性格等，时态为一般现在时，注意语句通顺，结构合理。
2. 参考词汇和参考句型：
参考词汇：family家庭，photo照片，friend朋友，dear亲爱的，thanks for因……而感谢，a picture of一张……的照片，here is这是
参考句型：There are…in my family；Let me tell you something…；My father is…；My mother is…；I have a…
8．范文：
My school in the future I am going to be a junior high school student. I hope my school will have a swimming pool, I like swimming. I hope my school will have a lot of clubs, I like playing football. I hope my school will have a lot of books and magazines in the library, I like reading books. I hope my school will have chess and cooking lessons, I like playing chess and cooking.
【解析】1. 题干解读：该题目要求用第一人称介绍自己对初中学校的期待。阐述希望学校内有什么设施及俱乐部和课程等。注意文章为一般现在时和一般将来时，同时要符合字数要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考词汇：swimming pool游泳池，clubs俱乐部，magazines杂志，cooking lessons烹饪课
参考句型：I hope my school will have…；I like…
9．范文
One county one health
Yu County is our home. We should keep our home clean. We shouldn’t throw rubbish everywhere. We should throw rubbish in the bin. We can pick up the rubbish in the park at weekend. We can help the street cleaners sweep the streets. We can plant a lot of trees. Trees can make the air clean. We can help the blind cross the street. We can also give our seats to old people. And we should reuse some old things. We must work hard. Yu County will be better and better.
【解析】1. 该题目是同护蓝天碧水圣地，共创卫生文明家园。近日来，盂县人民在创建卫生文明城市方面做了很多工作。根据图片提示，用英文描述一下作为新时代的小公民，你们能为盂县的创建卫生文明城市工作做的事情，时态是一般现在时。要求：语句通顺，不少于6句话。
2. 参考词汇及参考句型：
参考词汇：home家，clean干净的，throw rubbish everywhere到处扔垃圾，pick up the rubbish捡起垃圾，sweep the streets扫街道，plant trees植树，cross the street过马路，give our seats to old people给老人让座，reuse some old things循环利用旧物品
参考句型：We should…；We shouldn’t…；We can…；We must…
10．范文：
My changes
How time flies! I changed a lot. Before, I was short and thin. I couldn’t ride a bike and didn’t like to play badminton. But I’m tall and strong now. I’m very different. Before, I was quiet. But now, I’m very active. I have many friends. We often play sports together. I can ice-skate very well in winter. I like swimming in summer. It’s good exercise for me.
Better changes，better me! Thanks to my parents and teachers!
【解析】1. 题干解读：该题目要求以“My changes”为题写一篇英语短文，。然后再描述自己在外貌、性格、能力、喜好(季节、食物、课堂……)等方面的小变化。注意文章为一般现在时态和一般过去时态并要符合单词字数要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考单词：short矮的，quiet安静的，tall高的，active活跃的，ride a bike骑自行车，play badminton打羽毛球，ice-skate滑冰
参考句型：Before, I was …； I couldn’t …；But I’m …；We often …； I can ...；I like ...
11． My Family
There are four people in my family. They are my father, my mother, my sister and me. My father is tall and strong. He is a policeman. My mother is thin and beautiful. She is a nurse. My sister and I are students. We are in the same school.
【解析】1. 题干解读：该题目要求从以下两项小练笔，任选其一作答。如果以以“我的家庭”为题，那么可以阐述家里有几口人，都有谁，家人的特点及职业等。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考单词：strong强壮的，policeman警察，beautiful漂亮的，nurse护士，student学生
参考句型：There are …；They are …；My father/mother is …；He/She is …
12．范文：
Better city, better life.
How can we make our city better We shouldn’t smoke. We should reuse old things. We should grow a lot of trees. We should put rubbish in the bin. We should give our seats to old people. We believe our city will be better in the future. Our lives will be better too.
【解析】1. 题干解读：该题目要求写一写做些什么事情能让阳泉变得更加美好。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合单词字数要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考单词：smoke吸烟，reuse old things重复使用旧东西，grow a lot of trees种很多树，put rubbish in the bin把垃圾放进垃圾桶，believe相信，in the future在未来
参考句型： We shouldn’t …； We should …
13．范文：
My name is Sam. I’m a student. I was busy last weekend. I did my homework at home on Saturday morning. I went to the park on foot on Saturday afternoon. I cleaned my room on Sunday morning. On Sunday afternoon I visited my grandparents. At night, I watched TV with my parents. I was very tired but I was very happy.
【解析】1. 题干解读：该题目要求以“Last weekend”为题，写一篇短文。然后再阐述周六、周日分别做的事情。注意文章主要为一般过去时态并要符合句子数量要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考单词：Saturday周六，Sunday周日，busy忙碌的，do my homework做作业，go to the park去公园，clean my room打扫房间，visit my grandparents看望祖父母，watch TV看电视
参考句型：I was …； I … on …；On … I ...； At night, I …
14．范文：
If John feels ill, he should see a doctor and stay in bed. If Amy feels angry, she should take a deep breath and count to ten. If Zhang Peng feels happy. He should sing and dance and share happiness. If Olive feels sad. He should read stories and sing. If Mike feels worried. He should listen to music and go to bed.
【解析】1.题干分析：该题目要求介绍当朋友有困难的时候，给他提出好的建议，当他快乐的时候，与他分享喜悦。注意文章为一般现在时态，单词数量要符合要求。
2.参考词汇与句型：
参考词汇：ill生病的；see a doctor看医生；stay in bed卧床休息；angry生气的；take a deep breath做深呼吸；count to ten数到十；happy高兴的；sing and dance唱歌跳舞；sad伤心的；read stories读故事；worried担心的；
参考句型：If Amy feels…；she should…；
15．范文：
Winter holiday is coming. I am going to live a healthy life. I am going to eat healthy food and eat better. In order to keep healthy, I am going to exercise more. I am going to get good grades by reading more books. Besides, I am going to spend more time with family and friends.
My winter holiday will be great!
【解析】题干解读：改题目要求写一个寒假计划，度过一个有意义的假期。注意文章主要为一般将来时态，并符合句子数量要求。
参考词汇和句型：
参考词汇：exercise more多锻炼，read more books多读书，eat healthy food and eat better吃健康的食物和吃得更好，spend more time with family and friends花更多时间和家人朋友在一起
参考句型：I am going to...； My winter holiday will...
16． My Favourite Animal
Dogs are my favourite animal. They have got four legs. And they can swim in the water. Dogs are very clever. They can help people do a lot of things. They can play with children. Some can help blind people. And some can help the policemen. Dogs are our friends.
【解析】1.题干解读：该题目要求以“My Favourite Animal”为题，写一篇短文。注意文章的时态为一般现在时，并且书写规范，符合句子数量要求。
2.参考词汇及句型：
参考单词：favourite最喜欢的，have got有，swim游泳，clever聪明的，play with和……玩，blind盲的，policemen警察
参考句型：Dogs are…；And they can…；They can…
17．范文：
Hello, I’m your new classmate. I’m thirteen years old. I was thin and short before. But now I’m fat and tall. I’m 1.5 meters tall now and I weigh 50 kilograms. My favourite sport is basketball. I can play it very well. I like English best. I’m good at it. I would like to be an English teacher in the future. What about you, my friend
【解析】1. 题干解读：本题要求向你的初中新朋友作简单的自我介绍，需要结合以下提示，对比过去及现在，并说一下自己理想。可以适当拓展写作，语句通顺，条理清楚，书写工整。注意时态可以用一般现在时及一般过去时并要符合句子数量要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考词汇：new classmate新同学；… years old……岁；thin and short又瘦又矮；fat and tall又胖又高；… meters tall ……米高；weigh … kilograms重……公斤；my favourite sport我最喜欢的运动；like … best最喜欢……；be good at擅长；would like to be想要成为；in the future在未来
参考句型：I’m … ；I was …；I can …；I like … best；What about …
18．范文：
My Middle School
We are going to leave our primary school soon. We are going to study in No. 1 Middle School in September. We are going to say goodbye to our school. We are going to meet new friends and new teachers. We are going to study Chinese, English, maths, history and music. We are going to learn many new things.
【解析】1. 题干解读：该题目要求写一篇短文和大家分享一下即将开启的中学生活。然后再阐述在中学将要遇到的人和学习的节目。注意文章为一般将来时态并要符合句子数量要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考单词：September九月，say goodbye to our school跟我们学校说再见，meet new friends结识新朋友，meet new teachers认识新老师，learn many new things学习很多东西，study Chinese, English, maths, history and music学习语文、英语、数学、历史和音乐
参考句型：We are going to …；
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