【浙江专用】2024-2025学年高一英语（人教版2019）下学期期末真题专练—专题05 读后续写 16篇(含答案+解析)

【浙江专用】2024-2025学年高一英语（人教版2019）下学期期末真题专练
专题05 读后续写 16篇
一、书面表达
1．（2024高一下·宁波期末）阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Ever since I was little, my favorite season was winter. I loved to play in the snow and enjoyed the hot chocolate. Unfortunately, winter never gave me the special gift of snow on my birthday. The snow disappeared before my birthday and started after it. The seed of receiving that special gift was deeply planted in my heart.
As I lived with my grandparents in my girlhood, I would always ask my grandmother why it didn't snow on my birthday. She would laugh and tell me I asked too many questions, and my grandfather would always smile at me affectionately, sitting beside the stove. But one day, my grandmother promised that she would make it snow when I was enjoying life to the fullest. I thanked her and asked for snow on my next birthday, but my mind was occupied with confusion. "How can you make it snow " My grandmother didn't reply but shot me a determined look. It seemed that she had already hatched(策划)a plot.
But that year, before my birthday, my grandmother passed away. I was at an emotional loss, but angry because she had promised me to make it snow. The day of my sixth birthday, I woke up and ran to my window, hoping to see just one snowflake. Unfortunately, there was no snow. I cried and cried all day because my grandmother had let me down, but my grandfather said with certainty that my grandmother would keep her word.
Before my birthday every year, I would pray but it never came. By my sixteenth birthday, I had lost all hope of getting my snow, even though I still wished for it. During my party, I had the best time ever! I enjoyed the company of my friends and family, and I was truly happy.
I was outside with a friend when she asked me if I was having a good time. I told her I was enjoying my life to the fullest. Then I saw the white snow falling all around. I became like a little child on Christmas morning as I ran around screaming and laughing. I was so excited that my friend looked at me as if I were crazy, and laughed at me. She asked me if I had ever seen snow before, and I laughed and said that I had, but that this snow was very special to me.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1：
Curious about my reply, my friend asked, "Why was this snow so special "
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Paragraph 2：
Hearing my friend's advice, I decided to head for my grandfather's home.
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2．（2024高一下·杭州期末）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Once upon a time, there was a girl named Sara. She had a passion for soccer that burned brighter than any other flame in her heart. However, Sara faced a big challenge—her legs were not as strong as her friends, requiring her to rely on crutches (拐杖) for support.
Saras friends gathered on the soccer field every day, their laughter and shouts of excitement filling the air. She watched them with envy, longing to join in their games. But whenever she tried to play, the reality of her limitations would hit her hard, and she would feel a wave of disappointment. Despite this, Sara refused to let her dreams die. She loved soccer with all her heart, and she was determined not to give up.
One day, the school announced an important soccer match. Sara's heart skipped a beat when she heard the news. She wanted to participate more than anything, but she knew that many kids would doubt her abilities because of her legs. Instead of giving up to their doubts, Sara chose to accept them as a source of strength.
She began practising hard every day after school. Using her crutches, she kicked the ball with all her strength, gradually mastering the art of balancing herself. Sometimes, she would fall down, but each time, she would pick herself up with determination. Her face would be sweaty and dirty, but her eyes would shine with determination.
Finally, the day arrived. Sara's team had made it to the final match, and she had been given a chance to play. The crowd roared with excitement as she took her position on the field. Everyone cheered her on, their voices a mix of encouragement and admiration. Although Sara couldn't run like the others, she used her skills and wisdom to pass the ball, her crutches becoming her secret weapon (武器) on the field.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为100左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答.
In the last moments, the ball came to Sara.
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3．（2024高一下·宁波期末）阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Ever since I was little, my favorite season was winter. I loved to play in the snow and enjoyed the hot chocolate. Unfortunately, winter never gave me the special gift of snow on my birthday. The snow disappeared before my birthday and started after it. The seed of receiving that special gift was deeply planted in my heart.
As I lived with my grandparents in my girlhood, I would always ask my grandmother why it didn't snow on my birthday. She would laugh and tell me I asked too many questions, and my grandfather would always smile at me affectionately, sitting beside the stove. But one day, my grandmother promised that she would make it snow when I was enjoying life to the fullest. I thanked her and asked for snow on my next birthday, but my mind was occupied with confusion. "How can you make it snow " My grandmother didn't reply but shot me a determined look. It seemed that she had already hatched (策划) a plot.
But that year, before my birthday, my grandmother passed away. I was at an emotional loss, but angry because she had promised me to make it snow. The day of my sixth birthday, I woke up and ran to my window, hoping to see just one snowflake. Unfortunately, there was no snow. I cried and cried all day because my grandmother had let me down, but my grandfather said with certainty that my grandmother would keep her word.
Before my birthday every year, I would pray but it never came. By my sixteenth birthday, I had lost all hope of getting my snow, even though I still wished for it. During my party, I had the best time ever! I enjoyed the company of my friends and family, and I was truly happy.
I was outside with a friend when she asked me if I was having a good time. I told her I was enjoying my life to the fullest. Then I saw the white snow falling all around. I became like a little child on Christmas morning as I ran around screaming and laughing. I was so excited that my friend looked at me as if I were crazy, and laughed at me. She asked me if I had ever seen snow before, and I laughed and said that I had, but that this snow was very special to me.
注意：1. 续写词数应为150个左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1:
Curious about my reply, my friend asked, "Why was this snow so special "
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Paragraph 2:
Hearing my friend's advice, I decided to head for my grandfather's home.
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4．（2024高一下·慈溪期末）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
There was a time in my life twenty years ago when I was driving a taxi to earn a living. I encountered people whose lives amazed me, made me laugh and made me weep. But none of those lives touched me more than that of a woman I picked up late on a warm August night.
That night, I was called at 2:00am to pick someone up. When I arrived, the building was completely dark except for one light in a window. In this case, many other drivers would just honk（按喇叭） once or twice, wait a short minute, then drive away.
But I always went to the door to find the passenger. It might, I reasoned, be someone who needed my assistance. I walked to the door and knocked. "Just a minute," answered a weak and elderly voice. After a long wait, the door opened. A small woman in her 80s stood before me. By her side was a small suitcase.
"Would you carry my bag out to the car " she said. I took her suitcase and gave her my arm. We walked slowly to the street. She kept thanking me for my kindness.
"It's nothing," I told her. "I try to treat my passengers how I want my mother treated. "
"You're such a good boy," she said. When we got in the taxi, she gave me an address. Then she asked, "Could you drive through the downtown "
"It's not the shortest way", I answered.
"I don't mind," she said. "I'm in no hurry. I'm on my way to a hospice（临终安养院）. " I saw her eyes shining with tears.
"I don't have any family left, she continued. "The doctor says I should go there. He says I don't have very long. "
I quietly turned off the meter（计程器）. "What road do you want me to take " I asked.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: For the next two hours, we drove through the city.
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Paragraph 2: I did not pick up any more passengers that day, driving aimlessly, lost in thought.
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5．（2024高一下·湖州期末）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
One of my best friends is named Lisa. If you'd told us a month ago that one day we would need space from each other, we would have said, "It will not happen!"
But then Lisa's family won a five-day stay in a mountain cabin(小屋). Because Lisa's sister, Alana, was spending the week with her grandparents, Lisa's mom and dad said I could come along instead.
When I told my parents about the amazing invitation, my mom said, "That sounds fun, but keep in mind that five days is a long time to spend with a friend." I shook my head. "Lisa and I are just like fish and water. We're happy sticking together. Plus, the cabin is near paths where we can try snowshoeing and other outdoor activities. "
A few weeks later, Lisa and her parents and I arrived at an adorable cabin surrounded by snow-covered trees. "What a great place!" Lisa's dad said.
"It's looking a little cloudy," said Lisa's mom, glancing at the sky. "Let's hope it means snow and not rain."
As you might have guessed, the clouds did mean rain. Lots of rain. So we had to stay indoors, calling off the whole plan including snowshoeing, watching winter wildlife and other outdoor activities. "I guess we'll have to find something else to do," said Lisa.
We found a couple of board games(桌游) and a pack of cards and sat down. At first, it was fun, but we ended up playing those games for about 100 hours, stop ping only to eat and sleep!
"I can't play anymore," I said on the third day. "How about we just read by ourselves for a while "
"I have a better idea," said Lisa. "How about singing instead "
"I think a little quiet time would be nice," I said, opening a book I had brought.
"Oh, come on! Don't be boring. I'll pick the first song." Lisa started singing "Somewhere over the Rainbow."
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
"Could you please leave me alone " I shouted.
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The fourth day was fine, and we sometimes played together and sometimes apart.
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6．（2023高一下·衢州期末）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Ryan picked up a snowball and began to polish it so that soon it was hard as a cricket ball. He smiled to himself. Now, all that he needed was a target. He walked down the High Street.
Paul was in the wrong place at the wrong time. He was a skinny boy whose legs were so thin that they looked as if you could break them. He was so skinny that the other kids used to joke about him getting blown away when it was windy. He was helping old Mrs McTell by sweeping the snow off the path and putting salt down to melt the ice. He liked Mrs McTell.
Paul had his head down and was sweeping a piece of ice when the snowball struck him full in the face. He staggered(踉跄) back, put his hand to his lip and wiped off the dirt. He heard Ryan laughing and shouting names. But Paul ignored it. He had had problems with Ryan at school and did not want to stir up more trouble. He ducked down and made his way round to the back of Mrs McTell's to see if she wanted any shopping.
Bored by the silence, Ryan soon gave up and walked down to the park. It was a short-cut to home and by now his fingers were aching with the cold. The park pond was frozen over and Ryan laughed at a couple of ducks, waddling(摇摆着走) on the ice. They were finding it hard to keep balance. Quickly, Ryan picked up a stick and without thinking made his way onto the ice. In his mind's eye, he could see the feathers flying as he hit one of the ducks.
Ryan was a few yards out when the ice cracked. It sounded like gun shot across the frozen park. The ice broke into pieces before his eyes. Screaming, he fell straight down into the icy water. The ducks flew off.
1. 所续写短文的词数应为100左右。
2. 续写部分为一段，开头语已为你写好。
Paul heard Ryan's voice as he entered the park.
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7．（2023高一下·温州期末） 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Jeremy was with his father in South Africa, which was far from his hometown Wales. He rarely spent time with his father, a famous wildlife photographer. So far, he wasn't sure he liked following his dad around. The work seemed mostly hot and boring.
"Ready " Dad asked. Jeremy nodded and they climbed into the old truck. As the truck moved noisily across the rough dirt, Dad chatted with the local guide Ben. And Jeremy watched for animals.
Suddenly, there came a big crash from the car. Jeremy was shocked to find that the door had fallen off! "It might be a blessing (幸事) in disguise! Now we can see better," Dad said. Ben threw the door into the back of the truck.
They stopped near a river. Ben said he was friends with the elephants that sometimes gathered here. Maybe they'd see some. Before long, Jeremy saw a small group of elephants in the distance, moving slowly through the grassland towards the water. Dad leaped out of the truck and focused his camera on the largest elephant, whose two long teeth shone in the sun. Jeremy spotted a very young baby elephant walking between two adults. It was tiny, by elephant standards. The two adult elephants kept stopping to wait for their baby.
Jeremy watched as the group neared the river. They trumpeted loudly and flapped their large ears to cool themselves down. Then several larger elephants jumped in the water up to their ears. However, Jeremy lost sight of the baby. Where was it Then he saw. It was in water up to its eyes, holding its trunk (象鼻) up above the water. Jeremy hoped it could breathe through its trunk, because its mouth was underwater.
Other elephants were using their trunks to spray (喷洒) themselves with the cool water, splashing and playing in the water. It was an elephant party. But the baby elephant was in trouble. "Look!" screamed Jeremy. The bank was too steep (陡峭的) for the baby. It couldn't climb out of the water. Other elephants tried pushing it, without success. The mother was anxious.
注意：1. 续写词数应为100左右；2. 续写部分为一段，段首句已写好。
Suddenly, Jeremy got an idea and rushed to the back of the truck. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8．（2024高一下·衢州期末）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
It was a bright, cold, spring, Thursday afternoon. As Zack was making a sandwich, he saw his mom, Grace Garcia, step down the stairs with a sad expression on her aged face.
"Zack," Grace paused, trying to sum up her thoughts,"Ms. Savitt had a heart attack this morning." Just then, Zack began recollecting the bitter memories of living across the street from Ms. Savitt. She would always yell at him to get off her lawn and to settle down to give the neighborhood a break from all of his noises.
"Oh," Zack said, "that's too bad." Grace Garcia could tell that Zack was actually not disappointed at all. She was shocked. This was because, when Zack was four years old, his parents divorced (离婚). His father left with most of the money. At that time, Grace did not have a job, so she was left with barely any money to support her and her son. It was Ms. Savitt that kindly offered for them to stay at her house at any time. If Grace was busy, she would take care of Zack for as long as necessary. Of course, Zack was aware of this years later, but he still did not realize the importance of Ms. Savitt in his life.
Grace Garcia strictly said, "Zack, I have already scheduled for you and me to visit her in the hospital, tomorrow after school, "Grace looked at Zack and noticed that he rolled his eyes with anger.
"Do I really have to I'm telling you, mom. Ms. Savitt always got really mad at me whenever I would not even do anything. And besides, I have plans tomorrow and I don't want to waste my time going to a hospital and seeing that lady!" Zack was shocked at his own outbreak, that he didn't even want to look in his mother's eyes because he was too ashamed for treating his mom and even Ms. Savitt that way.
注意：
(1)所续写短文的词数应为100左右。
(2)续写部分为一段，开头语已为你写好。
The next morning, Zack saw a note on the fridge.
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9．（2024高一下·平阳期末）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
On Dec. 20, Mello called his mother on FaceTime, which he does every day after school. That afternoon, Mello broke down in tears the moment his mother, Anita James, answered the phone. "Mello, what happened " James asked her son on the phone.
"I'm getting tired of them bullying (欺凌) my friend about his shoes. It's making me so upset," he answered in a serious voice, explaining that his classmates made fun of his friend Melvin for having worn-out (穿破的) muddy sneakers.
James listened to Mello's narration with a thoughtful expression. Then, Mello earnestly asked, "Can we go buy him some shoes "
James told her son they would talk about it when she got home from work. During their in-person conversation a few hours later, James found her son still upset. At last, Mello decided to buy his friend a fresh pair of sneakers to get rid of bullies and remind him that he has people who care about him.
"Can I use my pocket money, or you can take something away that I would get for Christmas " Mello asked his mother.
The sincere request from her son hit James for many reasons, including that when she was growing up, her older brother used to buy her sneakers when her parents couldn't afford them. Now, in their adult lives, James buys her brother a pair of sneakers for his birthday every year to show her appreciation. James was so touched by her little boy's genuine care for his friend and she knew how it would matter to the poor kid, Melvin.
That evening, they went to a sneaker store and bought a pair of black-and-white Nike shoes for Melvin. Mello used savings from his pocket money to pay for the $85 shoes. This way, Mello thought, "nobody could laugh at him or say anything about him anymore." Mello was so excited to give Melvin the gift that he woke up nearly an hour early for school.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1:
Before class began, Mello handed his friend the orange Nike box in private.
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Paragraph 2:
Bryant Brown, the school's social studies teacher, found the shoe box on Melvin's desk.
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10．（2023高一下·富阳期末） 读后续写
I was born and grew up in a small seaside town, In my childhood, I often played on the beach with my elder sister, chasing (追逐) the waves and enjoying the seaside scenery (风景).
One sunny summer afternoon, my sister and I were playing on a big rock quite a distance (距离) from the beach. We were so happy that we didn't notice the water rising. When we decided to go back, we were shocked to find that the rock had almost been covered by water and there was no way back to the shore. Meanwhile, the wind blew harder and harder. We got into a panic (惊慌)，waving and shouting crazily towards the shore. Suddenly, i slipped (滑) and fell into the sea. My sister reached out her hand to catch hold of me. However, she could not stay still, and slid off the rock into the sea, too.
"Help! Help!" We cried. I could feel my body tingling (酸麻) as I tried to breathe for air. I attempted to swim back to the rock, but the water was too deep and the waves were too strong. What made things worse was that the rough water made it almost impossible for anyone to hear our cries. Tears mixed with the water as I struggled in the sea. My sister, although using all her strength, wasn't able to pull me in. Instead, she was being pushed apart from me by the big waves. The two of us, scared to death, kept crying.
Luckily, two boys playing on the beach happened to see us. They quickly found a stick nearby and approached us cautiously (小心地)，hand in hand. They tried to pull us ashore with the stick (木棍). But the stick was too short for us to reach. Worse still, the wind was getting so strong that the two boys were rocked from side to side, unable to stand steadily. Eventually, they had no choice but to go back to the shore to look for other people to help us.
注意：1. 续写词数应为100左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Another huge wave crashed over my head and pulled me under.
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11．（2023高一下·奉化期末） 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
One summer afternoon, when I was about eight years of age, I was looking at a beautiful rainbow that, bending from the sky, seemed to be losing itself in a thick wood about a quarter of a mile distant.
"Do you know, Gracie," said my brother, who was just recovering from a severe illness, weak and tired, "that if you should go to the end of the rainbow, you would find there precious treasures "
"Is it truly so " I asked.
"Truly so," answered my brother, with a smile but a very serious face.
Now, I was a simple-hearted child who believed everything that was told to me; so, without another word, I rushed out toward the wood. My brother called after me as loudly as he was able to, but I did not take any notice of him.
I cared nothing for the wet grass, on and on I ran. I was so sure that I knew just where that rainbow ended. But when I reached the cedars (雪松林), the end of the rainbow was not there!
Abruptly I saw it shining down among the trees a little farther off; so on and on I struggled, through the thick bushes, till I came within the sound of a stream. I reached the bank of the stream, and I could see it a little way off on the other side. I crossed the stream on a fallen tree, and still ran on, though my muscles were aching and my knees shaking.
Suddenly I met in my way a large porcupine (豪猪). I ran away from him as fast as my tired feet would carry me. In my flight and hurry I forgot to keep my eye on the rainbow, and when, at last, I remembered and looked for it, it was nowhere in sight!
When I saw that it was indeed gone, I burst into tears, for I had lost all my treasures, and had nothing but muddy feet and a wet and torn dress. So I set out for home.
注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右；
2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。
Paragraph 1:
But I soon found that my troubles had only begun.
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Paragraph 2:
At last I heard my own name called.
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12．（2023高一下·湖州期末）读后续写：阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。（满分25分）
Richie and her husband, Pooh, decided on visiting Cape Cod, a beautiful sea town, which is about three hours drive from the city of Boston. Their daughter who then lived in Salem close to Boston insisted that she would pick them up. But they were confident of their sense of direction and not wanting to trouble her, so they refused her offer. They decided to take their journey in their own car and started early in the morning.
After a three-hour drive, they arrived in Cape Cod and started their new discovery with a road map of the town and its suburbs. Since there were many places to see, it took them the whole day to finish their sightseeing.
Now, they were visiting a suburb with shops selling handmade items. Richie was most interested in shopping, while Pooh warned her to finish before it started getting dark. They were so absorbed in their shopping that they forgot about the time until the shops began to close.
They took the same route back. Pooh had a very good memory and a keen sense of direction and so Richie just blindly followed him, without knowing where they were heading to. Soon they found themselves just going round in a maze, realizing they got lost on the way.
They had to stop the car, referred to their map, and started again. After some time, they realized it was no use trying and finding their way back. Their mobile phones had been dead for hours, and it was impossible to contact their daughter. Having no other option, they decided to ask someone for help, but being a Sunday, the roads were empty, with no people walking around or cars passing by. They were getting worried and terrified with each passing minute. The darkness and panic filled Richie's head with horrible thoughts "Would they be robbed or attacked "After hours of waiting silently in the darkness, they decided to try again.
注意：
●续写词数应为150左右；
●请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Pooh turned the key and tried to start the car, but it wouldn't move.
On the edge of despair, they heard the whistle of a car.
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13．（2022高一下·湖州期末）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Jenny was very nervous. She had a swimming competition in the morning and could not sleep. She tossed and turned all night. She was no stranger to competition. In fact, she loved it. Jenny was very athletic and was not only part of a swim team, but a soccer team, as well. She even won a soccer championship with her teammates last year. But this particular swimming competition was important. She had made it all the way to the finals and didn't want to let her teammates down.
When her alarm went off at 6: 00 am, she hit the snooze button and rolled onto her side, wishing she could just stay in bed all day. Having slept so poorly, Jenny was not at all ready for the day. After a few minutes, she stretched her arms above her head and yawned before throwing her covers back and climbing out of bed.
She was terribly anxious about the competition, so much that she couldn't even eat breakfast. It felt as though she got butterflies in her stomach. Jenny's mother looked concerned. "You have to eat something," she said. "It's important to keep your strength up."
"I know, I'm just not hungry this morning," Jenny replied, picking at her eggs with a fork. All she could think about was facing the competition. What if she performed poorly What if she disappointed her coach and teammates She wouldn't be able to forgive herself.
Jenny's mom sensed her daughter's worry and gave her a comforting pat on the back. "You'll be great, dear. Just do your best. That's all that matters."
Jenny felt a bit of relief and appreciated her mother's kind words. But by the time she got to the athletic club where the swim meet was being held, that feeling of comfort had disappeared. She went to the locker room to prepare for the competition.
注意：
1）续写词数应为 150 左右；
2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
When she opened her gym bag, she was quite surprised to see her soccer uniform and realized she had grabbed the wrong bag.
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Jenny headed for the swimming pool with a bright smile.
14．（2022高一下·温州期末）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
I frowned as I watched the movers (搬运工) packing things into our space vehicle. It was bad enough we had to move, but to Mars. I was hoping to get a puppy (小狗）this summer, not a one-way ticket to a planet of red rocks.
"I know you're disappointed, Cassie." Mom said. "But I've been offered my dream job. And the rocket is first-class. We can travel Co Mars in eight days instead of eight months. We'll come back—finally."
As Mom went to answer a worker's question, I sat and pulled grass from the ground. There was no grass on Mars, I thought. Or flowers. Or animals. There's almost nothing alive on that red wasteland! If only Mom wasn't an aeronautical (航空）engineer and Dad wasn't a climatologist (气象学家). If they were roologisls, we could stay on Earth and hang out wilh animals!
Mom called, saying the vehicle was readyfor launch. I walked slowly behind my parents. If only I had a puppy, then maybe moving to Mars wouldn't feel so awful.
The flight was fast! Soon we reached the red planet. Several of my parents' scientist friends welcomed us to space. We took a quick tour of the laboratories and everyone talked about things I didn't understand. Then, we paused at a door. Everyone stopped speaking and looked at me. Mom touched a button on the wall.
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"We thought you might like to help out in here," Mom said to me.
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15．（2022高一下·宁波期末）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
"Open this one!" Chloe cried, handing her older sister a package from under the Christmas tree.
Laila opened it. "Cute," she said, pulling out the velvet (天鸦绒）pillow Chloe had made. "It'll match my dorm room."
"I sewed it without help," Chloe announced. "And look, I put two special pockets for you to put…"
But Laila was distracted. "That reminds me," she interrupted Chloe. '*Mom, can I take the sewing machine (缝纫机）back to college with me I'm helping with costumes for a play."
As Laila and Mom chatted, the pillow fell to the floor. Chloe stared at it. Would the pillow end up in the giveaway pile Would the time spent sewing be ignored
Her throat tightened. "I'm going to the kitchen to get more cider," she mumbled.
For most of Chloe's life, what had seemed fun to Chloe had been pesky (讨厌的) or babyish to Laila. But after Laila left for college, things changed. She often phoned Chloe complaining how hard it was to be away from home. But now she was treating Chloe like the pesky little sister again.
"There you are!" Mom said, rushing into the kitchen. "We're due at Grandma's in 30 minutes. We'll have to open the rest of the gifts later."
Chloe quickly changed her clothes, sneaked the pillow out to the garage and stuffed it into the giveaway pile. The specially chosen photo of the whole family in one pocket would never comfort Laila when she was homesick.
For the rest of the day, Chloe's stomach felt as if it had a rock in it. Laila had spent the whole holiday with the grown-up cousins. She'd hardly said a word to Chloe! Well, the next time, Chloe would simply ignore her when Mom asked her to answer Laila's phone.
"Where are you going " Laila asked as Chloe headed upstairs. "To my room," Chloe said coldly. "But you still have a gift under the tree!" Laila reminded her. Chloe shrugged. Laila grabbed her hand and pulled her to the living room. She handed Chloe a package. "I'm pretty sure you'll like it."
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1）所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2）至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3）续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4）续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1 : Chloe unwrapped the package halfheartedly and found inside it lay a phone.
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Paragraph 2: She rushed to the garage and returned excitedly with the nearly-abandoned pillow.
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16．（2022高一下·慈溪期末）阅读下面短文，根据所给倩节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
It was my twelfth birthday, and what I really wanted was a new bicycle. But I knew my family couldn't afford one.
A new bike was just a dream, so I wanted a nightstand(床头柜). I figured that at least I would have a safe place to keep my private things. So I asked my parents for a nightstand with lockable drawers (抽屉).
We went to the secondhand furniture storeand found an old, dark brown nightstand. It didn't look too cool, but at least it had drawers that I could keep locked. I decided that I would paint it to make it look better.
After we took it home, I was getting ready to paint it. When I pulled the drawers out, I felt something stuck (卡住）at the back of the bottom drawer. I reached in all the way to the back and was surprisedto find a bag.
When opening the bag, I realized that there were some papers in it which were some kind of official-looking documents (文件). And beneath were a bunch of dollar bills! Talk about finding a treasure! And on my birthday!
I went ahead and read the papers, which turned out to be a will (遗嘱). Some old lady was leaving her savings to her son and grandchildren. The old lady must have died and nobody knew the money. Her family donated the nightstand to the secondhand furniture store and it was now in my hands.
I counted the money, over 1,000 dollars in total. I was going crazy. With this money I could buy the coolest bicycle. I could even buy bicycles for my younger brothers. Maybe I could also get ray parents a car.
What a dilemma! I could keep it and get all kinds of things for myself and my family. Or I could give it all back. **Somebody helps me with this!" I begged. But I really didn't need anyone else to give me the answer. I already knew right from wrong. I decided not to fail this test. It was a test of honor-my honor.
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1）所续写短文的词数应为150词左右：
2）至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语：
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Paragraph 1: I called my family into my bedroom and showed them what I had found.
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Paragraph 2: Several days later, the old lady's son and his wife came to my house.
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答案解析部分
1．Paragraph 1: Curious about my reply, my friend asked, "Why was this snow so special " I was still bathed in the ecstasy of seeing the snow, without even hearing my friend's question, just exclaiming out aloud, "Snow! I see it!" It was when my friend tapped on my shoulder that I realized I lost control of myself and was immersed in this blissful world. I explained with my choking words to my friend that my grandmother who had died several years ago kept her word to make it snow when I lived my life to the fullest. Seeing that snow was like seeing my grandmother and her long-awaited gift. At that moment, a surge of nostalgia rushed into my mind and I couldn't help bursting into tears. My friend, standing beside me, comforted me in her reassuring voice and suggested me going back home to share the delight with my grandfather.
Paragraph 2: Hearing my friend's advice, I decided to head for my grandfather's home.When I opened the door, what greeted me was my grandfather's affectionate smile as usual, which deeply tugged at my soft heartstrings. Without thinking twice, I instantly threw my arms around him, poured out my sentiment of missing for my grandmother and shared the pleasure of seeing the snow. My grandfather stroked my head fondly and then withdrew an elaborately-packed gift from the drawer. Inside, nestled in white paper, was a crystal snowflake with a card that read, "Happy Birthday!" Confused, I asked my grandfather how this could be. He explained that it was my grandmother's final wish to give it to me when I lived my life to the fullest. At that moment, surrounded by the warmth of family and the magic of the falling snow, I realized that while my grandmother may no longer be with us physically, her love and legacy lived on in our hearts, forever etched in the delicate dance of snowflakes.
本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读文章可知，作者从小就喜爱冬天，渴望生日时能有场雪作为特别的礼物，但一直未能如愿。祖母承诺在作者最快乐时为作者造雪，却在作者六岁生日前离世。每年生日，作者都满怀期待却屡屡失望。十六岁那年，生日派对上作者过得非常开心，与朋友在外时，奇迹般地下起了雪。作者像孩子般兴奋，因为这雪对作者意义非凡。段落续写：①由第一段句首内容"我的朋友对我的回答很好奇，就问：‘为什么这场雪这么特别？'"可知，第一段可以描写作者对朋友解释这场雪特别的原因。②由第二段句首内容"听了朋友的建议，我决定去爷爷家。"可知，第二段可以描写作者到爷爷家后，二人的对话和感受。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
本书面表达要点齐全，上下文连贯，使用一定数量的句式结构，让句子更加生动丰满，同时运用了许多高级词汇和固定短语，提高文章的档次，体现了对英语的熟练的驾驭能力。例如：I was still bathed in the ecstasy of seeing the snow, without even hearing my friend's question, just exclaiming out aloud, "Snow! I see it!"运用了现在分词作状语； It was when my friend tapped on my shoulder that I realized I lost control of myself and was immersed in this blissful world. 运用了强调句，时间状语从句，宾语从句；I explained with my choking words to my friend that my grandmother who had died several years ago kept her word to make it snow when I lived my life to the fullest. 运用了宾语从句，限制性定语从句，时间状语从句； At that moment, a surge of nostalgia rushed into my mind and I couldn't help bursting into tears. 运用了并列句；When I opened the door, what greeted me was my grandfather's affectionate smile as usual, which deeply tugged at my soft heartstrings. 运用了时间状语从句，主语从句，非限制性定语从句； Inside, nestled in white paper, was a crystal snowflake with a card that read, "Happy Birthday!" 运用了倒装句，限制性定语从句； Confused, I asked my grandfather how this could be. 运用了形容词作状语，宾语从句；He explained that it was my grandmother's final wish to give it to me when I lived my life to the fullest. 运用了宾语从句，时间状语从句；At that moment, surrounded by the warmth of family and the magic of the falling snow, I realized that while my grandmother may no longer be with us physically, her love and legacy lived on in our hearts, forever etched in the delicate dance of snowflakes.运用了过去分词作状语，宾语从句，让步状语从句。
2．In the last moments, the ball came to Sara. She couldn't believe that the ball would roll to her feet. She wanted to make full use of this opportunity and demonstrate to her classmates that despite relying on crutches, she could playsoccer well. She used the skills she had acquired while practicing football to firmly control the ball under her feet. It was difficult for the opponent to snatch the ball from her feet. The classmates on the field had big eyes and were surprised by Sara's ball control skills. As she approached the goal, Sara lifted her crutches and shot the perfect ball with all her strength. The ball was in the goal. In an instant, the crowd erupted with shouts and cheers. Sara's school team won the game. She was a hero.
本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读文章可知，讲述了萨拉尽管要依靠拐杖来支撑，但她仍然对足球充满着热情。一天，学校宣布了一场重要的足球比赛，她非常想参与其中，但她知道很多孩子会因为她的腿而怀疑她的能力。她开始每天放学后刻苦练习。终于，这一天到来了。萨拉的队伍进入了决赛，她得到了上场的机会。段落续写：根据段首句内容"在最后一刻，球落到萨拉脚下。"可知，本段可描写作者萨拉的心理活动、表现以及比赛的结果。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
本书面表达要点齐全，上下文连贯，使用一定数量的句式结构，让句子更加生动丰满，同时运用了许多高级词汇和固定短语，提高文章的档次，体现了对英语的熟练的驾驭能力。例如：She couldn't believe that the ball would roll to her feet. 运用了宾语从句；She wanted to make full use of this opportunity and demonstrate to her classmates that despite relying on crutches, she could playsoccer well. 运用了宾语从句；She used the skills she had acquired while practicing football to firmly control the ball under her feet. 运用了时间状语从句的省略，限制性定语从句；It was difficult for the opponent to snatch the ball from her feet. 运用了it作形式主语； As she approached the goal, Sara lifted her crutches and shot the perfect ball with all her strength. 运用了时间状语从句。
3．Paragraph 1: Curious about my reply, my friend asked, "Why was this snow so special " I was still bathed in the ecstasy of seeing the snow, without even hearing my friend's question, just exclaiming out aloud, "Snow! I see it!" It was when my friend tapped on my shoulder that I realized I lost control of myself and was immersed in this blissful world. I explained with my choking words to my friend that my grandmother who had died several years ago kept her word to make it snow when I lived my life to the fullest. Seeing that snow was like seeing my grandmother and her long-awaited gift. At that moment, a surge of nostalgia rushed into my mind and I couldn't help bursting into tears. My friend, standing beside me, comforted me in her reassuring voice and suggested me going back home to share the delight with my grandfather.
Paragraph 2: Hearing my friend's advice, I decided to head for my grandfather's home. When I opened the door, what greeted me was my grandfather's affectionate smile as usual, which deeply tugged at my soft heartstrings. Without thinking twice, I instantly threw my arms around him, poured out my sentiment of missing for my grandmother and shared the pleasure of seeing the snow. My grandfather stroked my head fondly and then withdrew an elaborately-packed gift from the drawer. Inside, nestled in white paper, was a crystal snowflake with a card that read, "Happy Birthday!" Confused, I asked my grandfather how this could be. He explained that it was my grandmother's final wish to give it to me when I lived my life to the fullest. At that moment, surrounded by the warmth of family and the magic of the falling snow, I realized that while my grandmother may no longer be with us physically, her love and legacy lived on in our hearts, forever etched in the delicate dance of snowflakes.
4．略
参考作文 For the next two hours, we drove through the city. I took her through familiar streets, showing her places where she might have spent time in her younger years. We passed by landmarks, parks, and old buildings, each evoking memories for her. Occasionally, she would point out a place and share a brief story or memory associated with it. Her voice was soft and reflective, and though she spoke little, it was clear that each location held a special significance for her. We spent the time reminiscing about the past, and in doing so, I felt like I was helping her relive moments of joy and love before she reached her final destination.
I did not pick up any more passengers that day, driving aimlessly, lost in thought. The city seemed quieter and more reflective, mirroring my own mood. The experience had touched me deeply, and I found myself contemplating the fragility of life and the importance of compassion. As the sun began to rise, casting a warm light over the streets, I realized that the simple act of kindness I had shown her had created a lasting memory for both of us. I hoped that her final moments would be as peaceful and comforting as the drive we shared.
本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读文章可知，讲述了作者当出租汽车司机时送一位老太太穿城去临终养老院的故事。段落续写：①由第一段首句内容"在接下来的两个小时里，我们开车穿过城市。"可知，第一段可描写作者带老人经过她可能熟悉的街道给她指着她可能熟悉的店铺，老人很开心。②由第二段首句内容"那天我没有再搭载乘客，漫无目的地开着车，陷入了沉思。"可知，第二段可描写作者思考着生命的脆弱和同情心的重要性。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
本书面表达要点齐全，上下文连贯，使用一定数量的句式结构，让句子更加生动丰满，同时运用了许多高级词汇和固定短语，提高文章的档次，体现了对英语的熟练的驾驭能力。例如： I took her through familiar streets, showing her places where she might have spent time in her younger years. 运用了限制性定语从句； Her voice was soft and reflective, and though she spoke little, it was clear that each location held a special significance for her.运用了让步状语从句，主语从句； We spent the time reminiscing about the past, and in doing so, I felt like I was helping her relive moments of joy and love before she reached her final destination.运用了宾语从句，时间状语从句；The experience had touched me deeply, and I found myself contemplating the fragility of life and the importance of compassion.运用了并列句；As the sun began to rise, casting a warm light over the streets, I realized that the simple act of kindness I had shown her had created a lasting memory for both of us.运用了时间状语从句，宾语从句和限制性定语从句。
5． "Could you please leave me alone " I shouted. My voice rang through the cabin, an Lisa stopped singing immediately. She looked at me with surprise and hurt in her eyes. I felt a pang of guilt, but I was desperate for some peace and quiet. "I m sorry, Lisa," I said softly. "I just need some time to myself. We' ve been together so much these past few days, I'm starting to feel a litte claustrophobic." Lisa nodded slowly, understanding dawning on her face. "Okay," she said quietly. "I'll leave you alone." She picke up her book and retreated to the other side of the cabin. I felt a sense of relief wash over me as the silence settled in.
The fourth day was fine, and we sometimes played together and sometimes apart. We took turns rea ing books by the fire or going for hikes in the nearby woods. I found that having some space from Lisa actually enhanced our friendship. We had more to talk about when we were together, an we appreciated each other's presence more. By the time our trip was over, I realized that sometimes, having a little space from our closest friends can be just as important as spending time with them.
6．Paul heard Ryan's voice as he entered the park. He hesitated, not wanting to get another snowball in the face. But there was something urgent about the screams. He made a telephone call to Mrs McTell first. A moment later, Paul was standing at the edge of the pond, stretching out with the stick, trying to pull Ryan in. Skinny as Paul was, he finally landed Ryan, panting Ryan stood at the pond side, shivering. "Th...thank you!" he struggled with his teeth chattering constantly. "Everyone deserves respect. "Paul replied. Ryan nodded repeatedly as a response the moment Paul could feel his shame. Soon Mrs McTell riding in an ambulance arrived.
本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读文章可知，作者和他丈夫因为她们的孩子，一个聋哑小孩生病的一系列心理路程。在学校里骚扰过保罗的瑞恩开玩笑地捡起一个雪球，朝保罗的脸上扔去。然后瑞恩离开了，去了一个公园，在那里他滑到结冰的池塘上，用棍子打鸭子，但是冰破了，他掉进了冰冷的水里。保罗听到了瑞恩的尖叫，用一根棍子把他从池塘里拉出来救了他，尽管他之前的顽皮行为是他的目标。瑞恩表达了感激之情，保罗强调了尊重他人的重要性。段落续写：由续写段落首句内容"保罗走进公园时听到了瑞恩的声音。"可知，可描写保罗救助瑞恩的过程。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
本书面表达要点齐全，上下文连贯，使用一定数量的句式结构，让句子更加生动丰满，同时运用了许多高级词汇和固定短语，提高文章的档次，体现了对英语的熟练的驾驭能力。例如：He hesitated, not wanting to get another snowball in the face. 运用了现在分词作状语；But there was something urgent about the screams. 运用了there be 句式； Skinny as Paul was, he finally landed Ryan, panting Ryan stood at the pond side, shivering. 运用了让步状语从句，倒装句；Ryan nodded repeatedly as a response the moment Paul could feel his shame. 运用了时间状语从句。
7． Suddenly, Jeremy got an idea and rushed to the back of the truck. He took the broken door from the back of the truck. Ben saw what Jeremy was planning and ran to help. Together
they pulled the door down to the water Ben comforted the mother elephant, gently explaining that they were going to help her baby. The mother knew Ben and trusted him. Jeremy moved the door onto the bank. Its mother pushed from behind. The baby stepped onto the door and began to walk. Three more steps, and it was safe. The other elephants gathered around the baby, touching it with their trunks."Boy, Jeremy." Dad said,""that was the most exciting photo I've ever taken! I'm glad you came along!"
本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读文章可知，讲述了Jeremy的父亲是一位著名的野生动物摄影师，一次Jeremy和爸爸开着一辆旧卡车出去拍照，在路.上他们遇到了当地的导游Ben,Ben和这里的大象是朋友，所以他们一起去找大象。但是在路.上汽车门突然掉了，Ben将车门被扔进了卡车后面。随后他们把车停在了河边。在这里他们看到一群大象朝着水边走去，其中在两只大象中间有一只小象。接着大象们跳到河里，那只小象也跳进了水里，但是小象完全浸在了水里，眼睛都看不见了，而且河岸对小象来说太陡峭了，它爬不出水面。其他大象试图推它,但没有成功。大象妈妈很焦虑。段落续写:由首句内容"突然，Jeremy有 了个主意,冲到卡车后面。"可知，此段可描写.Jeremy利用掉了的车门将小象救出来的过程。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
本书面表达要点齐全，上下文连贯，使用一定数量的句式结构，让句子更加生动丰满，同时运用了许多高级词汇和固定短语，提高文章的档次，体现了对英语的熟练的驾驭能力。例如： Ben saw what Jeremy was planning and ran to help. 运用了宾语从句；Ben comforted the mother elephant, gently explaining that they were going to help her baby. 运用了现在分词作状语，宾语从句； Three more steps, and it was safe. 运用了并列句；The other elephants gathered around the baby, touching it with their trunks."运用了现在分词作状语；that was the most exciting photo I've ever taken! 运用了限制性定语从句。
8．The next morning, Zack saw a note on the fridge. It was from his mom, saying she had to go to work early and would meet him at the hospital later. He sighed, knowing he couldn't avoid the visit. As he made his way to the hospital, his thoughts drifted back to the past, recalling Ms. Savitt's kindness and his own childish behavior. When he entered her room, he was surprised to see how frail and vulnerable she looked. His heart softened, and he approached her bed with genuine concern. That day, Zack realized the true value of kindness and learned to appreciate the people who had helped him in his life.
9．Before class began, Mello handed his friend the orange Nike box in private. When told it was a gift for him, Melvin was totally shocked and immensely touched at such a nice gesture from his friend. Mello beamed with a warm smile on his face, as if he had anticipated Melvin's reaction, and whispered in his friend's ear that there would be no more teasing from other kids about his worn-out shoes. After weeks of getting constant smirks about his sneakers, Melvin couldn't wait to put on his new shoes. Looking at the shiny Nike shoes on Melvin's feet, Mello was overjoyed.
Bryant Brown, the school's social studies teacher, spotted the shoe box on Melvin's desk. He asked Melvin for the backstory. It brought the teacher to tears. After asking for the two boys' consent, he decided to share the story on Facebook, hoping it might inspire others. The post got thousands of likes, shares and comments. Brown was stunned by the response. He is now planning to launch an anti-bullying campaign in the coming weeks. Hundreds of students, parents and teachers have signed up for the activity with the hope that there's no place in the world for bullies and Mello's helping hand always lives on.
10．Another huge wave crashed over my head and pulled me under. I struggled desperately, trying to reach the surface, but couldn't make it. Seeing this, my sister swam as hard as she could towards me， grasped my arm and tried to head for the shore with me. But she was soon physically exhausted and looked terribly pale. Both of us felt hopeless and thought we were not going to survive! Fortunately, the two boys managed to find a lifeguard. Having learned what was happening, the lifeguard rushed fearlessly against the strong wind and huge waves. Such an experienced swimmer was he that he reached us in no time. He grabbed my arm and quickly carried me to the shore, where he left me taken care of by the two boys. Then, without delay, he returned to save my sister. We were so blessed to be alive and heartily thankful to that courageous lifeguard and the two boys who had saved our lives!
本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读文章可知， 讲述了作者和姐姐在海边岩石上玩耍时没注意到海水涨潮，惊慌中糟糕地滑到海水里。这时，岸上两个男孩勇于施救，在不成功的情况下，找了救生员，救起作者和姐姐的故事。段落续写：续写首句"另一个巨浪从我头顶上袭来，把我拉了下去"后面可描写姐姐来救作者的经过，结果姐姐也很快就精疲力竭，脸色惨白。他们俩都感到绝望，觉得自己活不下去了，幸运的是，两个男孩设法找到了一位救生员，救下了作者和姐姐，他们衷心感谢那位勇敢的救生员和两个男孩救了他们的命！写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
本书面表达要点齐全，上下文连贯，使用一定数量的句式结构，让句子更加生动丰满，同时运用了许多高级词汇和固定短语，提高文章的档次，体现了对英语的熟练的驾驭能力。例如：I struggled desperately, trying to reach the surface, but couldn't make it.运用了转折并列句； Seeing this, my sister swam as hard as she could towards me， grasped my arm and tried to head for the shore with me. 运用了现在分词作状语； Both of us felt hopeless and thought we were not going to survive!运用了并列句； Fortunately, the two boys managed to find a lifeguard. Having learned what was happening, the lifeguard rushed fearlessly against the strong wind and huge waves. 运用了现在分词的完成式作状语，宾语从句；Such an experienced swimmer was he that he reached us in no time. 运用了结果状语从句，倒装句；He grabbed my arm and quickly carried me to the shore, where he left me taken care of by the two boys.运用了非限制性定语从句； We were so blessed to be alive and heartily thankful to that courageous lifeguard and the two boys who had saved our lives!运用了限制性定语从句。
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But I soon found that my troubles had only begun. I lost my way! I was shivering with cold, with my empty stomach rumbling. The night wind howled ruthlessly, nameless creatures murmured in the dark and the moonlight shone weakly on the ground. Filled with fright, I dragged my exhausted body inching forward. Eventually, I sat beside the stream, my arms and legs aching. Regretful for my simple-minded behavior about the missing rainbow and treasures, I burst into tears again.
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At last I heard my own name called. The voice came from distance, but I could figure out it was my brother. "Here! Here!" I shrieked at the top of my lung. My weak brother made his way to me, his eyes filled with concern. A sense of apparent relief enveloped me. I threw myself to him and hugged him tightly. Following him, I arrived at home safe and sound finally. Now, it becomes an indispensable memory in my childhood.
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But I soon found that my troubles had only begun. All at once I heard voices shouting and hallooing. I was frightened, fearing that some unknown animals were upon me! I could not find my way: I was lost in a wood! I could not tell which was east or west, north or south, but wandered about here and there, crying and calling, though I knew that no one could hear me. I was hungry, cold, scared, —altogether very miserable indeed.
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At last I heard my own name called. Then came familiar voices near me. That was my family! Instantly, I tried to respond loudly and urgently, "Here! Here!" Within minutes, my family came into my eyes. Rushing towards them, I threw myself to their warm hugs. In a guilty tone, my brother said, "My poor little sister! I thought you would know I was only quizzing you." Smiling at him, I said, "There is no treasure at the end of the rainbow. But our family are!"
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But I soon found that my troubles had only begun. I couldn't find the previous way! A chill crept over me. With my lips trembling, I was reduced to tears. Hoping to find something more, I still walked through the woods. However, it seemed that the god wasn't blessing on me. Ultimately, I sat down by the tree with my arms aching. I felt extremely tired and my spirits sank, tears streaming down my cheeks again.
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At last I heard my own name called. A wild excitement took hold of my sinking heart. Somebody was looking for me! Rushing forward quickly, I saw it was my brother, who was seized by a burst of anxiety. Seeing me with a big smile, he rushed to me and gave me a long and affectionate hug, eyes beaming with relief. This experience m the summer afternoon gave me a lesson. There was no treasure at the end of the rainbow, but the love between my brother and me.
本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读文章可知，讲述了作者听了哥哥的话，认为在彩虹的尽头会找到珍宝，作者向树林里跑去，但是却什么也没有找到，除了泥泞的脚和一件湿漉漉的破衣服。段落续写：①由第一段首句内容"但我很快发现，我的麻烦才刚刚开始"可知，第一段可描写作者在回家路上遇到的困难。②由第二段首句内容"最后我听到有人叫我自己的名字"可知，第二段可描写作者在哥哥的帮助下回家。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
本书面表达要点齐全，上下文连贯，使用一定数量的句式结构，让句子更加生动丰满，同时运用了许多高级词汇和固定短语，提高文章的档次，体现了对英语的熟练的驾驭能力。例如：Possible version 1部分中的： I was shivering with cold, with my empty stomach rumbling. 运用了with的复合结构；The night wind howled ruthlessly, nameless creatures murmured in the dark and the moonlight shone weakly on the ground.运用了并列句；Eventually, I sat beside the stream, my arms and legs aching. 运用了独立主格结构；The voice came from distance, but I could figure out it was my brother.运用了转折并列句； My weak brother made his way to me, his eyes filled with concern.运用了独立主格结构。
Possible version 2部分中的：I was frightened, fearing that some unknown animals were upon me!运用了现在分词作状语，宾语从句；I could not tell which was east or west, north or south，but wandered about here and there, crying and calling, though I knew that no one c