专题06 书面表达25篇（期末必刷）-2024-2025年八年级英语下期期末高频易错考点专练（沪教牛津版）(带参考答案详解）

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专题06 书面表达25篇（期末必刷）
1．（23-24八年级下·广东深圳·期末）假如你是李华，你在动物救助网站上看到工作人员为流浪狗Oscar寻找领养人。请你用英语给负责人Tom写一封邮件，申请领养。
要点：
1. 个人优势
①乐于助人，每周去养老院做义工；
②喜欢动物，认为养宠物能给人带来快乐；
③……(自行补充一点)
2. 介绍养狗计划：①有充足时间，能够每天遛狗；②…… (自行补充一点)
3. 表达期待，希望获得机会。
注意要求：
1. 词数为80 左右 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)；
2. 内容应包含所有要点，可适当发挥；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
4. 条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。
参考词汇：adopt 领养 apply 申请
Dear Tom,
I am Li Hua, a Junior 2 student. I am writing this letter to adopt Oscar.
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I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours
Li Hua
2．（23-24八年级下·广东广州·期末）一系列的“新”已成为大家关注的热词，学校教育也将翻开新的篇章。未来的教室会是什么样呢？请你以“My Dream Classroom”为题，根据思维导图提示写一篇英语短文，向同学们介绍你理想的教室。
My Dream Classroom What will it look like What will make it “new”
How will the students study
What do you think of the dream classroom
注意：1. 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息；
2. 词数80字左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入词数）；
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人真实信息，否则不予评分。
My Dream Classroom
Hello, everyone! Let me introduce my dream classroom to you.
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3．（23-24八年级下·广东广州·期末）科技让生活变得更美好。学校英文报以“Life in the future”为题向学生征稿。请根据以下思维导图的内容提示写一篇短文投稿，介绍你的未来生活。
注意：
1. 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息；
2. 词数80词左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入词数）；
3. 不能透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Life in the future
With the rapid development of science and technology, life in the future will be better and better.
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4．（23-24八年级下·广东深圳·期末）假如你是李华，你和同学们制作了一个关于鱼灯舞的介绍视频，编辑成视频记录（vlog），计划参加学校主题为“Eye Yantian”的视频征集活动。请根据以下提示，给该视频撰写一段解说词。
要点：
1. 技艺概述：有300多年的历史；在夜晚表演；模拟鱼的动作；
2. 传承人物：吴观球——八十多岁，积极推广鱼灯舞至海内外；
3. 传承建议：①……；②……（自行补充，至少两条）
参考词汇：fish lantern dance鱼灯舞 imitate模拟
要求：
1. 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数内；
2. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和校名：
3. 可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯；
4. 标点正确，书面整洁。
Hi, everyone! I’m Li Hua. It’s my great pleasure to present the traditional culture of Yantian to you.
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5．（23-24八年级下·广东广州·期末）随着科技的飞速发展，我们的日常生活正在经历前所未有的巨大变化。为此，你校决定于近期举办一场主题为“科技给生活带来的改变”的英语演讲比赛。作为参赛者，你需要根据以下内容提示，描述科技对我们生活的具体改变。
different aspects (方面) of life in the past at present
the way people keep in touch with others wrote letters … use WeChat (微信) …
the way people buy things by cash online pay
… …
注意：
1. 可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息；
2. 词数80词左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入词数）；
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen! Great changes have taken place in our life because of science and technology. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you!
6．（23-24八年级下·广东广州·期末）英语课上，老师征集暑假的英语作业方案。请你根据下列图示，并结合自身经历，写一篇英语短文，分享你最喜爱的其中一项作业及理由。
要求：
（1）短文应包括图中要点，可适当补充。
（2）词数80—120左右，短文开头已经给出，不计入总词数，文中不得出现个人信息。
My favourite English homework for this summer holiday is_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7．（23-24八年级下·广东深圳·期末）随着现代科技的发展，很多传统技艺逐渐消失，比如鸬鹚捕鱼（cormorant fishing）。上周你们班召开了一次有关传统文化的班会，同学们就是否要保护鸬鹚捕鱼这项传统技艺展开激烈的讨论。请你为英语校报写一篇活动总结，谈谈同学们的不同看法，并表达你的观点。
内容要点：
1. 支持者的观点（至少两点）；
2. 反对者的观点（至少两点）；
3. 你的看法：联系实际，表达自己的观点。
要求：100字左右。开头已给出，不计入总字数。
文中不得出现考生的学校和真实姓名。
参考词汇：
cultural heritage 文化遗产
develop the local economy 发展当地的经济
be cruel to 对……残忍
Last week, our class held a heated debate on whether to protect the traditional skill of cormorant fishing. Our classmates have different opinions on this topic.
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8．（23-24八年级下·广东汕头·期末）澳大利亚学生Sam最近又来到了北京。他去了王府井，发现这里发生了巨大的变化。请你以Sam的身份给父母寄一张明信片，用以下单词、短语介绍王府井发生的变化。提示词：happy, visit, take place, Wangfujing Street, the Olympics
Dear Mom and Dad,
I’m very happy to visit Beijing again.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Sam
9．（23-24八年级下·广东佛山·期末）请根据要求完成短文写作，并将作文写在答题卡对应题目的答题位置上。
假设你是佛山育才中学八年级学生李华，你们学校在今年暑假将有一个中文游学项目，邀请英国中学生来佛山学习中文，了解中国文化。请根据以下思维导图的提示写一篇文章，介绍这个游学项目。
作文要求：
1. 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息，使得文章连贯。
2. 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。
3. 语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。也不必抄写在答题卡上。
Come and join the Summer Chinese Program to learn Chinese in Yucai Middle School in Foshan! We can offer you great summer Chinese courses.
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Do not wait! You are sure to have a good time in the program!
10．（23-24八年级下·广东深圳·期末）假设你是阳光中学学生李华，你校将上周五举办了社团文化节，校报英语专栏Happy time向同学们征集报导该活动的稿件，请根据提示写一篇英文报道向专栏投稿。内容包括：
活动目的 丰富校园生活和校园文化
活动内容 ①Traditional Art Club 做剪纸、中国结
②Cartoon club 动漫人物绘画展
……
学生感受
要求：
1. 80词左右 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3. 可适当增加细节，以使语句通顺、条理清楚、意义连贯；
4. 卷面整洁、书写规范。
参考词汇：丰富 enrich v. 中国结 Chinese knot n. 展览 exhibition n.
Last Friday, a club festival was held in our school._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
11．（23-24八年级下·广东深圳·期末）假定你是某国际学校学生会主席李华，你们计划组织一次校园义卖活动，义卖所得用于帮助流浪动物。请你写一封邮件给校长Mr. White，请求他的许可与支持。
内容包括：1. 活动目的；
2. 活动时间和地点；
3. 活动内容：① 售卖手工艺品、食品等；
② ……（至少补充1点）
4. 请求校长的许可与支持。
写作要求：1. 不少于80词，邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 必须包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
3. 邮件中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
4. 条理清晰，行文连贯，书写规范。
提示词汇：义卖 charity sale；流浪动物homeless animal；手工艺品 handicraft
Dear Mr. White,
How is everything going I am Li Hua from the Students’ Union. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
12．（23-24八年级下·广东深圳·期末）生活和学习中离不开各种技能。假如你是学生李华，你校下周将开展主题为“A skill I like to learn”的英文征集比赛活动。请你根据以下提示，写一篇英文演讲稿。
1.想学习的技能：列出一项你想学习的技能名称；
2.打算如何学习：至少3点，如和谁学；
3.该技能的好处：至少2点。
要求：
1.80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数内；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3.可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯；
4.标点正确，书面整洁。
A skill I like to learn
Dear fellow students,
It is important for us to learn some skills.
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That’s all. Thank you!
13．（23-24八年级下·广东深圳·期末）上周，你校英文报开展了一档“宠物之星(Super Pet)”的英文栏目。下图是你校学生关于“The Super Pet in My Heart”的投票结果。假如你是英文报的通讯员李华，请你根据以下提示，用英文写一篇文稿。
要点：1.简要说明投票结果；
2.谈谈你心中的宠物之星并给出理由(至少三点理由)；
3.呼吁大家文明养宠物。
参考词汇：vote for 投票
注意事项：1.必须包括提示内容，请补充要点，可适当发挥；
2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3.请勿在文中使用真实姓名和校名；
4.不少于80词。 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)
提示词：
Last week, our school did a survey about “The Super Pet in My Heart”.
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14．（23-24八年级下·广东深圳·期末）5月 27 日，第二十届深圳文博会（ICIF）顺利闭幕。假如你是深圳某中学的学生，请根据以下提示用英文写一则简讯向Shenzhen News投稿。
1. 展会时间、地点； 2. 展会活动： （1）品尝中国各地的传统美食。 （2）欣赏不同国家的艺术作品，购买文创产品。 （3）体验戴VR眼镜玩游戏。 3. 你的感想（至少两点）。
要求：
1. 80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3. 可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯；
4. 标点正确，书面整洁。
参考词汇：cultural products 文化产品；
The 20th China International Cultural Industries Fair was successfully held in Shenzhen. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
15．（23-24八年级下·广东广州·期末）假如你是李华，你去参观了有关智能厨房的科技展。请根据以下内容写一封e-mail告诉你的英国朋友Tom你的见闻及想法。
Smart Kitchen
What does it have (至少写出4点， 可选择以下内容或自由发挥) ·powered by clean energy ·smart fridge (be connected to, shop) ·smart screen (by voice, play music, show menus…) ·smart cooker (a balanced diet) ·safety system (keep...safe) ·smart housekeeper (control)
Your opinions: ...(请至少写2 点).
注意事项：
1.词数：80—100词左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
3.表格中的英文提示可作参考。
Tom,
I learned a lot about smart kitchens at a tech exhibition.
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What do you think Would you like to have a smart kitchen, or do you prefer the traditional way of cooking
Yours,
Li Hua
16．（23-24八年级下·广东深圳·期末）第20届深圳文博会向人们展示了各种中国传统民间艺术。假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter浏览到相关报道，他非常感兴趣。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 介绍一项中国传统民间艺术；
2. 描述它的制作过程或表演过程以及文化意义；
3. 邀请Peter到中国体验。注意：1．词数80左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)；
2．要点齐全，可适当发挥；
3．不得出现真实姓名和校名；
4．条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。参考词汇：手工艺品handicraft；演出performance
Dear Peter,
Knowing that you are interested in traditional Chinese folk arts, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes,
Li Hua
17．（23-24八年级下·广东惠州·期末）假如你是李明，三天后将要在班级的英语课上进行分享，题目是“My hobby”。请根据以下内容提示用英文写一篇短文。
注意：
（1）根据思维导图的内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。
（2）不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和考生的真实姓名。
（3）语句连贯，词数80左右。作文的标题、开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数，也不必抄写在答题卡上。
My Hobby
Hello, everyone. It’s my honor to share something about my hobby with you. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all for my sharing. Thank you for listening.
18．（23-24八年级下·广东深圳·期末）假定你是李华，为庆祝中华人民共和国成立75周年，你校将举办主题为“展开时光画卷，共绘盛世华章”的双语演讲比赛，请你用英语写一篇演讲稿。内容包括：
1. 回顾过去 (①交通； ②……) ；
2.描述现在 (同上)；
3.展望未来。
注意：
1. 词数为80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.文章不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4.演讲稿的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear teachers and fellow students,
Good morning. I am honored to deliver a speech on the topic of “The Great Development of Our Motherland”. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
19．（23-24八年级下·广东广州·期末）你校正在举办以题为“Schools of the future”的英语征文比赛，请你根据以下的内容提示，用英语写一篇短文参加比赛。
注意：
1.可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息；
2.词数80左右 (短文的开头已给出，不计入词数)；
3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Schools of the future
In the future, schools will look very different.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
20．（23-24八年级下·广东深圳·期末）假定你是李华，你校本届英语节活动正在举办主题为“畅想未来生活”的短视频作品征集活动。请根据下面的提示，为你的视频配一段英文解说词。
畅想未来生活
1. 总述 更智能， 更便利。
2. 具体描述 学习方式， 请举例说明。
日常出行， 请举例说明。
3. 感想 ……
要求：
1. 要点齐全，可以适当增加细节；
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；
3. 词数80左右 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)；
4. 条理清晰，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。
Welcome to my video about the future world. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
This is the the future world in my mind. Are you looking forward to it
21．（22-23八年级下·辽宁沈阳·期末）随着科技的发展，未来人们的生活将会发生很大的变化，校英文社团正开展以“My future life”为主题的征文活动，请根据以下提示写一篇英语短文投稿，内容包括要点：
（1）交通不再拥挤，因为人们拥有可以飞的车；
（2）越来越多的人去月球度假；
（3）越来越多的机器人为我们服务；
（4）为了未来的美好生活，你会做些什么准备。
要求：至少80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；文中不得出现真实学校和姓名；可适当增加细节。
My future life
With the development of science and technology, people’s lives _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
22．（22-23八年级下·广东河源·期末）请根据要求完成短文写作，并将作文写在答题卡对应题目的答题位置上。
10月4日是世界动物日，为了增强学生保护动物的意识，你校英语校报“Protect Animals”专栏开展征文活动。假如你是李华，请你给该专栏投稿，内容包括：
1. 介绍一种濒危动物以及这种动物濒临灭绝的原因；
2. 对如何保护这种动物提出两点建议。
作文要求：
1. 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现真实校名、地点和考生的真实姓名；
2. 语句连贯，词数80左右。
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23．（22-23八年级下·广东云浮·期末）假如你是阳光中学的学生李华，近日你校将举办一年一度的“校园美食节”活动。请你根据以下提示信息，给外教Peter写一封电子邮件，向他介绍美食节的安排，并邀请他参加本次活动。
写作要求：
（1）要点齐全，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Peter,
How’s it going
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Yours,
Li Hua
24．（22-23八年级下·广东梅州·期末）成长需要改变，变成更好的自己。“腹有诗书气自华，最是书香能致远”，请你以“Reading has really changed me”为题写一篇短文，描述阅读如何改变了你，内容包括：
1. 阅读改变了你；
2. 你有哪些改变；
3. 你是怎样看待这些改变的。
作文要求：
1. 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。
2. 语句连贯，词数80个左右。
Reading has really changed me
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25．（22-23八年级下·广东韶关·期末）为了鼓励学生能积极乐观地面对生活学习中的问题，学校的英语俱乐部正以“Be a good problem solver”主题开展征文活动，请你给该专栏投稿。内容包括：
1.讲述一个你在生活或学习中曾经遇到过的困难；
2.你是如何解决这个困难的 (至少两点)；
3.希望大家都能成为一个好的问题解决者。
作文要求：
1.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和考生的真实姓名。
2.语句连贯，词数80左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
Be a good problem solver
It’s common for us to have problems in our daily lives.
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参考答案
1．例文
Dear Tom,
I am Li Hua, a Junior 2 student. I am writing this letter to adopt Oscar. I am a helpful person, volunteering every week at the nursing home. I love animals and believe that having pets brings joy. Additionally, I have a responsible nature and always keep my promises. I have plenty of time to walk the dog daily and plan to create a comfortable space for Oscar at home. I am eager to provide him with a loving environment. I hope to have this opportunity.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，应注意不要遗漏题干中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，借用文章开头表达想收养Oscar的意图；
第二步，根据题干中的要点，描述自己的优势和养狗计划；
第三步，表达希望自己能够成功收养Oscar，并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①plenty of大量
②plan to do计划做某事
[高分句型]
①I love animals and believe that having pets brings joy.（宾语从句）
②Additionally, I have a responsible nature and always keep my promises.（and表并列）
2．例文
My Dream Classroom
Hello, everyone! Let me introduce my dream classroom to you.
It will be a large and bright room with large windows and plenty of natural light. The walls will be painted in calming colors like blue and green. What makes it “new” is the advanced technology it will have. There will be interactive whiteboards, tablets for each student, and virtual reality headsets for immersive learning experiences. Students will study in a more engaging and interactive way, using these tools to explore subjects in depth. I believe this dream classroom will make learning more enjoyable and effective for everyone.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般将来时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍你理想中教室的外观；
第二步，介绍教室中使其“新”的先进技术；
第三步，说明学生将如何利用这些技术进行学习；
第四步，表达你对理想教室的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①large and bright 宽敞明亮
②natural light 自然光
③interactive whiteboards 互动白板
④virtual reality headsets 虚拟现实头戴设备
⑤immersive learning experiences 沉浸式学习体验
[高分句型]
①I believe this dream classroom will make learning more enjoyable and effective for everyone. (省略that的宾语从句)
②Students will study in a more engaging and interactive way, using these tools to explore subjects in depth. (现在分词作状语)
3．参考例文:
Life in the future
With the rapid development of science and technology, life in the future will be better and better. I think that life in the future won’t be the same as it is today.
With the help of technology, building houses on the sea will be possible. As the population is growing quickly, people may move onto the sea to live in the future. People will build houses on the sea at that time. In their houses, they will take the elevator to the underwater world. They will travel between the land and sea by plane or boat. About the education, all students won’t have to go to school and they will take online classes at home. And they can read the e-books instead of the books made of paper. What’s more, we may travel by flying car.
I hope all of these can come true and our life will become better and better in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；
③提示：本文应该主要用第三人称来写，部分需用第一人称；表明观点时，要合理畅想；要从居住和教育等方面展开写。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头要表明写作内容和指向。总体表明未来生活会有所不同；
第二步，从居住和教育等方面具体来写；
第三步，总结和抒情。提及对未来美好生活的憧憬。
[亮点词汇]
①With the rapid development of在……的快速发展下
②better and better越来越好
③instead of代替，而不是
[高分句型]
①I think that life in the future won’t be the same as it is today.（that引导的宾语从句）
②As the population is growing quickly, people may move onto the sea to live in the future.（as引导的时间状语从句）
4．例文
Hi, everyone! I’m Li Hua. It’s my great pleasure to present the traditional culture of Yantian to you. Fish lantern dance has a history of over 300 years. This dance is performed at night and imitates the movements of fish.
One of its inheritors is Wu Guanqiu, who is over eighty years old and actively promotes the fish lantern dance both domestically and internationally.
I hope more of us will be interested in fish lantern dance and learn about it. We should also promote this dance worldwide, so that people all over the world can understand and enjoy it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇解说词，属于材料作文写作；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]第一步，总体介绍鱼灯舞的历史和表演特点；
第二步，介绍传承人物吴观球；
第三步，提出传承建议。
[亮点词汇]
①imitate 模拟
②actively promote 积极推广
[高分句型]
One of its inheritors is Wu Guanqiu, who is over eighty years old and actively promotes the fish lantern dance both domestically and internationally. (who引导的非限制性定语从句)
5．例文：
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen! Great changes have taken place in our life because of science and technology. In the past, the way we kept in touch with others was mainly through writing letters or meeting in person. Now, we can keep in touch by using WeChat, mobile phones or emails. We used to pay for things with cash. But now we shop online using Alipay, WeChat or Douyin. We used to go out and can only rely on bicycles or buses. We now have high-speed trains, airplanes. Many families already have private cars. Our life is getting better and more convenient. I hope we all have less working hours in the future and more free time to relax ourselves.
Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先表明科技使我们的生活发生了巨大的变化；
第二步，具体介绍这些变化；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①keep in touch with保持联系
②used to do sth.过去常常做某事
③take place发生
[高分句型]
①I hope we all have less working hours in the future and more free time to relax ourselves.(省略that的宾语从句)
6． 例文
My favourite English homework for this summer holiday is doing a role play. It can help improve my language skills and make me confident.
When I was in Grade 7, my teacher asked us to act out the dialogue in the textbook in a group of six. It was a big challenge. Firstly, I read the text with group members and we shared our understanding about it. Then, we chose our roles and practised a lot. My spoken English improved after practising. In the end, we performed well and won praise.
Thanks to the homework like this, I’m interested in acting and feel brave enough, and I am able to speak in front of the public well. I like role-playing.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据图示中的内容讲述自己最喜欢的英语作业是什么，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，介绍自己最喜欢的英语作业是什么；
第二步，讲述自己做这项英语作业的事例；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①ask sb. to do sth.要求某人做某事
②in the end最后
③Thanks to幸亏了
[高分句型]
① When I was in Grade 7, my teacher asked us to act out the dialogue in the textbook in a group of six.(when引导的时间状语从句)
②Thanks to the homework like this, I’m interested in acting and feel brave enough, and I am able to speak in front of the public well.(and连接的并列句)
7．例文
Last week, our class held a heated debate on whether to protect the traditional skill of cormorant fishing. Our classmates have different opinions on this topic.
Some supporters argue that cormorant fishing is a part of our cultural heritage. If we don’t protect it, we will lose a piece of our history. In addition, cormorant fishing, with its unique charm, can attract lots of tourists, thereby promoting the development of the local economy.
On the other hand, opponents worry about the living condition of the birds, suggesting that it may be cruel to use them in this way. Besides, they think that cormorant fishing is outdated. It is less efficient than modern fishing.
In my opinion, conserving the traditions and developing modern technology are both important. Therefore, we must find a way to protect our cultural heritage while considering the welfare of animals and modern efficiency.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文属于材料作文写作；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接短文开头，引出话题；
第二步，陈述支持者和反对者的观点，可列举具体的事例；
第三步，联系实际，表达自己的看法并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①promote the development of sth促进某事物的发展
②on the other hand另一方面
③find a way to do sth找到做某事的方法
[高分句型]
①In addition, cormorant fishing, with its unique charm, can attract lots of tourists, thereby promoting the development of the local economy.（现在分词作结果状语）
②Therefore, we must find a way to protect our cultural heritage while considering the welfare of animals and modern efficiency.（while引导的时间状语从句）
8．例文
Dear Mom and Dad,
I’m very happy to visit Beijing again. Great changes have taken place in Beijing. Today I went to Wangfujing Street early in the morning and I had a good time. Now, there are a lot of new buildings, modern shops and large markets on it. Many beautiful flowers are put on the street. People in Beijing work hard and they have succeeded in hosting the 29th Olympic Games. I hope Beijing will be more beautiful in the future.
Yours,
Sam
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；
③提示：要求根据提示信息介绍王府井发生的变化，可适当发挥，注意行文连贯，表述清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题，表达北京发生了很大变化；
第二步，具体介绍发生的变化；
第三步，表达自己的希望。
[亮点词汇]
①take place发生
②have a good time玩得开心
③work hard努力工作
[高分句型]
①Now, there are a lot of new buildings, modern shops and large markets on it. (there be句型)
②I hope Beijing will be more beautiful in the future. (宾语从句)
9．参考例文：
Come and join the Summer Chinese Program to learn Chinese in Yucai Middle School in Foshan! We can offer you great summer Chinese courses.
This activity will last for 15 days from August 1st to 15th by some excellent teachers of our school. We will show some traditional Chinese culture, such as paper-cut, Chinese knot, traditional food and so on. We will also provide some practical activities for students to better understand Chinese culture. We will also visit museums, zoos and so on. All students will stay with a Chinese family to better experience and understand Chinese culture. I’m sure you’ll have a good time.
Do not wait! You are sure to have a good time in the program!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据思维导图所给的提示完成写作，可适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简单介绍活动的名称及地点；
第二步，详细介绍课程的内容及课后活动和居住地；
第三步，书写结语，呼吁来参加这项活动。
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②so on等等
[高分句型]
I’m sure you’ll have a good time.（宾语从句）
10．例文
Last Friday, a club festival was held in our school, aiming to enrich campus culture and our school life. The event included a variety of club activities.
Members of the traditional art club made paper-cuttings and Chinese knots. They also taught interested students how to do it. Besides, the Cartoon Club brought us fun with their cartoon character drawing exhibition. Their works attracted many students. In addition, the robot club organized a robot competition, inviting competitors to show their skills and creativity in designing robots that could perform specific tasks.
Overall, the club festival was a great success. It not only provided a stage for students to show their talents but also allowed them to make friends with those who shared the same interest.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文应使用“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点应注意题干给出的“介绍上周五举办的社团文化节以及自己的感受”并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍上周五学校举办了社团文化节；
第二步，根据题干表格中的要点，详细描述活动内容；
第三步，评价此次活动。
[亮点词汇]
①in addition此外
②a great success巨大成功
[高分句型]
①In addition, the robot club organized a robot competition, inviting competitors to show their skills and creativity in designing robots that could perform specific tasks.（定语从句）
②It not only provided a stage for students to show their talents but also allowed them to make friends with those who shared the same interest.（not only…but also，定语从句）
11．Possible version:
Dear Mr. White.
How is everything going I’m Li Hua from Students’ Union. I’m writing to ask if we can have a charity sale to help homeless animals. Here I will introduce our plan to you.
The sale will take place in the school playground this Friday afternoon. We are going to sell handicrafts, tasty snacks, as well as books donated by the students and the teachers. In addition, there will be interesting games to help students learn more about homeless animals.
This sale is not only about raising money, but also a chance to deepen our understanding of helping the animal friends. We think it significant and meaningful.
We would really appreciate your support, and we promise to make sure everything is well organized.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely.
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，为电子邮件。
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中校园义卖活动的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“活动的目的、活动的时间和地点、活动内容等”几个方面重点介绍校园义卖活动的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语，表达“期望收到你的回复”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①take place举行；
②in addition此外；
③make sure确保；
④look forward to期望。
[高分句型]
①In addition, there will be interesting games to help students learn more about homeless animals. (“there be”句型的一般将来时)
②This sale is not only about raising money, but also a chance to deepen our understanding of helping the animal friends. (动词不定式作定语)
12．例文
A skill I like to learn
Dear fellow students,
It is important for us to learn some skills. Among the skills I would like to pick up playing badminton.
To achieve this goal, I have made some plans. Firstly, I plan to take weekly lessons from an experienced coach. Then, I will practice playing badminton with my friends after school so that I can improve it. Besides, joining the badminton club is also a great way to learn it.
As playing badminton is a kind of popular sport, I think I can benefit a lot from it. For example, it will help me build up my body and keep fit. More importantly, I can relax myself and have a happy mood. I hope each of us can learn some useful skills.
That’s all. Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，想学习的技能；
第二步，具体介绍打算如何学习；
第三步，表达学习该技能的好处。
[亮点词汇]
①pick up学会
②achieve this goal实现目标
③build up建立
④keep fit保持健康
[高分句型]
①To achieve this goal, I have made some plans.（不定式表目的）
②Then, I will practice playing badminton with my friends after school so that I can improve it.（so that引导目的状语从句）
13．(One possible version)
Recently, our school did a survey about “The Super Pet in My Heart”.
The result shows that dogs are the winners, accounting for 38% of the total. Cats follow closely behind with 29% of the votes. Parrots received 20% of the votes, and 13% of students vote for other pets.
Undoubtedly, I would like to choose dog as my favourite pet. First, dogs are really cute. It’s nice to hold them in our arms. Next, we can learn responsibility from keeping dogs. This helps us become more responsible. What’s more, dogs are our loyal friends and bring joy to our lives for many years. They deserve the title of the “Super Pet.”
However, as pet owners, we must be responsible and kind. Let us keep our pets with love and respect to ensure them a happy and healthy life.
【详解】【总体分析】
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”，首先简要说明投票结果；然后主要写自己心中的宠物并给出至少三点理由，最后呼吁大家文明养宠物。注意语句连贯，条理清楚，突出重点。
【写作步骤】
第一步，首先介绍背景，学校英文报开展了一档“宠物之星”的英文栏目。然后简明介绍投票的结果，狗占总数的38%。猫紧随其后，获得了29%的投票。鹦鹉收到了20%的投票，而13%的学生投给了其他宠物。
第二步，具体阐述自己心中的宠物并给出至少三点理由。
第三步，呼吁大家文明养宠物，用爱和尊重来养育我们的宠物。
【亮点词汇】
①account for占比
②vote for投票支持
③deserve值得
【高分句型】
①The result shows that dogs are the winners, counting for 38% of the total.（that引导的宾语从句）
②It’s nice to hold them in our arms.（It作形式主语）
14．例文
The 20th China International Cultural Industries Fair was successfully held in Shenzhen. It was held at the Shenzhen World Exhibition & Convention Center from May 23rd to 27th.
I went to visit at 8 a.m. on May 27. It was really interesting. Firstly, I tasted traditional Chinese cuisine from all over the country. Then, I appreciated the works of art in the foreign exhibition area and had a deeper understanding of the differences between Chinese and the Western cultures. And I also bought some cultural products. Last but not least, I experienced playing games while wearing VR glasses.
Through this visit, I learned a lot of knowledge outside the book. It not only enriches my cultural knowledge, but also broadens my vision.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先介绍展会的时间和地点；
第二步，具体介绍在展会的活动，例如品尝中国各地的传统美食；欣赏不同国家的艺术作品，购买文创产品；体验戴VR眼镜玩游戏等；
第三步，书写结束语，表达自己的感想。
[亮点词汇]
①traditional Chinese cuisine 中国传统美食
②appreciated 欣赏
③works of art 艺术品
④had a deeper understanding of 对……有更深的理解
⑤experienced 体验
⑥enriches my cultural knowledge 丰富了我的文化知识
⑦broadens my vision 拓宽了我的视野
[高分句型]
It not only enriches my cultural knowledge, but also broadens my vision.（not only...but also...连接两个句子）
15．例文
Tom,
I learned a lot about smart kitchens at a tech exhibition.
The entire kitchen is powered by clean energy. There are many smart appliances in the kitchen. The smart fridge can be connected to wireless networks and used for shopping. In addition, the smart screen in the refrigerator has many functions, such as playing music and displaying menus by voice. There are also lots of cookers in the kitchen to make sure we have a balanced diet. The whole kitchen security system is very good, and it can keep us safe. It’s controlled by an intelligent butler. I really hope that I can have such a smart kitchen in the future, and I think it is very convenient and cool.
What do you think Would you like to have a smart kitchen, or do you prefer the traditional way of cooking
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包括文章给出的内容要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第三人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头文章已给，介绍自己获得关于智能厨房的知识；
第二步，具体阐述智能厨房里面有哪些东西并说出自己的看法；
第三步，结尾文章已给出，询问对方的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①be connected to与……有关联
②In addition此外
③have a balanced diet均衡饮食
[高分句型]
①The entire kitchen is powered by clean energy.（被动语态）
②I really hope that I can have such a smart kitchen in the future, and I think it is very convenient and cool.（宾语从句）
16．例文：
Dear Peter,
Knowing that you are interested in traditional Chinese folk arts, I’d like to tell you something about Chinese paper cutting.
Chinese paper cutting has a long history of over 1,500 years. Paper cuttings can be seen in different parts of China. Many people, no matter the young or the old, are fond of them. People in the northern part of China do well in paper cutting. They cut paper into different shapes, like animals, flowers and so on. They are put on doors and windows during the Spring Festival and when people celebrate something happily. They mean welcoming good fortune.
Hope you’ll come here and enjoy our traditional beauty yourself one day.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的每一项提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作目的是介绍一项中国传统民间艺术；
第二步，描述它的制作过程或表演过程以及文化意义；
第三步，邀请Peter到中国体验。
[亮点词汇]
①be fond of喜爱
②put on张贴
③do well in擅长
[高分句型]
① They are put on doors and windows during the Spring Festival and when people celebrate something happily. (when引导的时间状语从句)
17．Possible answer:
Hello, everyone. It’s my honor to share something about my hobby with you. As we all know, everyone has their own hobbies. So do I. My hobby is reading books and I’ve read books since I was a second-grade student.
My parents are very pleased and satisfied to know that I have a hobby of reading books. Whenever I ask them to buy books for me, they always take me to the bookshops to pay for all the books I choose. They think reading books is very helpful for my growth and studying. Thanks to the support from my parents, I have kept this hobby for six years. I really enjoy reading all kinds of books and I get know more and more about the world through the books.
Reading books is more than a hobby, so I’ll keep this hobby all my life.
That’s all for my sharing. Thank you for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：根据思维导图中的内容介绍自己的爱好，可适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，表示自己的爱好是阅读；
第二步，根据思维导图中的内容详细介绍自己的阅读爱好；
第三步，表达感谢。
[亮点词汇]
①As we all know众所周知
②pay for支付
③Thanks to幸亏
④all kinds of各种各样
[高分句型]
①My hobby is reading books and I’ve read books since I was a second-grade student. (并列句；时间状语从句)
②Whenever I ask them to buy books for me, they always take me to the bookshops to pay for all the books I choose. (定语从句)
18．例文
Dear teachers and fellow students,
Good morning. I am honored to deliver a speech on the topic of “The Great Development of Our Motherland”.
In ancient China, transportation relied heavily on the uses of horses and carriages which were very inconvenient. In recent decades, China has witnessed a transportation revolution with the rapid expansion of its road and air networks. The construction of modern highways and high-speed railways has significantly reduced travel time and improved connectivity between cities. In the long history of the past, people communicated with people who were far from them only by letters. Now a great number of people communicate with others on the Internet. In short, there are various communication methods in modern world, which bring great convenience to people.
Looking into the future of China, I see a country that is rapidly developing and moderning.
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍演讲主题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，介绍了过去和现在祖国的一些变化；
第三步，书写结语，展望未来。
[亮点词汇]
①rely on依赖
②a great number of大量
③in short总之
[高分句型]
①In the long history of the past, people communicated with people who were far from them only by letters. (who引导的定语从句)
②In short, there are various communication methods in modern world, which bring great convenience to people. (there be句型)
19．例文：
Schools of the future
In the future, schools will look very different. They will be able to move to different places, such as a place with a beautiful environment or where courses are needed.
The robots will take the place of teachers. They will teach us different lessons and help us with our homework. They will also do other things in schools. In the future school, we will have many new lessons, such as AI lessons. There will be many kinds of clubs in the future school. There will be many high-technology products. For example, every student will have a computer. Students can have classes at any part of the school.
In a word, I believe that the future schools will help students to fully develop themselves.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先介绍未来学校和现在的学校有何不同；
第二步，具体介绍学校的老师、课程、及活动等；
第三步，书写结束语，表达对未来学校的憧憬。
[亮点词汇]
①be able to 能够
②take the place of 代替
③many kinds of 许多种类的
④high-technology products 高科技产品
⑤for example 例如
⑥fully develop 充分发展
[高分句型]
①They will be able to move to different places, such as a place with a beautiful environment or where courses are needed.（where引导的定语从句）
②In a word, I believe that the future schools will help students to fully develop themselves.（that引导的宾语从句）
20．例文
Welcome to my video about the future world. With the development of science and technology, our lives will be smarter and more convenient.
Firstly, future learning will be very different. With VR glasses, students will be able to do scientific experiments in a more interactive and inspiring way. Robot teachers will always be there to answer questions and offer help.
Secondly, when we want to go out, a new type of hydrogen car will be a great choice. It will not only drive at a high speed, but also be environmentally friendly, reducing pollution and saving energy.
Future life will be full of possibilities. With smarter learning tools and eco-friendly transportation, we will lead much more comfortable and easier lives.
This is the future world in my mind. Are you looking forward to it
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文应使用“一般将来时”为主；
③提示：写作要点应注意题干给出的“为‘畅想未来生活’的视频进行英文解说”并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍解说的主题内容是什么；
第二步，根据题干表格提示，具体描述未来生活的几个方面，并举例说明；
第三步，给出自己的感想，并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①be able to do能够做某事
②go out外出
[高分句型]
①Secondly, when we want to go out, a new type of hydrogen car will be a great choice.（when引导时间状语从句）
②It will not only drive at a high speed, but also be environmentally friendly, reducing pollution and saving energy.（not only…but also）
21．例文
My future life
With the development of science and technology, people’s lives in the future will be quite different. The environment will be nicer. The trees will be greener and rivers will be clearer.
There will be no more traffic jams because people will have cars that can fly. More and more people are going to the moon for holidays. More and more robots will serve us, for example, they can help us do dangerous work and do housework. The clothes will change their colors and styles according to the weather and our moods. We’ll have easier and more convenient lives in the future.
For a better life in the future, I will study harder. I will also actively exercise, so that I can have a more healthy body.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：以“一般将来时”为主；
③提示：内容要点已给出，考生应按要求进行写作，不可遗漏任何信息提示，可适当添加细节，完善作文内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接已给出的开头，简述未来的生活及环境；
第二步，按照内容要点，一一阐述未来的变化；
第三步，讲述为了未来的美好生活，自己将会做的准备。
[亮点词汇]
① more an more 越来越多
② for example 例如
③ according to 根据
[高分句型]
① There will be no more traffic jams because people will have cars that can fly. (because引导原因状语从句，that引导定语从句)
② I will also actively exercise, so that I can have a more healthy body. (so that引导目的状语从句)
22．例文
Animals are dying out. It has something to do with humans’ behaviors. Pandas are cute and lovely. As far as I know, they mainly eat bamboo. But now they are in danger as humans cut down the forests. Also, pandas do not have many babies. The baby pandas often die of illnesses.
It’s important to protect pandas. First, humans should plant more trees and protect pandas’ living area. Second, the government should try its best to help save pandas. I hope that in the future there will be a lot more pandas.
Let’s make a contribution to the protection of animals from now on!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：要点提示已经给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，并适当补充发挥，注意语句的通顺，使用正确的词汇和句型，使得行文连贯有逻辑。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍一种濒危动物以及濒临灭绝的原因；
第二步，阐述如何保护这种动物，提出建议；
第三步，书写结语，建议大家为保护动物做出贡献。
[亮点词汇]
①die of死于
②try one’s best尽某人最大努力
③make a contribution做出贡献
[高分句型]
①But now they are in danger as humans cut down the forests. (as引导的原因状语从句)
②It’s important to protect pandas. (it作形式主语，动词不定式作真正主语)
③I hope that in the future there will be a lot more pandas. (宾语从句)
23．例文：
Dear Peter,
How’s it going Our school will hold a “Campus Food Festival” activity. I’d like to invite you to this activity. It will be held in the school playground of our school from 9:30 a.m. to 6 p.m. next Friday. During the activity, we will invite a famous cook to teach us to make food. Then we will make food by ourselves. We can also enjoy different kinds of delicious food. I’m sure it’ll be fun.
I am looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件。
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中你校美食节的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“给外教Peter写一封电子邮件，向他介绍美食节的安排，并邀请他参加本次活动。”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“时间、地点、活动等”几个方面重点介绍你校美食节的具体情况。
第三步，书写结语，表达“我期待着你的到来”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①would like to do sth想要做某事
②from…to…从……到……
③invite sb to do sth邀请某人做某事
④by oneself独自地
[高分句型]
①I’d like to invite you to this activity. (动词不定式作宾语)
②I am looking forward to your coming. (动名词作宾语)
24．参考例文
Reading has really changed me
I love reading and it has really changed me. I thought reading was meaningless when I was little. I didn’t like reading until my father bought me a book called One Hundred Thousand Whys. I read it from the first page to the last. It showed me that reading could be enjoyable. Since then I have had the habit of reading.
This change has meant a lot to me. For one thing, reading has become a very important part of my life, and for another, every book I read teaches me something new. So I will keep on reading.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”和“现在完成时”为主；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，陈述阅读改变了自己这一事实；
第二步，介绍自己的变化；
第三步，介绍自己是怎样看待这些改变的。
[亮点词汇]
①meaningless无意义的
②not…until…直到……才……
③enjoyable愉快的
④habit习惯
⑤keep on继续下去
[高分句型]
I thought reading was meaningless when I was little.(省略that的宾语从句；when引导时间状语从句)
25．例文
Be a good problem solver
It’s common for us to have problems in our daily lives. One year ago, I always got nervous before tests. I studied hard, but when the tests started, I forgot everything. I didn’t know what to do.
I talked to my teacher, Ms Li. She encouraged me to trust myself. She also told me to pay attention to the answers and not to think about my grades. I tried Ms Li’s advice and now I become less and less nervous before tests. At the same time, I also study harder.
From this, I learned that believing in ourselves is important. I really want to say thanks to Ms Li. I hope teenagers will be positive and optimistic about life and study.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态：主要采用“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章围绕个人问题解决过程展开，涉及问题描述、求解过程、建议采纳后的改变、个人感悟及感谢，考生应关注问题解决方法的实际应用及个人成长的表达。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简述面临的问题；
第二步，介绍你是如何解决这个困难的；
第三步，总结感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①get nervous变得紧张
②trust oneself相信自己
③pay attention to注意
④become less and less nervous变得越来越不紧张
⑤believe in oneself相信自己
[高分句型]
①I studied hard, but when the tests started, I forgot everything. (but连接并列句)
②She encouraged me to trust myself, which helped me a lot. (which引导非限制性定语从句)
③At the same time, I also study harder, showing my determination to overcome difficulties. (现在分词作状语)
④From this, I learned that believing in ourselves is important. (that引导的宾语从句)