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Unit 10 I’ve had this bike for three years.
人教新目标版 八年级下
Section B3a-Selfcheck
写作优质公开课课件
Learning objectives
1.熟练掌握有关现在完成时的用法，并学会运用它来描述自己童年时喜爱的物品。
2.学会借助3a的写作提纲梳理写作框架，运用本单元含有写作完成时的核心句式，模仿语篇描述自己童年时喜爱的物品。
3.拓展：写一篇关于家乡近年来的发展和变化的文章。
4.引导学生了解周围的事物，学会感恩，珍惜已经拥有的物品。
childhood
hometown
Warming-up
How were your childhood memories Do you still have your favorite thing from childhood
Brainstorm
A
model plane
A model
car
books
dress
shoes
Soft
toys
Look at the picture and answer the questions.
How long have you had this ______
I've had it for/since ____________.
Who gave it to you
.
This is my favorite ...
I have had it for / since ...
... gave it to me when I was ...
Talk about these things.
Think about your favorite thing from childhood which you still have. For example, it can be a toy or a book. Then take notes using the questions.
3a
1. How long have you had it
2. How did you get it Did someone give it to you Who
3. Why do you like it so much Why is it special
4. Can you say anything more about it
1. How long have you had it
I have had it since I was a child.
2. How did you get it Did someone give it to you Who
My grandmother gave it to me on my fourth birthday.
3. Why do you like it so much Why is it special
Because I selpt next to it every night and I played with it almost every week until I was about seven.
4. Can you say anything more about it
The toy bear has given me many memories about my sweet childhood.
Sample
3b
In the first paragraph, introduce your favorite thing. My favorite thing from childhood is _______. I’ve had it for / since ______. ______ gave it to me.
In the second paragraph, talk about why it is special. I like ______ so much because ______. It’s special to me because _______. I think ______.
In the third paragraph, write about a story or memories. ______ has given me many memories. I remember when ______.
Write three paragraphs about your favorite thing.
Use your notes in 3a to help you.
Writing Practice
My favorite thing from childhood is__________
_____. I’ve had it for / since__________________.
__________________gave it to me.
Para. 1
I was five years old
my teddy
My grandmother
bear
Tense:
现在完成时
一般过去时
一般现在时
Writing Practice
Para. 2
I like ____________ so much because_____________.
It’s special to me because_________________________.
I think_______________________________________ _________________.
Reasons:
About the people who gave it to you.
About the thing itself. (eg: meaningful, fun… )
About the story behind you and the thing.
the teddy bear
it’s lovely
my grandmother made it for me
I will keep it forever. Because it reminds me
of my grandmother
Writing Practice
Para.3
___________has given me many memories.
I remember when __________________
_______________________________
_______________________________
The teddy bear
I was young and I was scared at night because I didn’t like the darkness, I held my teddy bear to feel safe.
When I was/ did…
From then on…
One day, …
Although…
learned to…
played with…
encouraged me…
made me understand that…
Useful expressions
我有一个快乐的童年。随着时间的流逝，我忘记了很多事情，但有一样东西我仍然很喜欢。
I had a very happy childhood. As time goes by, I forget many things but there is one thing that I still like so much.
每个人都有一个甜蜜快乐的童年。在那段时间里一定有你最喜欢的东西。我从小最喜欢的东西是玩具熊。
Everyone has a sweet and happy childhood. There must be something you like best during that time. My favorite thing from childhood is a toy bear.
我小时候最喜欢的东西是什么？我一听到这个问题，一个玩具熊就出现在我的脑海里。
What is my favorite thing from childhood As soon as I heard the question, a toy bear came to my mind.
回顾我的童年，我认为玩具熊猫毫无疑问是我最喜欢的东西。
Looking back at my childhood, I think the toy panda is my favorite thing without doubt.
Useful expressions
它就像我童年生活中的朋友。It was just like my friend in my childhood life.
它使我想起了我和奶奶在一起的快乐时光。
It reminds me of the happy time with my grandmother.
它们对我来说很特别，因为它们代表了我祖母对我的爱。我想我会永远保留它们。
They are special to me because they stand for my grandmother’s love for me. I think I will keep them forever.
这个笔记本是有意义的，不仅因为它帮助我的学习，而且因为它承载了我们的友谊。
The notebook is meaningful not only because it helps me with my study but also because it carries our friendship.
My favorite thing from childhood is a doll. I’ve had it since I was a child. My mother gave it to me.
I like the doll so much because it’s very lovely and beautiful. It’s special to me because I got it on my sixth birthday. I think it reminds me of the care and love from my mother.
The doll has given me many memories. I remember when I was a kid,I spent lots of time dressing the doll beautifully.Also,I always slept next to it especially when my mother was not at home.All in all,it’s so important that I regard it as one of
my best friends.
My Favorite Thing
Introduce your favorite thing.
Talk about why it is special.
Share your memories about it
linking words
Sample
My favorite thing from childhood is a book called Robinson Crusoe. I've had it for nearly 5 years. My friend Amy gave
it to me on my tenth birthday.
I like the book so much because the story is so wonderful and amazing.It's special to me because this is a birthday gift from my best friend.Although I have read it many times,I still want to read it
again .Every classic is worth reading over and over again.
The book has given me many good memories. I remember when I met some difficulties and wanted to give up,I always thought of Robinson’s spirits.After that,I tried my best to solve every problem.
This book has taught me how to be a brave person in the face of difficulties.
My Favorite Thing
Sample
项目 标准 自我评价 同伴评价 教师评价
结构 （1-3分） 段落合理(3段)，结构完整
衔接自然
内容 （6-7分） 要点：1.总介绍（最喜欢的东西；拥有时长，谁给你的)； 2.喜欢它的原因； 3.你和它之间的故事和回忆
语言 （3-4分） 时态：现在完成时，一般现在时，一般过去时等
句法正确，语言优美,内容丰富
卷面 （1分） 书写工整
校英语报此次征文的主题是“家乡的变化”，请你根据下面的提示，介绍你家乡的变化来投稿。提示：
1.What did your hometown look like in the past years
2.What does your hometown look like now
3.What do you think of these changes
要求：1.语句通顺，符合逻辑，可适当发挥；
2．80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My hometown has changed a lot in recent years.
话题作文二
审人称
审时态
审体裁
写作前：三审
How to write
1.描述各方面家乡的过去（建筑物人等）
the change of hometown
家乡的变化
总写：
My hometown has changed a lot in recent years.
分写：
It used to be a/an...place.
它过去是个…地方。
2.描述家乡的现在
Now things have changed a lot. 现在事情发生了很大变化。
展望家乡的未来
总写：
I hope my hometown will be …
Outline
One possible version
My hometown has changed a lot in recent years.
In the past, there weren't so many tall buildings in the city, and the buildings were old. But now, many new and tall buildings have been built. In my memory, there was only one small park in the city. Now I can find big and beautiful parks in different areas of the city. The roads were dirty and narrow in the past, but now they have become clean and wide.
I think such developments are good, and I hope the future of my hometown will be better and better.
Complete the sentences using for or since.
Self Check
1. I haven't been to a museum __________________________
_______________.
2. I haven't written a letter ______________________.
3. I haven't ridden a bike ____________.
4. I haven't seen a movie __________.
5. I haven't played computer games ___________.
for two years / since two years
since I was ten years ago
for five years
since 2010
for one year
ago / since 2020
1
Complete the conversation.
2
A: Hey Eric, _____ you enjoyed your time in Beijing so far
B: Yes, it ____ been great! Everyone is so friendly.
A: How long _____ you been in China now
B: Oh, I __________ here ___ about two years now.
A: Wow, that means you haven't _____ back to the US for two years.
B: No, I ____ been back twice _____ moving to China. _____ you been to the US before, Li Juan
A: Yes, I went there once when I _____ 10 years old, but I _____ not been back _____ then.
have
has
have
have been
for
been
have
after
Have
was
have
since
Complete the conversation.
2
Yes, it has been great! Everyone is so friendly.
Hey Eric, have you enjoyed your time in Beijing so far
Oh, I have been here for about two years now.
How long have you been in China now
No, I have been back twice after moving to China. Have you been to the US before, Li Juan
Wow, that means you haven’t been back to the US for two years.
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Childhood is the most beautiful of all life’s seasons.
Level B :Remember the words, phrases and sentences in this unit.
Level A:Write a short passage about your favorite thing, use the useful sentences in 3b.
Homework
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