训练36话题作文-书面表达(原卷版+解析版)-2025学年初中英语七年级下册期末满分训练(全国通用)

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2025学年初中英语七年级下册期末满分训练(全国通用)
训练36话题作文
(一)
青少年活动中心向全体中学生发出一个 “积极生活,优秀中学生的健康密码”为题的征文活动。请根据以下要点,谈谈你的健康密码。
要求:
1. 字数80字左右,开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
2. 必须包含以上所有要点,可以适当发挥。
3. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
Hello, everyone! I want to share my secrets (秘密) of healthy life.
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(二)
五一国际劳动节即将到来。请以“My May Day Vacation Plan”为题,写一篇100词左右的英语短文,谈谈你在五一假期关于读书、锻炼身体、旅游、帮父母做家务等方面的计划。
写作要求:
1.写作内容要包含上方的要点提示,可以适当发挥;
2.文中不要出现真实姓名和校名;
My May Day Vacation Plan
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(三)
生活中,总有某些事物令人难以忘怀:也许是一首触动心灵的音乐,一次与同伴的有效沟通,或是帮助他人、接受他人帮助的温暖瞬间。请以“ ________ Impressed Me Most”为题, 写一篇英语短文。要求如下:
1. 具体描述让你印象深刻的事物或事件,并说明原因;
2. 补全标题(参考示例: The Song “…” / That Match/ Helping others Impressed Me Most等),字数不少于60字。
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(四)
良好的生活习惯对于青少年的健康成长至关重要。某英语杂志社以“My Healthy Life”为题向中学生开展征文活动。请你根据以下提示,用英语写一篇短文投稿。
My Healthy Life Eating habits
Sports
...
要求:
1.根据所给题目,写一篇短文,词数不少于80;
2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁;
3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计;
4.请将短文写在答题卡上,写在本试题卷上无效。
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(五)
No rules, No order没有规则,一切都无从谈起,为了培养同学们的规则意识,使大家健康成长,每个学校都会有一些校规。请你以“My School Rules”为题,写一篇短文介绍你们学校的规章制度。
要求:
1.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁,词数不少于60个。
2.文中不得使用真实姓名和校名,如需使用人名,请用Mike,Mary等名字,校名统一使用Kunming Middle School。
3.书面表达必须写在答题卡上,如在本卷上作答,一律不得分。
4.抄袭试卷中相关材料的,抄袭部分不给分。
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(六)
暑假,你代表广州中学生参加AFS国际文化交流组织项目(AFS intercultural Programs),即将到澳大利亚开展为期一个月的文化交流。请根据以下内容,向接待你的澳大利亚家庭的15岁小孩Jack介绍广州的风土人情,展示广州的文化特色。
参考词汇:长隆野生动物园Chimelong Safari Park, 省Province
写作要求:
1.词数80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2.书写要整洁、规范;
3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
Guangzhou, my hometown
Jack, I would like to tell you something about my hometown. I come from
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(七)
体育运动有益身心健康,同学们不要忘记锻炼身体哦。请根据下面的提示内容以“My favourite sport”为题,写一篇英语短文,介绍你最喜欢的一项运动。
要求:
1. 包括表格中的提示内容,可适当发挥;
2. 条理清楚,意思连贯,语句通顺,语法正确;
3. 词数:100词左右。
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(八)
Write at least 60 words according to the title “________ added spice to my life”.
我们的生活因为很多美好的事物而多姿多彩。请以“________让我的生活有滋有味!”为题,结合自己的经历,写一篇不少于60词的短文。标点符号不占格;照抄阅读语篇不得分。
请在答题纸上将标题写完整,文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息。
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(九)
你家乡的气候怎么样 你喜欢什么样的天气 请以“The Weather in My Hometown”为题,写一篇关于天气的英语短文。
写作要求:
1.语句通顺,语意连贯;
2.不少于80词。
The Weather in My Hometown
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(十)
安全与健康是人类永恒的话题。你知道如何保持安全与健康吗?请你根据以下要点提示,以“Safety and Health Come First”为题,写一篇短文谈谈你是如何做的。
要求:
1. 至少分两段,并包含以上要点,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名;
3. 80词左右。
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训练36话题作文
(一)
青少年活动中心向全体中学生发出一个 “积极生活,优秀中学生的健康密码”为题的征文活动。请根据以下要点,谈谈你的健康密码。
要求:
1. 字数80字左右,开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
2. 必须包含以上所有要点,可以适当发挥。
3. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
Hello, everyone! I want to share my secrets (秘密) of healthy life.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文:
My healthy code
Hello, everyone! I want to share my secrets of healthy life.
Health is the most important thing for everyone, so how to be healthy I think we should do the following things.
First, it is very important that we must eat healthy food. Because it is good for our health. And we should eat on time. We must have lots of fruit and vegetables every day.
Second, we must have sports every day, such as playing tennis, basketball and running and so on. Exercise will keep us healthy. And it will make us strong and energetic.
If everyone does these things, I think we will be healthy.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文。
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”。
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意要点齐全,可适当补充。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。用“我想和大家分享我的健康生活秘诀”引出下文。
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从饮食习惯和运动方面方面说明做什么、如何做以及原因。
第三步,书写结语。表达“如果每个人都做这些事情,我想我们会很健康”,进行情感升华。
[亮点词汇]
①on time准时
②such as例如
③energetic充满活力的
[高分句型]
①If everyone does these things, I think we will be healthy.(if引导的条件状语从句)
(二)
五一国际劳动节即将到来。请以“My May Day Vacation Plan”为题,写一篇100词左右的英语短文,谈谈你在五一假期关于读书、锻炼身体、旅游、帮父母做家务等方面的计划。
写作要求:
1.写作内容要包含上方的要点提示,可以适当发挥;
2.文中不要出现真实姓名和校名;
My May Day Vacation Plan
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文:
My May Day Vacation Plan
The May Day holiday is coming soon, and I have made a colorful plan to make the most of it. First, I’ll spend two hours reading books every day. I love stories about adventures, so I’ll borrow some from the library. Second, I’ll exercise regularly. I plan to jog in the park in the morning and play basketball with friends in the afternoon. Staying healthy is important!
I also want to travel with my family. We’ll visit a nearby mountain and enjoy the fresh air and beautiful views. It will be a great chance to relax. Besides, I’ll help my parents with housework. I’ll clean the rooms, wash dishes, and maybe even learn to cook a simple meal.
I’m sure this vacation will be both fun and meaningful. I can’t wait to start!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,描述个人五一假期的计划安排;
②时态:时态主要为“一般将来时”,因为涉及的是未来的计划;
③提示:写作要点围绕读书、锻炼身体、旅游、帮父母做家务等几个方面,考生应注意涵盖这些要点,并可以适当发挥,添加细节使计划更加丰富。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。简要提及五一国际劳动节即将到来,引出下文关于假期计划的描述;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。详细描述读书、锻炼身体、旅游、帮父母做家务等方面的具体计划;
第三步,书写结语。可以表达对假期的期待或总结整个计划的意义。
[亮点词汇]
①make the most of充分利用
②plan to do sth.计划做某事
③regularly定期地,有规律地
④enjoy the fresh air享受新鲜空气
⑤can’t wait to do sth.迫不及待做某事
[高分句型]
①I love stories about adventures, so I’ll borrow some from the library.(so引导的表示结果的句子)
②Staying healthy is important!(动名词短语作主语)
(三)
生活中,总有某些事物令人难以忘怀:也许是一首触动心灵的音乐,一次与同伴的有效沟通,或是帮助他人、接受他人帮助的温暖瞬间。请以“ ________ Impressed Me Most”为题, 写一篇英语短文。要求如下:
1. 具体描述让你印象深刻的事物或事件,并说明原因;
2. 补全标题(参考示例: The Song “…” / That Match/ Helping others Impressed Me Most等),字数不少于60字。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文
The Kindness of a Stranger Impressed Me Most
Last winter, I slipped on an icy road and hurt my ankle. A stranger quickly stopped to help me stand up and even walked me to a nearby store. Her warm smile and selfless act deeply moved me.
This experience made me realize how small acts of kindness can brighten someone’s day. Since then, I’ve tried to pay it forward by helping others in need.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作提示已给出,考生注意按照提示写作,并注意时态。
[写作步骤]
第一步,补全题目;
第二步,具体介绍自己印象深刻的事物或事件,并说明原因;
第三步,书写结尾,介绍自己的收获。
[亮点词汇]
①immediately迅速地
②stand up站起
[高分句型]
①This experience made me realize how small acts of kindness can brighten someone’s day.(宾语从句)
(四)
良好的生活习惯对于青少年的健康成长至关重要。某英语杂志社以“My Healthy Life”为题向中学生开展征文活动。请你根据以下提示,用英语写一篇短文投稿。
My Healthy Life Eating habits
Sports
...
要求:
1.根据所给题目,写一篇短文,词数不少于80;
2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁;
3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计;
4.请将短文写在答题卡上,写在本试题卷上无效。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文
My Healthy Life
I live a healthy life. I have a balanced diet. Every day, I eat fruit and vegetables, like apples and tomatoes. I also drink milk and eat eggs for protein. I hardly ever eat junk food.
I exercise regularly. After school, I play badminton with friends. On weekends, I go cycling. It makes me strong.
I keep a good routine. I go to bed at 9:30 p.m. and get up at 6:30 a.m. Enough sleep makes me active in class.
Healthy habits are important. I’ll keep them to stay in good health.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文,围绕个人健康生活展开描述;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:介绍自己健康的生活方式,包括饮食、运动和日常作息。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点明自己过着健康的生活。
第二步,中间分别从饮食、运动、日常作息三个方面具体阐述健康生活方式的表现。
第三步,结尾强调健康习惯的重要性,并表明会坚持这些习惯以保持健康。
[亮点词汇]
①balanced均衡的
②regularly有规律地
③routine常规;日常作息
④hardly ever几乎从不
[高分句型]
①I have a balanced diet.(简洁明了地表达了“饮食均衡”这一重要健康习惯。)
②Enough sleep makes me active in class.(使用“make sb.+adj.”结构,清晰说明充足睡眠带来的积极影响。)
(五)
No rules, No order没有规则,一切都无从谈起,为了培养同学们的规则意识,使大家健康成长,每个学校都会有一些校规。请你以“My School Rules”为题,写一篇短文介绍你们学校的规章制度。
要求:
1.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁,词数不少于60个。
2.文中不得使用真实姓名和校名,如需使用人名,请用Mike,Mary等名字,校名统一使用Kunming Middle School。
3.书面表达必须写在答题卡上,如在本卷上作答,一律不得分。
4.抄袭试卷中相关材料的,抄袭部分不给分。
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My School Rules
At Kunming Middle School, we have some important rules to keep order. First, we must wear uniforms every day. Second, we should arrive at school on time. If we’re late, the teacher will remind us to be eariler next time. Third, we must listen carefully in class and finish homework on time. Besides, we shouldn’t fight or run in the hallway. Finally, we have to keep our classroom clean. For example, Mary and Mike always help clean the blackboard. These rules help us stay safe and focus on study. Following them makes our school a better place.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是话题作文;
②时态:主要时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:题干中没有给出明确的要点,考生可结合自身实际谈谈学校的规章制度;注意行文连贯、逻辑清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步:表明写作意图。借用“我们有一些重要的规则来保持秩序。”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步:具体阐述写作内容。从着装、守时、纪律、卫生等方面一一阐述。
第三步:书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①keep order保持秩序
②on time按时
③stay safe保持安全
[高分句型]
①If we’re late, the teacher will remind us to be eariler next time. (If引导的条件状语从句)
②Following them makes our school a better place. (动名词作主语)
(六)
暑假,你代表广州中学生参加AFS国际文化交流组织项目(AFS intercultural Programs),即将到澳大利亚开展为期一个月的文化交流。请根据以下内容,向接待你的澳大利亚家庭的15岁小孩Jack介绍广州的风土人情,展示广州的文化特色。
参考词汇:长隆野生动物园Chimelong Safari Park, 省Province
写作要求:
1.词数80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2.书写要整洁、规范;
3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
Guangzhou, my hometown
Jack, I would like to tell you something about my hometown. I come from
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文:
Guangzhou, my hometown
Jack, I would like to tell you something about my hometown.
I come from Guangzhou, the capital of Guangdong Province in southern China. It’s a modern city with a long history of over 2,000 years! Here, you can visit the famous Chimelong Safari Park, where you can see pandas and other amazing animals. Guangzhou is also called the “City of Flowers” because of its beautiful parks and warm weather. We love drinking morning tea and eating dim sum, like shrimp dumplings and egg tarts.
I hope you can visit Guangzhou one day!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇说明文,为话题作文。
② 时态:一般现在时;
③ 提示:根据题干要求完成写作,语言简洁生动,突出城市亮点,展示广州的文化特色。
[写作步骤]
第一步:直入主题,介绍自己的家乡及其地理位置。
第二步:从历史、特色景点、美食等方面介绍广州的特色。
第三步:表达邀请意愿,增强互动性。
[亮点词汇]
① long history悠久历史
② City of Flowers花城
③ dim sum点心
[高分句型]
① Here, you can visit the famous Chimelong Safari Park, where you can see pandas and other amazing animals.(定语从句)
②I hope you can visit Guangzhou one day! (宾语从句)
(七)
体育运动有益身心健康,同学们不要忘记锻炼身体哦。请根据下面的提示内容以“My favourite sport”为题,写一篇英语短文,介绍你最喜欢的一项运动。
要求:
1. 包括表格中的提示内容,可适当发挥;
2. 条理清楚,意思连贯,语句通顺,语法正确;
3. 词数:100词左右。
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My Favourite Sport
Basketball is my favourite sport, which I began to play at the tender age of seven. This passion was ignited every day after school, where I would diligently practice my skills. My coach, an epitome of kindness and helpfulness, guided me through the intricacies of the game, instilling in me not only the techniques but also the spirit of teamwork and perseverance.
Basketball has been a boon to my physical and mental well-being. It has endowed me with strength and joy, while also being a conduit for making numerous friends who share the same fervor for the sport. My admiration for LeBron James, a paragon of excellence in basketball, further fuels my dedication. His prowess on the court and his philanthropic endeavors off it serve as an inspiration.
In conclusion, basketball is more than just a sport to me; it is a lifestyle that enriches my life in countless ways.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:时态为一般现在时态和一般过去时态;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步:开篇点明最喜欢的运动是篮球及开始接触时间;
第二步:详细阐述打篮球的日常练习情况,介绍教练的帮助,篮球对身心的益处、交友及偶像带来的激励等;
第三步:书写结语,篮球不仅仅是运动更是一种生活方式。
[亮点词汇]
①at the age of在……岁时
②not only…but also…不仅……而且……
③more than超过、多于
[高分句型]
①Basketball is my favourite sport, which I began to play at the tender age of seven.(定语从句)
②It has endowed me with strength and joy, while also being a conduit for making numerous friends who share the same fervor for the sport.(定语从句)
(八)
Write at least 60 words according to the title “________ added spice to my life”.
我们的生活因为很多美好的事物而多姿多彩。请以“________让我的生活有滋有味!”为题,结合自己的经历,写一篇不少于60词的短文。标点符号不占格;照抄阅读语篇不得分。
请在答题纸上将标题写完整,文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文:
Reading added spice to my life
Reading makes my life colorful. Every day after school, I spend half an hour reading books. Last month I read The Little Prince. The story taught me to value friendship. When I feel lonely, reading cheers me up. I also share interesting stories with my classmates. Through books, I can visit different countries and meet various characters. Reading is like adding spices to my life. It makes ordinary days special!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:以一般现在时为主,穿插一般过去时描述具体事件;
③提示:需结合自身经历,突出所选事物如何丰富生活,避免空洞描述。
[写作步骤]
第一步:补全标题并点题。直接表明“阅读”让生活多彩,呼应标题;
第二步:具体阐述。通过日常习惯(每日阅读)、具体事例(《小王子》的启示)、情感体验(驱散孤独)、社交分享(与同学互动)和想象拓展(书中世界)多角度展开;
第三步:升华主题。用比喻总结阅读的作用,强调其改变生活的力量。
[亮点词汇]
①cheer sb. up 使某人振作
②value friendship 珍视友谊
③through books 通过书籍
④various characters 多样的人物
⑤ordinary days 平凡的日子
[高分句型]
①The story taught me to value friendship. (动词不定式作宾语补足语)
②When I feel lonely, reading cheers me up. (when引导时间状语从句)
(九)
你家乡的气候怎么样 你喜欢什么样的天气 请以“The Weather in My Hometown”为题,写一篇关于天气的英语短文。
写作要求:
1.语句通顺,语意连贯;
2.不少于80词。
The Weather in My Hometown
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The Weather in My Hometown
Hello, everyone! I’m from Wuhan. Do you know what the weather is like here Let me tell you.
In spring, the weather changes a lot. Sometimes it’s warm, and sometimes it’s cold. In summer, it’s hot. But I like it because I like swimming in a swimming pool. The autumn is very nice. It is not too hot or too cold. In winter, it’s cold and sometimes it is snowy. I like to make snowmen with my friends in winter.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要求已给出,考生应注意一年四季中天气变化的介绍要点,适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,交代作者来自武汉,通过一个反问句来引出下文;
第二步,重点介绍武汉一年四季的天气特点,以时间为线索介绍天气变化;
[亮点词汇]
① be from来自
② in a swimming pool在游泳池里
③ to make snowmen with my friends和朋友们一起堆雪人
[高分句型]
① But I like it because I like swimming in a swimming pool.(because引导的原因状语从句)
② I like to make snowmen with my friends in winter.(to make snowmen为动词不定式作宾语)
(十)
安全与健康是人类永恒的话题。你知道如何保持安全与健康吗?请你根据以下要点提示,以“Safety and Health Come First”为题,写一篇短文谈谈你是如何做的。
要求:
1. 至少分两段,并包含以上要点,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名;
3. 80词左右。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文
Safety and health are very important for a happy life. I think everyone should follow rules, eat healthy food, and exercise every day.
As for safety, I aways follow school and traffic rules. For example, I never run in the hallways and classrooms. Because it’s dangerous. I may hurt myself or others. I also wait for the green light when crossing the street. These things keep me safe.
How do I keep fit First, I try my best to make my meals balanced. I eat healthy food like vegetables, and some meat. I never eat too much junk food. When I want to have something sweet, I eat different kinds of fruit instead. Second, I run for 20 minutes every morning. I play badminton with my friends twice a week. These good habits make me strong and happy.
Let’s do these things to stay safe and healthy!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文,文体为短文。
②时态:主要时态为一般现在时,用于阐述日常保持安全与健康的做法。
③提示:写作要点已通过图片给出,考生需涵盖这些要点,适当补充细节,突出安全与健康主题。
[写作步骤]
①第一步:表明写作意图。开篇点明安全与健康对幸福生活的重要性,引出下文自己在安全和健康方面的做法。
②第二步:具体阐述写作内容。从“安全”和“健康”两方面展开。安全方面,如遵守学校和交通规则;健康方面,从饮食均衡、规律锻炼等角度阐述,可适当拓展其他相关做法。
③第三步:书写结语。呼吁大家一起行动,保持安全和健康。
[亮点词汇]
①follow rules遵守规则
②keep fit保持健康
③balanced meals均衡饮食
④instead代替;而不是
[高分句型]
①Safety and health are very important for a happy life. (主系表结构,直接表明主题)
②I never run in the hallways and classrooms. Because it’s dangerous. (because引导原因状语从句,解释行为原因)
③When I want to have something sweet, I eat different kinds of fruit instead.(when引导时间状语从句,丰富表达)
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