2025秋高考英语复习写作分类指导专题二读后续写第二节第2讲如何利用情节和段首句猜测故事走向课件

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专题二　读后续写
第二节　指导篇
第2讲　如何利用情节和段首句猜测故事走向
做读后续写时，对所给文本的故事情节及故事结尾的推断是写好读后续写的前提。考生在推测后续情节时一般根据两个方面：第一是所给文章的情节，特别是伏笔之处；第二是所给每段的首句。
　　1.根据文章的情节和伏笔进行预测
　　读后续写所给的文章的情节一般较为曲折，因此要把握故事情节，尤其注意所给文章结尾处的伏笔。
　　2.利用所给每段的首句进行预测
　　所给第一段的首句既能承接上文，也是本段的起始句，由第二段的首句可以推测第一段的结尾。
【典例示范】
　　阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Pumpkin(南瓜) carving at Halloween is a family tradition.We visit a local farm every October.In the pumpkin field，I compete with my three brothers and sister to seek out the biggest pumpkin.My dad has a rule that we have to carry our pumpkins back home，and as the eldest child I have an advantage—I carried an 85-pounder back last year.
　　This year，it was hard to tell whether my prize or the one chosen by my 14-year-old brother，Jason，was the winner.Unfortunately we forgot to weigh them before taking out their insides，but I was determined to prove my point.All of us were hard at work at the kitchen table，with my mum filming the annual event.I’m unsure now why I thought forcing my head inside the pumpkin would settle the matter，but it seemed to make perfect sense at the time.
With the pumpkin resting on the table，hole uppermost，I bent over and pressed my head against the opening.At first I got jammed just above my eyes and then，as I went on with my task，unwilling to quit，my nose briefly prevented entry.Finally I managed to put my whole head into it，like a cork(软木塞) forced into a bottle.I was able to straighten up with the huge pumpkin resting on my shoulders.
　　My excitement was short-lived.The pumpkin was heavy.“I’m going to set it down，now，” I said，and with Jason helping to support its weight，I bent back over the table to give it somewhere to rest.It was only when I
tried to remove my head that I realised getting out was going to be less straightforward than getting in.When I pulled hard，my nose got in the way.I got into a panic as I pressed firmly against the table and moved my head around trying to find the right angle，but it was no use.“I can’t get it out！” I shouted，my voice sounding unnaturally loud in the enclosed space.
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I was stuck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer.　
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During the process，the voices from outside were oddly calm.My mum was amused，suggesting “Don’t use up all your oxygen”.My smallest brother was singing a song though I couldn’t make out.Fortunately，my dad came to respond to my shout.He helped pull my head hard and skillfully.Finally，I was rescued with messy hair and a red nose，and it was only then that I realised my mum had been filming the whole time.And she said she was going to upload the video online.
That video was posted the day before Halloween.　
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To our surprise，by the end of that day it had over 1，000 views.Next morning，we got 5 am calls from local media—the video started racking up hundreds of thousands of views.When Jason and I went on a youth camp，I was recognised by children I’d never met.The pumpkin also became a minor celebrity.
【读文预测】
　　1.根据文章情节找伏笔，预测续写内容
　　 本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者一家人在万圣节前夕雕刻南瓜的传统，今年也不例外，家里所有人都在厨房的餐桌上辛勤地工作着，而作者的妈妈则在拍摄一年一度的活动。结果作者将头伸进了南瓜里，被卡住了，无论如何也无法挣脱出来，万分焦虑，想把头弄出来。
　　在所给的文本信息里，已经为下文续写内容埋下了伏笔，如妈妈在拍摄一年一度的活动，就可以预测下文可能有这样的内容：妈妈把这一幕拍了下来，并把视频发到网上。文章结尾处作者急于把头弄出来，也为下文续写内容埋下了伏笔，我们可以预测：怎样把头弄出来，自己弄出来，还是别人来帮忙。
2.根据所给首句，大胆设问，进行预测
　　由所给的第一段首句内容“虽然时间只过去了五六分钟，但还是感觉要长得多。”可知作者急于想把头弄出来。我们可以大胆设问：
　　(1)How did I feel then？
　　(2)How did others feel？
　　(3)Who came to help me？
　　(4)How did he help me？
　　(5)What did mother do then？
　　根据这五个问题，第一段就有内容可写了。
由所给的第二段首句内容“这段视频是在万圣节前夕之前发布的。”可知，第二段可描写作者的头被卡在南瓜里这段视频在网上的走红情况，以及视频走红对作者的家人和作者的影响。我们可以大胆设问：
　　(1)What influence did it bring？
　　(2)How many views did it cause？
　　(3)How did it influence my brother and me？
　　这样，根据设问，整理答案，适当扩充，再运用合适的动作描写、心理描写和一些高级句式和高级表达，用适当的过渡词语，就组成一篇完整的文章了。
【即时演练】
　　阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
　　Trudy was a child of the British Columbia Care System.
　　In our home， we already had a child of our own， Margaret， who was thirteen. Our friends thought we were mad to take on another teenage child.
　That afternoon， Trudy arrived， She stepped into the front hall and clung to the walls. The first thing that came to my mind was that she looked like a hunted animal. Margaret grabbed her hand and said proudly： “Come and see your room. I helped make your bed.” Trudy pulled back， but didn’t let go of her hand.
　　At this point， I stepped towards her and said， “Welcome to our home， Trudy.” Her eyes darted back and forth like a creature looking for a way out. This had been her fifth foster(领养) home since she was eleven. No wonder she was afraid. I put my arms around her and told her she would be safe with us.
Trudy was very quiet but pleasant and the two kids got on along well. One day， I took Margaret shopping for a new winter coat， and Trudy came too. Trudy had picked out a jacket that she liked. She walked up to Margaret， modelling the jacket， and sighed， “Isn’t it beautiful？” Margaret agreed as they both looked in the mirror. Replacing the jacket on the rack， she rejoined Margaret.
　　While they were busy， I quietly asked the salesperson to wrap up the jacket that Trudy had tried on. We bought the coat that Margaret had loved， and the salesperson had placed the parcel containing Trudy’s coat where the girls couldn’t see it.
When we arrived home， Margaret proudly modelled her new coat. Trudy was complimenting on her choice. I chose that moment to say， “Trudy， would you please go out and bring in the parcel I left in the car？”
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
She happily headed for the parcel and when she returned， she laid it on the table. ________________________________________________________
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“Would you please open the parcel and rip paper for me？” Trudy reached out to touch the jacket.Her hand recoiled as if she had touched something hostile.I walked over to her， putting my arms around her.I took Trudy’s face in my hands， asking， “Isn’t this the jacket you were trying on？” At that moment， Trudy started sobbing.
“In all my life， no one has ever bought me a beautiful jacket like this.Why did you do this？” She held the jacket and stared at it with disbelief.My voice shook as I managed to say， “Because you deserve it.”
I left and went to my room so she would not see my watery eyes. 　
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My heart ached for this child who didn’t feel she was worthy of a coat.As I was sitting there deep in thought， Margaret stepped forward， saying “Mum， thank you for bringing Trudy into our home.We hope we can keep her forever.” My eyes welled up with tears.As I gathered my children to me， they began to say， “We love you， Mum.” I looked at the faces of my treasures and whispered， “I love you too.Guess who’s the luckiest mother in the world.”