2025秋高考英语复习写作分类指导专题二读后续写第二节第5讲如何做到合理结尾课件

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专题二　读后续写
第二节　指导篇
第5讲　如何做到合理结尾
在读后续写中，第二段结尾至关重要，除揭示故事结局外，还应与原文伏笔呼应，使人觉得在情理之中。常用结尾方式有以下4种：
　　1.哲理式结尾：总结文章中心，通过哲理性的语言结尾点明中心，升华主题。通过以小见大、从物到人、由事及人等方式升华文章主题。
　　2.正能量结尾：结尾句呼应原文主题，且一定要体现正能量。
　　3.以景结情：在续写中通过寓情于景的描写，使所写环境和人物心情相照应。
　　4.自然结尾：顺着文章所叙之事自然发展，以其必然结果结尾，简单自然。
【典例示范】
　　阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A Vacation with My Mother
　　I had an interesting childhood： It was filled with surprise and amusements， all because of my mother—loving， sweet， and yet absent-minded and forgetful. One strange family trip we took when I was eleven tells a lot about her.
My two sets of grandparents lived in Colorado and North Dakota， and my parents decided to spend a few weeks driving to those states and seeing all the sights along the way. As the first day of our trip approached， David， my eight-year-old brother， and I unwillingly said good-bye to all of our friends. Who knew if we’d ever see them again？ Finally， the moment of our departure arrived， and we loaded suitcases， books， games， camping equipment， and a tent into the car and bravely drove off. We bravely drove off again two hours later after we’d returned home to get the purse and traveller’s checks Mum had forgotten.
　David and I were always a little nervous when using gas station bathrooms if Mum was driving while Dad slept：“You stand outside the door and play lookout while I go， and I’ll stand outside the door and play lookout while you go.” I had terrible pictures in my mind： “Honey， where are the kids？”“What？！ Oh， Gosh… I thought they were being awfully quiet.” We were never actually left behind in a strange city， but we weren’t about to take any chances.
On the fourth or fifth night， we had trouble finding a hotel with a vacancy. After driving in vain for some time， Mum suddenly got a great idea： Why didn’t we find a house with a likely-looking backyard and ask if we could set up a tent there？ David and I became nervous. To our great relief， Dad turned down the idea. Mum never could understand our objections.If a strange family showed up on her front doorsteps， Mum would have been delighted. She thinks everyone in the world as nice as she is. We finally found a vacancy in the next town.
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1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us.　
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But then we were half an hour away from the hotel， where the tent was left behind. Dad recommended buying a new one， while Mum insisted on our going back to fetch it， saying， “Forgetful people like me may lose things repeatedly， so it’s unwise to give up the tent.” Finally， we got back the tent and hit the road again. If Mum hadn’t been that absent-minded， it would have saved us the trouble of going back again and again.
We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way.　
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One day， towards evening， we found a great camping site at the foot of a high mountain. David and I helped Dad put up the tent， and Mum was busy preparing supper. When the setting sun cast an orange light over the mountains， the tent was set up and the meal was ready. Sitting around the campfire，we talked and laughed. Every time we mentioned the funny incidents of the journey， a pleasant smile would spread over Mum’s face.
【四步成文】
第一步　把握原文大意　明主旨和两线
文本
大意 我们一家四口去祖父母家途中，由于母亲的健忘发生的趣事。
原文
两情线 情节线：和朋友道别装好车出发→两小时后返回家中取落下的东西→途中用卫生间各种担心→找旅店期间妈妈萌发搭帐篷的想法→找到旅店住宿
情感线：unwilling→forgetful，surprised→nervous→amused→relieved
叙事
意图 通过叙述旅行趣事体现妈妈的性格：forgetful，loving，sweet，并体现快乐、母爱和亲情。
第二步　据两首句信息　确定续写方向
　　1.两段首句定一框
　　(1)首句衔接段首语中的“brand-new tent”结合妈妈健忘的性格可描述，妈妈把帐篷落在酒店，接着叙述返回酒店取帐篷。
　　(2)尾句可描写作者的感受。
　　2.二框二首正能量
　　(1)首句衔接段首语“great sights”，可在第二段描述自然风景。
　　(2)尾句正能量说明妈妈的性格“loving”和“sweet”。
第三步　原续两“情”相悦　合理添加细节
　　1.两“情”相悦
　　续写部分情节线的走向：帐篷落在酒店→返回酒店取帐篷→接着开车→欣赏风景→找个地方宿营；
续写部分情感线的走向：anxious→relieved→happy→peaceful→sweet。
　　2.添加细节
　　(1)动作细节：根据原文“意外不断”的基调，可叙述妈妈因健忘发生的趣事与第一段“surprise and amusements”呼应。
　　
(2)环境细节：续写第二段可通过描述景色烘托人物愉悦的心情，体现“亲情”和“与妈妈一起的趣事”。
第四步　沿原语言特点　完美连贯表达
　　原文利用简单句、并列句、非谓语动词和主从复合句，进行了大量的动作描写、心理描写及一定的环境描写，对话描写不多因此续写部分可适当地利用并列句、非谓语动词和主从复合句进行动作和心理描写，突出妈妈的性格特点。
【即时演练】
　　阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
　　Barbara， Chad’s loving grandma， penned a children’s book which illustrates how friendship outdoes material wealth in depth， a lesson as relevant today as it was when Barbara first wrote it fifty years ago.
　　As a treasure in her heart， Barbara longed to publish her works. She had had shots at making contact with publishers through various channels， but endless efforts and devotion were turned into countless rejections.
Within Barbara’s heart， a wave of torment(痛苦) was as helpless as Alice in a bottomless hole. She kept all these letters， perhaps as a reminder of her dream， in a folder that represented both hope and disappointment.
Years later， Chad became a sociable and responsible adult with friends from all walks of life. One day， he overheard the dream of his grandma from his father and knew what Grandma had thought. Understanding the significance of the book to Grandma， Chad resolved to take the bull by the horns. The first thing was to get the draft from Grandma.
On a sunny afternoon， with gentle wind clicking through tree branches， he rushed to his grandma’s house. When he pushed the door open， his eyes settled on a rocking chair， where a ray of sunshine casting its soft brilliance on the weathered but peaceful face， creating a sweet atmosphere. “Grandma.” His voice， though quiet， carried a sense of reassurance(宽慰) that was deeply felt. After hearing Chad’s idea， she wore a hopeful and relieved smile. Slowly， she fished out the draft， handing it over to Chad.
　　
Seeing the draft lying in his hand， he felt a heavy burden was put on his shoulder. Would he fail to complete the mission？ What if Grandma felt disappointed again？ Who would be willing to help him？ Suddenly， a faint voice in his head carrying a message of hope brought comfort to him. Alex， a book editor， popped(突然出现) into his head.
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1.续写词数应为150个左右；
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Instantly， he phoned Alex and made an appointment. 　
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In a café with soft music on， Alex had a small amount of coffee， then attentively leafing through pages with his mind drawn into the plot， leaving Chad as restless as ants on a hot pan. This moment， a touch of slight change on his face would tug Chad’s heartstrings. Not long afterwards， a smile was playing on his lips， “An impressive description！ Consider it done.” Eyes filled with gratitude， Chad jumped to his feet， grabbing Alex’s hands tightly， a lump in his throat.
One sunny morning， Chad got a nice-packaged delivery.　________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
At the sight of the new cover， Chad immediately fished out the phone to break the news to his grandma. “Grandma！ We made it！” Chad exclaimed， his laughter carrying through the warm air. “You really make my day， sweetie.” Grandma replied with a satisfied smile playing on the weathered but peaceful face. Meanwhile， Chad sighed with relief， a heavy burden lifted from his shoulders. The book More More More quickly climbed the charts， becoming a bestseller， reflecting Chad’s utmost efforts in realising his grandma’s dream and providing warmth and affection.