2025秋高考英语复习写作分类指导专题三写作提升第四节甄选句式课件

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专题三　写作提升
第四节　甄选句式
句式单一、缺乏生气的文章，哪怕无任何错误也不可能得高分。精彩句式的合理使用会使文章极具可读性。考生在写作时应多运用一些高级句式和复合句，并注意句式的灵活多变，让文章读起来抑扬顿挫，让自己深厚的语言功底得以体现，让作文跨上五档线！本节重点阐述句式的甄选与精彩运用。
※特殊句式
在写作中，特殊句式的运用，能体现文章的节奏感与表达效果。
1.运用强调句/强调形式。用It is…that…句型或用助动词进行强调，突出语意。
I finally made this choice for these reasons.
→It was for these reasons that I finally made this choice.
因为这些原因，我最终做出了这个选择。
I believe hard work will pay off！
→I do believe hard work will pay off！
我相信努力工作会有回报的！
2.运用倒装句。偶尔灵活运用倒装句，可增强说服力。
I didn’t realise words could be powerful in both positive and negative ways until then.
→Not until then did I realise words could be powerful in both positive and negative ways.
直到那时，我才意识到语言在积极和消极方面都有很强的力量。
3.运用省略句。达到言简意赅的效果。
I hope that you will find a good job.
→Hope you will find a good job.
希望你能找到一份好工作。
While we travel along the way， we can enjoy the beautiful scenery as well as the new looks of the villages and towns.
→While travelling along the way， we can enjoy the beautiful scenery as well as the new looks of the villages and towns.
当我们沿途旅行时，可以欣赏美丽的风景以及村庄和城镇的新面貌。
4.运用虚拟语气
It is time for both children and parents to take action to make small changes.
→It is high time that both children and parents took/should take action to make small changes.
确实到了孩子和父母行动起来做出改变的时候了。
5.运用被动句
被动语态在书面表达中属于高级句式，它们的合理运用能给文章增色添彩。英文中被动语态的使用比汉语更多、更普遍。一般来说，当强调动作的承受者、不必说出动作的执行者或执行者不明确时，常使用被动语态。被动
语态因为更突出客观事实而被广泛使用。所以同学们在写作时也应该注意多用被动语态，以提升写作表达档次。
Nowadays， we are using more and more English words in the Chinese language.
→Nowadays， more and more English words are being used in the Chinese language.
当下，越来越多的英语词汇在汉语中被使用。
6.有关it的句式结构
It is necessary to hold an objective attitude towards ratings.(it作形式主语)
有必要对评级保持客观的态度。
7.with/without的复合结构
写作时，我们可以利用with/without的复合结构让句子结构紧凑，言简意明。若能合理利用，“好处”多多，不容小觑。
If you are on the team， we are confident that we can win the game.
→With you on the team， we are confident that we can win the game.
如果有你在团队里，我们相信我们能赢得比赛。
He could not finish the work without me to help him.(without+pron.+to do)
没有我帮他，他不可能完成这项工作。
She fell asleep with the light burning.(with+n.+doing)
灯亮着，她睡着了。
The conference hurriedly finished without a single agreement reached.(without+n.+done)
会议很快就结束了，没达成任何协议。
［跟踪练习1］
根据所给提示升级句子
1.Not only your enthusiasm but also your teamwork and good spirits impress us.(强调句)
→　　　　 　　　　not only your enthusiasm but also your teamwork and good spirits 　　　　impress us.
It is
that
2.He didn’t realise the love we have for our families is important until he went through real hardship. (强调句)
→　　　　 　　　 　　　 　　　　 　　he went through real hardship
　　　　he realised the love we have for our families is important.
3.We study happily and effectively only in this way.(倒装句)
→　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　study happily and effectively.
It was not until
that
Only in this way can we
4.When it is built up/set up， the new stadium will become the new landmark in our school.(省略句)
→　　　　 　　　　　 　　， the new stadium will become the new landmark in our school.
5.It is true that many things determine our future.(被动语态)
→It is true that our future 　　　　　　　 　　　　many things.
When built up/set up
is determined by
6.I suggest that you(should)make friends with people having different characteristics or backgrounds.(被动语态+形式主语)
→　　　　 　　　　　　 　　　　　　you(should)make friends with people having different characteristics or backgrounds.
It is suggested that
※运用三大从句
1.增加亮点的定语从句
If they often cheat in the exams，they will form a bad habit，which will have a bad effect on their life.
如果他们经常考试作弊，就会养成坏习惯，这会对他们的人生产生恶劣的影响。
I can well remember the incident that happened on a rainy Sunday afternoon.
我可以清楚地记得，事故发生在一个下雨的星期天下午。
2.提升档次的名词性从句
I am sure that with your great efforts，you will enjoy a colourful and fruitful life.
我确信，在你的巨大努力下，你的生活会丰富多彩。
Being responsible is what it takes to make a better society.
有责任感是创造一个更好的社会的必要条件。
3.吸引眼球的状语从句
No matter how ordinary a job is，it plays a part in society and therefore deserves our due respect.
无论多么普通的工作，都在社会中起一定的作用，因此值得我们应有的尊重。
［跟踪练习2］
根据所给出的汉语提示完成句子
1.By serving others， a person focuses on someone other than himself，
　　　　　　　　　　very eye-opening and rewarding.
通过为别人服务，一个人会关注别人而不是自己，这样做能开阔眼界，并从中受益。
which can be
2.The teacher explains grammar rules in simple words，
__________________________________________.
老师用简单的语言解释语法规则，这让学生很容易理解。
3.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 has a life-long effect on their children.
父母的言行会影响孩子的一生。
4.Being a good listener is a good quality and that’s ____________________________________.
倾听是一种优秀的品质，那是维系友谊所需要的。
which is easy for students to understand
What parents say and do
what it takes to maintain friendship
5.One big advantage of the course is 　 .
这门课程的一大好处是它能够帮助学生掌握英语写作技能。
6.The Internet is great for keeping in touch， 　.
互联网是很好的联系方式，电话留言和手机短信现在很少使用了。
7.　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　， we felt more and more confident and couldn’t wait for it.
随着比赛的临近，我们感到越来越自信，迫不及待地想参加。
that it can help students acquire English writing skills
while telephone messages and text messages are seldom used now
As the competition was approaching
※活用非谓语动词，手法老道
Some riders of e-bikes and bicycles come and go in all directions， ignoring traffic lights and other vehicles.(动词的-ing形式作状语)
一些骑电动车和自行车的人朝四面八方往来穿梭，忽视交通灯和其他车辆。
I feel quite sorry for that. I begin to think about what to do to help.
→Feeling quite sorry for that， I begin to think about what to do to help.(动词的-ing形式作状语)
对此我感到很抱歉，我开始考虑怎样做才能提供帮助。
Because I was amazed at how skillful they were， I determined to be just as good as them.
→Amazed at how skillful they were， I determined to be just as good as them.(动词的-ed形式作状语)
我惊讶于他们的技术，决心要和他们一样好。
［跟踪练习3］
根据所给出的汉语提示完成句子
1.Nowadays it is convenient for people 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　.
现在人们用手机付账非常方便。
2.　　　 　　　　　　　， I figured it was time to get serious about losing weight.
称完体重，我想是认真考虑减肥的时候了。
3.　　　　　　　　　　　　　， we failed to complete the task on time.
碰到这么多麻烦，我们没能按时完成任务。
to pay bills with the mobile phone
Having weighed myself
Faced with so much trouble
※轻灵的舞者——无灵主语句
　　所谓的无灵主语句，即无生命的事物作主语来展开句子。形象地说，无灵主语句如同轻灵的舞者，翩然舞动在自由的天空下，不时给烈日炙烤的生灵送去一阵微风，间或在波澜不惊的水面激起一丝涟漪。
从充当句子主语的词语来看，无灵主语句大体有以下几类：
1.表示时间、地点等的名词作主语的句子。这类无灵主语句常用see， find， witness等动词作谓语，往往带有比喻或拟人的修辞手法。
As is universally acknowledged， the Yellow Crane Tower has witnessed the history of Wuhan.
众所周知，黄鹤楼见证了武汉的历史变迁。
2.表示生理、心理状态的名词作主语的句子。此类句子可以为作文增加血肉，注入活力，使文章瞬间变得丰满起来。
Grief and sorrow hit me like a bolt from the blue.
悲痛如晴天霹雳一般击中了我。
3.表示行为、动作意义的名词作主语的句子。这极有利于增加主语的多样性，吸引读者的目光。
Being a good listener really enables us to get closer to each other.
善于倾听确实可以拉近我们彼此的距离。
4.表示情景、自然现象的名词作主语。使用此类表达，展开的句子显得更为生动形象。
A heavy rain visited the city.
这个城市刚下过一场大雨。
［跟踪练习4］
请用无灵主语句翻译句子
1.获得实践经验的强烈渴望促使我向你递交了我的申请。
【答案】A strong desire for practical experience inspired me to send my application to you.
2.寒假来临，我得知你将不会回到自己的国家。
3.格林先生，我无法用言语表达对您的谢意。
【答案】The winter vacation is approaching， and I get the news that you will not go back to your country.
【答案】No words are strong enough to express my gratitude to you， Mr Green.
4.我原打算去机场接李明叔叔，但一些紧急事务把我困在了办公室。
5.4月12日——令人难忘的一天——见证了我们班一次极有意义的经历。
【答案】I had intended to pick up my uncle Li Ming at the airport， but some emergencies trapped me in the office.
【答案】April 12th， a memorable day， witnessed a meaningful experience of our class.
6.据我所知，在这座体育馆里已经举行过许多场激动人心的足球比赛。
【答案】As I know， this stadium has seen many thrilling football games.
※表强烈情感的双重否定
否定加否定变成强烈的肯定。在英语作文中，将双重否定用得恰到好处，会让你的作文成功逆袭，达到出奇制胜的效果。
1.双重否定的构成形式：no/not/never/nothing…+否定的实词或虚词
Without your help， I would not have made such great progress in English-learning.
没有你的帮助，我的英语学习就不会取得这么大的进步。
2.never/not+fail to do sth.和never/not miss sth.
As long as you discover， you will not miss the nice things in life.
只要你去发现，你就不会错过生活中的美好。
3.There is no denying that…/It can’t be denied that… (不可否认……)/There is no doubt that…(毫无疑问……)
There is no doubt that our educational system leaves something to be improved.
毫无疑问，我们的教育制度有待改进。
［跟踪练习5］
请用双重否定的形式翻译句子
1.另外，如果没有你的帮助，我就不会成为英语尖子生，也不会赢得英语演讲比赛。
【答案】Additionally， without your help， I would not have been a top student in English and would not have won the English Speech Contest.
2.不可否认，这些消费排名可能给消费者带来方便，但它们也常常会是误导和不可靠的。
3.这些天，违反交通规则和乱扔杂物很常见，这给生活和环境带来了严重损害。
【答案】There is no denying that such ratings might bring convenience to consumers， but they are often misleading and unreliable.
【答案】These days， breaking traffic rules and littering are not uncommon， causing serious harm to life and environment.
4.对大部分人来说，没有鼠标，操作计算机几乎不可能，更不用说上网。
5.似乎很多人没有电视、手机或网络，就不能玩得很开心。
【答案】For most people， it’s almost impossible to operate a computer without a mouse， let alone surf the Internet.
【答案】It seems that many people cannot enjoy themselves without TV， cellphones or the Internet.
※适时感叹，抒发情感
How considerate of you to remember my birthday！
您真的很体贴，还记得我的生日。
※运用高级表达句式
掌握一些高级句型是高考英语写作提分的关键！下面列举了部分常用的句式，以供同学们进行积累和记忆。
1.…cannot emphasise the importance of…too much.(……再怎么强调……的重要性也不为过。)
We cannot emphasise the importance of protecting our eyes too much.
我们再怎么强调保护眼睛的重要性也不为过。
2.It is universally acknowledged+that从句 (全世界都知道……)
It is universally acknowledged that trees are indispensable to us.
全世界都知道树木对我们是不可或缺的。
3.形容词/名词(前不加冠词)/动词原形+as+从句主语+be/助动词，主句主语+谓语……(虽然……)(as引导让步状语从句的倒装)
Rich as their country is， the qualities of their living are by no means satisfactory.
虽然他们的国家富有，但是他们的生活品质绝对令人不满意。
4.Nothing is+形容词比较级+than to+动词原形
Nothing is more important than to receive education.
没有什么比接受教育更重要的事。
5.There is no denying that+主语+谓语(不可否认的……)
There is no denying that the qualities of their living have gone from bad to worse.
不可否认的是，他们的生活品质已经每况愈下。
6.The+形容词比较级，the+形容词比较级 (越……越……)
The harder you work， the more progress you will make.你越努力，你就越进步。
The more books we read， the more learned we will become.
我们书读越多，我们越有学问。
7.On no account can we…(我们绝对不能……)
On no account can we ignore the value of knowledge.
我们绝对不能忽略知识的价值。
8.It is conceivable that…(可想而知……)/It is obvious that…(明显……)/It is apparent that…(显然……)
It is conceivable that knowledge plays an important role in our life.
可想而知，知识在我们的人生中扮演着重要的角色。
9.It is time+主语+过去式(该是……的时候了)
It is time the authorities concerned took proper steps to solve the traffic problems.
该是有关当局采取适当的措施来解决交通问题的时候了。
10.An advantage of…is that …(……的优点之一是……)
An advantage of using the solar energy is that it won’t create/produce any pollution.
使用太阳能的优点之一是它不会产生任何污染。
11.The reason why…is that…(……的原因是……)
The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can provide us with fresh air/supply fresh air to us.
我们必须种树的原因是它们能为我们提供新鲜的空气。
※运用谚语和名言
1.Time and tide wait for no man.
　岁月不饶人。
2.A faithful friend is hard to find. 知音难觅。
3.It’s never too late to learn. 活到老，学到老。
4.Actions speak louder than words.
　事实胜于雄辩。
5.A friend in need is a friend indeed.
　患难见真情。
6.A good beginning makes a good ending.
　善始者善终。
7.A bird in the hand is worth two in the bush.
一鸟在手胜过双鸟在林。
8.Roses given， fragrance in hand.
　赠人玫瑰，手留余香。
9.An idle youth， a needy age.
　少壮不努力，老大徒伤悲。
10.Genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspiration.
天才是1%的灵感加99%的汗水。
11.Nothing is impossible for a willing heart. 心之所愿，无所不成。
12.He who has never been to the Great Wall is not a true man.
不到长城非好汉。
13.A candle lights others and consumes itself. 蜡烛照亮别人，却毁灭了自己。
14.Confidence in yourself is the first step on the road to success.
自信是走向成功的第一步。
15.Early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy， wealthy and wise.
早睡早起身体好。
【综合专练】
一、根据所给出的汉语提示完成句子
1.在工作的时候，我意识到在烈日下的田野里工作是多么辛苦。(状语从句省略)
　　　　　　　　　， I realised how hard it was to work in the fields under a hot sun.
While working
2.之后，你可以去上海，在那里待一个星期。(定语从句)
After that， you can go to Shanghai， 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　.
3.不管什么时候我不高兴了，我的朋友们总是让我振作起来。(强调句)
Whenever I’m unhappy， 　　　　my friends 　　　　cheer me up.
4.交通如此拥挤，以至于我们在高速公路上被困了三个小时。(状语从句)
There was 　　　　heavy traffic 　　　　we were stuck on highway for three hours.
where you can stay for a week
it is
who
such
that
5.在我看来，保护地球是每个人的责任。(形式主语)
As far as I’m concerned， 　　　is everyone’s duty 　　　　　　　　　.
6.显然，网上的一些汉语口语课程有助于你适应汉语环境。(形式主语)
　　　　　 　　　 some online courses of spoken Chinese can be helpful for you to adapt to the Chinese language environment.
it
to protect the earth
It is obvious that
7.尽管忙着上课，我还是设法挤出时间和朋友们出去玩。(as/though从句倒装)
　，I have managed to find time to hang out with my friends.
8.只有当你来到中国时，你才能体验中国的饮食文化。(倒装句)
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 experience Chinese food culture.
Busy though/as I am with the lessons
Only when you come to China can you
9.我想强调的是你最好带些礼物，比如一本书或一个中国结。(主语从句)
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 is that you’d better bring some gifts， such as a book or a Chinese knot.
10.我建议你申请北京大学的原因是它是中国最好的大学之一。(……的原因)
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 I suggest you apply for Beijing University is that it is one of the best universities in China.
What I want to stress
The reason why
二、根据汉语提示完成下面的作文
Dear Henry，
How is everything？ I am writing to invite you to join a paper-cutting show to be held this Sunday.
1.　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　(据报道，将有一个中国剪纸展) this Sunday in the art gallery， which is expected to last about eight hours from 8：00 a.m. to 4：00 p.m. I know you are always interested in traditional Chinese culture.
2.　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　(你越　　　　　　　　
It’s reported that there will be a Chinese paper-cutting show
The more you know about it， the better you will like it
了解它，你就会越喜欢它)， so I think we can go there together.
3.　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　 (不仅要展出各种剪纸作品)， but also the craftsmen will show visitors
4.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　(如何把纸剪成不同的形状) on the spot. I am sure you will feel amazed at this traditional Chinese art. Would you like to attend the show with me this Sunday？
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
Not only will all kinds of paper-cutting works be on display
how to cut paper into different shapes