2025秋高考英语复习写作分类指导专题三写作提升第三节锤炼词汇课件
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专题三 写作提升
第三节 锤炼词汇
英语书面表达评分标准的第五档作文中提到：语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇。换句话说，如果考生使用高级词汇或句型，即使犯了少量或轻微的语言错误，也可不扣分，文章还是属于最高档次。因此，为了让文章档次高，首先要学会使用高级词汇。高级词汇的使用能够给文章增添色彩和画面感，能够使得表达更生动形象、扣人心弦，它会大大提升文章的档次，从而帮助考生获得高分。本讲主要从词汇的选择、词类活用、高级词汇积累等几个角度进行具体阐述。
※动词的华丽变身
1.看见see→catch sight of
2.遇见meet→encounter/come across
3.引起cause→lead to/result in
4.永不放弃never give up→stick to it/insist on doing
5.提高develop/improve→promote/strengthen
6.替代replace→substitute
7.面对face→be faced with
8.容忍bear→stand/put up with
9.说/认为say/believe/think→figure/hold the view that/assume that/be convinced that
10.决定decide→determine/make up one’s mind
11.考虑consider→take into account/consideration
12.应该should→be supposed to/deserve doing
13.理解understand→make sense of/figure out
14.使用use→employ/take advantage of/make use of
15.道歉apologise→make an apology
16.记住remember→keep/bear in mind
17.喜欢like→have a passion for/be fond of/fall in love with
18.想起think of→occur to/come up with
19.感谢thank→be grateful to/appreciate
20.帮助某人help sb.→do sb. a favour/come to one’s aid/with the assistance of/give sb. a hand
21.参观visit→pay a visit to
22.分发hand out→distribute
23.站起来stand up→get/struggle to one’s feet
24.习惯于be used to→be accustomed to
25.到来come→approach/be around the corner
26.为……做准备prepare for…→make preparations for…/be prepared for…
27.反对be against→object to
28.厌烦be tired of→be fed up with/be bored with
29.忙于be busy in(with)→be occupied in(with)/be buried in/be engaged in
30.闻名be famous for→have a reputation for
31.感到舒服feel comfortable→feel at ease
32.尝试try doing sth.→make an attempt/attempt to do sth.
33.置若罔闻refuse to listen to→turn a deaf ear to
34.成功做某事succeed in doing sth.→make it
35.想做某事want to do sth.→seek/intend/desire to do sth.
36.照看look after→attend to
37.尽力做某事try one’s best to do sth.→spare no effort to do sth.
38.向某人寻求帮助ask sb. for help→turn to sb. for help
39.我认为I think→in my opinion/as far as I’m concerned
40.使用use→gain access to/be accessible to
［跟踪练习1］
一、选用方框中的短语替换下列句中加黑部分
put up with， consist of， be devoted to， make use of， fix one’s eyes upon
1.The little boy looked at the picture on the wall.
2.The small group has six people.
3.She was afraid she couldn’t bear the pain.______________________
fixed his eyes upon
consists of
put up with
4.All his life was given to the Party’s educational cause.
5.We will use her vast experience.
was devoted to
make use of
二、请用高级词汇替换下列句中加黑部分
1.Our team is now busy preparing for the game.
2.Our class thought of the idea to make better use of used materials.
3.At the same time， I decided to study harder rather than waste precious time on those useless things.
occupied with/engaged in making preparations for
came up with
made up my mind
4.We’ll try our best to develop the traditional friendship between us.
5.Would you please help me to turn down the radio？
6.Developing very quickly， the Internet causes the breakdown of face-to-face communication.
7.When you are bored with the people sometimes， you’d better find a quiet place， listening to some classical music.
8.So far as I know， every one of them wants to be a model student.
spare no effort to promote
do me a favour
leads to/results in
are fed up with
intends to
三、用所给词的高级形式补全句子
1.几天前我在你的店铺买了一部手机。
I the other day.(buy)
2.更糟的是，暴力电子游戏可能导致攻击性行为，这比暴力电影更有害。
What’s worse， violent video games ________________________________
， which is more harmful than violent movies.(cause)
purchased a cellphone at your store
can lead to/result in aggressive
behaviours
3.所有的游客都被要求不能在公园内乱扔垃圾。
All the visitors in the park.(ask)
4.或许我们能想到解决这个问题的更好的办法。
Maybe we .
(think of)
5.我们将全力以赴赶超发达的工业国家。
the developed industrial countries.(try one’s best)
were requested not to throw litter away
can come up with a better solution to the problem
We’ll spare no effort to catch up with
6.我们应该尝试彻底解决这个问题。
We .(try)
should make an attempt/attempt to thoroughly solve this problem
※形容词、副词等的蜕变
1.越来越受欢迎more and more popular→increasingly popular
2.大的big→enormous/tremendous
3.非常very→extremely/remarkably/pretty/overwhelmingly/perfectly
4.著名的famous→accomplished/have a high reputation/distinguished
5.很好的good→amazing/unbelievable/incredible
6.糟糕的bad→disgusting/awful/terrible
7.重要的important→significant/vital/essential/fundamental/crucial
8.各种各样的all kinds of→a variety of/various/diverse
9.令人惊奇的surprising→amazing/astonishing/ shocking
10.优秀的excellent→outstanding
11.困难的difficult→challenging
12.明显的obvious→apparent/evident
13.有趣的interesting→absorbing/striking/appealing
14.小心谨慎的careful→cautious
15.合适的proper→appropriate
16.常见的common→universal
17.有益处的be useful→be of benefit
18.丰富的rich→abundant
19.许多的many→a large quantity of/a number of
20.唯一的only→unique
21.有空的free→available
22.激动的excited→thrilled
23.幸运的lucky→fortunate
24.充足的enough→adequate
25.勤奋的hard-working→diligent
26.有意义的meaningful→rewarding
27.由……构成be made up of…→consist of…
28.富裕的rich→wealthy
29.高兴的glad→delighted
30.如果if→suppose/supposing/on condition that
31.突然suddenly→all of a sudden
32.立即 immediately→in a flash
33.有时sometimes→occasionally/once in a while/from time to time
34.另外；况且besides→in addition/what’s more/moreover
35.第一；首先 first→to begin/start with
36.第二；其次 second→in addition/what’s more
37.最终 finally→eventually
38.和；也also→as well as
39.大多数most→the majority
40.完成finish→accomplish
41.事实上in fact→as a matter of fact/actually
42.几天前a few days ago→the other day
43.故意on purpose→deliberately/by design
44.因为because of→on account of/due to/owing to/thanks to
45.总之in a word→to sum up/in conclusion/in summary
［跟踪练习2］
一、请用高级词汇替换下列句中加黑部分
1.As the match is very important， we have to make good preparations in advance.
2.The training schedule， apart from regular training， includes joining in various activities， such as participating in some national competitions.
significant/of great importance
a variety of
3.I am very glad to know you are interested in Tang poems.
4.Will she be free this afternoon？
5.In the coming three years， our school life will be difficult.
6.I was excited when I heard the good news.
more than delighted
available
challenging
thrilled
7.She is energetic， clever and lively.
8.To our great joy， not only are our classes lively and attractive， but our school life is also rich and colourful.
二、用所给词的高级形式补全句子
1.我的同桌是一个迷人的、文雅的女孩。
My deskmate is .(beautiful)
2.我的薪水不够维持我家的生活。
My salary .(enough)
intelligent
delight； appealing； abundant
a charming/attractive and elegant girl
is not adequate to support my family
3.改变这种情形需要每个人付出很大的努力。
Changing this situation on the part of everyone.(large)
4.她是一位辛勤的老师，工作非常勤奋。
She is a hard-working teacher and she .(hard)
5.我的手机非常有用。
My mobile phone .(useful)
requires enormous efforts
is diligent in her work
is of great benefit/is beneficial
6.由于没休息好，课堂上我总是感到筋疲力尽。
Not sleeping well， I always in class.(tired)
7.学好英语对你未来就业至关重要。
Learning English well .
(important)
8.我们的人口在增长，因此我们需要更多的食物。
We have a growing population and .(so)
feel exhausted
is significant/vital to your future employment
therefore we need more food
9.第三，你们说如果我提前付费的话就可以给我打折。
Thirdly， you say that there is a discount_____________________________
.(if)
10.我喜欢踢足球，也喜欢游泳。
I like playing football and I .(too)
suppose/supposing (that) I
pay in advance
enjoy swimming as well
三、请用高级词汇升格下面的考生作文
假定你是李红，你的一位美国笔友Robert写邮件问及你高考后暑假的安排。请你写一封邮件回复他。内容包括：
1.学开车；
2.参加英语培训课程；
3.游览各地名胜。
Dear Robert，
How time flies！ My College Entrance Examination is coming soon. Therefore， I want to have a colourful and meaningful summer vacation.
First， I will learn how to drive to get a driving license. Second， I will take some English courses to improve my spoken English. After that， I will visit some tourist attractions throughout China to widen my horizon. Finally， I will have a good rest and enjoy my hobbies.
This is the plan for my vacation.
I am eagerly looking forward to it.
Yours，
Li Hong
将文中加黑词汇升级
1.coming soon→
2.want→
3.First→
4.Second→
5.visit→
6.Finally→
approaching/around the corner
intend/desire/seek
To begin with/To start with
In addition/What’s more/Besides
pay a visit to
At last/Eventually
※名词的优化
1.选择choice→alternative
2.机会chance→opportunity
3.影响effect→impact/influence
4.方法way→method/approach
5.职业career→profession
6.缺点shortcoming→drawback
7.建议suggestion→tip/guidance
8.青少年young people→youths/adolescents
9.课程course→curriculum
10.结果result→consequence
11.观念，想法idea→opinion
12.人people→individual
13.注意、关注attention→focus
14.种类、多样化kind→variety/diversity
15.一个表现得体的孩子a child who behaves in a proper way→a well-behaved child
［跟踪练习3］
先用所给的词补全句子，然后对该词进行升级
1.我很喜欢中国传统绘画。因此，我可以向参观者详细解释中国著名画家的故事。
I’m a big fan of traditional Chinese paintings. ， I am capable of offering visitors detailed explanations on the stories of famous Chinese painters.(result)
→I’m a big fan of traditional Chinese paintings. ， I am capable of offering visitors detailed explanations on the stories of famous Chinese painters.
As a result
As a consequence
2.作为课程的部分，所有学校都设有音乐和舞蹈课。
All the schools have music and dancing classes .
(course)
→All the schools have music and dancing classes _______________________.
as parts of the course
as parts of the curriculum
3.他们声称，他们期望这次会议将对国家的未来产生显著影响。
They say they expect the meeting to
.(effect)
→They say they expect the meeting to
.
4.在这类职业中，只有20%的岗位是由女性担任的。
are held by women.(career)
→ are held by women.
have a marked effect on the future of the country
have a marked impact/influence on the future of the country
Only 20 percent of jobs in the careers
Only 20 percent of jobs in the professions
5.激励这些年轻人的不是对成就的渴望，而是对失败的恐惧。
not by a desire to achieve， but by fear of failure.(young people)
→ not by a desire to achieve， but by fear of failure.
6.我们将探索收集信息的不同方法。
We will be exploring .(way)
→We will be exploring .
These young people are motivated
These youngsters/youths/adolescents are motivated
different ways to gather information
different approaches to gathering information
※词形转换的灵活运用
在写作中，可以通过改变一个词的词性，使文章富有变化，让阅卷者感受到考生对词汇各种用法的掌握水平和灵活运用的程度。常见的变化词性的策略有名词变动词、动词变名词、形容词变名词等。
1.名词变动词
People are concerned about the gradual disappearance of the traditional values.
→People are concerned because the traditional values are gradually disappearing.
传统价值观正在渐渐地消亡，这让人们很担忧。
2.动词变名词
After watching his performance， I found he could really dance very well.
→After watching his performance， I found him a really good dancer.
看了他的表演之后，我发现他跳舞跳得很棒。
3.形容词变名词
I wrote a letter to Tom to thank him for his being so kind.
→I wrote a letter to Tom to thank him for his kindness.
我写信给汤姆对他的善良表示感谢。
※善用短语：富有变化，彰显文字功底
意思 高级短语
努力 struggle for，strive for，spare no efforts for
从事 embark on，set about，go in for
在当代 in contemporary society，in present-day society，in this day and age
更糟糕的是 what’s worse，worse still，to make matters worse
依我看 in my opinion，as far as I’m concerned，from my point of view
除了……之外(还有) besides，in addition to，apart from，as well as，along with
一方面，另一方面 on one hand，on the other hand；for one thing，for another thing
高度评价 think highly of，sing high praise for，think well of
有资格的；有能力的；胜任的 be fit for，be equal to，be qualified for，be competent in
意思 高级短语
参加 take part in，participate in
一些如何……的建议 some advice/tips/suggestions on how to…
对……感到紧张 feel nervous/anxious about
克服紧张；缓解焦虑 erase/overcome/get over nervousness， relieve anxiety
树立信心；对自己有信心 build up confidence，have confidence in yourself，be confident about yourself
对……有益的 benefit，be of great benefit，be beneficial to
对……有害的；对……有损害的 harm，do harm to，do damage to，be harmful to
接触到；有机会使用 access，gain/have access to，be accessible to
意思 高级短语
对……(不)方便的 be convenient/inconvenient for sb. to do，bring convenience/inconvenience to sb.
对……有影响/作用 have an effect/influence/impact on…，make a difference to sb.
※写作的顶级装备——33个加分词汇
词类 加分词汇
表示关注的名词 attention，focus，concern
表示争论的名词 discussion，debate，argument
表示现象的名词 phenomenon
表示优缺点的名词 advantage，disadvantage；strength，weakness
表示增长或下降的动词 increase，accumulate；decrease，decline
表示导致后果的动词短语 result in，lead to，bring about，contribute to，give rise to
词类 加分词汇
表示支持、反对的动词短语 approve of，be in favour of；object to
表示可能性的形容词 likely，possible，probable；impossible，improbable
表示有好处的形容词 beneficial，advantageous，profitable
表示强调的副词 particularly，especially
【综合专练】
一、请用高级词汇替换下列句子中的加黑部分
1.Now I will inform you of some detailed information to help you fully prepare for it.
2.You are welcome to give performances too.
【答案】make full preparations for
【答案】as well
3.We were so interested in the competition that we formed a group to take part in it.
4.I’m very glad to learn that you are coming in September.
【答案】keen on
【答案】more than
5.So， please spend some time taking a brief look at the history of the Tang Dynasty，which will help you prepare for your class.
6.In order to get a better understanding of Tang poetry， I advise you to learn some brief history of the Tang Dynasty in advance.
【答案】Therefore
【答案】acquire
7.The craftsmen will show visitors how to cut paper into different shapes on the spot.
8.Firstly，the final exam of this term is coming so I am busy preparing for it.
【答案】various/a range of
【答案】To begin with； around the corner
9.My job application form and personal resume have been prepared and I sincerely hope you can help me correct them.
10.The teacher directed the gifted students towards the more difficult courses.
【答案】polish
【答案】challenging
二、请用高级词汇升格下面的考生作文
假定你是高三学生李华，你校交换生Peter计划寒假回美国，想带一件具有中国特色的礼物送给朋友，特写信向你咨询。请给他回封邮件，内容包括：
1.推荐礼物；
2.说明理由。
Dear Peter，
①I learn that you will go back home soon and wish to buy some gifts for your friends， so I’d like to share with you my opinions.
Of all the typical gifts in my country， I think Chinese stamps are the best choice. Stamps are considered to be nice things to collect and have long-lasting value. ②Besides， stamps cover Chinese landscapes， animal signs and major events， and your friends can get a better understanding of China from them. What’s more， they’re very easy to carry.
You can go to any post office in China or its related websites to buy some. I’m sure Chinese stamps will make your friends very happy.
Yours，
Li Hua
1.将文中加黑词汇升级
(1)typical→
(2)choice→
(3)besides→
(4)get a better understanding of→
characteristic
option
in addition
gain a deeper insight into
2.根据所给要求将文中画线句子升级
(1)
(句①改为动词的-ing形式作状语)
(2) (句②改为非限制性定语从句)
Learning that you will go back home soon and wish to buy some gifts for your friends， I’d like to share with you my opinions.
Besides， stamps cover Chinese landscapes， animal signs and major events， from which your friends can get a better understanding of China.
专题三 写作提升
第三节 锤炼词汇
英语书面表达评分标准的第五档作文中提到：语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇。换句话说，如果考生使用高级词汇或句型，即使犯了少量或轻微的语言错误，也可不扣分，文章还是属于最高档次。因此，为了让文章档次高，首先要学会使用高级词汇。高级词汇的使用能够给文章增添色彩和画面感，能够使得表达更生动形象、扣人心弦，它会大大提升文章的档次，从而帮助考生获得高分。本讲主要从词汇的选择、词类活用、高级词汇积累等几个角度进行具体阐述。
※动词的华丽变身
1.看见see→catch sight of
2.遇见meet→encounter/come across
3.引起cause→lead to/result in
4.永不放弃never give up→stick to it/insist on doing
5.提高develop/improve→promote/strengthen
6.替代replace→substitute
7.面对face→be faced with
8.容忍bear→stand/put up with
9.说/认为say/believe/think→figure/hold the view that/assume that/be convinced that
10.决定decide→determine/make up one’s mind
11.考虑consider→take into account/consideration
12.应该should→be supposed to/deserve doing
13.理解understand→make sense of/figure out
14.使用use→employ/take advantage of/make use of
15.道歉apologise→make an apology
16.记住remember→keep/bear in mind
17.喜欢like→have a passion for/be fond of/fall in love with
18.想起think of→occur to/come up with
19.感谢thank→be grateful to/appreciate
20.帮助某人help sb.→do sb. a favour/come to one’s aid/with the assistance of/give sb. a hand
21.参观visit→pay a visit to
22.分发hand out→distribute
23.站起来stand up→get/struggle to one’s feet
24.习惯于be used to→be accustomed to
25.到来come→approach/be around the corner
26.为……做准备prepare for…→make preparations for…/be prepared for…
27.反对be against→object to
28.厌烦be tired of→be fed up with/be bored with
29.忙于be busy in(with)→be occupied in(with)/be buried in/be engaged in
30.闻名be famous for→have a reputation for
31.感到舒服feel comfortable→feel at ease
32.尝试try doing sth.→make an attempt/attempt to do sth.
33.置若罔闻refuse to listen to→turn a deaf ear to
34.成功做某事succeed in doing sth.→make it
35.想做某事want to do sth.→seek/intend/desire to do sth.
36.照看look after→attend to
37.尽力做某事try one’s best to do sth.→spare no effort to do sth.
38.向某人寻求帮助ask sb. for help→turn to sb. for help
39.我认为I think→in my opinion/as far as I’m concerned
40.使用use→gain access to/be accessible to
［跟踪练习1］
一、选用方框中的短语替换下列句中加黑部分
put up with， consist of， be devoted to， make use of， fix one’s eyes upon
1.The little boy looked at the picture on the wall.
2.The small group has six people.
3.She was afraid she couldn’t bear the pain.______________________
fixed his eyes upon
consists of
put up with
4.All his life was given to the Party’s educational cause.
5.We will use her vast experience.
was devoted to
make use of
二、请用高级词汇替换下列句中加黑部分
1.Our team is now busy preparing for the game.
2.Our class thought of the idea to make better use of used materials.
3.At the same time， I decided to study harder rather than waste precious time on those useless things.
occupied with/engaged in making preparations for
came up with
made up my mind
4.We’ll try our best to develop the traditional friendship between us.
5.Would you please help me to turn down the radio？
6.Developing very quickly， the Internet causes the breakdown of face-to-face communication.
7.When you are bored with the people sometimes， you’d better find a quiet place， listening to some classical music.
8.So far as I know， every one of them wants to be a model student.
spare no effort to promote
do me a favour
leads to/results in
are fed up with
intends to
三、用所给词的高级形式补全句子
1.几天前我在你的店铺买了一部手机。
I the other day.(buy)
2.更糟的是，暴力电子游戏可能导致攻击性行为，这比暴力电影更有害。
What’s worse， violent video games ________________________________
， which is more harmful than violent movies.(cause)
purchased a cellphone at your store
can lead to/result in aggressive
behaviours
3.所有的游客都被要求不能在公园内乱扔垃圾。
All the visitors in the park.(ask)
4.或许我们能想到解决这个问题的更好的办法。
Maybe we .
(think of)
5.我们将全力以赴赶超发达的工业国家。
the developed industrial countries.(try one’s best)
were requested not to throw litter away
can come up with a better solution to the problem
We’ll spare no effort to catch up with
6.我们应该尝试彻底解决这个问题。
We .(try)
should make an attempt/attempt to thoroughly solve this problem
※形容词、副词等的蜕变
1.越来越受欢迎more and more popular→increasingly popular
2.大的big→enormous/tremendous
3.非常very→extremely/remarkably/pretty/overwhelmingly/perfectly
4.著名的famous→accomplished/have a high reputation/distinguished
5.很好的good→amazing/unbelievable/incredible
6.糟糕的bad→disgusting/awful/terrible
7.重要的important→significant/vital/essential/fundamental/crucial
8.各种各样的all kinds of→a variety of/various/diverse
9.令人惊奇的surprising→amazing/astonishing/ shocking
10.优秀的excellent→outstanding
11.困难的difficult→challenging
12.明显的obvious→apparent/evident
13.有趣的interesting→absorbing/striking/appealing
14.小心谨慎的careful→cautious
15.合适的proper→appropriate
16.常见的common→universal
17.有益处的be useful→be of benefit
18.丰富的rich→abundant
19.许多的many→a large quantity of/a number of
20.唯一的only→unique
21.有空的free→available
22.激动的excited→thrilled
23.幸运的lucky→fortunate
24.充足的enough→adequate
25.勤奋的hard-working→diligent
26.有意义的meaningful→rewarding
27.由……构成be made up of…→consist of…
28.富裕的rich→wealthy
29.高兴的glad→delighted
30.如果if→suppose/supposing/on condition that
31.突然suddenly→all of a sudden
32.立即 immediately→in a flash
33.有时sometimes→occasionally/once in a while/from time to time
34.另外；况且besides→in addition/what’s more/moreover
35.第一；首先 first→to begin/start with
36.第二；其次 second→in addition/what’s more
37.最终 finally→eventually
38.和；也also→as well as
39.大多数most→the majority
40.完成finish→accomplish
41.事实上in fact→as a matter of fact/actually
42.几天前a few days ago→the other day
43.故意on purpose→deliberately/by design
44.因为because of→on account of/due to/owing to/thanks to
45.总之in a word→to sum up/in conclusion/in summary
［跟踪练习2］
一、请用高级词汇替换下列句中加黑部分
1.As the match is very important， we have to make good preparations in advance.
2.The training schedule， apart from regular training， includes joining in various activities， such as participating in some national competitions.
significant/of great importance
a variety of
3.I am very glad to know you are interested in Tang poems.
4.Will she be free this afternoon？
5.In the coming three years， our school life will be difficult.
6.I was excited when I heard the good news.
more than delighted
available
challenging
thrilled
7.She is energetic， clever and lively.
8.To our great joy， not only are our classes lively and attractive， but our school life is also rich and colourful.
二、用所给词的高级形式补全句子
1.我的同桌是一个迷人的、文雅的女孩。
My deskmate is .(beautiful)
2.我的薪水不够维持我家的生活。
My salary .(enough)
intelligent
delight； appealing； abundant
a charming/attractive and elegant girl
is not adequate to support my family
3.改变这种情形需要每个人付出很大的努力。
Changing this situation on the part of everyone.(large)
4.她是一位辛勤的老师，工作非常勤奋。
She is a hard-working teacher and she .(hard)
5.我的手机非常有用。
My mobile phone .(useful)
requires enormous efforts
is diligent in her work
is of great benefit/is beneficial
6.由于没休息好，课堂上我总是感到筋疲力尽。
Not sleeping well， I always in class.(tired)
7.学好英语对你未来就业至关重要。
Learning English well .
(important)
8.我们的人口在增长，因此我们需要更多的食物。
We have a growing population and .(so)
feel exhausted
is significant/vital to your future employment
therefore we need more food
9.第三，你们说如果我提前付费的话就可以给我打折。
Thirdly， you say that there is a discount_____________________________
.(if)
10.我喜欢踢足球，也喜欢游泳。
I like playing football and I .(too)
suppose/supposing (that) I
pay in advance
enjoy swimming as well
三、请用高级词汇升格下面的考生作文
假定你是李红，你的一位美国笔友Robert写邮件问及你高考后暑假的安排。请你写一封邮件回复他。内容包括：
1.学开车；
2.参加英语培训课程；
3.游览各地名胜。
Dear Robert，
How time flies！ My College Entrance Examination is coming soon. Therefore， I want to have a colourful and meaningful summer vacation.
First， I will learn how to drive to get a driving license. Second， I will take some English courses to improve my spoken English. After that， I will visit some tourist attractions throughout China to widen my horizon. Finally， I will have a good rest and enjoy my hobbies.
This is the plan for my vacation.
I am eagerly looking forward to it.
Yours，
Li Hong
将文中加黑词汇升级
1.coming soon→
2.want→
3.First→
4.Second→
5.visit→
6.Finally→
approaching/around the corner
intend/desire/seek
To begin with/To start with
In addition/What’s more/Besides
pay a visit to
At last/Eventually
※名词的优化
1.选择choice→alternative
2.机会chance→opportunity
3.影响effect→impact/influence
4.方法way→method/approach
5.职业career→profession
6.缺点shortcoming→drawback
7.建议suggestion→tip/guidance
8.青少年young people→youths/adolescents
9.课程course→curriculum
10.结果result→consequence
11.观念，想法idea→opinion
12.人people→individual
13.注意、关注attention→focus
14.种类、多样化kind→variety/diversity
15.一个表现得体的孩子a child who behaves in a proper way→a well-behaved child
［跟踪练习3］
先用所给的词补全句子，然后对该词进行升级
1.我很喜欢中国传统绘画。因此，我可以向参观者详细解释中国著名画家的故事。
I’m a big fan of traditional Chinese paintings. ， I am capable of offering visitors detailed explanations on the stories of famous Chinese painters.(result)
→I’m a big fan of traditional Chinese paintings. ， I am capable of offering visitors detailed explanations on the stories of famous Chinese painters.
As a result
As a consequence
2.作为课程的部分，所有学校都设有音乐和舞蹈课。
All the schools have music and dancing classes .
(course)
→All the schools have music and dancing classes _______________________.
as parts of the course
as parts of the curriculum
3.他们声称，他们期望这次会议将对国家的未来产生显著影响。
They say they expect the meeting to
.(effect)
→They say they expect the meeting to
.
4.在这类职业中，只有20%的岗位是由女性担任的。
are held by women.(career)
→ are held by women.
have a marked effect on the future of the country
have a marked impact/influence on the future of the country
Only 20 percent of jobs in the careers
Only 20 percent of jobs in the professions
5.激励这些年轻人的不是对成就的渴望，而是对失败的恐惧。
not by a desire to achieve， but by fear of failure.(young people)
→ not by a desire to achieve， but by fear of failure.
6.我们将探索收集信息的不同方法。
We will be exploring .(way)
→We will be exploring .
These young people are motivated
These youngsters/youths/adolescents are motivated
different ways to gather information
different approaches to gathering information
※词形转换的灵活运用
在写作中，可以通过改变一个词的词性，使文章富有变化，让阅卷者感受到考生对词汇各种用法的掌握水平和灵活运用的程度。常见的变化词性的策略有名词变动词、动词变名词、形容词变名词等。
1.名词变动词
People are concerned about the gradual disappearance of the traditional values.
→People are concerned because the traditional values are gradually disappearing.
传统价值观正在渐渐地消亡，这让人们很担忧。
2.动词变名词
After watching his performance， I found he could really dance very well.
→After watching his performance， I found him a really good dancer.
看了他的表演之后，我发现他跳舞跳得很棒。
3.形容词变名词
I wrote a letter to Tom to thank him for his being so kind.
→I wrote a letter to Tom to thank him for his kindness.
我写信给汤姆对他的善良表示感谢。
※善用短语：富有变化，彰显文字功底
意思 高级短语
努力 struggle for，strive for，spare no efforts for
从事 embark on，set about，go in for
在当代 in contemporary society，in present-day society，in this day and age
更糟糕的是 what’s worse，worse still，to make matters worse
依我看 in my opinion，as far as I’m concerned，from my point of view
除了……之外(还有) besides，in addition to，apart from，as well as，along with
一方面，另一方面 on one hand，on the other hand；for one thing，for another thing
高度评价 think highly of，sing high praise for，think well of
有资格的；有能力的；胜任的 be fit for，be equal to，be qualified for，be competent in
意思 高级短语
参加 take part in，participate in
一些如何……的建议 some advice/tips/suggestions on how to…
对……感到紧张 feel nervous/anxious about
克服紧张；缓解焦虑 erase/overcome/get over nervousness， relieve anxiety
树立信心；对自己有信心 build up confidence，have confidence in yourself，be confident about yourself
对……有益的 benefit，be of great benefit，be beneficial to
对……有害的；对……有损害的 harm，do harm to，do damage to，be harmful to
接触到；有机会使用 access，gain/have access to，be accessible to
意思 高级短语
对……(不)方便的 be convenient/inconvenient for sb. to do，bring convenience/inconvenience to sb.
对……有影响/作用 have an effect/influence/impact on…，make a difference to sb.
※写作的顶级装备——33个加分词汇
词类 加分词汇
表示关注的名词 attention，focus，concern
表示争论的名词 discussion，debate，argument
表示现象的名词 phenomenon
表示优缺点的名词 advantage，disadvantage；strength，weakness
表示增长或下降的动词 increase，accumulate；decrease，decline
表示导致后果的动词短语 result in，lead to，bring about，contribute to，give rise to
词类 加分词汇
表示支持、反对的动词短语 approve of，be in favour of；object to
表示可能性的形容词 likely，possible，probable；impossible，improbable
表示有好处的形容词 beneficial，advantageous，profitable
表示强调的副词 particularly，especially
【综合专练】
一、请用高级词汇替换下列句子中的加黑部分
1.Now I will inform you of some detailed information to help you fully prepare for it.
2.You are welcome to give performances too.
【答案】make full preparations for
【答案】as well
3.We were so interested in the competition that we formed a group to take part in it.
4.I’m very glad to learn that you are coming in September.
【答案】keen on
【答案】more than
5.So， please spend some time taking a brief look at the history of the Tang Dynasty，which will help you prepare for your class.
6.In order to get a better understanding of Tang poetry， I advise you to learn some brief history of the Tang Dynasty in advance.
【答案】Therefore
【答案】acquire
7.The craftsmen will show visitors how to cut paper into different shapes on the spot.
8.Firstly，the final exam of this term is coming so I am busy preparing for it.
【答案】various/a range of
【答案】To begin with； around the corner
9.My job application form and personal resume have been prepared and I sincerely hope you can help me correct them.
10.The teacher directed the gifted students towards the more difficult courses.
【答案】polish
【答案】challenging
二、请用高级词汇升格下面的考生作文
假定你是高三学生李华，你校交换生Peter计划寒假回美国，想带一件具有中国特色的礼物送给朋友，特写信向你咨询。请给他回封邮件，内容包括：
1.推荐礼物；
2.说明理由。
Dear Peter，
①I learn that you will go back home soon and wish to buy some gifts for your friends， so I’d like to share with you my opinions.
Of all the typical gifts in my country， I think Chinese stamps are the best choice. Stamps are considered to be nice things to collect and have long-lasting value. ②Besides， stamps cover Chinese landscapes， animal signs and major events， and your friends can get a better understanding of China from them. What’s more， they’re very easy to carry.
You can go to any post office in China or its related websites to buy some. I’m sure Chinese stamps will make your friends very happy.
Yours，
Li Hua
1.将文中加黑词汇升级
(1)typical→
(2)choice→
(3)besides→
(4)get a better understanding of→
characteristic
option
in addition
gain a deeper insight into
2.根据所给要求将文中画线句子升级
(1)
(句①改为动词的-ing形式作状语)
(2) (句②改为非限制性定语从句)
Learning that you will go back home soon and wish to buy some gifts for your friends， I’d like to share with you my opinions.
Besides， stamps cover Chinese landscapes， animal signs and major events， from which your friends can get a better understanding of China.