2025秋高考英语复习写作分类指导专题一应用文写作第七节收放自如的记叙文课件

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专题一　应用文写作
第七节　收放自如的记叙文
Type 1　人物描写
　　人物描写属于记叙文的写作范畴。写作时要围绕人物组织材料，要做到主题鲜明，内容清楚，并注意结构的完整性。具体写作结构为：
【提分写作素材】
1.开头常用语
①As for my favourite figure…， it must be…
至于我最喜欢的人物……，一定是……
②And the person I respect most is…
我最尊敬的人是……
③Among the outstanding figures in Chinese history， …is my favourite.
在中国历史上的杰出人物中，我最喜欢……
2.主体部分常用语
①I admire him because of his contributions to the world.
因为他对世界的贡献，我很钦佩他。
②In fact， he was a man full of imagination，creation and wisdom.
事实上，他是一个富有想象力、创造力和智慧的人。
③She’s of medium height，with long and blonde hair.
她中等身材，长着金色的长发。
④It was … who made me aware of the importance of…
是……让我意识到……的重要性。
3.结尾常用语
①From him，I realise the secret of success is…
从他身上，我意识到成功的秘诀是……
②I do thank him for what he did for me.
我确实感谢他为我所做的一切。
③Setting a great example to…，she fully deserves…
她为……树立好榜样，完全值得……
【佳作赏析】
　　你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你写一篇介绍中国历史人物的短文投稿，内容包括：
　　1.人物简介及事迹；
　　2.意义或启示。
　　注意：
　　1.词数80左右；
　　2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【参考范文】
　　Confucius is a well-known figure in Chinese history. His teachings emphasized the importance of moral values， respect for elders， and social harmony. Confucius travelled throughout the country， imparting his wisdom to countless disciples and leaving a profound impact on Chinese society.
　　The significance of Confucius cannot be overstated. His teachings shaped the moral and ethical foundation of Chinese culture， fostering respect for authority， harmonious relationships， and the pursuit of knowledge. Even today， his ideas continue to guide individuals and communities in China and beyond.
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Confucius’s life offers valuable lessons. He stressed the self-cultivation， respect for elders， and the pursuit of knowledge， which serves as a guiding light in our fast-paced and interconnected world. His teachings remind us of the importance of integrity， compassion， and social responsibility.
【即时演练】
　　你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：
　　1.人物简介；
　　2.尊敬和爱戴的原因。
　　注意：
　　1.词数80左右；
　　2.题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数；
　　3.可适当增加，以使行文连贯。
The Person I Respect
　　There are many respectable people around us.　
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Mrs Liu，my mother is one of them.She is a kind and loving person who dedicates her life to taking care of the family. She always puts the needs and wants of others before her own.
　　What I admire most about my mother is her unwavering strength and resilience. She has faced many obstacles in her life but has always managed to come out on top. Her determination and perseverance are truly inspiring.
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Overall， my mother is an amazing person and an incredible role model. I am blessed to have her in my life and I truly believe that the world would be a better place if there are more people like her.
Type 2　叙事短文
　　叙事短文属于记叙文的写作范畴，文章多以事件为中心，以时间和空间为线索，按事件的发生、发展、结局的顺序展开故事。具体写作结构为：
【提分写作素材】
1.开头常用语
①Last week our school launched a campaign focusing on…
上周我们学校开展了一项关于……的活动。
②In order to encourage students to…，our school organised…
为了鼓励学生……，我们学校组织了……
③With the…approaching，we’re going to participate in a…
随着……的临近，我们要参加一个……
2.主体部分常用语
①They also visited …and learned about…
他们还参观了……并了解了……
②First， the theme of the activity is to know more about…
首先，活动的主题是了解更多关于……
③Last， everyone is called on to…
最后，每个人都被要求……
3.结尾常用语
①The activity was highly praised by…
活动得到……的高度赞扬。
②In a word， the activities have benefited me a lot， making me realise…
总之，这些活动使我受益匪浅，让我意识到……
③I hope that you can…if you have time in the near future.
如果你在不久的将来有时间，我希望你能……
【佳作赏析】
　　上周末你参加了校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。请你为校英文报写一篇文章，介绍此次活动，内容包括：
　　1.活动的过程；
　　2.收获与感想。
　　注意：
　　1.词数80左右；
　　2.题目已给出，不计入总词数；
　　3.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【参考范文】
Getting to Know the Plants Around Us
　　Last weekend， I participated in an activity with a theme of “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us” organised by our Students’ Union.
　　The activity began with a lecture by a local botanist， who taught us about the different characteristics and uses of various plant species. We then went on a natural walk to observe and collect samples of different plants. Throughout the event， I was struck by the incredible variety of plants that exist in our world and learned about plants that are used for
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medical purposes， as well as those that provide food and shelter for animals. I also gained a greater appreciation for the role that plants play in maintaining the balance of our ecosystem.
　　Overall， it was a valuable and enriching experience.
【即时演练】
　　假定你是李华，上周末，你和同学去新星农场参加了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文，介绍这次活动，内容包括：
　　1.农场情况；
　　2.采摘过程；
　　3.个人感受。
　　
注意：
　　1.词数80左右；
　　2.题目已给出，不计入总词数；
　　3.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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My Weekend
Last weekend，my classmates and I went to Xinxing Farm by bike to pick strawberries.
Upon entering the farm，we were attracted by its rich varieties of fruit.A guide led us to the strawberry field，where we saw fresh inviting red strawberries.We were told we could enjoy some newly-picked ones because they were poison-free.As requested，we began to pick strawberries with caution for fear that some plants were destroyed.About two hours later，with our baskets full，we went out.
This experience benefits me a lot.Not only do I feel the pains the farmers take but also the happiness that labour brings me.