2025秋高考英语复习写作分类指导专题一应用文写作第三节建议信和求助信课件

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专题一　应用文写作
第三节　建议信和求助信
Type 1　建议信
　　建议信，是写信人向收信人对某事提出建议或忠告的书信。建议信要简明扼要、目的明确，具有合理性和说服力。
　　建议信的具体结构一般是“三段式”，通常以firstly，secondly，thirdly或to begin/start with，then，later，last but not least等作为连接词依次陈述建议。具体写作结构为：
【提分写作素材】
1.开头常用语
①I know you have trouble in… after reading your letter.I am writing to give you some suggestions / offer you some advice.
在读了你的信后，我知道你在……(方面)有困难。我写这封信的目的是给你一些建议。
②I’m very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on…
我很高兴收到你的来信，询问我关于……的建议。
2.主体部分常用语
①The following are my suggestions./ My suggestions are as follows.
下面是我的一些建议。/我的建议如下。
②In my opinion / As far as I’m concerned / Personally，it would be wise to take the following actions.
在我看来/就我而言，采取如下行动是明智的。
3.结尾常用语
①I hope you will find these suggestions helpful./ I hope my suggestions will be of benefit to you.
我希望你会觉得这些建议对你有帮助。/我希望我的建议对你有益。
②I believe that you will take my suggestions into serious account.Whatever you decide to do， good luck！
我相信你会认真考虑我的建议。无论你决定做什么，都祝你一切顺利！
【佳作赏析】
　　假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
　　1.活动形式；
　　2.活动内容。
注意：
　　1.词数100左右；
　　2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
　　3.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Jim，
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Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my help， I am writing to offer you my suggestions.
　　I think you can carry out this activity in an interactive and experiential manner， which means students can participate and have a better understanding of “Green Beijing” through getting involved in different activities by themselves. You can showcase garbage classification on site， plant trees and publicise sharing economy， which will all fit into the theme of “Green Beijing”.
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Yours，
Li Hua
Hopefully， you will get some inspiration from my suggestions. Wish you success.
【即时演练】
　　假设你是李华，你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条线路可以选择：“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信，内容包括：
　　1.你建议的线路；
　　2.你的理由；
　　3.你的祝愿。
注意：
　　1.词数80左右；
　　2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
　　3.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Jim，
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I am pleased to learn that you will pay a visit to China.Here are some suggestions on where to go.
Of the two routes given by your school，I strongly recommend that the trip to the Changjiang River be the first choice.As the longest river in Asia，the Changjiang River has so many attractions.Taking a ship，you can enjoy the beautiful scenery on both sides of it.
In a word，the trip will be both relaxing and rewarding，which is bound to be a memorable experience for you.
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Yours，
Li Hua
I sincerely hope you will have a nice trip in China.
Type 2　求助信
　　写求助信的原因是目前自己遇到了一些困难，需要请求对方帮助，因此整篇文章应用一般现在时。当描述自己得到帮助后的进步时应用一般将来时。具体写作结构为：
【提分写作素材】
1.开头常用语
①Hearing you have much experience in…，I am writing to ask you for help.
听说您在……方面很有经验，在此我写信向您求助。
②I have some difficulty in doing…，which bothers me a lot.So I have no choice but to turn to you for help.
我在做……方面有困难，这很困扰我。所以我别无选择只能向您求助。
2.主体部分常用语
①I am encountering three problems which trouble me a lot.To begin with…What’s more…What troubles me most is…
我遇到的三个问题很困扰我。首先……另外……最困扰我的是……
②I wonder how to deal with the problem.
我想知道如何解决这个问题。
③I’ve finished…but I still feel it far from satisfactory， which bothers/troubles/upsets me a lot.
我已经完成了……但我仍然觉得它远远不能令人满意，这让我很苦恼。
3.结尾常用语
①I’m eager to get your timely help./I’m eager for your timely help.
我渴望得到您及时的帮助。
②I would appreciate it if you could do me a favour.
如果您能帮助我，我将不胜感激。
③I wonder if you can help me with these difficulties.I really appreciate it if you could help me.
我想知道您是否能帮我解决这些困难。如果您能帮助我，我真的很感激。
【佳作赏析】
　　假定你是李华。你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会，并在英文网站展示。请你写一封邮件给外国朋友Chris，向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人。邮件内容包括：
　　1.阐明写信事由；
　　2.征求建议；
　　3.表示感谢。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
　　2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
　　3.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Chris，
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　 I am writing to ask some advice on what kind of Chinese traditional culture attracts the foreigners most.
　　Next week， our school is going to hold a class meeting themed on Chinese traditional culture and it will be displayed on the English website later. Chinese culture is broad and profound.There are various kinds of traditional festivals， calligraphy arts， painting arts and so on. What interests you and your friends most？
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Yours，
Li Hua
I would appreciate it if you could tell me more information about your opinions about the part of Chinese culture that attracts you.
【即时演练】
　　(2024山东威海高三二模)假定你是李华，想参加学校下个月举办的英语演讲比赛，但是缺乏经验。请给你校的外教史密斯先生发一封邮件，寻求他的帮助。内容包括：
　　1.求助的原因；
　　2.求助的内容；
　　3.期待回复。
注意：
　　1.词数80左右；
　　2.开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数；
　　3.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
Dear Mr Smith，
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These days， a problem is bothering me a lot， so I have no choice but to ask you for help.
An English speech contest is to be held in our school next month and I’d like to take part in it.I have made full preparations for it and have spared more time to practise.However，I still have no confidence in myself.The thought that I will be nervous faced with the judges and the large audience has been upsetting me.What should I do？ Would you like to give me some advice on how to overcome nervousness？
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Yours，
Li Hua
I would appreciate it if you could lend me a hand to get over nervousness.Looking forward to your reply.