第6周 好奇与吃惊&求助信
续写语料积累6 情感描写 好奇与吃惊(15分钟)
头脑风暴
单词词块 stun vt.使惊愕→stunned adj.(因惊讶、震惊而)目瞪口呆的 open-mouthed adj.瞠目结舌的，目瞪口呆的 wide-eyed adj.(因恐惧、惊讶等)睁大眼睛的 gasp in astonishment惊讶得倒吸一口气 blink in surprise吃惊地眨眼 sb’s jaw dropped/fell某人目瞪口呆 give a cry of surprise吃惊地喊出来 take sb aback使某人大吃一惊 raise the eyebrows扬起眉毛 gape at张口结舌地看 be shocked beyond words惊讶得说不出话来 freeze/stand still/stop dead/be numb with shock惊呆了 to one’s amazement/surprise/astonishment令某人吃惊的是 come as a bolt from the blue晴天霹雳 be thrown into astonishment大吃一惊 jump out of one’s skin大吃一惊 in a state of shock震惊不已 knock sb sideways使某人惊讶得不知所措 be astonished with one’s mouth wide open惊讶得张大嘴巴
1.Everyone gasped in astonishment as the cars came around the last bend.汽车转过最后一个弯道时，人人都惊得倒吸了一口气。
2．Hearing the unexpected news，Mary froze with shock，as if rooted to the spot.
听到这个意外的消息，玛丽惊呆了，动弹不得。
3．A spark of surprise flashed across his face.He was stunned there，staring at me with wide eyes.
他脸上闪过一丝惊奇。他惊得瞪大眼睛看着我。
4．We froze，our mouths dropping/hanging open in surprise.我们呆住了，惊奇地张大了嘴。
5．My jaw dropped/fell in astonishment when I saw the size of the audience.
看到观众如此之多，我惊讶得目瞪口呆。
6．Tom’s eyes flashed a look of surprise at her，and his face turned pale.汤姆看她时，双眼闪现出一种惊奇的神情，他的脸变得苍白。
7．When Josh heard what Franklin wanted，his mouth opened wide enough to swallow a dentist.(夸张)当乔希听到富兰克林想要的东西时，他的嘴张得大得足以吞下牙医。
8．When I looked at the grade on my math paper my jaw dropped to the ground.(夸张)看到数学卷子成绩的那一刻，我惊得下巴掉在了地上。
即时演练
1．她呆住了，目瞪口呆地看着我。(形容词作状语)
2．她张大嘴巴，瞪着眼，涨红了脸。
3．令我非常吃惊的是，我看到他瘦削的脸上灿烂的笑容，简直不敢相信自己的眼睛。
，I saw the bright smile on his thin face，and .
4．两个月后，我们偶然听到老汤姆去世的消息。这犹如晴天霹雳。
Two months later，we overheard that old Tom had died. .
5．他的考试成绩非常好，让我们惊得下巴都掉在了地上。
His exam results were great， .
应用文写作——求助信(30分钟)
求助信是目前自己遇到了一些困难，需要请求对方帮助的信件。因此整篇文章应用一般现在时，当描述自己得到帮助后的进步时应用一般将来时。具体写作结构如下：
头脑风暴
1．开头句
(1)I’m writing to you to ask whether you could do me a favour.我写信是想问你能否帮我一个忙。
(2)I am writing in the hope that you will be kind enough to do me a favour.
我写信是希望你能帮我一个忙。
(3)I have some difficulty in doing...，which bothers me a lot.So I have no choice but to turn to you for help.我在做……方面有困难，这很困扰我。所以我别无选择只能向你求助。
(4)I’m wondering if you could take the trouble to help me with...
我想知道你是否能费心帮我……
(5)I’m sorry to bother you，but I have some difficulties here and I need your help.
很抱歉打扰你，但我有些困难需要你的帮助。
2．中间句
(1)I am encountering some problems in...，which troubles me a lot.
我在……方面遇到一些问题，这很困扰我。
(2)What bothers me is that...困扰我的事是……
(3)I’ve found that my problem lies mainly in two aspects.For one thing，...; for another，...我发现我的问题主要在两个方面。一方面，……；另一方面，……
(4)I have some difficulty not only in...but also in...我不仅在……而且在……方面有困难。
3．结尾句
(1)I believe I will benefit a lot from your valuable and timely advice.
我相信你的宝贵而及时的建议会使我受益匪浅。
(2)I’m sure with your help I can make great progress.
我相信在你的帮助下我会取得很大的进步。
(3)I’m eager to get your timely help./I’m eager for your timely help.我渴望得到你及时的帮助。
(4)I would be very grateful if you could help me.../I would appreciate it if you could do me a favour and...如果你能帮助我……我会非常感激。
(5)I’d appreciate it if you could take my request into consideration/account.
如果你能考虑我的请求，我将不胜感激。
(6)I would be grateful if you could give/lend me a hand.如果你能帮助我，我将十分感激。
典例展示
(2024·湘豫名校联考)
假定你是李华，准备参加你校举办的以“快乐阅读，健康视力”为主题的书签设计活动。请你给你的留学生朋友Alick写一封邮件，寻求他的建议和帮助。内容包括：
1．写信目的；2.设计要求(包含绿色、阅读、健康视力三个元素)。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：快乐阅读，健康视力Happy Reading and Maintain Good Vision；书签 bookmark
范文佳作
Dear Alick，
I am writing in the hope that you will be kind enough to [1]do me a favor.Our school is planning a bookmark designing activity this week.[2]Knowing that you’re quite experienced in designing，I wonder if you could give me some help and advice.(表明写信目的)
Since the theme of the activity is Happy Reading and Maintain Good Vision，the bookmark should contain such [3]key elements as greenness，reading and healthy vision，and it should be nice to look at.Besides，the bookmark should carry both Chinese and English messages.(说明具体情况)
I believe I will benefit a lot from your valuable and timely advice.I would be very grateful if you are kind enough to lend me a hand.Please let me know [4]as soon as possible.(表达感激和希望)
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
亮词美句：[1]帮我个忙 [2]现在分词短语作状语
[3]关键要素 [4]尽快
即时演练
(2025·浙江宁波名校联合体联考)
假定你是李华。你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题活动，并在英文网站展示。请你写一封邮件给外国朋友Chris，向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人。邮件内容包括：
1．阐明写信事由；
2．征求建议；
3．表示感谢。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
答案精析
续写语料积累6
1．She froze，and looked at me，open-mouthed.
2．She opened her mouth with her eyes widening and face turning red.
3．Much to my surprise I couldn’t believe my eyes
4．It came as a bolt from the blue
5．which made our jaws drop to the ground
应用文写作 参考范文
Dear Chris，
Word comes that our school is going to hold an activity whose topic is related to traditional Chinese culture.Because this activity will be presented on the English website，I sincerely want you to offer me some advice.
As far as we know，there is a huge cultural difference between China and the Western countries.In order to get more clicks，you’d better tell me which Chinese culture you Westerners prefer.What’s more，if I want to decorate my website with some Chinese elements，what should I do Knowing you are interested in China，I do believe you can help me solve these puzzles.
If possible，you can reply to me as soon as possible.I will take your advice into consideration.I really appreciate your help.
Yours truly，
Li Hua(共20张PPT)
好奇与吃惊&求助信
第6周
单词词块 stun vt.使惊愕→stunned adj.(因惊讶、震惊而)目瞪口呆的 open-mouthed adj.瞠目结舌的，目瞪口呆的 wide-eyed adj.(因恐惧、惊讶等)睁大眼睛的 gasp in astonishment惊讶得倒吸一口气 blink in surprise吃惊地眨眼 sb’s jaw dropped/fell某人目瞪口呆 give a cry of surprise吃惊地喊出来 take sb aback使某人大吃一惊 raise the eyebrows扬起眉毛 gape at张口结舌地看 be shocked beyond words惊讶得说不出话来
续写语料积累6
情感描写 好奇与吃惊(15分钟)
[头脑风暴]
单词词块 freeze/stand still/stop dead/be numb with shock惊呆了 to one’s amazement/surprise/astonishment令某人吃惊的是 come as a bolt from the blue晴天霹雳 be thrown into astonishment大吃一惊 jump out of one’s skin大吃一惊 in a state of shock震惊不已 knock sb sideways使某人惊讶得不知所措 be astonished with one’s mouth wide open惊讶得张大嘴巴
1.Everyone gasped in astonishment as the cars came around the last bend.汽车转过最后一个弯道时，人人都惊得倒吸了一口气。
2.Hearing the unexpected news，Mary froze with shock，as if rooted to the spot.
听到这个意外的消息，玛丽惊呆了，动弹不得。
3.A spark of surprise flashed across his face.He was stunned there，staring at me with wide eyes.
他脸上闪过一丝惊奇。他惊得瞪大眼睛看着我。
4.We froze，our mouths dropping/hanging open in surprise.我们呆住了，惊奇地张大了嘴。
5.My jaw dropped/fell in astonishment when I saw the size of the audience.
看到观众如此之多，我惊讶得目瞪口呆。
6.Tom’s eyes flashed a look of surprise at her，and his face turned pale.汤姆看她时，双眼闪现出一种惊奇的神情，他的脸变得苍白。
7.When Josh heard what Franklin wanted，his mouth opened wide enough to swallow a dentist.(夸张)
当乔希听到富兰克林想要的东西时，他的嘴张得大得足以吞下牙医。
8.When I looked at the grade on my math paper my jaw dropped to the ground.(夸张)看到数学卷子成绩的那一刻，我惊得下巴掉在了地上。
[即时演练]
1.她呆住了，目瞪口呆地看着我。(形容词作状语)
______________________________________________________________
2.她张大嘴巴，瞪着眼，涨红了脸。
______________________________________________________________
3.令我非常吃惊的是，我看到他瘦削的脸上灿烂的笑容，简直不敢相信自己的眼睛。
_______________________，I saw the bright smile on his thin face，and
_______________________.
She froze，and looked at me，open-mouthed.
She opened her mouth with her eyes widening and face turning red.
Much to my surprise
I couldn’t believe my eyes
4.两个月后，我们偶然听到老汤姆去世的消息。这犹如晴天霹雳。
Two months later，we overheard that old Tom had died.______________
_________________.
5.他的考试成绩非常好，让我们惊得下巴都掉在了地上。
His exam results were great， .
It came as a
bolt from the blue
which made our jaws drop to the ground
应用文写作——求助信(30分钟)
求助信是目前自己遇到了一些困难，需要请求对方帮助的信件。因此整篇文章应用一般现在时，当描述自己得到帮助后的进步时应用一般将来时。具体写作结构如下：
[头脑风暴]
1.开头句
(1)I’m writing to you to ask whether you could do me a favour.我写信是想问你能否帮我一个忙。
(2)I am writing in the hope that you will be kind enough to do me a favour.
我写信是希望你能帮我一个忙。
(3)I have some difficulty in doing...，which bothers me a lot.So I have no choice but to turn to you for help.我在做……方面有困难，这很困扰我。所以我别无选择只能向你求助。
(4)I’m wondering if you could take the trouble to help me with...
我想知道你是否能费心帮我……
(5)I’m sorry to bother you，but I have some difficulties here and I need your help.
很抱歉打扰你，但我有些困难需要你的帮助。
2.中间句
(1)I am encountering some problems in...，which troubles me a lot.
我在……方面遇到一些问题，这很困扰我。
(2)What bothers me is that...困扰我的事是……
(3)I’ve found that my problem lies mainly in two aspects.For one thing，...; for another，...
我发现我的问题主要在两个方面。一方面，……；另一方面，……
(4)I have some difficulty not only in...but also in...我不仅在……而且在……方面有困难。
3.结尾句
(1)I believe I will benefit a lot from your valuable and timely advice.
我相信你的宝贵而及时的建议会使我受益匪浅。
(2)I’m sure with your help I can make great progress.我相信在你的帮助下我会取得很大的进步。
(3)I’m eager to get your timely help./I’m eager for your timely help.我渴望得到你及时的帮助。
(4)I would be very grateful if you could help me.../I would appreciate it if you could do me a favour and...如果你能帮助我……我会非常感激。
(5)I’d appreciate it if you could take my request into consideration/
account.
如果你能考虑我的请求，我将不胜感激。
(6)I would be grateful if you could give/lend me a hand.如果你能帮助我，我将十分感激。
[典例展示]
(2024·湘豫名校联考)
假定你是李华，准备参加你校举办的以“快乐阅读，健康视力”为主题的书签设计活动。请你给你的留学生朋友Alick写一封邮件，寻求他的建议和帮助。内容包括：
1.写信目的；2.设计要求(包含绿色、阅读、健康视力三个元素)。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：快乐阅读，健康视力Happy Reading and Maintain Good Vision；书签 bookmark
[范文佳作]
Dear Alick，
I am writing in the hope that you will be kind enough to [1]do me a favor.Our school is planning a bookmark designing activity this week.[2]Knowing that you’re quite experienced in designing，I wonder if you could give me some help and advice.(表明写信目的)
Since the theme of the activity is Happy Reading and Maintain Good Vision，the bookmark should contain such [3]key elements as greenness，reading and healthy vision，and it should be nice to look at.Besides，the bookmark should carry both Chinese and English messages.(说明具体情况)
I believe I will benefit a lot from your valuable and timely advice.I would be very grateful if you are kind enough to lend me a hand.Please let me know [4]as soon as possible.(表达感激和希望)
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
亮词美句：[1]帮我个忙 [2]现在分词短语作状语 [3]关键要素 [4]尽快
[即时演练]
(2025·浙江宁波名校联合体联考)
假定你是李华。你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题活动，并在英文网站展示。请你写一封邮件给外国朋友Chris，向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人。邮件内容包括：
1.阐明写信事由；
2.征求建议；
3.表示感谢。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
[参考范文]
Dear Chris，
Word comes that our school is going to hold an activity whose topic is related to traditional Chinese culture.Because this activity will be presented on the English website，I sincerely want you to offer me some advice.
As far as we know，there is a huge cultural difference between China and the Western countries.In order to get more clicks，you’d better tell me which Chinese culture you Westerners prefer.What’s more，if I want to decorate my website with some Chinese elements，what should I do Knowing you are interested in China，I do believe you can help me solve these puzzles.
If possible，you can reply to me as soon as possible.I will take your advice into consideration.I really appreciate your help.
Yours truly，
Li Hua
