第14周 环境描写&倡议书
续写语料积累14 环境描写(15分钟)
头脑风暴
短语词块 be bathed in沐浴在 light up照亮，放光彩 shine through照耀 cast through投射 a faint yellow shine微弱的黄色光芒 a beam of amber light一束琥珀色的光 a giant moon一轮巨大的月亮 pale light of the moon苍白的月光 sparkle闪耀 twinkle/wink闪烁 be dotted with点缀着 a starry night繁星满天的夜晚 a tiny stream小溪流 the mighty river浩荡的大河 swift rivers湍急的河流 the running river奔流的河水 winding rivers蜿蜒曲折的河流 green banks绿茵茵的河岸 lofty/grand mountains巍峨的/壮丽的群山 the towering peak高耸的山峰 stand high and steep高耸陡峭 deep valleys深深的山谷 picturesque scenery如画的景色 awe-inspiring nature令人敬畏的大自然 stunning views令人惊叹的景色 breathtaking sunrise令人赞叹的日出 enchanting waterfall迷人的瀑布 peaceful countryside宁静的乡村 rolling hills起伏的山丘 colorful flowers五彩缤纷的花朵 fresh air新鲜空气 majestic mountains雄伟的山脉
1.The stars twinkled like diamonds in the vastness of the night sky.
星星在广阔的夜空中闪烁，犹如钻石一般。
2．The gentle breeze carried the scent of flowers，filling the air with a sweet fragrance.微风轻拂，带着花香，空气中弥漫着甜蜜的芬芳。
3．The moon cast a silvery glow on the landscape，creating an ethereal atmosphere.
月亮投下银色的光辉，营造出一种空灵的氛围。
4．The mountains stood tall and majestic，dominating the landscape.
群山高耸而雄伟，主宰着整个风景。
5．The birdsong filled the air，a cheerful soundtrack to the day.
鸟鸣声弥漫在空气中，成为这一天欢快的配乐。
6．The gentle breeze rustled the leaves，a calming sound in the silence.微风吹拂着树叶，在寂静中发出令人平静的声音。
7．The colors of the autumn leaves were a breathtaking display of nature’s art.
秋天树叶的颜色是大自然艺术的惊人展示。
8．The sun peeked over the horizon，painting the sky with shades of orange and pink.太阳从地平线上升起，给天空染上了橙色和粉色的色调。
9．The waves gently lapped against the shore，creating a soothing symphony of sounds.
海浪轻轻拍打着海岸，奏出一曲舒缓的交响乐。
10．The waterfall thundered down the cliff，an awe-inspiring sight.
瀑布从悬崖上轰鸣而下，构成令人敬畏的景象。
即时演练
1．当我醒来时，那些树已经沐浴在清晨的阳光中了。
When I woke up， .
2．鸟儿在唱歌，空气中充满了笑声，每个人都心情愉快。
Birds were singing，and ，and everyone was in the best of moods.
3．月亮在午夜的天空中熠熠生辉，投射出银色的光芒，在平静的湖面上闪烁。
，casting a silvery glow that reflected off the calm surface of the lake.
4．薄雾笼罩着连绵起伏的小山，营造出一种神秘而迷人的氛围。
，creating a mysterious and enchanting atmosphere.
5．鹅毛般的雪花在夜空中飞舞，构成一幅美丽的画。
，making a beautiful picture.
应用文写作——倡议书(30分钟)
倡议书属于应用文的一种，是为倡议或是发起某项活动而写的号召性的、公开提议性的专用文体。倡议书一般由标题、称呼、正文、结尾、落款五部分组成。具体写作结构如下：
头脑风暴
1．开头句
(1)I am writing to call on everyone to...and take an active part in...
我写信是为了呼吁大家……并积极参加……
(2)On behalf of the Students’ Council，I am writing to call on everyone to take part in...
我代表学生会写信呼吁大家参加……
(3)In order to...，we arrange to organize a(n)．..activity with the theme of “...”，which is designed to...为了……，我们安排组织一个主题为“……”的活动，其目的是……
(4)With the approach of...，our school is planning to organize a(n)．..activity whose theme is...随着……的临近，我们学校正计划组织一次主题为……的……活动。
(5)With the development/wide spread of...，more and more people...随着……的发展/广泛传播，越来越多的人……
(6)Currently，there is an unpleasant phenomenon of...in society.
目前，社会上有一种令人不愉快的……现象。
2．中间句
(1)As we know，...is of great importance for us.正如我们所知，……对我们来说非常重要。
(2)Besides，doing...is also beneficial/harmful to...此外，做……对……也是有益/害的。
(3)To meet the challenge of...，it’s high time that we take/should take action to...为迎接……的挑战，是我们采取行动……的时候了。
(4)As a citizen，we are supposed to...
作为一个公民，我们应该……
(5)It’s everyone’s responsibility to...If we can...，we can make a big difference to...
……是每个人的责任。如果我们能……，我们可以对……产生很大的影响。
3．结尾句
(1)Only if we do...，can we...
只有我们做……，我们才能……
(2)It is high time that we did/should do...Let’s take action right now！是时候该我们做……了。 让我们立即采取行动吧！
(3)Let’s join our hands and take action immediately.让我们携起手来，立即采取行动。
(4)I am convinced that，with our joint efforts，the phenomenon of...will disappear.我相信，在我们的共同努力下，……的现象将会消失。
(5)Let’s take action right now! I’m convinced that our efforts will eventually pay off.
让我们现在就行动起来吧！我相信我们的努力最终会有回报的。
典例展示
假定你是学生会主席李华，你所在的城市刚发布了《电动自行车安全管理条例》。请你代表学生会写一封倡议书，呼吁同学们在骑电动自行车时佩戴头盔。内容包括：
1．骑行者缺乏安全意识；2.说明佩戴头盔的好处；3.呼吁同学们在骑电动车时佩戴头盔。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
范文佳作
Dear fellow students，
A [1]regulation has been [2]issued recently that all citizens shall wear a helmet while riding an electric bicycle.(指出提倡议的背景)
It is a sad but common phenomenon that traffic accidents happen frequently，which [3]poses a great threat to people’s safety—that of electric bicycle riders in particular.As for the possible reasons，the lack of safety awareness is a major one.(骑行者缺乏安全意识)Therefore，top priority should be given to wearing helmets if we are to [4]guarantee the safety of our life.Helmets can undoubtedly protect our head from being struck directly when accidents happen，which can save our life.(说明佩戴头盔的好处)
I’m appealing to all the students of our school who use electric bicycles to obey the regulation and [5]make every effort to put safety in the first place by wearing helmets.(呼吁同学们在骑电动车时佩戴头盔)
The Students’ Council
亮词美句：[1]n.规章制度，规则 [2]v.发表，颁布
[3]对……造成极大的威胁 [4]v.保证 [5]竭尽全力
即时演练
教育部发文要求每个中小学生都应参与志愿服务。寒假将至，假设你是校学生会主席李华，请你在校英语报上发表一封倡议信。内容包括：
1．参加志愿者活动的益处；
2．可以开展的志愿者活动；
3．发出倡议。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear schoolmates，
Volunteering is playing a crucial role in students’ overall development.With the approach of winter vacation，it’s high time that we took up volunteering._______________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
答案精析
续写语料积累14
1．the trees were already bathed in the morning sun
2．the air was filled with laughter
3．The moon shone brightly in the midnight sky
4．The misty fog envelops the rolling hills
5．The feathery snowflakes danced in the night sky
应用文写作 参考范文
Dear schoolmates，
Volunteering is playing a crucial role in students’ overall development.With the approach of winter vacation，it’s high time that we took up volunteering.
A willing heart to volunteer provides us with massive benefits.Volunteering not only makes us feel connected with the community but also is beneficial to our well-being.Blessed with a sense of purpose in life，we are offered an amazing opportunity to learn valuable skills.There are different ways of serving people，ranging from volunteering at children’s home or libraries to virtual volunteering，such as helping pupils with schoolwork online.
Why not throw ourselves into volunteering It makes us a better person and creates a better world.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua(共22张PPT)
环境描写&倡议书
第14周
短语词块 be bathed in沐浴在 light up照亮，放光彩 shine through照耀 cast through投射 a faint yellow shine微弱的黄色光芒 a beam of amber light一束琥珀色的光 a giant moon一轮巨大的月亮 pale light of the moon苍白的月光 sparkle闪耀 twinkle/wink闪烁 be dotted with点缀着 a starry night繁星满天的夜晚 a tiny stream小溪流 the mighty river浩荡的大河 swift rivers湍急的河流 the running river奔流的河水 winding rivers蜿蜒曲折的河流 green banks绿茵茵的河岸 lofty/grand mountains巍峨的/壮丽的群山
[头脑风暴]
续写语料积累14
环境描写(15分钟)
短语词块 the towering peak高耸的山峰 stand high and steep高耸陡峭 deep valleys深深的山谷 picturesque scenery如画的景色 awe-inspiring nature令人敬畏的大自然 stunning views令人惊叹的景色 breathtaking sunrise令人赞叹的日出 enchanting waterfall迷人的瀑布 peaceful countryside宁静的乡村 rolling hills起伏的山丘 colorful flowers五彩缤纷的花朵 fresh air新鲜空气 majestic mountains雄伟的山脉
1.The stars twinkled like diamonds in the vastness of the night sky.
星星在广阔的夜空中闪烁，犹如钻石一般。
2.The gentle breeze carried the scent of flowers，filling the air with a sweet fragrance.微风轻拂，带着花香，空气中弥漫着甜蜜的芬芳。
3.The moon cast a silvery glow on the landscape，creating an ethereal atmosphere.
月亮投下银色的光辉，营造出一种空灵的氛围。
4.The mountains stood tall and majestic，dominating the landscape.群山高耸而雄伟，主宰着整个风景。
5.The birdsong filled the air，a cheerful soundtrack to the day.
鸟鸣声弥漫在空气中，成为这一天欢快的配乐。
6.The gentle breeze rustled the leaves，a calming sound in the silence.
微风吹拂着树叶，在寂静中发出令人平静的声音。
7.The colors of the autumn leaves were a breathtaking display of nature’s art.
秋天树叶的颜色是大自然艺术的惊人展示。
8.The sun peeked over the horizon，painting the sky with shades of orange and pink.太阳从地平线上升起，给天空染上了橙色和粉色的色调。
9.The waves gently lapped against the shore，creating a soothing symphony of sounds.
海浪轻轻拍打着海岸，奏出一曲舒缓的交响乐。
10.The waterfall thundered down the cliff，an awe-inspiring sight.
瀑布从悬崖上轰鸣而下，构成令人敬畏的景象。
[即时演练]
1.当我醒来时，那些树已经沐浴在清晨的阳光中了。
When I woke up， .
2.鸟儿在唱歌，空气中充满了笑声，每个人都心情愉快。
Birds were singing，and ，and everyone was in the best of moods.
3.月亮在午夜的天空中熠熠生辉，投射出银色的光芒，在平静的湖面上闪烁。
，casting a silvery glow that reflected off the calm surface of the lake.
the trees were already bathed in the morning sun
the air was filled with laughter
The moon shone brightly in the midnight sky
4.薄雾笼罩着连绵起伏的小山，营造出一种神秘而迷人的氛围。
，creating a mysterious and enchanting atmosphere.
5.鹅毛般的雪花在夜空中飞舞，构成一幅美丽的画。
，making a beautiful picture.
The misty fog envelops the rolling hills
The feathery snowflakes danced in the night sky
应用文写作——倡议书(30分钟)
倡议书属于应用文的一种，是为倡议或是发起某项活动而写的号召性的、公开提议性的专用文体。倡议书一般由标题、称呼、正文、结尾、落款五部分组成。具体写作结构如下：
[头脑风暴]
1.开头句
(1)I am writing to call on everyone to...and take an active part in...
我写信是为了呼吁大家……并积极参加……
(2)On behalf of the Students’ Council，I am writing to call on everyone to take part in...
我代表学生会写信呼吁大家参加……
(3)In order to...，we arrange to organize a(n)...activity with the theme of “...”，which is designed to...为了……，我们安排组织一个主题为“……”的活动，其目的是……
(4)With the approach of...，our school is planning to organize a(n)...activity whose theme is...
随着……的临近，我们学校正计划组织一次主题为……的……活动。
(5)With the development/wide spread of...，more and more people...
随着……的发展/广泛传播，越来越多的人……
(6)Currently，there is an unpleasant phenomenon of...in society.
目前，社会上有一种令人不愉快的……现象。
2.中间句
(1)As we know，...is of great importance for us.
正如我们所知，……对我们来说非常重要。
(2)Besides，doing...is also beneficial/harmful to...此外，做……对……也是有益/害的。
(3)To meet the challenge of...，it’s high time that we take/should take action to...为迎接……的挑战，是我们采取行动……的时候了。
(4)As a citizen，we are supposed to...
作为一个公民，我们应该……
(5)It’s everyone’s responsibility to...If we can...，we can make a big difference to...
……是每个人的责任。如果我们能……，我们可以对……产生很大的影响。
3.结尾句
(1)Only if we do...，can we...
只有我们做……，我们才能……
(2)It is high time that we did/should do...Let’s take action right now！是时候该我们做……了。 让我们立即采取行动吧！
(3)Let’s join our hands and take action immediately.让我们携起手来，立即采取行动。
(4)I am convinced that，with our joint efforts，the phenomenon of...will disappear.我相信，在我们的共同努力下，……的现象将会消失。
(5)Let’s take action right now! I’m convinced that our efforts will eventually pay off.让我们现在就行动起来吧！我相信我们的努力最终会有回报的。
[典例展示]
假定你是学生会主席李华，你所在的城市刚发布了《电动自行车安全管理条例》。请你代表学生会写一封倡议书，呼吁同学们在骑电动自行车时佩戴头盔。内容包括：
1.骑行者缺乏安全意识；2.说明佩戴头盔的好处；3.呼吁同学们在骑电动车时佩戴头盔。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
[范文佳作]
Dear fellow students，
A [1]regulation has been [2]issued recently that all citizens shall wear a helmet while riding an electric bicycle.(指出提倡议的背景)
It is a sad but common phenomenon that traffic accidents happen frequently，which [3]poses a great threat to people’s safety—that of electric bicycle riders in particular.As for the possible reasons，the lack of safety awareness is a major one.(骑行者缺乏安全意识)Therefore，
top priority should be given to wearing helmets if we are to [4]guarantee the safety of our life.Helmets can undoubtedly protect our head from being struck directly when accidents happen，which can save our life.(说明佩戴头盔的好处)
I’m appealing to all the students of our school who use electric bicycles to obey the regulation and [5]make every effort to put safety in the first place by wearing helmets.(呼吁同学们在骑电动车时佩戴头盔)
The Students’ Council
亮词美句：[1]n.规章制度，规则 [2]v.发表，颁布 [3]对……造成极大的威胁 [4]v.保证 [5]竭尽全力
[即时演练]
教育部发文要求每个中小学生都应参与志愿服务。寒假将至，假设你是校学生会主席李华，请你在校英语报上发表一封倡议信。内容包括：
1.参加志愿者活动的益处；
2.可以开展的志愿者活动；
3.发出倡议。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear schoolmates，
Volunteering is playing a crucial role in students’ overall development.With the approach of winter vacation，it’s high time that we took up volunteering.__________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
[参考范文]
Dear schoolmates，
Volunteering is playing a crucial role in students’ overall development.With the approach of winter vacation，it’s high time that we took up volunteering.
A willing heart to volunteer provides us with massive benefits.
Volunteering not only makes us feel connected with the community but also is beneficial to our well-being.Blessed with a sense of purpose in life，we are offered an amazing opportunity to learn valuable skills.
There are different ways of serving people，ranging from volunteering at children’s home or libraries to virtual volunteering，such as helping pupils with schoolwork online.
Why not throw ourselves into volunteering It makes us a better person and creates a better world.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
