第15周 对话描写&人物介绍
续写语料积累15 对话描写(15分钟)
头脑风暴
单词词块 whisper轻声细语 sigh叹息 repeat重复地说 rant咆哮 yell大叫 shout高声喊道 scream尖叫 growl低声吼叫 warn警告 howl怒吼 mumble咕哝 murmur低声说 mutter嘀咕 sniff嗤之以鼻 stammer结巴 continue继续说 emphasize强调 swear发誓 persuade劝说 praise赞扬 promise承诺 apologize道歉 beg乞求 agree同意 reply回复 add补充道 decide决定 demand强烈要求 declare宣称 announce郑重地说
在对话中加入语气、嗓音、情感或神态等，让对话描写更生动传神。
1．“I would love to，” said Emily in a pleasant tone.埃米莉用悦耳的语调说道：“我很乐意。”
2．“I didn’t mean to，” she murmured in a low voice.她低声喃喃道：“我不是故意的。”
3．Charles raced to me and cried in excitement，“You did great! I am so proud of you！”
查尔斯飞快地跑向我，激动地喊道：“你表现得非常好！我为你感到骄傲！”
4．“How can you do this！” she said angrily.
她生气地说：“你怎么能这样做！”
5．“David，running is your favorite sport，right？” I said to him with a smile.我对他微笑着说：“大卫，跑步是你最喜欢的运动，对吗？”
即时演练
1．“没什么。”罗茜心不在焉地说。
“Nothing，” Rosie .
2．“是巴顿先生的房子，妈妈。让我去帮忙吧！”他用急切而又激动的语气说道。
“It is Mr Barton’s house，Mother.Do let me go！” .
3．“恐怕我不行。”我弱弱地说，低下了头。
“I’m afraid I can’t make it，” I .
4．我还在看着那个男人和他的家人离开我的视线时，我的朋友走过来问我：“你在看什么？”
I was still when my friend came up to me ，“What are you looking at？”
5．“你会来看我吗？”她问道，眼里噙满着泪水。
“Will you come back to see me？” she asked， .
应用文写作——人物介绍(30分钟)
人物介绍的文章一般都是对所写之人的基本概况(如年龄、出生地、家庭背景、受教育情况等)作简单的概述，继而再叙述其事迹或在某个领域中做出的贡献，最后对其进行评价。具体写作结构如下：
头脑风暴
1．开头句
(1)The person I admire most is...
我最敬佩的人是……
(2)Of all the outstanding people，I admire...most.在所有杰出的人当中，我最钦佩……
(3)There are many respectable people around us.The one I admire most is...
我们周围有许多可敬的人。我最崇拜的人是……
(4)When it comes to the person who I think highly of，I would say...without hesitation.
说到我高度评价的人，我会毫不犹豫地说……
2．中间句
(1)Born in...，on...，...is one of...
出生在……，在……，……是……之一。
(2)Graduating from...，he worked as...
毕业于……，他担任……
(3)In order to...，he made up his mind to do...为了……，他决定做……
(4)With strong will and great determination，he achieved the great success in...凭借坚强的意志和决心，他在……方面取得了巨大的成功。
(5)Despite many difficulties，he/she managed to overcome them.
尽管有许多困难，他/她还是设法克服了。
(6)He/She put his/her heart into...and made great contributions to...他/她全身心投入……中去，为……做出了巨大贡献。
3．结尾句
(1)As a great...，he/she will be remembered by us forever.
作为一个伟大的……，他/她将永远被我们铭记。
(2)It is his determination that inspires me to go on when I have difficulty in learning.
是他的决心激励我在学习上有困难时继续前进。
(3)Having set a great example for us，he is an excellent person who fully deserves our admiration and respect.
他为我们树立了一个很好的榜样，是一个完全值得我们钦佩和尊重的优秀的人。
(4)It’s her/his encouragement that contributes to shaping my personalities and inspires me to accomplish my goals persistently.
正是她/他的鼓励，有助于塑造我的个性，激励我坚持不懈地完成目标。
(5)．..is such an respectable and admirable person that I will model myself after...and be a person like...……是一个令人尊敬和钦佩的人，我将以……为榜样，做一个像……的人。
典例展示
(2023·全国甲)
你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1．人物简介及事迹；2.意义或启示。
注意：1.写作词数应为100个左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
范文佳作
Confucius is a well-known figure in Chinese history.His teachings [1]emphasized the importance of moral values，respect for elders，and social harmony.Confucius traveled throughout the country，imparting his wisdom to countless disciples and leaving a [2]profound impact on Chinese society.(提出重要历史人物)
The significance of Confucius [3]cannot be overstated.His teachings [4]shaped the moral and ethical foundation of Chinese culture，fostering respect for authority，harmonious relationships，and the pursuit of knowledge.Even today，his ideas continue to guide individuals and communities in China and beyond.(意义)
Confucius’s teachings about [5]self-cultivation，respect for elders，and the pursuit of knowledge serve as a guiding light in our fast-paced and interconnected world，[6]which remind us of the importance of integrity，compassion，and social responsibility.(启示)
亮词美句：[1]强调……的重要性 [2]adj.深远的，巨大的 [3]无论怎么强调都不过分 [4]vt.形成，影响 [5]n.修养，修身 [6]which引导的非限制性定语从句
即时演练
你校正在组织英语作文比赛，请你以The Person I Admire Most为题写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：
1．人物简介；2.他/她值得钦佩的原因。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
The Person I Admire Most
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
答案精析
续写语料积累15
1．said in an absent way
2．he said in eager and excited tones
3．said weakly，lowering my head
4．watching that man and his family walk just out of sight and asked
5．tears welling up in her eyes
应用文写作 参考范文
The Person I Admire Most
When it comes to the person I admire most，I can’t help thinking of Fan Jinshi，who is an archaeologist and a guard of Dunhuang.
After graduating from Peking University，Fan Jinshi chose to work in Mogao Caves，Dunhuang.Although the living environment was terrible，she was deeply attracted by the works of art and desired to protect them for the future generations.She and her team overcame difficulties，explored scientific concepts and built a “digital Dunhuang”，which has balanced the relationship between cultural relics protection and tourism.
Fan Jinshi is called the daughter of Dunhuang.She deserves the respect of all at home and abroad.(共20张PPT)
步步高 英语 大一轮复习
对话描写&人物介绍
第15周
单词词块 whisper轻声细语 sigh叹息 repeat重复地说 rant咆哮 yell大叫 shout高声喊道 scream尖叫 growl低声吼叫 warn警告 howl怒吼 mumble咕哝 murmur低声说 mutter嘀咕 sniff嗤之以鼻 stammer结巴 continue继续说 emphasize强调 swear发誓 persuade劝说 praise赞扬 promise承诺 apologize道歉 beg乞求 agree同意 reply回复 add补充道 decide决定 demand强烈要求 declare宣称 announce郑重地说
[头脑风暴]
续写语料积累15
对话描写(15分钟)
在对话中加入语气、嗓音、情感或神态等，让对话描写更生动传神。
1.“I would love to，” said Emily in a pleasant tone.
埃米莉用悦耳的语调说道：“我很乐意。”
2.“I didn’t mean to，” she murmured in a low voice.
她低声喃喃道：“我不是故意的。”
3.Charles raced to me and cried in excitement，“You did great! I am so proud of you！”查尔斯飞快地跑向我，激动地喊道：“你表现得非常好！我为你感到骄傲！”
4.“How can you do this！” she said angrily.
她生气地说：“你怎么能这样做！”
5.“David，running is your favorite sport，right？” I said to him with a smile.我对他微笑着说：“大卫，跑步是你最喜欢的运动，对吗？”
[即时演练]
1.“没什么。”罗茜心不在焉地说。
“Nothing，” Rosie .
2.“是巴顿先生的房子，妈妈。让我去帮忙吧！”他用急切而又激动的语气说道。
“It is Mr Barton’s house，Mother.Do let me go！”___________________
____________.
3.“恐怕我不行。”我弱弱地说，低下了头。
“I’m afraid I can’t make it，” I .
he said in eager and excited tones
said weakly，lowering my head
said in an absent way
4.我还在看着那个男人和他的家人离开我的视线时，我的朋友走过来问我：“你在看什么？”
I was still when my friend came up to me ，“What are you looking at？”
5.“你会来看我吗？”她问道，眼里噙满着泪水。
“Will you come back to see me？” she asked， .
watching that man and his family walk just out of sight
and asked
tears welling up in her eyes
应用文写作——人物介绍(30分钟)
人物介绍的文章一般都是对所写之人的基本概况(如年龄、出生地、家庭背景、受教育情况等)作简单的概述，继而再叙述其事迹或在某个领域中做出的贡献，最后对其进行评价。具体写作结构如下：
[头脑风暴]
1.开头句
(1)The person I admire most is...
我最敬佩的人是……
(2)Of all the outstanding people，I admire...most.在所有杰出的人当中，我最钦佩……
(3)There are many respectable people around us.The one I admire most is...我们周围有许多可敬的人。我最崇拜的人是……
(4)When it comes to the person who I think highly of，I would say...without hesitation.
说到我高度评价的人，我会毫不犹豫地说……
2.中间句
(1)Born in...，on...，...is one of...
出生在……，在……，……是……之一。
(2)Graduating from...，he worked as...
毕业于……，他担任……
(3)In order to...，he made up his mind to do...
为了……，他决定做……
(4)With strong will and great determination，he achieved the great success in...凭借坚强的意志和决心，他在……方面取得了巨大的成功。
(5)Despite many difficulties，he/she managed to overcome them.
尽管有许多困难，他/她还是设法克服了。
(6)He/She put his/her heart into...and made great contributions to...他/她全身心投入……中去，为……做出了巨大贡献。
3.结尾句
(1)As a great...，he/she will be remembered by us forever.
作为一个伟大的……，他/她将永远被我们铭记。
(2)It is his determination that inspires me to go on when I have difficulty in learning.
是他的决心激励我在学习上有困难时继续前进。
(3)Having set a great example for us，he is an excellent person who fully deserves our admiration and respect.他为我们树立了一个很好的榜样，是一个完全值得我们钦佩和尊重的优秀的人。
(4)It’s her/his encouragement that contributes to shaping my personalities and inspires me to accomplish my goals persistently.正是她/他的鼓励，有助于塑造我的个性，激励我坚持不懈地完成目标。
(5)...is such an respectable and admirable person that I will model myself after...and be a person like...……是一个令人尊敬和钦佩的人，我将以……为榜样，做一个像……的人。
[典例展示]
(2023·全国甲)
你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1.人物简介及事迹；
2.意义或启示。
注意：1.写作词数应为100个左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
[范文佳作]
Confucius is a well-known figure in Chinese history.His teachings [1]emphasized the importance of moral values，respect for elders，and social harmony.Confucius traveled throughout the country，imparting his wisdom to countless disciples and leaving a [2]profound impact on Chinese society.(提出重要历史人物)
The significance of Confucius [3]cannot be overstated.His teachings [4]shaped the moral and ethical foundation of Chinese culture，fostering respect for authority，harmonious relationships，and the pursuit of knowledge.Even today，his ideas continue to guide individuals and communities in China and beyond.(意义)
Confucius’s teachings about [5]self-cultivation，respect for elders，and the pursuit of knowledge serve as a guiding light in our fast-paced and interconnected world，[6]which remind us of the importance of integrity，compassion，and social responsibility.(启示)
亮词美句：[1]强调……的重要性 [2]adj.深远的，巨大的 [3]无论怎么强调都不过分 [4]vt.形成，影响 [5]n.修养，修身 [6]which引导的非限制性定语从句
[即时演练]
你校正在组织英语作文比赛，请你以The Person I Admire Most为题写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：
1.人物简介；
2.他/她值得钦佩的原因。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
The Person I Admire Most
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
[参考范文]
The Person I Admire Most
When it comes to the person I admire most，I can’t help thinking of Fan Jinshi，who is an archaeologist and a guard of Dunhuang.
After graduating from Peking University，Fan Jinshi chose to work in Mogao Caves，Dunhuang.Although the living environment was terrible，she was deeply attracted by the works of art and desired to protect them for the future generations.She and her team overcame difficulties，explored scientific concepts and built a “digital Dunhuang”，
which has balanced the relationship between cultural relics protection and tourism.
Fan Jinshi is called the daughter of Dunhuang.She deserves the respect of all at home and abroad.
