第17周 读后续写主题练2 家庭生活
家庭生活类的读后续写语篇的主题语境一般为“人与自我”。该主题一般围绕主人公与家人之间发生的日常生活事件展开，通常可分为两大类：
第一类是相亲相爱的锦上添花
常见话题有：纪念重要日子(如举办惊喜生日派对、送生日礼物、母亲节、父亲节等)、父母教孩子学习新技能或孩子为长辈解决困难。这一类整体基调是快乐的、积极的、充满爱的。最后加上收获、开心、感恩等。
第二类是解决小误会/小矛盾的握手言和
此类故事模型通常为：
第一步：冲突构造(误会、犯错等) 只有冲突才能体会亲情的弥足珍贵。冲突原因大致有：疏于陪伴、理念不合(代沟)、误会等。
第二步：冲突化解(解释、道歉、弥补、回忆等)
第三步：亲情升华(诚实、珍惜等)
该主题下的语篇蕴含浓厚的育人价值，即培养学生的家庭责任感，引导中学生思考与亲人之间的关系，进而领悟到要珍惜平淡、温暖的亲情，意识到家庭和睦、家人间的关爱、尊重和有效沟通非常重要。此类语篇的结尾宜在以上方面进行主题升华。
高分句式
1．冲突构造(误会、犯错等)
生气
He folded his fist angrily，but his younger brother waved his hands excitedly.
他生气地握紧拳头，但是弟弟却激动地挥着手。
Jackson kept saying something，but so angry was Carter that he couldn’t even hear a word.
杰克逊不停地说着什么，但卡特太生气了，他一个字也听不进去。
后悔
Filled with guilt，I rushed out to apologize to Tom.我满怀内疚，冲出去向汤姆道歉。
I deeply regret not being more understanding and considerate of your feelings.
我很后悔没有更多地理解和体谅你的感受。
内疚
Thinking about what I had done to him，regret and guilt overwhelmed me like endless tides.
一想到我对他所做的一切，遗憾和内疚就像无休止的潮水一样向我涌来。
Whenever I thought of Henry’s wet book，my face turned red.
每当我想到亨利湿了的书，我的脸都会通红。
烦恼
Watching Shirley’s smile fading away，Peter frowned.
看着雪莉的微笑渐渐消失，彼得皱起了眉头。
I was seized by a sense of being disturbed.
我感到被烦扰了。
伤心
He shook his head sadly，tears rolling down his cheeks.他难过地摇摇头，潸然泪下。
Amanda felt as gray as the sky outside when she looked across the table at her three-year-old sister.当阿曼达看着桌子对面三岁的妹妹时，她感觉她的心情像外面的天空一样灰暗。
2．冲突化解(解释、道歉、弥补、回忆等)
道歉
“I’m so sorry，” he said，gently petting Jackson’s head.
“对不起，”他说道，轻轻地抚摸着杰克逊的头。
He put down his hand，glanced cautiously at Carter and lowered his head.他放下手，小心翼翼地看了卡特一眼，然后低下了头。
原谅
So ashamed did she feel that she was close to tears/she was on the verge of tears.
她羞愧到快哭了。
His mother silenced him by gently putting her finger on his lips，gave a soft kiss on his forehead and walked out of the study.
他妈妈把手指放在他嘴唇边让他停止说话，在他额头上吻了一下，然后走出了书房。
开心
“I want to surprise you！” he pointed at a neatly wrapped box with his eyes gleaming.
“我想给你一个惊喜！”他指向一个包装精美的盒子，眼里闪烁着光芒。
Seeing his family sitting together and staying together harmoniously，Carter felt a surge of happiness.看到他的家人围坐着，和谐地待在一起，卡特感觉幸福满满。
Cheerful singing floating in the room，the two sisters immersed themselves in the beauty of the music.欢快的歌声飘荡在房间里，两姐妹沉浸在音乐的美妙中。
感激
But for Henry’s help，I wouldn’t have finished my performance smoothly.如果没有亨利的帮助，我就不会顺利地完成我的演出了。
Tears of joy welled up in their eyes as the brother and sister hugged tightly together.兄妹俩紧紧拥抱在一起时，他们的眼里涌出喜悦的泪水。
3．亲情升华(诚实、珍惜等)
From then on，my father’s words have always sounded in my ears from time to time，guiding the way of my life.从那时起，我父亲的话时不时在我耳边响起，指引着我生活的方向。
It dawned on me that the precious lesson taught by my Dad would definitely guide the way of my future.我突然想到，我父亲教我的宝贵的一课肯定会指引我未来的道路。
It was Henry’s kindness that made me feel the warmth from our family.I will treasure it with all my heart.正是亨利的善良让我感受到了我们家庭的温暖。我会用心珍惜它的。
Only at that moment did I realize why my father let me have the money—it was his expectation for my future，his encouragement and quiet love.And that was something I might never surpass.
那一刻，我才明白父亲为什么要给我这笔钱——那是他对我未来的期待，是他的鼓励和默默的爱。那是我可能永远无法超越的。
A surge of happiness and warmth running through her，Mom kissed the two sisters gently.
一股幸福与温暖流遍全身，妈妈轻轻地亲了两姐妹。
The early morning sunlight streaming in，the whole family was bathed in happiness and love.
清晨的阳光照进来，全家人沉浸在幸福和爱中。
The warm golden sunlight flooded in through the window and warmed us up.
温暖的金色阳光透过窗户照进来温暖了我们。
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阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE
The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day.How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed.They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge.They had watched their mother in the kitchen.There was nothing to it.Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.
The big day came at last.The alarm rang at 6 a．m.The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen.They decided to boil the porridge first.They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast.Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk.Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture.Next，Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan.Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread.The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds.Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread.This time，she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.
Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake.The next minute，the porridge boiled over and put out the fire.Jenna panicked.Thankfully，Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly.But the stove was a mess now.Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge.But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain.Jenna made him put his hand in cold water.Then she caught the smell of burning.Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.
注意：续写词数应为150个左右。
As the twins looked around them in disappointment，their father appeared.________________
________________________________________________________________________________
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.______________________
________________________________________________________________________________
范文佳作
As the twins looked around them in disappointment，their father appeared.“Dad，sorry，it was such a mess，” Jeff [1]murmured，[2]lowering his head in shame.“No time to make mum a breakfast now，” Jenna cried with regret，guilt overwhelming her [3]like endless tides.Patting them gently on the shoulders，father said in a warm voice，“Darling，it’s love that counts.Let’s do this again together！” [4]To their relief，with the guidance of Father，they successfully made the breakfast.
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.“Surprise! Happy Mother’s Day，mummy！” They said，throwing their arms into the air.[5]Shocked and proud，their mother said in a sweet whisper，“Thanks，my kids.”Then，Mother bit into the French toast，saying that it was the most delicious one she had ever tasted.At that time，Father entered the room and said in a loud voice that he also wanted a bite.All of them laughed with happiness，the laughter [6]echoing in the room.A golden shaft of sunlight，[7]filtering in through the window, together with love between family members，warmed up two young souls.
亮词美句：[1]v.轻声地说 [2]低下头 [3]像无尽的潮水 [4]令他们宽慰的是 [5]形容词作状语 [6]在房间里回荡 [7]现在分词短语作定语
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The Refrigerator Boxes
It couldn’t have been easy for my mom—a single mother with three energetic kids aged ten to sixteen，who worked long hours to provide us with clothing and food.Somehow she did it，keeping us busy and out of trouble.Sometimes she had to be really creative.
One Christmas，Mom came home from work with three boxes...three refrigerator boxes.Seriously.Refrigerator boxes.That weekend，she sent us out to the garage with those boxes and several cans of paint.Our only instructions were to paint them however we wanted.We had no idea what those boxes would be used for and I painted mine in my favorite color：bright purple.After our day of painting，my siblings and I put those boxes out of our minds and began to look forward to Christmas Day.We knew Mom didn’t have a lot of extra money，we shopped at the thrift store for school clothes，gathered supplies at Pic’N’Save，and bought day-old bread at a local bakery.But that certainly didn’t keep me from wanting something very special that year.I knew，though，it was unlikely.
Christmas Eve came.We talked about what we hoped would be under the tree.My sixteen-year-old sister desired a beanbag chair，my brother mentioned his drum set；I，as the youngest child，wanted an all-for-me bicycle! I kept telling myself that it wasn’t going to happen.I would be happy with whatever my mom gave me.We headed for home and opened our stockings.As always，they were full of candy，small toys，and a pair of socks.We drank hot cocoa and sang a few more carols.Then it was off to bed.On Christmas morning，after eating eggs，bacon，and toast，we ran to the living room.
注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Seeing the refrigerator boxes under the tree，we were frozen there._______________________
________________________________________________________________________________
We were wondering at these gifts when my mom appeared.____________________________
________________________________________________________________________________
答案精析
参考范文
Seeing the refrigerator boxes under the tree，we were frozen there.We exchanged our eyes and wondered what would be in the huge boxes we had painted.Mom smiled gently and signaled us to open them.To our surprise，we found our long-anticipated gifts.In my sister’s box was a bright red beanbag chair.My brother found a refurbished drum set in his box.And in mine My very first，all-for-me purple bicycle! Exactly what I wanted! It too was refurbished，but that didn’t matter.We all got our Christmas gifts!
We were wondering at these gifts when my mom appeared.We hugged mom and wished each other “Merry Christmas”．Mom once again made a Christmas wish come true.Yes，it couldn’t have been easy，but somehow，my mom made that Christmas one of the best I’d ever had.Inside the huge box was not only my desired gift，but also a mother’s love for her children，a giant box of love! She loved us in the way maybe no other mom would do and I had the best mom in the world.(共26张PPT)
读后续写主题练2 家庭生活
第17周
家庭生活类的读后续写语篇的主题语境一般为“人与自我”。该主题一般围绕主人公与家人之间发生的日常生活事件展开，通常可分为两大类：
第一类是相亲相爱的锦上添花
常见话题有：纪念重要日子(如举办惊喜生日派对、送生日礼物、母亲节、父亲节等)、父母教孩子学习新技能或孩子为长辈解决困难。这一类整体基调是快乐的、积极的、充满爱的。最后加上收获、开心、感恩等。
第二类是解决小误会/小矛盾的握手言和
此类故事模型通常为：
第一步：冲突构造(误会、犯错等) 只有冲突才能体会亲情的弥足珍贵。冲突原因大致有：疏于陪伴、理念不合(代沟)、误会等。
第二步：冲突化解(解释、道歉、弥补、回忆等)
第三步：亲情升华(诚实、珍惜等)
该主题下的语篇蕴含浓厚的育人价值，即培养学生的家庭责任感，引导中学生思考与亲人之间的关系，进而领悟到要珍惜平淡、温暖的亲情，意识到家庭和睦、家人间的关爱、尊重和有效沟通非常重要。此类语篇的结尾宜在以上方面进行主题升华。
[高分句式]
1.冲突构造(误会、犯错等)
生气
He folded his fist angrily，but his younger brother waved his hands excitedly.
他生气地握紧拳头，但是弟弟却激动地挥着手。
Jackson kept saying something，but so angry was Carter that he couldn’t even hear a word.
杰克逊不停地说着什么，但卡特太生气了，他一个字也听不进去。
后悔
Filled with guilt，I rushed out to apologize to Tom.我满怀内疚，冲出去向汤姆道歉。
I deeply regret not being more understanding and considerate of your feelings.
我很后悔没有更多地理解和体谅你的感受。
内疚
Thinking about what I had done to him，regret and guilt overwhelmed me like endless tides.
一想到我对他所做的一切，遗憾和内疚就像无休止的潮水一样向我涌来。
Whenever I thought of Henry’s wet book，my face turned red.
每当我想到亨利湿了的书，我的脸都会通红。
烦恼
Watching Shirley’s smile fading away，Peter frowned.
看着雪莉的微笑渐渐消失，彼得皱起了眉头。
I was seized by a sense of being disturbed.
我感到被烦扰了。
伤心
He shook his head sadly，tears rolling down his cheeks.他难过地摇摇头，潸然泪下。
Amanda felt as gray as the sky outside when she looked across the table at her three-year-old sister.
当阿曼达看着桌子对面三岁的妹妹时，她感觉她的心情像外面的天空一样灰暗。
2.冲突化解(解释、道歉、弥补、回忆等)
道歉
“I’m so sorry，” he said，gently petting Jackson’s head.
“对不起，”他说道，轻轻地抚摸着杰克逊的头。
He put down his hand，glanced cautiously at Carter and lowered his head.他放下手，小心翼翼地看了卡特一眼，然后低下了头。
原谅
So ashamed did she feel that she was close to tears/she was on the verge of tears.她羞愧到快哭了。
His mother silenced him by gently putting her finger on his lips，gave a soft kiss on his forehead and walked out of the study.
他妈妈把手指放在他嘴唇边让他停止说话，在他额头上吻了一下，然后走出了书房。
开心
“I want to surprise you！” he pointed at a neatly wrapped box with his eyes gleaming.
“我想给你一个惊喜！”他指向一个包装精美的盒子，眼里闪烁着光芒。
Seeing his family sitting together and staying together harmoniously，Carter felt a surge of happiness.看到他的家人围坐着，和谐地待在一起，卡特感觉幸福满满。
Cheerful singing floating in the room，the two sisters immersed themselves in the beauty of the music.
欢快的歌声飘荡在房间里，两姐妹沉浸在音乐的美妙中。
感激
But for Henry’s help，I wouldn’t have finished my performance smoothly.如果没有亨利的帮助，我就不会顺利地完成我的演出了。
Tears of joy welled up in their eyes as the brother and sister hugged tightly together.兄妹俩紧紧拥抱在一起时，他们的眼里涌出喜悦的泪水。
3.亲情升华(诚实、珍惜等)
From then on，my father’s words have always sounded in my ears from time to time，guiding the way of my life.从那时起，我父亲的话时不时在我耳边响起，指引着我生活的方向。
It dawned on me that the precious lesson taught by my Dad would definitely guide the way of my future.我突然想到，我父亲教我的宝贵的一课肯定会指引我未来的道路。
It was Henry’s kindness that made me feel the warmth from our family.I will treasure it with all my heart.正是亨利的善良让我感受到了我们家庭的温暖。我会用心珍惜它的。
Only at that moment did I realize why my father let me have the money—it was his expectation for my future，his encouragement and quiet love.And that was something I might never surpass.
那一刻，我才明白父亲为什么要给我这笔钱——那是他对我未来的期待，是他的鼓励和默默的爱。那是我可能永远无法超越的。
A surge of happiness and warmth running through her，Mom kissed the two sisters gently.一股幸福与温暖流遍全身，妈妈轻轻地亲了两姐妹。
The early morning sunlight streaming in，the whole family was bathed in happiness and love.
清晨的阳光照进来，全家人沉浸在幸福和爱中。
The warm golden sunlight flooded in through the window and warmed us up.
温暖的金色阳光透过窗户照进来温暖了我们。
[典例展示]
(2021·新课标Ⅰ、Ⅱ)
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE
The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day.How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed.They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge.They had watched their mother in the kitchen.There was nothing to it.Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.
The big day came at last.The alarm rang at 6 a.m.The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen.They decided to boil the porridge first.They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast.Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk.Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture.Next，Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan.Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread.The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds.Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread.This time，she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.
Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake.The next minute，the porridge boiled over and put out the fire.Jenna panicked.Thankfully，Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly.But the stove was a mess now.Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge.But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain.Jenna made him put his hand in cold water.Then she caught the smell of burning.Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.
注意：续写词数应为150个左右。
As the twins looked around them in disappointment，their father appeared.______________________________________________________
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.
_______________________________________________________________
[范文佳作]
As the twins looked around them in disappointment，their father appeared.“Dad，sorry，it was such a mess，” Jeff [1]murmured，[2]lowering his head in shame.“No time to make mum a breakfast now，” Jenna cried with regret，guilt overwhelming her [3]like endless tides.Patting them gently on the shoulders，father said in a warm voice，“Darling，it’s love that counts.Let’s do this again together！” [4]To their relief，with the guidance of Father，they successfully made the breakfast.
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.“Surprise! Happy Mother’s Day，mummy！” They said，throwing their arms into the air.[5]Shocked and proud，their mother said in a sweet whisper，“Thanks，my kids.”Then，Mother bit into the French toast，saying that it was the most delicious one she had ever tasted.At that time，Father entered the room and said in a loud voice that he also wanted a bite.All of them laughed with happiness，the laughter [6]echoing in the room.A golden shaft of sunlight，[7]filtering in through the window, together with love between family members，warmed up two young souls.
亮词美句：[1]v.轻声地说 [2]低下头 [3]像无尽的潮水 [4]令他们宽慰的是 [5]形容词作状语 [6]在房间里回荡 [7]现在分词短语作定语
[即时演练]
(2025·福建福州质监)
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The Refrigerator Boxes
It couldn’t have been easy for my mom—a single mother with three energetic kids aged ten to sixteen，who worked long hours to provide us with clothing and food.Somehow she did it，keeping us busy and out of trouble.Sometimes she had to be really creative.
One Christmas，Mom came home from work with three boxes... three refrigerator boxes.Seriously.Refrigerator boxes.That weekend，she sent us out to the garage with those boxes and several cans of paint.Our only instructions were to paint them however we wanted.We had no idea what those boxes would be used for and I painted mine in my favorite color：bright purple.After our day of painting，my siblings and I put those boxes out of our minds and began to look forward to Christmas Day.We knew Mom didn’t have a lot of extra money，we shopped at the thrift store for school clothes，gathered supplies at Pic’N’Save，
and bought day-old bread at a local bakery.But that certainly didn’t keep me from wanting something very special that year.I knew，though，it was unlikely.
Christmas Eve came.We talked about what we hoped would be under the tree.My sixteen-year-old sister desired a beanbag chair，my brother mentioned his drum set；I，as the youngest child，wanted an all-for-me bicycle! I kept telling myself that it wasn’t going to happen.I would be happy with whatever my mom gave me.We headed for home and opened our stockings.As always，they were full of candy，small toys，
and a pair of socks.We drank hot cocoa and sang a few more carols.Then it was off to bed.On Christmas morning，after eating eggs，bacon，and toast，we ran to the living room.
注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Seeing the refrigerator boxes under the tree，we were frozen there.
_______________________________________________________________
We were wondering at these gifts when my mom appeared.________
_______________________________________________________________
[参考范文]
Seeing the refrigerator boxes under the tree，we were frozen there.We exchanged our eyes and wondered what would be in the huge boxes we had painted.Mom smiled gently and signaled us to open them.To our surprise，we found our long-anticipated gifts.In my sister’s box was a bright red beanbag chair.My brother found a refurbished drum set in his box.And in mine My very first，all-for-me purple bicycle! Exactly what I wanted! It too was refurbished，but that didn’t matter.We all got our Christmas gifts!
We were wondering at these gifts when my mom appeared.We hugged mom and wished each other “Merry Christmas”.Mom once again made a Christmas wish come true.Yes，it couldn’t have been easy，but somehow，my mom made that Christmas one of the best I’d ever had.Inside the huge box was not only my desired gift，but also a mother’s love for her children，a giant box of love! She loved us in the way maybe no other mom would do and I had the best mom in the world.
