第18周 读后续写主题练3 助人为乐
助人为乐是中华民族的传统美德，也是读后续写常见的故事类型。由于这类语篇非常适合给学生传达积极向上的正能量，因此颇受出题者的偏爱。
2020年的新课标卷读后续写就是这种类型：梅瑞狄斯太太喜欢帮助别人。一天，她去看望一个贫穷家庭的时候，发现这个家里有一个小男孩，他想挣点钱帮助自己的家庭，但不知道怎么做。梅瑞狄斯太太将这个情况告诉自己的孩子们，孩子们帮小男孩想到了一个好主意——自制爆米花，然后利用放学时间去卖。梅瑞狄斯一家乐于助人，而伯纳德一家人恰好需要帮助，双方最终都得偿所愿，情感自然是激动、感激相互交织。
助人为乐类语篇在续写中可能涉及家庭、学校、工作、生活等方方面面，续写的部分主要有：遭遇困难的绝望、无助、尴尬、窘迫、苦恼等；提供帮助的想法、言语、动作等；受到帮助的感激、感动、温暖等；困难得以解决的开心喜悦等；以及最后主题升华的意识领悟等。
此类文章的写作一般分三步：
第一步：困难描写——消极情绪＋困难处境
情感表现：焦虑、紧张、恐惧、绝望、难过……
肢体动作：心跳加速、手心出汗、双腿发抖……
第二步：助人过程呈现(想到办法＋动作链)
助他型：发现困境→克服困难→提供帮助
他助型：遇到困境→寻求帮助→给予施救
第三步：皆大欢喜结局(感激＋感动＋升华)
问题解决：欣慰、开心、拥抱、感谢……
主旨升华：难忘记忆；赠人玫瑰，传递快乐
高分句式
1．困难描写
His heart beat so violently that he felt like having butterflies in his stomach.
他的心跳如此剧烈，他感到紧张不安。
Lost in the endless forest，she trembled with fright and helplessness.迷失在一望无际的森林里，她因害怕和无助而发抖。
Fear flooded over her，making her shake all over.恐惧向她袭来，她吓得浑身发抖。
At the sight of the wolf，I froze with terror，too scared to move an inch.
一看到那只狼，我吓呆了，不敢动弹。
Desperate and helpless，she knelt down，not knowing what to do next.绝望而无助的她跪了下来，不知道接下来做什么。
2．解决困难后
So grateful to him was the lady that she couldn’t thank him too much.
这位女士非常感激他，她怎么感谢他都不为过。
The driver held my hands tightly，saying in an excited voice，“Thank you.Without your help，I would have been trapped in this abandoned area.”
司机紧紧地握着我的手，激动地说：“谢谢你。没有你的帮助，我就会被困在这个废弃的地方。”
She felt her heart racing and her blood rushing.她感到心跳加速，热血沸腾。
Seeing everything return to normal，he sighed with relief.看到一切恢复正常，他松了一口气。
3．结尾升华句
It is love that makes the world go round and Bernard felt it deep in his little heart.
正是爱让世界转动，伯纳德幼小的心灵深处感受到了这一点。
From then on，I made up my mind to pass on “love” to others.Just as a saying goes，“Roses given，fragrance in hand.”
从那以后，我下定决心向别人传递“爱”。俗话说：“玫瑰予人，手留余香。”
It dawned on me that a simple act could make the world so much better.我恍然大悟，一个简单的行为可以使世界变得如此美好。
Not until then did I realize that it was kindness and love that made our world so warm and beautiful.直到那时候，我才意识到，正是爱和善意让我们的世界如此温暖美丽。
Not only did he keep in mind the help of Meredith’s family，but he also did whatever he could to help those in need.
他不仅把梅瑞狄斯一家的帮助记在心里了，而且他也尽他所能去帮助其他有需要的人。
With grateful tears hanging in her eyes，she kept expressing her gratitude：“Thank you so much！”
她含着感激的泪水，不停地表达感激之情：“太感谢你了！”
典例展示
(2024·新课标Ⅰ、Ⅱ)
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I met Gunter on a cold，wet and unforgettable evening in September.I had planned to fly to Vienna and take a bus to Prague for a conference.Due to a big storm，my flight had been delayed by an hour and a half.I touched down in Vienna just 30 minutes before the departure of the last bus to Prague.The moment I got off the plane，I ran like crazy through the airport building and jumped into the first taxi on the rank without a second thought.
That was when I met Gunter.I told him where I was going，but he said he hadn’t heard of the bus station.I thought my pronunciation was the problem，so I explained again more slowly，but he still looked confused.When I was about to give up，Gunter fished out his little phone and rang up a friend.After a heated discussion that lasted for what seemed like a century，Gunter put his phone down and started the car.
Finally，with just two minutes to spare we rolled into the bus station.Thankfully，there was a long queue(队列) still waiting to board the bus.Gunter parked the taxi behind the bus，turned around，and looked at me with a big smile on his face.“We made it，” he said.
Just then I realised that I had zero cash in my wallet.I flashed him an apologetic smile as I pulled out my Portuguese bank card.He tried it several times，but the card machine just did not play along.A feeling of helplessness washed over me as I saw the bus queue thinning out.
At this moment，Gunter pointed towards the waiting hall of the bus station.There，at the entrance，was a cash machine.I jumped out of the car，made a mad run for the machine，and popped my card in，only to read the message：“Out of order.Sorry.”
注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news._____________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________
Four days later，when I was back in Vienna，I called Gunter as promised.________________
________________________________________________________________________________
范文佳作
I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news.“The cash machine isn’t working，” I managed to say，[1]disappointment evidently in my voice.He looked at me in disbelief，but his shocked expression quickly turned to understanding.Then，he glanced at the nearly empty bus queue and back at me，his gaze steady.“Don’t worry，” he comforted.Flashing him [2]an apologetic smile，I clarified my departure，begged him for a delayed payment and also asked for his phone number.“No problem！” he smiled.Filled with gratitude，I dashed to the bus，stealing a quick glance back at Gunter waving me goodbye.
Four days later，when I was back in Vienna，I called Gunter as promised.[3]Hardly had he hung up the phone when he drove to the station to pick me up，[4]a little surprised but very delighted.Beaming a warm smile at him，I gave him a big hug the moment I saw him.“That’s great！” I shouted.Our conversation flowed merrily and I expressed my [5]profound gratitude，offered to cover the cost of the round trip，plus a generous tip that he humbly tried to refuse.We were chatting for half a day，[6]yet it felt like only a few minutes had flown by.This experience was a reminder [7]that whatever obstacles we encounter，acts of kindness have the power to connect us all and bring out the best in humanity.
亮词美句：[1]独立主格结构 [2]歉然一笑
[3]一……就…… [4]形容词作状语 [5]深深的感激 [6]比喻句 [7]同位语从句
即时演练
(2025·江苏南通崇川区调研)
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
After college graduation，I became an editor of our city evening paper and was promoted to the deputy(副的) editor of the paper five years later.
One day，as I parked my car and walked towards the office，I noticed two boys who appeared to be around eight years old，selling popcorn on the street corner.Curious，I approached them and requested half a kilogram of popcorn.They prepared it for me within five minutes.
“How much is it？” I asked.
“It’s 30 rupees，sir，” they replied.
I then asked their names，and they answered，“Sahib，Asib.”
I asked Sahib why they weren’t in school and were selling popcorn instead.Sahib explained that they were doing it to earn money for their schooling.However，Asib quickly interjected(插话)，saying they had no money left after covering food and medicine，not to mention schooling fees.
“Medicine for what You guys are looking well，” I said.
Asib replied，“Our mother has a kidney(肾) disease，so we need money to purchase medicine for her treatment.”
When I inquired about their father，Sahib sadly shared that he had passed away from cancer four years before，leaving their mother to support them with two jobs.I was deeply moved and struggled to find words.Before leaving，I asked whether they would be there the next day，intending to buy some then.They assured me they would come.
“Take care，boys，” I said as I left.
The next day，I returned to the spot where I had met Sahib and Asib the day before，but they were not selling popcorn as usual，standing there with a single bag of popcorn.Seeing in their eyes that their hearts broke because of sadness，I asked why and they explained that they had been waiting for me but had to leave because their mother’s health had got worse.
注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
I tried to comfort them and decided to do something myself to help the family._____________
________________________________________________________________________________
At my office，I penned down this story and made it public._____________________________
________________________________________________________________________________
答案精析
参考范文
I tried to comfort them and decided to do something myself to help the family.I asked which hospital their mother was in and visited her with the boys.In the hospital，I paid part of fees for their mother，but the cost was too high for me to afford，so I decided to ask the public for help.I wanted to record the stories of these two boys，and used the power of the public to help them.
At my office，I penned down this story and made it public.The story became a hit，receiving a great deal of care and support from readers.Many people were touched by the fact that they were selling popcorn to raise money for their mother.They launched donations to help the boys’ mother treat her illness and pay their school fees.Eventually，their mother was cured，and the boys returned to school.They wrote to me to express their gratitude to the people who helped them，and decided to pass on the acts of kindness and help more people.(共24张PPT)
读后续写主题练3 助人为乐
第18周
助人为乐是中华民族的传统美德，也是读后续写常见的故事类型。由于这类语篇非常适合给学生传达积极向上的正能量，因此颇受出题者的偏爱。
2020年的新课标卷读后续写就是这种类型：梅瑞狄斯太太喜欢帮助别人。一天，她去看望一个贫穷家庭的时候，发现这个家里有一个小男孩，他想挣点钱帮助自己的家庭，但不知道怎么做。梅瑞狄斯太太将这个情况告诉自己的孩子们，孩子们帮小男孩想到了一个好主意——自制爆米花，然后利用放学时间去卖。梅瑞狄斯一家乐于助人，而伯纳德一家人恰好需要帮助，双方最终都得偿所愿，情感自然是激动、感激相互交织。
助人为乐类语篇在续写中可能涉及家庭、学校、工作、生活等方方面面，续写的部分主要有：遭遇困难的绝望、无助、尴尬、窘迫、苦恼等；提供帮助的想法、言语、动作等；受到帮助的感激、感动、温暖等；困难得以解决的开心喜悦等；以及最后主题升华的意识领悟等。
此类文章的写作一般分三步：
第一步：困难描写——消极情绪＋困难处境
情感表现：焦虑、紧张、恐惧、绝望、难过……
肢体动作：心跳加速、手心出汗、双腿发抖……
第二步：助人过程呈现(想到办法＋动作链)
助他型：发现困境→克服困难→提供帮助
他助型：遇到困境→寻求帮助→给予施救
第三步：皆大欢喜结局(感激＋感动＋升华)
问题解决：欣慰、开心、拥抱、感谢……
主旨升华：难忘记忆；赠人玫瑰，传递快乐
[高分句式]
1.困难描写
His heart beat so violently that he felt like having butterflies in his stomach.
他的心跳如此剧烈，他感到紧张不安。
Lost in the endless forest，she trembled with fright and helplessness.迷失在一望无际的森林里，她因害怕和无助而发抖。
Fear flooded over her，making her shake all over.
恐惧向她袭来，她吓得浑身发抖。
At the sight of the wolf，I froze with terror，too scared to move an inch.
一看到那只狼，我吓呆了，不敢动弹。
Desperate and helpless，she knelt down，not knowing what to do next.
绝望而无助的她跪了下来，不知道接下来做什么。
2.解决困难后
So grateful to him was the lady that she couldn’t thank him too much.
这位女士非常感激他，她怎么感谢他都不为过。
The driver held my hands tightly，saying in an excited voice，“Thank you.Without your help，I would have been trapped in this abandoned area.”
司机紧紧地握着我的手，激动地说：“谢谢你。没有你的帮助，我就会被困在这个废弃的地方。”
She felt her heart racing and her blood rushing.
她感到心跳加速，热血沸腾。
Seeing everything return to normal，he sighed with relief.看到一切恢复正常，他松了一口气。
3.结尾升华句
It is love that makes the world go round and Bernard felt it deep in his little heart.正是爱让世界转动，伯纳德幼小的心灵深处感受到了这一点。
From then on，I made up my mind to pass on “love” to others.Just as a saying goes，“Roses given，fragrance in hand.”从那以后，我下定决心向别人传递“爱”。俗话说：“玫瑰予人，手留余香。”
It dawned on me that a simple act could make the world so much better.我恍然大悟，一个简单的行为可以使世界变得如此美好。
Not until then did I realize that it was kindness and love that made our world so warm and beautiful.
直到那时候，我才意识到，正是爱和善意让我们的世界如此温暖美丽。
Not only did he keep in mind the help of Meredith’s family，but he also did whatever he could to help those in need.他不仅把梅瑞狄斯一家的帮助记在心里了，而且他也尽他所能去帮助其他有需要的人。
With grateful tears hanging in her eyes，she kept expressing her gratitude：“Thank you so much！”
她含着感激的泪水，不停地表达感激之情：“太感谢你了！”
[典例展示]
(2024·新课标Ⅰ、Ⅱ)
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I met Gunter on a cold，wet and unforgettable evening in September.I had planned to fly to Vienna and take a bus to Prague for a conference.Due to a big storm，my flight had been delayed by an hour and a half.I touched down in Vienna just 30 minutes before the departure of the last bus to Prague.The moment I got off the plane，I ran like crazy through the airport building and jumped into the first taxi on the rank without a second thought.
That was when I met Gunter.I told him where I was going，but he said he hadn’t heard of the bus station.I thought my pronunciation was the problem，so I explained again more slowly，but he still looked confused.When I was about to give up，Gunter fished out his little phone and rang up a friend.After a heated discussion that lasted for what seemed like a century，Gunter put his phone down and started the car.
Finally，with just two minutes to spare we rolled into the bus station.Thankfully，there was a long queue(队列) still waiting to board the bus.Gunter parked the taxi behind the bus，turned around，and looked at me with a big smile on his face.“We made it，” he said.
Just then I realised that I had zero cash in my wallet.I flashed him an apologetic smile as I pulled out my Portuguese bank card.He tried it several times，but the card machine just did not play along.A feeling of helplessness washed over me as I saw the bus queue thinning out.
At this moment，Gunter pointed towards the waiting hall of the bus station.There，at the entrance，was a cash machine.I jumped out of the car，made a mad run for the machine，and popped my card in，only to read the message：“Out of order.Sorry.”
注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news._________________
_______________________________________________________________
Four days later，when I was back in Vienna，I called Gunter as promised.______________________________________________________
[范文佳作]
I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news.“The cash machine isn’t working，” I managed to say，[1]disappointment evidently in my voice.He looked at me in disbelief，but his shocked expression quickly turned to understanding.Then，he glanced at the nearly empty bus queue and back at me，his gaze steady.“Don’t worry，” he comforted.Flashing him [2]an apologetic smile，I clarified my departure，begged him for a delayed payment and also asked for his phone number.“No problem！” he smiled.Filled with gratitude，I dashed to the bus，stealing a quick glance back at Gunter waving me goodbye.
Four days later，when I was back in Vienna，I called Gunter as promised.[3]Hardly had he hung up the phone when he drove to the station to pick me up，[4]a little surprised but very delighted.Beaming a warm smile at him，I gave him a big hug the moment I saw him.“That’s great！” I shouted.Our conversation flowed merrily and I expressed my [5]profound gratitude，offered to cover the cost of the round trip，plus a generous tip that he humbly tried to refuse.We were chatting for half a day，[6]yet it felt like only a few minutes had flown by.This experience was a reminder [7]that whatever obstacles we encounter，acts of kindness have the power to connect us all and bring out the best in humanity.
亮词美句：[1]独立主格结构 [2]歉然一笑 [3]一……就…… [4]形容词作状语 [5]深深的感激 [6]比喻句 [7]同位语从句
[即时演练]
(2025·江苏南通崇川区调研)
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
After college graduation，I became an editor of our city evening paper and was promoted to the deputy(副的) editor of the paper five years later.
One day，as I parked my car and walked towards the office，I noticed two boys who appeared to be around eight years old，selling popcorn on the street corner.Curious，I approached them and requested half a kilogram of popcorn.They prepared it for me within five minutes.
“How much is it？” I asked.
“It’s 30 rupees，sir，” they replied.
I then asked their names，and they answered，“Sahib，Asib.”
I asked Sahib why they weren’t in school and were selling popcorn instead.Sahib explained that they were doing it to earn money for their schooling.However，Asib quickly interjected(插话)，saying they had no money left after covering food and medicine，not to mention schooling fees.
“Medicine for what You guys are looking well，” I said.
Asib replied，“Our mother has a kidney(肾) disease，so we need money to purchase medicine for her treatment.”
When I inquired about their father，Sahib sadly shared that he had passed away from cancer four years before，leaving their mother to support them with two jobs.I was deeply moved and struggled to find words.Before leaving，I asked whether they would be there the next day，intending to buy some then.They assured me they would come.
“Take care，boys，” I said as I left.
The next day，I returned to the spot where I had met Sahib and Asib the day before，but they were not selling popcorn as usual，standing there with a single bag of popcorn.Seeing in their eyes that their hearts broke because of sadness，I asked why and they explained that they had been waiting for me but had to leave because their mother’s health had got worse.
注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
I tried to comfort them and decided to do something myself to help the family.______________________________________________________
At my office，I penned down this story and made it public.________
_______________________________________________________________
[参考范文]
I tried to comfort them and decided to do something myself to help the family.I asked which hospital their mother was in and visited her with the boys.In the hospital，I paid part of fees for their mother，but the cost was too high for me to afford，so I decided to ask the public for help.I wanted to record the stories of these two boys，and used the power of the public to help them.
At my office，I penned down this story and made it public.The story became a hit，receiving a great deal of care and support from readers.Many people were touched by the fact that they were selling popcorn to raise money for their mother.They launched donations to help the boys’ mother treat her illness and pay their school fees.Eventually，their mother was cured，and the boys returned to school.They wrote to me to express their gratitude to the people who helped them，and decided to pass on the acts of kindness and help more people.
