第20周 读后续写主题练5 人与动物
在动物类的读后续写语篇中，由于动物类型不同，与人类发生的故事也有所不同。分析近几年的一些高考真题和模拟题发现，人类与可爱动物(包括小狗、小鸟、羊等)发生的故事往往有救助类、温情类、成长类；与危险动物(包括狼、熊、蛇等)发生的故事大多属于遇险类。
主题词汇
动物外貌描写
pup/puppy小狗，幼崽，幼畜
muzzle(狗、马等动物的)口鼻
fur/feather/paw n．皮毛/羽毛/爪子
two big round eyes两只圆溜溜的大眼睛
little sparkling/twinkling eyes亮晶晶的小眼睛
a pair of large watery eyes一双水汪汪的大眼睛
beady/sparkling/twinkling eyes小圆珠般亮晶晶的/亮晶晶的/闪闪发亮的眼睛
a nose like a small black gem一个黑宝石般的鼻子
long/muscular/skinny/spindly legs长的/肌肉发达的/皮包骨的/细长的腿
fur is as white as snow皮毛像雪一样洁白
a long little tail一条长长的小尾巴
be coated with brown curly hair披着深棕色卷毛
动物动作描写
roar v．/n.(狼、熊、大象等)咆哮，吼叫
howl v．/n.(狗、狼等)长嚎，嗥叫
growl v．/n.(狗、狼等)低声吼叫
smell/sniff v．闻/嗅
lick/bite v．舔/咬
scratch/rub v．抓挠/摩擦
leap跳跃
whimper v．(狗、猫痛苦地)呜咽
bark madly at sb朝某人疯狂地吠叫
wag its tail merrily/gently开心地/轻轻地摇尾巴
bounce up and down上下弹跳
flap the wings wildly疯狂地拍翅膀
put the ears up把耳朵竖起来
shake the whole body抖动全身
rub their necks and backs with their paws用爪子摩擦它们的脖子和背部
raise its whole body on its hind legs用后腿支起全身
高分句式
1．I was filled with a sense of satisfaction for knowing I had done just the right thing.我的内心充满了满足感，因为我知道自己做了正确的事。
2．It was on that day that I was aware of the value of responsibility.
正是在那一天，我意识到了责任感的价值。
3．Knowing that they could keep the lovely creature，they gathered around and stroked it gently，their little hearts filled with joy.
得知他们可以拥有那个可爱的小动物，他们环抱在一起，轻轻地抚摸着它，内心充满了喜悦。
4．It was really an unforgettable experience and luckily we didn’t get hurt and escaped successfully.这真是一次难忘的经历。幸运的是，我们没有受伤，而且成功地脱险了。
5．Sometimes a little kindness can make our world more glorious and harmonious.有时候，一次小小的善举能让我们的世界变得更加美好与和谐。
典例展示
(2023·浙江1月)
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I was invited to a cookout on an old friend’s farm in Western Washington.I parked my car outside the farm and walked past a milking house which had apparently not been used in many years.A noise at a window caught my attention, so I entered it.It was a hummingbird (蜂鸟), desperately trying to escape.She was covered in spider-webs (蛛网) and was barely able to move her wings.She ceased her struggle the instant I picked her up.
With the bird in my cupped hand, I looked around to see how she had gotten in.The broken window glass was the likely answer.I stuffed a piece of cloth into the hole and took her outside, closing the door securely behind me.
When I opened my hand, the bird did not fly away; she sat looking at me with her bright eyes.I removed the sticky spider-webs that covered her head and wings.Still, she made no attempt to fly.Perhaps she had been struggling against the window too long and was too tired Or too thirsty
As I carried her up the blackberry-lined path toward my car where I kept a water bottle, she began to move.I stopped, and she soon took wing but did not immediately fly away.
Hovering (悬停), she approached within six inches of my face.For a very long moment, this tiny creature looked into my eyes, turning her head from side to side.Then she flew quickly out of sight.
During the cookout, I told my hosts about the hummingbird incident.They promised to fix the window.As I was departing, my friends walked me to my car.I was standing by the car when a hummingbird flew to the center of our group and began hovering.She turned from person to person until she came to me.She again looked directly into my eyes, then let out a squeaking call and was gone.For a moment, all were speechless.Then someone said, “She must have come to say goodbye.”
注意：续写词数应为 150个左右。
A few weeks later, I went to the farm again._________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________
I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared._____________________________
________________________________________________________________________________
范文佳作
A few weeks later，I went to the farm again.It seemed as if I had formed a close bond with the hummingbird.[1]The moment I arrived at the farm，I dashed towards the milking house directly，[2]eager to meet her again.To my delight，the broken window was fixed，but to my disappointment，the hummingbird wasn’t there.I couldn’t help wondering if the tiny creature managed to go back home or was trapped again somewhere.[3]How I hoped that she would sit on my hand and look at me with her bright eyes again!
I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared.“It’s you！” I cried.Hovering，she approached me and looked into my eyes as before.I [4]stretched one hand and she sat on it，[5]letting out a squeaking call.“Glad to see you again，” I responded，[6]smoothing her feather gently.Then she flew up，turning her head from side to side as if expressing her gratitude.At that moment，I was filled with [7]a sense of satisfaction and realized that sometimes a little kindness can make our world more glorious and harmonious.
亮词美句：[1]the moment用作连词，引导状语从句，“一……就……” [2]形容词短语作状语
[3]感叹句 [4]伸出一只手 [5]发出吱吱的叫声
[6]轻轻地抚平她的羽毛 [7]满足感
即时演练
(2025·河北邢台名校联盟调研)
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
As the cold of winter loosened its hold and spring was approaching，I found myself in the quiet process of recovery.The world outside my window，once full of life，now seemed like a distant，unreachable place.Each day was a repetition of the last，a cycle that mirrored my own struggle to regain my strength and find hope in a future that felt dark and uncertain.
One afternoon，as I sat mindlessly by the window，a flash of movement caught my eye—a swallow (燕子) under the roof.It was a delicate creature，with its elegant wings.For a moment，it seemed to look at me，its eyes bright and curious，as if it recognized a fellow soul.
“A swallow，” I whispered，looking at the lovely creature，whose liveliness formed a contrast with the silence of the room.
The swallow’s daily visits became a comforting rhythm，as steady as the dawn’s arrival.Each time it appeared on that branch，it wasn’t just a sign of spring；it was like a friend.I found myself looking forward to its daily appearances.Its presence became a flicker(闪现) of warmth in my otherwise lifeless days.
One day，the swallow was not alone；it had been joined by a mate.Together，they began the merry work of building a nest under the roof.Inspired by their joyful spirit，I decided it was time for me to take control of my own life.I began to set small，achievable goals，mirroring the swallows’ tireless work on their nest.
However，life can be unpredictable.Just when the nest was almost done，a storm blew in out of nowhere，tearing the nest apart.I watched from my window，my heart aching for the swallows and their broken dream.
注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
I was worried I would never see the beautiful creatures come back.______________________
________________________________________________________________________________
Finally，the swallows’ new nest took shape.________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________
答案精析
参考范文
I was worried I would never see the beautiful creatures come back.Unexpectedly，the next morning，as the sun drove away the shadows of the night，I was greeted by the sight of the swallows.They were perched on the branch.They did not let the destruction of their nest prevent them from achieving their purpose.Instead，they started a new.They flew in and out of the courtyard once again，building under the roof.I was so touched by the sight that I had tears of joy and admiration.
Finally，the swallows’ new nest took shape.The swallows’ nest stood as a reminder that even when life throws us off course，we have the power to navigate back to our intended path.The swallows had become more than just visitors to my window；they had become a source of inspiration.As the seasons changed，so did I．In time，the swallows welcomed their young，and I welcomed a new chapter in my life—a chapter of hope，strength，and the unwavering belief that even in the face of adversity，we can rise and rebuild.(共22张PPT)
读后续写主题练5 人与动物
第20周
在动物类的读后续写语篇中，由于动物类型不同，与人类发生的故事也有所不同。分析近几年的一些高考真题和模拟题发现，人类与可爱动物(包括小狗、小鸟、羊等)发生的故事往往有救助类、温情类、成长类；与危险动物(包括狼、熊、蛇等)发生的故事大多属于遇险类。
[主题词汇]
动物外貌描写
pup/puppy小狗，幼崽，幼畜
muzzle(狗、马等动物的)口鼻
fur/feather/paw n.皮毛/羽毛/爪子
two big round eyes两只圆溜溜的大眼睛
little sparkling/twinkling eyes亮晶晶的小眼睛
a pair of large watery eyes一双水汪汪的大眼睛
beady/sparkling/twinkling eyes小圆珠般亮晶晶的/亮晶晶的/闪闪发亮的眼睛
a nose like a small black gem一个黑宝石般的鼻子
long/muscular/skinny/spindly legs长的/肌肉发达的/皮包骨的/细长的腿
fur is as white as snow皮毛像雪一样洁白
a long little tail一条长长的小尾巴
be coated with brown curly hair披着深棕色卷毛
动物动作描写
roar v./n.(狼、熊、大象等)咆哮，吼叫
howl v./n.(狗、狼等)长嚎，嗥叫
growl v./n.(狗、狼等)低声吼叫
smell/sniff v.闻/嗅
lick/bite v.舔/咬
scratch/rub v.抓挠/摩擦
leap跳跃
whimper v.(狗、猫痛苦地)呜咽
bark madly at sb朝某人疯狂地吠叫
wag its tail merrily/gently开心地/轻轻地摇尾巴
bounce up and down上下弹跳
flap the wings wildly疯狂地拍翅膀
put the ears up把耳朵竖起来
shake the whole body抖动全身
rub their necks and backs with their paws用爪子摩擦它们的脖子和背部
raise its whole body on its hind legs用后腿支起全身
1.I was filled with a sense of satisfaction for knowing I had done just the right thing.我的内心充满了满足感，因为我知道自己做了正确的事。
2.It was on that day that I was aware of the value of responsibility.
正是在那一天，我意识到了责任感的价值。
3.Knowing that they could keep the lovely creature，they gathered around and stroked it gently，their little hearts filled with joy.
得知他们可以拥有那个可爱的小动物，他们环抱在一起，轻轻地抚摸着它，内心充满了喜悦。
[高分句式]
4.It was really an unforgettable experience and luckily we didn’t get hurt and escaped successfully.
这真是一次难忘的经历。幸运的是，我们没有受伤，而且成功地脱险了。
5.Sometimes a little kindness can make our world more glorious and harmonious.有时候，一次小小的善举能让我们的世界变得更加美好与和谐。
[典例展示]
(2023·浙江1月)
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I was invited to a cookout on an old friend’s farm in Western Washington.I parked my car outside the farm and walked past a milking house which had apparently not been used in many years.A noise at a window caught my attention, so I entered it.It was a hummingbird (蜂鸟), desperately trying to escape.She was covered in spider-webs (蛛网) and was barely able to move her wings.She ceased her struggle the instant I picked her up.
With the bird in my cupped hand, I looked around to see how she had gotten in.The broken window glass was the likely answer.I stuffed a piece of cloth into the hole and took her outside, closing the door securely behind me.
When I opened my hand, the bird did not fly away; she sat looking at me with her bright eyes.I removed the sticky spider-webs that covered her head and wings.Still, she made no attempt to fly.Perhaps she had been struggling against the window too long and was too tired Or too thirsty
As I carried her up the blackberry-lined path toward my car where I kept a water bottle, she began to move.I stopped, and she soon took wing but did not immediately fly away.
Hovering (悬停), she approached within six inches of my face.For a very long moment, this tiny creature looked into my eyes, turning her head from side to side.Then she flew quickly out of sight.
During the cookout, I told my hosts about the hummingbird incident.They promised to fix the window.As I was departing, my friends walked me to my car.I was standing by the car when a hummingbird flew to the center of our group and began hovering.She turned from person to person until she came to me.She again looked directly into my eyes, then let out a squeaking call and was gone.For a moment, all were speechless.Then someone said, “She must have come to say goodbye.”
注意：续写词数应为 150个左右。
A few weeks later, I went to the farm again.______________________
_______________________________________________________________
I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared.________
_______________________________________________________________
[范文佳作]
A few weeks later，I went to the farm again.It seemed as if I had formed a close bond with the hummingbird.[1]The moment I arrived at the farm，I dashed towards the milking house directly，[2]eager to meet her again.To my delight，the broken window was fixed，but to my disappointment，the hummingbird wasn’t there.I couldn’t help wondering if the tiny creature managed to go back home or was trapped again somewhere.[3]How I hoped that she would sit on my hand and look at me with her bright eyes again!
I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared.“It’s you！” I cried.Hovering，she approached me and looked into my eyes as before.I [4]stretched one hand and she sat on it，[5]letting out a squeaking call.“Glad to see you again，” I responded，[6]smoothing her feather gently.Then she flew up，turning her head from side to side as if expressing her gratitude.At that moment，I was filled with [7]a sense of satisfaction and realized that sometimes a little kindness can make our world more glorious and harmonious.
亮词美句：[1]the moment用作连词，引导状语从句，“一……就……” [2]形容词短语作状语 [3]感叹句 [4]伸出一只手 [5]发出吱吱的叫声 [6]轻轻地抚平她的羽毛 [7]满足感
[即时演练]
(2025·河北邢台名校联盟调研)
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
As the cold of winter loosened its hold and spring was approaching，I found myself in the quiet process of recovery.The world outside my window，once full of life，now seemed like a distant，unreachable place.Each day was a repetition of the last，a cycle that mirrored my own struggle to regain my strength and find hope in a future that felt dark and uncertain.
One afternoon，as I sat mindlessly by the window，a flash of movement caught my eye—a swallow (燕子) under the roof.It was a delicate creature，with its elegant wings.For a moment，it seemed to look at me，its eyes bright and curious，as if it recognized a fellow soul.
“A swallow，” I whispered，looking at the lovely creature，whose liveliness formed a contrast with the silence of the room.
The swallow’s daily visits became a comforting rhythm，as steady as the dawn’s arrival.Each time it appeared on that branch，it wasn’t just a sign of spring；it was like a friend.I found myself looking forward to its daily appearances.Its presence became a flicker(闪现) of warmth in my otherwise lifeless days.
One day，the swallow was not alone；it had been joined by a mate.Together，they began the merry work of building a nest under the roof.Inspired by their joyful spirit，I decided it was time for me to take control of my own life.I began to set small，achievable goals，mirroring the swallows’ tireless work on their nest.
However，life can be unpredictable.Just when the nest was almost done，a storm blew in out of nowhere，tearing the nest apart.I watched from my window，my heart aching for the swallows and their broken dream.
注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
I was worried I would never see the beautiful creatures come back.
_______________________________________________________________
Finally，the swallows’ new nest took shape._____________________
_______________________________________________________________
[参考范文]
I was worried I would never see the beautiful creatures come back.Unexpectedly，the next morning，as the sun drove away the shadows of the night，I was greeted by the sight of the swallows.They were perched on the branch.They did not let the destruction of their nest prevent them from achieving their purpose.Instead，they started a new.They flew in and out of the courtyard once again，building under the roof.I was so touched by the sight that I had tears of joy and admiration.
Finally，the swallows’ new nest took shape.The swallows’ nest stood as a reminder that even when life throws us off course，we have the power to navigate back to our intended path.The swallows had become more than just visitors to my window；they had become a source of inspiration.As the seasons changed，so did I.In time，the swallows welcomed their young，and I welcomed a new chapter in my life—a chapter of hope，strength，and the unwavering belief that even in the face of adversity，we can rise and rebuild.
