第1讲 续写热点话题 个人成长
(2023·新课标Ⅰ卷)
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When I was in middle school，my social studies teacher asked me to enter a writing contest．I said no without thinking．I did not love writing．My family came from Brazil，so English was only my second language．Writing was so difficult and painful for me that my teacher had allowed me to present my paper on the sinking of the Titanic by acting out a play，where I played all the parts．No one laughed harder than he did．
So，why did he suddenly force me to do something at which I was sure to fail His reply：“Because I love your stories．If you're willing to apply yourself，I think you have a good shot at this．” Encouraged by his words，I agreed to give it a try．
I chose Paul Revere's horse as my subject．Paul Revere was a silversmith (银匠)in Boston who rode a horse at night on April 18，1775 to Lexington to warn people that British soldiers were coming．My story would come straight from the horse's mouth．Not a brilliant idea，but funny；and unlikely to be anyone else's choice．
What did the horse think，as he sped through the night Did he get tired Have doubts Did he want to quit I sympathized immediately．I got tired．I had doubts．I wanted to quit．But，like Revere's horse，I kept going．I worked hard．I checked my spelling．I asked my older sister to correct my grammar．I checked out a half-dozen books on Paul Revere from the library．I even read a few of them．
When I handed in the essay to my teacher，he read it，laughed out loud，and said，“Great．Now，write it again．” I wrote it again，and again and again．When I finally finished it，the thought of winning had given way to the enjoyment of writing．If I didn't win，I wouldn't care．
注意：续写词数应为150个左右。
A few weeks later，when I almost forgot the contest，there came the news．
I went to my teacher's office after the award presentation．
Ⅰ．梳理原文细节，厘清篇章结构。
Ⅱ．依据首句提示，构思后续情节。
第一段：由续写第一段及续写第二段的提示语可知，第一段可写我得知获奖后的激动心情，家人(尤其是我姐姐)也为我感到高兴，并回顾参赛的心路历程。
第二段：由续写第二段的提示语可知，第二段可写我表达对老师的感谢。老师会再次给予认可和鼓励。最后，可适当进行升华：不要轻易说“不可能”。
A few weeks later，when I almost forgot the contest，there came the news．
I went to my teacher's office after the award presentation．
1．Hard though it is，there is nothing more valuable than the sense of achievement you get from challenging yourself．
虽然它是艰难的，但没有什么比你挑战自己获得的成就感更有价值的了。
2．Taking a deep breath to collect myself，I decided to rise from where I fell．
深吸一口气让自己镇定下来，我决定从我跌倒的地方站起来。
3．A great weight off his mind，Tony had never felt so relieved．
内心卸下了沉重的负担，托尼从没有像现在这样如释重负。
4．Life is full of smiles and tears．Only by accepting them both can we enjoy our life．
生活充满了微笑和泪水。只有通过接受它们两者，我们才能享受我们的生活。
5．This made me moved，and I would try my best to help more people in the future and bring warmth to more people．
这让我很感动，以后我会尽我最大的努力去帮助更多的人，给更多的人带来温暖。
6．This experience makes me realize that the people who you are grateful to are always there and don't ignore them!
这次经历使我意识到，你感激的人一直都在那里，不要忽视他们！
第1讲 续写热点话题 个人成长
落笔华章
A few weeks later，when I almost forgot the contest，there came the news．I still remember it was a Monday morning in spring，when my teacher called me to his office，telling me that I had taken first place in the writing contest，and that I was the only winner whose native language wasn't English．Dominated by an overwhelming sense of excitement and pride at his words，I simply stood there dumbfounded，and my feet，as if rooted to the ground，couldn't move a bit．The next day，I was presented with my award and a certificate at the ceremony．My old sister clapped and congratulated me on my success．
I went to my teacher's office after the award presentation．Giggling instantly with a broad smile spreading on his face，he told me that he was proud of my wonderful performance．It was at that moment that a warm surge of streams washed through my body，and the image of the horse emerged in my mind，encouraging me to continue writing．Indeed，I got a taste of victory and learned to pursue my dream with perseverance，whatever difficulties might arise．
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第1讲 续写热点话题 个人成长
(2023·新课标Ⅰ卷)
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When I was in middle school，my social studies teacher asked me to enter a writing contest．I said no without thinking．I did not love writing．My family came from Brazil，so English was only my second language．Writing was so difficult and painful for me that my teacher had allowed me to present my paper on the sinking of the Titanic by acting out a play，where I played all the parts．No one laughed harder than he did．
So，why did he suddenly force me to do something at which I was sure to fail His reply：“Because I love your stories．If you're willing to apply yourself，I think you have a good shot at this．” Encouraged by his words，I agreed to give it a try．
I chose Paul Revere's horse as my subject．Paul Revere was a silversmith (银匠)in Boston who rode a horse at night on April 18，1775 to Lexington to warn people that British soldiers were coming．My story would come straight from the horse's mouth．Not a brilliant idea，but funny；and unlikely to be anyone else's choice．
What did the horse think，as he sped through the night Did he get tired Have doubts Did he want to quit I sympathized immediately．I got tired．I had doubts．I wanted to quit．But，like Revere's horse，I kept going．I worked hard．I checked my spelling．I asked my older sister to correct my grammar．I checked out a half-dozen books on Paul Revere from the library．I even read a few of them．
When I handed in the essay to my teacher，he read it，laughed out loud，and said，“Great．Now，write it again．” I wrote it again，and again and again．When I finally finished it，the thought of winning had given way to the enjoyment of writing．If I didn't win，I wouldn't care．
注意：续写词数应为150个左右。
A few weeks later，when I almost forgot the contest，there came the news．__________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
I went to my teacher's office after the award presentation．_______
___________________________________________________________
Ⅰ．梳理原文细节，厘清篇章结构。
Ⅱ．依据首句提示，构思后续情节。
第一段：由续写第一段及续写第二段的提示语可知，第一段可写我得知获奖后的激动心情，家人(尤其是我姐姐)也为我感到高兴，并回顾参赛的心路历程。
第二段：由续写第二段的提示语可知，第二段可写我表达对老师的感谢。老师会再次给予认可和鼓励。最后，可适当进行升华：不要轻易说“不可能”。
A few weeks later，when I almost forgot the contest，there came the news．__________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________
I went to my teacher's office after the award presentation．_______
___________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
A few weeks later，when I almost forgot the contest，there came the news．I still remember it was a Monday morning in spring，when my teacher called me to his office，telling me that I had taken first place in the writing contest，and that I was the only winner whose native language wasn't English．Dominated by an overwhelming sense of excitement and pride at his words，I simply stood there dumbfounded，and my feet，as if rooted to the ground，couldn't move a bit．The next day，I was presented with my award and a certificate at the ceremony．My old sister clapped and congratulated me on my success．
I went to my teacher's office after the award presentation．
Giggling instantly with a broad smile spreading on his face，he told me that he was proud of my wonderful performance．It was at that moment that a warm surge of streams washed through my body，and the image of the horse emerged in my mind，encouraging me to continue writing．Indeed，I got a taste of victory and learned to pursue my dream with perseverance，whatever difficulties might arise．
1．Hard though it is，there is nothing more valuable than the sense of achievement you get from challenging yourself．
虽然它是艰难的，但没有什么比你挑战自己获得的成就感更有价值的了。
2．Taking a deep breath to collect myself，I decided to rise from where I fell．
深吸一口气让自己镇定下来，我决定从我跌倒的地方站起来。
3．A great weight off his mind，Tony had never felt so relieved．
内心卸下了沉重的负担，托尼从没有像现在这样如释重负。
4．Life is full of smiles and tears．Only by accepting them both can we enjoy our life．
生活充满了微笑和泪水。只有通过接受它们两者，我们才能享受我们的生活。
5．This made me moved，and I would try my best to help more people in the future and bring warmth to more people．
这让我很感动，以后我会尽我最大的努力去帮助更多的人，给更多的人带来温暖。
6．This experience makes me realize that the people who you are grateful to are always there and don't ignore them!
这次经历使我意识到，你感激的人一直都在那里，不要忽视他们！
谢 谢！
